Not a bad job for a beginner, just a couple of things to note though are, borders more often than not ruin a tag and you have kinda butchered your border by not erasing it properly. If you want to use borders try using your rectangle marquee tool and decide on the thickness you want for your border then right click and fill after that duplicate the layer and move it to the opposite side as the original. Or just 2-3 pixel stroke it, the rest of the tag is not too bad just a simple case of doing more tags and read a few more tuts and you will be on your way.