Battle tactics with Kirabi-sensei!

[Jinbei]

*Waits for my sensei*

 

[Geezus]

*Waits for my sensei*

ok kid.

Now, attack me with all youve got, and ill point out what you should and shouldnt do and teach you ways to make your battle style better.

 

[Jinbei]

Yes,sensei >=]

My two half separate,while my white half uses(spoiler) to make a small earthquake which throws you off balance

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(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

my black half jumps and performs(spoiler) to send a water shark at really fast speed that kills you

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(Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water shark bomb
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A water projectile shaped like a shark that comes crashing down on the opponent.
(No water source required)

So the earthquake and shark happen at the same time.Then my white half uses(spoiler) to make it rain and get your location.

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(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.

 

[Geezus]

Yes,sensei >=]

My two half separate,while my white half uses(spoiler) to make a small earthquake which throws you off balance

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(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

my black half jumps and performs(spoiler) to send a water shark at really fast speed that kills you

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(Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water shark bomb
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A water projectile shaped like a shark that comes crashing down on the opponent.
(No water source required)

So the earthquake and shark happen at the same time.Then my white half uses(spoiler) to make it rain and get your location.

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(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.

pretty good combo.

the tremor would cause me to be off balanced, and therefore almost unable to defend against the water shark bomb,

but lets say I do by using,

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

creating a clone directly above me who grabs me and throws me into the air,
then as your water shark bomb attacks I use,

Fuuton: Daitoppa (Wind Style: Great Break Through)
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user channels his wind elemental affinity to his throar and after bringing his hands to his mouth, he will blow a large blast of wind capable of destructing trees and wooden objects.

destroying the shark and then when you do your chakra sensing rain, the clone that landed on the ground, after falling, uses,

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

launching it at white half.

 

[Jinbei]

Well not sure about this but judging by the description of your jutsu,your charge lightning chakra in your hands while being wet because of my rain which would electrocute you o.o

Remember my first two attacks were done at the same time meaning the rain would have been created at the end of the earth jutsu.So since you jumped into the air and blocked the water attack at that same time the rain would start,so as you neutralized the water shark with your wind attack you would be really wet cause of the rain.

 

[Geezus]

Well not sure about this but judging by the description of your jutsu,your charge lightning chakra in your hands while being wet because of my rain which would electrocute you o.o

Remember my first two attacks were done at the same time meaning the rain would have been created at the end of the earth jutsu.So since you jumped into the air and blocked the water attack at that same time the rain would start,so as you neutralized the water shark with your wind attack you would be really wet cause of the rain.

Good job, xD you found the flaw.

A big part of RPing is analyzing your opponent's move looking for any flaws or weakness that way you can exploit them turning the tide of the battle in your favor. Sometimes, you may be kind of iffy in the way an opponent does his attacks such as him breaking the time frame rule or his move not being able to complete do to something thats happened in the past or in the move you just posted. In that case it's best to get the insight of Sensei and if that doesn't work, then a RP Mod will suffice.

Now that you've pointed out the flaw in my move, continue your move and use it to your advantage.

 

[Jinbei]

Good job, xD you found the flaw.

A big part of RPing is analyzing your opponent's move looking for any flaws or weakness that way you can exploit them turning the tide of the battle in your favor. Sometimes, you may be kind of iffy in the way an opponent does his attacks such as him breaking the time frame rule or his move not being able to complete do to something thats happened in the past or in the move you just posted. In that case it's best to get the insight of Sensei and if that doesn't work, then a RP Mod will suffice.

Now that you've pointed out the flaw in my move, continue your move and use it to your advantage.

It was a test huh? i passed? xd


Now that you are shocked that would give me around five seconds of you begin paralyzed so my black half(remember he is in the air and hasn't made a move since the water shark move,so this jutsu is going to be done at the exact same time my rain jutsu from white half),so black half performs(spoiler)

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(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

to create spikes that pierce you instantly while you are paralyzed and in case you did manage to escape the paralyzing effect of the shock,your only way to escape this jutsu would be a lightning jutsu,which would shock you again cause you are still wet and my rain is still on.So in case you managed to block,one of my halfs perform(spoiler) and the other one throws two kunai with five explosive tags attached in each kunai(they are directed at the mud) producing a powerful enough heat to transform the mud into lava,making it a lava river that completly melts you.

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(Doton: Doro Hoshi) - Earth Style: Mud Indulgence
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

 

[Geezus]

It was a test huh? i passed? xd


Now that you are shocked that would give me around five seconds of you begin paralyzed so my black half(remember he is in the air and hasn't made a move since the water shark move,so this jutsu is going to be done at the exact same time my rain jutsu from white half),so black half performs(spoiler)

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(Doton: Ganchuusou) - Earth Style: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user creates spikes of earth that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

to create spikes that pierce you instantly while you are paralyzed and in case you did manage to escape the paralyzing effect of the shock,your only way to escape this jutsu would be a lightning jutsu,which would shock you again cause you are still wet and my rain is still on.So in case you managed to block,one of my halfs perform(spoiler) and the other one throws two kunai with five explosive tags attached in each kunai(they are directed at the mud) producing a powerful enough heat to transform the mud into lava,making it a lava river that completly melts you.

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(Doton: Doro Hoshi) - Earth Style: Mud Indulgence
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

It isn't me who's been shocked it was the clone xd
Remember I created a shadow clone? read my move throughly.

you've got to pay attention to detail like that. Also another thing, you cant use Earth Jutsu while in the air less it comes directly from you, such as spitting out mud. or something of that sort.

so now then my move,

as your black half makes a fail attempt at the earth jutsu, i take out two flash bombs and drop them, causing them to explode disorienting the white half while i move on to use,

Fuuton: Daitoppa (Wind Style: Great Break Through)
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user channels his wind elemental affinity to his throar and after bringing his hands to his mouth, he will blow a large blast of wind capable of destructing trees and wooden objects.

pushing your black half who was in the air away. and i land ontop of your white half kicking him in the face,

causing a crater when he once was and his body left there.

 

[Jinbei]

It isn't me who's been shocked it was the clone xd
Remember I created a shadow clone? read my move throughly.

you've got to pay attention to detail like that. Also another thing, you cant use Earth Jutsu while in the air less it comes directly from you, such as spitting out mud. or something of that sort.

so now then my move,

as your black half makes a fail attempt at the earth jutsu, i take out two flash bombs and drop them, causing them to explode disorienting the white half while i move on to use,

Fuuton: Daitoppa (Wind Style: Great Break Through)
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user channels his wind elemental affinity to his throar and after bringing his hands to his mouth, he will blow a large blast of wind capable of destructing trees and wooden objects.

pushing your black half who was in the air away. and i land ontop of your white half kicking him in the face,

causing a crater when he once was and his body left there.

I figured as much but i had to try it was a really good strategy.My plan was to pretty much prevent you from escaping since you couldn't use lightning(you would get shocked again),fuuton(would have destroyed the spikes but would have powered up my lava),fire(would heat up the spikes and transform it into moletn rock which would deliver much more damage and pain),doton(high level would have protected you from the spikes but not from the lava) and water(low level water jutsus would be destroyed by the spikes,high level techs usually require a lot of time to prepare due to the handseals).

Anyway,as soon as my black half move fails,he throws two kunais which hit the flash bang and they fall exactly where you clone was,the clone can't see and gets hitted by the lava,destroying the clone instantly,however the lava continues to move,so now you are in the air and if you fall(you can't stay in air for more than 7 seconds xd) you die.Now since the shurikens wouldn't take the same amount of time to prepare as the fuuton of yours,it gives my black half enough time to throw two kunais with wire attached to the floor(not where the lava is,of course) and uses the wires to get to the floor barely escaping your fuuton.Now that he is in the floor he performs(spoiler)

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(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Style: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a clone of themselves made of water.

creating two water clones to aid me in battle.Water clone A separates,and while A1(white half) performs(spoiler)

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(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

A2(black half) performs(spoiler) to create an unseen(due to the mist) water shark that kills you and in case you somehow manage to defend he simply smashes you,sending you flying to the lava right beneath you.

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(Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water shark bomb
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A water projectile shaped like a shark that comes crashing down on the opponent.
(No water source required)