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Charging chakra into both my fore arms and making my hands take a sworp post, I dart towards your clone and jump to meet him. On getting close to him, I do a chop with both my hands pinning his neck in the middle of both my hands which would land on both the side of his neck. This would make him have breathing difficulties.

There is a drawback nonetheless as it is not easy to pull off when facing the opponent directly so its always advisable to approach from a blind spot or perhaps, use it when the target is already distracted.

Priest reads the second scroll and prepares himself to give it a go.

I begin by wrapping a wire wool around my righ hand and steady my breathing, controlling it so that i am able to amass power into my punches. Just as a clone approaches me with a punch, I tilm my left side backwards allowing the punch to go past me unhindered, though I had to repel the clone back with a left arm lariat, the clone would come flying back to my right so I quickly assault him four time with my right punch into his face, bashing his face into his brain.

I don't get it, what is the significance o the wire wool? To aid in the controlled breathing or to act like a brass knuckle?
 

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"I believe its to act as brass knuckles. Nonetheless, good job."


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user appears below the enemy at a low stance towards the ground and then charge their hands with chakra. They will begin by a strike upwards at the inner thighs at the pressure points above the knee caps to cause the enemy to lower their upper body. The user will then strike multiple times on the body upwards until they finally make a stabbing motion towards the enemy's neck, winding them and causing them to be out of breath.



"Now, in this technique, you will appear below the opponent in a low stance, and charge your hands with chakra. You will then deliver an upward strike aimed at the opponent's inner thighs, at pressure points above the knee caps, which causes the opponent to lower their upper body and allow you to deliver multiple strikes to the upper body. To finish off, you will deliver a stabbing motion strike, aimed at the opponent's neck, winding them and causing them to be out of breath. Quite interesting, and easy to pull off."



Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This is based around the Bak Mai Pa of Southern Chinese marital arts and the use of enemy's body weight. The user will concentrate chakra into their leg and then lift it up to lean into the enemy when they are attacking with Taijutsu and by using the body weight of the enemy and the chakra concentration, the user will absorb the power of the enemy's attack and rebound it with the kick to send the enemy flying.
Note: Can only counter B rank Taijutsu and lower



"After that, one of my favorites of the techniques here. Based on the Bak Mei Pa Martial Arts, you will use the opponent's own body weight against him. Concentrate your chakra into your leg, and lift it up. You will then lean into the opponent with said leg if the opponent delivers a Taijutsu based techique, and use both the opponent's weight and chakra concentration to absorb the power of the hit, and rebound it back towards the opponent via a kick. This sends the opponent flying. Can counter B rank and below Taijutsu, if feasible."
 

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Getting ready fro my next move, I see you clone jumping towards me, I then quicky jump towards him to meet him although lower than him, I quickly charge my right hand with chakra, and my left though with just my right hand, P jab a pressure point on the clone's thigh making his upper body fall towards me, then I quickly do some swipes, striking him several times on his upper body before doing a chop with my left hand into his throat.

Easy to pull of and easy to defend from. If the target defends from the first strike, then the second strike and the finisher are all but useless. The beauty of thiis is for the first strike to go through.


I am confused about how the absorption kick works. Can you pls show me an illustration?
 

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These are custom techniques made by Kaito, so I am not sure where he got the inspiration from, nor where I could find an illustration on it. Let me try and re-phrase it.

If the opponent attacks, you use your chakra charged leg to absorb the hit (via the use of chakra, and also leaning towards the opponent with the leg, and using their body weight). As the hit is absorbed, (and does nothing to you), you will rebound it, by delivering a powerful kick with the same leg that just stopped the hit.
 

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Okay, after listening to sensei's explanation, Priest would move towards the attacking clone while charging chakra into his left leg. As the clone kicks forwards, Priest would quickly raise his chakra enhanced leg up and quickly leans towards the clone while interception the kick with his leg absorbing the impact and then, He proceed to do a spin with his already positioned self as an advantage, he would land the same leg into the clone's sides, sending him flying.

Did I get it?
 

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"Indeed, good job."


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will charge their legs with chakra and then execute a handstand motion that will be used as a projection to propel the user towards the opponent in mid-air, dealing a spinning bombardment of kicks to the chest to leave their enemy wide open.



"Alright, with this technique you will charge your legs with chakra, as you execute a handstand motion. This acts as a medium for your to propel yourself towards the opponent, with your legs now first, dealing a bombardment of kicks to their chest. Quite weird, but cool too."


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will concentrate earth chakra into their fists and then by jumping up into the air, the user will strike down at the opponent to deal a bombardment of 10 punches at the face and upper body.



"Concentrate Earth chakra into your fists, and jump into the air towards the opponent. You will then come down upon them, and deal a bombardment of 10 punches, all aimed at the upper body, and face."
 

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As your clone proceed towards me, I waited for the right moment as instructed by my Sensei and once he is air borne aiming to attack me from above, I quickly focus chakra into my legs and flip transitioning my position to a handstand then I push of the ground while lifting towards the incoming clone. With a little spin, I execute several kicks to his upper body.

There is a downside to this though as it would be difficult to see entirely the opponent's position while doing a handstand. So if he happens to put up another counter measure, you may be supprised and prone to it.


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For the second.

I focus earth chakra into my fist then I jump towards your clone and while coming down upon him, I begin to punch him in the face, left, right, left, right, all amounting to a 10 strikes into total to make his head pop.

Down side to this is being prone to Nagashi, or still, the opponent can easily see you coming so its neccesary to use this after the target is distracted.
 

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"Very good."


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges their right leg with lightning chakra and then jump up into the sky above the target to slam their right leg into their head. Upon doing, they will discharge lightning chakra to temporarily disrupt signals from the brain that control chakra to leave the enemy with double vision and a headache from the blow of the strike.
Note: Chakra disruption lasts one turn.



"With this technique, you will charge your right leg with Lightning chakra, and jump high into the sky above the opponent. You will then bring said leg down onto their head, discharging the Lightning into it and disrupt signals from the brain that controls chakra, leaving the opponent with double vision and a headache. Also, most likely dead, due to that damage >,>."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs hold of the target by their clothing and spins around in a half-circle motion above their head akin to a lasso. They then slam the target into the ground to deal a large amount of damage.



"After that, grab the opponent by his clothing and spin him around in a half circle motion, above your head. This is somewhat like how a lasso is swung. Nonetheless, you will then slam the opponent into the ground, dealing quite some damage. A very simple technique, and useful too."
 

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Facing one of my sensei"s clones, I charge my left leg with lighnting chakra and then jump into the air and come down upon the clone with a droping axe kick to land on the head of the clone sending lightning chakra into his brain leaving him with double vision and head ache.


I quickly grab your clone as he approaches me and while I grab him tiht by his clothing(chest area), I do a half circular motion the same way a lasso would be swung, slaming him to the ground.

while I grab him and in order to make him distracted and not resist, I can give him a quick concussive headbutt to cause blood to gush from his nose and maybe have him black out for a moment. All in all, nice jutsu because of the freedom of movement and the frame to combine this with many useful jutsus.
 

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"Good job, now for the next ones."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will jump into the target grabbing onto their arms and thrust both feet into their stomach to wind them and cause them to fall forwards. In doing so, the user flips backwards lifting the target into their air whilst using the motion of the target to then slam them onto their shoulders on the ground. The user will then finish by kicking off them and flipping backwards a few feet.



"Now for the first one you will jump into the target, grab onto their arms and thrust both your feet into their stomach, causing them to be staggered and also fall forwards. You will flip back and upwards, hit the opponent into the air as you do so, but then land onto their shoulders and slam them onto them onto the ground as you do so. You will then kick off them, flipping off them."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will open out their palms fully with their arms pointing to their sides and parallel to the ground. At an incoming physical attack, they bring their palms around and strike down the attack to leave the opponent open where they will follow through with a dual stab with their hands to the arms and disable their use for two turns by hitting specific pressure points in their opponent's arms.



"Another bad ass technique where you will open your palms, and point your arms to your side, parallel to the ground. As the opponent attacks, you will bring your palms around and counter the attack, whilst also attacking the opponent. You will deliver a dual stab to the opponent's arms, disabling it for two turns due to hitting specific pressure points."
 

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As the first clone runs towards me, I jump towards him, grabbing his arm and winding him as my feet is tucked against his stomach. Pushing off his stomach, I execute a backflip while the kick lifts him up and make him fall on his shoulders as I slam him down.
I would kick off him once again and land on my feet.




As the second clone strikes, I open my palms and point my arms to my side making them align parallel to the ground. Then as the clone attack, I bring together both plam and intercept the attack by slaping it against the other palm, apparently pinning the attack from proceeding. Then with fluid movement, I jab the clones arms using both hands at the same time, targeting pressure points and disabling it.
 

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"Good job, now onto the next ones. Remember to add the advantages and disadvantages of the techniques."


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take the stance with their arms pulled in tight and elbows pointing outwards. Crouching down slightly and concentrating earth chakra into their elbows and knees, they will then burst at the opponent to deliver a series of attacks. The first attack will be an elbow blow to the chin and then a knee strike to the solarplex to cause the target to become winded. As they fall forwards in the motion of being crippled, the user follows up with another knee strike to lift the opponent's head up where finally a dual elbow strike is applied to their face.



"The last B rank, now you will position your arms held in tight, and elbows pointing outwards. You will focus Earth chakra into your elbows and kness, and blast towards the opponent. You will then deliver a series of attacks. First aimed at the chin, then knee to the solarplexus, another knee strike to the opponent's head and finish off with a double elbow strike.


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges their legs with chakra and then they quickly appear below the enemy and uses their hands to twist their body into a spinning motion to kick up at the enemy three times. This move then sets up for Dancing Crane Wheel Kick.



"Charge your legs with chakra, and dash towards the opponent. Appear below them and use your hands to twist yourself into a spinning motion, and deliver three kicks to the opponent, and set up for the next technique.
 

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I quickly my hands held tight with my elbow facing outwards, almost like taking a chicken wings stance while focusing earth chakra into both elbows and my knees, then I dash towards the clone.
Getting to him, I launch a right knee upwards while pushing off the ground using my left foot. The right knee would smash against the underchin of the clone, lifting him upwards a little. I followed with a left knee to the solarplexus using the kick to gain bouyancy and spin kicking once again with my right knee though now against the left side of his head. Then I bring my elbows down on him sending him crashing to the ground.

Very good combo, first disorienting the target should the first attack hits. Ofcourse the whole attack combo is null when the first attack is blocked as the target now is alerted of your intended actions even if you want to continue with the combo after being blocked like Sasuke during his Shishi rendan combo.


2. After charging my lefs with chakra, I bolt towards sensei's clone while appearing cround and below him with my left hand acting as a pivot, almost looking as is my buttons is sitting on it. Pushing off of the left hand and a little twist of my waist to my right, I sping upwards legs first while sping counter clockwise and kicking the clone 3 times using the spinning motion on his upper body.

An alternative if you don't want to use a leg sweep of Dancing Leaf. Someone has to be very swift and nimble to be able to pull this off successfully.
 

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"Good job, Priest."


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user first charges their legs with chakra and then jumps up in the air above the enemy and attacks using multiple spinning kicks which are in the shape of a wheel. They then hit the enemy four times, smashing them into the ground with the last kick.



"Now for the first technique, a follow up to the prevous technique, you will charge chakra to your legs. Jump above the opponent, and perform multiple spinning kicks. This resembles a wheel, hitting the opponent four times before they hit the ground."


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges both their fists with chakra to increase damage and then the user gets below the enemy and strikes the enemy twice. One blow towards the collarbone with a fist cracking the collar bone and the other a palm strike to the throat causing the enemy to be winded with one arm useless from the breaking of the collarbone.
Note: Can only be used twice



"Now for the next one, you will focus chakra to your fists. You will then get below the opponent, and deliver two strikes, one to the collarbone and one to the throat. The first strike breaks the collarbone, and makes the arm useless from then on out."

 

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After using my hands to spring my legs, I charge chakra into my legs and jump high above sensei's clone. I quickly spin while kicking the clone 4 times on his head. From a third person view, it looks as if its a wheel that hit him.

Agility matters when executing this move and hitting the clone upwards should be done in a way that, he would be distracted depending on where the initial attack hits him.



I like this one. I quickly blitz towards your clone, crouching and appearing below him with chakra already charged to my fists. I quickly execute 2 jabs. One to his collarbone and the second to his throat.

I believe making the arm useless by breaking the collarbone is enough to make the second jab to the throat a sure hit.


OOC: Reminds you of my Medusa bio. ^^
 

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"Okay, good job."


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges their legs with chakra to increase damage and then begins by sending a flying kick straight towards the enemy's upper body, causing the enemy to guard the attack. After hitting the guard, the user then spins 360 degrees and brings their left foot up, breaking the guard and kicking the enemy with the right leg to the chin to send them into the air. Then the user lands on the ground and quickly uses a burst of chakra from their feet to launch themselves above the enemy and finish them off by hammer-kicking them into the ground.



"Now for the first technique you will charge your legs with chakra and deliver a flying kick to the opponent's upper body. This will cause them to block, where you will then spin 360, and use your left foot to break the guard and use your right leg to deliver a hit to the chin. This sends the opponent airborne, where you will then land on the ground and use a burst of chakra to launch yourself above the opponent. The technique is finished off by coming down upon the opponent with a hammer kick.


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user charges their hand with an electrical current and then strikes at the enemy's right shoulder. The electrical current discharges on contact and can numb the right arm for a short period of time, thus preventing the enemy from making any seals.
Note: Numbing affect lasts for one turn
Note: Can only be used three times



"This one is a bit more simple where you will charge your hand with electrical current and strike the opponent's right shoulder. The electricity discharges on contact, and causes numbing, making the right arm useless for a single turn.
 

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Nice move here.


So I start by running towards the clone and do a jumping kick with my right leg stretched towards him. My right foot would plummet on his face hadn't be he blocked, though using this, I use the planted right foot around his barricade as a pivot while twisting to my right briskly to execute a spin, begining the spin, I remove my right leg while using my left leg to break the break the defense apart and then return my right leg kicking the clone on his chin. Then after the spin, I land and then vanish again. Though its only me charging chakra into my legs for a swift jump and I drop down above the clone with a hammer kick.

Very good. Though trying to break the guard leaves someone prone to another evasive action from the opponent. However this is totally dependent on the skill set of the opponent in question.



For the second

As another clone comes sneaking up behind me and throwing a punch, upon hearing his footstep I am alerted and quickly do a side step so that he is not met with an opposing force thus continue to lunge forward unhindered from his initial momentum. Passing by me, I quickly charge lightning chakra into my right hand and jab his left shoulder, disabling it.

Simple but it last only for a turn.
 

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"Good job, onto the next ones."


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will charge their right leg and right hand with earth chakra and then the user will attack the enemy sending a dummy strike at them with their leg in order to cause the enemy to guard. The leg will stride past and then by bringing it down onto the enemy's ankle, it will make them fall backwards for the user to follow through with an earth-charged chakra hand directly into their face and smashing their head down into the ground, creating a crater from the impact.



"Alright, now charge your right leg and hand with Earth based chakra. Send a dummy strike with said leg at the opponent's leg to cause them to guard. However, the leg will stride past, and hit the oppinent's ankle. This causes them to fall down, then bring that Earth based charged hand onto the opponent's face. This smashes them to the ground, creating a crater from impact."


Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will dive into a forward roll at the enemy, rolling behind them to grab both arms by the wrist and at the same time leaning their foot into the enemy's back and pulling them down whilst charging chakra into their leg to break the enemy's arms.



"Now in this move, perform a forward dive roll, rolling to get behind the opponent. You will then grab the opponent's arms, and lean your foot onto the opponent's back. Charge chakra into your leg, and break the opponent's arms. Basically what Sasuke did to that Sound Nin."
 

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1. I start by charging my right hand and leg with earth chakra. The I go for a kick with my right leg to the left side of the clone. The clone guards with his left hand tucked at the elbow and I while twisting my waist counter-clockwise, I slide my leg downwards to hit the ankle ot the clone to make him fall backwards. Then I quickly charge and punch him downwards with my earth enhanced right fist.

Since the leg is charged with earth chakra, won't the clone break his arm while guarding from the initial kick?

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For the second, as the clone runs towards me, I do a forward roll so that I quickly appear behind and grabbing both his arms and pulling backwards while I press my right knee on his back. Since his body and arms are moving in two different direction, the arms would be forced to break.

Very good technique, though one have to be quick and getting behind the opponent may be the difficult aspect of the jutsu.
 

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"No, the initial attack is a feign and the real attack hits the ankle, which it does damage causing the opponent to fall. Anyway, good job."


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The Phoenix Eye Fist is from the Bak Mei Kung Fu fighting style. The user carefully controls their breathing and charges their fists with chakra to maximize power in their attacks and then they deal a triple knuckle-shot to the throat, causing the enemy's breathing to become heavy.



"Alright, with this technique, you will carefully control your breathing and charge your fists with chakra. This allows you to maximize the damage dealt, as you deliver a triple knuckle shot to the opponent's throat. Pretty savage if done right, and deals quite some damage. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Priest.


Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user charges their fists with water chakra and then attacks the opponent with a combo of five strikes. The first two are to the chest, lifting them off the ground slightly and then with a second blow, lifting them up into the air to follow through with a sweeping hi-kick to the chest, sending them through the air. Then the user will above the enemy and then finish them off with a drop-kick into the stomach, sending them crashing into the ground. All the water hits deposit water onto the target's clothes, creating a heaviness pressing on them from the density of the water. The water attacks cause the enemy to suffer heavy breathing.



"Charge your fists with Water based chakra, and attack the opponent with a combination of five strikes. First two are aimed at the opponent's chest, lifting the opponent off the ground, followed by a sweeping hi-kick, to the chest. This sends the opponent through the air, and then deliver a drop kick to send the opponent into the ground, as you get above them. Pretty simple, and the deposit of Water chakra causes the opponent to suffer heavy breathing. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Priest.
 
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