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(Tsumibukai Genjutsu:Dai Kui )†Sinful Illusionary Arts: Gluttony†

Type: Offensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
Gluttony, the sin of over consumption of food , drink or wealthy items, with no remorse for the needy. The user will perform a set of 3 hand seals. The target's sense of taste, sight and smell are affected. They will find themselves strapped to a chair in a dark room were a man with a deformed face stands before them, unleashing a wicked and evil laugh, as he reaches for a spoon and begins to force feed the target, rotting wasted food. The food has a foul scent that when caught to the nose, causes it to burn on the nose from the high concentration of mold. The taste of the foods is sour and bitter. As the deformed man continues to feed the target, the user can manipulate the illusion to make the target even suffer more like having the man hold the rotten food even much longer to nose of the target. In reality the target remains untouched however due to the pain being caused from the force feeding of the target and burning the nose, causes mental stress on the target. This happens to the point that the target is filled up and suffers enough. Targets of lower in rank experience the burning effects longer then normal.

*Can be used only on targets lower then the user*
*Lasts 1 turn, but lasts 2 turns when used by Genjutsu specialists(Bio Affinity)*
 

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Punishment, is the one word that makes this technique so unique. I made it to simply put lower ranking ninja into place sometimes xD. The best bet to use this technique is as a technique to keep the target occupied for several moments. The smell and such effects the target every severally and id say its even better to be used in places like buildings.

I haven't thought much on how Id use it as yet still its still fresh but you can combine it with techniques that invoke effects like say, creating chains from the ground, you can combo it in and have them chained in the chair but the chains from the original technique is coming from the ground still.

The whole thing creates a torturing layered genjutsu :p. A perfect example is
[Genjutsu: Kusari Naraku] - Illusionary Arts: Chains of Hell

Type: Attack
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user transfers his chakra into the opponent's mind meanwhile performing a single handseal, the "Ram" handseal, casting an illusion into the opponent causing him to see the ground below him divided into two sections, a right section which moves at the right direction of the opponent and a left section that moves at the left direction of the opponent, leaving the opponent without any solid ground. Meanwhile the ground is moving countless chains shows up from the space that is left by the divide of the two earth sections. These chains are manipulated by the user, giving him the capability of binding the opponent with the chains, inflicting damage with the chains etc.. . Leaving the opponent open in reality and inflicting damage to him because of the amount of stress caused form the illusion.
Note: Can only be taught by Kamishiro
Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle
Note: Can't use any genjutsu technique higher than A-rank at the same turn
This one about gives me some freedom in terms of manipulating the chain. Once the person is dragged done, I can activate mine and as he goes down and reaches the bottom, I can chain in this and make a sick combo
 

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Well this technique is actually very useful. The person makes the required seals, and once done, creates lightning threads to come from the eyes of the target. The lightning would wrap itself around the target’s head and causing pain as it creates false shocking. The threads then shots to the ground once behind of them and forces them to look directly up wards into the sky.

So beyond from what I read, they cant actually see what is going on due to the technique manipulating there actual perception of what is going on, becoming mentally blind but yet it’s not real blindness as they can still see,.

My question is, when does the mental blindess kick in for the enemy?
( Genjutsu: Kohitsuji Shoutan Raikou) Illusion Arts: Lightning Tears of a Lamb
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After 2 handseals, the user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent, making him feel 2 lightning threads surge from each eye across his/her face. The lightning threads will cause great pain as they go around the head, pulling the facial muscles into a wide eyed shocked expression and then shoot into the ground, pulling the head downwards to have the opponent face the heaven. At that point, the lightning strings that links the head to the ground pressure into an area of the brain not dealing with vision but the interpretation of vision (left occipital lobe and temporal lobes), signaling the user's chakra messing with those particular areas. At which point, the opponent becames mentally blind, able to see but enable to make sense of it, as the genjutsu mimics Visual Agnosia.
The user has to rely on senses other than vision to perceive through this genjutsu, including but exclusively Sharingan, Byakugan and other Rinnegan, as it does not create a cloak to their eyes but actually messes with the perception and interpretation of visual stimmuli.
*Can only be used thrice, requiring 1 turn break between usages (counting after the turn it ends)*
*Is basically a normal genjutsu with a visual twist, it is as weak to any other method of dispelling as any other genjutsu*
 

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It's more like they can't comprehend they're seeing, so they don't. It's not actual blindness in the sense that their eyes are responsive, but they can't see nonetheless. That's what allows this technique to combat doujutsu, because it does nothing to hamper their visual prowess, it just prevents them from interpreting their visual stimuli.

It's as quick as you'd like it to be. It's made with lightning beams, so you can either go with the theatrical very slow progression, or make it really fast, like lightning, so your opponent is blind in a few moments.
 

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(Genjutsu: Keeki no Uso)Illusionary Arts: The Cake is a Lie
Type:Supplementary
Rank:D -Rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra:10
Damage:N/A
Description:
A weak but funny and probably effective genjutsu, the user will channel a small portion of chakra into the brain of the target by making a hand seal. The user will then create 3 illusion clones that will appear behind the target. Two will hold the target in place, while the third one appears in front of the target. The third clone will be created with a spoon and plate with a large slice of chocolate parfait in it. The clone will then force feed the target with the cake, till the target is filled with the cake. The consumption of the cake will create a false sense of sudden weight gain and obesity. The target clones will then disperse, and the technique remains in effect for 4 turns, causing the target to feel as if there body is extremely over weight and under a lot of pressure. When the clones are created and lock the target, if the target is moving in reality they will suddenly stop moving in coherence to the clones locking there body movement, however this is only for a brief moment.This mean they can’t move in reality when the technique is first activated but is able to move a few moments afterwards., and the user can’t stop a moving target that is moving beyond their tracking speed (e.g a person who might be moving twice as fast as the user, if the user can’t track them, the technique can’t work)


(Tsumibukai Genjutsu: Saisho Jūhō - Bakudan )Sinful Illusion Arts: First Curse - Bomb
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Rank: B-S Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20-40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make five hand seals causing a genjutsu to occur. The user induces a genjutsu where everything within the genjutsu can and will induce an explosion on touching it. If the target tries to hold an object, the object will explode on contact. This will happen with everything excluding things the opponent was already in contact with when the illusion was first initiated i.e if the target tries to physically touches the user; an explosion will occur that acts as a defense for the user. The explosions are simulated to be “real” and such induces false pain on the target, though this doesn’t harm them in reality, it however can cause mental stress if a strong enough explosion is used. The explosions power can vary on ranking and can have different effects while the genjutsu is active.

B-Ranked – Is strong enough to induce minor burns to the target if contact is made, but doesn’t cause any mental strain.

A-Rank – Is strong enough to deal 40 damage worth of mental stress, and causes more intense burns from the explosions. The shock it can induce is enough to disarm a person in reality if they hold a weapon or object.

S-rank – Induces 60 damage worth of mental pain and the explosions of the genjutsu are enough to even create false sense that the target lost a limb from the explosion. The sound of the explosion is also loud enough to induce false deafness in the target, making them unable to hear. The user also makes it impossible for the target to move the limb they seemingly lost in the genjutsu in reality. The user can also add the explosive properties to his own real techniques, to which they will explode if contact is made with the target or a targets technique but this doesn't increase the elemental techniques power as the explosions are not real.

*Can remain active for 4 turns*
*Can be used twice per battle*
*No A-rank or above genjutsu in the next turn*
*No other genjutsu this turn above B-Rank*
*Once a rank is picked, all the explosions will adhere to that power*

Tell me about these two and then Ill add my comments :p
 

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The first is just a really weird technique that first immobilizes your opponent, then makes him fat. Just weird, love it. No questions.

The second is much more useful, it's about turning anything into a bomb, except objects my opponent is already in contact with. I'm assuming you can turn yourself into a bomb, or any animal/being?
 

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The first is just a really weird technique that first immobilizes your opponent, then makes him fat. Just weird, love it. No questions.

The second is much more useful, it's about turning anything into a bomb, except objects my opponent is already in contact with. I'm assuming you can turn yourself into a bomb, or any animal/being?
Yup, your basically a bomb as well if they try to touch you which can provide a good offense against taijutsu user. It works on almost anything though you cant use it for like things like if my target uses hand seals. Remember that when you use it, you must mention which rank it is and it remains that way for the remainder of the jutsu.

Also the first one is nice because it allows you to stop faster moving enemies, cause when you activate while they are running, they will stop moving instantly which in reality makes them trip up and fall.
 

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( Genjutsu: Mahou no Kei Chikin ) Illusion Technique: The Voodoo of the Headless Chicken
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Requires 5 handseals. This jutsu acts as the opposite of False Surrounding (Kokohin). Instead of manipulating the opponent's perception of his/her surroundings, it changes the perception of his/her body by removing or adding organs/objects. This allows the user to remove limbs/organs, to prevent certain actions to be taken, such as ripping one's eyes to make the opponent blind, removing one's lungs to make the user pass out from lack of air, removing one's legs to prevent the target from running etc, or add certain objects/organs, such as blades to one's stomach, or adding stitches to one's mouth, silencing them.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle*
*Opponent needs to find a way to counter or release the genjutsu in his countering turn when the illusion pertains to "removal" of organs or he'll lose conscience from the pain and mental strain*

So this jutsu is basically a game of doctor. The user will make the hand seals, and once activated they will remove an organ or limb, though assuming from the description you can even remove objects such as tools and such. The question that remains to me is that when this active, can the user still remove more of them later on or is it picked on casting and then the limbs or such goes? Also I wanted to know if multiple of them can be removed at once.
 

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Alright, well firstly with the very erotic nature this bad girl can give to a user is very nice. The user starts off by making the required handseals and then using there chakra will manipulate the perception of the target. The genjutsu follows the concept of False Surrounding or at least how it works, by targeting the perception as to which a person perceives these things within the illusion. The user has the ability to make the enemy suffer from limb separation all the way towards organs within the body. Once they user does this, they make the target suffer even more due to the strain of the object being removed, and thus actually feels like the effects are real. If I was to remove their brain, the target will feel unable to think, due to lacking the main function of the body, becoming mentally brain dead though they are fine in reality. The next example of this is the lungs, to which if the user removes it causes them to feel as if they no longer can breathe normally.

Im assuming when used on limbs it also applies, making it harder to use such limb in reality so say I use it to remove there hands, they find it hard to use them in reality much;. The user has no limits as to what they can do with this, as they can simulate other things such as adding objects into the target’s body, making them suffer internally. One can add stuff like animals and others for example and claw out the eyes or even eat the organs of the target. This technique is the ultimate torture tool.

The question don’t worry about it, after re reading the jutsu, I learnt it doesn’t work that why and also sorry the lack luster reply from before x,x
 
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