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The chapter begins with a setting at the Icihiraku Ramen Bar. Naruto, Sakura,and Jiraiya walk in the shop with Naruto very eager to eat some ramen. He smiles with both arms behind his head with his eyes closed. They all sit down on the stools on the ramen shop. Naruto sits next to Sakura on the left, while Jiraiya sits next to her on the right.
?Hey old man! I?ll have a bowl of Miso Ramen with extra pork!? Shouted Naruto, while he pulls his black headband.
?Grr, Naruto! Seems you haven?t matured at all! This is how you ask! Ahem! May I have the Diet Ramen?? Politely Asked Sakura.
?Seems like you still jump at the opportunity to show of how smart you are?? Mumbled Naruto to himself as he flaps his right hand up in down by his head.
Sakura cheerfully smiles at Naruto. She begins to clench her fists until they crack.
?Listen, Naruto, at this point you don?t want to see me get angry. Ok?? Replied Sakura.
Naruto begins to look a little freaked out. Both his arms are sticking out crookedly.
?Sakura?s even scarier then ever?.? Naruto instinctively thought to himself
Ninja Scroll,2, Akatsuki makes their move!
?(Oh man! That?s the same smile as Tsunade! Naruto better watch out or he?ll regret it. Man, so similar to Tsunade, those huge jugs!! Plus she?s so young! Should I??)? Jiraiya thought
Jiraiya begins to blush as his left hand begins to reach over to Sakura?s breast, slowly. He begins to drool.
?Yes! Yes! Almost at home base!!? He thought
The Ichiraku store owner interrupts Jiraiya.
?What will you be ordering Lord Jiraiya?
He asked.
Jiraiya swiftly puts his hand on the bar..
?Oh! Ha,ha,ha, I?ll get what Naruto is getting.?
Sakura looks at him suspiciously.
?(Something isn?t right about him? Tsunade Sama did tell me a lot about how he acts. I think it?s best that-) Hey Naruto let me switch seats with you!" Sakura demanded.
?Eh? What for??? Asked Naruto.
?Just move it!!? She yelled.
Naruto swiftly moves from the stool and both switch seats.
?Um lord Jiraiya?? The Ichiraku owner asked.
?What is it?? He replied.
?Do you want a napkin? You?re drooling all over my shop." Asked Ichuraku owner.
Jiraiya puts his hand on the back of his head and begins to laugh with embarrassment.
?Ha, ha, ha, ha, yes that is nice of you to ask!? Replied jiraiya.
Scene switches over to the Village Hidden in the Clouds border. Standing at the front of it is a Shinobi known as Yugito, with two other cloud nins next to her. All around the border, security is very tight, from up, left, right and bottom.
?The border is very secured. Perfect! Nothing should be getting through.? Yugito thought.
To her surprise everyone but her and the two cloud shinobi next to her begin to fall on their knees and then flat on their faces.
?W-what is this? Genjutsu??" She asked.
?Do not worry Yugito Sama, you?re the third strongest in our village!? Yelled of the cloud Nins.
?Yeah he?s right! Nobody but Raikage Sama and Killerbee Sama are stronger then you.? Another replied
?Fools! Don?t you think I know that!? Besides, why are you underestimating the enemy before they even reveal themselves. Especially since I myself am a jinchuuriki, and we all know from Jiraiya, one of the three legendary sannin that Akatsuki are after the my kind.? She replied annoyingly.
Suddenly two people with their faces not being shown arrive at the bottom of the borders bridge. They are wearing black cloaks with red cloud patterns on them
?Aha! Seems like my suspicions were correct! You two, go to lord Raikage Sama and tell him that the Akatsuki have finally arrived!! I?ll take them on meantime!? Yugito ordered.
?Right!?
Both use the body flicker technique and disappear, while Yugito jumps over the bridge and over to her foes. The terrain is more rocky then anything. The wind begins to blow.
Scene shifts back to the Ichiraku Ramen shop?
Naruto, Jiraiya and Sakura are eating their ramen when Kakashi arrives and greets them with his left hand waving.
?Hey! Why am I not surprised to find you here?? Asked Kakashi,
Both Naruto and Sakura slam their hands on the bar and stand up.
?Kakashi sensei!?
Both yelled in unison.
All four go and stand outside.
?Whoa! Naruto is that you? You?ve gotten taller! I hope you?ve improved a little.? Replied Kakashi.
?Heh heh. A little? I?ll eat you for breakfast if you?re not careful. Anyway, I?ve brought you something!?
Naruto replied.
"Something for me...?" Asked Kakashi.
He pulls out of his Ninja tool bag a purple novel. The title of the novel is, "Combination Strategies of Love".
Jiraiya begins to smile.
Kakashi looks very shocked. He reaches it slowly and removes it from Naruto?s hands. He slowly begins to giggle and quickly turns around while he opens it.
?Hey hey! Sensei what do you think about me!? Huh? Do you think I?m more mature now? Do you think I look more suitable to be a ninja now?? Sakura asked
Kakashi ignores her and only pays attention to the book while he giggles. Sakura begins to get angry.
?That is the type of power my books have. First you get hooked by the drama, the love scenes and then, the descriptions and finally the hints of advice!? The fifty year old sannin thought.
?Hey sensei!!? Our pink haired Kunoichi yelled.
Kakashi slowly turns and slowly begins to give a thumbs up.
?Yep Sakura, you have changed! Especially your breast, like Teacher like student!?
?What!? ?
Sakura freezes up and slowly begins to get heated up.
"Hmm? Did I say something wrong? Kakashi asked.
?Is that all you men see in me!?? Sakura yelled.
She clenches her right fist tightly and runs over to Kakashi and attempts to punch him. He jumps up into the sky and avoids it. Sakura ends up hitting the ground. The ground begins to form a hole, while large tall pieces of the ground begin to pop out while the earth around them shakes a little. Sakura looks up at Kakashi and smirks.
Naruto, Kakashi and Jiraiya look surprised. Kakashi lands back on the ground.
?Huh? Sorry, Sorry, didn?t realized you changed you physical punches that much?? Stated a speechless Kakashi.
Sakura smiles cheerfully.
?Thank you for noticing.? She replied.
Godaime Sama must have trained her well. Ha, ha? Sakura, you have grown. Not only that, but you were very good with genjutsu to begin with. I wonder what else I haven?t seen. All that is left is Naruto? ? Thought Kakashit
Apparently Kakashi took one of the advices from his new book and that is what caused him to compliment Sakura on her breast. Of course though, now he will only read Jiraiya's books for the storyline, drama and romance.
Naruto grabs the his heart as it seems to be pounding.
?Now I know, not to mess with her anymore?? He whispered to himself.
?Beautiful like Tsunade. Punches like Tsunade. Has a temper like Tsunade... Oh well, I guess she is out of the question too." Thought Jiraiya in a depressed tone.
Kakashi closes his book and puts it in his Ninja Tool Bag. All four walk back inside the Ichiraku Ramen shop.
?I guess it wouldn?t annoy Godaime Sama much if I make her wait a little. Would it?" Thought Kakashi.
Scene switches back to Yugito and Akatsuki.
The two Akatsuki members faces are revealed. They are none other then Itachi and Kisame.
?Aaah, Uchiha Itachi, the one who murdered his own clan. The Uchiha clan. Also, you are one of the seven swordsman of the mist. Or should I say, bloody mist. I guess I will have to be careful against you two.
?I am Hoshigake Kisame! Pleased to meet you! So Itachi San, is she the one? The two tails?? Kisame asked.
?She matches the descriptions that were given to us. She is the one. Yugito San, you will come with us. Itachi stated.
?Heh, I don?t think so.? She replied.
She pulls out a scroll from her ninja Tool Bag and opens it. She slides her hand on it and summons three blades.
?I?m not as good with this style as Killerbee Sempai so I can only use three blades.? She stated through her thoughts.
She throws them up in the sky, she catches one inside her mouth, one on her left shoulder and one on the back of her right leg.
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Well what did you think of the chapter. This still isn't at my current level of writing but it beats the crap out of chapter no?
?Hey old man! I?ll have a bowl of Miso Ramen with extra pork!? Shouted Naruto, while he pulls his black headband.
?Grr, Naruto! Seems you haven?t matured at all! This is how you ask! Ahem! May I have the Diet Ramen?? Politely Asked Sakura.
?Seems like you still jump at the opportunity to show of how smart you are?? Mumbled Naruto to himself as he flaps his right hand up in down by his head.
Sakura cheerfully smiles at Naruto. She begins to clench her fists until they crack.
?Listen, Naruto, at this point you don?t want to see me get angry. Ok?? Replied Sakura.
Naruto begins to look a little freaked out. Both his arms are sticking out crookedly.
?Sakura?s even scarier then ever?.? Naruto instinctively thought to himself
Ninja Scroll,2, Akatsuki makes their move!
?(Oh man! That?s the same smile as Tsunade! Naruto better watch out or he?ll regret it. Man, so similar to Tsunade, those huge jugs!! Plus she?s so young! Should I??)? Jiraiya thought
Jiraiya begins to blush as his left hand begins to reach over to Sakura?s breast, slowly. He begins to drool.
?Yes! Yes! Almost at home base!!? He thought
The Ichiraku store owner interrupts Jiraiya.
?What will you be ordering Lord Jiraiya?
He asked.
Jiraiya swiftly puts his hand on the bar..
?Oh! Ha,ha,ha, I?ll get what Naruto is getting.?
Sakura looks at him suspiciously.
?(Something isn?t right about him? Tsunade Sama did tell me a lot about how he acts. I think it?s best that-) Hey Naruto let me switch seats with you!" Sakura demanded.
?Eh? What for??? Asked Naruto.
?Just move it!!? She yelled.
Naruto swiftly moves from the stool and both switch seats.
?Um lord Jiraiya?? The Ichiraku owner asked.
?What is it?? He replied.
?Do you want a napkin? You?re drooling all over my shop." Asked Ichuraku owner.
Jiraiya puts his hand on the back of his head and begins to laugh with embarrassment.
?Ha, ha, ha, ha, yes that is nice of you to ask!? Replied jiraiya.
Scene switches over to the Village Hidden in the Clouds border. Standing at the front of it is a Shinobi known as Yugito, with two other cloud nins next to her. All around the border, security is very tight, from up, left, right and bottom.
?The border is very secured. Perfect! Nothing should be getting through.? Yugito thought.
To her surprise everyone but her and the two cloud shinobi next to her begin to fall on their knees and then flat on their faces.
?W-what is this? Genjutsu??" She asked.
?Do not worry Yugito Sama, you?re the third strongest in our village!? Yelled of the cloud Nins.
?Yeah he?s right! Nobody but Raikage Sama and Killerbee Sama are stronger then you.? Another replied
?Fools! Don?t you think I know that!? Besides, why are you underestimating the enemy before they even reveal themselves. Especially since I myself am a jinchuuriki, and we all know from Jiraiya, one of the three legendary sannin that Akatsuki are after the my kind.? She replied annoyingly.
Suddenly two people with their faces not being shown arrive at the bottom of the borders bridge. They are wearing black cloaks with red cloud patterns on them
?Aha! Seems like my suspicions were correct! You two, go to lord Raikage Sama and tell him that the Akatsuki have finally arrived!! I?ll take them on meantime!? Yugito ordered.
?Right!?
Both use the body flicker technique and disappear, while Yugito jumps over the bridge and over to her foes. The terrain is more rocky then anything. The wind begins to blow.
Scene shifts back to the Ichiraku Ramen shop?
Naruto, Jiraiya and Sakura are eating their ramen when Kakashi arrives and greets them with his left hand waving.
?Hey! Why am I not surprised to find you here?? Asked Kakashi,
Both Naruto and Sakura slam their hands on the bar and stand up.
?Kakashi sensei!?
Both yelled in unison.
All four go and stand outside.
?Whoa! Naruto is that you? You?ve gotten taller! I hope you?ve improved a little.? Replied Kakashi.
?Heh heh. A little? I?ll eat you for breakfast if you?re not careful. Anyway, I?ve brought you something!?
Naruto replied.
"Something for me...?" Asked Kakashi.
He pulls out of his Ninja tool bag a purple novel. The title of the novel is, "Combination Strategies of Love".
Jiraiya begins to smile.
Kakashi looks very shocked. He reaches it slowly and removes it from Naruto?s hands. He slowly begins to giggle and quickly turns around while he opens it.
?Hey hey! Sensei what do you think about me!? Huh? Do you think I?m more mature now? Do you think I look more suitable to be a ninja now?? Sakura asked
Kakashi ignores her and only pays attention to the book while he giggles. Sakura begins to get angry.
?That is the type of power my books have. First you get hooked by the drama, the love scenes and then, the descriptions and finally the hints of advice!? The fifty year old sannin thought.
?Hey sensei!!? Our pink haired Kunoichi yelled.
Kakashi slowly turns and slowly begins to give a thumbs up.
?Yep Sakura, you have changed! Especially your breast, like Teacher like student!?
?What!? ?
Sakura freezes up and slowly begins to get heated up.
"Hmm? Did I say something wrong? Kakashi asked.
?Is that all you men see in me!?? Sakura yelled.
She clenches her right fist tightly and runs over to Kakashi and attempts to punch him. He jumps up into the sky and avoids it. Sakura ends up hitting the ground. The ground begins to form a hole, while large tall pieces of the ground begin to pop out while the earth around them shakes a little. Sakura looks up at Kakashi and smirks.
Naruto, Kakashi and Jiraiya look surprised. Kakashi lands back on the ground.
?Huh? Sorry, Sorry, didn?t realized you changed you physical punches that much?? Stated a speechless Kakashi.
Sakura smiles cheerfully.
?Thank you for noticing.? She replied.
Godaime Sama must have trained her well. Ha, ha? Sakura, you have grown. Not only that, but you were very good with genjutsu to begin with. I wonder what else I haven?t seen. All that is left is Naruto? ? Thought Kakashit
Apparently Kakashi took one of the advices from his new book and that is what caused him to compliment Sakura on her breast. Of course though, now he will only read Jiraiya's books for the storyline, drama and romance.
Naruto grabs the his heart as it seems to be pounding.
?Now I know, not to mess with her anymore?? He whispered to himself.
?Beautiful like Tsunade. Punches like Tsunade. Has a temper like Tsunade... Oh well, I guess she is out of the question too." Thought Jiraiya in a depressed tone.
Kakashi closes his book and puts it in his Ninja Tool Bag. All four walk back inside the Ichiraku Ramen shop.
?I guess it wouldn?t annoy Godaime Sama much if I make her wait a little. Would it?" Thought Kakashi.
Scene switches back to Yugito and Akatsuki.
The two Akatsuki members faces are revealed. They are none other then Itachi and Kisame.
?Aaah, Uchiha Itachi, the one who murdered his own clan. The Uchiha clan. Also, you are one of the seven swordsman of the mist. Or should I say, bloody mist. I guess I will have to be careful against you two.
?I am Hoshigake Kisame! Pleased to meet you! So Itachi San, is she the one? The two tails?? Kisame asked.
?She matches the descriptions that were given to us. She is the one. Yugito San, you will come with us. Itachi stated.
?Heh, I don?t think so.? She replied.
She pulls out a scroll from her ninja Tool Bag and opens it. She slides her hand on it and summons three blades.
?I?m not as good with this style as Killerbee Sempai so I can only use three blades.? She stated through her thoughts.
She throws them up in the sky, she catches one inside her mouth, one on her left shoulder and one on the back of her right leg.
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Well what did you think of the chapter. This still isn't at my current level of writing but it beats the crap out of chapter no?