Might as well gave your character kamui and muus invisibility their so similar. Like above, your character is too OP.
Not trying to kill your buzz but your MC is Terrible. He's to OP to start of whit.
To me Superman is OP. Compare my guy to him. My guy would hardly get a hit in. My character doesn't have strength like other superman or others
I think Goku is OP. Sasuke Uchiha is OP and Naruto is OP but not as much as Sasuke Uchiha.
My character has limitations.
Teleportation is limited to eight times portaling.
In the ending of the series. He'll become OP due to he is the founder of the Dimensional Guardians.
Each powers are not from the beginning. He'll only use Weather and Plant manipulation for food and water also to clear himself.
Not trying to kill your buzz but your MC is Terrible. He's to OP to start of whit.
Might as well gave your character kamui and muus invisibility their so similar. Like above, your character is too OP.
Superpowers from Superman:
1. *Invulnerability
2. *Flight
3. *Super Strength
4. *Super Speed
5. *Super Breath
6. *X–Ray Vision
7. *Super Hearing
8. *Accelerated Healing
9. *Heat Vision
10. *Mental Powers (learning languages quickly)
11. *Ice Breath
12. *Super Hypnotism (apparently to hypnotize himself into not having powers, and keep his identity secret)
13. *Super Ventriloquism
14. *Microscopic Vision
15. *Telescopic vision
16. *Energy Absorbing (yellow sun)
Here's my main character's superpowers:
1. Plant Manipulation and Weather Manipulation is only for his food and to survive in the wildness of all of the dimensions.
2. Invisibility and Intangibility
3. Talk to animals and Babies.
4. Teleportation
5. Cloth Manipulation and crystal manipulation
6. Stamina
7. Healing factor.
8. Shape shifting.
See who is over powerful.
Not trying to kill your buzz but your MC is Terrible. He's to OP to start of whit.
Might as well gave your character kamui and muus invisibility their so similar. Like above, your character is too OP.
Please re-read it. Look at the Chapter 2.
