[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Wakizashi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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boss summoning: Kyofu
(kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu-big wind
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:mid-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a gamabunta size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This summons has the ability to create great A-rank winds with the flap of his wings that’s able to sweep the target off the ground and into the air. While the target is vulnerable in the air, some the feathers of the toucan’s get’s swept with the wind surrounding the target, then exploding as a result.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: can only use big wind once per turn
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract
~Declined~ Why is this mid-long range? Its a summoning, it should be placed as short range. How many feathers? How big are they? What in the world is causing them to explode?

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(kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu-big wind
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a gamabunta size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This summons has the ability to create great A-rank winds with the flap of his wings that’s able to sweep the target off the ground and into the air. While the target is vulnerable in the air, 6 adult human size feathers of the toucan’s get’s swept with the wind surrounding the target, then exploding as a result of leaving the body after three seconds as all his feathers do.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: can only use big wind once per turn
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract


±± Declined ±± Link to contract?

 

[Tosen]

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(Katon: Gogyou Nami) Fire Release: Fire Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user focus chakra that covers his legs before molding that chakra into fire as the user gets down and spins his legs around in a breakdance manner while releasing a wave of fire from his legs that travel. The fire that gets released is about 8ft vertically and covers a wide-range horizontally.
The fire has the potential to take with it the opponent as it travels which lets the target stay in the wave for a short-time before getting blown back, giving the person second-degree burns.


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±± Declined ±± Similar technique already exists.


(Fūton: Shippuu Kyouten) - Wind Release: Twister Canon
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A variation of Wind release Twister Shot in which the user releases a stream of wind-infused chakra from their mouth which takes the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.
The difference is that this technique has a secondary surprise attack in which it shoots multiple compact air canons from where the twister is traveling towards the enemy.
Since the Twister is heading towards the opponent with speed the canons shot out would be even faster making it very difficult to react to the canons which would hurt and distract while the twister charges and connects with the target, slicing where it hits in a spinning manner.


±± Declined ±± Many smiliar techniques exist.

 

[Ushiro]

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(Kuchiyose: Senbi - Chikyū no Ekibyō) - Summoning : Senbi - Plague of the Earth
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Senbi, one of the guardians of the land of locusts also known as the plague of the earth. He is about 40 meters tall with a brown outer skin outlined with gold patterns resembling cracks and carries a large metal hammer. He prefers not to fly unless he has to, instead using his immense strength to jump across the ground at speeds normal eyes have trouble keeping up with. Senbi's title comes from his mastery of earth jutsu which he can use up to S-rank and he does not require handseals to perform them. Twice per battle Senbi can spit an S-rank stream of mud from his mouth that hardens seconds later as an attack or form the mud into a wall for defense counting as one of the summoner's moves. He also has the ability to clone himself by splitting his body into multiple forms.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Earth techniques and cloning counts as a move
-Must have signed the locusts contract
~Declined~ A Locust that wields a hammer, jumps so fast that normal eyes have trouble keeping up, and Earth style techniques up to S-Rank with no hand seals and cloning/splitting?You need to re-work this entire summon if you want it to be approved and clarify the cloning/splitting ability.
(Kuchiyose: Numa no Mure) - Summoning: Swarm of the Swamp
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon a group of five locusts each 5 meters in length with bluish-green outer skin. They can each perform up to B-rank water and B-rank earth jutsu without the use of handseals. Working together, they can spit water from their mouths or manipulate nearby water into various forms for offensive and defensive purposes with the strength of an A-rank technique.
-Can be summoned twice per battle
-Techniques used by them and manipulating water counts as a move
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Must have signed the locusts contract
~Declined~ Five locusts with dual affinities and no hand seals with the ability to manipulate water as well? Same as above.

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(Kuchiyose: Senbi - Chikyū no Ekibyō) - Summoning : Senbi - Plague of the Earth
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Senbi, one of the guardians of the land of locusts also known as the plague of the earth. He is about 40 meters tall with a brown outer skin outlined with gold patterns resembling cracks. He prefers not to fly unless he has to, instead using his immense strength to jump across the ground far distances. Senbi's title comes from his mastery of earth jutsu which he can use up to S-rank but the summoner will need to perform handseals for him. Three times per battle Senbi can spit an A-rank stream of mud from his mouth that hardens seconds later as an attack or form the mud into a wall for defense counting as one of the summoner's moves.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Earth techniques count as a move
-Must have signed the locusts contract

±± Declined ±± It must be the 7th time I explain this in this same thread. You can't mold your summons chakra as its not your own. Handseals serve that purpose. Mathias point was that you had too many abilities in one summon. Making the hand seals is meaningless as you can't mold his chakra for it.


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(Genjutsu: Kōseina Gēmu) - Illusion Technique: Fair Game
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs the handseals Dog → Boar → Bird and casts an illusion where in the opponent's mind they appear to be both standing in the middle of a forest. The illusion of the user then snaps his fingers and a dozen arrows suddenly fly out of the trees and pierce the opponent all over their body. The opponent's senses are manipulated to have him believe he has actually been hit by arrows and is left immobilized because of the pain. Multiple opponents can be placed in this illusion at the same time as long as they are within an area with a 5 meter radius.
-Usable twice per battle
-Illusion's effects last for 2 turns


±± Declined ±± Why is this illusion going to last 2 turns?

 

[Priest]

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(Raiton: Kibaku jirai) - Lightning Release: Exploding Land mine
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user channels raiton chakra into the ground where he stands then compresses it underground letting some of his chakra leak from the ground, then upon attack from the target the user jumps away from the spot to which if the target steps on that spot, the chakra which is invisible senses a strange chakra which immediately triggers the compressed lightning surge underground letting out a powerful explosion almost instantly(just like a mine bomb).
the user can make a hand-seal to let off the explosion when the target is in range.
-The user must coat himself with a lightning armor such as "Chidori Nagashi" or he too will receive some damage from the explosion since it is short range though the damage to the user is not much.
-Last for 2 turns
-Can only be used 3 times in a battle
-Can only be used by Mist01

±± Declined ±± Uh? i didn't understand it... Really. Rephrase it and word it in a comprehensible way


(Fuuton: funka) - Wind Release: Eruption
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user channels fuuton chakra through his legs into the ground then spreads it out underground to the position where the target is standing then the user compresses the fuuton chakra which becomes unstable underground then after making Dog ? Bird hand-seal, the user claps his hands then compressed air having been released, will start gushing out at successive intervals from the ground covering an area of 30 meters radius. this compressed air are thin, fast and strong enough to cut through rocks.
-Lasts for 2 turns
-the user must have mastered fuuton
-Can only be used twice in a battle
-Can only be used by Mist01

±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists.

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Summoning Animal: Egyptian Vulture
Scroll Owner: Mist01
Other Users who have signed contract: Not ATM
Summoning Boss if existing: Not ATM
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not ATM
Description and Background:
Egyptian Vulture is a species of Vultures also called White Scavenger Vulture or Pharaoh's Chicken. Egyptian Vulture is found from southwestern Europe and northern Africa to India. The contrasting under-wing pattern and wedge-shaped tail make it distinctive in flight as it soars in thermals during the warmer parts of the day.
Egyptian Vultures feed mainly on carrion but are opportunistic and will prey on small mammals, birds, and reptiles. They also feed on the eggs of other birds, breaking larger ones by tossing a large pebble onto them.
An adult Egyptian vulture is white, with black flight feathers in the wings with pointed wings while the tail is wedge shaped thus having a strong wind affinity using its pointed long wings and wedged tail as a medium.
The legs are pink in adults and grey in juveniles. The claws are long and straight, and the third and fourth toes are slightly webbed at the base.
He has a size twice of a fully grown horse and has a wing size of 40 feet, or 12.192 meters.


±± Declined ±± contract taken

 

[Jokey]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Re-submitting the following;

(Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: -
Damage: -
Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body and thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders he gains the ability to use wind technique's in a blink of an eye. Makarov already got the ability to use every wind technique with one single handseal, but this also gives him the opportunity to use wind techniques in a blink of an eye after putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one rank weaker then the original.

Note: -10 chakra every turn
Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
Note: Only

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Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points

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Deleted and changed a couple of things, I hope it's better now.

~ In a blink of an eye ? No, just no ~

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(Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: -
Damage: -
Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders. After putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one ranks weaker then the original.

Note: -10 chakra every turn
Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
Note: Only

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Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points

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Deleted the blink of an eye part.


±± Declined ±± No elemental boosting weapons. The suit is a weapon, even if supplementary

 

[Baldy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kyodaina Mizu Hanmā)- Water Release: Titanic Water Hammer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user jumps into the air, and materializes a huge mass of water in his hands. He then molds the water into a gargantuan water hammer, with both weight and density. The water's manifests itself as a single elephantine and hard entity, in which the user, carrying the Titanic Water Hammer with great effort, slams the Titanic Water Hammer down on the opponent, like someone batting a fly. The immense power and weight that the hammer holds crushes the opponent, and smacks them silly including death possibly. Also, the descend of the water hammer is extremely fast, with its great weight with gravity's aid, giving minimal time to react. After using the technique, it leaves the user slightly fatigued and their hand seal speed is slower, given that he used much strength in lifting the water hammer.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 2 times per battle
• Cooldown period of 3 turns
• No S-rank and above Water techniques during this turn, and the turn after
• Leaves the user slightly fatigued

~Declined~ Exactly how big is the hammer? And remove the possible death/giving minimal time to react. We all have different biographies with different abilities, there is no way for you to know how much time they have to react whether it be a lot or not. Also I'd like to you clearly specify the "Leaves the user slightly fatigued, because as it stands it is merely a sugar coated restriction.

Feel free to edit anything you wish ^^
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(Suiton: Dōkutsu-nai Kodokuna Mizu, Seinaru Kami no Sheruōbu)- Cave-in of the Holy Shell Orb of the Solitary Water God
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs the hand seals Tiger → Dog and materializes a huge spiraling flow of water in the shape of an orb around the opponent. The water that is materialized is around 5 meters in radius. Upon materializing into a flow of gushing water around the opponent, it immediately, similar to Gushing Water Imprisonment, form a dense sphere around the opponent. The opponent, encased, encompassed, and enveloped in water, is unable to breathe and flows to the center of the orb due to buoyancy. With that said, the water provides much resistance for the opponent to move his limbs. Subsequently, the user can perform the hand seals Bird → Boar → Dragon to do several things to the orb - the Bird Hand Seal essentially causes several strong whips to rise from the volume of water on the interior side, going around the stranded opponent and tying it around him, like a bundle. As such, the opponent is completely restricted as he is suffocated even greater, as the water whips put more pressure on him. The Boar hand seal causes spikes to emerge from the long whips tied around the opponent. The spikes are dense and strong, sharp as well, injuring the opponent by cutting deep, yet superficially into his wound. This would cause immense pain, as the opponent is suffocated. The last hand seal Dragon, ends his misery. The water particles within the water orb would cave in, shrinking and diminishing in size, soon turning smaller and smaller for an orb. Within 3 seconds after getting tied up and hurt by the spikes, the orb would have shrunk to about the size of the opponent, and from then on, finding not enough space, the water would naturally explode. The water explodes, utterly devastating any victims inside of the orb. This can be done almost instantaneously, by stringing all hand seals together.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 2 times per battle
• No A-rank Water and above the next 2 turns
• Leaves the user slightly fatigued after usage
• If not activated with the hand seals, the orb would not harm the opponent in any way except slowly suffocate them like Gushing Water Imprisonment

~ The first bit is a contradiction. The second bit I marked is not an actual restriction, quantify the fatigue. ~

(Kyodaina Mizu Hanmā)- Water Release: Titanic Water Hammer
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user jumps into the air, and materializes a huge mass of water in his hands. He then molds the water into a gargantuan water hammer, with both weight and density. The hammer roughly 50 meters tall when tilted vertically, standing on the ground, and 10 meters wide at the tip, which is the blunt attacking edge you use to hit others. The water's manifests itself as a single elephantine and hard entity, in which the user, carrying the Titanic Water Hammer with great effort, slams the Titanic Water Hammer down on the opponent, like someone batting a fly. The immense power and weight that the hammer holds crushes the opponent, and smacks them silly including death possibly. After using the technique, it leaves the user slightly fatigued and their hand seal speed is slower, given that he used much strength in lifting the water hammer.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 2 times per battle
• Cooldown period of 3 turns
• No S-rank and above Water techniques during this turn, and the turn after
• Leaves the user's arms slightly fatigued and are unable to perform hand seals for a turn after carrying such immense weight.

±± Declined ±± a 50 meter tall hammer? really? no, just no.


(Suiton: Dōkutsu-nai Kodokuna Mizu, Seinaru Kami no Sheruōbu)- Cave-in of the Holy Shell Orb of the Solitary Water God
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs the hand seals Tiger → Dog and materializes a huge spiraling flow of water in the shape of an orb around the opponent. The water that is materialized is around 5 meters in radius. Upon materializing into a flow of gushing water around the opponent, it immediately, similar to Gushing Water Imprisonment, form a dense sphere around the opponent. The opponent, encased, encompassed, and enveloped in water, is unable to breathe and flows to the center of the orb due to buoyancy. With that said, the water provides much resistance for the opponent to move his limbs. Subsequently, the user can perform the hand seals Bird → Boar → Dragon to do several things to the orb - the Bird Hand Seal essentially causes several strong whips to rise from the volume of water on the interior side, going around the stranded opponent and tying it around him, like a bundle. As such, the opponent is completely restricted as he is suffocated even greater, as the water whips put more pressure on him. The Boar hand seal causes spikes to emerge from the long whips tied around the opponent. The spikes are dense and strong, sharp as well, injuring the opponent by cutting deep into his wound. This would cause immense pain, as the opponent is suffocated. The last hand seal Dragon, ends his misery. The water particles within the water orb would cave in, shrinking and diminishing in size, soon turning smaller and smaller for an orb. Within 3 seconds after getting tied up and hurt by the spikes, the orb would have shrunk to about the size of the opponent, and from then on, finding not enough space, the water would naturally explode. The water explodes, utterly devastating any victims inside of the orb. This can be done almost instantaneously, by stringing all hand seals together.

Restrictions

• Can only be taught by me
• Only usable 2 times per battle
• No A-rank Water and above the next 2 turns
• If not activated with the hand seals, the orb would not harm the opponent in any way except slowly suffocate them like Gushing Water Imprisonment

±± Declined ±± OPed. Don't resubmit. Materializing an S-Rank field of water around your enemy from nowhere that causes S-Rank damage is too much.

 

[Lord Snow]

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Katon: Five Star Hell Burn Vortex
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gathers an enormous amount of katon chakra and exert it from their body, then molding the chakra into actual fire. They will then use shape manipulation to make the fire into five orbs that they will shoot around their opponent. They will then make the Ox handseal and the orbs will explode forming a five point star flaming inferno prison. The prison then begins to rotate forming a flaming vortex making it impossible for the person trapped inside to escape and hard to breathe due to the oxygen being taken away. This prison could stand at 100 ft high and 400 ft wide.


Note: Can only be used 2 times in battle
Note: Can't use any other S-rank jutsus in same turn
Note: Need to have completed fire training.

±± Declined ±± Such extreme shape manipulation and molding would require hand seals.

Futon: Orb Of Heavenly Wind`
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will build up a large amount of futon chakra and compress it in their hands. They will then mold that chakra into wind and focus in in their hands. Using shape manipulation, they will make it into a orb of wind. The user will build the pressure of the wind while compressing it. This orb will grow as it takes in the air in the surroundings. Due to all that power being compressed into a orb, it makes a whistleing sound. At full power, the user the user till toss the orb of wind and on impact, it will expand 1/2 mile and whatever gets trapped inside, will experience winds like a F-5 tornado making it hard to escape.


Note: Can only be used 3 times in battle
Note: Can't use another S-rank wind jutsu in same turn
Note: Need to have completed Futon training.

±± Declined ±± Fuuton: Rasengan... Does it ring a bell? Besides, compreassion, compression, compression, compression, compression...

Suiton: Three Water Clone Exploding wave
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will make 3 water clones and have them attack the enemy. Two of the clones will then grab down the enemy and explode into a wave of water while the other one keeps hold of the enemy to drown them.

Note: Needs water source


±± Declined ±± Do you need to make the clones beforehand? or does this technique do them? if it does, it needs to be A-Rank.

 

[Korra.]

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(Hachi no hakai ) Bee's Destruction
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will call forth there bees and have them engulf the enemy inside a cloud of Bees. The bees will use their stingers to drain the opponent's chakra making them weak the longer they have the bees stinging them.
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan.

(Hachi no tatsumaki )-Tornado of Bees
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will have their bees surround the enemy in a tornado like shape. Some of the bees will go after the opponent striking them while the other bees shoot out their stingers at the enemy from different directions and angles.
Note: Usable 4 times a battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be a member of the Kamizuru clan

(Shūen no mure )Swarm of Demise
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will generate a swarm of thousand of bees that will cover the entire sky. The bees will then shoot out their stingers from above with great speed than swarm down taking out any remaining enemies that survive the stingers.
Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
Note: Must be part of the Kamizuru
Note: Usable 3 times a battle

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±± All Declined ±± Having a kamizuru bio doesn't mean you can make techniques that are basically Aburame techniques. You can summon bees... Its different.

 

[Emperor]

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~ A small note ~

To all those people who write "can only be used or taught by xxxx" this is something I'm sick of pointing out, that sentence is a contradiction !

If it can be used only by you, it cannot be taught. If it can be taught, it can be used by other people.

Henceforth if anyone submits a technique with that, I'll decline it without an explanation.

 

[Shinta]

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(Raiton: Denkou Kabe ) Lightning Release: Lightning Wall
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (if opponent touches it)
Description: By placing five kunai charged with raiton chakra in a pillar, one at the bottom, one at the max height you want the wall (must state where so the height of the wall can be know) and the rest evenly dispersed in between. Five kunai must be placed at corresponding spots on a nearby pillar with the top an bottom kunai at approximately the same height that are also charged with raiton chakra. To release the wall the user will make the monkey → boar hand seals which will release the lightning chakra causing them to emit a weave of lightning between the corresponding points thus making a wall. The jutsu works by embedding negatively charged raiton into one set of kunai and positively charged raiton into the other pair of kunai.
Note:
- The max height of the wall is five meters and the max width between the two points is three meters,
- The pillars can be trees or any other structure fitting the above point,
- In the case that there are no pillars some may be made using an earth technique, though this counts as one of you three moves per turn,
- Must be set up properly at least the turn before it is used,
- The kunais only maintain enough charge for one use and new one must be placed/thrown into place in order for the wall to be used again.
- The wall is designed to stop one b-rank jutsu or under, except for wind and earth release in which case it can stop one c-rank for wind and a-rank for earth or under.
- Kunais remained charged for three turns,
- Can be used twice per battle,
- Can only be taught by Shinta.

±± Declined ±± Pillar? what pillar?


(Raiton: Raikou Ridairekushon) Lightning Release: Lightning Redirection
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user outstretches there arm with the first and second fingers pointing at the opponents ranged lightning jutsu, the user is able to temporarily absorb the attack into there chakra network redirecting and expelling it through the other arm outstretched in a similar fashion as the one that absorbed the attack. The redirection works by quickly flooding there chakra network with there own raiton chakra before the taking in the incoming lightning, channeling it along a path through across the shoulders and out the other arm. This is only able to redirect ranged A-rank and lower lightning jutsu.
Note:
- on the turn this jutsu is used and the following turn, only lightning jutsu can be used as the users chakra network is completely flooded with residual lightning chakra,
- if you have clones already on the field they are not affected by the above restriction,
- after using this attack only b-rank lightning jutsu's can be used due to the stain on the chakra network,
- can only be taught by Shinta,
- can only be used three times per battle,
- the user is able to redirect the attack towards there opponent but it becomes a b-ranked mid-range attack


±± Declined ±± I tried this once. Was declined for being Oped.

 

[Lucifer]

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(Kinjutsu Katon: Kagirinai no Jigoku) – Forbidden Fire Art: Eternal Hell
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Dragon, and then focuses a large mass of katon chakra throughout both arms literally fingers from both hands till both shoulders. While doing that the user will enclose both fists as hard as possible and jump as high as he/she can and come smashing down with both fists onto the ground, thus releasing the highly focused and unstable katon chakra through the whole battlefield. While seemingly the ground will turn crimson red as far as the enemy can see causing small tremors and cracks beneath the user as this happens, causing even damage to the performer of this jutsu (-20) due to the disturbing and unnaturally large amount of chakra send into the ground. While all that happens the ground it self will start to get pressurized causing a range 20-30 meters large fire streams to rise up across the whole battlefield randomly and without any kind of warning. While that happens the user will clap both his hands together and make each one of these fire streams explode leaving huge craters behind after they explode turning everything to ashes this jutsu will take place outside short range of the user himself of course, otherwhise it would result in killing caster itself in a matter of seconds. These fire streams are great enough to evaporate any kind of liquid substance, such as water, mud, slime etc. on the battle field.

Note: This technique can only be used by Lucifer.
Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.
Note: The user can't use fire techniques for three turns after this jutsu is used.
Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-20)
Note: This jutsu counts as two of the users' moves, due to the abnormal amount of chakra used to cast this jutsu.
Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user)

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(Katon: Kagerō) - Fire Style: Heat Haze
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user starts by simply focusing a large amount of fire chakra into the palm of both hands, while doing this the user will form the Tiger→ Hare hand seals. And after performing the two hand seals the user point both hand torwards the targets and release a ocean of fire that speards out into the direction of the enemies having and enormous range on the ground and through the air. While traveling torwards the targets the ocean of inferno will violently rage (like the actual sea) and form into a many wave formation that then corners the targets from every every direction. Making a circle of raging fire around the enemies thus enclosing them, while they burn and are brought to justice by the user.

Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any technique above A-Rank the following turn.

±± All Declined ±± You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for 4 cycles of submissions. Reason: submitting more then 3 techniques in a cycle. The marker was posted on the 22th of May. This is quite easy to see it as it was clearly stated before: you can only submit 3 techniques between markers. You can return to submissions on the cycle that begins on the 25th of June. I'll be investigating the thread. If i find this behavior was done in the past, expect harder punishment

 

[Frozenstein]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Suiton: 1000 Hari Hitoame) - Water Style: 1000 Needles Rainfall
Type: Attack
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels his chakra into a water source and creates several needles from pure water. These needles are quite small (about ¾ of the senbons Haku used), but extremely compressed and peaked. The user can shoot these senbons like a shower directly from the water source or he can lift them up in the air (or around the target) and shoot them from there. This technique can be performed with tiny water source like a puddle or other water style techniques, like the water dragon technique. Using this jutsu in conjunction with lightning style techniques allows it to pierce earth style techniques up to B-rank. This technique only last for 10 seconds and can only shoot 100 needles at a time.
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
- can only be used 5 times per battle
~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit

 

[Toku]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton- Hokori keimusho) Earth release- Dust Prison
Type: Attack
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Attack points: 40
Description: the user will perform the necessary hand seals and expel a cloud of dust from his mouth to imprison a target. The dust will then be used to suffocate an opponent molding it into a dust bubble prison. The size of the bubble and the visibility within it depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used. If the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized bubble which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.
*Note: Can only be used by Toku.
*Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
~Approved~ Though know that the Dust bubble prison can be disrupted or broken out of through ordinary means.

(Ame no kyōka) Rain Enhancement
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user will perform two hand seals releasing chakra into an already created source of rain bringing about a larger storm w/ much more rain. The rain obscures visibility for both the user and the opponent and also makes it impossible for fire jutsus to burn because of the downpour. Only a trained Amegakure shinobi will be able to locate its target using only sound much like the hidden in mist jutsu. Rain techniques will receive a boost of +10 when this jutsu is active and fire techniques will be reduced by -10. The boost only stays active for three turns and all rain clouds disperse after it is done.
*Note: can only be used by Toku.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: This jutsu stays active for 3 turns after it is activated.
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit (Similar variants already exist)

 

[Kato.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Rikujokoro) Lightning Style: Six-Staff Light Prison
Type: Offence/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will send his Raiton chakra around the opponent, and when the opponent is surrounded by a perfect circle of Raiton chakra, the user will release his chakra, creating six triangular beams of focused lightning that slam through the opponents mid section, sending a paralysing wave of electricity through their body and holding them in place. The opponent cannot move one struck with this jutsu as the wave of electricity paralyses their whole body.

- No S-Rank Jutsu in the same turn
- Lasts for three turns
- Can only be used three times
- Can only be taught by Kato Rokuemon
~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists (one of mine xd) Do not Resubmit. Sorry.

 

[Scorps]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

±± New Weekly Cycle ±±

New cycle of submissions starting today, the 28th of May and ending on the 3rd of June. Remember, you can only post 3 techniques between markers. Failing to abide by this basic rule may lead to banning from the Cj thread for extend periods of time or, if its a repeated offense, to permanent banning from the Cj thread. In some cases, approved customs may also be declined and stripped from their creator. So please, abide by the rules for your own sake.​

 

[Erzo]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Resubmitting both the above:

(Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra and release a stream of fire from both his hands (left and right) where they then travel in an arc to each of his opponents side (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) the stream of fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to come out and shoot off towards the opponents location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them. These birds can shoot out of the ground to a maximum height of 6 meters before clashing with each other and exploding.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.


~ Say what ? ~

Resubmitting

(Katon: Nibai Batsu) Fire Release: Double attack
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra and slams his hands into the ground releasing the fire chakra where it then comes out from his opponents side (3 meters away from each of the opponents side) the fire then forms into two hawks -each roughly the size of the hawk sasuke summoned against danzo- to come out and shoot off towards the opponents location from both his sides (his left and right side) trapping the opponent in the center of the attack. Upon collision with each other and the opponent in the middle of them, the birds explode and create a giant fire viciously burning the opponent between them. These birds can shoot out of the ground to a maximum height of 3 meters before clashing with each other and exploding.
Note: Can be used 3 times.
Note: No S-rank Fire in same turn and previous turn
Note: After using it once, must wait another turn before using it again.

Changed the way the fire is made, I'm releasing it through the ground rather then as a stream of fire.
~Approved~
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New submission:

(Katon: Atsui Kikou) Fire Release: Warm Season
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his fire chakra and releases it through his mouth in the form of many tiny fire chakra all shaped like little balls with a marbles but considerable smaller making them barely visible (but visible nonetheless). These little balls of fire then spread out all over the battlefield being used as a way to stop an opponent from performing any wind techniques, as they would be able to take them out before they full form. However this means the user can't use any wind techniques either. The tiny fireballs are able to increase the temperature of the surrounding areas and cause the opponent to be drowsy and dehydrated not allowing him to move at his/her normal speed reducing the speed of his reaction, movement and hand seals.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: An S-rank wind can remove all the tiny fire marbles.
Note: No S-rank fire in same turn and previous turn.
Note: Opponent and user can still see eachother clearly as the fireballs/marbles are spread out and tiny.
~Declined~ Doesn't make sense. Why would heat stop wind attacks. The greater an imbalance of temperature in the atmosphere, the more wind is produced anyway.

(Ototon: Te Ru Shinobi ) - Sound Release: Handless Ninja
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his sound chakra into his Katana and swings it towards his opponent, should his Katana connect with his opponents weapon the vibration is passed along through to the opponent's weapon and then his hands leaving him unable to hold his Katana or use his hands due to the sonic vibrations released. Should the opponent dodge the katana rather than defend from it, the sound is released and damages the opponents ears, affecting it for 2 turns, not allowing the enemy to hear clearly and also affecting their balance, making them struggle to keep on their two feet without saying from time to time.
Note: Hands cannot be used for 2 turn.
Note: Hearing is affected for two turns, should they dodge rather than defend.
Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: No other sound jutsu in same turn.
~Leaving for Scorps~

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[XZA]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Sekiteki tsuparri)- Lightning Release: Static Thrusters
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C - rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses lightning chakra to his feet and project static electricity from the bottom of his feet, so instead of just free-falling, they can descend slowly from the sky in a gliding fashion. While falling, Static thrusters are entirely dependent on momentum, thus can be steered but with no additional upward or forward momentum can be generated after the initial jump. Air resistance presumably causes his momentum to slow fairly quickly in addition to manual course corrections. Though, if using while on the ground, the user can be propelled upward and forward. Using precise chakra control, the user can "fly" using this technique, but can only be used by those who have mastery over lightning.
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Last for 5 turns max
Note: -10 per turn
~Declined~ Sorry, you lost me when you said you could fly after previously stating that this was particularly a technique to allow you to merely glide down.

(Raiton: Ion Sojuu )- Lightning Release: Ion Manipulation
Type: Offense, Defense, Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique enables the user to focus an ionic charge in their hand or in the air around them to create weopans, defenses, tools or summon lightning strikes from the sky. The weopans/defenses/tools are however, restricted medium sized.
Note: Can only be used 4x a battle
Note: The user can not use this technique more than once a turn or the turn afterwards.
~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit

 

[Pervyy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Genjutsu: Heki Riariti) Illusion Technique: False Reality
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: S- rank
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a more advanced version of the false darkness genjutsu. The false darkness creates a black illusion taking away one of your senses, sight. This jutsu blocks all 5 senses of the person bound in the genjutsu. The target/targets will not be able to hear anything, alls they will see is blackness, they wont be able to smell anything, they wont be able to taste anything (like this will make a difference? xd) and they wont be able to feel anything when they go to touch it. This technique was perfected to go with the silence homocide jutsu. This jutsu only stops the feel of touch, not the feel of pain. This is used by the user performing one handseals releasing their chakra into the area around them up to mid range.

Note: Useable once
Note: Anyone within mid range can be caught in this illusion
Note: The user of this technique can't use any other jutsu while it is active (doesn't apply to additional bodies/clones)
Note: This lasts for up to 3 turns
Note: Can't use genjutsu for 2 turns after this
Note: Can't use S ranks in the same turn as this (even with clones)
Note: Clones can't use this jutsu.
~Declined~ Overpowered

(Raiton: Ikkyou) - Lightning style: Suprise
Type: Attack
Range: Short - long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: +1 rank
Description: This jutsu will be used after the user has used a lightning jutsu. It is similar to the way that when Darui used a lightning jutsu to add to his water jutsu as he was spitting it out against Sasuke. After having release a lightning jutsu, the user will focus more chakra into it. As they do they will focus upon the heat of the lightning itself (30,000 °C (54,000 °F)). In doing so they can do one of two things. They will either:

1. By adding the extra chakra they will control the heat, causing flames to wrap around the lightning jutsu the user jutsu make, making it a fire lightning combo. This will add 1 rank to the power of the jutsu from the extra chakra used. The fire would stay wrapped around all the lightning as it's being produced from the lightnings heat.

2. Use their chakra to convert the full heat of the lightning into fire, changing the state of the energy, so that the lightning now becomes a fire attack. So if the user used chidori spear, they would be extending it, then control the heat to change it into a sharp flame spear extending form their hand, changing the chakra nature through the use of physics.

The user can only used this on one jutsu, and once they have used it they can't change it back.

Note: Useable 3 times
Note: Can only be used on A ranks and below
Note: Can't use water jutsu in the same turn after having used this.
~Declined~ Pervy, why is this a Lightning Release technique?


I based this weapon off scorp's weapon on how he restricted it because of how he explained weapon submissions to me a while back. I've also messaged him with a link to this post to make sure he's ok with it and he has given me permission to make a weapon based off his.

(Tenbun Bisento) - Destiny Bisento
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage:
Description: This bisento as seen in the image below, is about 1.5 meters long with a 30cm blade on the end. It was forged as a gift for the sage of the sixth paths, made from an unknown metal that made it indestructable. A special red leather bandage has been wrapped around the staff where the user will hold it, to help improve their grip.

Staff abilities:
Indestructable
(Fūton: Kujaku Senpūjin) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind Formation (B rank wind) can be used through the blade on the staff and gains two ranks when doing so and can go up to mid range.
(Hari Jizou) - Underworld Guardian Spikes (B rank nin) gains two ranks when the users is holding the staff and the hair will wrap around the staff handle too. When the user has the staff in hand or on their back, the jutsu doesn't require handseals.
(Fūton: Kaze Gaeshi) - Wind Style: Wind Return can be used through the staff like it was seen being used through a sword and gains 2 ranks when doing so, meaning it can send back A ranks and below.
Bisento can dispel a Raiton or Doton jutsu up to B-Rank 2 times per battle (this is done by the user channeling his Raiton/Doton chakra into the staff and hitting the jutsu with it, which disrupts, dispels or stops the jutsu) and/or dispel/disrupt/stop 1 complete A-Rank Raiton/Doton jutsu once per battle (with the same principle).
Kenjutsu techniques can be used through the blade on the end of the staff, to a certain extent. (Such as blowing wind on the blade, releasing a chakra wave ect)

Resctrictions:
-All abilities of the staff count towards the move count and don't require hand seals if the user is holding the staff on his hands.
-When used to counter 1 B-Rank technique it can only be used again to counter another B-Rank.
-While holding the staff in his hands, the user can't channel Genjutsu.
-To wield the staffs abilities the user must have it with him either in hand or strapped to his back.
-The staff can only be wielded by The Pervy Sage; if someone else tries to wield the staff it will become blazing hot burning all the leather burning who ever is holding it.

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~Declined~ Some of the restrictions don't make sense. Why would you be unable to use Genjutsu? The weapon has too many abilities, as well. And 2 ranks to Peacock Whirlwind Formation? Seriously?

Dropping:

(Igneel's atae) - Igneel's Gift
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra cost: N/a
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Long ago, when Natsu was young and Igneel found him, Igneel gave this special scalf to Natsu. At the time Natsu didn't understand why, but now it's all he has left of his "Father". This scarf has several Kanji seals and formulas said to have been written by a Fire Dragon. Although the full extent of the scarfs power is still unknown, it has been shown that fire techniques used by someone wearing the scarf are slightly more powerful, bigger and faster. The scarf passively feeds on the users chakra to create an aura of fire chakra around him that reduces incoming fire by one rank. The users fire jutsu increase in size and gain +10 damage. Not only this, but the Scalf gives Natsu the determination to fight so that he can meet Igneel again and make him proud, much like Jiraiyas determination. This will increase his will power and will be able to continue to fight even while in pain, such as losing an arm. Natsu always wears this scalf.

Note: The aura reduces only the damage of Katon techniques, not elemental combinations with fire or fire related CE's or KG.

 

[Mangomango]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton: Chikyū Shinbu no Torenchi) Earth Release: Deep Earth Trench
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal and then places their palms on to the ground in front of them. After this is done the user channels their Chakra down into the earth and out towards the enemy. The user lowers the earth underground creating an underground chasm 2 meters in front of the enemy. When the enemy moves over the Chasm the small crust that hides the Chasm from the surface breaks due to the weight and the person who walked over would falls in. The Chasm is 3 meters wide both ways and 7 meters deep. The user can also re-cover the Chasm after the enemy has fallen in if they wished to, trapping the enemy in the space.

Notes:
- Have to leave one turn between usages.
- The opponent doesn't know the Chasm is there, no physical signs will indicate its presence either. (Unless they have a technique stating otherwise - Chakra sensing/Byakugan)

~ Approved. I like it, traps are a woefully underutilized part of our RP. ~

(Sutiru Ningyo Korekushon: Suna Purotekuta Pea: Tatajiro) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Tatsjiro
Type:Puppet
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra:20 (If Summoned)
Damage:N/A
Description:Tatajiro is a puppet made of wood but has steel plaiting covering its entire body and is a part of the Steel Puppet Collection made by Sho. Tatajiro is a twin puppet, one of a pair. The two puppets (The other being (Sutīru ningyō Korekushon: Suna purotekutā Pea: Kenzanko) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Kenzanko) are often used together and where made to complement each other.

Tatajiro is shaped like an Armadillo and is about human size, from floor to back and three people wide, it is known for its defensive capabilities. It is made out of wood but its back is triple layered with steel panels to make it harder to penetrate. Tatajiro is also hollowed out inside allowing for three people to enter it for defensive or travelling purposes, but it can also open up its back panels to allow entry to enemies and then can close back up the panels to trap them inside. All of Tatajiro’s joints are protected by enforced steel covers, making them hard to target and making it hard to break Tatajiro.

Tatajiro’s mouth can be used to shoot Kunai (6 per battle) and can also extend a small blade from the tip of its tail, the blade is extremely thin and can be shot out (once per battle) looking like a large Senbon. Tatajiro also has two holes on its back that lead to the hollowed out insides of the puppet; these holes are the size of a fist.

Tatajiro can also roll up into a ball, allowing its heavily plated body to cover its entire body.
Tatajiro has the Kanji for Half on its neck/back area (just back from its head) and a small Kanji for Sho on its forehead.

Notes:
-Tatajiro can only shoot 6 Kunais from its mouth per battle and can only shoot its tail out once per battle also.
-The storage of this puppet will be declared at the beginning of a battle.

~ What ranks can it resist ? How many times ? ~

(Sutiru Ningyo Korekushon: Suna Purotekuta Pea: Kenzanko) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Kenzanko
Type:Puppet
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30 (If summoned)
Damage:N/A
Description:Kenzanko is a puppet made of wood but covered with steel plating and is a part of the Steel Puppet Collection created by Sho. Tatajiro is a twin puppet, one of a pair. The two puppets (The other being (Sutīru ningyō Korekushon: Suna purotekutā Pea: Tatajiro) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Tatajiro) are often used together and where made to complement each other.

Kenzanko is shaped like a Pangolin and is slightly smaller than its counterpart. It is thinner and about half the height. Although it’s smaller in height it is longer in length that Tatajiro. Kenzanko has an elongated tail which can wrap around Tatajiro body several times (3). Tatajiro isn’t hollowed out which means all its body parts are made of wooden sections all the way through. This makes it extremely dense but its joints have no protection making it easier to break than Tatajiro. Kezanko has a single layer of steel plating cover its body.

Compared to Tatajiro, Kenzanko has plenty of weapons. It has a Senbon multi-shooter in its mouth, making it possible to shoot 10 Senbons at one time (6 times per battle = 60 Senbons). Kenzanko also has blade compartments along its tail, (6 all together). These compartments are the same as Tatajiro’s. They can shoot out of the compartments and look like large Senbon needles. At the end of Kenzanko’s tail there is a blade, it is shaped like a tip of a broad sword and extends from the metal plating that covers all of Kenzanko’s back (it is only single layered). Kenzanko also has 3 metal piercings (What appear to be piercings anyway) they look like studs along his belly. These can be detached and thrown using a separate string. The stud ends that are thrown release a relatively simple gas which can knock out the enemy. Kenzanko is relatively faster than its counterpart and is made for offensive purposes.

Kenzanko has the Kanji for Half on its neck/back area (just back from its head) and a small Kanji for Sho on its forehead

Notes:
-Can only fire its 60 senbons, with 6 shots of 10 per battle, can only shoot six large senbon needles from its tail per battle. Can only use the poison bombs once each, making it a total of 3 per battle.
-It can only shoot one set of Senbons per Turn.
-The storage of this puppet will be declared at the beginning of a battle.

~ Same as above ~

(Sutiru Ningyo Korekushon: Suna Purotekuta Pea: Tatajiro) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Tatsjiro
Type:Puppet
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra:20 (If Summoned)
Damage:N/A
Description:Tatajiro is a puppet made of wood but has steel plaiting covering its entire body and is a part of the Steel Puppet Collection made by Sho. Tatajiro is a twin puppet, one of a pair. The two puppets (The other being (Sutīru ningyō Korekushon: Suna purotekutā Pea: Kenzanko) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Kenzanko) are often used together and where made to complement each other.

Tatajiro is shaped like an Armadillo and is about human size, from floor to back and three people wide, it is known for its defensive capabilities. It is made out of wood but its back is triple layered with steel panels to make it harder to penetrate. Tatajiro is also hollowed out inside allowing for three people to enter it for defensive or travelling purposes, but it can also open up its back panels to allow entry to enemies and then can close back up the panels to trap them inside. All of Tatajiro’s joints are protected by enforced steel covers, making them hard to target and making it hard to break Tatajiro.

Tatajiro’s mouth can be used to shoot Kunai (6 per battle) and can also extend a small blade from the tip of its tail, the blade is extremely thin and can be shot out (once per battle) looking like a large Senbon. Tatajiro also has two holes on its back that lead to the hollowed out insides of the puppet; these holes are the size of a fist.

Tatajiro can also roll up into a ball, allowing its heavily plated body to cover its entire body.
Tatajiro has the Kanji for Half on its neck/back area (just back from its head) and a small Kanji for Sho on its forehead.

Notes:
-Tatajiro can only shoot 6 Kunais from its mouth per battle and can only shoot its tail out once per battle also.
-The storage of this puppet will be declared at the beginning of a battle.
-Because of the puppets defensive nature it can withstand attacks of B-Rank and Below. The puppet can be hit 3 times by a Jutsu of A-Rank and above before being rendered useless. .

~ Approved ~

(Sutiru Ningyo Korekushon: Suna Purotekuta Pea: Kenzanko) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Kenzanko
Type:Puppet
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30 (If summoned)
Damage:N/A
Description:Kenzanko is a puppet made of wood but covered with steel plating and is a part of the Steel Puppet Collection created by Sho. Tatajiro is a twin puppet, one of a pair. The two puppets (The other being (Sutīru ningyō Korekushon: Suna purotekutā Pea: Tatajiro) Steel Puppet Collection: Suna Protector Pair: Tatajiro) are often used together and where made to complement each other.

Kenzanko is shaped like a Pangolin and is slightly smaller than its counterpart. It is thinner and about half the height. Although it’s smaller in height it is longer in length that Tatajiro. Kenzanko has an elongated tail which can wrap around Tatajiro body several times (3). Tatajiro isn’t hollowed out which means all its body parts are made of wooden sections all the way through. This makes it extremely dense but its joints have no protection making it easier to break than Tatajiro. Kezanko has a single layer of steel plating cover its body.

Compared to Tatajiro, Kenzanko has plenty of weapons. It has a Senbon multi-shooter in its mouth, making it possible to shoot 10 Senbons at one time (6 times per battle = 60 Senbons). Kenzanko also has blade compartments along its tail, (6 all together). These compartments are the same as Tatajiro’s. They can shoot out of the compartments and look like large Senbon needles. At the end of Kenzanko’s tail there is a blade, it is shaped like a tip of a broad sword and extends from the metal plating that covers all of Kenzanko’s back (it is only single layered). Kenzanko also has 3 metal piercings (What appear to be piercings anyway) they look like studs along his belly. These can be detached and thrown using a separate string. The stud ends that are thrown release a relatively simple gas which can knock out the enemy. Kenzanko is relatively faster than its counterpart and is made for offensive purposes.

Kenzanko has the Kanji for Half on its neck/back area (just back from its head) and a small Kanji for Sho on its forehead

Notes:
-Can only fire its 60 senbons, with 6 shots of 10 per battle, can only shoot six large senbon needles from its tail per battle. Can only use the poison bombs once each, making it a total of 3 per battle.
-It can only shoot one set of Senbons per Turn.
-The storage of this puppet will be declared at the beginning of a battle.
-Because the Puppet lacks defensive properties it can withstand C-Rank Jutsu and Below, It can withstand 2 attacks of B-Rank and above before being rendered useless.

~ Approved ~

(Sutiru Ningyo Korekushon: Nakamura Kanzaburo Oku No Kao) Steel Puppet Collection: Nakamura Kanzaburo of Many Faces
Type:Puppet
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:
Damage:N/A
Description:: Kanzaburo is a humanoid shaped puppet and is apart of the Steel Puppet Collection made by Sho. The puppet is the same size and build as an average human man and has black long hair which hangs down like bangs framing each face (kind of like orochimaru’s hair). He wears a long white kimono that is dressed with black rims and a black belt. Kanzaburo comes with two plain Katanas, one placed on each hip, which he can wielded with his hands and perform free form Kenjutsu. Kanzaburo’s only abnormality when comparing him to the shape of a human is that he has 4 heads, all joined onto one central core. The head piece of the puppet can spin.
Kanzaburo can release 6 sets of 10 Senbon needles from each of his mouths. 60 Senbon per mouth and 4 heads which equals to 240 senbon needles all together.
Kanzaburo’s whole body is set in Steel plating. The plating covers his whole body and also offers steel plating for his joints to cover them making them harder to damage. This plating is two layers thick which makes it harder to break though, although under the plating is just wood which is Kanzaburo’s core material.
Kanzaburo also has two compartments on his chest, directly next to each other. These compartments both hold a Kunai which is modified so instead of ending with a hoop it extends down and connects with a cord. These Kunai’s can be fired out and are laced in a general and standard poison and remain connected to the body by the coil (can extend to long range). The Poison is not deadly but does blur the senses(This will act as a separate Puppets Arts technique and the Kunais can only be fired when the Puppet art technique is used).
Kanzaburo has a small Kanji for Sho on his forhead.
Notes:
-Can only release 240 Senbon from all of its mouths in total, a set per turn from each mouth.
-Has to use the Poison Kunais as a separate Jutsu.
-The puppet can withstand C-Rank Jutsu and Below, It can withstand 3 attacks of B-Rank and above before being rendered useless.

~ Eh...submit this with the separate Puppet Art and we'll see. ~

±± Leaving all of these for someone else ±±

 

[Naruto Uzumaki Bijuu Sage]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton:chikai kaisen)Lightning release: Short circuit
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user closes their left eye and preforms the flowing hand seals Bird → Ox → Boar → Hare → Bird, as the user is doing the hand seals their gathering a massif amount of raiton chakra into their left eye. once the hand seals are complete the user opens his eye sending out a massif wave of chakra that's invisible to the naked eye flying towards their opponent, this causes a great amount of stress on the eye causes it to bleed and to go blind for 3 turns, the wave of chakra is 10 feet wide and 10 feet in height, and travels at a fast able to reach mid range in about 3 seconds. once the wave comes into contact with the opponent it stores tiny electrical bolts in their chakra network that are dormant until the opponent try's to access their charka and when the opponent try's to access charka to use a jutsu or for some other reason the tiny bolts of stored lightning chakra release electricity throughout the opponents body causing their chakra network to become unstable for that turn resulting in the opponent not able to use any justu. the electricity also causes numbness in the opponents body.

Note: You can only use this jutsu two times per battle
Note: This can be the only jutsu you use on any any given turn, and if a jutsu was used before this you cannot use another one
Note: Using this justu will cause your left eye to go blind for three turns
Note: the charka wave can only be seen with a doujutsu that can see chakra or someone who has sensing.
Note the opponents body will go numb and unable to move it for 2 seconds <----Note to mod: (feel free to remove this one)
Note: if used three times your left eye will go blind forever.(just for that battle)

~ declined ~

(Raiton:chikai kaisen)Lightning release: Short circuit
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user closes their left eye and preforms the flowing hand seals Bird → Ox → Boar → Hare → Bird, as the user is doing the hand seals their gathering a massive amount of raiton chakra into their left eye. once the hand seals are complete the user opens his eye sending out a massif wave of chakra that's invisible to the naked eye flying towards their opponent, this causes a great amount of stress on the eye causes it to bleed and to go blind for 3 turns, the wave of chakra is 10 feet wide and 10 feet in height, and travels at a fast able to reach mid range in about 3 seconds. once the wave comes into contact with the opponent it stores tiny electrical bolts in their chakra network that are dormant until the opponent try's to access their charka to use any raiton jutsu and when the opponent try's to access charka to use a raiton jutsu the tiny bolts of stored lightning chakra will release electricity throughout the opponents body causing their chakra network to become short circuited canceling there jutsu.

Note: Using this justu will cause your left eye to go blind for three turns
Note: The charka wave can only be seen with a doujutsu that can see chakra or someone who has sensing.
Note: if used three times your left eye will go blind for that battle
Note: The tiny lightning blots can be dormant in your opponent for three turns.

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit

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(bachi of Howaito): Curse of white lightning Level 1
Type:
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user preforms this row of hand seals Bird → Ox → Bird → Dragon → Ram → Horse→ Tiger→ Horse → Bird → Hare → Monkey → Hare → Horse→ Bird → Ox → Bird → Ox → Tiger → Dragon → Hare→ Ram →Ox →Bird →Boar→ Dog → Ram →Rat →Ox →Bird→ Dragon , Then immediately after the hands seals are completed the user sends a massive amount raiton chakra throughout their body,there skin becomes dark and get's white lightning marks throughout their body. when this happens the users hair grows to waist length and becomes as hard as steel, their eyes turn pure white, When the user moves a trail of harmless white lightning charka is left behind and tails behind the user up to six feet.

Stats:
+ 3 to speed
+ 3 to reaction
+ Able to crush steel with bare hands
+15damage to all raiton jutsu

restrictions:
Every turn active the user looses 25 % current health used for 4 turns this means death
Every turn active the user looses 25% current chakra used for 4 turns this means death
can only use this jutsu one time per battle
Once this jutsu is over the user cannot use any jutsu above D rank
After this jutsu is used the user will be unable to move for three turns
Every time a jutsu is used it adds a 5% boost to the health and chakra drain

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. It doesn't even make sense.

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(Raiton:Bakuryuha): Lighting style: Backlash Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The ultimate attack of the white lightning blade. The technique can only be used by someone who has the white lightning blade. When an opponent uses a jutsu to attack, The White lightning blade can use the constant raiton pulse to engulf the enemy's attack in a lightning twister and reverse it back on them with the added power of the raiton chakra. This can only be used when the white lightning blade is in V2. The user can only use this three times per battle an cannot use this in the same turn nor the turn after that. Will only work on a jutsu that is below or on the same rank as this (E-B).

~ Sorry, InuYasha, but your explanation for how it works makes no sense in the Narutoverse. ~

(Raiton:Bakuryuha): Lighting style: Backlash Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+ Opponents jutsu damage)
Description: The ultimate attack of the white lightning blade. The technique can only be used by someone who has the white lightning blade. When an opponent's charka leaves their body and enters the constant raiton pulse that the white lightning blade gives off in V2, The user can swing the white lightning blade causing the constant raiton pulse that the white lightning blade in V2 gives off to engulf the enemy's chakra in a lightning twister and reverse it back on them with the added power of the raiton Pulse. This can only be used when the white lightning blade is in V2. The user can only use this three times per battle an cannot use this in the same turn nor the turn after that. Will only work on a charka that's is below or on the same rank as this jutsu so B-Rank or lower.

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. This continues to not make sense.

(Raiton:Howaito Raikiri) White Lightning Blade
Type:Weapon (sword)
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
Damage: 40
Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form

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in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally. the pulses that are sent out stay connected to the sword until another pulse is sent out or the jutsu is canceled, or if left on the field for more than two turns they disappear.(once the pulses are on the field the cannot change position the must stay in that direction until a new pulse is sent out, These pulses can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything

when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form

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in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see, like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent. This constant pulse of raiton chakra is full of waves that connect the 360 degree 20 foot diameter by 20 foot height pulse to the sword, so when a living creature is in side the area the user feels their electrical impulses in their body, thus giving the user an location of where the enemy is These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything


Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.
Note:The white lightning blade is only usable 3 times in V2