Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
I am not sure if this is approvable, anyhow I based it off a cfs that I submited recently, or well I decided to make it into a cj rather than a complete CFS.
(Tachiaoi hanabira) - Hollyhocks Petals
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (10 to further manipulate the sap)
Damage: N/A
Description: Hollyhock Petals are specific type of paper sheets which are similar to normal ones in length however a little bit thicker due to the sap which is filling their interior. They are used in combination with other paper technique to increase their potency.
Essentially, Yoanna was a long-lasting paper user who's weald represented her source of papers. She realised that differing trees had diverse characteristics one of which she wanted to use as per her advantage. A vast amount of trees had a substance known as sap traversing throughout their interior and then discharged on the exterior. She decided to use these trees for creation of paper sheets which have sap stored inside of them due to the way in which they were crafted. The thickness in these paper sheets came from the sap which was preserved within them.
Now, unlike Amber which is fossilized tree resin, sap is a fluid transported in xylem cells or phloem sieve tube elements of a plant (in this case trees). Essentially it is a combination of water and nutrients which molded together give out a sticky texture.
The sap inside of these paper sheets would stay dormant unless the user cause for its discharge by performing a single hand seal or if the paper sheets came in contact with a surface of sorts. Due to nature of the sap, once it has been discharged from the paper inside of which it was stored it would give out a sticky like texture to its exterior. Additionally, manipulating the paper sheets would be a hard task due to them being covered in it. However, the initial movement in which they were sent and with which they were used would be kept, hence the ability to perform what they were appointed. In addition, once the sap has been released from paper, user would be able to further manipulate it unless it has been eradicated following elemental strengths & weaknesses (having similar to basic ninjutsu) and only being able to reach short range from point of release.
Damage which is capable to be made by sap would solely depend on the technique of paper used. With increase in rank so would its power due to the amounts of it increasing. D and C ranked techniques will gain an increase of 5 damage points, B and A an increase of 10 damage and S and higher increase of 15 damage points.
Note: User is capable of causing sap to be released from the paper five times per battle by their desire, however only if B and A ranks are in questions. If it is S or F rank, they would be able to cause sap to be released beforehand twice. In this case this technique would take one technique slot out of three able to be performed per move.
Note: The rank of the sap would solely depend on the rank of the paper technique used, and it would follow elemental weaknesses and strengths of the basic ninjutsu.
Note: If applicable, further manipulating the sap would cause additional 10 chakra points to be used by the user.
Note: Must have mastery over paper ninjutsu to use these paper sheets.
Note: Must mention in their bio to use this technique.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
‡ Pending ‡ LoK checked the CFS so it's only fitting he checks this.
✦ Declined, the italicized parts give an allusion to Wood Release and Plant Release as well; I don't think it's within Paper's abilities to be able to create sap within the paper or on it. ✦
(Tanensei no tane) - Seed of a Perennial
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique which is quite unnoticeable to those who are not in possession of sensory or a doujutsu. Activated almost instantaneously once the target of the user comes in contact with a paper sheet of sorts. They wouldn't feel any changes however the paper sheet with which they came in contact with would attach itself onto them. Now the paper sheet itself could stay attached to the target as long as the user so wishes and as long as it is, user would be able to follow movement of them due to their connection with paper.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
‡ Approved ‡ Simple but effective. I like it.
I am not sure if this is approvable, anyhow I based it off a cfs that I submited recently, or well I decided to make it into a cj rather than a complete CFS.
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I italicized things which were suppose to be noted within the cfs' description based off the reason behind it being declined. (Tachiaoi hanabira) - Hollyhocks Petals
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (10 to further manipulate the sap)
Damage: N/A
Description: Hollyhock Petals are specific type of paper sheets which are similar to normal ones in length however a little bit thicker due to the sap which is filling their interior. They are used in combination with other paper technique to increase their potency.
Essentially, Yoanna was a long-lasting paper user who's weald represented her source of papers. She realised that differing trees had diverse characteristics one of which she wanted to use as per her advantage. A vast amount of trees had a substance known as sap traversing throughout their interior and then discharged on the exterior. She decided to use these trees for creation of paper sheets which have sap stored inside of them due to the way in which they were crafted. The thickness in these paper sheets came from the sap which was preserved within them.
Now, unlike Amber which is fossilized tree resin, sap is a fluid transported in xylem cells or phloem sieve tube elements of a plant (in this case trees). Essentially it is a combination of water and nutrients which molded together give out a sticky texture.
The sap inside of these paper sheets would stay dormant unless the user cause for its discharge by performing a single hand seal or if the paper sheets came in contact with a surface of sorts. Due to nature of the sap, once it has been discharged from the paper inside of which it was stored it would give out a sticky like texture to its exterior. Additionally, manipulating the paper sheets would be a hard task due to them being covered in it. However, the initial movement in which they were sent and with which they were used would be kept, hence the ability to perform what they were appointed. In addition, once the sap has been released from paper, user would be able to further manipulate it unless it has been eradicated following elemental strengths & weaknesses (having similar to basic ninjutsu) and only being able to reach short range from point of release.
Damage which is capable to be made by sap would solely depend on the technique of paper used. With increase in rank so would its power due to the amounts of it increasing. D and C ranked techniques will gain an increase of 5 damage points, B and A an increase of 10 damage and S and higher increase of 15 damage points.
Note: User is capable of causing sap to be released from the paper five times per battle by their desire, however only if B and A ranks are in questions. If it is S or F rank, they would be able to cause sap to be released beforehand twice. In this case this technique would take one technique slot out of three able to be performed per move.
Note: The rank of the sap would solely depend on the rank of the paper technique used, and it would follow elemental weaknesses and strengths of the basic ninjutsu.
Note: If applicable, further manipulating the sap would cause additional 10 chakra points to be used by the user.
Note: Must have mastery over paper ninjutsu to use these paper sheets.
Note: Must mention in their bio to use this technique.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
‡ Pending ‡ LoK checked the CFS so it's only fitting he checks this.
✦ Declined, the italicized parts give an allusion to Wood Release and Plant Release as well; I don't think it's within Paper's abilities to be able to create sap within the paper or on it. ✦
(Tanensei no tane) - Seed of a Perennial
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A technique which is quite unnoticeable to those who are not in possession of sensory or a doujutsu. Activated almost instantaneously once the target of the user comes in contact with a paper sheet of sorts. They wouldn't feel any changes however the paper sheet with which they came in contact with would attach itself onto them. Now the paper sheet itself could stay attached to the target as long as the user so wishes and as long as it is, user would be able to follow movement of them due to their connection with paper.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
‡ Approved ‡ Simple but effective. I like it.
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