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(Suiton: Kiri no Uso )- Water Release: The Mist's Lie
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: After the user has created the hidden mist jutsu (D-Rank) to cover the entire terrain as well as the users and opponent position. The user will control the water droplets and reflect the natural light starting from the user and manipulate the light to reflect everywhere around the mist. This will not however blind an opponent, it will actually produce a reflection of the users own image to appear because of how the light is reflecting off of the user and how the water droplets will act like a mirror of reflection. Water and droplets are able to reflect light and create the image. So basically the light which covers the entire mist will create a reflection of the user but is nothing more then a mere image. Since a mist is nothing more then suspended water droplets, this means the user is able to create literally hundreds of images all over the mist which is covered by the mist. This images move along with the users movement and reflects anything around the user, so if the user is sending a projectile weapon the reflection will show this image. This images however possess no attack ability or defensive ability and are meant simply to confuse the opponent and feel out numbered. Since the user is manipulating the natural light to reflect off there body, it will require them to not move while using this jutsu, only basic movements (throwing, spewing, hand seals, etc) would suffice but no running or moving away from the light. If the user moves out of the light area it will have the images disperse from the mist.
-Can only be used three times
-Stays active for only three turns
-Requires the hidden mist jutsu to be performed beforehand
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-Declined- I don't think this is possible, due to the lack of light within the mist, the opponent can't see within it, and even people so adept with the mist can barely see what's close to them, the core method is incorrect, in order to reflect light within the mist, some openings must be made in order to get in sun light and manipulate the reflection of that light, and it's a similar method to a cannon technique. This is also a ripoff from one of the cannon rain techniques, in the reflection part.
(Ranton: Bachi no Kami)- Storm Release: Punishment of the Gods
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel chakra below the opponent. The user will release the storm chakra under the opponent which will moisten the ground slightly, then clouds with electricity charged around them will rise all around the opponent, lifting them into the air. This jutsu can also be done on a water source as well, by using the water as a medium to rise up while sending lightning chakra to infuse with the water creating the storm cloud that will capture the opponent. The set up of the jutsu remains the same though, and so does the length of the performance (which is at a normal pace). The storm clouds begin to form around the opponent and acts as a orb which cuts away oxygen and the pressure of the water in the orb as well as the lightning portion which will shock and paralyze the opponent while inside the orb will prevent them from moving physically whatsoever while being being inflicted with numbing pain. After the opponent is caught in the orb, with one hand seal, the user will then have hundreds of bright blue lasers appear around the orb and direct them to skew the orb with the opponent inside. The lasers won't act to pierce the opponent but it will release a deadly shock from the lasers which can severely harm the opponent. Even if the opponent is not caught in the storm clouds, the electrical property it has will numb the opponent if touched by the clouds of storm and reduce their speed. If they are caught or touched heavily by the clouds then they will be paralyzed completely. The orb can be as large as the user commands it, the most it can go is 15 meter radius, so more then one opponent can be caught or relatively small summons can also be captured within the orb. This jutsu requires constant control and focus, if the user was to release control the jutsu will break apart and be released.
- Can only be used 3x in battle
- Must have mastery of Storm
- Can not use Storm jutsus above S-Rank next turn
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-Declined- Other than being a bit OP, i don't like leaving the size up to you to think of and a 15 meter radius is too big, it has to have a definite size, also how would the ground below the opponent be moist? what exactly would it affect the cloud's electric abilities or the opponent? also it's impossible to cut off oxygen like that, the lasers part makes it two moves in my eyes, what pressure? Storm release is a water/lightning energy, it's not a solid element, the technique is a mess >_>
(Ranton: Monusta Gifuto)- Storm Release: A Monster's Gift
Type: Defense-Supplement-Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+10 for every turn active)
Damage: N/A (Depends on the attack)
Description: The user will gather storm chakra from all over there body (or parts of there body) and release it forward to create a storm armor. The armor retains a different color which is red (Similar to ( Ranton Ougi: Rankiryuu ) Storm Release Ultimate Technique: Turbulance) with striking tendrils of lightning running through the armor and around it. The storm armor due to its specific properties, has a very high shocking potential. A simple touch of the armor can numb the area the opponent touched with of the armor, while a longer duration of touching the armor physically or even being smashed by the armor can severely shock the opponent and paralyze them from all over there body. The armor is productive against metal like projectiles and attack due to how lightning will be able to tear through and deflect the projectiles away, rendering them useless. This also includes for earth like material or sticky adhesive mud, that lightning is able to peirce or negate while wearing the armor. The user is able to generate tools from the armor, this can include anything from defensive purposes or attacking purposes. This tools include: threads, hammers, swords, etc. This tools appear out of the armor but can be released forward as a projectile attack which can travel up to long range. This tools however can only be summoned from the armor. This tools have a certain shocking property which can numb the opponent slow them down, as well as produce regular damage towards the opponent (B-Rank). This armor does not have any effect towards the users physical abilities, thus meaning the user will not have an increase of speed nor strength. While sustaining the armor around the users body, the user can only perform basic taijutsu, kenjutsu, genjutsu, lightning, water, ninjutsu (Non-elemental infused chakra), and storm release.
-Lasts 4 turns
-Must have mastery over storm release
-After the armor disperses or is destroyed, the user is unable to use storm release for one turn
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-Declined- DNR
(Suiton: Kiri no Uso )- Water Release: The Mist's Lie
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: After the user has created the hidden mist jutsu (D-Rank) to cover the entire terrain as well as the users and opponent position. The user will control the water droplets and reflect the natural light starting from the user and manipulate the light to reflect everywhere around the mist. This will not however blind an opponent, it will actually produce a reflection of the users own image to appear because of how the light is reflecting off of the user and how the water droplets will act like a mirror of reflection. Water and droplets are able to reflect light and create the image. So basically the light which covers the entire mist will create a reflection of the user but is nothing more then a mere image. Since a mist is nothing more then suspended water droplets, this means the user is able to create literally hundreds of images all over the mist which is covered by the mist. This images move along with the users movement and reflects anything around the user, so if the user is sending a projectile weapon the reflection will show this image. This images however possess no attack ability or defensive ability and are meant simply to confuse the opponent and feel out numbered. Since the user is manipulating the natural light to reflect off there body, it will require them to not move while using this jutsu, only basic movements (throwing, spewing, hand seals, etc) would suffice but no running or moving away from the light. If the user moves out of the light area it will have the images disperse from the mist.
-Can only be used three times
-Stays active for only three turns
-Requires the hidden mist jutsu to be performed beforehand
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-Declined- I don't think this is possible, due to the lack of light within the mist, the opponent can't see within it, and even people so adept with the mist can barely see what's close to them, the core method is incorrect, in order to reflect light within the mist, some openings must be made in order to get in sun light and manipulate the reflection of that light, and it's a similar method to a cannon technique. This is also a ripoff from one of the cannon rain techniques, in the reflection part.
(Ranton: Bachi no Kami)- Storm Release: Punishment of the Gods
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel chakra below the opponent. The user will release the storm chakra under the opponent which will moisten the ground slightly, then clouds with electricity charged around them will rise all around the opponent, lifting them into the air. This jutsu can also be done on a water source as well, by using the water as a medium to rise up while sending lightning chakra to infuse with the water creating the storm cloud that will capture the opponent. The set up of the jutsu remains the same though, and so does the length of the performance (which is at a normal pace). The storm clouds begin to form around the opponent and acts as a orb which cuts away oxygen and the pressure of the water in the orb as well as the lightning portion which will shock and paralyze the opponent while inside the orb will prevent them from moving physically whatsoever while being being inflicted with numbing pain. After the opponent is caught in the orb, with one hand seal, the user will then have hundreds of bright blue lasers appear around the orb and direct them to skew the orb with the opponent inside. The lasers won't act to pierce the opponent but it will release a deadly shock from the lasers which can severely harm the opponent. Even if the opponent is not caught in the storm clouds, the electrical property it has will numb the opponent if touched by the clouds of storm and reduce their speed. If they are caught or touched heavily by the clouds then they will be paralyzed completely. The orb can be as large as the user commands it, the most it can go is 15 meter radius, so more then one opponent can be caught or relatively small summons can also be captured within the orb. This jutsu requires constant control and focus, if the user was to release control the jutsu will break apart and be released.
- Can only be used 3x in battle
- Must have mastery of Storm
- Can not use Storm jutsus above S-Rank next turn
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-Declined- Other than being a bit OP, i don't like leaving the size up to you to think of and a 15 meter radius is too big, it has to have a definite size, also how would the ground below the opponent be moist? what exactly would it affect the cloud's electric abilities or the opponent? also it's impossible to cut off oxygen like that, the lasers part makes it two moves in my eyes, what pressure? Storm release is a water/lightning energy, it's not a solid element, the technique is a mess >_>
(Ranton: Monusta Gifuto)- Storm Release: A Monster's Gift
Type: Defense-Supplement-Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+10 for every turn active)
Damage: N/A (Depends on the attack)
Description: The user will gather storm chakra from all over there body (or parts of there body) and release it forward to create a storm armor. The armor retains a different color which is red (Similar to ( Ranton Ougi: Rankiryuu ) Storm Release Ultimate Technique: Turbulance) with striking tendrils of lightning running through the armor and around it. The storm armor due to its specific properties, has a very high shocking potential. A simple touch of the armor can numb the area the opponent touched with of the armor, while a longer duration of touching the armor physically or even being smashed by the armor can severely shock the opponent and paralyze them from all over there body. The armor is productive against metal like projectiles and attack due to how lightning will be able to tear through and deflect the projectiles away, rendering them useless. This also includes for earth like material or sticky adhesive mud, that lightning is able to peirce or negate while wearing the armor. The user is able to generate tools from the armor, this can include anything from defensive purposes or attacking purposes. This tools include: threads, hammers, swords, etc. This tools appear out of the armor but can be released forward as a projectile attack which can travel up to long range. This tools however can only be summoned from the armor. This tools have a certain shocking property which can numb the opponent slow them down, as well as produce regular damage towards the opponent (B-Rank). This armor does not have any effect towards the users physical abilities, thus meaning the user will not have an increase of speed nor strength. While sustaining the armor around the users body, the user can only perform basic taijutsu, kenjutsu, genjutsu, lightning, water, ninjutsu (Non-elemental infused chakra), and storm release.
-Lasts 4 turns
-Must have mastery over storm release
-After the armor disperses or is destroyed, the user is unable to use storm release for one turn
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-Declined- DNR
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