[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[ Mujitsu ] | Innocent

Rank| S
Range| Short
Type| Supplementary
Chakra| 40
Damage| 80
Description| This sword is call Innocent because of it's powers, the sword name has a meaning. The sword has hidden powers they all call 'Innocent' and they could only be use by the chosen ones. Innocent is extremely sharp and is also, really long. Innocent is for those people who love peace and hate wars. Innocent is extremely strong almost indestructible kunais, shurikens and stuff like that wont work against this sword. Innocent true powers are incredible this sword is able to control weather itself for example, if the user concentrate water chakra on the sword and think about a rainy day, the sword will control the weather and make it rain this power is to be known from the Gods. When, the user focus swift chakra in the sword the user speed increase immediately due to the swift chakra and when the user do this it count as a move due to the power of it. This sword is extremely light and long. The sword has a last, technique is known as the 'Innocent god' this technique is a genjutsu amazingly strong when the user spin the sword the sword will trap the opponent on the genjutsu, when the opponent is caught on the genjutsu the user is able to control the opponent mind and make him think of whatever the user want the opponent to think about.

• Genjutsu is only usable twice per battle and once use the user can't use any kind of genjutsu next, turn.
  
• The user speed can only last, four rounds and is extremely fast i will show an example.
  
• The weather control is only usable three times per battle.
  
• This sword call 'Innocent' can only be use by Miles "Ichigo"
  
• This sword is base on Swift element the user need to know Swift to be use.

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My man said control weather.. chilllllllll. Declined DNR.

You know we good Goro ~.~

[ Mujitsu ] | Innocent

Rank| S
Range| Short
Type| Supplementary
Chakra| 40
Damage| 80
Description| This sword is call Innocent because of it's powers, the sword name has a meaning. The sword has hidden powers they all call 'Innocent' and they could only be use by the chosen ones, thought powers may have different name but the real name is 'Innocent'. Innocent is extremely sharp and is also, really long. Innocent is for those people who love peace and hate wars. Innocent is extremely strong, indestructible stuff like; kunais, shurikens and stuff like that wont work against this sword due to the sharpness. Innocent true powers are incredible this sword is able to give the user to see different chakra of nature for example, the user is able to see if they are being attack by a fire jutsu due to the chakra each element has different chakra here is the different chakra; Fire chakra is red, water chakra is blue, wind chakra is green, lightning chakra is yellow and earth chakra is brown, custom elements chakra are always gray. When, the user focus swift chakra in the sword the user speed increase immediately due to the swift chakra and when the user do this it count as a move due to the power of it. This sword is extremely light and long. The sword has a last, technique is known as the 'Innocent god' this technique is a genjutsu amazingly strong when the user spin the sword the sword will trap the opponent on the genjutsu, when the opponent is caught on the genjutsu the user is able to control the opponent mind and make him think of whatever the user want the opponent to think about.

• Genjutsu is only usable twice per battle and once use the user can't use any kind of genjutsu next, turn.
  
• The user speed can only last, four rounds and is extremely fast i will show an example.
  
• When the user activate's nature chakra it give's the user fifteen damage
  
• This sword call 'Innocent' can only be use by Miles "Ichigo"
  
• This sword is base on Swift element the user need to know Swift to be use.

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~Declined do not resubmit~ Notice how Goro wrote "DNR" it stands for "do not resubmit".

( Waku ) Arrow Art: Skate

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Range: Short
Description:
The user will first, focus chakra around his whole body and when the user do the 'Bird' hand seal an black arrow will pop out in front of the user. This arrow is able to push the user where the arrow is pointing for example, if the arrow is facing the opponent the arrow will push the user at the opponent at high speed.

- Only Pain.. can use/teach Arrow arts
- When the user release the arrow and is facing where the opponent wanted to be face the arrow can't move
- Only the user that did the arrow can be push
- The arrow goes away when the user has been push twice

~Declined~ Clarify how this jutsu takes places, I'm kind of clueless as to what its purpose are too.

 

[Black Butler]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ranton:Arashi bakuha) Storm Release: Storm Explosion
Rank:C
Range:Short
Type: Attack
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will do 2 handseals, then create orb of storm, that appears within short range of the user. The orb the explodes, but because it is infused with the users chakra, he directs it at the enemy and not at himself.

~Declined~ Re-read your description, I don't understand the bold part.

(Ranton: Arashi Kire) Storm Release: Storm Slice
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will sling their hand forward releasing a slash of storm at the opponent or object.

~Declined~ Make it B-rank, call it a "crescent shaped storm projectile" and not a slash, and add restrictions.

(Ranton) Storm Style
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user creates small amounts of Storm to make various items such as shields, swords, pillars, or any other helpful item.

~Declined do not resubmit~ Either submit those individually with the appropriate ranking and restrictions or give it up.

(Ranton: Genwaku Ranpu) Storm Release: Blinding Light
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user does 1 handseal, creating a blinding light that illuminates form the user's body, blinding the opponent. In conjunction, the user sends out a wave of electricity, that will momentarily stun the opponent.

~Declined~ Storm release is a combination of Water and Lightning, where's the Water? This is a simple Lightning jutsu which's been done countless times.

(Ranton: Minichua Nokogiris) Storm Release: Miniature Saws
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Type:Attack
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will slam both hands on the ground, sending their Storm chakra underneath the ground, to the opponent. Immediately miniature storm saws will erupt from the ground under the opponent, attempting to cut them.

~Declined~ Seriously, what were you trying to do by making them all C-rank, some of those jutsu are obviously of higher ranking. Make this one A-rank, take out the part about it being immediate, make the saws travel in the ground from your location to your opponent's. Add restrictions.

 

[-Ace-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Kuchyose| Ko Senpai Karasu ) Summoning| Great Elder Raven

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Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Range: Short - Long
Description:
The user will do the necessary handseals when the user finish that he/she will summon a second version of a Elder Raven this version is stronger since this Raven had live for a long time now, his age is unknown due to his thoughts of ages but people have said rumors that his about 67 year old. This great elder raven is able to use wind up to b-rank and fire up to a-rank but this raven is also, able to get to get contact of the opponent through the ground meaning that this Raven is able to find the opponent no matter where he is for example, if the opponent is underground the Raven is able to find him and tell he/she where he/she is. The size of this elder is the size of Gamakichi.

- Must have sign the Raven contract to use this jutsu.
- This can only be summon once.
- Can only last, on battles five turns
- If the raven uses a a-rank fire technique the contact through the ground lower's and can only be use twice on battle.

Approved i suppose

( Kuchyose| Karasu Gijutsu ) Summoning| Raven Art

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Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Summoning
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user first, will do the necessary hand seals and slam their hands on the ground which would summon a Raven known as 'Art'. This raven is an evil raven is has the personality of the known snake 'Manda' when this raven is summon to battle he get's really mad but at the same time he love's to fight and he get happy and start's to have fun. This raven feather are way different than normal ravens feather this raven feather are color Bazaar, this feathers are really rare and they have a meaning of being rare. This raven was born on Konohagakure and it has special abilities due to the feathers. This raven is able to do wind all the way up to s-rank and is also, able to trap people on his special genjutsu call 'Bazaar trap'. When Art release his genjutsu he first, has to put his wing up facing the opponent and by the second later, the opponent will be trap on the genjutsu on this genjutsu the opponent see a place where their was war and stuff alike such as his saddest moments on life for example, user one summon's Art to the battlefield as soon as Art is summon he use's his genjutsu and the opponent will get trap at it, when the opponent get's trap he will see many different wars and all his saddest moment on his whole life. While his trap on the genjutsu, the user is able to do what he wish to do with the opponent.

- The genjutsu don't need eye sight from the opponent to be activate
- The genjutsu is only usable twice per battle
- Art only can last, five rounds
- When Art use an s-rank wind element the Genjutsu limit lower's to only usable once per battle

[/I]

that genjutsu bit sounds like another jutsu...declined

The second one is a new one :/

( Kuchyose| Karasu Gijutsu ) Summoning| Raven Art

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Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Summoning
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user first, will do the necessary hand seals and slam their hands on the ground which would summon a Raven known as 'Art'. This raven is an evil raven is has the personality of the known snake 'Manda' when this raven is summon to battle he get's really mad but at the same time he love's to fight and he get happy and start's to have fun. This raven feather are way different than normal ravens feather this raven feather are color Bazaar, this feathers are really rare and they have a meaning of being rare. This raven was born on Konohagakure and it has special abilities due to the feathers. This raven is able to do wind all the way up to s-rank and is also, able to trap people on his special genjutsu call 'Bazaar trap'. When Art release his genjutsu he first, has to put his wing up facing the opponent and by the second later, the opponent will be trap on the genjutsu on this genjutsu the opponent see a place where the user think his still fighting with his opponent when his not, when his trap on a genjutsu. While his trap on the genjutsu, the user is able to do what he wish to do with the opponent.

- The genjutsu don't need eye sight from the opponent to be activate
- The genjutsu is only usable twice per battle
- Art only can last, five rounds
- When Art use an s-rank wind element the Genjutsu limit lower's to only usable once per battle

( Kuchyose| Aero ) Summining| Aero

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user will do the necessary hand seals and immediately slam his/her hand on the ground which would summon the well known 'Aero'. Aero was born on the land of the proud worriers and unknown land located on the Hidden in the Cloud village. Aero is mostly use for defense due to his body which is extremely strong and if Aero collapse it could make a great explosion or destruction and if Aero fall it could take down almost a whole terrain due to his weight. Aero is extremely fat he weight about five thousand pounds. Aero has no special abilities he only has an enormous shield and a sword both of his weapons are on his back. Aero can be summon anywhere on the terrain. Aero is the size of Gamabunta and his really kind with people, he would protect anybody and put his life on the line for anyone also, Aero is able to walk like a human and fight like a human.

- Once summon can't be summon again
- It only last six turns

~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way. Thank you.

 

[McKnockout]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hijutsu: Kanchiki Kikaichū) – Secret Technique: Sensory Kikaichū

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user disperses his Kikaichū bugs all around the battlefield which are then used to alert the host about the location and presence of any nearby chakra on the battelfield. This is made possible due to the close relationship that the host has with his bugs and thus, his Kikaichū bugs can communicate to him and relay him information in a number of ways. By simply watching and/or hearing his bug's movements, the user is capable of interpreting their responses and can determine the presence and location of all/any chakra bearing objects on the battlefield. It should also be noted that the bugs inside the host are capable of receiving these messages from their fellow bugs and can relay this to the user - i.e. another method to communicate.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf, McKnockout and Faith.

~Declined~ I'm pretty sure a similar technique exist based on the pheromones the insects release. That's how they'd communicate with the user.

(Hijutsu: Kanchiki Kikaichū) – Secret Technique: Sensory Kikaichū

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user disperses his Kikaichū bugs all around the battlefield which are then used to alert the host about the location and presence of any nearby chakra on the battelfield. This is made possible due to the close relationship that the host has with his bugs and thus, his Kikaichū bugs can communicate to him and relay him information in a number of ways. By simply watching and/or hearing his bug's movements, the user is capable of interpreting their responses and can determine the presence and location of all/any chakra bearing objects on the battlefield. It should also be noted that the bugs inside the host are capable of receiving these messages from their fellow bugs and can relay this to the user - i.e. another method to communicate.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf, McKnockout and Faith.

I think the technique you're referring to is Faith's CJ which has not yet been approved, but we collaborated and co-created this jutsu.

(Kikaichu Junshuu) – Kikaichu Territory

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The host performs two quick handseals as he releases or commands his Kikaichu bugs to burrow into the ground beneath him up to a mid range radius, releasing a small amount of chakra as they’re underground. The result of this jutsu means that the ground will be imbued with the user’s chakra, making it impossible for the opponent to use earth-based jutsus using the earth from the ground in which the user’s Kikaichu bugs have burrowed through for a short period of time i.e. the opponent can not manipulate the earth in which contains the user’s Kikaichu bugs for earth jutsus. After two turns, the user’s Kikaichū bugs resurface and hence the jutsu ends.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Lasts for 2 turns.
Note: Must wait 2 turns to activate again.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by McKnockout

~Declined~ Doesn't make any sense. You'd basically die from chakra exhaustion if you were able to infuse the earth with enough chakra for your opponent to be unable to use it.

(Kikaichu Junshuu) – Kikaichu Territory

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The host performs two quick handseals as he releases or commands a large amount of his Kikaichu bugs to burrow into the ground beneath him up to a mid range radius. While underground, the mass of the user's Kikaichu bugs lay in wait and upon the detection of any foreign chakra i.e not the user's, they will instinctively absorb/suck the chakra (this is what they usually do). The result of this jutsu means that the opponent would not be capable of performing earth-based jutsus using the earth from the ground in which the user’s Kikaichu bugs have burrowed through for a short period of time i.e. the opponent can not manipulate the earth in which contains the user’s Kikaichu bugs for earth jutsus. That is, the opponent can channel their chakra into the ground but it would quickly disappear and thus will disallow the opponent from manipulating the earth due to the absence of their chakra. After two turns, the user’s Kikaichū bugs resurface and hence the jutsu ends.
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
*Note: Lasts for 2 turns.
*Note: Must wait 2 turns to activate again.
*Note: While this is active, the user can only use up to A-rank Aburame jutsus.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

I changed the mechanism in which this jutsu works, instead of infusing a huge amount of chakra into the ground, I changed it to using the Kikaichu bugs to suck the ground dry of the opponent's chakra (i.e. foreign chakra, chakra that is not the user's - this is possible since the bugs spend all their lives inside the user so they would be well accustomed to the user's chakra). Anyways, in order to manipulate the earth, one must use their chakra to do so. But if there is no chakra this is not possible. And in this jutsu, the user must send a very large number of his bugs underground hence he can not use any S-rank or higher Aburame jutsus while this is active.

New:

(Kyousei Kikaichu Misairu) – Great Destruction Bug Projectile

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will send a medium size ball-like projectile of destruction bugs at the enemy.
*Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

(Kyousei Kikaichui Kame no Jutsu) - Great Destruction Bug Jar Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (-10 to user)
Description: A special technique in which the user commands his Kikaichu bugs to fly in a 360 degree dome shape around him at high speed. The mass of Kikaichū bugs all have very sharp wings, which will make the rapidly spinning dome of Kikaichu bugs capable of dealing slashing damage and will slice anything that comes in contact with it. This jutsu serves as an attack and defense, and is able to withstand all elemental attack up to A-rank except for B-rank and above Katon attacks.
*Note: The user takes 10 damage due to his proximity to the his Kikaichu bugs.
*Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
*Note: Must wait at least 1 turn to be used again.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

(Kakukaku Kikaichui Kame no Jutsu) - Glorious Destruction Bug Jar Technique

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Rank: S
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (-15 to user)
Description: A more advanced version of "Great Destruction Bug Jar Technique" in which the user's Kikaichu bugs actually release a small amount of their chakra as they fly around the user in a dome shape at high speed, this gives the Kikaichu bugs a higher resistance to damage and also augments their sharp wings to deal more damage (much like chakra flow on weapons) in comparison to the parent technique. Again, the rapidly spinning dome of Kikaichu bugs is capable of dealing slashing damage and will slice anything that comes in contact with it and serves as an attack and defense; and is able to withstand all elemental attack up to S-rank except for A-rank and above Katon attacks.
*Note: The user takes 15 damage due to his proximity to the his Kikaichu bugs.
*Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
*Note: Must wait at least 2 turn to be used again.
*Note: No S-rank or above Aburame jutsus in the same turn.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way. Thank you.

 

[Iwabi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting:-

Summoning Animal: Red Panda

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Scroll Owner: Iwabi
Other Users who have signed contract: Zane Uchiha
Summoning Boss if existing:
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Note: Red Panda isnt actually classified as a bear though its been put into racoon and bear family it is actually in a family of its own being the Ailuridae

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(Kuchiyose: Thor) - Summoning: Thor
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Thor is the King of the Red Panda. He is as tall as Ponta and he bears a large double headed war hammer that has been crafted from chakra metal which enables Thor to channel his elemental natures into the weapon for added power and he carries it on his back. he wields the hammer with his exceptionally large tail. He has an affinity for Lightning Element and Earth Element and can use the techniques up to what the user know's. He is capable of slamming his hammer onto the ground to activate the earth elemental techniques. He is capable of using the Killing Intent ninjutsu by simply inducing it by a roar. He is also the largest Red Panda summoning and due to his size he can travel across terrain quite quickly. He has thick fur that prevents him from being harmed by C rank and below Ice ninjutsu. He also has good hearing and a kean sense of smell allowing him to find hidden targets even when his field of vision is blocked.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per match
Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns

(Kuchiyose: Tapian) - Summoning: Tapian
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (+10 to regular taijutsu and Kenjutsu Techniques)
Description: The user will summon Tapian a red panda the size of Gamakichi. Hes not particulary large compared to the Boss summoning Thor but he is exceptionally fast and strong. He uses Fire elemental techniques up to the users rank, but he is more a taijutsu and kenjutsu user and can use the techniques that the user knows and due to his great physical strength he can increase the attacks by +10 damage. He wields his katana with his tail or bearing it in his mouth. Due to being a expect sword user he is capable of performing the silent killing technique with his sword which is a Odachi. Along with his natural gifts of hearing and smell which allows him to listen for the movement of the enemy and smell them out which aides in the silent killing technique useage when unable to see the target.
Note: Can only be summoned twice and must wait two turns before re-summoning.
Note: Can only remain on the field for 5 turns.

~All pending~ Get the approval from the Panda/Bear contract owner for this one. Resubmit when you do get it.

Permission has been granted by goro and he sent me also to a subcontractor scorps who hold the panda contract and he also gave permission ^_^

Summoning Animal: Red Panda

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Scroll Owner: Iwabi
Other Users who have signed contract: Zane Uchiha
Summoning Boss if existing:
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Note: Red Panda isnt actually classified as a bear though its been put into racoon and bear family it is actually in a family of its own being the Ailuridae

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~Approved~

(Kuchiyose: Thor) - Summoning: Thor
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Thor is the King of the Red Panda. He is as tall as Ponta and he bears a large double headed war hammer that has been crafted from chakra metal which enables Thor to channel his elemental natures into the weapon for added power and he carries it on his back. he wields the hammer with his exceptionally large tail. He has an affinity for Lightning Element and Earth Element and can use the techniques up to what the user know's. He is capable of slamming his hammer onto the ground to activate the earth elemental techniques. He is capable of using the Killing Intent ninjutsu by simply inducing it by a roar. He is also the largest Red Panda summoning and due to his size he can travel across terrain quite quickly. He has thick fur that prevents him from being harmed by C rank and below Ice ninjutsu. He also has good hearing and a kean sense of smell allowing him to find hidden targets even when his field of vision is blocked.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per match
Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns

~Declined~ All summons will now be restricted to 1 element only. Boss summons can use them up to S-rank. Edit and re-submit.

(Kuchiyose: Tapian) - Summoning: Tapian
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (+10 to regular taijutsu and Kenjutsu Techniques)
Description: The user will summon Tapian a red panda the size of Gamakichi. Hes not particulary large compared to the Boss summoning Thor but he is exceptionally fast and strong. He uses Fire elemental techniques up to the users rank, but he is more a taijutsu and kenjutsu user and can use the techniques that the user knows and due to his great physical strength he can increase the attacks by +10 damage. He wields his katana with his tail or bearing it in his mouth. Due to being a expect sword user he is capable of performing the silent killing technique with his sword which is a Odachi. Along with his natural gifts of hearing and smell which allows him to listen for the movement of the enemy and smell them out which aides in the silent killing technique useage when unable to see the target.
Note: Can only be summoned twice and must wait two turns before re-summoning.
Note: Can only remain on the field for 4 turns.

~Approved~ Made it 4 turns

(Doton: Iwa Mage no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Bending Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the Ram hand seal the user manipulates their chakra into an existing peice of earth whether it a rock formation or the ground itself and cause a large snaking pillar to errect from that peice of earth. Although similar to some existing techniques it has a major difference in that it is more flexible in bending rather than being a solid object and can manouver around difficult objects. The user can use this technique for various supplementary and defencive manouvers.


~Declined~ Elaborate on the usage of this bendable rock and how it would not crumble under its own weight. Also, restrictions?

 

[Darijan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kumoyuki Kichi= Clima Tact
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The clima tact is a weapon constructed of 3 parts, by putting the 3 parts together in multiple ways the user can create varoius jutsus.
The Clima Tact is a weapon which allows the user to use varoius jutsus for both attack and defence, it is used by sending chakra trough the 3 parts of the clima tact, the clima tact can also be filled with one type of chakra to use a ability of teh clima tact and so it boosts one element +15 for 2 turns(counts as one of the 3 jutsus per move) and it gets another effect depending on the element infused:
Fire: If the Clima tact is infused with fire chakra it can ''collect'' one fire jutsu of A rank and bellow and send it back to the opponent with the +15 boost
Water: If the Clima tact is infused with water chakra the user can start spinnig the Clima tact and release that way a A rank water jutsu which makes several sharp water drops.
Lightning: If the Clima tact is infused with lightning chakra it can be used to send a B ranked lightning towards the opponent from the sky
Wind: If the clima tact is infused with wind chakra it allows the user to create varoius invisible baloons made of wind so that the user can walk on them
Earth: The user will hammer the clima tact infront of him to create a thick wall made of stones which aquals a A ranked earth jutsu
Notes:
-Only usable by Darijan
-Clima tact jutsus can be used up to 6 times per battle
-The elemental boost and effects is usable 2 times per battle
-After using the boosts/effects the user cant use forbidden ranked jutsus for the rest of the battle and he cant use S rank jutsus in the same turn in which the boost/effetc was used

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~Declined~ Very OP. Normally I'd add a comments on what to change, but since there's a lot to change, I'll just let you edit it yourself (change what you think is over the top) and I'll comment when you re-submit something more acceptable.

 

[jaydennscott]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Cero Midori - ( Green Hollow Flash)

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user points out his finger at his opponent and charges a mass amount of chakra into his finger while compressing it.The user swiftly releases all of the built out chakra causing a huge beam of Green chakra to burst from his finger and travel at his enemy at high speeds. The force of the blast is powerful enough to send an opponent hurtling long distances and destroy most obstacles in the way. ,it can be Countered with S rank and above attacks as long as they would stop the whole attack. E.G couldnt be attacked with a Rasengan or taijutsu attack.
Note ~ Takes a few seconds to charge in finger
Note ~ Cant be used at short range as it would kill the user
Note ~ can only be used 3 times per battle
Note ~ Can only be taught by jaydennscott

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( Raiton ライトニングボウ raitoningubou) - Lightning Bow

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
the user will first concentrate a large amount of raiton chakra into the palm of there preferred hand the user will then mold this raiton chakra into a large bow of pure lightning chakra and then concentrate and compress the bow so they can hold it this then allows the user to shoot bows of lightning at the enemy
Note - if you use this for more then 5 turns you will be drained off all your lightning chakra and you will split you hands open
Note : after you are taught this jutsu u cant use it in battle for a month
Note - can only be used by jaydennscott unless i say otherwise .

Ransōtengai (乱装天傀; lit. "heavenly wild puppet suit

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Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 40
Description:
This is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of chakra controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of chakra. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.
Note : only lasts 3 turns
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be used by jaydennscott

~All Declined~ We take people copy-pasting other peoples jutsus very seriously. Await punishment U_U

 

[Yūsuke1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Kuchiyose : Kyle) - Summoning Technique : Kyle
Type : Summon
Rank : A
Range : Short (Summon)
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : N/A
Description : After performing the required handseals, the user slams his hand on a surface to summon Kyle. Kyle is the older brother of Kelly and has an affinity of Fire Release. Kyle was a friendly White Tiger who played with his younger sister often in the woods, most of his speed and strength comes from this. From young, Kyle was born with a big body for some particular reason. With this, many feared when he comes in sight but yet, his younger sister is stronger than him physically despite his large body size. Kyle is a smart and tactical type of White Tiger and seldom went into battle. He was the head of research and development of the White Tiger realm, in fact, he was the one who developed and forged Mirana's bow with his bare front legs, thanks to the help of his Fire Release, Kyle is able to withstand the sheer heat of flames from the furnace and is capable to fully perform A-rank and below fire techniques. Like every other Tiger, he himself holds a special ability which would be genjutsu unlike his sister who has taijutsu. After long studies of the ninja way, Kyle is able to utilize the abilities of genjutsu up to B-rank.

Note : Can only be summoned three times per battle
Note : Can only be taught or used by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only use up to A-rank fire techniques
Note : Must have signed the White Tiger contract
Note : Techniques done by Kyle counts as a move
Note : Lasts for four turns on the field after summoned
Note : Can only use up to B-rank illusion techniques
Note : This does not mean Kyle is able to take fire techniques head on

Declined

Resubmitting (Removed the part of him being able to use Genjutsu) :

(Kuchiyose : Kyle) - Summoning Technique : Kyle
Type : Summon
Rank : A
Range : Short (Summon)
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : N/A
Description : After performing the required handseals, the user slams his hand on a surface to summon Kyle. Kyle is the older brother of Kelly and has an affinity of Fire Release. Kyle was a friendly White Tiger who played with his younger sister often in the woods, most of his speed and strength comes from this. From young, Kyle was born with a big body for some particular reason. With this, many feared when he comes in sight but yet, his younger sister is stronger than him physically despite his large body size. Kyle is a smart and tactical type of White Tiger and seldom went into battle. He was the head of research and development of the White Tiger realm, in fact, he was the one who developed and forged Mirana's bow with his bare front legs, thanks to the help of his Fire Release, Kyle is able to withstand the sheer heat of flames from the furnace and is capable to fully perform A-rank and below fire techniques.

Note : Can only be summoned three times per battle
Note : Can only be taught or used by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only use up to A-rank fire techniques
Note : Must have signed the White Tiger contract
Note : Techniques done by Kyle counts as a move
Note : Lasts for four turns on the field after summoned
Note : This does not mean Kyle is able to take fire techniques head on

~Declined~ Elaborate on his ability to withstand the heat of the furnace, does that make him resistant to fire techniques?

(Tora : Seireitora) - Tiger Arts : Spirit of the White tigers
Type : Offensive
Rank : Forbidden
Range : Mid - Long
Chakra cost : 50 (+10 for every turn kept activated)
Damage points : 100 (Death to Summoned Tiger, -20 to user)
Description : The user places his hand on his summoned Tiger companion and with this, the tiger channels a bit of his spiritual energy along with chakra into the hand on the user. The tiger then fades away into the air. The tiger's body turns into pure chakra and spiritual energy that isn't visible to the naked eye. This energy and chakra travels into the sky above, hence turning the sky a wee bit darker. This process will take some time and while this is happening the user's limits have been reduced for the time being. After a turn, the user will able to call upon the spirit energy of his tiger who was in the sky to come smashing down into the desired location with the shape of a tiger as huge as Kirin, causing an explosion reaching a radius of short-range.

Note : Requires at least a turn wait to be used
Note : Requires a summoned White Tiger
Note : Can only be used once per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Must have signed the White Tiger contract
Note : No White Tiger summonings for two turns
Note : Sacrificed tiger may not be summoned for the entire battle
Note : While this technique is active, the user can only perform two techniques per turn
Note : User receives twenty damage and sacrifices another ten chakra for every turn this technique is kept activated

~Declined do not resubmit~ No spirit-related jutsu. Also, transforming your summon into pure chakra? Just no.

(Ninpou : Shoukougun) - Ninja Art : Syndrome
Type : Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : Short - Mid
Chakra cost : 35
Damage points : N/A
Description : This technique is nothing but a colorless, inert gas that the user is able to form in the air in front of him first after having clap his hands together. The distance between the target and the user determines when this technique will be able to enter the target body. Once this gas has entered the target body, the effects of this technique will take place. On the turn the gas enters the body, the target's speed has slow down due to the gas relaxing and slowing down the enemy's muscles. The next turn, the target will have his legs, hands and body aching and not allowing them to utilize S-rank or above techniques that requires a considerable amount of concentration such as the rasengan, chidori and others. Finally, on the third turn, the target will fall asleep as the gas has played around with the nerves in the target's brain to forcefully shut down his body and to go unconscious.

Note : Can only be used four times per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Doesn't affect the user due to the gas being a manifestation of the user's own chakra
Note : Particles will disperse if hit by a strong wind technique such as of S-rank or above
Note : Will be blown back if hit by a wind technique such as of A-rank or below, after being blown, it restarts its travel to the enemy and takes a turn to do so
Note : If distance between the user and target is mid-range, it will take a turn to reach target. It will take a few moments if short-range. Instant if the user is able to get up, close with the target

~Declined~ How do you create that gas? Is it chakra based? If yes then don't resubmit since it'll be classified as a CE. If it's non-chakra related, then submit a different jutsu for this gas alone, then you can submit customs with it if it's approved.

(Suna : Koudosuna no jutsu) - Sand Style : Advanced Sand Style Technique
Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank : S
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : This is much like the advanced version of 'Sand Style Technique. It is bigger, stronger and much faster than the previous form of technique. Just like its weaker version, the sand is capable of being manipulated to create waves that can bruise an opponent or tools (such as hammers, swords, huge hands) and shields that can even keep Amaterasu burning on it for quite some time without melting or dissipating.

Note : Can only be used by a sand user
Note : Can only be used thrice per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : No S-rank sand techniques can be used while this is active

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

(Suna : Sabakudohyou) - Sand Style : Desert Arena
Type : Supplementary
Rank : S
Range : All
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : N/A
Description : With this technique, the user would first slam both his hands on the ground, releasing much sand that fits half the volume of Gaara's sand gourd. After doing so, the sand will spread throughout the terrain, crushing the stones, earth, grass as it does, turning it into sand as it does. It will spread all the way to around the battlefield within a turn's time and the battlefield would be covered with sand. As each turn passes by, the depth of the sand grows deeper as it eats more earth beneath it.

Note : Can only be used twice per battle
Note : Can only be used by a sand user
Note : Takes a turn to cover the battlefield
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : No sand techniques S-rank or higher can be used the same turn this is used

~Declined~ I like the idea of turning everything to sand, but a very very similar technique was created by the former mod; Kawagiri. Do not resubmit.

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchyose- kyojin makai karasu) Summoning- Giant Hell's Crow
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Summoning
Chakra: 40
Damage:N/A
Description: After making few handseald the user summons a great,giant and badass crow of all time named GAVA, which shows no mercy on his opponent, he looks like a Raven which is extremely powerful and battle type Crow, can use up to S Rank jutsu's of Fire and Wind. He creates Powerful fire attack by releasing fire from his beak and wind attack by swing his wings, it has sharp edge beak which is able to pass through the solid rock defense also has very strong claws, strong enough to carry away other summonings [depend on the weight/size of other summoning] user can ride on his back to use combos and also has very loud noise which can disturb/distract the opponent, it is able to fly high in the sky where opponent's jutsu's are unreachable.

-Scroll Owner: -SUUI-
-Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
-Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
-Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
-Must be taught by SUUI
-Must have signed Hells Crow contract
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only use Fire & Wind elements
-Can only be last for 5 turns
-User must known Wind & Fire up to S-Rank
-Its move will count as 1 of the 3 moves

~If i messed up something...feel free to EDIT..!!!~​

~Declined~ The crow contract already exist. If you were insinuating that you already possess the Giant Crow contract, please look here:

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(Kuchyose- kyojin makai hagetaka) Summoning- Giant Hell's VULTURE

Description: After making few handseals the user summons a great,giant and badass VULTURE of all time named GAVA, which shows no mercy on his opponent, he looks like a big Raven with white eyes, which is extremely powerful and battle type, can use up to S Rank jutsu's of Fire and Wind. He creates Powerful fire attack by releasing fire from his beak and wind attack by swing his wings, it has sharp edge beak which is able to pass through the solid rock defense also has very strong claws, strong enough to carry away other summonings [depend on the weight/size of other summoning] user can ride on his back to use combos and also has very loud noise which can disturb/distract the opponent, it is able to fly high in the sky where opponent's jutsu's are unreachable.

-Scroll Owner: -SUUI-
-Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
-Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
-Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
-Must have signed Hells VELTURE contract
-Can only be summoned once per battle

-Can only use Fire & Wind elements
-User must known Wind & Fire up to S-Rank
-Its move will count as 1 of the 3 moves

~If i messed up something...feel free to EDIT..!!!~​

Okay i've changed it into VULTURE contract..!!!​

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~Declined~ I have nothing against the summon, but don't associate element to it just yet. Summons can be diversified with several elements, however keep in mind that one summon may only have 1 element.

 

[Anduril]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Haruka)-Haruka
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
For this jutsu the user bites his thumb and then draws blood which he wipes on his palms and then slams the fist together and summons Haruka the ringtail who fancies herself as the mistress of earth. Haruka is an extremely well mannered ringtail and she is extremely skilled in using the earth element. She is twice the size of a normal human being in terms of height and with proportionate other features. She is extremely skilled at burrowing through the earth and moving extremely quickly inside the earth (the speed is similar to that of a shark while it swims) . She is so skilled at burrowing that there are not even small vibrations while she is burrowing and there is no trace left at the point that she burrows. She is able to take one shinobi wrapped in the fur of her bushy tail into the earth to travel long distances her tail masks all the chakra signals of that shinobi.
-can be summoned twice per battle.
-remains on the battle field for three turns in a row.
-she is able to use earth jutsu upto B rank.

~Declined~ This needs lots of restrictions, merging with the ground ain't something natural to do, it need to be performed as a jutsu and from what I read, she can use it at will and it doesn't count toward your 3 jutsu per turn. Also, work on the bold part.

~Resubmitting~​

(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Haruka)-Haruka
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
For this jutsu the user bites his thumb and then draws blood which he wipes on his palms and then slams the fist together and summons Haruka the ringtail who fancies herself as the mistress of earth. Haruka is an extremely well mannered ringtail and she is extremely skilled in using the earth element. She is twice the size of a normal human being in terms of height and with proportionate other features. She is extremely skilled at burrowing through the earth and moving extremely quickly inside the earth (the speed is similar to that of a shark while it swims) . She is so skilled at burrowing that there are not even small vibrations while she is burrowing and there is no trace left at the point that she burrows.
-can be summoned twice per battle.
-can move through earth only two times whenever she is summoned.
-remains on the battle field for three turns in a row.
-she is able to use earth jutsu upto B rank.

Note: Removed the part where she is able to take a shinobi with her and added the change in bold.


~Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.

Thank you.

 

[Lucifer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Yoton: Kyojin Nami) - Lava Release: Giant Tsunami
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user simply makes a total of 5 handseals and creates a giant tsunami of lava which engulfs your opponent it can also bury the user if he/she stands on the ground this jutsu wil kill the user. But if this jutsu is performed in mid-air no harm will be caused to the user. This jutsu can also add a certain twist to the battlefield by changing a rocky terrain to a fiery terrain of a large lava pool which engulfs the entire battlefield.(So no ground is left standing on every thing on the battle field is engulfed by lava).

.Note: Can only be used once per battle.
.Note: Must be taught by Ichigo Kurosaki.
.Note: The user must be atleast kage rank or above.

~Declined~ You need a much clearer description. Where is the tsunami coming from? How large is it, how high is it...etc And why would you need to be in the air to perform this jutsu? For all I care, it's quite the opposite; such a powerful Yoton technique would require you to have a direct contact with the ground.

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Summoning​

-Summoning Animal: Black Cat
-Scroll Owner: Ichigo..
-Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
-Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
-Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

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~Declined~ The cat contract already exist. Whether they're white or black it doesn't change the fact that they're cats.
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(Yõton: Kyojin Maguma Gouben) - Lava Release: Giant Lava Pool
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a Lava pool beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If, your opponent is sucked by the lave your opponent will melt
(even bevore your opponent touches the lava). The size of the Lava pool is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

.Note: Can only be taught by Ichigo Kurosaki.
.Note: Can only be used 3 times in RP battle.
.Note: The user must have mastered the lava element.
.Note: The user must have mastered doton and katon.

Feel free to edit anything you wan't to help it get approved. thanks~

~Declined~ Define the size of the pool, the time it takes to form, whether the ground will shake as the lava comes out of it or simply erupt in a blast...etc Make it 2 times per battle.

 

[Yashin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Cero Midori - ( Green Hollow Flash)

Spoiler

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user points out his finger at his opponent and charges a mass amount of chakra into his finger while compressing it.The user swiftly releases all of the built out chakra causing a huge beam of Green chakra to burst from his finger and travel at his enemy at high speeds. The force of the blast is powerful enough to send an opponent hurtling long distances and destroy most obstacles in the way. ,it can be Countered with S rank and above attacks as long as they would stop the whole attack. E.G couldnt be attacked with a Rasengan or taijutsu attack.
Note ~ Takes a few seconds to charge in finger
Note ~ Cant be used at short range as it would kill the user
Note ~ can only be used 3 times per battle
Note ~ Can only be taught by jaydennscott

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( Raiton ライトニングボウ raitoningubou) - Lightning Bow

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
the user will first concentrate a large amount of raiton chakra into the palm of there preferred hand the user will then mold this raiton chakra into a large bow of pure lightning chakra and then concentrate and compress the bow so they can hold it this then allows the user to shoot bows of lightning at the enemy
Note - if you use this for more then 5 turns you will be drained off all your lightning chakra and you will split you hands open
Note : after you are taught this jutsu u cant use it in battle for a month
Note - can only be used by jaydennscott unless i say otherwise .

Ransōtengai (乱装天傀; lit. "heavenly wild puppet suit

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 40
Description:
This is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of chakra controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of chakra. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.
Note : only lasts 3 turns
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be used by jaydennscott

You cant copy my jutsu? Jesus all you pretty much did was change only by jadyenscott. PLus it was DEclidned with no resubmit

 

[Coyote]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Fire~
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(Katon: Honoo Saru) Fire Release: Flame Monkeys
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user utilizes their fire chakra and using manipulation they're able to form several flame monkeys which are the size of a regualr monkey. They take on the aspects of regualr monkeys; able to climb trees, move at very fast paces, and small. Now when these monkeys gets close or attaches onto anything they can be denoted to explode. When they explode near or on a enemy they can intensely burn the area which was closest to the monkey, they can also be used to cause a quick fire in the forest or on any type of wood. If 3 monkeys explode near an enemy that is capable of causing the enemy much pain and very unlikely of continuing the rest of the battle, If 5 or monkeys explode near or on the enemy the target will perish.

Notes:
- Only 7 monkeys able to be created at one time
- Monkeys only explode on command of user
- Only trainable/usable by Dexter..

Declined. DNR

~Summons~​

(Davy Jones Todana) Davy Jones Locker
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
This summon is very similar to "Iron Maiden" summon. The user able to summon a old, sea forged, metal crate that is the size of a human under the enemy at either short or mid range. Once summoned the crate very quickly rises out of the ground and trapping the enemy, the opening in which the target is engulfed is similar to the way a puppet traps an enemy. Once the target is trapped then a summoning of chains even faster wraps around the entire crate just like the "Iron Maiden". The crate has many holes on the top of it. The user can either keep the enemy trapped in the locker or if near water the user can kick the locker into the water up to mid range, causing the enemy to sink very fast because the locker is very heavy and drown in the process.

Notes:
- Trap lasts for 1 turn
- Drowning happens within 2 turns
- Unable to use water and/or earth technique in same turn as summon
- User must have some type of Taijutsu training to be able to kick "Locker" in water
- Only usable/trainable by Dexter..

Meh Gusta. Brutal. Approved.

~Earth~​

(Hisan Dutchmen) The Flying Dutchmen
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user preform 3 hand seals then is able to form from the earth a huge replica of "The Flying Dutchmen". The ship travels on the earth at a fast pace and is able to crush an enemy, the user is able to ride it as if he was riding a wave towards the enemy. The ship can be used to protect the user from oncoming attacks etc. Just like the actual "Flying Dutchmen" this replica is able to sink back into the earth and rise where ever the user wishes. One technique that the ship is able to do it send out a great pulse which creates a wave of earth that goes in a 360 degree shape of the ship (basically it goes from all angles of the ship) This is similar to the wave that is sent when the Dutchmen calls the Kracken. The ship can be destroyed by two S-Rank attacks or three A/B/C rank attacks. D Rank and below attacks don't do enough damage to sink the ship.

Notes:
- Ship last 3 turns or until destroyed
- If ship goes underground, user is unable to go with it
- The wave of earth goes up to mid range and counts as 1 of the 3 turns
- Ship is unable to fire cannonballs
- Only usable/trainable by Dexter..

Pick between sinking into the ground or the pulse wave. Edit Resubmit.

Resubmitting;
I choose pulse wave, Goro. Changes updated.

(Hisan Dutchmen) The Flying Dutchmen
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user preform 3 hand seals then is able to form from the earth a huge replica of "The Flying Dutchmen". The ship travels on the earth at a fast pace and is able to crush an enemy, the user is able to ride it as if he was riding a wave towards the enemy. The ship can be used to protect the user from oncoming attacks etc. One technique that the ship is able to do it send out a great pulse which creates a wave of earth that goes in a 360 degree shape of the ship (basically it goes from all angles of the ship) This is similar to the wave that is sent when the Dutchmen calls the Kracken. The ship is made of a very hard and ancient wood, giving it a great durability. Any attacks C-rank and bellow have no effect on it. Like any other ship, to be destroyed it will have to be sunk.

Notes:
- Ship last 3 turns or until destroyed
- The wave of earth goes up to mid range and counts as 1 of the 3 turns
- Ship is unable to fire cannonballs
- Can only be used once per match
- Only usable/trainable by Dexter..

~Approved~ I took away the part where you mention what is needed to destroy it and replaced it by the bold part.

New Submission;

(Raiton : Chakra Hakkaku) Lightning Release: Chakra Detection
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
This technique somewhat is similar to "Chakra Sensing Rain". The user closes both his hands and concentrates his lighting chakra immensely. His hands will not look like it glowing or anything along those lines. The user then opens both his hands quickly and flicks them out. When he does this all the target will see is a quickly jolt from both hands. When the user releases the lighting it's a large amount of lighting chakra that is thinned out and concentrated so much that it spreads on the whole field, just on the ground though. The user is now able to detect where the target is stepping and also able to detect their location if their underground. The lighting only has a lasting effect though and doesn't not harm the target in anyway.

Notes:
- Lasts only 4 turns
- Detects from Short to Long Range (whole battlefield)
- Must have competed Raiton training to be able to concentrate that much Raiton and let it linger
- Only usable/trainable by Dexter..

~Declined do not resubmit~ Enough with the Chakra Sensing Rain rip-off.

 

[Yashin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Would appreciate if my checker would give me feedback and constructive critism on what to change instead of just a
Decline~

Yomigaeri - Kaizoe Danka l Resurrection - Second Stage

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A (+ 10 to Ninjutsu)

The user stands motionless and closes his eyes, he will charge up as much chakra as he can throughout his body.he will compress the chakra inside his body and when at his peak will say 'True Despair'.The user will then quickly release this chakra causing a small shockwave of green chakra to blow out.The user's form will be radically changed.He will gain even longer hair and gains long crying marks, he gains huge black furry wings which gives him flight and a long thin black tail which can used as an offensive weapon.is waist becomes covered in something similar to black fur, which also covers his arms and legs. His fingers grow claw-like extensions and his feet become like talons. The irises of his eyes turn yellow while the sclera becomes green.He gains two horns on his head.While in this form the Users speed is radically increased and also his Ninjutsu skills are boosted.this form is extremely dangerous.When over The user is exhausted and barley able to move making him unable to perform any Taijutsu.He ash to rely on Ninjutsu for two turns leaving him incredibly vunerable to attack
~Can be used for 4 turns
~users power is generally boosted
~Exhausted after use
~Cannot use taijutsu for 2 turns after
~Speed is considerably lower after
~Can be used twice per battle
~Can only be used by Daiki

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~Declined~ The ones checking the customs are in no way forced to give you feedback or reason for a declined custom. However, I often if not always do leave comments, here's mine on this one:

I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.


Thank you.

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katonrirīsu:-Hi koi no sakana) Katon Release: Fire Coy Fish

Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: The User will do one Handsign and release their Katon chakra into the air.. Once released ther user will use shape manipulation to shape the chakra to look like a coy fish. The coy fish itself is about 20 times the users size and covers a very large area

*Note: Can only be taught by -Itachi-
*Note: Can't use any S- Ranked fire tech's for one turn after using this
*Note: Can only Be used twice a battle

~Declined~ Please elaborate on what this fish does. Do you simply spit out the fire shaped like a coy fish at your opponent?

(Suiton rirīsu:-Sui koi no sakana)Suiton Release: Water Coy Fish
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do one handsign and release his Suiton Chakra while releasing it the user will use Shape Manipulation to shape the water into a Coy Fish then the user will send the Coy Fish at thier oppent.. The Coy Fish is about 20 times the users size

*Note: Can only be used by -Itachi-
*Note: The user can not use any S- Ranked Water Tech for one turn after using this
*Note: Can only be used Twice a Battle

~Declined~ Same as above.

 

[-Naruto Uzumaki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Old approved version:

Sealing Jutsu: Chakra Release (Fuuinjutsu: Chakra Kai)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 0 (+15)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In the event the user is placed in a genjutsu which he cannot release by himself, a certain seal, located on the user's arm, will activate. The seal is designed to inject a large amount of foreign chakra (meaning chakra that does not belong to the user) into the user's body, effectively pushing out any other person's chakra. As a result, nearly any genjutsu placed on the user (except Tsukuyomi) will be released, since their chakra will be forced out of the user's body by the seal.
Note: The user can only use two jutsus the following turn due to the sudden increase of chakra caused by the seal.
Note: This jutsu will work on any type of jutsu where the opponent must insert his or her chakra into the user.
Note: Can only be used twice (one seal per arm)

New version:

Sealing Jutsu: Chakra Disturbance Seal (Fuuinjutsu: Chakra Souran Shi-ru)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 0 (+15)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In the event the user is placed in a genjutsu, even one in which he or she is unaware of, a certain seal located on the user's arm will activate. The seal detects the user's chakra flow, and upon noticing any disturbances (which would result when in a genjutsu), it will activate, notifying the user. The seal injects its own stored chakra into the user's body, effectively pushing out any other person's chakra. As a result, nearly any genjutsu placed on the user (except Tsukuyomi) will be released instantly.
Note: The user can only use two jutsus the following turn due to the sudden increase of chakra caused by the seal.
Note: This jutsu will work on any type of jutsu where the opponent must insert his or her chakra into the user.
Note: Can only be used twice (one seal per arm)

~Approved~

 

[Kaziname]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chakura no Kabe) - Wall of Chakra
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User casts a wall of chakra around him that protects him from any genjutsu as chakra for genjutsu has to travel to him in order to complete it and this wall makes this impossible. Although strong defense against regular genjutsus, it has shown to be powerless against MS techniques.
*Can be used 4 times and each wall can stop only one genjutsu
*Cannot stop MS techniques

~Declined do not resubmit~ This jutsu is based on simple assumptions that chakra will stop chakra, which is false. We've seen it times and times again when a fighter would cast a genjutsu on his opponent while this very opponent had shot a projectile between the two fighters (hence creating a barrier for the chakra if we follow your reasoning, considering the chakra would travel in a straight path).

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

hyouton: koori yoroi ( ice release ice armor)
Type:supplemary
Rank:A
RangeShort
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: n/a
Description: the user will make the hand seals tiger dog boar and focas his wind and water chakra to every cell in his body he will then make the tiger hand seal once more and relase the chakra the chakra will take a form around the users entire body in the form of armor ( like the armoir of the land of iron only made of ice) the armor is able to withestand fire up to A rank with out melting ( s rank or higer fire can melt this) the user is still able to preform hand seals but it is slower by 10 seconds. the user will not feel any big side effects from the ice jutsu due to his control over the ice.
note: only lasts five turns
note: no s rank ice /wind/water jutsu the turn after the ice armor wears off.
note: user is un able to perform fire style nin jutsu while armor is on
Note: can only use water wind and ice jutsu while armor is on

~Declined~ I don't have any problem with the fact that you're blocking A-rank fire, but there's a limit to how many you can block. Also, you aren't stranded in a block of ice, there are openings for the fire to burn you.

yoton: heika gomu ( lava relase: rubber arms)
Type:supp/ defense
Rank: S
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user will focas his earth and fire chakra into his arms he will then make the tiger dragon and dog hand seals he will then relase the chakra from his arms while doing so he will turn it into rubber the rubber will take the form of an arm the rubber arm is able to extend into long range the user is also able to form other thing with this jutsu instead of forming an arm the user could choose to make a rubber weapon like a hammer or a wall as long as the jutsu is active the arms can be molded into anything since its rubber and its under the control of the user ( to a certin extend i won't be able to mold the rubber into a gaint dog no but i could make weapons or a wall by turning the arm to the side and extnding its sides) the rubber arms are strong not as weak as normal rubber as it has lava qualties the user can also make the arms lava if he wishs but he will exp sercy burns on his arms making his arms useless.
note: can only be used 3 times per battle ( unless user makes the arms normal lava in which case only once per battle)
note: lasts 4 turns
note: can not preform hand seals while jutsu is active
note: can't use any other jutsu while jutsu is active
note: after jutsu wears off the user can not preform earth/ fire jutsu abve a rank for 2 turns
note: can only be used by lava users
note: if lava arms are made instead of rubber after jutsu wears off users arms become burnt and unuseable.
note: rubber arms are able to garb things with its hands
note: the arms have the power of a normal arm

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist in with many elements and as well as with the actual rubber CE on NB.


Chakra zoushoku ( chakra increase)
Type: supp
Rank: forbidden
Range:Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 ( plus ten to taijutsu plus ten to ninjutsu plus ten to speed)
Description: the user will take out a small pill ( with no effects) and put it between his two hands in the tiger hand seal he will focas all of his chakra into the pill and sallow it he will then make 5 hand seals and the pill will expell a larger amoint of chakra then that which was given the chakra will suddenly begin to surround the user the increase in chakra will make the user faster and stronger ( almost like the raikages lighting armor except not as fast) it will also decrease the amount of time it takes to switch elements and to use ninjutsu as the chakra is already flowing out of him. After 4 turns the chakra will implode on the user killing him the chakra will then explode in a shock wave of chakra hitting anything within mid range
Note: can only be used once ( after it wears off user will die)
Note: only lasts four turns
Note: takes 5 seconds to fill the pill with the chakra leaveing the user open to attacks
Note: after use user will die
Note: user can chooseto blow up the chakra by the second turn on his own free will
Note: can't turn off jutsu once activeated
Note: user can not control the explosion at the 4 turn mark ( so basicly useing this is a last chance thing as it will kill the user in the end)

~Declined do not resubmit~ This jutsu doesn't make any sense. What's the point focusing chakra in a pill if you're going to immediately re-integrate it in your system? It would've been the same to just focus your chakra. In any case, if you did simple focus chakra then it would've been too similar to the gates.

 

[Riku..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouten: Sasori) Ice Style: Scorpion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will first, with the use of one hand seal, create a belt made entirely of ice around their waist. From this belt, eleven arachnid limbs will protrude from different parts of it. Eight of these "limbs" will be long legs resembling that of a spiders, four sprouting from one side of the belt and four from the other, while two of these limbs will be in the form of two pincers that will be created horizontally relative to the ground, which will be thicker than the eight legs, while the final limb will be a long tail, which will be similar in structure to the legs but with a finer point for stabbing. Essentially, this will all give the user the appearance of a scorpion, having eight legs, pincers in front of those legs, and a tail that curves up into a large pincer. The belt meanwhile acts as an essentially unlimited ice source, allowing the pincers, legs, and especially the stinger extend and retract to a total of twenty meters. Each time the legs step down on a surface, the ground below them is frozen, each one acting as the center of a 1 meter radius of ice. The sheets of ice are instantly created, allowing the user to walk across, for example, a surface of water and freeze it as they walk, or use this technique to freeze other substances such as the swamp of mud. Every one of these "limbs" have an extremely sharp tip, allowing them to each be used as stabbing tools. The pincers do not have the actual appearance of pincers that close and open, but are rather thicker versions of the thin and sharp legs and tail (they're still straight-edged though). Each of these limbs have joints as well, allowing them to be relatively flexible, and allowing the user to use the legs to jump, which would launch them much higher than a ninja would normally be able to go. Because the belt acts as an unlimited source of ice, the legs, tail, and pincers are all able to be regenerated if they are destroyed, and, at the will of the user, can be retracted to the point that only the belt remains and they can be recreated at another time (but the user cannot make any more than eleven, though they can create less). Finally, at any point, the user can completely shoot off a portion of the belt, launching whatever limb was on that part of the belt toward the opponent as a javelin-like projectile. If this is done, however, that limb cannot be regenerated because the portion of the belt that it was on comes off with it.
Note: Only usable twice per battle.
Note: The user must wait two turns after the deactivation of this technique to use it again.
Note: The regeneration ability can only work four times. After that, any destroyed limb is completely gone. And the belt itself cannot be regenerated at all, so if a portion of it is destroyed, it is also completely gone.

~Declined~ OP. 20m range, immediately freeze whatever it touches while regenerating? And you can use it twice? I'm not even sure how long it last for 1 time (until it's completely destroyed?). Lots of work to do with this one.

 

[Sauron]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Sankaku keta)- Tri Beam!
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user forms a single handseal (Tiger) and charges a decent amount of raiton chakra into their hands, puts their hands together by the tips of their fingers and thumbs and zooms in on the target through the triangle space in between their hands. Once the user gathers enough Raiton chakra, the user shouts, "Tri-Beam, ha!" and fire a large blast of lightning from their hands at the opponent.

~No A ranked raiton the next turn~
~only usable twice per battle~
~Must be at least Sannin to use~
~Must have mastered lightning with the AACT's as well~

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

(Raiton: Neo sankaku keta)- Neo Tri Beam
Type:Attack
Rank: Forbidden
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: This a more powerful version of the "Tri-Beam" jutsu. The user forms a single handseal and charges a great amount of raiton chakra into their hands, puts their hands together by the tips of their fingers and thumbs and zooms in on the target through the triangle space in between their hands. Once the user gathers enough energy, the user shouts, "Tri-Beam, ha!" and fires an even greater blast than the regular Tri-Beam at the opponent while yelling "Ha!". However, the major drawback of this technique is, that it drains the users life force, greatly harming. The user has also stored even more raiton chakra into this blast than the regular "Tri beam" technique meaning it takes a greater toll as they draw out as much raiton chakra as they can get leaving great force on their body as they gather the chakra and double when they release it causing soarness. The user will then shoot a giant blast from their hands that can destroy everything on the field (in front) of them as well as it crashes 20ft into the ground and covers mid range of the opponent. The user will then fall to their knees immediately after releasing this blast.

~No Raiton for 3 turns~
~No Raiton in the same turn~
~No Raiton in the turn before~
~No S rank on the next turn~
~Can't have used the "Tri Beam" Technique before this and can't use it for the rest of the match~
~Can only use this once per battle~
~The user takes 30 damage and feels very soar in their arms chest and abdominal's after use thus making movements slower~

~Declined~ Same as above, if I didn't approved the under-powered version, this one won't get approved either.

(Suiton:Suiryoku hatsuden Parusu) Water Style: Hydro Pulse
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:the user will blast a stream of highly pressurized water from their mouth directly at the opponent at high speeds while at the same time focusing their raiton chakra into the hands and merging it with the water blast creating a water lightning combo strong enough to punch through concrete, paralyse and numb on contact and is very a high speed technique
Note: This technique can only travel in a straight line
Note: This technique can only be used 3 times per battel
Note: No water jutsu above A rank next turn
Note: The water does not have to be combined with lightning making it just a blast of highly pressurized water
Note: If the user uses this jutsu at short range the power of contact will knock back the user and damage them severely as well as the opponent
(Can only be taught by Sauron)

~Declined~ I have an almost identical technique, the only difference is that you shoot it from your mouth while I shoot it from my fingers. Too similar to existing techniques.

(Ninjutsu:Supaiku Kūgā Gekido) Ninjutsu: Spiked Cougar Fury
Type: Offencive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:This technique can only be used by a Cougar summoning creature. The summoning creature will crouch into a pouncing position and exhert its chakra into its fur making it stand up on end like needles the creature will then fire the needle like hairs from their bodies and attack everythin ahead of it on the field like very hard and fast senbon.
Note: Can only be used if have signed the summoning contract for Cougars
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: This jutsu can be infused with the cougars chakra and therefore this jutsu becomes weak to the element it is disadvantaged to and vice versa)
(Can only be taught by Sauron)
~I hold the cougar contract~

~Declined~ Please elaborate/clarify the bold part.

(Raiton: Inazuma Mokushiroku) Lightning style: Lightning apocalypse
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will make three handseals and exert an electrical essence from their body, into the sky making dark storm clouds, and into the ground gathering stored static electricity into focal points around him/her self. The use will then clap his hands causing small blue sparks and shoot in effect, what would be reverse lightning strikes that hit the opponent from below and strike upwards this lightning is very focused and causes serious damage and paralysis to the opponent
Note: No Lightning techniques in the same turn
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: The user MUST NOT move whilst using this jutsu
Note: Must wait 1 turn before re-using this jutsu

~Declined~ I've declined a very similar technique recently (a page ago or so) watch out not to rip off other's technique, we take it very seriously in our RP.