[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

-Yard- · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hayaton Mo-Do)- Swift Release: Swift Mode
Type: Supplement
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 to activate and -20 each turn. On the 3rd turn it takes from the users reserves.
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform the "boar" handseal and gather a great amount of their swift chakra. They will then perform the handseal once more releasing it throughout their body, muscles, organs ect. In return they gain incredibly faster movement similar to that of shadow-less flight which can be tracked by 3T and 3T users can react to it. along with increased senses and reactions. The user will also force regular chakra to their muscles pushing them to their limit and the user will send small amounts of swift chakra to certain locations of their eyes increasing tracking ability to where they can track their own movements. The user will be able to perform a row of 10 handseals in the time it takes to do 2 hanseals. This mode lasts for 3 turns and afterwards the user is almost drained of their swift chakra and can't use swift techniques for 2 turns.

- Only usable once per battle.
- Only lasts for 3 turns.
- Can't use any swift techniques while in this mode or in the same turn as activation.
- Can't use wind or lightning techniques while in this mode.
- Can't use swift techniques for 2 turns and then can only use 1 per turn.
- User is slightly slower for 2 turns after this mode is over due to soreness of their body. In this case the users speed will decrease by 2 ranks. If they were a normal sage ranked user than their speed is reduced to that of a sannin. Then on the next turn their speed will go up by one rank and on the turn after that it will return to normal.

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is a copy of both the gates and the sharingan.

(Hayaton No Jutsu)- Swift Release: Swift Technique
Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:
Description: The user through the use of swift release will perform the "Boar" handseal and move from Short to mid range. This technique is similar to that of shadow-less flight and can be used to dodge some attacks.
- Can't use wind or lightning jutsus in the same turn.
- Can't use any other swift techniques in the same turn.
- Can only be used 3X per match.
- Must have a swift release bio.

~Declined~ Be specific as to how you can dodge attacks and which types of attack you can dodge. Otherwise this jutsu is just a 3 time escape from anything.

(Katon: Kaen Sono Uchiha)- Fire Release: Flame Of The Uchiha
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: +10 to fire -10 To wind jutsus
Description: Uchiha's are known for not only their kekke genkai but for their great use or "mastery" of the fire element. This style of fighting shows the true skill the uchiha clan has with the use of the fire element. The user will gather Katon chakra for 2 turns. They will then release it throughout their body enhancing their fire jutsus strength by allowing them to add more katon chakra to each fire jutsu easier at the cost of their wind elemental chakra suffering from it. They will be able to send some of the katon chakra to certain locations of their body and releasing it (see below for details) causing small fireballs to be released from those points that are equal to C rank. This is mainly used for close combat and the flames only reach out to short range.
Fist work.
The user will send katon chakra to their fist and release it causing a small C rank fire ball to erupt from their fist and come at the opponent/target.
Foot work
The user sends katon chakra to their heels and will release it shooting out a small fireball at the opponent.
Notes:

- Each fire ball counts as one of the users 3 jutsu per turn however due to them being low and short range and small fireballs ranked they do not require handseals.
- Can only be used by an uchiha biography who has mastered katon with aact's.
- Can only be used once per match.
- Lasts for 3 turns.
- The user must gather the katon chakra for 2 turns before using this and thus cannot use katon jutsus for 2 turns before use.
- The user can also only use 2 jutsus per turn while gathering the needed katon chakra.

~Declined do not resubmit~ The reason for this boost is just ridiculous. Aren't Uchiha's strong enough as it is? Anyway, there are already plenty of Fire modes out there so yours can easily be considered a copy. Similar techniques already exist.

(Fuuton: sansaku Oite Tenkuu Gikou)- Walking on air technique:
Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will use their fuuton chakra to fix the air particles in the air around them/underneath their feet and use it to land and stand on. They fix the particles by adding to them making them much more dense and can only be used for the purpose of standing on air or landing on air as well as they can only add to air that's within mid range. It cannot be used for attacks in any way.
- Must be at least sannin rank to use due to chakra control.
- Must have mastered fuuton with aact's.
- No S rank wind in the same turn

~Declined~ Similar jutsu already exist

For the next jutsu I did a lot of research on the cm, sasuke's personality and abilities of chakra and the effect/abilities the curse mark can place on the user.

(Watashi Gozen Ato Fukushū-Sha) I am an Avenger!

Type: Supplement
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is only to be used when in a serious fight when all else has failed. Sasuke will suddenly start to get extremely paranoid making him focus more on hearing and sight giving him smewhat increased senses and will start to slowly go insane by the thought of not being able to kill his foe. He will unleash 70% of his chakra throughout his body increasing overall physical strength and endurance. His eyes will stay locked on his opponent as he slowly starts to lose himself more and more. Chakra will continue to release but he won't be able to tell nor will he be able to tell of how much pain he's in at that moment and with this going on his body is tensed up and in severe pain from the strain of releasing that much chakra at once. Due to so much chakra being released from him the curse seal will automatically activate to inject chakra into him as a natural reaction as seen in the chuunin exams. The curse seal of heaven gives the user 80 chakra. Once activated Sasuke will go into a pit of pure psychotic rage where he will release the chakra his curse mark brings to him and will use 20% of it in techniques adding more chakra to them so that he can perform jutsus and 80% using it to increase movement further this is at greater cost tho. The effects it has on his body are severe as just the regular curse mark effects caused him pain in the anime/manga and sometimes so much that he couldn't move after completing a rather simple task. This gives 5 times those effects due to him taking the chakra that is being used to try and aid him away. With this, his every movement is based off of his own unconscious yet motivated mind to go completely all out against his foe. Every move he makes that's driven by him in that state is forced with his own chakra like how he used his curse mark in the forest of death to gain almost double his usual speed and strength. Since he is said to be nearly as fast as rock lee without weights in the anime/manga also with the wiki saying they are actually equal in speed in the wiki chart and he has activated his curse mark while unconsciously using his chakra to increase succession and speed of movements this puts him at around 4X the average Ninja's speed. He will use up nearly 10% of his chakra each turn and after 3 turns he will die from chakra exertion. Since his chakra is being used up so much that on the next turn he will only be able to perform B rank jutsu while his chakra continues to drain in this state then on the 3rd turn he can only perform C rank jutsu. The user can only use curse mark of level one while in this state of mind, going any further would put too much stress on the body when there's already enough.

Advantages: 4X speed and slightly heightened hearing and sight mostly a 15% improvement induced by fear/paranoia.

Notes:
- Only able to use if you haven't used S rank on the previous turn.
- Must not have used Basic ninjutsu for 2 turns before this jutsu.
- No Ninjutsu while in this state, just elemental Ninjutsu.
- No Genjutsu while in this state either.
- only B rank the next turn and C rank on the turn after.
- Can only use 1 jutsu per turn.
- -10 Damage per turn altogether = 30 damage but either way, user still dies.
- Using any other modes will kill you in this state.
- You die after 3 turns no matter what.
- This restriction will defeat any hope of being alive after the 3turns are up no matter if they use a jutsu that will keep them alive or not. After 3turns the user is paralyzed from strain and can't use any jutsu as they have no chakra at all but that's only to eliminate any chance of using a jutsu to keep yourself alive after this.
- Can obviously only be used by a sasuke uchiha bio with curse mark.
- Can't exceed level one curse mark while in this state.
- This is not necessarily a "mode" that you can deactivate. Meaning once you use this there is no going back.

~Declined do not resubmit~ No CM jutsus, "same as EIG rip-offs". Nexus's words.

ZK · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting:

Zero Kelvin said:
Suiton: Naiagara no Mizu | Water Release: The Waters of Niagara
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user claps his hands together while releasing a large amount of water chakra into the area around him; this causes a great body of water to materialize out of nowhere. The turn the water is summoned, it is under the complete control of the user because of the chakra bond shared by the user and the technique. The water materializes in three large waves that appear in a very quick succession right after each other.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-This is an advanced version of: (Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave.
-Can only be used by Zero Kelvin.

Changes bolded :3

~Declined~ No "complete control" over the water. Either make it officially do something, like rushing toward the opponent, or leave it there to fill the field with water. Make it clear that the water materialize around you and is then directed or used (like the original water shock wave). I will not accept it if it's created near your opponent.

Naiagara no Mizu | The Waters of Niagara
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user claps his hands together while releasing a large amount of water chakra into the immediate vicinity; this causes a great body of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water materializes in three large waves that appear in a very quick succession right after each other. The materialized water appears very close to the user, and all the waves are, even upon materialization, pushing outwards with great force. This can be compared to a pulse of water that is pushed outwards.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Once the water is sent toward a target, it's impossible to change its direction.
-This is an advanced version of: (Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

~Approved~ made it 3 times a match and added the bold part.
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Updating:

Zero Kelvin said:
Freestyle art the worried wolf = Furīāto shinpai ōkami
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 20
Description: A Taijutsu attack where the user bends himself/herself forward, and sprints towards the opponent, when in range the user lets himself/herself fall backwards, while stretching one of his/her legs upwards, kicking the opponent in either the head or crutch.

~ All approved, but can I tell you, as an experienced RPer, that most if not all of this stuff is pretty useless in a regular battle. ~

Furīāto: Kagami no Gyakuen | Freestyle Art: The Mirror's Inverted Edge
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Freestyle art is a completely supplementary Taijutsu style, which is specially designed to supplement almost all forms of Taijutsu and Kenjutsu. The user performs either a gesture with one of his limbs or makes eye contact with the target, either method works. The gesture or eye contact will place the opponent in a Genjutsu, where he sees the user attacking him in any way the user chooses. Simultaneously with this, the user focuses chakra into his feet and follows up with any type of Taijutsu or Kenjutsu attack. By using Kagami no Gyakuen along with an attack, the user is able to increase the effectiveness of the attack. If the attack involves approaching the target in any way, this particular branch of Freestyle Art will enable the user to integrate very confusing and blurry moves into his attack, thereby making it very hard for the target to follow the users movements. Kagami no Gyakuen also enables the user to severely increase the brute force behind his attack by integrating marginal improvements in the users stance and the attack itself. By shifting his weight forward to add momentum and by maximally torquing his body, the user drastically increases the strength of the attack. By stepping forward along with the attack and pivoting along with the attack, the user drastically increases its speed, and decreases the amount of time where he is left vulnerable because of the attack. If the attack is a simply punch, the user can also drastically increase the power behind his attack, simply by tightening his fist upon impact. Kagami no Gyakuen is used along with a Taijutsu or Kenjutsu technique, it’s not a technique that actually takes any time, it’s simply adjustments and improvements that drastically increases the effectiveness of a technique.
-The genjutsu is C-ranked and optional.
-Can only be used three times per battle.
-Can only be used along with a Taijutsu or Kenjutsu technique.
-A 2-Tomoe Sharingan and above can follow the users movements.
-The user cannot utilize any S-ranked or above Taijutsu techniques the turn after this has been used.
-Can only be used by Zero Kelvin.

Changes bolded ^_^
This is essentially an "I use an extra technique to make my previous technique better" technique O_O But it's not unreasonable IMO.
If there are some parts you want to edit to make this tech approveable, then please do so ^^

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (especially the part where you cast a genjutsu to then attack).

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New submissions:

Merodīāto: Kyoku | Melody Art: Music
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: The whole field.
Chakra cost: 60 (10 every round)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Kyoku is a technique that allows the user to drastically increase the natural effects music has on all living beings by using his chakra and very life-force as a catalyst. To utilize this technique the user will need an instrument, almost everything can be used for this task, including the users own voice and the ability to whistle. By playing different genres of music, and music with different paces and beats, the user is able to invoke several effects. In general, responses to music are able to be observed. It has been proven that music influences humans both in good and bad ways. These effects are instant and some long lasting. Music can be used to change a person’s mood, and has been found to cause physical responses in many people simultaneously. Music also has the ability to strengthen or weaken emotions. To remove the factor of perception, which would otherwise often causes the listener(s) and the performer to perceive the music in completely different ways, the user will infuse every tune with chakra. This is not sound-related, since it doesn’t involve any manipulation of sound; it is merely a chakra infusion of the sound-waves produced by the instrument, which strengthens the effects they have on the listener(s). Generally, the chakra-enhanced effects produced by the user are rooted in the ability to feel different moods and emotions; the overall technique is therefore called Mood. There is a limit to how many beings the user can affect with the chakra-enhanced sound waves, for the rest of the listeners it will be like listening to perfectly normal music.

機嫌 (Kibun) | Mood
Music can be used to change a person’s mood, with or without his cooperation and willingness to listen. Music can be used to induce several moods, it can rob the most bloodthirsty warrior of his will to fight, and give even the lowest human the courage to fight a God. There are an infinite amount of moods and emotions, but the general overview of Kibuns mood-inducing abilities during battle looks as such:
娯楽 (Goraku) | Entertainment – At the most fundamental level, music provides stimulation. This branch of Kibun gives the affected a strong will to fight that cannot be quelled. This branch of Kibun also slightly increases the effectiveness of the affected, giving them a slight boost of strength and speed due to their induced will to fight and survive.
再生 (Saisei) | Revival – When used correctly, music can decrease the negative backlash of injuries. This branch of Kibun serves as a strong painkiller; it can calm the affected down and release the tension in their bodies. Without being so tense, the affected will become more flexibility, and the music will assist them in getting a calm overview of their surroundings.
強い感じ (Tsuyoi Kanji) | Strong Sensation – If the right music is played, it is possible for music to provoke strong sensations in the affected. This branch of Kibun can send the affected into a state similar to that of a mad adrenaline rush, simply by awakening their bloodlust with music. It is also possible to cause a painful sensation to hit the affected; the pain can affect almost any point on the affected bodies and can easily be mistaken for an attack. The strong sensation can also be one of pure ecstasy and glee; such a strong sensation can overwhelm all but the most strong willed, and will often cause the affected to act rashly and interrupt their current action.
転換 (Tenkan) | Diversion – Music naturally distracts the mind from unpleasant thoughts, this can be finely tuned to serve a number of purposes. This branch of Kibun can momentarily distract and interrupt the affected. Diversion can also be used to slightly manipulate the affected beings thoughts to use another tactic. The distraction music creates can also be used to avoid negative emotions and feelings temporarily. With mastery of music, it is also possible to slightly project the music towards another area to mask the user’s precise location.
排出 (Haishutsu) | Discharge – When used correctly, it is possible to release emotions with music and free the mind. This branch of Kibun allows the user to rid the affected persons of any undesirable emotions and replace them with another. Discharge can also be used to free the affected from illusions by rearranging the emotions they feel, thereby shattering the illusion, or by simply playing a very loud sound that will induce pain in the affected beings eardrums.
精神作品 (Seishin Sakuhin) | Mental Work – Music can affect the memory and brain in a number of ways. This branch of Kibun allows the user to manipulate the memory slightly. Some genres of music, and especially classical music, are able to activate both the left and right half of the brain. The simultaneous left and right brain action maximizes learning and retention of information. The information being studied activates the left brain while the music activates the right brain. The simultaneous usage of both half’s of the brain allows the affected beings brain to process information much easier, and therefore react faster. This branch of Kibun can also be used to place affected in states similar to illusion, this can be achieved by making the affected explore their minds and become lost in old memories, or simply by inducing daydreams.
慰安 (Ian) | Solace – Music can be a great source of solace for the lost. This branch of Kibun allows the user to greatly increase a group’s efficiency. Solace forges a bond between the affected that binds them together and strengthens them as a whole. The strengthening isn’t as much physical as it is psychological. It involves making the affected share some of their immediate and more obvious emotions through the music and by forcibly making their bodies release more adrenaline into their system, making it feel natural due to their sudden urge to protect their comrades. Solace also allows the affected to feel a greater degree of acceptance towards the possible outcome of the battle they are participating in, removing the chance of hesitation and other lingering doubts.
Restrictions:
-The user must be playing some kind of music at all times as long as this technique is active.
-This technique can only be used once.
-This technique lasts until deactivated.
-This technique can maximally affect 5 beings. When the technique is activated the user chooses maximally 5 targets and thereafter he can only change 1 target once per turn.
-All illusion and illusion-like states this technique employs can be broken free of through pain, though not through a chakra infusion/foreign source of chakra or by the usage of Kai.
-The usage of one of the branches of Kibun counts as 1 of the 3 moves that can be used per turn, the same counts for the abilities of each branch.
-Elemental Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, clones and summoning technique cannot be utilized while Kyoku is active, and all existing clones will disappear during activation, as will all summonings.
-Elemental Taijutsu can be used, but there is a 15+ added chakra cost to every technique utilized.
-As it is the very life-force of the user that is used for this technique, the users body will shut down and he go into a coma 2 turns after the technique ends, only fully trained medical personnel will be able to stabilize him. If stabilized, the user will awaken exactly 1 week after the technique ends.
-Ather the technique ends, the user will be unable to use S-ranked and above techniques.
-No more than 1 branch of Kibun can be activated simultaneously.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

First of all, this is really one of the projects i've been burning for, please do not label it with a Declined. Do not resubmit, i'm ready to take as much time as i must to get this approved.
If at all possible, edit to make it approveable.
I have RokuNR's permission to make something that even closely resembles his Music Arts, as long as i don't copy his techniques: I honestly don't think this technique is anywhere near what Roku made.
BTW, i was told by Nexus not to put spoilers around my techniques, therefore i haven't put spoilers around them .-.

~Approved~ Brilliant detail to the Music Arts.

Kakudai Keirakukei | Expanded Chakra Network
Rank: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Through continuous and straining usage of the chakra network, the users chakra pathway system and Tenketsu points have expanded slightly to allow more chakra to pass through the users body at high speed. The human body is very quick to adapt compared to other species and plants, and with extensive training and usage it should theoretically be possible to expand ones chakra coils and Tenketsu points, to allow the user to access and utilize techniques faster. The longer the user has been utilizing his chakra network, the bigger his chakra coils will be, as such, a Genin will hardly benefit from the this ability, whereas a Sage will feel a significant change. The expanded chakra pathway system and Tenketsu points makes it much easier for the Hyūga clans Jūken to be utilized effectively against the user.
-This ability must be stated on the users bio.
-Made by Zero Kelvin.

~Declined do not resubmit~ Tenketsu points shouldn't be considered similar to a muscle or anything that can be enhanced. It's basically like saying you're enhancing your nervous system.

Merodīāto Genjutsu: Kiku no Tanoshi | Melody Art Illusionary Technique: The Joy of Listening
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Kiku no Tanoshi is one of the most advanced non-Dojutsu illusionary techniques. The user plays a single tune that causes the affected to become hopelessly caught in an illusion. There will be no evidence that the affected has been placed under a Genjutsu, even methods and techniques that usually release a being from an illusion without fail will be useless against this technique. The only way to escape this technique is to inflict pain in the affected beings ears. This illusionary technique is the perfect counter-measure against affected beings who would try to block their hearing to escape the effects of Melody Art techniques. The illusion makes the affected firmly believe that they cannot hear anything, it is possible to use this Genjutsu to block out specific sounds. But even though the affected feels as if they cannot hear and even if they actually can't hear, they’re still affected by Melody Art and other sound-based techniques because of this illusion.
-Can only be used while Merodīāto: Kyoku | Melody Art: Music is active.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Lasts until deactivated.
-This technique can maximally affect 5 beings. When the technique is activated the user chooses maximally 5 targets and thereafter he can only change 1 target once per turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

~Declined~ A bit too much of an affection-rate. Lower it from people and limit how long it lasts.

Bruce Banner · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Oasis Nara said:
(Yari Mayonaka Kage) - Spear of the Midnight's Shadow
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
In the outskirts of the endless desert an unknown Nara had forged a spear with the blackest chakra metal in the ninja world. The spear was made to forge with the Nara's shadows to control the darkness and power it. When the user wields the spear it increases their shadows techniques. The spear is able to be thrown if the user aims correctly and hits the enemies shadows it traps the enemies shadow so then the user can use imitation. Normally the spear would only be able to hit at short range but the user is able to increase the range to mid by using the shadow inflicting the spear to extend the shadow into a sharp point.

Notes:
- Usable 4 turns per battle
- If spear is thrown and makes contact with shadow; Spear is useless for rest of battle
- Increases Shadows by +5
- Shadow can extend range of spear from short to mid
- Throwing spear counts as a move.
- Drains 10 chakra per turn spear is used
- Only usable by Nara Clan Member
- Only usable by Oasis Nara and those he allows

(Kage no kōto) -Shadow Coat
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wrap around his/her entire body with their shadow which make them invulnerable from physically attack such as Taijutsu or normal physical attack. Once the opponent launch a physical attack then they will trap/bind by the user shadow after comes in contact with the user body.

Restriction :
~ Must have finished his shadow training.
~ Must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
~ Can only be used by Nara's
~ Can only be taught by Oasis

(Kage Tōketsu )- Shadow Freeze
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user shadow able to stop and undo jutsu attack that launch fly toward him which the jutsu attack have shadow with solid or animal shape such as Dragon, tiger, bird, pillar, rocks, staff etc, by trapping and binding the jutsu attack shadow.

Restriction :
~ Requires a row of 4 handseals.
~ Able to stop and undo similar rank attack from Earth, Water, and wind element which have shadow
~ Can’t stop/undo Fire and lightning jutsu attack
~ Can only be used 2 times in battle then can’t use shadow for the next 2 turn
~ Must have finished Shadow training.
~ Can only be used by Nara's
~ Can only be taught by Oasis

Summon Animal : Legendary Wombat Twin, Romulus and Remus

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Densetsu no u~onbattotsuin, romurusu to remusu)- Summoning Animal: Legendary Wombat Twin, Romulus and Remus
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User unscroll a rare scroll of legendary Wombat, who have been gave to themwhich have been loyal to the Wombat Empire, then the user bites their finger drawing blood then preforms a row of 15 handseals then slams their hand to the scroll and summons Romulus and Remus, the legendary twin from wombat warrior size as a normal human.
Romulus the older one holding a little scroll, attached in his left arm and has the ability to camouflage himself by putting the scroll in his mouth, as long as the scroll still in his mouth then barely no one can see or sense his present and able to travel fast on the ground as Sannin rank. While Remus the younger one known as the master of illusionist, he has the ability to use up to A-Rank Genjutsu, Romulus and Remus work together side by side as a solid team.

Restriction:
Note: Romulus camouflage counts as a move, 2 tomoe sharingan can sense and see him.
Note: Romulus can’t perform any jutsu.
Note: Romulus only can perform normal taijutsu/ taijutsu specialist. (speed =Sannin lvl 6 + 2)
Note: Remus Genjutsu counts as a move.
Note: The twin summon only lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Must have / sign the Wombat Contract
Note: Only Oasis Nara can summon Romulus and Remus

~All declined, over weakly submission~ You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for the next week submission. You've posted 6 jutsus this week, here's the link to your other submissions:

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Your ban shall be lifted on the 26th of September. If you have anything to say, please do so through VM.

Izuna-sama, Today is 26th of september, so the ban have been lifted right, here are i try to resubmitting.

Resubmitting

(Yari Mayonaka Kage) - Spear of the Midnight's Shadow
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
In the outskirts of the endless desert an unknown Nara had forged a spear with the blackest chakra metal in the ninja world. The spear was made to forge with the Nara's shadows to control the darkness and power it. When the user wields the spear it increases their shadows techniques. The spear is able to be thrown if the user aims correctly and hits the enemies shadows it traps the enemies shadow so then the user can use imitation. Normally the spear would only be able to hit at short range but the user is able to increase the range to mid by using the shadow inflicting the spear to extend the shadow into a sharp point.

Notes:
- Usable 4 turns per battle
- If spear is thrown and makes contact with shadow; Spear is useless for rest of battle
- Increases Shadows by +5
- Shadow can extend range of spear from short to mid
- Throwing spear counts as a move.
- Drains 10 chakra per turn spear is used
- Only usable by Nara Clan Member
- Only usable by Oasis Nara and those he allows

~Declined~ You really need to be clearer in the description, I hardly understood what your spear can do.

(Kage no kōto) -Shadow Coat
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wrap around his/her entire body with their shadow which make them invulnerable from physically attack such as Taijutsu or normal physical attack. Once the opponent launch a physical attack then they will trap/bind by the user shadow after comes in contact with the user body.

Restriction :
~ Must have finished his shadow training.
~ Must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
~ Can only be used by Nara's
~ Can only be taught by Oasis

~Declined do not resubmit~ No invulnerability jutsu.

(Kage Tōketsu )- Shadow Freeze
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user shadow able to stop and undo jutsu attack that launch fly toward him which the jutsu attack have shadow with solid or animal shape such as Dragon, tiger, bird, pillar, rocks, staff etc, by trapping and binding the jutsu attack shadow.

Restriction :
~ Requires a row of 4 handseals.
~ Able to stop and undo similar rank attack from Earth, Water, and wind element which have shadow
~ Can’t stop/undo Fire and lightning jutsu attack
~ Can only be used 2 times in battle then can’t use shadow for the next 2 turn
~ Must have finished Shadow training.
~ Can only be used by Nara's
~ Can only be taught by Oasis

~Declined~ Again, I really don't understand what your jutsu does.

Summon Animal : Legendary Wombat Twin, Romulus and Remus

~Approved~ I added the bold part and took out the reference to the speed chart. Never refer to the speed chart.

New Submission

* Summoning Shells *

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Summoning Animal: Shells
Scroll Owner: Oasis Nara
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: not yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none yet

Note : If this get approved, then I shall drop Boars contract

~Approved~

Proteus · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Its been more then 7 days since my last

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Now my new submission starts
(Fuuton: Sune Putto) - Wind Style: Leg Stomp
Type: Offense/ Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user raises his leg at maximum height as he can and then stomps the ground with his full energy. Due to this, a large no. of wind waves goes one after other from user's leg, which can repel any object thrown at him, and if the opponent is standing at short-range, then this tech will blow him away at mid-range with giving him a small injury.
Note: ~Here repelling means just blocking the objects by striking the waves and moves in opposite direction for small distance~
~Can only be used 4 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Proteus~

~Approved~

(Ninjutsu: Chakra kuro-n) - Ninjutsu: Chakra Clones
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates clones made up of pure chakra which takes the form of user. The clone itself can use any jutsu the user knows. As it is made up of chakra, so it can sense any other chakra and its level. Clones don't have much effect of ninjutsu upto C-rank.
Note: ~Can create 4 clones at a time~
~Can be used 5 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Proteus~

~Declined do not resubmit~ That's basically a shadow clone with boosted abilities (sensing)

(Suiton: Mizu Hando) - Water Style: Water Hands
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When standing on water user puts his hands on water source and pulls out 4 hands made up of water, which grabs the users both the hands and legs, making struggling pointless.
Note: ~Opponent can only break through the water hands if he is 2 level higher then the user~
~Can only be used 4 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Proteus~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist

(Suiton: Mizu Kiyanon) - Water Style: Water Canon
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: User creates a canon of water and releases two canon-balls each of 1m radius in projectile motion at high speed at the target, after releasing one, he releases the second one after a break of 2 seconds.
Note: ~Can be used in combo with "(Raiton: Raikou Kiyanon)" for doubling the size and impact~
~Can only be used 4 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Proteus~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist

(Raiton: Raikou Kiyanon) - Lightning Style: Lightning Canon
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: User creates a canon of lightning and releases two canon-balls each of 1m radius in projectile motion at high speed at the target, after releasing one, he releases the second one after a break of 2 seconds.
Note: ~Can be used in combo with "(Suiton: Mizu Kiyanon)" for doubling the size and impact~
~Can only be used 4 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Proteus~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

Pretty much all the cannons, blast, crescent shape wave shot from a sword-kind of jutsu have been made in every known element.

Pervyy · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

The Pervy Sage said:
(Tensa Zangetsu) - Heaven Chain Slaying Moon
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 for fire jutsu
Damage Points: 60 from fire blast
Description: Ichigo's shrinks is a daitō (Japanese long sword) with a black blade instead. The cross guard has four prongs bent out to form the shape of the manji (which is the kanji for "ban," meaning "full", as in "full release"). The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons. This wouldn't work on attacks such as lightning or wind as that would blast the sword out of the users hand. A short length of chain with a broken link at the end dangles from the base of the hilt. Tensa Zangetsu is a special blade forged in the hawk village with sacred methods that allow the sword to draw in natural energy at half the speed of a normal ninja. This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands and they state that they are doing so. The user is able to focus their charka into the sword surrounding it with fire charka, thought this fire turns to black due to the sword's effect. This fire increases the damage of basic kenjutsu by +10 damage. This lasts for up to 3 turns and can be used once per battle.

Note: Can only be used by Ichigo Uchiha
Note: Surrounding the sword with black flames counts as one of the jutsu per turn, lasts for 3 turns and can only be used once. It adds +10 damage to kenjutsu attacks that are used in short range.
Note: When the user is drawing in natural energy through the sword they can't use kenjutsu techniques

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I've spoken with Roku and Izuna before reposting this to work it out.

And at the above post, i pressed edit instead of quote and didn't realise so that's why it's last edited by me when roku has declined the sword ^_^

~Declined~ look at the bold part, does it mean you can block all the other elements? Or low ranked attack in the least?

(Tensa Zangetsu) - Heaven Chain Slaying Moon
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 for fire jutsu
Damage Points: 60 from lightning blast
Description: Ichigo's shrinks is a daitō (Japanese long sword) with a black blade instead. The cross guard has four prongs bent out to form the shape of the manji (which is the kanji for "ban," meaning "full", as in "full release"). The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons. Anything above a D rank attack would hit the sword out of the users hand. A short length of chain with a broken link at the end dangles from the base of the hilt. Tensa Zangetsu is a special blade forged in the hawk village with sacred methods that allow the sword to draw in natural energy at half the speed of a normal ninja. This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands and they state that they are doing so. The user is able to focus their charka into the sword surrounding it with lightning charka, though this lighning turns to black due to the sword's effect. This lightning increases the damage of basic kenjutsu by +10 damage. This lasts for up to 3 turns and can be used once per battle.

Note: Can only be used by Ichigo Uchiha
Note: Surrounding the sword with black lightning counts as one of the jutsu per turn, lasts for 3 turns and can only be used once. It adds +10 damage to kenjutsu attacks that are used in short range.
Note: When the user is drawing in natural energy through the sword they can't use kenjutsu techniques

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I editted the bold to make it a bit clearer.

~Approved~ Have fun with your new toy xd

(fuuin no ken tatsujin) - Seal of the Sword Master
Type: Attack/Deffence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage Points: +40 to ken/tai
Description: This in an ancient art passed down through the generations of sword masters. After the samurai begin to use ninjutsu that the sage of the six paths taught them, kenjutsu was becoming a lost art to most apart from the greatest of sword users. When ninjutsu was first introduced, several sword masters came together trying to combine the flow of chakra and that of the sword to heighten their abilities. In the end they found a special method of how to do it. In a battle, they would wear their opponents down as they store a certain amount of chakra into a seal they would create on their chest, that is shaped like 2 swords crossing. Then after a few minites they would release this chakra throughout their body and into their mind. In doing so, they would release the body's limiters that holds back the bodies capabilties in battle. This would stimulated the nervous system, increasing the bodies reaction time. It would increase the amount of chakra into the muscles increasing the power of all tai/ken based abilities. On top of this it would increase the bodies natural reactions entering a new state of mind to become an ultimate sword master. This new found speed, power, and reactions would help them to defeat the greatest of sword users, but it came with a price. This increases the users speed, power and reaction times by x3

Note: Lasts for 4 turns
Note: Once used, this jutsu take 2 turns to gather enough chakra to activate and gathering the chakra for this jutsu takes up 1 of the 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: Only can be used once.
Note: when this is activated, the user can only use kenjutsu and taijutsu techniques and can't use handseals. Though sharingan users can use their eye techniques.
Note: Once this has ended the users body will be worn out as they will only be able to use A ranks and below for 2 turns.
Note: After this has ended, if the users body is hit, their bones will be broken from C rank attacks and below as their body becomes vulnerable

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is basically a big mix between the gates, the official NB jutsu "Sixth Sense" and the official NB Kenjutsu I created that heighten your perception.

Igneel · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sution:nurunuru bunpi|Water Release:Slimy Bunpitsu|
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description:The user secretes a slimy fluid from his body by using his suiton chakra which coats the user thickly not covering the users nose ,mouth and eyes.The advantages of this slimy stuff is that the user can be harmed by taijutsu as the slimy substance will absorb all taijutsu blows and some would slip though the users skin due to the slime.The user cannot be harmed by ordinary kunai's or slashs or cuts from blades.The user is free to do other jutsu's while covered in this slime

Note:

Can only be used 2 times per battle
Lasts for 3 turns after activating the slimy substance
Cannot use any suiton jutsu's of S-rank while covered in slime
Can only be taught by igneel

~Declined~ There is a very similar technique existing but it was solely made from water so I'll give you a change to work it out. First, it's OP the way it is now. You're basically invincible to all taijutsu/kenjutsu, work that out. Also, make it last for 1 turns and twice per match. Add some restrictions related to the jutsu you can use after water (can't use S-rank and above for X turns...).

Fuuton:Sandoicchi|Wind Style:Sandwich|
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Range:Short-long
Type:Attack
Description:The user channels fuuton chakra into the air and does 3 handseals and as he does the first handseal, wind walls start to from on the the front and rear side of the target and when he does the second seal the wind wall finishes forming(the wind wall is not visible to naked eye,only doujutsu users or sensers can see or feel it) and when he does the 3rd seal the walls move towards the target at high speed and the two wall will collide in 2 seconds,trapping the target in middle restraining his movements and also the target will have multiple fractures

Note:

Can only be used 2 times per battle
Must have mastery over wind
cannot use any wind jutsu in the next turn
can only be taught by igneel

~Declined~ You're creating 2 thick walls made of wind close-range from your opponent and he wouldn't feel it being created around him and moving? That's unrealistic and OP. Also, define the size of those walls, we can't have you create 2 50m by 50m slab of wind.

Raiton:Sankaku Bukahu|Lightning Style:Traingulr blast

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Rank:A
Type:Attack
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Range:Short-Mid
Description:The user does 5 handseals and brings together his hands and forms a triangle using his hand(as shown in pic) and concentrates raiton chakra in between the triangle and shoots a blast of lightning a the opponent which reaches an opponent at mid-range in the blink of an eye and blasts a hole in the opponent

Note:

Can only be used 2 times per battle
Sharingan of 2T and above can follow the speed of the attack
Must have mastery over lightning
Cannot use any raiton jutsu in the same turn
Can only be used by igneel

Ninja Art: Power Up|Ninpou:Kaio-Ken

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Rank:Forbidden
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage:N/A
Description:The user builds up a huge amount of chakra in his body and it is clearly visible to others.The user summons chakra from each and every cell in his body to get into this powered up state.All the attack the user uses gets boosted 1 rank higher but the user cannot use any jutsu which was forbidden initially.The user can use S-rank jutsu's like Wind style:Serial Waves which would get boosted to 1 rank higher.Due to the strain of the jutsu the after effects are pretty devastating

Note:

Can only be used once per battle
Cannot use any jutsu which was forbidden initially while in this state
User can use only a maximum of 2 S-rank jutsu like Serial waves per turn
This mode lasts for 3 Turns
After the mode disappears the user will suffer extreme pain in his body and will not be able to use any jutsu's including tai,nin,gen and basics as well as CE well
User will collapse on the ground as soon as he gets out of the mode and will faint(which means the user will loose the match if he doesn't finish his opponent in the 3-turn time)
can only be taught by igneel

Ninja Art: Buddha's Heavenly Palm|Ninpou:Butsu Amatsu Hira
Type:Offence/Defence
Rank:S
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Range:Short-Mid
Description:This is a technique used by ancient ninja's and was one of the most deadliest attacks.The user first brings both his hands together as if he was praying and then the user first focuses his chakra into his palms and puts his hands in a position as shown in the pic below.

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Then the user compresses more of his chakra into his palms completely covering his palms with it( visible to naked eye) and then the user pushes his right hand forward sending a blast of chakra shaped in the form of a huge palm at the target(this blast of chakra is not visible to the naked eye).The palm has enough power to push back the opponent dealing him major damages like rupturing his internal organs.The attack has power to push back attacks aimed at the user.

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Effect of the jutsu on the ground

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Effect of the jutsu on a huge building

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Video for better understanding:
watch from 1:10 for better understanding

RESTRICTIONS:

Can only be used once per battle
Cannot use any ninjutsu in the same turn or for the next 4 turns(not elemental)
Must have mastered Taijutsu
User cannot use any form of taijutsu(like punches and kicks) after using the jutsu(user can still throw projectiles like shurikens,kunai's)
Must be atleast Sannin Rank
Can only be taught by igneel

~All Declined~ Those were all great idea but they all already exist. The Kaio-Ken was just recently done and a whole set of custom was created around the Buddha's palm by a senior member named Devlin.

Wesobi · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wesobi said:
Hyourinmaru – Ice Ring
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A sword that has been passed down through Yuki clan for ages. It was broken before, in the war where the Yuki Clan almost became extinct. The sword is said to be made out of the heart of a special meteor that fell in the village. The meteor was as cold as ice, and had all the properties of ice. The Yuki Clan took the meteor, and forged a sword out of the core of this heavenly rock. As the sword was formed, it gleamed heavily and continued to send out a soft blue light. The user of this sword gets a +15 damage point boost on every Ice Release jutsu used, as well as slowly freezing anything it comes in contact with. Of course not the wielder, considering it must be one of the Yuki Clan to wield this. The sword also comes with a most secret technique. It gives the user the ability to use send out a wave of ice from the tip of the sword. This wave can be used as a direct attack or shield). It also has the ability to let the user use any ice-release attack without any hand seals.
Note: The wave can only be used once (so the user has to choose for the offensive or defensive side)
Note: When using the wave, it has the attack power of an A-rank attack, and can only defend up to A-rank attack, except fire.
Note: The user can only use an ice attack without hand seals twice
Note: The user can only use attacks without hand seals when having the sword in his hands.
Note: Only one of the Yuki clan can wear this sword (especially Wesobi). If anyone else touches it, he/she gets frozen instantly.
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~Declined~ OP. Work on all those abilities...this sword is almost stronger than the 7SM. Take out the part about it reducing all hand seals to zero for ice jutsu. Work on it, you stacked many abilities that could have been hard to approved if it was the only this sword possessed.

Hyourinmaru – Ice Ring
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A sword that has been passed down through Yuki clan for ages. It was broken before, in the war where the Yuki Clan almost became extinct. The sword is said to be made out of the heart of a special meteor that fell in the village. The meteor was as cold as ice, and had all the properties of ice. The Yuki Clan took the meteor, and forged a sword out of the core of this heavenly rock. As the sword was formed, it gleamed heavily and continued to send out a soft blue light. The user of this sword gets a +15 damage point boost on every Ice Release jutsu used, as well as slowly freezing anything it comes in contact with. Of course not the wielder, considering it must be one of the Yuki Clan to wield this. The sword also comes with a most secret technique. Once per battle, the user can channel Hyouton chakra through the sword and let a spear shoot of it, up till mid range (much like Chidori Eiso). The second way to channel Hyouton chakra through it gives the user the ability to send out a wave of ice from the tip of the sword. This wave can be used as a direct attack or shield).

Note: The spear is formed as rapidly as Chidori Eiso, but can only be used once per battle.
Note: The wave can only be used twice (so the user has to choose for the offensive or defensive side)
Note: The "Wave of Ice" can only defend against up to B-rank, or have the damage of a B-ranked attack. When used offensively, it can only reach up to mid range, and the opponent will have enough time to react if he focuses on the wave.
Note: Only one of the Yuki clan can wear this sword (especially Wesobi). If anyone else touches it, he/she gets frozen instantly.

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~Declined~ All changes must be put in bold otherwise we won't even look at the re-submitted jutsu.

Dean Kaguya · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Dean Kaguya said:
~Resubmitting first 2
(Ninpő: Kurouzu Gijutsu no
Tsubasa)Ninja Arts: Wings Of Crows
Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 25 (+5 each turn
active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description:Itachi summons a swarm of crows to his back and they attach themselves to his back and using chakra, Itachi forms them into wings. Once attached, they function they same as actual wings and allow him to fly, increase his agility as well as his speed.
~ Technique lasts for 3 turns.
~ Can only be used by Itachi bios.
~ Can only be used 3 times per
battle.
~ Can only be taught by Dean
Kaguya.

~Declined~ been done so many times. The only difference is that the wings are originally crows, but it still is a human/animal fusion (according to your description), which is not accepted anymore.

(Ninpô: Mārinsākurutekunikku)
Ninja Arts: The Merlin Circle.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn
active)
Damage Points: N/A (+15 to each elemental ninjutsu)
Description: The user forms 6 hand seal (Boar-ram-tiger-bird-dragon-snake) and a causes a circle with the
elemental inscription of each
element on a stone to form around him with as the center. The user then streams each of his elemental chakra along the correspondent stone. Whilst is the
circle is active, the speed of
performing elemental ninjutsu is greatly increased because the users elemental chakra is already present to the used. If the user wants to use any particular element, he/she draws the chakra from the corresponding stone and using the chakra plus a little of his performs the jutsu.
~ This takes 2 moves out of the users 3 in the turn its activated.
~ In the process of activating, the user must remain stationary.
~ Must have had training in all basic 5 elements to use.
~ Whilst active no Gen/Tai/Ken/
Fuuin/Kinjutsu of any sort may be
used.
~ Lasts for 3 turns.
~ After the 3 turns no Ninjutsu of
any sort may be used for 2 turns.
~ Can only be used 2 times per
battle.
~ Can only be taught by Dean
Kaguya.
*Best used after using a clone jutsu*
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~Declined~ The boost is too great for all elements (make it +5 since it affects the 5) and re-work the description. It needs to be clearer and elaborate on the increased speed for each element.

~Re-submitting
(Ninpô: Mārinsākurutekunikku)Ninja Arts: The Merlin Circle.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn active)
Damage Points: N/A (+5 to each elemental ninjutsu)
Description: The user forms 6 hand seals (Boar-ram-tiger- bird-dragon-snake) and causes a circle with the inscription of each of the basic five elements on a stone to form around him with him as the center. The user then distributes some portion of each of his elemental chakra to the corresponding stone. The stone then acts as a source for energy meaning if he wants to perform a water jutsu that requires a water source, he wouldnt need the water source as his water chakra has already provided a source for him and that source can only be used by the user as its made of his own chakra. The users chakra aligned on the also stones serves as a source of the element he wants to use which allows him to freely manipulate each of the elements to form anything he wants if the jutsu requires a source to perform. If the user wants to use any particular element, he/she draws the chakra from the corresponding stone and using the chakra from the surrounding plus a little from within, performs the jutsu.
~ This takes 2 moves out of the users 3 in the turn its activated.
~ In the process of activating, the user must remain stationary.
~ Must have had training in all basic 5 elements to use.
~ Whilst active no Gen/Tai/Ken/ Fuuin/Kinjutsu of any sort may be used.
~ Lasts for 3 turns.
~ After the 3 turns no Ninjutsu of any sort may be used for 2 turns.
~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~ Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.
*Best used after using a clone jutsu*
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~Declined do not resubmit~ OP

Dean Kaguya said:
(Ninpő: Kurouzu Gijutsu no Tsubasa)Ninja Arts: Wings Of Crows Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 25 (+5 each turn active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Itachi summons a flock of crows to him and they take the shape of wings and attach themselves to his back. Once attached, they function they same as actual wings and increase his agility as well as his speed.
~ Technique lasts for 3 turns.
~ Can only be used by Itachi bios.
~ Can only be used 3 times per battle.
~ Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.

~Declined~
(Ninpô: Mārinsākurutekunikku) Ninja Arts: The Merlin Circle.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 each turn active)
Damage Points: N/A (+15 to each elemental ninjutsu)
Description: The user forms 1 hand seal and a causes a circle with the elemental inscription of each element on a stone to form around him with as the center. The user then streams his elemental chakra along each stone with the inscription that matches the particular element. Whilst is the circle is active, the speed of performing ninjutsu is greatly increased because the users chakra is already present to the used.~ Must have had training in all basic 5 elements to use.
~ Whilst active no Gen/Tai/Ken/Fuuin/Kinjutsu of any sort may be used.
~ Lasts for 3 turns.
~ After the 3 turns no Ninjutsu of any sort may be used for 2 turns.
~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~ Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.

~Declined~
(Katon: Chou Hi Jiten) Fire Style: Grand Fire Spin
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Poinst: 80 (-10 to user)
Description: The user forms 3 hand seals and spits out a giant spiralling vortex of fire that levels everything in its path.
~ Only usable once per battle.
~ Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.
~ No fire techniques 2 turns after.

~Declined~ Better description

~Resubmitting
(Katon: Chou Hi Jiten) Fire Style: Grand Fire Spin)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 to user)
Description:The user forms 3 hand seals and blows a spiralling vortex of fire from his mouth that travels at high speeds to the opponent. The fireball can be used by the user to form a prison of fire around the opponent because as the fireball spirals, it expands. Or the user can use the force of the fire to blow the opponent backwards. The fire prison is not actually a prison but more like a furnace produced as a result of the fire surrounding the opponent. The fireball expands and covers the entire path in front of the user[ therby forming a super-heated furnace or dome around the opponent if he's standing in front of the user.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~No fire techniques 2 turns after.
~Moves in only one direction.
~If the opponent is trapped within the fire, they remain trapped for 2 turns.
~Can only be taught by Dean Kaguya.

~Declined~ From your description, I really don't understand how this fireball is anything close to a furnace or a prison. Does it become concave as it expand? Is it more like a elongated ring of fire? A tube expending around your opponent? Explain.

BluePhenix · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

BluePhenix said:
Custom Summoning Contract
Summoning Animal: Bengal Monitor
Scroll Owner: BluePhenix
Other Users who have signed contract: No one yet
Summoning Boss if existing: Awaiting approval before submitting
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Awaiting approval before submitting

The Bengal monitors are related to the lizard species. They prey on invertebrates such as beetles, grubs, orthopterans, scorpions, snails and ants, and vertebrates such as bats, frogs, fish, lizards, snakes and rodents. They can feed on dead animals too. The Bengal monitors are capable of rapid movement on the ground. Their strong claws enables them to climb and dig well, and they can also swim well and stay submerged for at least 17 minutes. On the ground, they sometimes stand on their hind legs to get a better view or when males fight other males. On river banks, the pattern on their body provides excellent camouflage. Bengal monitors also have keen eyesight and can detect human movement nearly 250m away.

In the Narutoverse, all the abilities of the Bengal monitors are enhanced and they are able to speak human language. They also possess their own kingdom.

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I have permission from Riku to make the Bengal Monitor contract:
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~Approved~

Customs related to my above-mentioned contract.

Custom Summonings

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ekitenshu) – Summoning Technique: Ekitenshu
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: Ekitenshu is the boss of Bengal monitors. His size stands somewhere between that of Manda and that of Manda II. With his earth chakra, Ekitenshu is able to cause fissures and sprouting spikes by stomping on the ground with his feet or tail. He can dig large underground tunnels to create escape routes or to cause violent tremors beneath the opponent until the ground collapses. Ekitenshu also infuses his scales with earth chakra to make them as sturdy as Earth Style: Hardening Technique. This process is referred to as “Dragon Scales” by Bengal monitors and grants him with a natural armor resistant to most jutsus. Similarly to most Bengal monitors, Ekitenshu is an excellent swimmer and fast runner.
Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bengal Monitor contract.
Note: The summoner of Ekitenshu must be Kage rank or above.
Note: Ekitenshu's "Dragon Scales" is resistant to A-rank jutsus and below, with the exception of lightning which is his elemental weakness and against which he is resistant up to B-rank jutsus only.

~Approved~ Well done. I just took out the part about it being venomous, only med-sensei can submit poison related CJ.

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ekitei) – Summoning Technique: Ekitei
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Ekitei is a Bengal monitor who specializes in spying techniques such as camouflaging. He is normally the size of a regular adult Bengal monitor but will usually transform into the size of a lizard in order to hang/fuse to someone’s back and follow him (like a parasiting technique), his weight being so light that this person won’t know or suspect anything. While he does so, he will camouflage himself and be completely unseen from regular eyes. Moreover, he will convert his chakra to make it look as if he is nothing but a part of the chakra emanating from the body of the one he hangs to, thus deceiving sensory techniques like Chakra Sensing Rain and sensory abilities like the sharingan. When he is summoned, it will appear as a fail as he will already be in camouflaged mode (i.e. he will be the size of a lizard and hanging/fused to the summoner’s back, as well as camouflaging into the summoner’s chakra and hidden from regular eyes). There, he will keep check of any disturbance in the summoner’s chakra flow and release him immediately from any genjutsu. He also serves as eyes in the back of the summoner and makes it impossible for the summoner to be surprised by an attack from a blind angle, communicating such relevant information by sending signals to the summoner through his chakra system.
Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bengal Monitor contract.
Note: The summoner of Ekitei must be Sannin rank or above.
Note: Camouflaging will not deceive a Byakugan user.
Note: Can only release the summoner from A-rank genjutsu and below.
Note: Being on the back of the summoner, Ekitei is unaffected by regular genjutsus as long as his presence is undetected, and he is unaffected by visual genjutsus since he doesn't make eye contact with the opponent.

~Declined~ Re-work the part about it being attacked unnoticed and letting out similar chakra to the one he attach to. To do so, he would have to suck on the target's chakra and let it out again as a camouflage. Even then, sensory type ninja and doujutsu user would see it.

Custom Jutsus

(Doton: Field Possession Totems) – Earth Style: No Shoji To-remu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon four rock totems shaped with Bengal monitors’ heads and originating from the Bengal monitors’ kingdom. Each one appears at one cardinal point of the battlefield and contains enormous amounts of the user’s earth chakra. The chakra will be released and imbued into the area of ground covered by the totems’ alignment (i.e. the whole battlefield), and locked over that area to prevent the opponent from performing any earth jutsus that takes source from the ground, such as spikes, swamps, pillars, underground motion techniques, etc... The totems are S-rank in terms of sturdiness.
Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bengal Monitor contract.
Note: User must be Sannin rank or above.
Note: Destroying one of the totems will nullify the technique.
Note: Can only be performed once and will last for ten turns.
Note: Opponent will only be able to perform earth techniques which originate from him, such as those that are spewed.

~Declined~ OP. To fill the earth all over the battlefield with enough chakra to stop your opponent from using it would kill your from chakra overuse. Even if those pillar come to the field fully charger with chakra, this is unacceptable.

Scarface · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Kuchiyose: Hiraishin Mokuton Hebi) ~ Flying Wood Snake
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A snake interbred with cells from Hashirama Senju and cells from Manda. The snake is half the size of Manda with wood platelets for scales. It has the ability to use Wood jutsus. And it has wings allowing it to fly. Given its size, it is able to fly with the added weight of 3 people, of Orochimaru's build.

~Wood jutsus require the use of said jutsu, and count toward the maximum 3 jutsus per turn as per Rei's R&R
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~A direct hit with an S rank or above fire , lightning or slicing wind jutsu, or 2 direct hits from an A rank fire, lighting, or slicing wind jutsu are the only things that are able to kill the snake
~The snake flies at the speed of Pein's giant bird
~The snake can only stay on the field for 5 turns
~The snake can only be summoned once
~Can only be summoned by someone who knows wood, or has signed the snake summoning contract

~Declined~ I like the concept of this one, just take out the part about it flying. Also, make it that only an Orochimaru bio or a wood user can summon that snake (considering Oro was the one using the 1st cell for experiments). Lastly, take out the part explaining what it requires to kill it, that are many ways to kill a summon and it shouldn't be restricted to rank (and for a lol look at the bold part).

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(Senei Ta Jashu) - Hidden Shadow Million Snake March
Rank:Forbidden
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Million snake march is a Ninjutsu technique that manifests a incredibly large torrent of snakes, which extend from the sleeve. Orochimaru can extend these snakes to attack a target. Once extended the snake can bite into the target to hold and bind them. Chakra can be infused into the snakes to inflict extra damages.

Note:Must be able to summon snakes
Note: Fire chakra causes a serious burn
Lightning chakra causes paralyses
Earth chakra creates a dirty wound and causes the opponent to become infected
Wind chakra can inject air into the opponents body causing an air bubble in the heart
Water jutsu thins the blood of the opponent causing them to become dizzy and disorientated
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: The snakes shoot out as faster than a kunai is thrown
Note: The have no special health and/or resistance, they are just snakes

~Declined~ many things wrong here. Why is it forbidden? I see no restrictions and no reason why it should be classified as forbidden. Check out all the bold parts, they need to be fixed (how huge is that torrent? Similar to the jutsu used by Oro when fighting the 9 tails? Infections and air bubble? One of those effect if left very vague and the other is an instant kill the moment the bubble reach the heart; which is unacceptable in both cases. Lastly, make it as fast as a kunai (even there's it's a bit far-fetched IMO)).
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(Kuchiyose: Hebi Chakra Sen'yaku) ~ Summoning: Snake Chakra Infusion
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a giant snake, the size of manda, and infuse into him upon summoning, a specific element of chakra (fire, water, lighting, ice, etc) of the users choosing. The wasp will then be able to use all of that element's jutsus, and carry that element's weakness, example, a wasp infused with fire chakra, will have a weakness to water.

~This jutsu can only be used twice
~Can be used with ANY base 5 element that the user knows
~The snake can only use a total of 5 jutsu
~To kill the snake, you must deliver either 3 C-rank techniques, 2 B-rank technique or 1 A-rank technique
~The snake's jutsus count as one of the users 3 jutsus

(This is an already approved jutsu for my wasp contract, I just wanted one for snakes as well )

~Pending~ lmao, you left the word "wasp" everywhere in your jutsu xd. Work it out and I'll accept it.

(Kuchiyose: Hiraishin Mokuton Hebi) ~ Flying Wood Snake
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A snake interbred with cells from Hashirama Senju and cells from Manda. The snake is half the size of Manda with wood platelets for scales. It has the ability to use Wood jutsus. And it has wings allowing it to fly. Given its size, it is able to fly with the added weight of 3 people, of Orochimaru's build.

~Wood jutsus require the use of said jutsu, and count toward the maximum 3 jutsus per turn as per Rei's R&R
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~A direct hit with an S rank or above fire , lightning or slicing wind jutsu, or 2 direct hits from an A rank fire, lighting, or slicing wind jutsu are the only things that are able to kill the snake
~The snake flies at the speed of Pein's giant bird
~The snake can only stay on the field for 5 turns
~Can only be summoned by someone who knows wood, or Orochimaru

~Declined~ You didn't change anything from what I asked.
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(Senei Ta Jashu) - Hidden Shadow Million Snake March
Rank:Forbidden
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Million snake march is a Ninjutsu technique that manifests a incredibly large torrent of snakes, which extend from the sleeve. Orochimaru can extend these snakes to attack a target. Once extended the snake can bite into the target to hold and bind them. Chakra can be infused into the snakes to inflict extra damages. The snakes are also strong enough to grab onto things like trees or the ground and pull the user to safety. They can extend to long range in a matter of a second or two

Note:Must be able to summon snakes
Note: Chakra damages

Fire chakra: causes a serious burn

Lightning chakra: causes paralyses and electrocution, depending on how much the opponent is bitten. The opponent could even die should 10 snakes lightning bite the opponent at once.

Earth chakra: creates a dirty wound and causes the opponent to become infected, infection makes the opponent unable to use the body part for the rest of the match, after 3 turns, the body part will actually fully decompose and rot off

Wind chakra: can inject air into the opponents body causing an air bubble in the heart, the bubble travels slowly and will kill the opponent in 3 turns.

Water chakra: thins the blood of the opponent causing them to become dizzy and disorientated, this issue lasts for 3 turns. During these 3 turns, the opponent will mess up every other handseal and have to correct himself. Meaning his handseals become doubled.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: The snakes shoot out as fast as a kunai is thrown
Note: The have no special health and/or resistance, they are just snakes
Note: The torrent is huge, which is why it takes forbidden rank amount of chakra, it is basically multiple hidden snake hand times 10. About 200 snakes out of each arm.

~Declined~ You didn't change anything from what I asked.

Please don't do this again, it's a wait for my time to check jutsu that are identical to the precedent submission =/
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(Kuchiyose: Hebi Chakra Sen'yaku) ~ Summoning: Snake Chakra Infusion
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a giant snake, the size of manda, and infuse into him upon summoning, a specific element of chakra (fire, water, lighting, ice, etc) of the users choosing. The snake will then be able to use all of that element's jutsus, and carry that element's weakness, example, a snake infused with fire chakra, will have a weakness to water.

~This jutsu can only be used twice
~Can be used with ANY base 5 element that the user knows
~The snake can only use a total of 5 jutsu
~To kill the snake, you must deliver either 3 C-rank techniques, 2 B-rank technique or 1 A-rank technique
~The snake's jutsus count as one of the users 3 jutsus

*fixed* lol

~Approved~fixed it for you

Mathias · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Ame no Jutsu: Daun Botsuraku) - Rain Arts: Down Pour
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing three hand seals, the user will concentrate his chakra into falling rain. This will cause a down pour on the battle field, making the rain a lot more dense and to fall at a faster rate. When the down pour is active, B-Ranked and blow fire techniques will evaporate upon creation, and all fire techniques will lose -10 damage including the user's.

Can only be used once per battle.

The Technique is active for 5 turns or until the rain source is dealt with.

Must have mastery over water, and started rain training to use.

Must have a Rain source to use.

Must be taught by Luffy..

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Sakin: Mumikansou Tomurai) - Gold Dust: Dusty Funeral
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Like gaara's "Sand Waterfall Funeral" once the opponent is covered in gold dust, the user will concentrate his magnetism release on the dust and clench his fist, making the gold dust compact itself, crushing the target.

Can only be used twice per battle

No Gold Dust techniques for one turn.

Can only be used by the Fourth Kazekage

Must be taught by Luffy..

~Declined~ There are literally dozens of similar jutsu with many elements. There's a limit to re-using the same concept over and over again.

(Suiton: Mizu Heika) - Water Style: Water Arms
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will focus his water chakra and using the moister in the air he will materialize water of our nowhere in the shape of an arm. The arm can extend from any part of the users body to grab a hold of an object or enemy and crush or hold them from great distances. It can also be used to be pushed away and evade certain attacks.

Can only be used three times per battle

Must have complete mastery over water

From the great chakra manipulation being done, the user must be of Kage rank or above to perform the technique

Must be taught by Luffy..

~Declined~ Again, many many techniques are similar to this one, both with this element and with others.

(Fūton: Uindo Heika) - Wind Style: Wind Arms
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will focus his wind chakra throughout the air. Using great chakra manipulation the user will shape the wind into an arm. The arm can extend from any part of the users body to grab a hold of an object or enemy and crush or hold them from great distances. It can also be used to be pushed away and evade certain attacks.

Can only be used three times per battle

Must have complete mastery over wind

From the great chakra manipulation being done, the user must be of Kage rank or above to perform the technique

Must be taught by Luffy..

~Declined~ Same as above.

Don Roberto · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Custom Weapon:赤の女王 )- Red Queen
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The Red Queen is a customized version of the blades used by the Order of the Sword and designed by Scary Yamato. It has an ornately etched base, and appears to be modeled after the German Großes Messer (lit. "Great Knife"), but its most unique feature is that it has been specially customized with a motorcycle-like gear shift which, when pulled, creates a chakra connection across the blade and opponent, greatly increasing the power of its blows. This system, known as "Exceed", can be revved up to three times, and can be released in one incredibly powerful strike. This and several other modifications makes the Red Queen nearly impossible for anyone but Don Roberto to wield.
Exceed Level 1: +5 to attack ; -5 to chakra
Exceed level 2: +10 to attack ; -5 to chakra ; -5 health points
Exceed level 3: +20 to attack ; -10 chakra ; -20 health points.
-When my attack gets blocked Exceed automaticly gets dropped to normal state(level 0 from any level)
-When I stop using it after defeating an opponent or losing to him, my arms feel tired as Red Queen is very big, and I need to wait one battle before I use it again.
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~Approved~

Taiketsu Yagami · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Taiketsu Yagami said:
All this is allowed by Mig J.J. Quicksilver as he is too lazy to do this himself xd

(Ingram Mo-Do) Ingram Mode
Type:Mode
Rank:S
Range:All
Chakra:-20 each turn its maintained
Damage Points:N/A (+10 to nin/taijutsu)
Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user that was forged in the buzzard realm with a special alloy built for speed and defense that is also inbued with the chakra of the Buzzard Ingram, Storm Skyress' daughter and fuses with the user's own chakra. It grants the user immense speed aswell as a sturdy defense of being able to block incoming things besides jutsu and explosives. Due to their fused chakra, jutsu in need of chakra are enhanced and due to the armor and speed, physical attacks are more powerful.
Note:Last 3 turns
Note:+5 levels to the user's speed
Note:After deactivation the user is limited to B-rank and lower jutsu for 2 turns
Note:Can be activated twice but it must be a 6 turn interval after deactivation

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~Declined: You need to elaborate a LOT more on your abilities if you want to get this one approved. "Great speed", "great strength", "being able to block jutsu and kunai...etc", this is all so vague. What are the limits of your technique? Make it restricted cause modes are really hard to get approve~

I elaborated on the technique and bolded changes while taking out the boost in strength:

(Ingram Yoroi) Ingram Armor
Type:Mode
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra:50 (-15 each turn its maintained)[/B]
Damage Points:N/A (+15 to non-elemental ninjutsu)
Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user. Its called "The Ingram Armor" and it was forged in the buzzard realm with a very special alloy that is capable of channeling and absorbing a special form of chakra only found in the Buzzard realm (Similar to nature chakra but its not found in the normal world). The armor is a bit different as it is more of an exo-skeleton, partially fusing with the users own body. The armor regulates the body causing chakra to channel more fluently aswell as muscles to work to their full capacity and at the same time pumping that special chakra to fuse with the user's own. This causes the user's ninjutsu to be enhanced in power and also causes him/her to become faster and more reactive. The user gets speed and reaction time beyond a normal shinobi. The user's speed rises to that of a taijutsu master. Of course, due to the new level of speed and regulating of his/her system; The user gets the reaction time to match.
Notes:
-Can only last 3 turns at the most
-After deactivation, the user can only use B-rank ninjutsu for 2 turns (that includes elements)
-Can be activated twice but it must be sent back to buzzard realm and take 6 turns to absorb the special chakra.
-Can't use genjutsu in this armour
-The user takes damage from muscle exhaustion after useage and needs a turn to recuporate.(The person loses strength and speed on a large scale. Couldn't even beat up a todler xd)
-No taijustu after deactivation until done recuporating
-If activated a second time. After deactivation, the user will colapse from exhaustion and lose the battle.

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~Approved~ Well done. I made it clear in the damage section that it boosted the non-elemental ninjutsu.

(Meiton: Kuro Munashii) Dark Release: Dark Void
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60(+20 if used Inhaling maw before hand)
Description: The user forms a giant sphere of dark chakra and compresses it into a soccer ball sized sphere within a matter of seconds. He then throws or kicks it at high speeds toward the opponent and once it reaches its mark, the user makes the tiger hand seal causing it to explode, releasing a wave of bone shattering force while still retaining its circular shape making it looks as if a void just appeared in the area around the person(s). The void is so dark that it hinders the vision of those inside unless they have a dojutsu.(If not defeated by the attack)
-Usable 2 times
-Must be a two turn interval before using this technique again
-The void last as long as the after effect of using rasen shuriken
-Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami

~Declined do not resubmit~ This type of jutsu as been done countless times in almost all the elements. There's a limit to how many time you can copy/paste a jutsu to another element.

(Buzzard Kuchoiyse: Slip Stream) Buzzard Summoning Technique: Slip Stream
Rank:S
Type:Summoning
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage: Depends on used tech.
Description: Slip Stream is the fastest of all buzzards in the buzzard realm and is another guardian of Storm Skyress. Slip Stream is only big enough to carry two people on her back, but her small size has no effect on her power. When Slip-Stream is in the air, she moves so fast that if you where standing there as she flew by, all u would see is a black blur pass u. Also just like almost every other buzzard, Slip-Stream is capable of using wind style techniques up to A-rank. What gave her the rank of guardian is her original technique called "Slip Stream Assault" where she cause her wings to become sharp as swords by using wind manipulation and uses her awesome speed to slash the opponent at breakneck, causing major damage which would have the equivalent power of S-rank.
*Can only be summoned twice*
*Can only stay on the field for 3 turns*
*Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami to those with Buzzard contract*
*All her techniques are considered one of the three jutsu*

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~Approved~ Took out the part where you cut someone in half and replaced it with the bold part.

I really hope the air trecks get approved. Feel free to edit anything u feel needs editting because I tried to put it in Naruto context as much as possible. I have a lot of ideas for that jutsu including roads and a form of taijutsu. If anything just no declined and do not resubmit!

Buzzard Kuchoiyse: Air Trecks
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:25
Damage:N/A
Description: Just like most other contract signers who can summon items from those respective worlds, people who have signed the buzzard contract eventually learn to summon Air Trecks or A-Ts. The original contract signers created these to almost fly with the buzzards and where called "Gravity Children" by those who used them. Air Trecks can be considered modified skates with special abilities that allowed the users to do remarkable things. The naturally granted abilities of summoning the air trecks are being able to move fast without using a lot of energy and having more air time when jumping while also being able to wall ride on earth or riding across water by channeling chakra into the wheels. (Similar to walking up a tree or walkin on water but with air trecks) What really makes them special is that they can be equiped with "Regalias" which give the air trecks a special ability. The regalias known so far are the "Wind, Flame, Jade, Thorn, Fang, and Gem Regalias". Each of the regalias have a special abiltiy that can give the user an edge in battle although only one can be used per summoning.
Notes:
-Can be summoned 3x
-The skates last 5 turns each unless summoned back
-Can only be used by those with the Buzzard summoning contract
-Can only be taught by Taiketsu Yagami
-The speed of the user while wearing these is even faster than if he/she was running. (Example: I would move faster than a Sannin who is a taijutsu specialist)
-The user can have the skates by themselves without the regalia but if they have a regalia equiped, they must post the jutsu for that regalia which essentially count as two jutsu for that turn
-Once one pair of A-Ts have been broken, the user cannot summon another pair with same regalia
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Note: All Regalia abilities are submitted as seperate jutsu...

~Declined~ believe it or not, something very similar was submitted long ago, by Akira I think. Anyway, similar technique already exist.

(Tei Trecks: Kaze Regalia)Air Trecks: Wind Regalia "Moonstruck Drop Bagram "
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:N/A(+20 to activate road ability)
Damage: N/A (When road is active, +5 to "Infinty Atmosphere" Nintaijutsu)
Description: The most useful of all forms of regalia. The wind regalia converts the A-Ts making them adept in the use of wind style allowing for a very special form of nintaijutsu known as the "Infinity Atmosphere Wind Road" which is made by the use of wind manipulation. The A-Ts are able to do this because of its build up. The wheels and soles are able to channel and compress air around them, allowing for a variety of wind based nintaijutsu such as "Infinity Atmosphere Pile Tornado". The next ability is that the user can release a seal on the back wheels unleashing the "The Wing Road" where the back wheels will construct into wings. This will allow the user to glide through the air and ground while also being able to jump as high as mid-range, making it seem as if the user was flying! It also makes "Infinity Atmosphere wind Road" nintaijutsu even more powerful.
Notes:
-Must be used at the same time as Buzzard Kuchoiyse: Air Trecks
-Wing Road can only be activated twice and each time last a full turn
-The user can glide through the air for 40 seconds
-After being activated a second time, the A-Ts break and therefore are summoned back to Buzzard Realm
-The user can only use "Air Gear" taijutsu and "Infinity Atmosphere Wind Road" nintaijutsu while using this regalia

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Activated Wing Road

I'd also like to point out if approved that air gear taijutsu is a form of taijutsu for the A-Ts themselves since the user wouldn't be able to perform regular taijutsu. Although each regalia allows an Infinity Atmosphere allowing for a nintaijutsu only usable by wearing that particular regalia. I'll submit examples on my next round of CJs if approved

~Declined~ Since the Air Treks were declined.

Phobos · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton: Tedi!)- Ice Release: Teddy!
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Tange: Short-long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User creates a large polar bear made of ice, the bear on all four is as tall as the user. The user can ride the bear, use it as a shield or simply send it to attack, though, once send to attack, it cannot be used again. The Bear can be ridden for three full turns before letting it attack.

- Twice per battle
- No Ice jutsu higher then S-rank for the following turn

~Approved~ Added the bold part.

(Hyouton: Yuki no Utsukushi-sa)- Ice Release: The Beauty of Snowflakes
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Tange: Short-long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: When it is snowing, the user sends large amount of chakra into the air enlarging the falling snowflakes. The snowflakes practicaly become ice shurikens. Using wind the user adds speed to the snowflakes , instead of just letting them fall to the ground, creating a barrage of ice shurikens hitting designed target.

- Must be already snowing
- Twice per battle

~Declined~ Similar jutsu already exist.

(Hyouton: Shainingugāden)- Ice Release: The Shining Garden
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Tange: Short-long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user sends large amounts of chakra into the ground and covers the field with flowers of all kinds that are made of ice. It first starts as thin layer of ice covering all unliving objects up to the 3 meters above ground, from the ice the flowers then quickly grow up. The flowers are large (mostly 3 meters high, few of them can be higer- up to 5 meters) and they are made of very clear ice making them transparent and allowing some sort of vision through them (though mostly unclear and distorted as the ice is bending ligh). If the flowers are not destroyed by enemy's next move, they (the turn after) all shatter into tiny pieces of ice, blinding everyone (including the user) by the high amount of light that is reflected.

- Once per battle

~Declined~ And how are the damages done exactly?

(Raiton: Gyaku kaminariu) -Lightning Release: Reverse lightning
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user makes a single handseal and send their lightning chakra into the ground to a designated spot (usualy under enemy) where it is then discharged into the sky in form of a lightning.

- Four times per battle

~Declined~ Already exist and OP

(Katon: Kukkī)- Fire Release: Cookie
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Tange: Short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focus their fire chakra into the ground (it is created similiar to "Firing Biscuit technique"- on a specific place rather than releasing fire from mouth), creating an underground fire, though, it lasts only for very short time as there is nearly no air underground. Although the fire lasts only for a short moment, the superheated fire chakra causes the earth to heat up significantly, burning anyone who get caught underground by the technique.

- Three times per battle

~Declined~ Elaborate on how the fire is created and where, I didn't get that part. Did you make a whole in the ground and shot the fire in or are you simply creating fire from nothingness and heating all the ground around you?

mandara uchiha · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

earth style: raging stomp
Rank:d
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: none if a circle stomp, if guided 20 damage
Description... you gather a small amount of chakra to your foot (left for me) and stomp on the ground and exert the chakra from you foot cracking the ground about 5 feet around you in a circle or you can guide the chakra to the your enemy to cause mild damage to your ememy by burning there feet with your chakra. note this hurts your foot so 10 damage backlash

~Declined~ Put a Japanese name, take out the "backlash" damage, this ain't a forbidden technique.

Wind style: single air shot
rank:d
range:medium to far
damage:20
chakra intake:10
description... you preform the hand signs tiger, snake, dragon... then you hold tiger for 2 seconds and gather a small amount of chakra to your hands and put you hands together strait in front of you and say Go! and a small wind burst will shoot at your foe, once it hits them i will send them flying back 5 or 10 feet (depends on size and Strength) and barly burns the skin or clothes

~Declined~ Same as above for the name, also take out the part about the wind burning your opponent. Make it "slight cuts".

Mephistopheles · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Leaf said:
(Genjutsu: Sasayaki) - Illusion Technique: Whispers
Rank: A 
Type: Defence/Offence  
Range: Short/Long 
Chakra Cost: 30  
Damage Points: N/A 
Description: After the opponent is trapped in this Genjutsu, he will start to hear whispers around him, distracting him as he tries to find out who is talking and where it’s coming from. With every turn this Genjutsu is still active, the whispers will be louder until it's as loud as screaming in the opponents ear, disturbing the opponent.
- Note: The Genjutsu lasts until it’s broken, 3 turns or the fight ended, whichever comes first.
- Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
- Note: Can only be taught by Leaf.

~Declined~ Make it Short-Mid range and explain how you cast the genjutsu.

(Doton: Sokonashi Pitto no Iwagakure) – Earth Release: Bottomless Pit of Iwagakure
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 65
Description: The user performs two handseals (Ram → Rabbit) and stamps on the ground, creating big spikes that emerge with high speed from the ground before and on both sides of the opponent, forcing them to either jump backwards or upwards, while at the same time a huge pit, 3 to 5 meters wide, 10 to 30 meters deep and steep enough to make sure the opponent can't climb out, is created directly (approximately 2 steps) behind the opponent without them knowing it. As the user jumps backwards he will fall into the 'bottomless' pit.
- Note: The user must have mastered Doton.
- Note: The jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
- Note: The jutsu can only be performed while the users feet touch earth.
- Note: Can only be taught by Leaf.

~Declined~ Change the description on this jutsu, you're making it sound as if it was unavoidable to jump in the pit. Someone could very well jump sideways or far behind and over the pit. Never assume you know what your opponent will do.

Resubmitting. Again, feel free to change anything to make it approvable.

(Genjutsu: Sasayaki) - Illusion Technique: Whispers
Rank: A 
Type: Defence/Offence  
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30  
Damage Points: N/A 
Description: The user focuses his chakra while making 3 hand seals and looking into the opponent's eyes, and disrupts their chakra flow to trap them into the genjutsu. After the opponent is trapped in this Genjutsu, he will start to hear whispers around him, distracting him as he tries to find out who is talking and where it’s coming from. With every turn this Genjutsu is still active, the whispers will be louder until it's as loud as screaming in the opponents ear, disturbing the opponent.
- Note: The Genjutsu lasts until it’s broken, 3 turns or the fight ended, whichever comes first.
- Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
- Note: Can only be taught by Leaf.

~Approved~ Added a small part about hand seals in the description

(Doton: Sokonashi Pitto no Iwagakure) – Earth Release: Bottomless Pit of Iwagakure
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 65
Description: The user performs two handseals (Ram → Rabbit) and stamps on the ground, creating big spikes that emerge with high speed from the ground before and on both sides of the opponent, while at the same time a huge pit, 3 to 5 meters wide, 10 to 30 meters deep and steep enough to make sure the opponent can't climb out, is created directly (approximately 2 steps) behind the opponent without them knowing it. Because most of the opponents probably focus on escaping from the spikes they will not see the pit behind them and are more likely to fall into it by avoiding the spikes.
- Note: The user must have mastered Doton.
- Note: The jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
- Note: The jutsu can only be performed while the users feet touch earth.
- Note: Can only be taught by Leaf.

~Approved~

New:

(Doton/Suiton: Deibījōnzu no Rokkā) – Earth/Water Release: Davy Jones’ Locker
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 55
Damage points: 95
Description: The user performs eight handseals (Snake → Ram → Horse → Rabbit → Ram → Horse → Hare →Tiger) and stamps on the ground, raising 4 walls and a roof made of solid rock in a little more than a blink of an eye to make a ‘locker’ in which the opponent will be trapped. The walls and roof are solid and infused with the users chakra, making them almost inescapable, also because the walls and roof are so close to the opponent that he cannot stretch his arm. After the opponent is trapped the user stretches his arms before him, palms out, and summons a huge amount of water that will form a layer of water on the ground that reaches 1 meter above the roof of the stone ‘locker’ in which the opponent is trapped, and thus changes the battlefield into a lake. When the water is summoned and the user stands on top of it he uses his focused chakra into the roof of the ‘locker’ to make it collapse, allowing the water that pressed upon it to crash onto the opponent, drowning him.
- Note: The user must have mastered Doton and Suiton.
- Note: The jutsu can only be used once a battle.
- Note: The jutsu can only be performed while on the ground.
- Note: The user cannot perform a water jutsu in the same turn as Davy Jones’ Locker is used.
- Note: Due to the amount of water summoned, the user can’t use any water related jutsu above C-rank for the following turn and no water related jutsu above A-rank in the turn thereafter.
- Note: After this jutsu is used the battlefield will become lake-like.
- Note: The user will be more vulnerable for lightning wile performing this jutsu and directly thereafter.
- Note: Can only be taught by Leaf.

~Declined~ A very similar technique was recently approved:
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Mockingbird · Sep 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Jacob Moore said:
Resubmitting, doing what Izuna told me.

(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Akira
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Akira is the first born son of Taz, the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's as well as Jacob's personal summon. Unlike most of his kind, he is extremely relaxed, never over-reacting, and always analyzing his each situation presented to him. Akira has black fur, as well as a stripe of white fur across his chest. Akira's size dwarf's that of trees, and some buildings, he is also capable of changing the size of his body, so that his size doesn't become a nuisance in certain situations (Like Gamatatsu). In his shrunken state, he stands at around 1 foot tall, and can stand on the user's shoulder. Unlike other members of his species Being the first born son of Taz, Akira is one of the most powerful of his species. He specializes in Earth Style Ninjutsu.

~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
~Akira can only use up to C Rank Earth jutsu.

(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Taz
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Taz is the leader of the Tasmanian Devil species, and Jacob's summoning boss. Taz is bigger than his son Akira, and dwarfs him by 25 meters. But unlike his son, he is unable to manipulate the size of his body. Taz is notorious for his extremely short temper and little patience. If there's one this that does make Taz happy, its food. His appetite knows no bounds, and he will eat anything and everything in sight if given the opportunity. Taz's anger tends to get the best of him, as he usually lashes out at anyone who so much as looks at him the wrong way. Being the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's, Taz is also the strongest of his kind. Taz has two elemental affinities. The first of which is Earth, and the second is Fire. Taz has become very adept at using these two elements, and often uses them in collaboration to create more devastating effects.

~Taz has mastery over the Earth element, and can use jutsu up to the same level known by the user.
~Remains on the field for 4 turns

(Genjutsu:Hanahadashii Supi_do)-Illusion Technique:Flash
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Self
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:After first performing the 6 needed handseals for this jutsu, the user then opens its abilities to him/herself, meaning that you wouldn't have to perform the handseals again unless you deactivated the jutsu. This is a self inflicting Genjutsu, just liek Izanagi. By activating this jutsu, the user places them self under the influence of their own Genjutsu. While under the influence of the jutsu, the user alters their own perception of time so that it appears that everything is moving in slow motion, whereas usually, you would alter an enemy's perception of time. Once your perception of time has been slowed down, you enter your own new "Time Zone" where you can walk around normally, while everything around you "seems" to be moving extremely slow.

~The effects of the jutsu cannot be used 2 turns consecutively
~Can only use two jutsu next turn.
~Cannot use any other Ninjutsu while this jutsu is active. This leaves the user left only capable of using Taijutsu, and Kenjutsu.
~The effects can only be used 3 times per battle

My idea for this jutsu, is for one to control time in relation to yourself, and alter my own perception of time. By doing this, I would be able to enter a zone of time, where everything is either slowed down, or the latter, where time is sped up. One would go about doing this the same way Izanagi is used, by placing ones self under their own Genjutsu. Then, like Tsukuyomi, I alter my own perception of time, and enter my own distorted "Time Zone."

(Suzumebachi)-Hornet
Rank:S
Type:Weapon
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Is a black and gold gauntlet that has a small chain linking it to a stinger-like blade on the wielder's middle finger. The gaunlet is comprised of Steel, making it incredibly strong and resilient. The "stinger" is about twice as long as the normal length of one's middle finger, slightly increasing the users striking distance. Inside the stinger, a compartment for poison is hidden. Upon striking, or even cutting an enemy, the poison is released into their blood stream. This poison takes effect on the surrounding muscle tissue, numbing the enemy in that area. The poison will slowly spread to the rest the enemies body, throughout the remainder of the fight (Around 6 turns to completely numb the body) The colors and pattern of the resemble those of a hornet, fitting for it's name. In this form, Suzumebachi is still capable of withstanding an opponent's sword attacks, by using the stinger and gaunlet portions.

~Can only be wielded by Jacob Moore
~Because of the shape, and size of the Gaunlet, it makes it difficult to perform handseals, and thus the user is unable to use any Ninjutsu that require the use of handseals while wearing it.

~All declined~ Over weekly submission.

You've posted 4 here and 2 here:

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You are hereby banned from this thread (9/20/2011) until the end of the current submission (9/25/2011). You ban will be lifted on the 26th of September.

Resubmitting, as my ban from the thread is over now.

(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Akira
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Akira is the first born son of Taz, the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's as well as Jacob's personal summon. Unlike most of his kind, he is extremely relaxed, never over-reacting, and always analyzing his each situation presented to him. Akira has black fur, as well as a stripe of white fur across his chest. Akira's size dwarf's that of trees, and some buildings, he is also capable of changing the size of his body, so that his size doesn't become a nuisance in certain situations (Like Gamatatsu). In his shrunken state, he stands at around 1 foot tall, and can stand on the user's shoulder. Unlike other members of his species Being the first born son of Taz, Akira is one of the most powerful of his species. He specializes in Earth Style Ninjutsu.

~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
~Akira can only use up to C Rank Earth jutsu.

~Approved~

(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Taz)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Taz
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Taz is the leader of the Tasmanian Devil species, and Jacob's summoning boss. Taz is bigger than his son Akira, and dwarfs him by 25 meters. But unlike his son, he is unable to manipulate the size of his body. Taz is notorious for his extremely short temper and little patience. If there's one this that does make Taz happy, its food. His appetite knows no bounds, and he will eat anything and everything in sight if given the opportunity. Taz's anger tends to get the best of him, as he usually lashes out at anyone who so much as looks at him the wrong way. Being the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's, Taz is also the strongest of his kind. Taz has two elemental affinities. The first of which is Earth, and the second is Fire. Taz has become very adept at using these two elements, and often uses them in collaboration to create more devastating effects.

~Taz has mastery over the Earth element, and can use jutsu up to the same level known by the user.
~Remains on the field for 4 turns

~Declined~ make him use only 1 element. I don't know who started this "2 elements per summon" trend, but as far as I can remember, boos summons were always specialized in 1 element up to S-rank. I'll set this straight for coming summons too.

New submissions..

(Genjutsu:Hanahadashii Supi_do)-Illusion Technique:Flash
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Self
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:After first performing the 6 needed handseals to activate the Genjutsu. Once under the influence of the Genjutsu, the user remains under the influence until the word "Release" Is spoken. By activating this jutsu, the user places them self under the influence of their own Genjutsu. While under the influence of the jutsu, the user alters their own perception of time so that it appears that everything is moving in slow motion, whereas usually, you would alter an enemy's perception of time. Once your perception of time has been slowed down, you enter your own new "Time Zone" where you can walk around normally, while everything around you "seems" to be moving extremely slow.

~The effects of the jutsu cannot be used 2 turns consecutively
~Can only use two jutsu next turn.
~Cannot use any other Ninjutsu while this jutsu is active. This leaves the user left only capable of using Taijutsu, and Kenjutsu.
~The effects can only be used 3 times per battle

My idea for this jutsu, is for one to control time in relation to yourself, and alter my own perception of time. By doing this, I would be able to enter a zone of time, where everything is either slowed down, or the latter, where time is sped up. One would go about doing this the same way Izanagi is used, by placing ones self under their own Genjutsu. Then, like Tsukuyomi, I alter my own perception of time, and enter my own distorted "Time Zone."

~Declined~ no alteration of time and a similar jutsu exist.

(Suzumebachi)-Hornet
Rank:S
Type:Weapon
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Is a black and gold gauntlet that has a small chain linking it to a stinger-like blade on the wielder's middle finger. The gaunlet is comprised of Steel, making it incredibly strong and resilient. The "stinger" is about twice as long as the normal length of one's middle finger, slightly increasing the users striking distance. Inside the stinger, a compartment for poison is hidden. Upon striking, or even cutting an enemy, the poison is released into their blood stream. This poison takes effect on the surrounding muscle tissue, numbing the enemy in that area. The poison will slowly spread to the rest the enemies body, throughout the remainder of the fight (Around 6 turns to completely numb the body) The colors and pattern of the resemble those of a hornet, fitting for it's name. In this form, Suzumebachi is still capable of withstanding an opponent's sword attacks, by using the stinger and gaunlet portions.

~Can only be wielded by Jacob Moore
~Because of the shape, and size of the Gaunlet, it makes it difficult to perform handseals, and thus the user is unable to use any Ninjutsu that require the use of handseals while wearing it.

~Declined~ Only med-sensei can submit poison related techniques

Professor Sarutobi · Sep 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Professor Sarutobi said:
](Jishaku Ninpou:magunechikku arashi) - Magnetic ninja art: Magnetic Storm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: User spreads his magnetic chakra across the field up to mid range away from him, using it to take control of all metal objects not sealed away including metal ninja tools in both user and enemies weapon pouches and make them float high into the air and gather together to form a "cloud" of weapons/scrap around a magnetic center where the metal objects are then directed at the enemy at high speed.
-Requires no hand seals but the user raises both arms to direct the metal into the sky and brings them down to attack with the "cloud"
- twice per battle
- can't use weapons until they are gathered together thus can't be used on the enemy at point blank range upon taking control.
- only magnetism bios can use
- only taught by Professor Sarutobi

~Declined do not resubmit~ I've discussed about this jutsu with other mods and it we decided not to approve this one.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Konpaku guntai) Magnetic Ninja Art: Ghost Army
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User touches his bracelets and summons 30 long swords with his seals that he then spreads magnetism chakra into to take control of making the swords float in the air like they are being weilded by invisible men. The swords can't float higher then 2 meters above the ground and can't be controled past mid range from the user. User can only use Magnetism jutsu while this is active.
-Swords can be controled for up to 2 turns.
-2 times per battle.
-Only Magnetism bios can use
-Only Professor Sarutobi can use.
(feel free to change times per battle or turns if you like im not to picky about it if you want me/you to lower it to 2 or once per battle.)

~Approved~

(Jishaku Ninpou:magunetto zonbi) Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombies
Type: Attack
Rank: D-Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10-50
Damage Points: 20-90
Description: the user unrolls one of the 5 scrolls that contain his Magnet Zombie creations and uses the scroll to summon one of his "Zombies" to the field, where he then uses his Magnetism powers to control it like a puppet by using different polarities and metals to move their bodies at will. These Magnet Zombies vary in build and abilities and each contain their own limits and an increase in the amount of concentration it takes for the user to control them the more advanced the summoned creation is. Once a Magnet Zombie is destroyed the remaining metal from them isn't poofed away and can be used for other attacks.
-Can't use anything but magnetism ninjutsu while controling a Magnet Zombie.
-D Rank Summons have no turn limit but are very slow and weak can have up to 4 out at a time due to barely empowering them with movement. have a simple ability that can be used once per zombie.

Magnet Zombie: Mindless One
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: User unrolls his first scroll and summons up to 4 Mindless Ones. They move slowly and are armed only with a single bomb tag inside their mouth and sharp iron claws and teeth,the user can make a single hand seal to set off the tag inside the mindless one(s) head, reducing it to a headless heap of scrap
-Scrap stays on field for the rest of the battle
-Only Magnetism bios can use
-Only used by Professor Sarutobi.

-C Rank Summons have a 5 turn limit and can use their seperate "ability" (bomb tag or kunai attachments on them) once.

Magnet Zombie: Wretched Ones
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: User unrolls his 2nd scroll and summons up to 2 Wretched Ones. They move slowly but each carry an iron ball filled with bomb tags (size of a watermelon)
-Can't throw iron ball but user can set it off with a single hand seal, destroying the ball and zombie in a large explosion.
-Scrap remains on the field for the rest of the battle
-Only Magnetism bios can use
-Only used by Professor Sarutobi.

-B Rank Summons have a 4 turn limit and can use their seperate ability twice (different then C rank)
-A Rank Summons have a 3 turn limit and can use a unique ability (built in mechanism) once.
-S Rank Summons have a 3 turn limit and can use a unique ability (built in mechanism) once, using the ability reduces one turn they are active.
-Forbidden Rank Summons have a 1 turn limit and can use a unique ability (user powered) once.
-Can only summon 4 D ranks, 2 C rank and 1 B rank or above per battle.
-Can't have differently ranked summons out at once or summon more while controling zombies already.
-Only Magnetism bios can use.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

i put an example for D and C ranked ones, i'll make more or VM/PM the B and above to you if you want otherwise i'll submit them later and add them into this one in spoilers and post this and state the rank being summoned.

Hope this works >.>

~All Approved~ This is brilliant. I've changed the A-rank summon to 3 turns overall and the Forbidden-rank to 1 turn overall. Can't wait to see the rest this jutsu/summon ^^

(Jishaku ninpou: Jishaku Kage Bunshin) -Magnetic Ninja Arts: Magnetic Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his magnetism chakra.When the clone gets hit he will disperse but unknown to the enemy of the clone dispersion happens in short range of them they are given a huge magnetic charge turning them into a living magnet for 2 turns. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well. Note: Can only use magnetism based techniques up to B rank.

~Declined~ This doesn't make any sense. The area where it was disperse could, to some extent, be magnetized, but not your opponent.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Magunetto Zonbi: Dendou Ichi) Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombie: Electric One
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40 ( damage of b rank jutsu )
Description: User unrolls his 3rd scroll and summons an Electric One. These are Magnet Zombies that contain 3 seals in it, 1 located in the head like other magnet zombies that can be used to turn the zombie into a shrapnel bomb when needed. The other 2 with B rank lightning jutsus sealed in them, one on the chest another on the tongue and are both able to be used with a single hand seal by kid. The chest seal contains

(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) -Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

The tongue seal contains

(Raiton: Gian Yari) -Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

-One use per seal
- chest seal jutsu stays connected by a lightning bolt to the tag itself.
-Using lightning jutsu through the zombie counts towards the users 3 turns.
-Only Magnetism bios can use
-After both electric seals are used, the Zombie becomes useless and falls apart.
-Only Professor Sarutobi can use.

~Approved~. Added the bold part btw.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Magunetto Zonbi: Bruno ) Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombie: Bruno
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User unrolls his 4th scroll and summons Bruno. Bruno is a heavily built Magnet Zombie that is made with dense metals that can't be pierced by normal weapons. this zombie moves slowly but its design lets it perform most strong arm taijutsu and deal bone breaking punches. Slow due to its heavy metal but very hard to destroy. Bruno also has a compartment in his chest that can open and fire 40 bomb tag kunai out from a spring loaded mechanism as well as several bomb tags in his head set so the user can turn his head into a bomb like other zombies.
- one use for chest tags and counts towards users 3 moves
- Size of A the 4th raikage and head has a slightly similar design with yellow gold attached to Bruno head to look like A's hair and beard.
-Only Magnetism bios can use
-Only Professor Sarutobi can use.

~Approved~

(Jishaku Ninpou: Magunetto Zonbi: Arnold)Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombie: Arnold
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: User unrolls his 5th scroll and summons his Arnold zombie. This is the stronger versions of the Bruno zombies and are even more heavily armored and powerful. Can withstand up to A rank attacks without being destroyed and has a large chest compartment that stores a scroll of weapons containing 10 swords, 20 kunai and 40 shuriken stored within itself. The weapons can be taken out of the scroll and used for magnetism jutsus quickly by using some of the already flowing chakra being used to control Arnold himself. Arnold also has 50 bomb tags all located inside its head and should the need arise can be detonated with a single hand seal, using arnold's head and shoulders as sharpnel to damage the enemy (if in short range)
-If the weapons are used from his scroll Arnold loses a turn of use due to taking the magnetism chakra from him to quickly control the weapons.
-Only Magnetism bios can use.
-Only Professor Sarutobi can use.

~Declined~ Make it more vulnerable, resisting any amount of A-rank is just too OP and lower the amount of bombs in his head, he's not a nuke lol.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Magunetto Zonbi:Bullseye) Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombie: Bullseye
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: User claps his hands together and summons a 6th huge scroll that, like his other 5 scrolls contain one of his Magnet Zombie creations. This huge scroll contains Eustrass Kid's most monsterous Magnet Zombie to date, the Bullseye creation is as tall as Gamabunta and dressed in a huge black robe, on its forehead is a massive Bullseye hence the name.
After unrolling the scroll and summoning Bullseye underneath the user (user is standing on the scroll when performing the summon and his head after the summon) the user opens a compartment in Bullseye's head then steps into it then closing it effectivly keeping himself inside bullseye's heavily armored head and begins focusing his chakra into the head and body and after 30 seconds a huge wave of chakra is released from bullseye who extends his arms straight out to each side (making the aftermath seem like a large scale shinra tensei), destroying everything around him leaving a deep crater around him. This, being Kid's largest zombie is very heavily armored and made of very rare chakra metal that allows kid to infuse with his chakra and thus use this powerful blast from the inside of Bullseye without taking damage. After the blast wave Bullseye remains on the field but user is too drained to use him again for the rest of the battle.
-Only Magnetism bios can use.
-Cant use any other jutsu after Bullseye is used that turn.
-Blast leaves a huge crater up to mid range the size of konoha after pain destroys it, long range ground isn't destroyed but anyone above ground during the blast would be hit with enough force to stun for 2 turns.
-After using this the user can't use magnetism jutsu for 4 turns, can't use ninjutsu above c rank for 2 turns and can't summon any magnet zombies for the rest of the battle.
-Only Professor Sarutobi can use.

~Declined~ No Shinra Tensei rip-off, change that part and explain how magnetism could create a blast. Why is this even forbidden? There's no physical drawbacks whatsoever.

Inch · Sep 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kokoro to Karada: Ōbāraido)-Mind and Body: Override
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user begins by concentrating on a command that they want the target to perform. They then hold out their hands in the gesture that is used for Mind Body Switch Technique. Using a similar method to the Mind Body Switch Technique, the user releases this command through their hands, however, the user only projects this lone thought, thus their consciousness stays in their own body. The thought then travels in a similar manner to Mind Body Switch Technique, in that it travels in a straight line and is released from the hands. When the thought enters the body of the opponent, it overpowers their control on their nervous system and forces their body to carry out the command issued in the thought. Because the thought is simply overpowering their control on their nervous system, the user is able to witness/be aware of what is taking place.
Note: The effects of this justu last a maximum of ten seconds. Thus, should the command not be carried it out within ten seconds, the technique ends anyways.
Note: Once the command is complete, control of the target's body is instantly returned to themselves.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
Note: Can only be used my members of the Yamanaka Clan.

~Declined do not resubmit~ OP. You could simply command your opponent to stab himself and that's the end of it. The mind-body confusion is acceptable because damage done while in the opponent's body reflect on the user.

(Kokoro to Karada: Seishin Sakuran)-Mind and Body: Mental Confusion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user enters the mind of the opponent by using their Yamanaka Clan Telepathy Technique. The user then immediately rapidly transmits a large multitude of battle tactics into the target's mind. Due to the overload of thoughts, the target becomes extremely confused as they try to sort out what tactic they were actually intending to use. Because of this, the target's strategy/move is interrupted as they are unable to fully comprehend the thoughts that are rapidly fleeting into their mind.
Note: Because of the large amount of focus this takes, the user is unable to perform other actions while doing this.
Note: Because of the general uncertainty/confusion this technique causes, the target is unable to decide on a tactic.
Note: This technique has a maximum upkeep of three seconds.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
Note: Can only be used by members of the Yamanaka Clan.

~Declined~ The Yamanaka clan's technique are a very touchy bunch. When we saw Ino get into Sakura's body, we were able to witness the battle going out in her body between the two minds, hence I will ask you to put a restriction among those lines:

-Doesn't work against opponent of same rank or higher
-Work at 50% against someone one rank lower
-...

(Fūton: Toppū no Shureddā)-Wind Release: Gust Shredder
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes two hand seals and manipulates the air to the sides of a target so that several blades of wind are formed. There are five blades on each side, and although they are very thin, they are roughly a meter long and are positioned so that they are parallel with flat ground. The blades then rapidly move inwards on the target. Due to the sharpness and number of the blades, the target is usually sliced to ribbons.
Note: The blades must be created at least a foot away from the target.
Note: The turn after this is used, the user is unable to use S Rank wind.
Note: Can only be used twice.

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

(Fūton: Idaina Kaze no Suramu)-Wind Release: Great Wind Slam
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user due to chakra strain.)
Description: The user makes a single hand seals and begins manipulating the air surrounding the target. The user manipulates the air so that it suddenly moves into the enemy. The air isn't moving in a vortex/spinning pattern. It is all just being pulled directly at the target. Because of this, the amount of pressure being put on the target prevents them from moving as well as doing a severe amount of damage to their skeleton and organs. Because of the fact that the air around the target is moving towards them, anything that is in the air will also be pulled towards a target. This includes people standing near the target, which could also include the user. Any others (once again, including the user) caught up in this will be put under the same effects as the target once they reach the center.
Note: The air effected by this jutsu will span a five meter radius from the target.
Note: Can only be used once per match.
Note: Once this technique has been used, the user is unable to perform B-Rank or above wind techniques for the rest of the match due to chakra exhaustion.
Note: Due to the amount of chakra this jutsu uses, only one other jutsu can be used on the turn this is used.
Note: Due to exhaustion, the user's speed and reflexes will be slowed for the turn this is used and the following turn.
Note: This lasts for a maximum of ten seconds.

~Declined~ This is too similar to Vacuum release (look it up) while being OP.

(Hyoton: Kōri no Risheipu)-Ice Release: Ice Reshape
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates the chakra in ice that they created and begins manipulating it so that the ice will change shape according to the users will. Because this isn't adding ice to the object, the mass must stay the same, although the shape is changeable.
Note: Can only be used on ice created by the user.

Yamanaka and Yuki bios are in my sig. Feel free to edit.

~Declined~ Restrictions? I won't allow you to change the whole field if it were to be covered with ice.

Goro Kaguya · Sep 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Sairen no komori-uta) - Water Style: The Siren's Lullaby
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: Upon making the tiger handseal the users water chakra is seeped into the air. After one complete turn water materializes around the user to form a prism of water that completely surrounds them engulfing the entire area around them(50m x25m x50m). The dome can act like a prison that captures user and nearby targets. Prism also functions as a water source for jutsu. All within must escape with two turns of activation, or will drown unless they can breath underwater. Undetectable (when "charging up") unless chakra sensory or chakra reading doujutsu is used.
Note: Usable twice per battle
User can only use one other jutsu same turn this jutsu is used.
No ninjutsu for one turn after second use.

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