[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[~Tempa E~]

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(Resurāsutairu : Dōteki Yari) wrestling style: Dynamic Spear

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rank: A
type: offensive
range: short-medium
chakra cost: 30
damage: 60
The user covers themselves in raiton chakra then jumps forward at extremly high speeds to smash into the opponent then grabbing them with his arms and launches them into the ground or a vertical surface.
~can only be used twice per battle~

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(Kage☆Boshi) Shadow☆star

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rank:A
type: offensive
range short-long
chakra cost: 30
damage: 60
The user extends his shadow around him and people like shadows start to form upwards. The user then manipulates the shadows arms and shoots them at high speeds towards the enemy so they look like large black ropes they can then pierce the enemy or connect to his shadow and control him from there (like shadow imitation).
~can only be used twice per battle~

add a shadow restriction like cant use above B rank next turn

(Panda Resuringu☆Boshi ) panda wrestling☆star

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rank: A
type: offensive
range:short
chakra cost:30
damage: n/a
The user slams his hand on a flat surface and creates a panda summon roughly around the size of Gamakichi. The pandala is from levvy a parralle universe of summons . This panda summon can use all wrestling related moves that are up to A rank.
note: he can use my custom wrestling moves
~only to be summoned once per fight~
~lasts three turn~

Approved

 

[ZK]

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Resubmitting some stuff.

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Freestyle art Mega legs = Furīāto Mega ashi
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The second stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech, the user focuses great amounts of chakra in his legs and feet, and surrounds them with wind chakra, this techniques allows the user to temporarily enhance the strength of his legs, by strengthening the tissue and muscles in the users legs. The wind chakra around the users legs, serves as a wall for the great amount of chakra which is release when this technique is used, this “wall” is controlled by the user, and can be used to fire a shot of concentrated wind chakra, simply by releasing some of the chakra, which will build up in the users legs because of the technique. As long as this technique is active, the user gains a 10+ damage to any Taijutsu which involves using ones legs, and a great boost in speed, similar to Lee in 2 gate release without weights. this technique has some major drawbacks though, when it ends the user will be completely drained of strength in his/her legs, and unable to use advanced techniques for some time.
Notes:
• Can only be used once per battle.
• Lasts for three turns.
• When the technique ends, the user will be unable to move his legs for the rest of the match.
• The shot of wind chakra can be used twice, but can be fired at the same time, (in one jutsu).
• No B-ranked or higher techniques for three turns after this technique ends, and the user may only use techniques that don’t require the use of his/her legs.
• Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.

last i heard, gates mimics weren't allowed anymore...
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Freestyle art Ultima legs = Furīāto Urutima ashi
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 90
Damage Points: 150
Description: The third and last stage of the leg empowering freestyle tech. The user focuses intense amounts of chakra into his legs and feet, this technique allows the users to, for a very short time, increase the power in his legs to incredible heights, by pumping his muscles full of chakra, and reinforcing and thickening the layer of wind chakra, created by Freestyle art Mega legs, on the users legs. By doing this, the user will stack an incredible amount of chakra, around and inside his legs. While doing this, the user will begin to spin around himself, because of the incredible amount of chakra in the users legs, the user will spin around himself with speed equal to the rotors of a helicopter. This will create an air pressure in itself, but by releasing all of the chakra stacked inside and outside his legs, the user is able to create a gigantic windblast, which will travel with incredible speed, and rip apart everything inside Mid range of the user. This windblast will be released in 360 around the user, and as said before, rip everything in Mid range and closer to the user apart, this also includes the very ground around the user. As soon as this windblast has been released, the user can light a lighter, and set everything in Mid range and closer, ablaze in an instant, both the windblast and the fire, travels so fast that even a Sage ranked opponent wouldn’t have time to for any handseals. The user’s legs will explode due to the incredible pressure on his legs, and because of the incredible amount of chakra and energy this technique requires, the user will be completely drained of chakra and power after use.
Notes:
• Can only be used once.
• No Nin Gen Taijutsu and/or any other techniques, for the rest of the battle.
• The user’s legs will explode, making him unable to move for the rest of the battle.
• Can only be used while Freestyle art Mega legs is active.
• Can only be avoided with space/time techniques if in short range.
• If in Mid range the target/targets will have about a second to avoid this technique.
• Can only be used by ZeroGarra.

Declined​

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Wind release: Force wave = Fuuton: Chikara-ha
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to defend against sound and frequencies, by bending the wind itself, the user can create an orb of bended wind, which will reject sound waves and frequencies. When sound or frequencies gets close to it, the wind will bounce outwards, like when you burst a balloon, and the wind will thereby carry the sound/frequencies away from the user, rendering them useless.
Notes:
• Can only be used three times per battle.
• Can only be used once every second turn.
• Only works on A-ranked techniques and below.
• Can only be taught by ZeroG.

Declined: and if i used sound jutsu i'd just shout before performing the technique disabling your jutsu as it reacted to the sound i made... >_>​

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The elder gauntlet of wind mastery = Kaze no fuuton no chōrō chōsen
Type: Supplementary equipment
Rank: Forbidden
Range: 10 every turn
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (increase wind damage by 15, but inflicts 5 damage to the user every turn.)
Description: this is one of the five element gauntlets, these gauntlets were forged in ancient times by blind smiths. The gloves themselves, are created from the bones of 5 grandmasters, each had their own element. The gauntlets were originally created, as a gift to a rich lord of unknown occupation, but under mysterious circumstances, they vanished on the trip to his house, and they were never mentioned in history since then. Though rumors about it being used by ninjas exist, these are mostly viewed as fairy tales.

Abilities: The gauntlet of wind, is a tool used by ninjas with a wind affinity, to strengthen their wind jutsus. The gauntlet itself is lightweight, and doesn’t hinder the user in any of his/her movements. The gauntlet works like a magnet for wind chakra, it makes it a lot easier to gather wind chakra, and focus on wind techniques. The gauntlet also works as an amplifier for wind jutsus, increasing their damage and destructive power. Lastly, the gauntlet also eases the user’s hands when he’s performing wind techniques, thereby enabling the user to form handseals faster than usually. All these wind abilities come at a price though, at the start of the battle, the user must choose an available element, except for wind, in this element, the user will be unable to perform S-ranked and above jutsus, for the rest of the battle. On top of that, to keep the Gauntlet functional, the user must feed it with his own chakra, and the gauntlet will inflict damage upon the user every turn because of this. It can be used to ones advantage though, once every battle, the user can feed the gauntlet an extra portion of chakra, this will increase the pain the gauntlet inflicts for a second, thereby snapping the user out of any B-ranked or below Genjutsu.
Notes:
• Can only be used by ZeroG.
• If the user wishes to use the gauntlet, he must notify his opponent, in the start of the match.
Picture of the gauntlet.

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make water the element to make a rank and below only, and the genjutsu bit isn't really needed... you can inflict pain without that.​

Changed the Force wave so it'll only react to strong sounds/Frequencies.

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Wind release: Force wave = Fuuton: Chikara-ha
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to defend against sound and frequencies, by bending the wind itself, the user can create an orb of bended wind, which will reject sound waves and frequencies. When strong and harmful sound or frequencies gets close to it, the wind will bounce outwards, like when you burst a balloon, and the wind will thereby carry the sound/frequencies away from the user, rendering them useless.
Notes:
• Can only be used three times per battle.
• Can only be used once every second turn.
• Only works on A-ranked techniques and below.
• Can only be taught by ZeroG.

Approved

Gauntlet changed to water element and A-ranked and below jutsus.

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The elder gauntlet of wind mastery = Kaze no fuuton no chōrō chōsen
Type: Supplementary equipment
Rank: Forbidden
Range: 10 every turn
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (increase wind damage by 15, but inflicts 5 damage to the user every turn.)
Description: this is one of the five element gauntlets, these gauntlets were forged in ancient times by blind smiths. The gloves themselves, are created from the bones of 5 grandmasters, each had their own element. The gauntlets were originally created, as a gift to a rich lord of unknown occupation, but under mysterious circumstances, they vanished on the trip to his house, and they were never mentioned in history since then. Though rumors about it being used by ninjas exist, these are mostly viewed as fairy tales.
Abilities: The gauntlet of wind, is a tool used by ninjas with a wind affinity, to strengthen their wind jutsus. The gauntlet itself is lightweight, and doesn’t hinder the user in any of his/her movements. The gauntlet works like a magnet for wind chakra, it makes it a lot easier to gather wind chakra, and focus on wind techniques. The gauntlet also works as an amplifier for wind jutsus, increasing their damage and destructive power. Lastly, the gauntlet also eases the user’s hands when he’s performing wind techniques, thereby enabling the user to form handseals faster than usually. All these wind abilities come at a price though, the user will be unable to use strong water element jutsus, he/she can only use A-ranked and below water jutsus. On top of that, to keep the Gauntlet functional, the user must feed it with his own chakra, and the gauntlet will inflict damage upon the user every turn because of this.
Notes:
• Can only be used by ZeroG.
• If the user wishes to use the gauntlet, he must notify his opponent, in the start of the match.
Picture of the gauntlet.

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add that the wind gauntlets have a weakness to the fire element and if successfully made contact with fire would render them useless because of the wind chakra within them would fuel the fire

I know the hair technique is a little un-restricted, but this is just a rough base to check whether or not this idea has been taken, and if you have some restrictions to add, then it would save us all some time .

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(Ninpou: Kami o Ribingu no Jutsu) - Ninja Arts: Living Hair Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (10 every turn after activation.)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs 4 handseals, and infuses his/her hair with great amounts of chakra, this allows the user to make his/her hair grow in an incredibly phase. The user can control the hairs individually, by controlling the chakra inside the hairs. By adding more chakra to the hairs, the user can harden them at will, they can become harder than steel due to the chakra infused into them. By continuously adding chakra to his/her hair, the user can uphold this technique for a high amount of time.
Notes:
• Can only be used three times per battle.
• Can only be used by ZeroG.
• Can last for five turns.

Declined to similar to the way the wild mane technique

 

[Bruce Banner]

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(Doton : Heishi Rando Bunshin) - Earth Style: Land Soldier Clone
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description : The user do the necessary handseal and then slam the ground based on earth to summons 300 brave soldier (an ancient Spartan soldier). This soldier equipped with sharp sword and a shield also face shield to protect them from earth jutsu. and this soldier are immune up to B-Rank earth jutsu. This soldier attack with strategy of the user and will charge attack without no hasitate and no mercy. This soldier can’t perform any jutsu but their speed increasing when battle in earth base terrain.

Notes : Can only be summoned once per battle.
Notes : Can only use by earth Jutsu user

~Declined, do not resubmit~ there are already similar jutsu's, also where do those shields and weapons come from? How can this be short range if there are 300 soldiers? But above all 300 is way to much

 

[-Mugen-]

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(Sakura kenjutsu: senbon sakura) - Cherry blossom sword style: sakura needles

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Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description : The user puts his sword in front of him and then channels chakra into it.When channeled he then manipulates the sword to disperse the blade into thousands of small pieces which then look like cherry blossoms.The user can also control the small needles to his desire.
Looks like:

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*only a dojutsu can track the needles
*can only be used twice
*must be taught by mugen

~Declined, how can you disperse something solid as a sword just by focusing chakra? Also how can a sword be reduced to 1000 pieces? Then every piece would have the size of a dustparticle and you say they look like cherry blossoms, which means they're pretty big and can be seen by the human eye and thus not only by doujutsu. Where do these needles come from? As I recall you have titanium, try submitting it as a CE jutsu.~

(Sakura kenjutsu: senkei) - Cherry blossom sword style: annihilate

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Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description : The user drops his sword and form a advanced version of senbon sakura.
Looks like:

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All of the swords may be used at once to shatter and attack the opponent or by one at a time.One swords is equal to a 1000 needles.(is used like senbon sakura and can be manipulated however the user wishes)
*can only be used once
*is inescapable unless blocked by a jutsu
*Must be taught by mugen

~Declined, do not resubmit. Similar jutsu exists and where do all these swords come from?~

(Flash steppu) - Flash step

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Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Type: supplementary
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 10 to the user,because of the strain
Description : The user puts a lot of chakra to his feet and hands and then when making a step he releases it from the foot he steped as well as the hand on the opposite side of the foot giving him a tremendous boost in speed.If the user wishes to go to mid range he does it again but with the other foot.
*Can only be used 4 times per battle and needs a 1 full turn of wait before it can be used again
*The user reaches such a high speed that he seems to evaporate in air,much like lee when he is without weights,and can also be used to dodge jutsus
*must be taught by mugen

~Declined, do not resumbit~ every ninja can focus chakra in his feet or hands for a short burst of power and speed. Depending on the ninja's chakra control it becomes stronger, however what you're describing is pretty much the 8IG∞

 

[Zell]

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Type: Weapon
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10-40
Damage Points: 20-80
Description: These gloves concentrate the users Earth Chakra and depending on the users Rank + mastery of the Earth Element the gloves grant more abilities.
Genin: D-Rank mastered: The gloves will be able to make small shields & tools of Earth.
Chuunin: C-Rank mastered: The user can create giant spikes from the knuckles and use these for fatal damage. The gloves can also now make larger shields and tools.
S-Jounin: B-Rank mastered: Gloves are now indestrucible unless hit with Lightning techs as they are constantly in an Iron Skin.
Jounin: A-Rank mastered: The giant spikes can now be fired from the gloves at high speed. The user can also create giant shields that cover his whole body.
S-Class: S-Rank mastered: The user can now fire earth projectiles like kunai by concentrating doton chakra before and while punching.
Sannin: Forbidden-Rank mastered: The user can now by simply punching the ground cause an earthquake.
Kage: Earth Mastered: All the above techniques are powered up i.e. faster/stronger.
Sage: All 5 elements mastered: The user being a master of Earth and with the gloves powering up/concentrating their Doton chakra they can literally sense any Doton chakra on the field they can't pin point locations of the opponent etc but they will know a Doton tech has been used. The user can manipulate any Earth Techniques used by the opponent i.e. cancel them. They cannot send projectiles etc back.

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[itachiuchia]

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(Katon: Doku Katon Koumaru) Fire style: Poison fire ball
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 20 -30 depending on the size of the ball
Damage Points:60
Description: User creates a a ball of poison and a ball of fire and fuses them together and charges at his/her enemy hurting and could poison the person under attack.
Can only be used 2 times per battle
only itachiuchia can use

~Declined, do not resubmit. Poison is forbidden, unless you're a medical shinobi. Also you messed up the chakra cost-damage points in according to the jutsu's rank~

Assassins Hidden wrist knive
Type: Weapon
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 if you add chakra to it
Damage points: 70
Description:a wrist blade that is activated by a finger key so when you move your finger the blade comes out it was forged in the mountine of death and has been passed down to random ninja every 100 years.
Note
Can only be used by me
can be used 3 times per match

~Declined, do not resubmit. No Japanese name, messed up again the combination of rank-chakra cost-damage points + the Assasin's Creed hidden blade are © by NB's Varanigan Guard~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

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]Wind Release:Silent Wind (Fuuton: Kaze no Sairento)

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends off a burst of continues wind from them body that lashes out, removing all sound within the area. Making it impossible for either the user or the opponent to hear anything. This is normally used for silent assassination
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Last three times

Declined, do not resubmit you cant dull the sound of wind unless its a small breeze which makes little noise

Wind Style: Armour of Wind (Fuuton: Kaze no Yoroi)

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Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates his chakra and the wind around him to create a wind armor around his body. The user's body which is coated by a form of wind basically makes the body lighter making capable of faster movements in par of the fifth gate and unaffected by Lightning jutsu of equal rank or lower.
Note: Last two turns
Note: Can only be used twice

Declined, remove the gate comparison and make the lighting A rank and below for ineffective and also you would be at risk of fire jutsu doing more damage

Wind Style: Shift Control (Fuuton: Shifuto Seichuu)

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When in need to stop in a mid-air or movement, the user immediately have an outburst of wind chakra from all over their body in order to stop movement completely in all directions or even just one. This stops the user from moving mementarily while falling, or even catch the opponent off guard as they blast past the user while in pursuit
Note: Can only be used three times

Declined, do not resubmit similar jutsu exists which is a cannon technique

(Suiton: Mizu Sokushin) - Water Style: Water Acceleration

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: + 25 for every Suiton jutsu the user does
Description: The user manipulates the water within the brain, muscles, and blood to accelerate the flow of it enhancing the ninja's senses and body movement. The user now has super human like characteristics to help him in battle. Sight, hearing, smell, touch, and taste are all enhanced. All muscles are now being messaged and forced to a high limit allowing the ninja to be able to run and strike with their body's maximum force. Since the ninja's brain is being enhanced as well he/she will be able to detect small changes of his surroundings. Due to the nature of this ability the ninja can only sustain this for a short period of time since a human's water supply is needed to sustain life. The speed and strength of the ninja will be compared to the 5th gate, gate of limit.
Note: Lasts 3 turns.
Note: The user will be able to use Suiton jutsus at a higher speed and with increased power.
Note: The user will take 15 damage per turn.
Note: This technique can only be used twice per battle.
Note: This technique can't be used 2 turns after it is deactivated.
Note: No Lighting jutsu while in this mode.

Declined, do not resubmit similar jutsu already created by izuna and stop with gate comparisons

 

[Ikari Shinji Kun]

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Raiton: Raikou shougekiha (Lightning Release: Lightning Shockwave)

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Type: Supplemenatry/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Long/Med/Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends a wave of electricity outwards from their body, sensing and opponent within a large radius. If an opponent is at close range, they will be paralyzed.

Declined, do not resubmit

Ninpou: Amatsu gigei (Ninja Art: Heavenly Arts)

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Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user pulls out a scroll and draws a large dragon, it can be pre drawn. Once the scroll is opened, the dragon flies into the sky and drops downwards towards the opponent, crushing them on impact.

Declined, similar jutsu exists

Raiton: Sumi pegasasu (Lightning Style: Ink Pegasus)

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Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user opens a scroll with a pre-drawn pegasus on it. The pegasus is infused with raiton chakra for speed and agiltiy. It can be used to evade an attack or to elevate the user to a higher position. The user can then fly around on the pegasus' back.
~Last For 3 turns~
~Can Only Be Used Once Per Battle~

Declined, remove the lightning infusement if you wish to have it approved

 

[Serpent]

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(Nenshou Manako) Burning Eye:
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 70
Description: After the user makes eye contact the opponent falls into an Genjutsu, this Genjutsu makes the opponent fall under major pain, as if the flesh was burning off of there bones. This leaves the Opponent unable to move for one turn.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Fenikkusu Bakudan) Phoenix Bomb:
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user shoots three large phoenix shaped fire balls in the air, the fire balls then dive down at there opponent, these's fire balls explode on impacted.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Tsuchi Kabe-Tama) Earth Wall-Bullets:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description:a large wall raises from the ground in front of the user, the wall then shoots hundreds of little bullets at there opponent.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Zetsumei Sentou) Death Punch:
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user gather's a lot of Chakra in there fist, on impacted the chakra is realest into the opponent spreads like a virus and instantly Immobilizes the targeted area.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Seiteki Gen'ya) Static Field:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user infuses there Raiton Chakra in the ground around them, shocking anyone who steps on them in close Range.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Daichi Taihou) Earth Cannon:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user infuses there Doton Chakra in the Ground, a large round cutout of the earth then shoots from under them throwing the user on a rock high in the sky, the rock then splits into multiple fragments that rain down on the opponent at high speeds, like bullets.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

(Kaki Bunshin no Jutsu) Fire Clone Technique:
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user infuses there Katon Chakra into your basic shadow clone, these clones do not puff like regular clones, instead they Bust out in a blaze catching anything in a three meter radius on Fire.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Frederick Uchiha.

~All auto-declined, maximum 5 jutsu's at a time~

 

[The_Empire]

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-Red Grand Elder (Niiro Yuuen Senpai)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The Red Grand Elder is one of the Sixth Grand Elder Snakes. Red is the one who is known as the fire master of all the snakes. He can spit out an A rank Meteor size Fireball (short-mid) and a S rank flamethrower (short-mid) from his mouth. He can with stand a S rank fire jutsu without poofing away. He can with stand 1 any other attack A rank without poofing away. After being hit with one of these moves he can't be summoned agained.
-A rank Fireball used 2 times in battle
- S rank Flamethrower used 1 time in battle

Declined, add that he is weak to water element so B rank or above water is very effective against him being an A rank summon

-Blue Grand Elder (Aoiro Yuuen Senpai)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The Blue Grand Elder is one of the Sixth Grand Elder Snakes. Blue is the one known as the water master of all the snakes. He can spit a B rank Water Sphere (short-mid) and A rank Water Stream (short-mid). He can with stand a S water jutsu and can with stand 1 any other attack A rank with out poofing away. After being hit buy one of these attacks and poofs away he can't be summoned agained.
-B rank Water Sphere used 3 times in battle
-A rank Water Stream used 2 times in battle

Declined, again make it that he is weak to lightning and and that B rank and above is very effective against him

-Summon Technique: Snake Stomach (Kuchiyose: Hebi Hara)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The user make six hand seals and slams his hands on the ground. The user summons a snake's stomach just like what Jiriaya summons a Toad's stomach. The stomach can be control by the user to make the stomach expand or tighten in any point in the stomach to crush anything that isn't hard as steel or higher density.

Declined, limitations on useage

-Shadow Arms (Kage Heika)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Point: 40
Description: The user focus their shadow chakra into their shadow. Then extends his shadow and spilts it into two and shape manipulate each split into a whole arm. The whole arms can pound, choke and squeeze or anything else the user wants to do with the whole arms.
-Must have learned all Nara jutsus
-Only used/taught by Deidara Nara

Declined, add some shadow technique limitations

 

[Bruce Banner]

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Chains of Andromeda‎(Andoromeda no kusari)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Med-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 + 30 (when adding chakra into)
Damage points: N/A
Description :
The mythical Chains of Andromeda used to tied the Mythological Character in Andromeda's legend. The chains are legendary for their durability as well as defensive nature, and have only been completely shattered a few times. They are also renowned for their great length, as they can be magically extended far enough to reach 1 miles away as also can trace and sense chakra within that lenght. When there is great evil or threat comes, the chains can become charged with negative energy and release lightning shocks of at least 10.000 volt. The User hold the chain by twisting around both arms (See Picture Below)

Note:
-This weapon can only be in play for 1 battle
-This Weapon can be added by the user of lightning chakra mostly but also can be added with wind chakra to increase the damage attack or ultimate combo jutsu-This weapon can only be used by Oasis-This weapon can only be used once per battle.
-This weapon is weak and can be destroyed by powerful Earth and Wind jutsu Rank-S/Forbidden

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Declined, do not resubmit

Nebula Storm (Nebyura Sutōmu?)
Rank: S
Range: Medium-Long
Type : offensiveChakra cost: 50
Damage : 100
Description : By the time the user has chosen to execute it, he must release his massive chakra (the user have to has a massive chakra) to allow him full access to his Chain Ability. The attack is dispelled as a single burst from the summit of the user chakra and the lightning storm projects violently the opponent away. Because of its extreme destructive nature, the user will only use it as a last resort.
Note : it's a triple combo between Lightning and wind jutsu and the chain.
Note : Can only be perform with Chains of Andromeda
Note : Only S-Class Ninja or above can use this jutsu
Note : can only use 1 time per battle
Note : Weak againts wind Jutsu With similar rank

Rolling Defense (Rōringu Difensu):
Rank: A
Range : Short-medium
Type: Deffensive
Chakra cost:30
Damage: n/a
Descrition : A simple defensive technique that utilizes the chains in one of two ways: the user will either twirl the chains around himself to create a barrier, or set them on the ground to mimic a circular web, this was later named the Circle Defense. In web mode, the chains construct a distance between himself and the opponent, and will discharge energy volts if adding lighning chakra or simply slash the enemy if they attempt to enter the field.
Note : Can only be perform with Chains of Andromeda
Note : Can only be use 5 times per battle
Note : Weak againts Earth and wind Jutsu With similar rank

Thunder wave ( Sandā Uēbu?)
Rank: A
Range: Medium-Long
Type : offensive
Chakra cost: 40
Damage : 80
Description: more evolved and powerful form of the basic Nebula Chain attack, where it searches the opponent wherever he might be and finds its way in a succession of rapid triangle movements to strike him. , also the impact will create greater damage when adding lightning chakra
Note : Can only be perform with Chains of Andromeda
Note : Can only be use 3 times per battle
Note : Weak againts Earth and wind Jutsu With similar rank

Nebula Chain (Nebyura Chēn)
Rank: B
Range: Medium-Long
Type : offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage : 60
Description : The Andromeda Saint's signature technique which allows the user to manipulate the chains he pleases. At the most basic, the "Nebula Chain" is a straight-forward attack where the chains rapidly slice and wrap themselves around the enemy, also the impact will create greater damage when adding lightning chakra.
Note : Can only be perform Chains of Andromeda
Note : Can only be use 4 times per battle
Note : Weak againts Earth and wind Jutsu With similar rank

All Declined, do not resubmit on the basis that weapon is not approvable

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(X- kaunta )-X-Counter
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: As the opponent uses a fire jutsus on the use While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will hold both hands out forming a diamond shape with both his hands, Once the fire makes contact with the gloves the user will absorb the whole fire attack once absorb the next time the user uses a fire attack that fire will have its normal damage plus the damage of the opponent’s attack.
Note: This can be used once in a battle.
Note: Only work on S rank fire and down.
Note: Must have gloves on

Declined, do not resubmit

(X- bakufuu )-X-Blast
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage:40
Description: The user will fire off two blast of fire from each of his hands while the X-Gloves are on.
Note: Can be used 4 times in battle.
Note: Must have X-gloves on.

(X- supea)-X-Spear
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will focus Chakra in to the X-Gloves, then the user will smash both hands together then he will slowly open them while opening his hands there will be a small flame in between his hands as he spread his hands apart the flame will start to get bigger and longer once the flame is be enough it will have the shape of a spear then the user will grab the spear with one hand once done the user will be able to throw the spear once the spear has been thrown it will fly at very high speeds, then once the spear make contact with the target or anything it will cause it to explode causing a blast of 10 yards' radius leaving a small crater
Note: Can be used once in battle.
Note: If attack happens in short range the user will be caught in the blast too.
Note: user cannot perform Fire element next turn

Both Approved

Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A(Doubles gloves power)
Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower the other jutsus. Water jutsus used against fire jutsus with the ring on will become least effected, meaning that if the user uses a fire jutsu a rank higher than a water jutsu the fire should still beat it but if they are the same rank they will both cancel out.
notes:
The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
Only can be used with X-gloves
Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 1 turns
Can only be used Once fight

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kame Youshiki)-Turtle Style
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
RangeShort
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user focuses their chakra and their pupils turn into turtle pupils. The user then gains the reflexes of a snapping turtle, and their skin becomes as hard as a turtle shell.
Note: lasts 5 turns
Note: no more turtle jutsus can be used for the rest of the match
Note: only A-rank and above moves affect the user
Note: the user gains +15 more jutsu power
Note: after this jutsu wears off the user can use no more S-rank
Note: must have a contract with turtles

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Atrocitus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Naruyari-ryu : Kami々 No Anburōja | Thundering Spear Style : Ambrosia of the Gods
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This state shows the mastery over sojutsu the user has and allows the user ot use all Thundering Spear Style techniques without them becoming a move (maximum of one per turn). To activate this mode the user must meditate for one turn and gather the chakra needed for the mode. This state quells the users mind and removes doubt and fear allowing the user to focus on defeating his enemy with all his might, by making any spear an extension of himself. This allows the user to send his chakra on instinct into any spear he wields making it indestructible and far more deadly (allowing it to easily crush concrete and making it silently pass through the air). This mode grants the user access to the Forbidden Thundering Spear Style techniques.

-Once per battle
-Lasts for four turns
-Once the mode ends the user will only be able to use B rank and under jutsu (if they don't use one of the Forbidden techniques

Note for Ambrosia of the Gods:

Spoiler

I'll submit the Forbidden Thundering Spear Style jutsu on a later date, this is just the prequisite to be able to use them.

Declined, do not resubmit

Naruyari-ryu : Gaia no Surō | Thundering Spear Style : Gaia's Throw
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user charges his spear with earth chakra and gives it the abilities of Underground Fish Projection. This allows the spear to travel through earth but still keep its physical properties so it would still pierce a human, yet just pass straight through earth.

-Three times per battle
-Can only pass through earth twice per throw.

Declined, do not resubmit

Naruyari-ryu : Aresu Chi ni Ueru | Thundering Spear Style : Are's Bloodlust
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+20 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description: The user charges his spear with a large amount of chakra which acts on the same principle as Tsunade's chakra reinforced punch. On impact the chakra causes the spear destruction abilities to increase so that it can easily shatter rock and crush organs and bones. If thrown it will be reinforced until it hits something, then it will become a normal spear. If held the user can constantly charge chakra to the spear allowing it to be reinforced until the user runs out of chakra or turns it off.

-Thrice per battle
-Lasts a maximum of two turns before the user has to use this jutsu again (when held).

Declined, add that it can only smash through B rank earth element and below

Naruyari-ryu : Arutemisu no basutabu | Thundering Spear Style : Artemis's Bath
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user charges his spear with water chakra and throws it within short to mid range of himself. Once planted in the ground the spear will use that chakra to draw in all available moisture in the ground and will create a large water supply which will be readily available to the user.

-Takes two turns to create a large water supply.
-Three times per battle.

Make A rank

Kuchiyose no Jutsu : Nehebkau, Andāwārudo no Shugo-sha | Summoning Technique : Nehebkau, The Guardian of The Underworld
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo and summons a twin-headed winged Basilisk the size of Gamabunta which can fly. One head has a wind affinity, while the other has an earth affinity, allowing both of them to use their respective affinity up to S rank, they can also fire an A rank blast of their respective affinity. The earth head automatically hardens their skin (like iron skin technique), which added with the Basilisk's already tough skin causes them to be unharmed from jutsu B rank and under (this drops to C rank if the earth head uses a jutsu in that turn)
-Lasts four turns
-Once per battle
-Must have signed the Basilisk contract
-Can only use Blasts and/or jutsu four times per battle, but the blasts do not count as a move.

I have permission from Gats as a signer of the Basilisk contract to submit this summoning.

Declined, do not resubmit basilisks cant fly

 

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Spoiler

Spoiler

(Sora no kuni eshaku)- Land of the skies bow
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:short/long
Chakra Cost:0( shooting arrows 30)
Damage:40 per arrow
Description: This bow, specially crafted by the land of the skies blacksmiths, is made of a light but very resistant metal which is deep blue and trimmed with gold alloy. The bow's trims were sharped relentlessly in order to ensure that, over the years, it may still cut through rock or common metals. The bow has a black handle made of tar-covered sharkskin, just like samurai katanas, ensuring maximum grip. The user of this bow can infuse raiton chakra in great quantities and apply shape manipulation in order to create a thick arrow of pure lightning energy which can be later shot in a straight line but at great speeds and a normal chakra bowstring. The arrow have a penetrating power comparable to chidori, but once they struck the opponent they will revert back to lightning energy and shock the particular area numbing it.
But the utility of this ancient weapon does not end here, the bow can be disassembled in two separate blades that the user can use freely as very sharp and light weapons. If infused with raiton chakra, the sharpness of the blades is taken to a whole new level.
Notes: Raiton arrows may be used up to 3 times per battle and shooting up to a maximum of 2 arrows per use.
Notes: The numbing effects of the arrow last for a turn.
Notes: No lightning the same turn the arrows are used.
Notes: The arrows travel so fast that only a sharingan user with 2 or more tomoe can keep up with them.

Spoiler

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^The bow's arrow

~declined - seems too fast, it's merely a projectile and having only sharingan users able to see it seems a bit OP imo ~​

Re submitting this weapon- restrictions added

Custom weapon:
(Sora no kuni eshaku)- Land of the skies bow
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:short/long
Chakra Cost:0( shooting arrows 30)
Damage:40 per arrow
Description: This bow, specially crafted by the land of the skies blacksmiths, is made of a light but very resistant metal which is deep blue and trimmed with gold alloy. The bow's trims were sharped relentlessly in order to ensure that, over the years, it may still cut through rock or common metals. The bow has a black handle made of tar-covered sharkskin, just like samurai katanas, ensuring maximum grip. The user of this bow can infuse raiton chakra in great quantities and apply shape manipulation in order to create a thick arrow of pure lightning energy which can be later shot in a straight line but at great speeds and a normal chakra bowstring. The arrow have a penetrating power comparable to chidori, but once they struck the opponent they will revert back to lightning energy and shock the particular area numbing it.
But the utility of this ancient weapon does not end here, the bow can be disassembled in two separate blades that the user can use freely as very sharp and light weapons. If infused with raiton chakra, the sharpness of the blades is taken to a whole new level.
Notes: Raiton arrows may be used up to 3 times per battle and shooting up to a maximum of 2 arrows per use.
Notes: The numbing effects of the arrow last for a turn.
Notes: No lightning the same turn the arrows are used.
Notes: The arrows travel so fast that is very hard for the naked eye to be able to react accordingly, however, they are able to see it if thrown from a considerable distance but may be a hard target to avoid or counter if shot or is at a closely dangerous distance.
Notes: Arrows thrown will count as a jutsu, however it does not matter the amount of arrows thrown( although it cannot exceed 2 in the same turn).
Notes: The bow cannot be disassembled and assembled in the same turn.

Spoiler

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^The bow's arrow

Declined, make the arrows of lightning A rank

(Kuchiyose no jutsu:Kontarick umi no toropikaru) Kontarick of the tropical seas
Kontarick
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Kontarick is a swallow that comes from the tropical seas of the south. He has a sweet and high chirping which brings happiness to his user upon summoning him. His wings are sky blue while his chest is vibrant yellow. It has en excellent eyesight, on par with hawks even. Being born in the tropical seas, his chakra nature adapted to that area, earning him the capacity to utilize suiton jutsus up to the user's rank. He's big enough to carry multiple people on his back and his flight is smooth and silent. Two times per battle, he may shoot very humid wind from his wings, causing a relevant decrease in the temperature and making the foe's breathing hard and unstable.
Notes: Lasts up to 5 turns in battle, only once per battle.
Notes: The user may supply handseals for the suiton jutsu if needed.
Notes: The wind current may only be used once every two turns.

Declined, add that the summon can only use water techniques that doesnt require hand seals

 

[Faith]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Tsuyoi) - Summoning Technique : Mighty

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After the user performed the require handseal and used a small amount of blood of their own the user will slam onto the ground and summon a black beetle and the size of the beetle is a little smaller then '' Gamakichi ''. Even though Mighty is much smaller in size but his strength is greater or as same as big summoning boss like Gamabunta, Mighty is capable of flying too which give him advantage of dodging certain attacks, he is also capable of producing poison gas from his bottom. He is also able to divide himself into thousand of smaller size of beetle.

*Mighty has Fire Affinity and able to use Fire jutsu up to A rank
*Must sign Beetle Contract in order to summon this boss
*Can be only be taught by Toshiyuki

info needed on smaller beetles, e.g. abilities, strength etc.​

(Hijutsu: Takigi Houmen) - Secret Technique: Firewood Release

Spoiler

Rank: B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage : 40
Description: A Special kind of insect that has the ability to consume wood in a extremely rapid speed rate in which they are known as few of the most feared bug in the world. They also have the ability to fly, This type of bug is one of the most loyal & obedient to their master which mean they would even lay their life in order to protect their master.

*Can only be taught by Toshiyuki
*Can only be used by Toshiyuki

if you plan to use this one bug to make wood release completely useless then no...​

(Mushi Hebi) - Insect Serpent

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Desrciption: The user send their bug onto the battlefield and the bugs will form 4 long & middle-size serpent. This jutsu could be beaten with suffiecent force.

*Can only be taught by Toshiyuki

explain abilities of serpents, and what can kill them.​

(Mokuton: Kishou mokuzai doragon) Wood Style - Rising Wood Dragon

Spoiler

Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Desrciption: A advance wood technique that take shape/form like a dragon when the user make stomp onto the ground and call for 3 dragon made out of wood that capable of giving opponent severely serious damage.

1 dragon restriction, to avoid sending 3 dragons seperately taking up all 3 of the opponents moves... and follow templates and include ranks >_>​

Resubmitting these above(the above's one are old one, i edit according into new's one below)
Leaving for Kawagiri ~


(Kuchiyose: Tsuyoi) - Summoning Technique : Mighty

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After the user performed the require handseal and used a small amount of blood of their own the user will slam onto the ground and summon a black beetle and the size of the beetle is a little smaller then '' Gamakichi ''. Even though Mighty is much smaller in size but his strength is greater or as same as big summoning boss like Gamabunta, Mighty is capable of flying too which give him advantage of dodging certain attacks, he is also capable of producing poison gas from his bottom. He is also able to divide himself into countless of smaller size of beetle.

*Smaller beetle is only capable of flying and producing poison gas from their bottom
*Mighty has Fire Affinity and able to use Fire jutsu up to A rank
*Must sign Beetle Contract in order to summon this boss
*Can be only be taught by Toshiyuki

Declined, remove the poison ability, and make it that he can only use fire techniques that dont require handseals

(Hijutsu: Takigi Houmen) - Secret Technique: Firewood Release

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage : N/A
Description: A special kind of insect that has the ability to consume wood in a extremely rapid speed rate in which they are known as few of the most feared bug in the world. They also have the ability to fly, This type of bug is one of the most loyal & obedient to their master which mean they would even lay their life in order to protect their master.

*They could only eat wood jutsu up to A rank for ATTACK type
*They could only eat wood jutsu up to S rank for Defence/Supplementary
*Can only be taught by Toshiyuki
*Can only be used by Toshiyuki

Declined, i do not understand this part and make it that it can only work on A rank and below instead of having both those two

(Mushi Hebi) - Insect Serpent

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Desrciption: The user send their bug onto the battlefield and the bugs will form 4 long & middle-size serpent then bite and crush down the enemy. This jutsu could be beaten with suffiecent force.

*Can only be taught by Toshiyuki
*This jutsu can be destroy by any A/S rank Jutsu

Declined, its merely a swarming of bugs so B rank and above would be sufficient to stop the technique and sort out the points to the correct rank

(Mokuton: Kishou mokuzai doragon) Wood Style - Rising Wood Dragon

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Desrciption: A advance wood technique that take shape/form like a dragon when the user make stomp onto the ground summon a dragon that's made out of wood that capable of giving opponent severely serious damage.
*The dragon is capable of defending one S rank jutsu

Declined, seriously its not going to get approved without having some restrictions and it wouldn't be able to defend against S rank lightning techniques

Kouchuu Gourd - ( Beetle Gourd )

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Desrciption: After the user performed the require handseal and used a small amount of blood of their own the user will slam onto the ground and summon a brown beetle and it has the size of Gamatatsu, This brown beetle carry two gourd(green/black) and in these two gourd both contain beetles and in the green gourd contain poisoning beetle which if come to contact with it may lead to fatal damage or even death and for the black gourd it contain a special kind of chakra-beetle which suck invading chakra which they are most useful to encounter genjutsu but they must be on the user body.

*Can only be taught by Toshiyuki
*Can only be used by Toshiyuki
*User may only choose to release one kind of bug from the gourd every 3 turn
*The Chakra beetle which sucks invading chakra can only defend up to A rank genjutsu.

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Akisha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon:

Spoiler

Lightning sword of Redemption (Rai Subeta no Shoukin)
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Middle
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: History: There once lived a boy named Kuro who lived in the Village Hidden is Sound - which he hated with all his heart. Named the bringer of chaos when he was five, Kurp was Infused with both light and dark; he had the look of an angel, but was as devious as the devil himself. Exiled by his family at 16, he started wandering around the world in search of the sword arts. He found very useful information by one of the Seven swordsman of the mist, but then again nobody from Kirigakure accepted him. He found shelter in Kumogakure where he decided to create a sword more powerful than any other. After 5 years he created his desired sword, infulencing both dark and light withing him. Kuro didnt want an ordinary sword, he wanted a sword that will be able to protec him from even the most fearsome ninjas. Before he died he gave it to boy named Ryo from the Uchiha clan to keep it and use it only when necesary

Abilities: The light part of the sword included many things. One of which was the abilty to shine when danger approched its master. For example when an unexpected attack or jutsu was coming ofter the user, the sword started to shine, thus warning its master. However the strongest abilty was the ability to conduct lightning, being able to use some fearsome lightning techniques that everyone should be afraid of and also the speed of using the techniques increases. The sword also has the ability to he absorb any lighning jutsu up to S rank. Being made of titanium the sword was very hard, inposible to break but at the same time very slim and light as a feather. All these abilities were the light part of the sword...However there was also a dark side. The special abilities of the sword must be activated by blood contact with the user. Unless there is a blood contact, the sword be just an ordinary sword. It has also been shown that the user can't use any wind jutsus at the same turn as he uses the abilities of the sword.

• Can only be used by PowerOfDarkness
• No wind jutsus at the same time the abilities of the sword are used
• Can only use 4 lightning techniques per battle
• Can only absorb 2 lightning techniques per battle
• After the user uses all 4 lightning techniques he can't use S rank Wind jutsus and any Forbbiden rank techniques
• No taijutsu attacks for the rest of the battle
• No genjutsu attacks for 3 more turns
• The sword's abilities can only be activated with the blood of the user.

Spoiler

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Declined, do not resubmit


Lightning Release: Lightning Chain (Raiton: Rai Kusari)
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Middle
Chakra Cost: 40
Damaga Points: 80
Description: The user will first concentrate a large amount of Raiton chakra into his hands. Then he will slam his hands on the ground, creating 2 chains (1 from each hand) that will travel trough the ground and capture the enemy and also numb his body. However the user's hands must be on the ground in order to maintain their movements. The chains will be left on the field untill they capture someone, meaning that if the user fails to capture the enemy, the chains will be underground and can't be seen by regular shinobi (meaning While underground the chains can only be seen by Sharingan, Byakugan and any sensor abilities. However when they come out of the ground they can be seen as they are naturaly made of lightning). And after some time whenever the user decides he can again use the chains again by slaming his hands on the ground.

• Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
• While underground the chains can only be seen by Sharingan, Byakugan and any sensor abilities. However when they come out of the ground they can be seen as they are naturaly made of lightning.
• No S rank Raiton techniques while the chains are in turn
• No taijutsu attacks during the chains are on the field and 3 turns after they disappear.
• If the user can't capture anyone he can perform a single hand seal and make them disappear.
• Can only be used once per battle

Declined, do not resubmit

Raiton: Giant Lightning Blade (Raiton: Kyojin Raikiri)
Rank: Forbbiden
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The Giant Lightning Blade is an advanced form of the regular Raikiri. It is performed by 2 people and it can be performed by clones.

• Can only be used 2 times per battle
• Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
• No S lightning jutsus for then next 2 turns
• No Forbidden rank Lightning techniques for the rest of the battle

Declined, do not resubmit


Lightning Release: Pikachou (Raiton: Pikachou)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense
Range Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The user will perform a raw of 4 hand seals and by releasing his Raiton chakra and using Shape Manipulation, he will create a creature with the shape of a rabbit called Pikachou. His tail will be connected with the user's palm by little steams of Lightning. Due to the steams the user can make Pikachou move up to long range. Once Pikachou is in the desired location, the user will perform a single hand seal and make Pikachou explode, creating a huge explosion that destroys everything in 5m radius.

• Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
• No taijutsu attacks for the rest of the battle
• No A or S rank Lightning techniques for the rest of the battle
• No Genjutsu for the next 3 turns.
• Can only be used once per battle.

Declined, to similar to lightning hound

Lightning Release: Lightning Shoes (Raiton: Rai Hanka)
Rank: A
Type: Deffense/ Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description: The user channels his Raiton chakra into his feet and generates little steams of lightning under them. By doing so the user will be able to walk on mud. Normaly a strong lightning technique will go trough the mud and make a big hole. However by decreasing the electricity the user is able to create small steams of lightning which does not go deep trough the mud, only enough to keep the user on top of it.

• Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
• Jinbei is the co-creator of this jutsu
• Can only be used 2 times per battle
• No S or A rank Raiton techniques at the same turn this jutsu is used.

add that while using this technique the user is vulnerable to water techniques

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Tsuchi shi-rudo.) - Earth Style: Earth Shield.
Rank: S
Type: Defensive.
Range: Short.
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user simply performs one handseal creating a giant wall of earth where ever he wishes in short range. It's as hard as steel and moves up the ground as fast as lighting itself.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

~Declined, do not resubmit, similar jutsu's exist and how can an earth wall shoot up as fast as lightning -_-~

(Doton: Mokumoku gosunkugi.) - Earth Style: Silent Spike.
Rank: A
Type: Offensive.
Range: Short-Long.
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user perform a single handseal that creates a big spike that penetrates the enemy. The spike appears behind the enemy without a single sound.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

~Declined, do not resubmit, that's a canon jutsu called Stone Spikes, the only difference between the two is that it's supposed without any kind of sound~

(Doton: Ishi hebi.) - Earth Style: Stone Snakes.
Rank: S
Type: Offensive.
Range: Short-Long.
Chakra Chost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs two handseals creating two stone snakes, up the earth from where the user now wishes.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

~Declined, that barely deserves to be A-rank, let alone S-rank. It are just two stone snakes ~

 

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

|Summoning Animal|

Komodo Dragon.
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Detail's About the animal:

Spoiler

A member of the monitor lizard family (Varanidae), it is the largest living species of lizard, growing to an average length of 2 to 3 metres (6.6 to 9.8 ft) and weighing around 70 kilograms (150 lb). Their unusual size has been attributed to island gigantism, since there are no other carnivorous animals to fill the niche on the islands where they live.However, recent research suggests that the large size of komodo dragons may be better understood as representative of a relic population of very large varanid lizards that once lived across Indonesia and Australia, most of which, along with other megafauna, died out after contact with modern humans. Fossils very similar to V. komodoensis have been found in Australia dating to greater than 3.8 million years ago, and its body size remained stable on Flores, one of the handful of Indonesian islands where it is currently found, ever since Flores (along with neighboring islands) were isolated by rising sea levels approximately 900,000 years ago.
As a result of their size, these lizards dominate the ecosystems in which they live.

Etymology:

The Komodo dragon is also known as the Komodo monitor or the Komodo Island monitor in scientific literature, although this is not very common. To the natives of Komodo Island, it is referred to as ora, buaya darat (land crocodile) or biawak raksasa (giant monitor).

Evolutionary history:
The evolutionary development of the Komodo dragon started with the Varanus genus, which originated in Asia about 40 million years ago and migrated to Australia. Around 15 million years ago, a collision between Australia and Southeast Asia allowed the varanids to move into what is now the Indonesian archipelago, extending their range as far east as the island of Timor. The Komodo dragon was believed to have differentiated from its Australian ancestors 4 million years ago. However, recent fossil evidence from Queensland suggests that the Komodo dragon evolved in Australia before spreading to Indonesia. Dramatic lowering of sea level during the last glacial period uncovered extensive stretches of continental shelf that the Komodo dragon colonized, becoming isolated in their present island range as sea levels rose afterwards.

Description:
In the wild, an adult Komodo dragon usually weighs around 70 kilograms (150 lb), although captive specimens often weigh more. The largest verified wild specimen was 3.13 metres (10.3 ft) long and weighed 166 kilograms (370 lb), including undigested food. The Komodo dragon has a tail as long as its body, as well as about 60 frequently replaced serrated teeth that can measure up to 2.5 cm (1 inch) in length. Its saliva is frequently blood-tinged, because its teeth are almost completely covered by gingival tissue that is naturally lacerated during feeding. This creates an ideal culture for the virulent bacteria that live in its mouth. It also has a long, yellow, deeply forked tongue.
User Note: But depending on my summoning species, they can be tiny, normal sized, or Giant's.

|Senses|

The Komodo dragon does not have a particularly acute sense of hearing, despite its visible earholes, and is only able to hear sounds between 400 and 2000 hertz. It is able to see as far away as 300 metres (980 ft), but because its retinas only contain cones, it is thought to have poor night vision. The Komodo dragon is able to see in color, but has poor visual discrimination of stationary objects.
The Komodo dragon uses its tongue to detect, taste, and smell stimuli, as with many other reptiles, with the vomeronasal sense using a Jacobson's organ, a sense that aids navigation in the dark. With the help of a favorable wind and its habit of swinging its head from side to side as it walks, Komodo dragons may be able to detect carrion from 4–9.5 kilometres (2.5–6 mi) away. The dragon's nostrils are not of great use for smelling, as the animal does not have a diaphragm. It only has a few taste buds in the back of its throat. Its scales, some of which are reinforced with bone, have sensory plaques connected to nerves that facilitate its sense of touch. The scales around the ears, lips, chin, and soles of the feet may have three or more sensory plaques.
The Komodo dragon was formerly thought to be deaf when a study reported no agitation in wild Komodo dragons in response to whispers, raised voices, or shouts. This was disputed when London Zoological Garden employee Joan Proctor trained a captive specimen to come out to feed at the sound of her voice, even when she could not be seen.

Ecology:

Spoiler

The Komodo dragon prefers hot and dry places, and typically lives in dry open grassland, savanna, and tropical forest at low elevations. As an ectotherm, it is most active in the day, although it exhibits some nocturnal activity. Komodo dragons are largely solitary, coming together only to breed and eat. They are capable of running rapidly in brief sprints up to 20 kilometres per hour (12.4 mph), diving up to 4.5 metres (15 ft), and climbing trees proficiently when young through use of their strong claws. To catch prey that is out of reach, the Komodo dragon may stand on its hind legs and use its tail as a support. As the Komodo dragon matures, its claws are used primarily as weapons, as its great size makes climbing impractical.
For shelter, the Komodo dragon digs holes that can measure from 1–3 metres (3–10 ft) wide with its powerful forelimbs and claws. Because of its large size and habit of sleeping in these burrows, it is able to conserve body heat throughout the night and minimize its basking period the morning after. The Komodo dragon typically hunts in the afternoon, but stays in the shade during the hottest part of the day. These special resting places, usually located on ridges with a cool sea breeze, are marked with droppings and are cleared of vegetation. They also serve as a strategic location from which to ambush deer.

|Saliva|

Spoiler

Auffenberg described the Komodo dragon as having septic pathogens in its saliva, specifically the bacteria: E. Coli, Staphylococcus sp., Providencia sp., Proteus morgani and P. mirabilis. He noted that while these pathogens can be found in the mouths of wild Komodo dragons, they disappear from the mouths of captive animals, due to a cleaner diet and the use of antibiotics. This was verified by taking mucous samples from the external gum surface of the upper jaw of two freshly captured individuals. Saliva samples were analyzed by researchers at the University of Texas who found 57 different strains of bacteria growing in the mouths of three wild Komodo dragons including Pasteurella multocida. The rapid growth of these bacteria was noted by Fredeking: "Normally it takes about three days for a sample of P. multocida to cover a petri dish; ours took eight hours. We were very taken aback by how virulent these strains were".This study supported the observation that wounds inflicted by the Komodo dragon are often associated with sepsis and subsequent infections in prey animals. How the Komodo dragon is unaffected by these virulent bacteria remains a mystery.
In late 2005, researchers at the University of Melbourne speculated that the perentie (Varanus giganteus), other species of monitor, and agamids may be somewhat venomous. The team believes that the immediate effects of bites from these lizards were caused by mild envenomation. Bites on human digits by a lace monitor (V. varius), a Komodo dragon, and a spotted tree monitor (V. scalaris) all produced similar effects: rapid swelling, localized disruption of blood clotting, and shooting pain up to the elbow, with some symptoms lasting for several hours.
In 2009, the same researchers published further evidence demonstrating that Komodo dragons possess a venomous bite. MRI scans of a preserved skull showed the presence of two venom glands in the lower jaw. They extracted one of these glands from the head of a terminally ill specimen in the Singapore Zoological Gardens, and found that it secreted a venom containing several different toxic proteins. The known functions of these proteins include inhibition of blood clotting, lowering of blood pressure, muscle paralysis, and the induction of hypothermia, leading to shock and loss of consciousness in envenomated prey. As a result of the discovery, the previous theory that bacteria were responsible for the deaths of komodo victims was disputed.
Kurt Schwenk, an evolutionary biologist at the University of Connecticut finds the discovery of these glands intriguing, but considers most of the evidence for venom in the study to be "meaningless, irrelevant, incorrect or falsely misleading". Even if the lizards have venomlike proteins in their mouths, Schwenk argues, they may be using them for a different function, and he doubts that venom is necessary to explain the effect of a Komodo dragon bite, arguing that shock and blood loss are the primary factors.

Danger...To.People xd

Spoiler

Although attacks are very rare, Komodo dragons have been known to attack humans; on June 4, 2007 a Komodo dragon attacked an eight-year-old boy on Komodo Island. The boy later died of massive bleeding from his wounds. It was the first recorded fatal attack in 33 years. Natives blamed the attack on environmentalists outside the island prohibiting goat sacrifices. This denied the Komodo dragons their expected food source, causing them to wander into human civilization in search of food. A belief held by many natives of Komodo Island is that Komodo dragons are actually the reincarnation of fellow kinspeople and should thus be treated with reverence.
On March 24, 2009, two Komodo Dragons attacked and killed fisherman Muhamad Anwar on Komodo. Anwar was attacked after he fell out of a sugar-apple tree and was left bleeding badly from bites to his hands, body, legs, and neck. He was taken to a clinic on the neighboring island of Flores where he was pronounced dead on arrival.
In a bizarre incident in June 2001, Phil Bronstein, Executive Editor of the San Francisco Chronicle newspaper, was given a special tour of the Komodo dragons at the Los Angeles Zoo for a Father's Day present by his wife, the actress Sharon Stone. Bronstein and Stone were benefactors of the zoo. While barefooted and petting one of the dragons, Bronstein's foot was seriously bitten and required extensive surgery.

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

|Summoning Animal|

Komodo Dragon.
___
Detail's About the animal:

Spoiler

A member of the monitor lizard family (Varanidae), it is the largest living species of lizard, growing to an average length of 2 to 3 metres (6.6 to 9.8 ft) and weighing around 70 kilograms (150 lb). Their unusual size has been attributed to island gigantism, since there are no other carnivorous animals to fill the niche on the islands where they live.However, recent research suggests that the large size of komodo dragons may be better understood as representative of a relic population of very large varanid lizards that once lived across Indonesia and Australia, most of which, along with other megafauna, died out after contact with modern humans. Fossils very similar to V. komodoensis have been found in Australia dating to greater than 3.8 million years ago, and its body size remained stable on Flores, one of the handful of Indonesian islands where it is currently found, ever since Flores (along with neighboring islands) were isolated by rising sea levels approximately 900,000 years ago.
As a result of their size, these lizards dominate the ecosystems in which they live.

Etymology:

The Komodo dragon is also known as the Komodo monitor or the Komodo Island monitor in scientific literature, although this is not very common. To the natives of Komodo Island, it is referred to as ora, buaya darat (land crocodile) or biawak raksasa (giant monitor).

Evolutionary history:
The evolutionary development of the Komodo dragon started with the Varanus genus, which originated in Asia about 40 million years ago and migrated to Australia. Around 15 million years ago, a collision between Australia and Southeast Asia allowed the varanids to move into what is now the Indonesian archipelago, extending their range as far east as the island of Timor. The Komodo dragon was believed to have differentiated from its Australian ancestors 4 million years ago. However, recent fossil evidence from Queensland suggests that the Komodo dragon evolved in Australia before spreading to Indonesia. Dramatic lowering of sea level during the last glacial period uncovered extensive stretches of continental shelf that the Komodo dragon colonized, becoming isolated in their present island range as sea levels rose afterwards.

Description:
In the wild, an adult Komodo dragon usually weighs around 70 kilograms (150 lb), although captive specimens often weigh more. The largest verified wild specimen was 3.13 metres (10.3 ft) long and weighed 166 kilograms (370 lb), including undigested food. The Komodo dragon has a tail as long as its body, as well as about 60 frequently replaced serrated teeth that can measure up to 2.5 cm (1 inch) in length. Its saliva is frequently blood-tinged, because its teeth are almost completely covered by gingival tissue that is naturally lacerated during feeding. This creates an ideal culture for the virulent bacteria that live in its mouth. It also has a long, yellow, deeply forked tongue.
User Note: But depending on my summoning species, they can be tiny, normal sized, or Giant's.

|Senses|

The Komodo dragon does not have a particularly acute sense of hearing, despite its visible earholes, and is only able to hear sounds between 400 and 2000 hertz. It is able to see as far away as 300 metres (980 ft), but because its retinas only contain cones, it is thought to have poor night vision. The Komodo dragon is able to see in color, but has poor visual discrimination of stationary objects.
The Komodo dragon uses its tongue to detect, taste, and smell stimuli, as with many other reptiles, with the vomeronasal sense using a Jacobson's organ, a sense that aids navigation in the dark. With the help of a favorable wind and its habit of swinging its head from side to side as it walks, Komodo dragons may be able to detect carrion from 4–9.5 kilometres (2.5–6 mi) away. The dragon's nostrils are not of great use for smelling, as the animal does not have a diaphragm. It only has a few taste buds in the back of its throat. Its scales, some of which are reinforced with bone, have sensory plaques connected to nerves that facilitate its sense of touch. The scales around the ears, lips, chin, and soles of the feet may have three or more sensory plaques.
The Komodo dragon was formerly thought to be deaf when a study reported no agitation in wild Komodo dragons in response to whispers, raised voices, or shouts. This was disputed when London Zoological Garden employee Joan Proctor trained a captive specimen to come out to feed at the sound of her voice, even when she could not be seen.

Ecology:

Spoiler

The Komodo dragon prefers hot and dry places, and typically lives in dry open grassland, savanna, and tropical forest at low elevations. As an ectotherm, it is most active in the day, although it exhibits some nocturnal activity. Komodo dragons are largely solitary, coming together only to breed and eat. They are capable of running rapidly in brief sprints up to 20 kilometres per hour (12.4 mph), diving up to 4.5 metres (15 ft), and climbing trees proficiently when young through use of their strong claws. To catch prey that is out of reach, the Komodo dragon may stand on its hind legs and use its tail as a support. As the Komodo dragon matures, its claws are used primarily as weapons, as its great size makes climbing impractical.
For shelter, the Komodo dragon digs holes that can measure from 1–3 metres (3–10 ft) wide with its powerful forelimbs and claws. Because of its large size and habit of sleeping in these burrows, it is able to conserve body heat throughout the night and minimize its basking period the morning after. The Komodo dragon typically hunts in the afternoon, but stays in the shade during the hottest part of the day. These special resting places, usually located on ridges with a cool sea breeze, are marked with droppings and are cleared of vegetation. They also serve as a strategic location from which to ambush deer.

|Saliva|

Spoiler

Auffenberg described the Komodo dragon as having septic pathogens in its saliva, specifically the bacteria: E. Coli, Staphylococcus sp., Providencia sp., Proteus morgani and P. mirabilis. He noted that while these pathogens can be found in the mouths of wild Komodo dragons, they disappear from the mouths of captive animals, due to a cleaner diet and the use of antibiotics. This was verified by taking mucous samples from the external gum surface of the upper jaw of two freshly captured individuals. Saliva samples were analyzed by researchers at the University of Texas who found 57 different strains of bacteria growing in the mouths of three wild Komodo dragons including Pasteurella multocida. The rapid growth of these bacteria was noted by Fredeking: "Normally it takes about three days for a sample of P. multocida to cover a petri dish; ours took eight hours. We were very taken aback by how virulent these strains were".This study supported the observation that wounds inflicted by the Komodo dragon are often associated with sepsis and subsequent infections in prey animals. How the Komodo dragon is unaffected by these virulent bacteria remains a mystery.
In late 2005, researchers at the University of Melbourne speculated that the perentie (Varanus giganteus), other species of monitor, and agamids may be somewhat venomous. The team believes that the immediate effects of bites from these lizards were caused by mild envenomation. Bites on human digits by a lace monitor (V. varius), a Komodo dragon, and a spotted tree monitor (V. scalaris) all produced similar effects: rapid swelling, localized disruption of blood clotting, and shooting pain up to the elbow, with some symptoms lasting for several hours.
In 2009, the same researchers published further evidence demonstrating that Komodo dragons possess a venomous bite. MRI scans of a preserved skull showed the presence of two venom glands in the lower jaw. They extracted one of these glands from the head of a terminally ill specimen in the Singapore Zoological Gardens, and found that it secreted a venom containing several different toxic proteins. The known functions of these proteins include inhibition of blood clotting, lowering of blood pressure, muscle paralysis, and the induction of hypothermia, leading to shock and loss of consciousness in envenomated prey. As a result of the discovery, the previous theory that bacteria were responsible for the deaths of komodo victims was disputed.
Kurt Schwenk, an evolutionary biologist at the University of Connecticut finds the discovery of these glands intriguing, but considers most of the evidence for venom in the study to be "meaningless, irrelevant, incorrect or falsely misleading". Even if the lizards have venomlike proteins in their mouths, Schwenk argues, they may be using them for a different function, and he doubts that venom is necessary to explain the effect of a Komodo dragon bite, arguing that shock and blood loss are the primary factors.

Danger...To.People xd

Spoiler

Although attacks are very rare, Komodo dragons have been known to attack humans; on June 4, 2007 a Komodo dragon attacked an eight-year-old boy on Komodo Island. The boy later died of massive bleeding from his wounds. It was the first recorded fatal attack in 33 years. Natives blamed the attack on environmentalists outside the island prohibiting goat sacrifices. This denied the Komodo dragons their expected food source, causing them to wander into human civilization in search of food. A belief held by many natives of Komodo Island is that Komodo dragons are actually the reincarnation of fellow kinspeople and should thus be treated with reverence.
On March 24, 2009, two Komodo Dragons attacked and killed fisherman Muhamad Anwar on Komodo. Anwar was attacked after he fell out of a sugar-apple tree and was left bleeding badly from bites to his hands, body, legs, and neck. He was taken to a clinic on the neighboring island of Flores where he was pronounced dead on arrival.
In a bizarre incident in June 2001, Phil Bronstein, Executive Editor of the San Francisco Chronicle newspaper, was given a special tour of the Komodo dragons at the Los Angeles Zoo for a Father's Day present by his wife, the actress Sharon Stone. Bronstein and Stone were benefactors of the zoo. While barefooted and petting one of the dragons, Bronstein's foot was seriously bitten and required extensive surgery.

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