[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Jinbei]

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Water Style: Grand Festival [Suiton: Soodai Fesutibaru]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-mid
Description: After performing the necessary handseals, the user summons several pillars of water from the ground, thus creating a water source and, if summoned in the correct places, they can be used for defensive purposes.
~Can only be used and taught by Jinbei

~ Similar techniques exist ~

Fire Style: Burning Wave [Katen: Moeteimasu Tanpa]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary-offensive
Range: Short-mid
Description: The user emits a wave of fire chakra from his/her body. Thus creating an aura of flames around the user and making close range attacks difficult. Fire jutsu can be used easier and become stronger when used in combination with this jutsu, also any and all explosive tags nearby can be detonated with this jutsu.
~Only lasts one turn
~Can only be used and taught by Jinbei

~ Similar techniques exist ~

Water Style: Oil Shot [Suiton: Sekiyu Happoo]
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Description: The user shoots oil from his/her mouth like a bullet from a gun. The oil bullet then scatters shortly after being released, making oil move in multiple directions away from the user.
~Can only be used and taught by Jinbei

~ Similar techniques exist ~

 

[Hot.Tendo]

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(Shuredda Oujou)- Death Shredder
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 60
Description: a weapon that's hidden under the shinobi's disguise, it can be worn anytime the user likes. The blade consist of three blades with a skull like design, the weapon is enchanted by ninja priests that protected it for many years, it will aid the wielder if worn by increasing his speed, agility, strength for only a short time.

*note: User CANNOT use any jutsus with handseals while using this weapon, but can use jutsus that only requires single handseals or no handseals at all

Spoiler

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forgot to add this... sorry...

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Osutoricchi) Summoning : Ostrich
Summoning Animal:Ostrich
Scroll Owner:~Sexy~Tendo~
Other Users who have signed contract:None at the moment
Summoning Boss if existing:None at the moment
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

~ Contract approved ~
*thanks*

Name: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Osutoricchi) Summoning : Ostrich
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description:using the proper hand seals and using a small amount of blood, user can summon Omiko the Ostrich.While summoned the Ostrich is able to use his great speed to distract opponents.However though the Ostrich is restricted to attack only by using only his legs and beak.

~ No. Also, "not flying" isn't really a restriction. ~
*I removed it*

*Only Sexy~Tendo is able to summon these

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Ostriches are considered the fastest two legged animals and their eggs are one of the biggest in the world.

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~ Tell me, why the hell did you post this so it looks as if it's been checked already ? Are you a -. Anyway. Do that again, and it's a great way to ensure your jutsu never get actually checked. ~

a what?
yeah, I thought I heard something

(Shuredda Oujou)- Death Shredder
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 60
Description: a weapon that's hidden under the shinobi's disguise, it can be worn anytime the user likes. The blade consist of three blades with a skull like design, the weapon is enchanted by ninja priests that protected it for many years, it will aid the wielder if worn by increasing his speed, agility, strength for only a short time.

*note: User CANNOT use any jutsus with handseals while using this weapon, but can use jutsus that only requires single handseals or no handseals at all

Spoiler

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forgot to add this... sorry...

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Osutoricchi) Summoning : Ostrich
Summoning Animal:Ostrich
Scroll Owner:~Sexy~Tendo~
Other Users who have signed contract:None at the moment
Summoning Boss if existing:None at the moment
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

~ Contract approved ~

Name: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Osutoricchi) Summoning : Ostrich
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description:using the proper hand seals and using a small amount of blood, user can summon Omiko the Ostrich.While summoned the Ostrich is able to use his great speed to distract opponents.However though the Ostrich is restricted to attack only by using only his legs and beak.

~ No. Also, "not flying" isn't really a restriction. ~
*I removed it*

*Only Sexy~Tendo is able to summon these

Spoiler

Ostriches are considered the fastest two legged animals and their eggs are one of the biggest in the world.

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~ MY GOD< did you not understand ? I said, when YOU POST IT< MAKE SURE IT DOESN'T LOOK AS IF ITS BEEN CHECKED ALREADY ! AND IT STILL DOES ! BECAUSE YOU'VE LEFT MY REPLIES IN THERE ! JEEZ ! ~

 

[Ragnaroc]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton: Renkinjutsu Taikyokuken (Lightning Release: Grand Ultimate Fist Alchemy)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short through Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: With each punch, a current of electricity is released through the substance. This, combined with great chakra
control, ensures that the current, instead of merely passing through the element, acts on its atomic structure, thus
transforming its composition. To use these techniques, you have to first be wearing the Grand Ultimate Gauntlets. After
putting on the guantlets, the user is able to break down the opponents attacks and/or reconstruct them for their own needs.
It can also be used to transform elements into offensive or defensive uses.
Restrictions:
-User must be wearing Renkinjutsu Kougake (Grand Ultimate Fist Guantlets)
-Can only be used on a S-Rank or Forbidden jutsu once
-If used on a S-Rank or Forbidden jutsu, no alchemy can be performed for two turns
-Can be used on a B through A Rank jutsu 4 times
-If used on a B or A Rank jutsu, no alchemy can be performed in the following turn
-Can be used on a C through E Rank jutsu 7 times
-If used on non-jutsu elements it can be used 10 times
-Can only be taught with the approval of Ragnaroc and Emperor

I'm going to get beat up quite alot here...
but it seems OP right now both having ability to reverse an opponents jutsu so easily, counting as 1 jutsu?​

Renkinjutsu Kougake (Grand Ultimate Fist Guantlets)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: These guantlets improve the damage done through taijutsu attacks and allow the user
to defend against normal weapons like kunai and swords.
Once the user removes the guanlets, they are unable to put them back on for the rest of the fight.
- +10 damage to Taijutsu
- The gauntlets are indestructible
- Can only be taught with the approval of Ragnaroc and Emperor

~Approved~​

Raiton: Renkinjutsu Taikyokuken (Lightning Release: Grand Ultimate Fist Alchemy)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short through Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: With each punch, a current of electricity is released through the substance. This, combined with great chakra control, ensures that the current, instead of merely passing through the element, acts on its atomic structure, thus transforming its composition. To use these techniques, you have to first be wearing the Grand Ultimate Gauntlets. After putting on the guantlets, the user is able to break down the opponents attacks and/or reconstruct them for their own needs. It is unable to redirect the original jutsu back at the opponent, but can transform the jutsu into an another attack of equal strength to the rank that was transmuted. It can also be used to transform non-jutsu based elements into offensive or defensive uses.
Restrictions:
-Can only be used on a S-Rank or Forbidden jutsu once
-If used on a S-Rank or Forbidden jutsu, no alchemy can be performed for two turns
-If used on a S-Rank or Forbidden jutsu, only able to break down the element.
-Can be used on a B through A Rank jutsu 4 times
-If used on a B or A Rank jutsu, no alchemy can be performed in the following turn
-Can be used on a C through E Rank jutsu 7 times
-If used on non-jutsu elements it can be used 10 times
-Can only be taught with the approval of Ragnaroc and Emperor

~ Leaving for Kiwi since I was involved in the creation of this weapon ~

approved - i'll see how OP it pans out in battle... people smart should in theory get around it.​

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ekichiku| Beast of Burden
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is used to a beast formed from a tar like substance to ensnare and attack targets. In order to performed this technique a significant amount of tar is required to form the creature out of. As such this technique employs a ninjutsu based summoning to conjure a mass of tar to be used. After the necessary tar is ready the user preforms three handseals causing the tar to take the form of a beast, that is able to create tentacles and shoot masses of tar at the opponent. The amount of chakra needed to sustain the technique prevents the user from using more then one technique at a time while this jutsu is in affect.
(Last 2 turns)

~Declined~​

Sakanagi| Backlash
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra: 50
Damage: +30 to techniques
Description: By using this technique, the user must engulf their either their left or right arm with a black liquid substance similar to that of tar. A glowing stream of blue chakra that appears to be violently slithering and erupting around his/her arm as if a creature began to tear upon the casters skin in attempts to escape its prison until it finally locates an opening upon the users hand that reveals a terrifying eye that gives an dark essence within the area. The essence in not totally terrifying, rather gives off an unknown and eerie sensation. The newly formed arm may seem slightly larger and muscular then their regular arm. In fact, it actually increases the users physical strength, capable of punching through steel and create small craters in the earth upon damaging other creations. The thick coat around his arm also serves as sort of defense as it has been said to be indestructible; this is unknown factor however. Weapons such as swords and kunai are unable to even pierce this black skin, in which it usual chips or breaks the weapon. Immense pressure applied deems to irritate the performers limb, not enough for agonizing pain. Making it wise decision to use in close quarters combat and for defense purposes against some offensive movements from the enemy. The opening eye located in his hand is capable of poisoning an enemy by coming in contact with the designated target and sending a strange seal That can act like a poison that will appear to enter the their blood stream, a light blue color flowing through their veins that slowly turns into a black color. This gives the opponent nausea, a difficulty to concentrate. Not only does it target the opponent but it can also poison chakra, making the chakra rot becoming unstable. This makes it effective against shields and barriers techniques that are affiliated with chakra as they would usually leave an opening or completely break. Though the charge must take at least fifteen seconds while touching the target. Although the user is able to disrupt the targets flow of chakra for merely fifteen seconds by activating the seal, causing whichever technique they are currently preforming to halt, rendering the use of chakra useless for the short amount of time.
-Last 4 turns
- No Chakra Usable after usage for 3 turns.

~Declined... seems extremely OP, Do Not Resubmit~​

 

[~Hasashi~]

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Mera-Mera onara (Flame-Flame fart)
Rank: A
Type: attack
Range: short-long (the fire only reaches mid but the smell reaches long)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 90 (+20 for mera-mera +10 for the fart_
Description: Once Mera-Mera is activated the user will lean over and focuses chakra to his anus. He then pushes and releases a chakra-infused fart, which combined with the flames of his body becomes a huge jet of fire. Besides for the obvious strength of the flames the fart also leaves a horrible stench on the field blurring the opponents vision and making it extremely hard to breath. The smell can only be cleared by an S rank wind jutsu
~3 times per battle
~stench lasts for three turns
~only in mera-mera

~Declined: do not resubmit~​

Mera-Mera katateochi henkan (Flame-Flame partial transformation)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: short
chakra: 20
damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses fire chakra into any part of his body(whether it be an arm or leg ect...) and temporarily transforms that body part into fire(only lasts a few seconds). This can be used to either stop that body part from getting crushed or to release a mera-mera jutsu from that body part.
~6 times per battle
~no more than half the body can be transformed at once utilizing this form of mera-mera
~mera-mera jutsu released from this body part only get +10

Approved... can't see anything wrong
but if it has some serious abuse issues be ready for it declined at any point ​

Mera-Mera DAIENKAI ENTEI (Flame-Flame Flaming Emperor)
Rank: Forbidden
type: Attack/supplementary
Range: Short-long
chakra: 50
damage: 140 (20 for mera mera and it is even stronger than the average forbidden jutsu)
description:
description: Once in mera-mera, the user will focuses fire chakra into the ground and 5 rings of fire will appear on the ground, then from the ground a huge miniature sun will rise. The sun is so hot that it turns the entire battlefield to a wasteland, any trees are incinerated, any bodies of water created by the opponent during the battle are evaporated, the very ground the user and his opponent stand on turn to a near lava state. The sun is so hot that it heats the air to a point where the heat makes it impossible to create any water or water based jutsu while the sun is on the field. After 1 turn the user will thrust his arm forward and the sun will launch it self at the opponent. Once launched the sun has 2 abilities. It can either compress into a small ball and because of this everything gets sucked towards it do to the rush of air and once it is is finished compressing it will explode releasing a huge wave of fire in all directions, or it can burst out releasing thousands of fireballs in every direction incinerating everything on contact.

~no more water or ice jutsu can be used for the rest of the battle
~mera-mera ends when the sun jutsu ends. This can work to the users advantage or disadvantage, if he activates it on the last turn of mera-mera it is extended one turn however if he activates it on the first turn it ends prematurely
~only one more mera-mera activation for the rest of the battle
~while the sun is on the field due to the heat all fire jutsu go up +20
~no EIG or any other mode can be preformed 4 turns after usage
~due to the heat on the field the opponents skin is burned (happens to the user as well) and after mera-mera ends no taijutsu or hand seals can be done while for the user and his opponent (only takes affect for the user and opponent after mera-mera is ended)
~no KG for the rest of the battle
~does 70 damage to the user after mera-mera
~if combined with mera-mera advanced heat the user can't continue fighting afterward

Declined: OP, you're making too many fire boosting jutsu...
plus you want ice and water to be unusable? wtf? no KG too?
(i'm pretty sure you don't use kg so i assume you mean the opponent...)

it's basically the sun god jutsu aswell...​

 

[Alucard]

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Rank: A/S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30/40
Damage Points: Same amount of damage as the absorbed technique.
Description: The user will do 13 hand seals and will then stomp on the ground, releasing his chakra. Immediately a giant mouth with huge jaws will come out of the ground. The mouth can appear where the user whishes, but it often appears next to the user. This giant mouth has the ability to absorb the chakra within the opponent’s jutsu. Once it has been summoned, a vortex of chakra will be created on it’s mouth which will absorb the opponent’s technique. Then it will go underground and once the user makes snake hand seal, the mouth will appear again where he wishes, shooting a blast of raw chakra towards the opponent with the same power as the jutsu the opponent used. The user can call this monster figure to appear any time he wants, meaning once it goes underground, the user can use other techniques.
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*Usable twice per battle
*It can only absorb one technique per usage, meaning it can't absorb elemental combos.
*A-rank version can absorb techniques up to A-rank
*S-rank version can absorb techniques up to S-rank

~Declined~ OP

I restricted it more.

Doton: Ago no Akuma| Earth Release: The Devil’s Jaws

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Rank: A/S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30/40
Damage Points: Same amount of damage as the absorbed technique.
Description: The user will do 13 hand seals and will then stomp on the ground, releasing his chakra. Immediately a giant mouth with huge jaws will come out of the ground. The mouth can appear where the user wishes, but it often appears next to him. This giant mouth has the ability to absorb the chakra within the opponent’s jutsu. Once it has been summoned, a vortex of chakra will be created on it’s mouth which will absorb the opponent’s technique. Then it will go underground and once the user makes the snake hand seal, the mouth will move underground (it moves with the same speed as if the user was using underground fish projection) and will appear again where the user wants to, shooting a blast of raw chakra towards the opponent with the same power as the jutsu the opponent used. The user can call this monster figure to appear any time he wants, meaning once it goes underground, the user can use other techniques.
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*Usable twice per battle.
*It can only absorb one technique per usage, meaning it can't absorb elemental combos.
*A-rank version can absorb techniques up to A-rank.
*S-rank version can absorb techniques up to S-rank.
*No S-rank earth techniques next turn.

~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

Doton: Tsuchi Tenshu no Ude| Earth Release: The Arms of the Earth God

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: -
Description: The user will focus earth chakra on his shoulders and can make a total of 4 extra arms to come out of himself. This arms are strong enough to punch and destroy a rock boulder. They give an advantage to the user while in a taijutsu fight. These arms can also be used to make hand seals. Once used, the user continues with these extra arms unless they're destroyed or the user cancels the flow of earth chakra to his arms, turning them to dust.
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*Usable three times per battle

~ Wouldn't the added weight cause you to become extremely slow, not to mention potentially overbalance and fall over ? ~

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Suitai Hifuuin) – Secret Seal of Weakening
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu disrupts the strength of a seal that is placed on someone and makes the target weakened and unstable, leaving the target vulnerable.
Note: Must have direct contact.
Note: Can only be used once and must wait 1 turn to use sealing methods.
Note: Can only be taught by Zenryoku

~ Needs better explanation ~

(Suitai Hifuuin) – Secret Seal of Weakening
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu disrupts the strength of a seal that is placed on someone and makes the target weakened and unstable, leaving the target vulnerable.The way in which this technique works is that the seal is placed directly upon the other seal and it then begins to move and bind itself within the other seal thus weakening the power of the seal and affecting the bonds that hold it strong acting like a key to unlock the seal to a state of weakness.
Note: Must have direct contact.
Note: Can only be used once and must wait 1 turn to use sealing methods.
Note: Can only be taught by Zenryoku

~ So this is basically useful only if the opponent possess a seal on himself already ? ~

hopefully this may help explain the techniques ability and how it affects the target

 

[-Naruto Uzumaki-]

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Sealing Jutsu: Elemental Chakra Seal (Fuuinjutsu: Youso Chakra Inshou)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 0
Description: The user places a seal on the opponent and performs one hand seal, causing the opponent to lose the ability to perform one type of elemental jutsu (Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, etc). The seal, embedding itself into the opponent's skin, turns into a sort of tattoo, which makes removal of the seal (until it naturally dissolves away by itself) extremely difficult.
Note: The seal lasts for two turns (the turn in which it's placed and the following turn).
Note: Can only be used once per battle

~ Similar techniques exist ~

 

[s06p]

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
shinshou
Type:Weapon
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage:90
Description:Shinsou was an indestructible blade which whose creator is unknown.It was found by a person named Muramusa,the demon of war.The blade was used in so many uncountable battles that it gained a black color due to the drying up of blood on it.Fire and Wind chakra can be chanelled into this blade and two powerful S ranked blasts of wind or fire chakra nature can be sent at the opponent each turn.The sword is about 1 metre long and is very sharp as it can easily cut through rock and even cut through metal when wind chakra is chanelled Into it.It is said that if anyone aside from the wielder of the sword itself looks at the swords blade the person will be cut though it is just a rumour and not true.When fire chakra in channeled into the sword and if the opponent is hit he will be burnt at the place the sword cuts,however chanelling wind chakra into it only makes it sharper.(and the blasts ofcourse.)
Pros
-The user can channel both wind and lightning chakra into the sword.
-The sword is extremely sharp.
-All wind and lightning jutsus of the user increase by a rank.
-If anyone expect the owner touches the summoning scroll of the sword both the sword and the summoning contract are teleported to a secret location known only to the owner.
-Both wind and fire chakra can be chanelled into the sword together however if this is done the wind chakra makes the fire chakra in the sword alot more stronger.

Cons
-Each blast is considered as a move.
-If wind and fire chakra are chanelled into the sword in the same turn the sword cannot cut through metal etc as the wind chakra just makes the fire chakra stronger.

~ Reduce the purple part, rank the sword down from Forbidden ~
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Mubiyoshi(Infinite Beats)
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:Mubiyoshi is a swift and strong punch using the principles of karate(moving the
punching hand and the non-active hand at the same time as if "connected behind the back
using a pulley",Jujutsu(as if using a sword,by throwing ones body weight into the opponent
to cut through a person),Chinese kenpo(surpassing the limit of mind with the feeling of
sending your hand flying out),and Mauy Thai(hit the enemy as if you are punching through
them).By combining all these forms of martial arts combined with chakra in their hands
the user punches their enemy immobalising them in a swift blow.
Note:
-If the punch connects the enemy will be immobalised due to the immense force of the punch.
-The punch only immobalises out the enemy if hit it connects on the stomach.If it hits elsewhere it will only cause emmence amounts of pain.
-The punch needs 3 seconds to form due to the user combining 4 martial arts into one punch.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~ Umm, wtf. This is basically a normal martial arts punch ~
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Shirahara Nagashi
Rank: A
Type:Attack+Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:A technique developed by kenichi hyuga to defend himself against armed martial artists,
especially those using bladed weapons. As said by his sensei "when fighting a sword user,
you often don't have time to defend and attack," and thus this technique
was developed for this reason. In essence, it is a corkscrew blow which dodges a sword
swing and punches the opponent simultaneously. As the weapon is swung, Kenichi begins the
punch with the palm of his hand of the clenched fist facing upwards. Before his fist hits
the weapon, he turns it counter-clockwise (when using his right hand), which allows his
thumb to face up and the weapon to pass along the back of his hand without touching him,
thus effectively dodging the attack. He then completes the rotation while using his
shoulder to extend his reach and punch the opponent. It is important to note that Kenichi
is known to use this technique against unarmed opponents as well, for example, he uses it
when training with Miu at one point.
Restrictions:
-This technique can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be used and taught by s06p.

~Declined as I already made that technique from HSDK into a custom a long time ago~

~ Get Caliburn to check this ~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Been a week -_-

Fire Dome (Kasai no Domu )

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90
Description: This jutsu is a very strong and strain full one.The user will concentrate fire around him(not rotate it) and make it keep expanding at high speed as he is building fire in him.Than he will release all of it at once creating a super huge explosion that looks like a huge fire dome from far away.It is also released so fast that in short range it is almost inpossible to react to unless you have a dojutsu or sannin rank reaction.
*can only be used every 4 turns after usage
*Can only be taught by Mugen-sama
*Can only be taught by mugen

~Wouldn't this destroy you too since your are at the epicenter?~
Fire seal (kasai no fuuin )

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: +30 to fire
Description: The user will focus chakra to his stomach and a kanji "Fire" will appear there.The user with this seal will seal away his water and wind chakra's for a short periode of time in order to boost his fire up.While with this state the user can't use wind or water at all, and his earth and lightning will be -5 in damage because of the overwhelming fire in his body
*Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns turn

random idea xd
~Declined~ Suppressing different chakra types will not enchance another. Do Not Resubmit
Time seal (timu no fuuin )

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: from user 360 degrees up to mid
Chakra Cost:40 (15 each turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: the user will concentrate chakra to his hand,and a word in kanji "time" will appear on his palm.He will than slam the hand on the ground.To a no dojutsu eye it,he wont see the barrier.A small force feild will appear around the user, and anything (jutsu,person,weapon) that enters it will go into a state of slow motion while in the barrier.(the speed will decrees by 3 times)
*Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns turn

~Declined~
Palm katana style( palmu no katana ryu )

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will concentrate chakra to his hand creating a blade like form.Than he uses his palm like a katana to attack,defend a opponent.This jutsu is very fast to create since all you need is chakra in the palm,so it can catch a person off guard.
*Can only be taught by mugen

~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
2 sword style: Flying X (Nitoryu: hisan exsu )

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90
Description: the user will use both of his swords to create a X form.Than by using their advanced speed they will concentrate chakra to their katanas, and quickly do a X slashing motion as well as realeasing the chakra in the swords.Thus creating a X that travels at the opponent.
*Considered taijutsu
*Can only be taught by Mugen-sama

~Change the name Nitoryu as the name is already taken~

Fire Dome (Kasai no Domu )

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90
Description: This jutsu is a very strong and strain full one.The user will concentrate fire around him(not rotate it) and make it keep expanding at high speed as he is building fire in him.Than he will release all of it at once creating a super huge explosion that looks like a huge fire dome from far away.It is also released so fast that in short range it is almost inpossible to react to unless you have a dojutsu or sannin rank reaction.
*can only be used every 4 turns after usage
*Can only be taught by Mugen-sama
*Can only be taught by mugen

It wouldnt damage me because it around me.And the explosian doesnt go into the ceanter(me) it explodes in a expanding manner meaning goes in all directions

~ Similar techniques exist ~

Twin dragon style: Flying X (tsuin doragon ryu: hisan exsu )

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90
Description: the user will use both of his swords to create a X form.Than by using their advanced speed they will concentrate chakra to their katanas, and quickly do a X slashing motion as well as realeasing the chakra in the swords.Thus creating a X that travels at the opponent.
*Considered taijutsu
*Can only be taught by Mugen-sama

~ Doesn't deserve Forbidden, doesn't even deserve S-Rank, where are the restrictions ? ~

Edit: ~Declined as I already have a jutsu that does exactly the same and no that's kenjutsu, it doesn't become taijutsu just because you say it~

How should I change the name? 2 sword style= nitoryu lols Its like saying change the name sword to something diffrent cause someone already took it.But okey,I guess this one will work

 

[ZK]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Illusion Technique: Sorrow Psychic destruction – Genjutsu: kanashimi reikon hakai
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: Psychic destruction, is an advanced genjutsu, that requires eye contact with the target. Before the user is able to do the technique, he/she must do a single handseal, and look into the targets eyes/eye. If the target is caught in the genjutsu, he/she will relive his/her saddest memory, the memory where they felt the most sorrow, while this memory is being relived, the target is completely unable to move, he/she is still able to speak, the genjutsu last for 2 turns, (excluding the turn it was used on them) or until it’s broken. when the genjutsu is broken, or it ends, tears will appear in the eyes of the target.

Notes:
• This genjutsu makes the target relive his/her saddest memory so if the target does not have a memory where they’ve felt sorry the jutsu won’t affect them an example is Orochimaru.
• Can only be used two times per battle.
• Can only be taught by ZeroGarra.

~ Too long ~

 

[Damon Salvatore]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(kotton shouzoku-Cotton Costume)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Self
Chakra:30
Description:The user uses his chakra to extend the cotton in his clothes and then he envelopes himself with a thick plast of it
*Note:Lasts 1 turn
*Note:Can be used 3 times per battle

~ Sounds like a custom element to me ~

 

[Jokey]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Kuroi Leopard | Black Leopard
Scroll Owner: Jamal-Sama.
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: Bouryokudan
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None

| Kuchiyose: Kuroi Bouryokudan | Summoning: Black Gangster.

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Type: Attack/Defence.
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Bouryokudan is the Boss of the black Leopards. He is a very strong leopard and have very sharp claws. He is a very fast and Smart Leopard. He always have a answer. If someone challange's him, he always plays smart with the opponent that he's fighting. He always try the opponent out, then when he knows every weakness he attacks with everything he can. He can shoot Water & Lightning & Fire & Wind balls. With his sharp claws he can dig into Earth for defence like Underground Protecting Fish.

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~ Similar contract exist ~

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Well its been a week since i submitted my lasst customs. So here we go again.

Genjutsu:shindou (Genjutsu: Vibration)
Rank:A
Type:Offensive
Range:All (as long as eye contact can be made)
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description:
After making eye contact with the opponent, the opponent begins to feel as if they are vibrating intensely, making it hard to complete seals and focus. The effects of the jutsu last two turns.
*Can only be used twice

~ Explain how hard ~

Doton: teguchi kuro-n (Earth style: Trick Golem)
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
After throwing a flash bomb, the user quickly makes a single seal, creating a golem of the same size and shape of himself, which takes his spot and the user quickly goes underground, the golem will run towards the opponent and explode, sending multiple shards of rock in all directions, hurting all caught in the blast range.

~ This is a combination of two EXISTING CANON jutsu, why is it submitted as one ? ~

Katon:su-pa nenshou( Fire Style: Super Combustion )
Rank:S
Range:Short/mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
While focusing on a previously released wind jutsu, the user can focus his fire chakra into the jutsu, changing it from a wind to fire jutsu, as long as it's in range of the user.
The wind jutsu will retain it's original shape, but it will simply change elements due to combustion.
*Can only be used twice
*If used, the user can only use two jutsu that turn

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
*Cannot be used on consecutive turns

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sealing Jutsu: Elemental Chakra Seal (Fuuinjutsu: Youso Chakra Inshou)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 0
Description: The user places a seal on the opponent and performs one hand seal, causing the opponent to lose the ability to perform one type of elemental jutsu (Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, etc). The seal, embedding itself into the opponent's skin, turns into a sort of tattoo, which makes removal of the seal (until it naturally dissolves away by itself) extremely difficult.
Note: The seal lasts for two turns (the turn in which it's placed and the following turn).
Note: Can only be used once per battle

Ace already made that jutsu, tough it's not of much use since it only lasts one turn O_O

(Fuuinjutsu: Ichi Soshi Chouin ) - Sealing Technique: One Elemental Sealing Technique
Rank: Forbbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user takes out a prepared seal. Once it is placed on them, it makes the opponent unable to use one element for one turn once placed on them.
Note: Only useable 1 per battle
Note: Can only be used by Ace
Note: Can't seal custom elements

 

[Ańbu Juniør]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tsubaki kusabana) Camellia Flower
Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range:Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (if the user is underground)
Description: Tsubaki is a Mini-sycth, linked at their ends by enchanted chains that are able to expand into mid range and retract into short range at the users will. Tsubaki can be summoned in the users hand or in its sheath. Tsubaki has black and silver colored handles. The user can channel lightning chakra into Tsubaki to create an aura of electrical currents around the blades allowing them to cut through things easier. Also while the swords are active the users lightning techniques are increased by 10+ so that the users lightning jutsu are stronger. Once every 4 turns the sword can channel lightning chakra through the ground to electrocute the opponent (The lightning chakra can travel up to mid range). Tsubaki can absorb lightning chakra up C-rank.
(Usable once per turm)
(The users Earth jutsu's drops by 10 damage points)
(can only be taught by AJ)

~ Similar weapons exist ~

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Kendou: Mugen Ichi-Katana kata – Fukisoku Narabi) Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style – Disorderly Line
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will spin the sword in their hand in a circular manner which causes them to knock the swords around them into the air. By continuing to spin the sword in the user’s hand, the user can hit the other swords as they are in the air, which makes them stay afloat. A small amount of wind chakra is channeled inside the user’s blade to help achieve this. This technique allows the user to keep ten swords afloat around him in the air, allowing both a powerful defense and an overwhelming attack, depending on how the user decides to use the floating blades. Coming into close range, into the range of the swords, is ill-advised because the opponent would be slashed to shreds do to the high speed needed to keep all the swords afloat, and thus, the swords themselves are moving quickly around the user.

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*Note: Must have the Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style active.
*Note: Usable only by Musashibo, Akiza, and KeotsuEclipse.
*Note: Only Musashibo is allowed to teach this move.
*Note: Only usable twice per battle.
*Note: If two swords are used the amount of swords able to be kept in the air by the user doubles to twenty.
*Note: May not be used again for three turns after first activation.
*Note: The swords remain in the air as long as the user works to keep them there, though this keeps the user from using handseals.
*Note: The swords in this technique may be used to activate other Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style techniques.

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Mifune using Disorderly Line in the air.

~declined, unrealistic. That you do that with 3-4 swords might be possible, however with 10 you need to be extremely fast, let alone 20. On top of that you wouldn't even have any space left Saying that fuuton chakra helps you can better make it into a full fuuton-jutsu~

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(Kamei Gigei: Shinkirou Ken) Command Art: Mirage Blade
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Unlike other Kenjutsu Shockwaves which are generally large, Mirage Blade is a small shockwave that’s size is the same as the blade length of the sword used to launch it. Sacrificing power for speed and quantity, Mirage Blade travels at a speed traceable only by 2 Tome Sharingan users and above – experienced Shinobi can also track this attack without a Doujutsu. A large amount of chakra is focused inside the blade in a massive wave. Though the chakra should pour out of the user’s sword, a shell of chakra formed around the blade causes the chakra to rebound infinitely inside the actual blade of the sword. When the user slashes their blade it releases some of this chakra in a white, rippling shockwave; thus the name Mirage Blade. This attack passes through physical objects (such as steel or buildings), but is stopped by energy attacks (such as fire, lightning, or chakra). If this attack hits the opponent, they will feel the physical impact of the attack, despite the shockwave being pure chakra.

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*Three shockwaves can be fired per use.
*This attack does 40 damage to the opponent’s health and the other 20 points is subtracted from their chakra total.
*Useable three times per battle, though if the user does not launch all three shockwaves in one turn the shockwaves can be launched at a later time; no more than 9 shockwaves via this technique may be used in a battle.
*Cannot be used on consecutive turns.
*Shockwave is traceable by people with 2-tome or higher Sharingan, or by S-rank and above ninja.
*Useable and taught by Keotsu only.

~Declined as you say the shockwave is made out of pure chakra, so how can it just go through physical objects without damage and hurt a person, which is actually also a physical object?~

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(Kendou: Mugen Ichi-Katana kata – Fukisoku Narabi) Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style – Disorderly Line
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Using their Fuuton chakra, the user will engulf several of the katana scattered around the field with wind. The wind chakra lifts the blades up into the air, and keeps them aloft. The user can control the blades as needed, though while idle they spin around the user in a dome formation, providing both a powerful offense as well as an strong defense.

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*Note: Must have the Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style active.
*Note: Usable only by Musashibo, Akiza, and KeotsuEclipse.
*Note: Only Musashibo is allowed to teach this move.
*Note: Only usable twice per battle.
*Note: Up to fifteen sword can be put into the air.
*Note: May not be used again for three turns after first activation.
*Note: The swords in this technique may be used to activate other Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style techniques.

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Mifune using Disorderly Line in the air.

~Approved, though this jutsu is also considered part fuuton~

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(Kamei Gigei: Shinkirou Ken) Command Art: Mirage Blade
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Unlike other Kenjutsu Shockwaves which are generally large, Mirage Blade is a small shockwave that’s size is the same as the blade length of the sword used to launch it. Sacrificing power for speed and quantity, Mirage Blade travels at a speed traceable only by 2 Tome Sharingan users and above – experienced Shinobi can also track this attack without a Doujutsu. A large amount of chakra is focused inside the blade in a massive wave. Though the chakra should pour out of the user’s sword, a shell of chakra formed around the blade causes the chakra to rebound infinitely inside the actual blade of the sword. When the user slashes their blade it releases some of this chakra in a white, rippling shockwave; thus the name Mirage Blade. Mirage Blade also carries the properties of the blade used to fire it, as well as its size; this means that if the blade used to fire Mirage Blade is sharp enough, Mirage Blade will pass through solid objects by slicing them in half and continuing on, much like a Wind element jutsu would.

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*Mirage Blade is not Fuuton element, the comparison to a Fuuton jutsu takes into account an extremely sharp blade.
*Three shockwaves can be fired per use.
*This attack does 40 damage to the opponent’s health and the other 20 points is subtracted from their chakra total.
*Useable three times per battle, though if the user does not launch all three shockwaves in one turn the shockwaves can be launched at a later time; no more than 9 shockwaves via this technique may be used in a battle.
*Cannot be refreshed on consecutive turns.
*Shockwave is traceable by people with 2-tome or higher Sharingan, or by S-rank and above ninja.
*Useable and taught by Keotsu only.

I hope those are fixed right like you said in the previous post.

~Approved, however to make clear when using multiple shockwaves at the same time the strength of each individual becomes weaker. For instance you can't say that you use two shockwaves to block 2 separate incoming jutsu's at the same time as otherwise it would mean you could use 6 or more jutsu's in one turn~

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(Yuttarishita Omoi) Calm Mind
Rank: A
Range: Self
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Zero
Description: Yuttarishita Omoi is a self-targeting Genjutsu, in which the user uses their chakra to affect their own brain instead of their opponents. People in near-death situations often recall how time seemed to slow down – time has not really slowed, their perception of time has quickened, allowing them to think faster in a shorter amount of time. The user replicates but enhances these effects by targeting two parts of their own mind: they activate the part of the brain that causes this altered perception of time, but they also affect the part of the brain that controls the body, and envelop themselves in a sense of calmness – this prevents the flood of adrenaline that comes with the altered perception of time. The user now has extraordinary control of their body, as they are seeing everything at 5x reduced speed. The physical abilities of the user do not increase or decrease with the activation of this jutsu, the user simply gains better control of their own body, allowing them to react in ways that would require time to think that may not be available in battle. (I.e. The user of this jutsu is attacked by (Doton: Ganchuusou), but because they seem time as if it was moving 5x slower, the user can move their body between the spikes, avoiding them, if their body would be physically able to move at that speed.) This is especially effective when trying to find holes in an opponents Taijutsu barrage. And, by the calming effects of the jutsu, the users train of thought becomes much more controlled and clear.

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*Lasts for 5 turns.
*Can only be used twice per battle.
*Cannot be used on the turn during or after the five turn limit to extend the effects of the jutsu; there must be a minimum two turns between the turn this jutsu wears off and the user reactivates it.
*On the first turn after this jutsu wears off, only one (nin/gen)jutsu can be used, on the second turn, only two. This is because the body must shift back into normal perception without the use of adrenaline to augment body movements.

~ Leaving for Cali ~

~Declined, do not resubmit. It's nice in theory, however in real it's something else as it just doesn't feel right. However most important of all this is pretty much the Inner Gates. Two of the eight gates are located in the brain and when they open those gates the chakra flow in the brain is tremendously increased. So if it's possible, it's already existing in the gates~

 

[Gin-Sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind Piercing Tornado (Futun ketatamashii tatsumaki)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: 80 When use to attack
Description: after the user make a ram hand seal he will spin himself in a high speed and he can emit a piercing wind power like a tornado.
Note: this jutsu is very weak in fire, but very strong defense in lightning and taijutsu. can only use twice per battle but you will wait for 5 turns. only Gin-Sama can use this tech.

~ Similar techniques exist ~

Raising Fire/wind Claw (seiiku Katon/futon tsume)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - med
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: After the user make the tiger hand seal and focus fire chakra in his left hand and wind chakra in his right hand he will release a multiple fire and wind claws maximum of 10 to strike the Enemy.
Note: this jutsu is very strong minor wind and fire jutsu but weak in the water. can only be used twice fire battle. And Gin-Sama can use this Tech.

~ If fire is in one hand and wind in the other, how will they become fire/wind combos ? ~

Lightning Beam (Raiton sen)
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: N/A
Description: After the user make a Ox,Rabbit, Monkey hand seal the user make a two lightning pillars in front of him that project a very Bright light that can Blind the Enemies.
Note: the enemy cant see the battle field in one turn, can only be use once per Battle, can only be used By Gin-Sama

~ Similar techniques exist ~

 

[Akiza]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Kuroi Tora | Black Tiger
Scroll Owner: Jamal-Sama.
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: Bouryokudan
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None

| Kuchiyose: Kuroi Bouryokudan | Summoning: Black Gangster.

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Type: Attack/Defence.
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Bouryokudan is the Boss of the black tigers. He is a very strong tiger and have very sharp claws. He is a very fast and Smart Tiger. He always have a answer. If someone challange's him, he always plays smart with the opponent that he's fighting. He always try the opponent out, then when he knows every weakness he attacks with everything he can. He can shoot Water & Lightning & Fire & Wind balls. With his sharp claws he can dig into Earth for defence like Underground Protecting Fish.

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If I may point something out, there is no such thing as a black tiger, and the image you have is of a black leopard....there's a difference you know -_-. it even says so in the link.

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[Faith]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Black Revenger
Type:Weapon
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:For both form it made out of pure strong steel that it's almost indestructible and the sheath is made up of black/black crystal like mineral.
This sword also allow user to channel in fire/lighting chakra in it. To go to second form of the sword [ Katana ] the user will have to channel in chakra into the first form [ Cane ] in order to transform to the second form but it doesn't take up alot of time. The user also capable of launching chakra waves that can knock back eneny[cane form] and also launching chakra wave that can seriously harm/even kill enemy [ sword form ]


First Form[Cane]

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• User can channel in fire/wind/lighting chakra in it
• Launching chakra wave can only be used 3 time per battle in this form
  

Second Form[Black Katana]

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To use the second form of the sword user will add chakra into the cane form
User also can channel in fire/wind/lighting chakra in it
Launching of bigger/stronger chakra wave can only be used 3 time per battle in this form

~ Japanese name ? ~