[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

My 5th and last jutsu this week:

(Fuudeyou) - Moving Seals

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: A very simple jutsu that follows the same principle as (Gyorai Shin) - Torpedo Needle, however the user will use seal tags instead. With the help of the user's chakra, the seal tags will be able to travel underground until they reach the enemy. Once in contact with the target, the user will activate the seal.

~ What seal ? ~

 

[The Seven-Scaled boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose waza: Ushiro no Ko Kemushi) Summoning art: Back of the great caterpillar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40 (80 for up to mid range, 120 for long range)
Damage: N/A
Description:The user will smear blood on his summoning tatoo and slam both of his hands onto the ground. By doing that, he'll summon the back of a great caterpillar with poisonus spikes all around it, forming what it would be similar like a red forest, full of red poisonus barbs on the ground and the "trees"(it's to say bigger barbs).
The poison effects are not lethal, but very painful causing a tingling(better said burning) sensation during the duration of the jutsu, afterwards the poison will lose it's effects. this bruning sensation means the opponent needs to focus harder on the target in order to do jutsu and will slow them down.
Notes: May only be done once per battle.
Notes: It may last up to 4 turns.
Notes: No Forbidden-rank the turn used and one turn after.
Notes: No summoning for the same and next 3 turns(no matter if you do it at the begining or at the end of your turn).
Notes: The user may use 30 chakra to help the back of the caterpillar regrow it's barbs( adding one more turn to the previous restriction) but not to make it last longer.
Notes: Only people who signed the contract and were taught this jutsu, by The Seven-Scaled boy are able to use it.
Notes: Signer's of the caterpillar contract are immune to this poison.
Note: The barbs just inject poison they don't penetrate the skin enough for considerable damage.

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~ Declined, poison is too liberally used in the technique ~

^based it on jiraya's jutsu in which he summon's a toad stomach in the battle field and Impel down's first level.

(Kuchiyose waza: Ushiro no Ko Kemushi) Summoning art: Back of the great caterpillar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40 (80 for up to mid range, 120 for long range)
Damage: N/A
Description:The user will smear blood on his summoning tatoo and slam both of his hands onto the ground. By doing that, he'll summon the back of a great caterpillar with poisonus spikes all around it, forming what it would be similar like a red forest, full of red poisonus barbs on the ground and the "trees"(it's to say bigger barbs).
The poison effects are not lethal, but very painful causing a tingling(better said burning) sensation during the duration of the jutsu, afterwards the poison will lose it's effects. This bruning sensation means the opponent needs to focus harder on the target in order to do jutsu(meaning like stop running in order to do jutsu) and will slow them down.
Notes: May only be done once per battle.
Notes: It may last up to 4 turns.
Notes: No Forbidden-rank the turn used and one turn after.
Notes: No summoning for the same and next 3 turns(no matter if you do it at the begining or at the end of your turn).
Notes: The user may use 30 chakra to help the back of the caterpillar regrow it's barbs( adding one more turn to the previous restriction) but not to make it last longer.
Notes: Only people who signed the contract and were taught this jutsu, by The Seven-Scaled boy are able to use it.
Notes: Signer's of the caterpillar contract are immune to this poison.
Notes: Once this jutsu has ended, the user may not poison the oppenent for the next 2 turns.
Notes: the barbs will cause little pain but no considerable wounds, they wil just inject the poison.
Notes: May only poison up to five people, afterwards, the barbs will only cause pain but no more poison. The five people are the first 5 non-signers to touch any barb.

Changed bolded parts, please tell me if there's any trouble for you. Added one last note, it which it may not overexceed the quantity of poisoned people. If that's what you meant by too liberally used.

~ This is fine, however I also want you to reduce the amount of barbs and poison in the area because the way it is now if you just use it once, there's a sure shot of getting the opponent poisoned ~

(Kuchiyose: Caterpa, Ha no Kemushi) Summoning: Caterpa, leaf caterpillar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short (Short-Long when it splits)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will smear blood in his summoning tatoo and summon Caterpa, a katsuyu-size caterpillar with a leaf-like cloak on it's back. In order to have the best camouflage, Caterpa has adapted to change the colour of the leaf on her back, varying with the seasons. It also has the ability to split into thousands of mini caterpillars (the size of real leaves) and reform at will.
Notes: May only be summoned 2 times per battle and will last up to 3 turns each time.
Notes: As with most creatures bound to the contract, it may shoot silk in an offensive or defensive way and it can eat A-rank (or below) mokuton jutsus.
Notes:Only people who signed the contract of caterpillars owned by The Seven-Scaled boy, may use it.
Notes: Opponents with no chakra sensing skills or doujutsu (2 tomoe sharingan or byakugan) will find it very hard, to distinguish the splitted form of Caterpa from an ordinary leaf.
Notes: People who signed the contract are able to distinguish them.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Kuchiyose: Tada tsuiraku ) Summoning: Free falling
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 0 (+ the cost of the summonning you want to bring)
Damage: N/A (+20 for medium sized summons +40 for gamabunta/katsuyu/mada sized summons)
Description: The user will summon(by the complete jutsu or a summonning tatoo) a summoning creature bound to the contract the sigend in the sky and it'll crash down.
Notes: May only be done 3 times per battle.
Notes: It can be used by anyone who has a summoning if taught by The Seven-Scaled boy.

^Based on jiraya's capacity to summon the toad with the katanas to smash a konoha building.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[-Mugen-]

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Have the contract approved by Rag

(Kuchiyose no jutsus: oumono kuroshoujou no Goruku) Summoning art: King of the chimpanzees - Goruku

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/a
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description:The user will wipe his blood on his summoning tatoo than will slam both hands on the ground and summon Goruku.He is the King of Mount Silver and the chimpanzees.Goruku has unbelievable raw strength(because of his size).With that strength he can easily break a whole castle wall with one hand.Since he is experienced he also can use wind up to S-rank ( counts as one move of the summoner ).Goruku is a Boss summon and 1 of the royal chimpanzees.Full grown royal chimpanzees are the same size as gamabunta.So Goruku is the same size as gamabunto.
*Can only be summoned once
*Lasts for a maximum of four turns on the field.
*While Goruku is on the field, no other chimpanzee may be there
*Must be taught by Mugen-sama to summon

~ Approved ~


(Nimpo:kuroshoujou oburada) - Ninja art: chimp oil

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Once the user summons a S-rank or higher chimpanzee,the chimpanzee can spit out a big amount of oil from his stomach.
*Can only be used 2 times
*If oil is ignited than it can carry fire up to long range and creat a oil fire combo.
*Must be taught by Mugen-sama

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

And lastly lol

(kuroshoujou modo) - Chimpanzee mode

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/a
Chakra Cost: 50(-10 each turn if sannin.Doesnt apply to kage)
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar to sage mode.Once activated the users hair will turn silver because of the special chakra he activates.The user will not be able to use Genjutsu or fuunjutsu like in sage mode.But instead he will get the same speed and sensory ability's you get in sage mode.Also a +10 boost to any Jutsu and taijutsu.
*Note:Any chimpanzee S-rank and higher can use this mode unless said not.And it last till the chimp is killed.
*To activate,the user must either sit still 2 turns or summon a clone from Mount Silver (I will submit the jutsu later.It will be individually)
*Must be atleast a sannin to use
*Can only be used once and lasts for 5 turns after which the user will be tired and wont be able to use any A-rank or higher jutsu for 2 turns (exept for summoning)
*must be taught by Mugen-sama and have Chimpanzee summon

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Typhon]

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Fire Style: Single Blade Cremation
(Katon: Itto Kaso)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: 120 (Death to user)
Description: This technique requires the use of one's own body to create a devastating fire technique that incinerates all that is caught within its wrath. Because of this price it was declared forbidden to use. When activated the user's body will become a catalyst for fire. Their skin will begin to crack a glow red before exploding into a massive flame that is shaped as the tip of a katana. It can only be activated after receiving moderate damage from a fire technique. The speed and range of the explosion makes it so any person within short range of the user cannot escape without the aid of a space/time jutsu.
~Can only be used once because it requires the user to sacrifice themselves. The bio using this technique is automatically voided after use.
~Can only be avoided by space/time techniques when used at close range.
~Can only be used after receiving damage from a B-rank or above fire technique.
~Cannot be used by anyone except the real body of the user. Even if the user is an immortal or has more than one life/body/person, he automatically becomes unable to battle.

~ Approved ~

 

[Kansas Bred]

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Summoning: Sykes, The Giant Ox
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Sykes is a giant Ox made of pure muscle, Due to that he is very strong just by stomping can make huge craters on the ground. Sykes's attitude is usually not so kind towards people he has a very short temper and loves to take his rage out on people but when not in his fits of rage he makes cruel jokes even towards his summoner.The only person he seems to kinda get along with is his owner (Myself) even then he still has his attitude that he can do whatever he wants but in mind still listens, Sykes is a Very loyal, Crazy Ox. Sykes can also walk on his back legs like a human and usually does when summoned standing with his arm folded across his chest in a tough guy pose. He is the size of gambunta.

Note: Sykes can use up to A-rank Doton Jutsu's (Can only use jutsu's twice per battle)
Note: Sykes can also use his strength to smash through B-rank and down Doton jutsu's (Not counting towards the move count)
Note: Sykes can only be out in battle for 4 turns per battle.
Note: Must have signed the summoning contract owned by Drizzy

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit the first ~

Im resubmitting this



Summoning: Sykes, The Giant Ox
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/a
Chakra Cost: 40-120 ( Depending on range wanting to be summoned )
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Sykes is a giant Ox made of pure muscle, Due to that he is very strong just by stomping can make huge craters on the ground. Sykes's attitude is usually not so kind towards people he has a very short temper and loves to take his rage out on people but when not in his fits of rage he makes cruel jokes even towards his summoner.The only person he seems to kinda get along with is his owner (Myself) even then he still has his attitude that he can do whatever he wants but in mind still listens, Sykes is a Very loyal, Crazy Ox. Sykes can also walk on his back legs like a human and usually does when summoned standing with his arm folded across his chest in a tough guy pose. He is the size of gambunta.

Note:Sykes can use below B-rank Doton Jutsu's (Can only use jutsu's once per battle)
Note: Sykes can also use his strength to smash through B-rank and down Doton jutsu's ( Counting towards the move count )
Note: Sykes can only be out in battle for 4 turns per battle.
Note: Must have signed the summoning contract owned by Drizzy


Summoning Art: Heavenly Smash
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short/Mid range
Chakra Cost: N/a
Damage Points N/a
Description: Once the user has summoned Sykes The Giant Ox, At the user's will they will command sykes to slam his hands into the ground three times creating huge craters that disrupt and Destroy B-rank or lower Doton jutsu's.

~ Both Approved O_O ~

 

[Toku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton- Kenkaku Tansen )Wind release- Swordsman’s Edge
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Attack points: 60
Description: the user begins by fusing wind chakra into his sword. The wind will add 1’ in length to the sword, and make the blade twice as sharp. This allows the sword to be able to cut through C rank and bellow Wind jutsus.
*note: can only be used 2x per battle.
*note: jutsu lasts for 2 turns.


(Katon-) Fire release- Armor of the Inferno
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Attack points: (+10 to Fire jutsus)
Description: the user summons a flame that spreads across his body and then goes out to form the armor on the user. The armor allows the user to withstand temperatures as hot as lava. It also powers up Fire jutsus making them stronger. The armor can be removed at any moment before the three turns are up.
*note: the armor is extremely vulnerable to water.
*note: the user can’t walk on water.
*note: can’t use any water or wind jutsus while the armor is on.
*note: this jutsu lasts 3 turns.
*note: can only be used 1x per battle.


(Doton: sukyana-chichi) Earth release: Topographic scanner
Type: supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Long-Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: n/a
Description: the user focuses chakra into the earth below him allowing him to become familiar w/ the geographical surface shape, terrain, and features of the area as well as any disruptions that may occur by the opponents moving around above or below the ground and utilizing earth release techniques.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: only last for 3 turns.
*Note: can only be taught by Toku.

(Doton-Tsuchi Kyanon) Earth release- Earth Cannon
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user gathers his earth chakra in his mouth which he then proceeds to shoot out three earth spheres (size of basketballs) at the opponent w/ great speed. Once shot out the earth hardens to rock to inflict more damage.
*note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*note: can only be used by Toku.


(Doton- Kyousei Tsuchi Doragon Gekido ) Earth release- Great Earth Dragon’s Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user stomps the ground making a rock dragon w/ wings come out of the ground in front of him. The dragon begins flapping his wings sending gusts of wind with dust along w/ boulders, that come from his wings, at the opponent.
*note: can’t use S-rank and above Earth jutsus next turn.
*note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*note: can only be used by Toku.

~ All Declined, do not resubmit any ~

 

[Passion]

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5th and final submission of the week:

( Doton: Iwa Daitoppa ) - Earth release: Great Earth Break Through

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User makes makes Rat handseal ( half of it ) with one hand while user's charging chakra into the other hand that isn't performing the handseal. Once that is done user will hit his/her hand on ground, sending chakra wave into ground that breaks any solid earth and stone(s), turning them into small grains of rock and earth - Sand.
Note:
- Can be used only twice per battle
- No A - ranked or above earth jutsus on next turn.

~ Declined ~

( Kakusa gisou ) - Crocodile Camouflage

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 25% of health left )
Description: User concentrates his/her chakra on his/her heart. Once that is done user starts to steadily lower the pulse of his/her heart until it becomes so low that it cannot be felt anymore by checking pulse from wrist or neck like some lizards like Crocodiles do ( While going to hibernation state ). This technique makes user unable to move for amount of time that he/she feeds chakra into his/her heart to keep it beating and not stop. User can anytime cancel this technique and it's ideal for escaping and surprise attack diversions.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Costs 25% of health that's left
- Must've mastered Crocodile summon to use.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

( Kenjutsu/Fuuton: Kaze Kiri ) - Sword Technique/Wind release: Wind cut

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Rank: A/S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Close - Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( + 10 if used S - ranked version )
Damage points: 60 ( + 20 if used S - ranked version )
Description: User focuses wind based chakra mainly on his/her chakra sword that he/she carries with him/her. Once that's done user will quickly draw and resheath the sword, sending crescent cut from the blade that's made from pure Wind chakra. The S - ranked version includes two swords drawn and it's a bit stronger too.
Note:
- Can only be used twice
- Four turns cool down
- No Fuuton at next two turns
- Requires at least one chakra sword.

~ Approved ~

 

[Kaze..]

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(Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Unsanmushou)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Vanishing Mist
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user forms a series of handsigns creating a very thick mist to the point where you cant even see whats right in front of you,after the mist is created the user releases a barrage of 20 slashes and thrusts on the opponent while moving through the mist changing his or her location before each strike.
* Can only be used twice per battle
*The user must have away of detecting the opponent within the mist
*Mist disappears after 2 turns unless dissipated earlier by a Wind technique

~ Approved ~

(Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Kokuei)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Dark Shadow
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user does two quick slashes releasing one large slash of chakra and another smaller slash of chakra,the users does the second slash alot quicker then the first and is not even seen due to how large the first one was as its traveling toward the opponent. Although the second slash is smaller it has the same amount of power as the first one due to the chakra being more compressed. Because the opponent doesnt even see the second slash being perform they only think theirs one slash coming at them and has no idea of the second one
* Can only be performed twice per battle and cant be used in back to back turns
*The second slash puts a heavy burden on the users wrists and pervents the user from using any sword techniques above B rank for 2 turns

~ Approved, I guess ~

(Mumyo Jinpu Ryu Satsujin Ken-Namidagoe Kaze)The Sword Of The Devlish Wind-Tearful Voice of the Wind
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user infuses wind chakra into his or her blade,the chakra builds up in the tip of the users sword the user then does a horizontal slash at the opponent releasing a orb of condensed wind chakra at the opponent when the orb gets close to the opponent the orb expands because theirs nothing to keep the chakra condensed when the orb expands it creates a huge bubble of vicious cutting winds that engulf the opponent and cuts the opponent uncountable number of times
* Can only be used Once per battle
*No Sword or wind jutsu for 2 turns
*No handsigns needed for this technique

~ Declined ~

 

[Caliburn]

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( Kakusa gisou ) - Crocodile Camouflage

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 25% of health left )
Description: User concentrates his/her chakra on his/her heart. Once that is done user starts to steadily lower the pulse of his/her heart until it becomes so low that it cannot be felt anymore by checking pulse from wrist or neck like some lizards like Crocodiles do ( While going to hibernation state ). This technique makes user unable to move for amount of time that he/she feeds chakra into his/her heart to keep it beating and not stop. User can anytime cancel this technique and it's ideal for escaping and surprise attack diversions.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Costs 25% of health that's left
- Must've mastered Crocodile summon to use.

( Kenjutsu Iai: Tsuin Rashōmon ) - Sword Draw and Resheath technique: Twin Castle Gate

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 20 to user )
Description: User focuses chakra into his/her swords, draws the swords, and sheaths them quickly, able to split a Castle Gate in half. This move includes two really fast cuts with both swords, resulting swords in cross motion with the blades behind your back and then they're sheathed into their scabbards before naked eye could notice the cut. This causes strain to user and his/her swords so this move is allowed to be used twice per battle with recharge time of 4 turns.
Note:
- Can only be used twice
- Recharge time is 4 turns before using this move again
- 3 tomoed sharingan can see the cut
- Causes - 20 damage to user
- Requires two swords.

I already made Rashomon into a custom, nearly every Zoro-technique for that matter.

 

[Passion]

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I already made Rashomon into a custom, nearly every Zoro-technique for that matter.

Then I must ask you why can't I find it from your CJ thread? I saw Asura, Lion's song but no rashomon D:

 

[Caliburn]

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Then I must ask you why can't I find it from your CJ thread? I saw Asura, Lion's song but no rashomon D:

You shouldn't look in that thread, but this one:

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[Passion]

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You shouldn't look in that thread, but this one:

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'ight.

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Poseidon Doki) Water Release: Poseidon's Wrath
Rank:Forbbiden
Type:Attack
Range:Short/Long
Chakra cost:50
Damage points: 100
Description: The user infuses a large amount of chakra into a large water source.The vast body of water then begins to swirl at extremely fast speeds. The water in the maelstrom starts condensing and the water becomes thin and compressed in enough to cut through solid objects.If the opponent is caught in the whirlpool they are bombarded with a series of slashes to the enemies flesh.The user has to keep a steady flow of chakra to keep the maelstrom in effect.If the user where to get hit with this jutsu they will also be bombarded by a series of slashes.The Whirlpool is about 40 meters deep and the width is 50 meters which pools any enemies in the 50 meter radius.If the user of this jutsu does not keep a steady flow the maelstrom will settle down and the water will return to normal.
Note: This Jutsu can only be used once per battle
Note: No water jutsu next turn.
note: Can only be taught by Daemon
Note: If the usre keeps a steady flow of chakra into the whirlpool it can last up to 2 turns.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Gin-Sama]

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(Doton- jishin reizur ) Earth Style- Earthquake raiser
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Attack points:60
Description: the user make hand sign and then slum his hands into the ground making a rock Spike come out from the ground running continues to reach the opponent at the same time the ground is shaking causing the enemy outbalance.
*note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*note: can only be used by Gin.

~ WTF. Completely un-understandable ~

 

[Geezus]

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Diskarmor| (Diskuyori)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 50
Description: The DiskArmor is a shield, worn on the user's forem-arm. that is able to be flung at an opponent like a yo-yo as a chain attached to it allows the user to toss the weapon at the opponent. Using the DiskArmor, the user is able to combo, swing, grapple opponents and objects within the field. The Diskarmor also serves it's purpose as a sheild, the user may charge chakra into the sheild and use it to block/reflect certain attacks, but doing so the user must sacrifice a jutsu the next turn.
(-User may only block 2 S-Rank Attacks)

~ Do you know only one custom weapon per bio ? If you want this more than something you already have, or you have a bio with no weapons, resubmit it ~

 

[UzumakiJake]

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Earth Style: Grand Mountain Terrain
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: NA
Description: By concentrating your chakra into the ground, you can create a mountain which is so high that the air supply is short making all wind jutsu weaker due to the lack of oxygen and in turn making all fire jutsu weaker due to there being not much air to feed on. the top is flat as the sides are down hill and long enough to where gamabunta can sit comfortably. The height is somewhere around 1500 feet, it takes about 15 seconds to fully form.
* Must know earth
*Only Usable 2 time a fight.
Not exactly how I imagined it but here is an example. minus the water and the houses and alot higher but this is generally how it is suposed to look.

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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Gin-Sama]

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(Doton- jishin reizur ) Earth Style- Earthquake raiser
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Attack points:60
Description: the user make hand sign and then slum his hands into the ground making a rock Spike come out from the ground running continues to reach the opponent at the same time the ground is shaking causing the enemy outbalance.
*note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*note: can only be used by Gin.

~ WTF. Completely un-understandable ~

(Doton- jishin reizur ) Earth Style- Earthquake raiser
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 30
Attack points:60
Description: the user make hand sign and then slam his hands into the ground causing the ground shaking and the earth spike (5 feet high) start to come out from where he slams the spikes travel straight line until reach the target and hit by spikes..
*note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*note: can only be used by Gin.

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i dont know how to describe but something like this.. the spikes travel straight line till can hit the target..

~ Similar technique exists ~

 

[Caliburn]

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(Doton- jishin reizur ) Earth Style- Earthquake raiser
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 30
Attack points:60
Description: the user make hand sign and then slam his hands into the ground causing the ground shaking and the earth spike (5 feet high) start to come out from where he slams the spikes travel straight line until reach the target and hit by spikes..
*note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*note: can only be used by Gin.

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i dont know how to describe but something like this.. the spikes travel straight line till can hit the target..

That sounds almost the same as my

(Doton: Totekutonikusu Kasui) - Earth style: Tectonic Spikes -

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses doton-based chakra into his hand. After that he slams his fist into the ground, sending the chakra into the earth.
If you would draw a straight line between the point of impact and the opponent, all the earth on this line starts to rise starting from the point of impact and then comes rapidly to the opponent in one straight line. Every time the earth rises spikes appear instantly out of it into all directions(left, right above, even underground) and have different sizes. However the end of these spikes are completely flat(just like a tree trunk). Just before the line reaches the opponent, it releases some larger spikes (over 10m) that go straight for the opponent (also some are released underground)
These spikes are pushed out of the earth with such force that a frontal hit instantly breaks the bones it hits.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used 4 times/battle*

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The only difference is that you have spikes, while mine are blunt.

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Sairento Kaminari) - Lightning Release: Silent Lightning

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20(+5 to each lightning attack)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user cloaks the sounds made by his lightning attacks, making them stealthy. This acts through the fact that the user concentrates a much higher amount of chakra over his lightning, that act as a thick layer, covering any sounds(as crackling) that the techniques make. This does not silence any other techniques, and if the lightning destroys something it is out loud, and not silent.
* May be used twice per battle.
* Lasts 3 turns.
* Must be taught by Shigure.

~ Approved ~

(Gijutsu o Shōkan Ribāsu: Fokkusuwārudo Gaikan) - Reverse Summoning Technique: Fox World Apperance

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+40 for self summoning)
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to user)
Description: Through this technique the user uses Reverse Summoning on a creature, or on a fellow human, transporting them into the Fox World. The Fox World is similar to Mount Myoboku, but, instead of learning any type of special ability, the summoned learns how to control foxes. The Fox World is nothing more but a mere forgotten island, which is filled with numerous beauties, but it is also positioned very well there, and is a place for clear mind. Aside of the fact that the island seems beautiful, and virgin, it is actually populated by a multitude of Foxes, some normal, some more intelligent. This is the only place where someone is able to master summoning foxes.

Way of Summoning:

The user bites his thumb, and takes the hand of his summoned, spreading the blood from his thumb in a straight line along the summoned's wrist. Afterwards the user makes of handseals and he hits the summoned's chest pushing them into the Fox World. (this is not a space/time tech)

*Can be summoned during a fight too, but it has no effect on the opponent, and it can merely be used as a retreat.
*In order to learn to summon Foxes, and most of all, control them without them opposing their summoner, one must first go to Fox World.
*The High Fox first has a disscussion with the summoned, in order to decide if he is worthy of summoning or not.
*The Reverse Summoning can be used only by the contract owner, Shigure. When the contract shall be passed to someone else, that certain someone will be the only one able to use it.

~ Declined, if you want to summon some "world", do it some other way ~

(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Kitsuhiro) - Summoning Technique: Kitsuhiro

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+5 to user)
Description: Kitsuhiro is a fightning Fox, she is as big as Gamahiro and her main weapon is a giant sword, made out of steel, and also a giant shield, that has the Fox World seal on it. It seems like this Fox had a sort of relationship with Gamahiro, taking it as they have the addition "hiro" at the end of their names, which means "hero". Kitsuhiro could be the strongest one on one summoning when it comes to brute force out of all the Foxes and her weapon can easily cut through a multitude of trees at once. Her reflexes are also highly advanced, and he is able to jump up in the air even 100 meters. As all Foxes, she has the same grace, and is aalso very quick in it's attacks and dodges. She is a biped, meaning she walks on two feet. The shield she carries is able enough withstand 2 S-Rank attacks. Her personality is pretty dark, she isn't very talkative, but very polite anyhow, and doesn't cease to ever abandon the Scroll Owner. The Fox has immense respect for all her summoners, but Shigure, being the first one to be able to summon Foxes, had a special bond with her. Kitsuhiro promised to die on the battlefield for Shigure and Shigure only.
* May be summoned once per battle.
* Must posses the contract or tattoo of Foxes in order to summon.
* Shigure is currently the only one who may teach Fox Summoning.

(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Fokkusu wa Furasshu de Umareta ~ Kitsurai) - Summoning Technique: The Fox born from Lightning ~ Kitsurai

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to the user)
Description: Kitsurai is the strongest Lightning fox in Fox World. He is in the high council of Foxes on the Island, but, even if as strong as Kitsuha, he maintained a lower position due to his greed and thirst for power. Kitsuari is able to use all lightning techniques except LimeLight and is the strongest Lightning summoning, the irony is that Kitsurai is as big as a Black Bear, and can stand on two feet, a biped. He is the head of the Fox Army in Fox World. He is invulnerable to Lightning attacks lower of B-rank, and can survive a full blow of an A-rank technique. He bears a very long katana on his back which is made out of steel. The Fox can use all the costums of the user, if he decides to let him to. Kitsurai is very cocky, arrogant and barely listens to his summoners. He is prefered to stay unsummoned unless completely necessary. It is said that Kitsurai was born from pure lightning, thusforth being blessed with such capabilities.
* This is a Boss Summoning, along with Kitsuha, Kitsurai is the second in charge.
* May be summoned once per battle.
* Once unsummoned, no other foxes can be summoned for the rest of the battle.
* Must possess the contract or tattoo for Foxes, which can be signed and/or given by Shigure.

~ Both Approved ~

 

[Izuna Uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sutorīmu no pusshu) - Wind Release: Stream Push

Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 30
Attack points:N/A
Description: By creating a very strong stream of wind high in the sky, the user can make it crash in front of him (or anywhere inside mid-range), creating a wall of continuously moving wind. This jutsu is a great defense against almost any projectile ( except those from techniques ranked S rank and above ) as they are violently pushed to the ground when passing in the stream. The wind itself doesn't cause any damage if aimed at an enemy, but it is strong enough to push them down on the ground (unless they have inhumane strength).
-Can only be used twice per match
-No S-rank and above Wind technique next turn
-Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

~ Approved ~

(Kyokusei no kabe) - Lightning Release: Polar Wall

Rank: S
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points:80
Description: After focusing a great amount of lightning chakra in both hands, the user will shoot two blast of pure electricity at the ground right in front of him. These two will travel underground until they reach mid-range and are about 10 meters from each other. Then, with one handseal, their energy will be released creating a thick wall of lightning, starting from underground and reaching 10 meters above ground level (hence making a 10X20 rectangle). This jutsu is great to stop incoming enemies both over and underground.
-Can only be used twice per match
-No Forbidden lightning technique next turn
-Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

~ Declined, similar technique exists ~

(Tenchū) - Fire Release: Heaven's Punishment

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Attack points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: After building up an insane amount of fire chakra the user will shoot a gigantic fireball at the sky. The moment the fireball is shot, he will then focus his wind chakra to take control of a stream of wind high in the atmosphere. By doing so, he will deviate the stream so that the fire and the wind collide. When they do, the whole sky will turn red with flames. In one downward motion of the arm, the flaming stream of wind will then crash down on the earth incinerating everything in mid-range. Molten rock is found where the stream hit the ground. This jutsu deals the same amount of damage to both the user and is enemy if they are in range of the attack.
-This jutsu can only be used once per match
-No fire jutsu for two turns after
-This jutsu kills the user if he gets hit
-Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

~ Declined, similar technique exists ~

(Takemikadzuchi) - Summoning Technique: Takemikadzuchi

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points:N/A
Description: Takemikadzuchi is both the lord of the Falcon and the sky, guardian of the heavens. He was named after the God of Thunder; Takemikadzuchi, who ruled the above Earth. This name was given to him because of his ability to use and channel natural electricity in the air or in thunder clouds. Takemikadzuchi is a bit bigger then Gamabunta, making him a fierce enemy. He is able to use up to A-rank lightning jutsu as well as 2 S-rank lightning blast per match.
-Can only be summoned once per match
-The summon last 3 turns
-Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha

~ A hawk and an eagle contract already exist. If you want falcons, resubmit with the proper format taken from the Summoning List thread ~

(Bōkyaku) - Oblivion

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Attack points:N/A
Description: This a simple and yet devastating genjutsu where the user affect the sight of his enemy. When under this genjutsu, he is incapable to see fast incoming projectile such as kunais. The enemy still see the user make a throwing motion with a kunai in hand, but the moment the kunai gain speed, it simply disappear.
-Can only be used by Izuna Uchiha
-Can only be used thrice per battle, and each time lasting one turn

~ Approved ~