[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Elephants:Ganesh (kuchiose zou: Ganesh)
RAnk: S-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description: Ganesh is the king of all Elephants. He is peacefull and calm but can fight very well if necesarry. He is one of the only elephants able to walk upright and has 4 arms and has some human body features unlike any other elephant. He is also the spiritual leader of all elephants. He was trained by monks of the budda temlples before he was the king of elephants. He has 5 fingers instead of 4. He is 25m tall and weighs 20 tons. He has mastered the water element. So he can use it up to S-rank. He is trained well in marcial arts and can lift 10 tons by using all 4 of his hands. He is in experianced with swords and other weapons. He can run as fast as 50km/h. He is a strict vegetarian.

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Summoning Elephants:Waroc (kuchiose zou: Waroc)
RAnk: S-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description:Waroc is the battle cheif of the elephants. He is battle-loving and agressive. He is 30m long and weighs 30 tons. He is one of the only elephants who can walk up right. He is really strong and can lift 20 tons with each arm. He has amazing ninja skills and is great with swords. He can use fire jutsu up to and including A-rank. His tusks are really hard and he can crush walls using it. Also he can run at a speed up to 30Km/h.

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Summoning Elephants:Charon (kuchiose zou: Charon)
RAnk: A-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:0
Description: CHaron is the hunter elephant he has 4 feet and 2 arms. He is the fastest elephant and can run at a high speed of 120km/h. He is 15m long and weighs 7 tons. He is great with bows and arrows. He is cranky. He also can use wind jutsu up to A-rank.

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I have davids permission

~ All Declined. On a side note, Ganesha is a god to Hindus, so this is an equivalent of me pulling out a Summoning:Jesus technique >_O ~

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summon: Granda, Three Headed Chimera (kuchiose: Granda kimera mihitsu)

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 45
Damage: 0
Description: After The user does some handseals, and with his blood in his palm he summons a huge Chimera with three-heads by slaming it over an object, Each head things for it self and they all read each others minds, The first head is a Calf and known with its wisdom, and second is jaguar's head and the Head in the middle which is considered the Leader is a Dark Dragonna, The beast's Nature element is Fire element, they are in the size of Gamabunta they have two huge wings that can make it fly very high in the sky and with great speed, there back legs are calf like which makes its jump in high speed and its front legs are jaguar like but more thicker but that doesn't slow it at all, In fact its as powerful ad the jaguar's, there skin is thick enough to be as powerful as an iron armor, and it also have a dragon's tail, fears draws into there enemy deeply when it craws.
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-15 chakra each turn its summoned
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can't stay on the field for more then 3 turns and
-This summon is owned by TCS.

Summon: Slavron & Norvals, The Assassination Chimera (kuchiose: Slavron & Norvals kimera kison )

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 45
Damage: 0
Description: Lion-like-chimera with wings and they both have a long snake tail and three heads, Its ride-able and its very fast there skin is as hard as an iron armor and they don't feel it, It usually hides its dragon and calf heads inside it to increase its speed, It has two powerful claws, Its considered an S rank not just for power but for its speed which can only be detected by special techniques such as Sharingan and dogs smell sense, and its able to use wind element and its in the size of three normal lions, and like all the chimeras there minds are conected.

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-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can stay for 5 turns only and it absorb 10 chakra points each turn
-This summon is owned by TCS

am dropping the white tiger summon

~ Umm...WTF, dude, you edited it AFTER I had said Declined. Don't you know you just have to resubmit it, and that you cannot edit after a mod already has ? O_O Sorry, but I'm banning you from this thread for a week -i.e. - until 8th June you cannot submit any customs. ~

 

[UzumakiJake]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Nezumi: Rat poison
Rank: A
Chakra: 45
Damage: 40 (+10 every turn)
Description: The rat using this jutsu breathes a fog of flammable poison that reaches from the ground to the the neck of the rat using the jutsu. The fog takes a matter of 6 seconds to complete. If on water the poison seeps into the water as well infecting anything in it.

Note: Must have a contract with the rats
Note: Only summoned beast can use.
Note: Poison's effects last 3 turns.

~ Declined, do not resubmit. Poison is a medschool specialty. ~

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Nezumi: Rat Flesh
Rank: B
Chakra: 60
damage: N/A
Description: The user can summon a wall of rat flesh as defense or what ever else the user may find use for it.

Note: Must have a contract with the rats.
Note: can build up to 4 walls at a time

~ Explain the strength of it, and add more restrictions ~

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Nezumi: Elemental rat hunger (Lightning)
Rank: S
Chakra: 80
Damage: 70
Description: Much like the jutsu, rat hunger where rats eat wood jutsu or the jutsu where i summon fire rats to counter wind attacks by eating up stream, this jutsu i create multiple electric rats as they devour earth based jutsu or can be used to attack as well if attacking the damage applies if used in defense it does not.

~ Declined, do not resubmit. OPed ~

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Nezumi: Rat Flesh
Rank: B
Chakra: 60
damage: N/A
Description: The user can summon a wall of rat flesh as defense or what ever else the user may find use for it. Much like the toad flesh wall It can stop things of the same rank or lower.

Note: Must have a contract with the rats.
Note: can build up to 2 walls at a time
Note: can only be used 3 times in a battle.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

how is the last one over powered? Its counterable and like like its got potential to be an actual jutsu just a little tweaks and its perfect. I don't know if its gotten like 200000 X harder to get things passed off here or if u hav a grudge against me.

~ No, I do not have a grudge against you - the idea is ridiculous, since you were one of the people who taught me earlier. Yes, it is overpowered. a Jutsu that summons electric rats to eat up earth techniques, without restrictions, IS considered overpowered. Please, do not argue about decisions this or any henceforth, or I will ban you from this thread for a week. And yes, it is harder to get stuff approved. BiBi was pathetic at checking when she was doing it, she let tons of overpowered and unrealistic jutsu sneak through. Something we are working at fixing. ~

~its gotten harder~

 

[Azaghast]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Jidaisakugo ) - Anachronism

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Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 30
A simple technique developed for use against opponents who base their philosophy on speed, it has also been found to work against opponent basing their style on standing still. The two versions of this technique are as follows :
• Furukusai ( Old-fashioned ) - The user, when under attack by speedy opponents, flows his chakra along lengths of ninja wire. He quickly drops to a sitting position, and makes the wires float around him like a bizarrely patterned spiderweb. A speedy opponent will not notice the thin wires ( unless, of course, he possesses the Sharingan ) and will run straight into the stiff wires, his own momentum ensuring he is torn apart by the wires. However, while under use on speedy swordsmen or armour wearers ( such as the Raikage ) the wires will be useless.
• Dosakusa ( Confusion ) - In this version, the user replicates the motions of the wires as the previous version, but the user runs toward the opponent instead, his momentum making the wires slash into a slower opponent. This version is useless if the object under attack is strongly armoured.
Technique Notes: This technique may be used only every alternate turn.

~ Approved ~

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Elephants:Ganesh (kuchiose zou: Ganesh)
RAnk: S-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description: Ganesh is the king of all Elephants. He is peacefull and calm but can fight very well if necesarry. He is one of the only elephants able to walk upright and has 4 arms and has some human body features unlike any other elephant. He is also the spiritual leader of all elephants. He was trained by monks of the budda temlples before he was the king of elephants. He has 5 fingers instead of 4. He is 25m tall and weighs 20 tons. He has mastered the water element. So he can use it up to S-rank. He is trained well in marcial arts and can lift 10 tons by using all 4 of his hands. He is in experianced with swords and other weapons. He can run as fast as 50km/h. He is a strict vegetarian.

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Summoning Elephants:Waroc (kuchiose zou: Waroc)
RAnk: S-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description:Waroc is the battle cheif of the elephants. He is battle-loving and agressive. He is 30m long and weighs 30 tons. He is one of the only elephants who can walk up right. He is really strong and can lift 20 tons with each arm. He has amazing ninja skills and is great with swords. He can use fire jutsu up to and including A-rank. His tusks are really hard and he can crush walls using it. Also he can run at a speed up to 30Km/h.

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Summoning Elephants:Charon (kuchiose zou: Charon)
RAnk: A-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:0
Description: CHaron is the hunter elephant he has 4 feet and 2 arms. He is the fastest elephant and can run at a high speed of 120km/h. He is 15m long and weighs 7 tons. He is great with bows and arrows. He is cranky. He also can use wind jutsu up to A-rank.

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I have davids permission

~ All Declined. On a side note, Ganesha is a god to Hindus, so this is an equivalent of me pulling out a Summoning:Jesus technique >_O ~

whats wrong with 2nd and 3rd elephants? it would help if I knew what I had to fix to resubmit
do they need restrictions? are elephants generally unallowed? are they too big? ect.
Thank you

~ For God's sake, PM me about this, don't spam here ~

 

[The Seven-Scaled boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chakura-futoi henkan)-Chakra-Fat conversion
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Oneself
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will turn all exceeding chakra into body fat.

Notes:May only be done once per battle.
Notes: May only be used by akamichi clan members.

(Genjutsu: Semento no tama kara heru )-Illusionary Techique: Cement ball from hell
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user will disrupt the opponent's chakra by him jutst seeing the user clap his hands. Then, the opponent will get caught in a restraining illusion in which th feel eveloped and deformed by huge, violet cement sphere.

Notes:The restrain will last only until the end of the user's turn.

~ Both Declined ~

re-sumbiting:

(Chakura-futoi henkan)-Chakra-Fat conversion
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Oneself
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will turn all exceeding chakra into body fat.

Notes:May only be done once per battle.
Notes: May only be used by akamichi clan members.
Notes: the turn used and after this technique, the user may not use non-elemental ninjutsu.
Notes:No Expansion technique or it's variants for the rest of the battle.

(Genjutsu: Kara heru semento no tama )-Illusionary Techique: Cement ball from hell
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 0(jusr restrains)
Description:The user will disrupt the opponent's chakra by him/her just seeing the user clap his hands. Then, the opponent will get caught in a restraining illusion in which they feel eveloped and deformed by huge, violet cement sphere.

Notes:Can only be done twice per battle.
Notes:Restrain lasts until the end of the user's turn.
Notes:No genjutsu the next turn if it hits.

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (-15 damge to the user)
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-User can't summoned nothing else for the rest of the battle
- Only two elements can be used by Terra per battle
- User cannot use Taijutsu for as long as Terra is in play
-Can only be summoned once and lasts for four turns
-If use of a elemental attack Terra can't use taijutsu in the same turn.
-If use of a taijutus attack Terra can't use an elemental attack in the same turn.

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-Only for Emp

~ Approved ~

 

[~Nemesis~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Earth Style: Grand Disturbance (Doton: gurando bougai)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user, with one hand places his palm on to the ground releasing a large amount of chakra By constantly doing this the user is sending chakra waves into the ground, the user is able to sense any vibration going on underground, or on the ground, making him able to sense his enemies movements that only occur on the ground, the movements percieved by the user are very precise. Also by placing 2 hands on the ground the user can cause the ground to lightly shake throwing opponent off balanc. causing a ripple effect on the ground.
-can only be used twice-
-no more A earth jutsu's for the next turn-


Name: Daiennetsu Genko - Hell Fist
Rank: A
Range: Close(0-5meters), Medium(5-10meters)
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: A Taijutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The user will first focus chakra into their hands, and concentrates it into actual flame around their fists. This is normally a difficult task, but skill in Ninjutsu makes it easier. The fire is used to add burning damage to the user's taijutsu strikes, as well as allowing them harm the opponent through certain kinds of armor.
~Only Used Once~
~No A Fire Jutsu for next turn~

Name: Raiton: Raikou Sen (Lightning Element: Lightning Beam)
Rank: A
Range: Short to Medium
Chakra: 40
Damage:80
Description:The user charges his fist with electricity. Then he point it towards the enemy, and a thick arc of lightning will be shot in that direction. It burns everything in its path apart from the opponent, causing 1st degree burns to animals, but it makes the enemy feel dizzy.

~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~

Hells Wasnts Sure if a jutsu like it exists so resubmitting

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(ga-sensu:mugen mayu) Moth style: Infinite Cocoon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user (must have Moth summonings or Butterfly Summonings), Activates the Mark of the Monarch Tattoo(located on left forearm) by applying chakra to it, And then the users body lets off an instantaneous flash of light, summoning to the field a layer of sticky liquid know as Cocoon thread. The user can control this layer at will, allowing him/her to trap the opponent in the threads. The user can also manipulate the threads into shapes or figures that move. After four turns the threads disentegrate into nothing.
*The user cannot summon for six turns after this jutsu is used*
*The jutsu can only be used once per battle*
*Due to the strain on the user, the user cannot use any S-Rank justu for two turns*
*While this thread is in play the user can only use two jutsu per turn*
*Only one figure can be created per turn and it can be destroyed by a B rank attack*
*Can only Be Taught By Icemyster To those who have signed the Moth Contract*

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

(Hyouton: Massu Kuchiku) Ice Release: Mass Destruction
Rank:Forbidden
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:
The User, focuses his/her Ice Chakra into the clouds, turning the clouds themselves into a giant ice mirror. The Ice mirror begins collecting sunlight, much like a magnifiying glass, and after two turns, the mirror begins emitting a giant beam(40 feet in diameter) of solar light, capable of destroying almost anything. The user can control the beam by tilting the Mirror, allowing him to move the beam. If the mirror is destroyed before the beam is used, shards of ice fall from the sky. After the beam is used, the ice melts into rain.
*User cannot use any Ice Techniques while this jutsu is in use*
*Due to the strain, the user cannot use any S-rank jutsu While this jutsu is in use*
*User cannot use ice jutsu above A-rank for three turns after this jutsu is completed*

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Hyouton:Okan Kobushi) Ice Release: Chill Fist
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:
the user punches the opponent with a fist charged with ice chakra, causing the opponents skin in the area touched to be instantly frozen. The area affected will cause the opponent extreme pain, and after three turns the opponent's skin will return to normal. If the opponent gets struck again in the same spot before the skin defrosts, it will shatter, causing bleeding and immense pain. if used on a vital spot(throat, eye, heart) the opponent will suffer from death if struck twice
*Can only be used three times*
*can only be used by Icemyster*

~ Declined ~

 

[BishamonSama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninjutsu: Bishamon no Houkou)- Ninjutsu: Screech of the War God
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Points: 30
Damage Points: 40 ( if the opponent is within two meters from the user ) ( Else, no damage but opponent is stunned due to the sound leaving him open to Taijutsu )
Description: With this jutsu, the user concentrates chakra in their tongues, similar to using a fire jutsu. However, instead of expelling fire from their mouth, the user screams, forcing the chakra out in the form of amplified sound waves. The resulting sound wave can be used to attack opponents, damaging their ear drums, or to drain out the sound of sound-based Genjutsus. If an opponent is hit with this jutsu, their hearing is temporarily weakened (the extent to which it's weakened depends on the opponent's distance from the user), making them vulnerable to taijutsu.

~ Approved ~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(kongen kangoku)-root prison

Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:15(because of the spikes)
Description:With this jutsu Zetsu will make a 2 huge rootes with spikes appear beneath his opponent and immobiliz him.The opponent than will not be able to move for 2 turns giving zetsu the time to eat him xd.But if the opponent somehow gets free.
*Only zetsu can use this jutsu
*this is a very fast jutsu so only users with KG(like sharingan) or sensers can dodge it
*once hit the enemy is immobilized for 2 turns
*Can only be used 2 times per battle
*only yashurik11 can teach this

~ OPed ~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Gorillas
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

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none atm

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Goro ) - Summoning jutsu -Goro

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Goro.Goro has metal armour around his body and non chakra projectailes attack wont affect him.Goro has big,long and strong arms that can break a human in half.Goro cant use ninjutsu but can use strong taijutsu.Goro is 2.2 meters tall

*can use taijutsu moves up to A-rank
*Can only be used for 6 turns
*can be sommuned 2 times per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

EMPERER PLEASE CHECK

see previous submission

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Taijutsu: Rising Palm Strike
(Joushou Hirate Dageki)
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will quickly duck down in front of the opponent
coiling their legs. They will then explode upwards while thrusting their
palm up at the opponent's chin. The force of striking the opponent's
chin is enough to send the opponent into the air.
~Must be taught by Hypnotiq.

Taijutsu: Falling Fist Smash
(Shikkyaku Kobushi Sumasshu)
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will first deliver a strong jab to the stomach of
the opponent causing them to double over then the user will leap in the air
above the opponent and put their hands together above their head.
Then as they're coming down they will swing their fists down at the top or
back of the opponent's head delivering a strong blow that sends the opponent
crashing into the ground. If the user is already in the air from a previous
event they can bypass the first jab and jumping motion and just use the smashing
attack, though this will reduce the damage by 10.
~Must be taught by Hypnotiq.

Taijutsu: Double Palm Strike
(Nibai Hirate Dageki)
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will first smash the sides of the opponent's head with
their palms causing the opponent to become momentarily disoriented. Then
the user will coil backwards and explode forward while thrusting both
palms at the chest of the opponent. This strike will cause the opponent
to be sent tumbling backwards.
~Must be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ These three Approved ~

Taijutsu: Grasping Head Smash
(Shuuran Kashira Sumasshu)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will quickly step to the right of the opponent and put
their weight onto their left leg. They will then push off of their left
leg and grab the side of the opponent's head. This is done with enough
force to knock the opponent off their feet. The user will then drive the
head of the opponent into the ground.
~Must be taught by Hypnotiq.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.


Taijutsu: Rising Palm Snap
(Joushou Hirate Sunappu)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will grab the wrist of the opponent and twist their
arm so that its palm is facing upwards. They will then duck below the
opponent's extended arm and explode upwards while thrusting their palm up
at the elbow of the opponent. This is done with enough force to snap the
opponent's arm at the elbow, rendering it useless for the remainder of the battle.
~Must be taught by Hypnotiq.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.

~ These two Declined ~

 

[Azaghast]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Kanmu )- Sweet Dreams

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Points: 30
Damage Points: N/A
With this jutsu, the user concentrates chakra in his fingers. When he touches the opponent's head, he releases the chakra, forcing the opponent's brain into a sleep state.
Technique Notes: May be used once per battle

( Kenzai )- Hardwood

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Points: 30
Damage Points: N/A
With this jutsu, the user covers himself in a coat of chakra, which he then begins to warm up with some amount of chakra enhancing his body's radiant heat. This prevents him from freezing due to cold temperatures.
Technique Notes: May be used once per battle. The user cannot move from position while this technique is in effect.

~ Both Declined, OPed ~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(kongen kangoku)-root prison

Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:15(because of the spikes)
Description:With this jutsu Zetsu will make a 2 huge rootes with spikes appear beneath his opponent and immobiliz him.The opponent than will not be able to move for 2 turns giving zetsu the time to eat him xd.But if the opponent somehow gets free.
*Only zetsu can use this jutsu
*this is a very fast jutsu so only users with KG(like sharingan) or sensers can dodge it
*once hit the enemy is immobilized for 2 turns
*Can only be used 2 times per battle
*only yashurik11 can teach this

~ OPed ~

(kongen kangoku)-root prison

Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:15 (because of the spikes)
Description:With this jutsu Zetsu will make a 2 huge rootes with spikes appear beneath his opponent and immobiliz him.The opponent than will not be able to move for 1 turn giving zetsu the time to eat him xd.
*Only zetsu can use this jutsu
*this is a very fast jutsu so at close range it is inpossible to dodge or defend(only 3 tomoa sharingan users or high leveled sensers can do that),but at mid-range low-rank sensers or bios with low-rank KG (like 1 tamoa sharingan) or are very fast(like raikage) can block it or dodge
*since the jutsu is fast it can only immobilize for 1 turns
*Can only be used once per battle
*only yashurik11 can teach this

~ Still OPed ~

(Genjutsu:Zetsus shokubutsu guntai ) Illusionary Technique:Zetsus plant army

Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:Zetsu will creat a illusion by eye contact.Once caught in genjutsu the opponent will see Zetsu doing handseals(but he isnt in reality,this is done to make it look like zetsu made the plants attack him through a jutsu) and than expireance hundreds of plants,roots and trees attacking him.The opponent than will start defending himself (in reality he stays still) giving Zetsu the time to kill him.
*Only zetsu can use this
*No genjutsu can be used after usege
*only users with sharingan (3 tomoa),renningan can see through this genjutsu
*The opponent will be captured in genjutsu for 1 turns
*the user will receive 40 damage
*Only yashurik11 can teach this.

~ Approved ~

 

[Ben-sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[ Seisoken jaianto | 成層圏ジャイアント | Stratosphere Giant ]

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
" This technique put an end to evil's reign. With a foot. "
After performing a string of eight handseals, the user will release a wave of wind chakra. The air above the opponent, covering fifty feet around him, will suddenly compress downwards,crushing the opponent. It leaves a crater like a Giant's foot when the technique is done. It is large enough to crush summonings.
[ May be cast only once per battle ]
[ No Fuuton techniques for next turn ]
[ Co-created by Emperor ]
[ Before anyone else can be taught this technique, they must have the permission of both Benazz and Emperor ]

[Suiton : Kyojin Fuka | 水リリース:巨大サメ | Water Release : Giant Shark]

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Range : Short-Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
The user will use a massive amount of suiton chakra and form a gigantic shark shaped projectile out of water, then the user will launch the shark which will travel by ground and due to it's size will collide with things in air unless they are in high altitude. The shark will crush anything under it and blow back anything in air that gets in it's path. Once the shark reaches it's range limit it loses all it's shape and becomes a large water source.
[Once per battle]
[No suiton techniques during the turn this jutsu is used]

[Asaito Heika | スレッドアームス | Thread Arms]

Spoiler

Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage Points : N/A
Kakuzu will manipulate his threads to shape a copy of both his arms that can form handseals instead of the original arms, however in order to keep those arms active, Kakuzu must have an extra heart stored in his body to have control of the extra arms. The heart while controling the arms is inactive inside the body.
[The arms last three turns]
[Twice per battle]

~ Leaving all for Roku or Rag ~

Reminder Above, New Customs :

[Doton : Youshoku Tsuchi | 地球を上げる | Earth Release : Raising Earth]

Spoiler

Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
The user infuses his chakra into the earth under his target and makes it rise in large pieces into the air, while rising the chakra within the earth makes the earth shake like a level 5 earth-quake making it nearly impossible for the target to maintain good balance.
[Three times per battle]
[No doton the current turn this jutsu is used]

~ Declined ~

 

[Ryuji]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hono no Tsubasa)-Fire wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank:C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user of this jutsu will concentrated his fire element into his back to sprout 2 large fire wings that give him the ability to fly at a considerable distance into the air.
Note: can only be used by me
last for 4 turns
usable 4 times per battle
no S or A rank wind jutsus when using

~ Similar technique already exists ~

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(ga-sensu:mugen mayu) Moth style: Infinite Cocoon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user (must have Moth summonings or Butterfly Summonings), Activates the Mark of the Monarch Tattoo(located on left forearm) by applying chakra to it, And then the users body lets off an instantaneous flash of light, summoning to the field a layer of sticky liquid know as Cocoon thread. The user can control this layer at will, allowing him/her to trap the opponent in the threads. The user can also manipulate the threads into shapes or figures that move. After four turns the threads disentegrate into nothing.
*The user cannot summon for six turns after this jutsu is used*
*The jutsu can only be used once per battle*
*Due to the strain on the user, the user cannot use any S-Rank justu for two turns*
*While this thread is in play the user can only use two jutsu per turn*
*Only one figure can be created per turn and it can be destroyed by a B rank attack*
*Can only Be Taught By Icemyster To those who have signed the Moth Contract*

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

(Hyouton: Massu Kuchiku) Ice Release: Mass Destruction
Rank:Forbidden
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:
The User, focuses his/her Ice Chakra into the clouds, turning the clouds themselves into a giant ice mirror. The Ice mirror begins collecting sunlight, much like a magnifiying glass, and after two turns, the mirror begins emitting a giant beam(40 feet in diameter) of solar light, capable of destroying almost anything. The user can control the beam by tilting the Mirror, allowing him to move the beam. If the mirror is destroyed before the beam is used, shards of ice fall from the sky. After the beam is used, the ice melts into rain.
*User cannot use any Ice Techniques while this jutsu is in use*
*Due to the strain, the user cannot use any S-rank jutsu While this jutsu is in use*
*User cannot use ice jutsu above A-rank for three turns after this jutsu is completed*

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Hyouton:Okan Kobushi) Ice Release: Chill Fist
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:
the user punches the opponent with a fist charged with ice chakra, causing the opponents skin in the area touched to be instantly frozen. The area affected will cause the opponent extreme pain, and after three turns the opponent's skin will return to normal. If the opponent gets struck again in the same spot before the skin defrosts, it will shatter, causing bleeding and immense pain. if used on a vital spot(throat, eye, heart) the opponent will suffer from death if struck twice
*Can only be used three times*
*can only be used by Icemyster*

~ Declined ~

(Hyouton:Okan Kobushi) Ice Release: Chill Fist
Rank:s
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
the user punches the opponent with a fist charged with ice chakra, causing the opponents skin in the area touched to be instantly frozen. The area affected will cause the opponent extreme pain, and after three turns the opponent's skin will return to normal. If the opponent gets struck again in the same spot before the skin defrosts, it will shatter, causing bleeding and immense pain. if used on a vital spot(throat, eye, heart) the opponent will suffer from death if struck twice. the user's hand will suffer from numbness, and the user cannot use jutsu that require seals for one turn
*Can only be used three times*
*can only be used by Icemyster*

~Declined~ similar to existing customs

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kaguya Fuuinjutsu: Genshiteki Honnou no Kaguya) - Kaguya's Sealing Technique: Kaguya's Primitive Instinct

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: (5 to user for each turn the jutsu is active)
Description: The user will focus a big deal of chakra on a seal, which every Kaguya has on his body and will activate it. This will cause an immediate reaction on the user's body and his personality will change, reverting to the primitive state of a Kaguya, without self control and a great desire to fight and kill everything in his way. He will turn bloodthirsty, aggressive,sadist and won't be affected by any pain the opponent may cause to him (it's just like the user turned into an animal only with the instinct of survival). A layer of bone will cover his body and multiple spikes will come out of the user's head, back, arms and legs. His strength will increase so much that his taijutsu attacks deal +10 attack. All of his chakra will convert to his Shikotsumyaku techniques wich will also do +10 damage and to one element (the element doesn't get any power ups). However, because of this he won't be able to use any summonigs, gengutsu, Kage Bunshins of any type or use any of the other elements he sealed away.
*This technique will last 4 turms
*All elements of the user will be sealed for the rest of the battle with the exception of the one he chose to maintain
*User will only be able to use Shikotsumyaku, Taijutsu and one Element for the rest of the battle
*After the jutsu wears out, the user will be left exhausted
*User takes 5 damage per turn

~ Approved ~

(Honeton Hijutsu: Mugendai no Yuuen Rokkaku Seki) - Secret Bone Release: Grand Hexagonal Gate of Infinity

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: After awakening the Kaguya's Primitive Instinct and sealed all but lightning element, the user will do a row of hand seals and stomp on the ground. A big barrier which covers 360? angles and is made of bone in form of an hexagonal box will form, standing vertically with the enemy inside of it trapping him. After that with another hand seal the user will open a small part of the barrier (50 centimetres diameter) and will release an extreme compressed burst of lightning which passes trough the hole and enters the barrier with an incredible force, crushing everyone inside of it and also, causing an enourmous explosion. After that, the barrier will will shatter and disappear in a cloud of dust made of bone.
*Usable once per battle
*User must have activated Kaguya's Primitive Instinct Seal the previous turn
*User takes 15 damage
*No lightning jutsus S-rank and above next turn

It will kinda look like this but standing vertically.

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Just wanted to leave my opinion about the restrictions: I think they're fine because the seal restricts me enough for the rest of the battle. I also thought on reducing the seal's length by one turn but that would only leave 3 turns which isn't very much =/ the seal itself doesn't last much so i think they're good enough.

~ Approved ~

(Honeton: Shuukaikujo no Yuuen Gokakkei Enban) - Bone Release: Grand Pentagonal Disk of Mass Destruction

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will make a big pentagonal disk made out of bone from his body. After that he will infuse each tip of the disk with the five basic elements, making a small layer of each element in each tip of the bone pentagon. After that the user will send it spinning towards the opponent. On impact, because of the all chakra natures being together, it will cause a big explosion destroying everything within 3 metres radius from the spot of impact. However, this jutsu has the disadvantage of taking some time to perform since the user needs to summon all basic five elements to the disk.
*Usable twice per battle
*Obviously, cant be used with the Kaguya's Primitive Instinct seal activated

~ Declined. No attack that combines more than 2 elements will be approved ~

 

[Faust]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Elephants
Scroll Owner: Faust
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Mercurial
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None yet, but I'll work on them

[Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Mercurial] Elephant Summoning Technique: Mercurial

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Suplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
Description: The user wipes his/her blood on one of the hands, performs the necessary handseals and slams the hand on the ground summoning Mercurial. He is a giant elephant in the size of Gamabunta and is able to suck in objects and targets within the area in front of his trunk. Mercurial has a great water resistance cause of the dry skin he has and he is able to block water based attacks up to A rank. He is also able to use earth based techniques up to A rank and his tusks are as hard as steel and can strike almost through anything.
*Note: Mercurial lasts for three turns.
*Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
*Note: Can suck in targets with his trunk within short range.
*Note: Must have signed the Elephant contract.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~I changed bits, hope it gets approved.

~Leaving for Roku~

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