[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

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(Meinton+Suiton:Teikiatsu Zetsumei) Darkness+Water Style - Cyclone Of Death
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The Element of Darkness and Water are Combined, this Jutsu has taken the Shape of a Average Rasengan.
The Power of Darkness Sucks Out the Chakra from the Opponent if it Hits and The power of Water goes into the mouth and Veins of the Body so it makes the opponent almost unable to breath and move.
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(Raiton: Kyokudo jitsuryoku) Lightning Style - Extreme Force
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description:
It Draws the Energy of the Electricity Available in areas near in any direction and creates a Lightning Dragon Force in front, it's Speed Is Extreme.
When It hits, all the cells of the Body are demolished Due to High Voltage Shock.

Though it uses 40% Chakra of the User.
~ Dude, read the damn rules. ~
 
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Water Release: Shell of the Water God
(Suiton: Kawa sono Suijin)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user preforms a series of hand seals and causes a sphere of water to form around either themselves or the opponent. The sphere of water is hollow so the person is just surrounded by the water, not actually in it. The water then spins rapidly preventing the person inside of it from exiting. This can be used to protect the user form incoming attacks, or to imprison the enemy in an inescapable sphere of water. Then with a single hand seal the user can cause the water to violently collapse on itself crushing whoever is inside.
~Can only be used twice per battle.
~Requires a water source.
~Can only be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ Inescapable ? Really ? Declined. ~

Water Release: Shell of the Water God
(Suiton: Kawa sono Suijin)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user preforms a series of hand seals and causes a sphere of water to form around either themselves or the opponent. The sphere of water is hollow so the person is just surrounded by the water, not actually in it. The water then spins rapidly preventing the person inside of it from exiting. This can be used to protect the user form incoming attacks, or to imprison the enemy in an inescapable sphere of water (meaning they can't just walk their way out of it but instead must use an appropriate jutsu to force their way out). Then with a single hand seal the user can cause the water to violently collapse on itself crushing whoever is inside.
~Can only be used twice per battle.
~Requires a water source.
~Can only be taught by Hypnotiq.

~ Approved. ~

Added the bold to clarify what I meant by inescapable.
 
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( Taijutsu: La muerte ) - Hand to Hand combat: The strike of the demon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 55
Description: User will encase own left hand completely with chakra, causing fingers to start cracking from it. Once this is done user will close own hand and deliver powerful special blow that is strong enough to damage opponent seriously. The attack leaves upon contact a huge skull-shape is created upon the surface behind the target.
Note:
- Can be used twice
- Three turns recharging

Custom weapon: ( Santa Teresa ) - Sacred crying mantis
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive - Defensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Santa teresa is special blade forged from unknown chakra metal that doesn't show on earth. It takes the form of a giant axe-like weapon bearing two crescent moon-shaped blades fused together at the backs, with a large looped chain connected to the shaft at the end of the handle. The chain is connected to user's waist, allowing him/her to perform long-ranged attacks. The sword is blade is indestructible and it can perform strong but devastating combos. Skilled swordsman can even challenge someone with regular sword into fight with this weapon.
Note:
- Costs - 5 chakra per turn
- It's indestructible
- Only skilled swordsman can wield this blade
- It's chakra weapon, meaning that different elemental chakra can be guided into it.
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~ One more zanpakuto or Bleach ability out of you and you're banned from this thread for a week ~
I'm just asking why isn't it possible to submit sword that looks like Zanpakutou without bleach abilities or a taijutsu attack that looks similiar to the real strike on bleach? If not I am complaining about caliburn submitting one piece customs when I can't submit bleach customs without special abilities.

Caliburn, I don't have anything against you but it's equality we're now talking about
 

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Summoning Animal: Gorillas
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
none atm

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he than after he masterd fire learnt wind.Because it can be combined into a water/wind combo.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note:Can use Water,wind up to S rank
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
Note: Can only be summened twice per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and B rank attacks and below wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a Gorilla swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.7 meters tall.
*Can only be used 2 times per battle.
*Can use earth up to S-rank
*Can use sword techniqs
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

Okey I cahnged it.I made them all have only one element.Exept Gorusu because he is one of the main summonings.He is the brother of the king

~ Since you apparently don't know the meaning of restrictions, this is Declined. ~
Summoning Animal: Gorillas
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
none atm

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he than after he masterd fire learnt wind.Because it can be combined into a water/wind combo.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note:Can use Water,wind up to S rank
Note:Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
Note:Can only use 10 jutsus (4- S rank ,6-up to A)
Note:Once Gorusu uses his 10 jutsus he dissapears(cant be used)
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
Note:Can only use 6 jutsus per summon (2- S rank,4 - up to A)
Note: Can only be summuned twice per battle
Note:Cant be summuned on the next turn
Note:Once Raikan uses his 6 jutsus he dissapears(cant be used)
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


(Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and B rank attacks and below wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a Gorilla swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.7 meters tall.
*Can only be used 1 times per battle.
*Can use earth up to S-rank
Note:Can only use 8 jutsus (1- S rank ,7-up to A)
*Can use sword techniqs
Note:Can use only 5 sword techniqs once summuned
Note:Once Shamash uses his 8 jutsus he can only be used 1 more turn (this does not apply to sword techniqs)
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

If the the restrictions I added have too big numbers like too many jutsus that the gorilla can use,than can u make it to the right amount.(just dont make it too low;))

~ I give up on this, I want Roku or Rag to check it plz ~
 
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[ Kurisutairutsuin kaishi | クリスタルツイン開始 | Crystal Zweilancer ]
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
" It has lasted 200 years. The journey is at an end, the ultimate twin lances have been found. "
After performing a string of fifteen handseals, the user will create a human sized figure carrying two lances while riding on a horse, all made of water. The figure will rush at the opponent with all the speed and fury of a stampeding herd of bison, aiming to stab and crush the target. Should they put up an earth defense, the lancer will dissolve into its form of water, seep through any cracks in the defense ( most earth walls, unless they state otherwise in the description, have cracks running through them ) and will reform on the other side before continuing. Similarly, if there are no cracks, it will flow around the walls and reform before continuing its charge. Should the opponent be out of its range, i.e. underground or in the air, it will patiently wait on the battlefield until they come into range again.
[ May be cast only once per battle ]
[ Requires a large water source ]
[ No Suiton techniques for as long as it is in the battlefield ]
[ Co-created by Emperor ]
[ Before anyone else can be taught this technique, they must have the permission of both Faust and Emperor ]

~ Need Roku or Rag to check ~
 
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(Raiton:chidori raibunshin)One-thousand birds lightning clone
Rank:S
Range:short-long
Type:Attack
Chakra:40 Chakra
Damage:80
Description:User creates chidori in one of his hands then radiates it out torwards the opponant in a very high speed and at the end of the lightning a raibunshin formes and strikes the opponant. After the strike the raibunshin dissapears.
*This jutsu can be conbined with short range lightning jutsu to make the clones attack stronger.(ex: the raibunshin can strike the opponant with chidori)but the other jutsu must be stated as an other move. The other attack used by the raibunshin comes out of the radiated lightning as complete and no need for preperation.
*The user cant make new clones the next turn

~ Declined. ~
 
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Sry my bad

(Jishaku Ninpou: Jika!)- Magnetic Art: Magnetize!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 for every additional object magnetized)
Damage: N/A
Description: The 3rd Kazekage is able to strongly (40000 Gauss) magnetize any object or only part of it, in any magnetic pole he wants.
* Note-can only be taught by Kaziname
* Note-jutsu can be only used three times

Are there any more problems? if yes feel free to alter jutsu for it to be approved.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Mainā Jika!)- Magnetic Art: Minor Magnetize!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 25 (+5 for every additional object magnetized)
Damage: N/A
Description: The 3rd Kazekage is able to minorly (1000 Gauss) magnetize any object or only part of it, in any magnetic pole he wants.
* Note-can only be taught by Kaziname

This is a lot weaker version of (Jishaku Ninpou: Jika!)- Magnetic Art: Magnetize!. Since it is that much weaker i believe that there is no need for restrictions but yet again feel free to alter jutsu for it to be approved xD

~ Explain the effects of these techniques, what they can be used to set up for, etc. etc. ~
(Jishaku Ninpou: Jika!)- Magnetic Art: Magnetize!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 for every additional object magnetized)
Damage: N/A
Description: The 3rd Kazekage is able to strongly (40000 Gauss) magnetize any object or only part of it, in any magnetic pole he wants. For example user can magnetize himself and opponent in positive magnetic pole thus resulting opponents repulsion from user.
* Note-can only be taught by Kaziname
* Note-jutsu can be only used three times. Each magentism lasts for one turn.
* The magnetism cannot be used to make the opponent stick to inanimate objects. It can only repel or attract him to the user.

~ Approved. ~

(Jishaku Ninpou: Mainā Jika!)- Magnetic Art: Minor Magnetize!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 25 (+5 for every additional object magnetized)
Damage: N/A
Description: The 3rd Kazekage is able to minorly (1000 Gauss) magnetize any object or only part of it, in any magnetic pole he wants. For example user can magnetize opponent's left index finger in negative magnetic pole and right middle finger in positive magnetic pole thus unabeling opponent from casting jutsus because his fingers would stick together.
* Note-can only be taught by Kaziname

Anyway I can use magnet in any way I see fit.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Iryō Jika)- Magnetic Art: Medical Magnetization
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 for every body point magnetized)
Damage: N/A
Description: User is able to magnetize different points in his body to provoke various medical processes. Magnetic fields:

?Modulate calcium flow through the body, which is essential to many physiological processes. Magnetic fields can attract calcium ions to heal a broken bone or help move calcium away from painful arthritic joints.

?Alter the acidity or alkalinity of body fluids, which are often out of balance with illness- Allows user to defend against any kind of poison.

?Affect hormone production (including those of the brain’s all-important pineal gland), which initiates a cascade of biological effects- Allows user to induce adrenalin rush. An adrenaline rush causes the muscles to perform fermentation at an increased rate improving strength. This gland produces chemical messenges (hormones) to help regulate the body's activities. It works with the nervous system to interpret impulses that trigger selective glands. It increases user's movement to the speed of 1st gate. It also increases speed of performing hand seals (two times faster than normal).
Adrenalin rush can be active for only two turns because of lactic acid fermentation in muscles.

?Increase blood flow, bringing in more oxygen and nutrients, and flushing away waste products- this extends adrenalin rush duration from two to 4 turns (if used in combination with reaction below it allows continuous use of adrenalin rush)

?Alter enzyme activity and other biochemical processes, such as the production of ATP, a molecule that provides cellular fuel for the entire body-this extends adrenalin rush duration from two to 4 turns (if used in combination with reaction above it allows continuous use of adrenalin rush)

?There are several ways to block the transmission of the pain impulse to the brain. One way is the use of Magnetic Therapy to impede the flow of the nerve impulse.By placing a highly powerful negative magnetic field over the nerve, the magnetically, positively charged ions will be attracted to the negative magnetic field, thus impeding the flow of the positively charged ions along the nerves to the brain- this allows user to feel no pain.
* Note-can only be taught by Kaziname
* Note-jutsu can be only used once

Sources: , ,

~ These two declined, do NOT resubmit ~
 
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Emp check only!


(Doton: Naiya Engo) - Earth Realease: Diamond Staff
Type:Offense|Defense
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80 (User take - 10 damage)
Description:The user will slam his hands on the earth floor and by using large amounts of his earth chakra to identify the minerals underground, also manipulates the common minerals in the ground and changes their composition (diamonds are made mainly of carbon atoms), to make them become pure diamond.Then superheat it with his fire chakra and finally compresses it to form diamonds staff which the user can wielded with ease in battle.
-Can only be used once per battle since a diamond is a rare mineral.
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
-Cannot use earth jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends.
-User take - 10 damage due to the exhausted of chakra for performing the jutsu.

~ Diamond is a Custom Element. Declined. ~

(Ninjutsu|Lighting):One Thousand Birds Spiraling Sphere: |Rasendori|
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50 (+ 10 combing it with lighting chakra)
Damage Points:90 (Death to the opponent if contact is made within short range) (-10 to user hand after use of the jutsu)
Description:This jutsu takes a lot of concentration and chakra, applying the same method's as if using rasengan and chidori the user must have extremely good chakra control.The user then take the shape transformation of his chakra to the "highest possible point" creating (rasengan) and then combing it with lighting chakra (chidori) creating "Rasendori." Rasendori is purple-ish, black-ish sphere with a huge explodes power, it can easily hollow out an entire mountain.This jutsu is incredibly deadly when performed at a close range both user and opponent take larger amount of damage if use in close range due to the explodes.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
-Cannot use Lighting jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends.
-User take -10 damage to hand after use of the jutsu.

~ Declined. No Rasengan or Chidori variants or combinations will be Approved. ~

I was thinking, maybe, just maybe, if they were combined, and used as one jutsu, it would look similar to the 'Darkness Orb' that formed when Naruto and Sasuke clashed in the Valley of Ends (or whatever it's called where they fought), where they kind of combined and made that purple-ish, black-ish sphere. Chidori is one of the Elemental Jutsu (Lighting).Rasengan is a non-element jutsu that is why they should be able to fuse I think.

Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-Can only be summoned twice
-Can only be used by Hiruzen Sarutobi, The Third Hokage
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~ Declined. Reduce the element usage to a maximum of two, but if so, give it a hell of a lot of side effects. ~

Doton|Fuuton|Katon|: Za Kigen Nami Yuumeikai Akunochimata: (The Rise Of Hades Underworld)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra: 50 (+10 due to the use of fire chakra)
Damage: 90 (+10 if opponent is underground) (-10 to user)
Description: The user use his earth manipulation, to opened thousands of small pores on the ground allowing air to circulate through it. The user then uses his fire chakra to make the fire run through those pores, igniting in flames an entire underground area causing a huge exploding underground causing lava itself to explodes from underground due to the intense flame heats. Any opponent hidden underground is burned alive also the lava rise high within the sky due to the explodes also causing lava to rain down onto the battlefield. So both user and opponent must protect there self from this jutus.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
-Cannot use Earth - Fire - Wind jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends.
-User take -10 damage to after use of the jutsu.


~ Hmm....Nice. Approved. ~
Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-Can only be summoned twice
-If use of a elemental attack Terra can't use taijutsu in the same turn.
-If use of a taijutus attack Terra can't use an elemental attack in the same turn.
-Can only be used by Hiruzen Sarutobi, The Third Hokage
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-Only for Emp


~ Did you not see what I said ? ~

Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (-15 damge to the user)
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-User Can summoned nothing else for the rest of the battle-Can only be summoned twice
-If use of a elemental attack Terra can't use taijutsu in the same turn.
-If use of a taijutus attack Terra can't use an elemental attack in the same turn.
-Can only be used by Hiruzen Sarutobi, The Third Hokage
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(Doton: Yurasu no Sentou)- Earth Release: Rock Spire
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a long, thick spire of rock that shoots up out of the ground beneath a target. The user can vary the speed at which the spire shoots up out of the ground. The user can use this technique to lift themselves up into the air, to launch an opponent high up into the air, or to throw an opponent off balance while they are forming the seals for a jutsu, nullifying the jutsu. This jutsu is deceptively simple and can be used in a variety of useful ways.

Is this really similar to existing jutsus? O_O?
Because if so, which ones? Because I've always had this custom jutsu on NB, and it's never been considered similar to jutsus used in the Manga/Anime, and I've never come across any that it's similar to. If it's similar to any customs that people may have (which I doubt, considering people tend to make the most powerful S-rank jutsus that they can, while completely disregarding the option of making lower rank jutsus), then those customs were certainly inspired by this custom, considering I've been using this custom for over two years on NB.

I'm sorry for being a jerk about this... but, I've been using this jutsu for the past two years on NB, and I have to say that it's my favorite.

~ IMO, Bisha, its sort of a cross between Earth Plateau and Earth Spikes, which are canon techniques. But since I realise your view on this, I'd like Roku or Rag to check this as well and tell me what they think. ~
 
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Kuchiyose: Rai no Hitonomi Kertou(Summoning: Kertou the lightning swallow)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kertou is a medium sized, shocking yellow swallow. He has teh abbility to manipulate lightning chakra by combining both of his wings. Each of his wings has opposite polarities thats why he manages to electricaly charge his chakra. He may use up to A-rank lightning techniques.
Note: Must have signed the Swallow contract held by Konoha?s Yellow Flash
Note: Lasts up to 3 turns.
Note: Kertou is very weak to water attacks because when he is drenched in water,the polarity in his wings will shock him.
Note: can only be summoned twice.
Note: can take noone on its back cause it will shock them

Kuchiyose:Nenshou Arashi no Hitonomi Kintaro (Summoning: Kintaro the swallow of the burning storm)

Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:40
Description: Kintaro is the brother of Kane, who taught him the feather storm. By combining it with his affinity for fire, he managed to create a storm of feathers wich he ignites by clicking his beak( just like Asuma ignites his ash cloud).He is also able to use fire techniques up to B-rank.
Note: Must have signed the Swallow contract held by Konoha?s Yellow Flash
Note: Lasts up to 2 turns.
Note: the burning featherstorm my only be used twice.
Note: can only be summoned twice.

Kuchiyose: Sakka Hitonomi no Kasumi (Summoning:Kasumi the artist swallow)
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:40
Description: K is a canvass white swallow who has a great passion for art.So much that he made his ultimate painting all around his back.This shocking drawing causes an A-rank paralizing genjutsu wich will not affect the signers of the contract.It?s to say that he will have to show his back to the opponent in order for him to cast the genjutsu.
Note: Must have signed the Swallow contract held by Konoha?s Yellow Flash
Note: Lasts up to 2 turns.
Note: the genjutsu can only be used once and once it has been cast the Summon will be dismissed.

~ Meh..All unimaginative, but Approved. ~
 
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Satsui no Hado| Surge of Murderous Intent
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: (+50 to taijutsu based attacks)
Description: To tap into Satsui no Hado, a fighter must be so consumed with the desire to win that they are willing to kill. As a result, only people who push themselves to be the best at all costs can take advantage of it. However, the untrained mind can be driven to a temporary insanity if they have not prepared for it. For those who do succeed in controlling it, they develop an almost cold, cynical detachment from themselves. Using this the user also develops a new fighting style called; Ansatsuken or the "assassination fist" this allows any of the user taijutsu based attacks to have more destructive power as the user now has amplified his intent to kill ten-fold. During the time this is in use the a kanji with the symbol of destruction which appears on the user's back. Also during this mode, the user focuses on three major principles:
Hadō (Surge)
It is the founding principle behind Ansatsuken. Through Hadō, a martial artist utilizes his/her will (or intent) to draw in chakra and project it out at an opponent as a concussive force upto Short Range.
Shōryū (Rising Dragon)
This is a set of techniques where a martial artist uses chakra to propel himself/herself upward at the airborne opponent. During the ascent, he/she is invincible to most attacks. However, his/her descent renders him/her vulnerable.
Tatsumakisenpū (Tornado Kick)
The martial artist's body is supported and spun above the ground on a column of spiralling chakra for a limited time of one turn. With this the user is able to "float in the air" for a certain amount of time.
With these priniciples the user is able to deliver powerful blows to the opponent at the cost losing himself in the process.
(Usable Once Per Battle)
(Users Chakra Manipulation is ceased for 2 turns afterwards)
( Once in the grip of this bloodlust, no Nin or Gen jutsu can be used. }
(Last 3 Turns)

~ Mhm....okay, Approved. ~
 
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(Magumaton: Yougan Bouchou no Kawa)- Lava Release: Shell of Expanding Lava
Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 40
Description: The user focuses chakra in the ground, calling up several jets of lava to form a 360 degree swirling shell of lava around them. The shell then shoots outwards in several pieces in all directions, drenching the area around it with lava.
(Cannot be used more than once every two turns)
(Lava cannot be used the turn after this is used)

~ Approved. ~

I was told by a Moderator that because my Custom Element of lava has been, and still is, certified as my custom element by the Custom Element Bureau, I am still allowed to use it.
 
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Kage Nohara (Shadow Field)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn if still activated)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates an enormous amount of chakra in his shadow increasing the area of his shadow. This technique is similiar to that of other shadow techniques, whenever an opponent gets caught in the field of shadow he/she would be immobilized. Can also be used to trap multiple opponents if they're caught as well. This jutsu can last for as long as the user maintains the Rat sign for a maximum of three turns
-2 usage per battle

~ Declined. ~

Kage Sendon (Shadow Needles)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user enhances chakra into his shadow and releases multiple shadow needles from his shadows out towards the opponent(s). Cannot harm the opponent but can be used to immobilized the opponent if needle lands on the opponent's shadow, which will instantly activate a Kagemane.
-3 usage per battle

~ Approved. ~

Kage Unsou (Shadow Transportation)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: When in danger, the user extends his shadow to a nearby location of safety, then sinks into the shadow of his current location and will emerge from the desire area of where the extended shadow was set. The usage of this technique appears like that of the Shadow Imitation meaning the Rat sign is required to be held to be performed. Traveling through the shadow occurs just as fast of Mayfly except its not traveling underground and are limited with range and time (because a destinated point must be set first)
-3 usage per battle

~ Declined. Do not resubmit. EVER. No transportation jutsus. ~
 
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>.> Damn you guys are gunna be backed up with jutsu from me at least. Either way the quoted above is for the 5 jutsus last week. The ones below this blob of text is for this weeks since it's sunday, the start of a new week.

(Ninpo:) - Ninja Art: Chakra Stitching
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (-30 if used on self)
Description: User will focus chakra within his body and guide it within his hands. Using chakra control the user will concentrate and create what looks like stitches that will spring out and attach itself to a surface. This can also be done by attacking a victim and inserting chakra in such a way that it would stitch them to a surface. This type of attack requires physical contact to travel from user to target. This technique bounds the target for a period of time to defend from abrupt movement or to increase attack accuracy. This was made with the idea of how to walk on trees, water, and hold yourself in place; though this is for more extreme measures.
Note: Only musa can teach this.
Note: User will take 30 damage if done to himself.
Note: Can only be used twice and must wait 3 turns to use again.
Note: User must physically touch to cast this ninjutsu on the victim.
Note: If victim is of same rank or higher can break out of stitching in turn for 30 damage due to ripping from stitching.

~ Declined. ~

(Kuchiose: Aka Panda Huo Mao) - Summoning Technique: Red Panda Huo Mao
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: In the panda contract there is two sides, a male and a female side. They are not only seperated by ***, but by ability. Unlike the female pandas, the male pandas don't transform into anything. They are fighters that stand alongside the summoner and fight in conjuction with his or her attacks. Huo Mao is a taijutsu and elemental enhancer and plays the role of a supporter. He attacks with his summoner in hand-to-hand situations and if elemental jutsu is used, he will use his general knowledge and abilities of all 5 elements (up to c rank) to enhance the attack. His weakness is stamina and unlike most pandas, he can only last for two turns in battle and that is only possible since the summoner must give chakra beforehand to keep him there. Though he is quick like a jounin ninja and will protect his summoner from attacks if possible.
Note: Only Musa can teach.
Note: Must have signed panda contract.
Note: Can only be used 1 times and must wait a turn after dismissal or dispatch to summon another panda.
Note: Huo Mao only lasts for 2 turns and user loses 10 chakra per turn he is kept in play.
Note: If Huo Mao is attacked by a A rank or higher jutsu he will be dispatched.
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~ Approved. ~
Third submitting CJ for this week, the ones above were the first two.

(Genjutsu: Heki Yodan) - Illusionary Technique: Fast Forward
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will attack towards the target and while doing so keep eye contact. Once eye contact is established the victim will fall prey to the illusion. This makes everything continue one as normal, but in reality the user is standing still and the opponent is as well. In his mind the battle keeps going and as it continues on he is winning. The user will be able to move freely as the opponent sits there for a turn believing that he is about to win. Once the opponent does the finishing blow within his mind the user will be able to strike him with little to no resistance.
Note: Only Musa can teach.
Note: Illusion is very realistic, only chakra disruption, sharingan, or high amount of pain (like stabbing your stomach with a kunai if you were able to move.) will remove you from this state.
Note: User will only be able to use this at the beginning of the turn and do 1 jutsu right after.
Note: Can only be used once, it lasts for 1 turn, and user will be unable to use this or any other genjutsu for 3 turns.

~ Approved. ~
 
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Third submitting CJ for this week, the ones above were the first two.

(Genjutsu: Heki Yodan) - Illusionary Technique: Fast Forward
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will attack towards the target and while doing so keep eye contact. Once eye contact is established the victim will fall prey to the illusion. This makes everything continue one as normal, but in reality the user is standing still and the opponent is as well. In his mind the battle keeps going and as it continues on he is winning. The user will be able to move freely as the opponent sits there for a turn believing that he is about to win. Once the opponent does the finishing blow within his mind the user will be able to strike him with little to no resistance.
Note: Only Musa can teach.
Note: Illusion is very realistic, only chakra disruption, sharingan, or high amount of pain (like stabbing your stomach with a kunai if you were able to move.) will remove you from this state.
Note: User will only be able to use this at the beginning of the turn and do 1 jutsu right after.
Note: Can only be used once, it lasts for 1 turn, and user will be unable to use this or any other genjutsu for 3 turns.

~ Approved. ~
Sorry for the double posting, but I don't think I can edit something that was already edited by a mod, so I'll just quote and submit another jutsu. This is my 4th.

(Doton: Fi-to Kasugai) - Earth Style: Foot Clamps
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: User will perform a foot stomp that will send earth chakra through the ground and towards the enemy. The earth then splits where the opponent is standing or about to step and then clamp onto his or her feet with crushing pressure to hold and damage foot movement. This attack is subtle and more useful if done while the victim is running.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: Can only be used twice and must wait a turn to use again.
Note: User can not use another earth move this turn.
Note: Damage is reduced by 10 if victim is standing still.
Note: Due to the high concentration user will be only able to perform two moves this turn.

~ If they are running, I don't see how the earth can move fast enough to clamp them. ~

5th submission for this week.

(Ame Enjin) - Mare Vongolia Rain Ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: El Primero's rain guardian ring. The mafia named "Vongolia" had 7 powerful rings Sky, Cloud, Thunder, Rain, Sun, Mist, Storm. Many that correspond with a human's chakra nature. The rain ring that was worn by the family's first rain guardian imbued his chakra within it for future generations to grasp and master his power. This man had strong powers the rivaled many great ninja from the war. He only focused on two elements and finally combined them to make a special third element. Wind, water, and rain... These were his specialty and when worn, the user will only be able to use those two elements as well. Though with limitations, comes great power. Due to the lack of flexable elements, the one that wears this ring gains a power boost in all three catagories. A strange power that this ring gives is that it makes the user very calm, in doing so he will be able to focus on the battle without any surprises or miscalculations. When used correctly, the attacks from this user will be feared in the ninja war that he lives in.
Note: Only Musa can give this ring.
Note: Ring's effect lasts for 5 turns, though it can be removed at anytime.
Note: User will only be able to use water, wind, and rain jutsus until ring is removed.
Note: User can only wear this ring once per battle, and when the effect is gone then he will be unable to use it again.
Note: The ring will give all water and wind jutsus a 15 damage bonus, and all rain jutsus 20 damage bonus. User also feels no wavering of emotions during battle which allows him or her to fight with no fear or misjudgment.
Note:When removed or effect wears off, user will be unable to perform rain jutsus for 2 turns and all water and wind moves will be limited to A rank for 3 turns.

~ No. I've had enough with Mato submitting Vongolia Mafia things. No more. ~
 
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(Fukyuu Hakkyou) Immortal Insanity
Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : Hidan concentrates a large ammount of chakra in his body and focuses it on his muscles greatly increasing his strenght and speed, however the use of this technique makes him go insane and he cannot use more than two moves per battle to keep this state active. The speed granted from this technique can allow hidan to dodge from low rank techniques and projectiles with ease. The strenght given by this technique grants hidan the ability to crack an opponent's skull with a single punch.
- State lasts for 4 turns
- Twice per battle, the second time hidan uses this technique - his muscles get paralysed when the effects of it end.
- Strenght and speed are compared to rock lee with 2 gates opened.
- User takes -10 damage per use. and loses -10 chakra since the turn this technique was activated.

~ Bad description ~

(Taijutsu : Men Sumasshu) Taijutsu : Face Smash
Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Charges Up His Un-dominant fist with chakra and punches the opponent's stomach with great force - slightly raising him up, then, while having his un-dominant fist still rammed into the opponent's stomach, the user charges up his dominant fist with chakra and punches the opponent's face sending him flying backwards. The power is enough to crack an opponent's skull or break his nose.
- Three times per battle

(Genjutsu : Yuuyake) Illusion Technique : Sunset
Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user points his finger at the sun and the opponent begins to see that the sun starts falling down on him and burns him alive. In reality, the opponent loses control of his body and can't move, if the opponent doesn't break the illusion and stays in the genjutsu for too long his body will become paralysed forever.
- Once per battle

(Kaze Gai Bakufuu) Wind Scythe Blast
Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : Hidan infuses his scythe with wind based chakra and every swipe of it will send a blast of slicing wind that can cut off limbs or a gust of slicing wind that will blow the opponent backwards aswell as make small cut wounds.
- Twice per battle

~ All Declined ~
 
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[Kontei Enchou] ♦ Root Extension ♦
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 45 [+20, to create thorns.]
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra on his hand for a short while, then by using the plant-like abilities the user has, the user is able to sort of commune with nature around them. They will place their hand on the ground and small roots will grow from it. The roots will then extend through the ground and attach to nearby roots. The connected roots will extend the jutsu further. If there are any vibrations sent through the ground or roots they will alert the user to a presence through vibrations, so if anything on or below the ground moves the user instantly knows their location. The roots can almost instantly rise from any point of the ground by the user’s will for any purpose needed. By focusing more chakra on the roots, the user can create big thorns on them, that can easily cut through flesh and if anyone, except the user is underground, they would be cut. When a root is out of the ground, the user can pretty much instantly through the created roots, travel to that location, not even using mayfly, but it takes time for the roots to expand, about two turns. If the roots are destroyed somehow, they grow back again in one turn.
~This technique can only be used once.
~The user can travel instantly through the roots only twice.
~No Mayfly for the next turn after using this.
~Only Zetsu and characters from Zetsu?s clan can use this.

~ Approved ~

[Bunya no Maboroshi] ♦ Field of Dreams ♦
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 [+20, each turn they remain on the field.]
Description: By utilizing the plant-like abilities the user has he can be one with nature. Placing chakra into the ground, the user changes the molecular constitution of the grass and surrounding vegetation. The grass begins to turn into a field of white lily flowers with blue stems, growing to knee height of an average human, the field of lily flowers stretching out for two-hundred meters. Each lily releases hundreds of spores into the air at all times, day or night, causing any who breath the spores to fall into a deep sleep. The spores are also highly combustible, so if fire, or lightning were to touch the spores, they would explode causing a massive explosion. The user is immune to the spores, since he created them. The explosion is almost inescapable, cause the spores are almost everywhere.
~This technique can only be used once, but the lily's remains on the field still releasing thousands of spores and in each turn increasing the explosion.
~If the user is caught in the explosion, he will also be hurt
~The explosion occurs instantly as soon as any fire or lightning is released, without it even being able to travel.
~Only Zetsu and characters from Zetsu?s clan can use this.

~ Approved ~

[Kamakiri Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Al Cresto] ♦ Praying Mantis Summoning Technique: Al Cresto ♦
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user wipes his/her blood on one of the hands, performs the necessary handseals and slams the hand on the ground summoning Al Cresto, the fastest of the mantises. Al Cresto is in the size of an average human and like other mantises, he possesses the ability to fly. He can move as fast as the fifth gate, but he can only use plant-like techniques and no other. He can also damage the opponent with his big spiked forelegs, his forelegs are poisoned and if he cuts the opponent he becomes paralyzed for one turn, one turn after being cut. He can't take much damage and for that he was given the ability to dig himself into the ground.
~Must have signed the Praying Mantis contract.
~Lasts four turns, when summoned.
~Can only be summoned once per battle.
~No Genjutsu, Ninjutsu for the next turn after summoning him.

~ Plant praying mantises 0_0 Fifth gate moving plant praying mantises 0_0 Nooo ~
 
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Summoning Animal: Gorillas
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
none atm

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Goro ) - Summoning jutsu -Goro

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Goro.Goro has metal armour around his body and non chakra projectailes attack wont affect him.Goro has big,long and strong arms that can break a human in half.Goro cant use ninjutsu but can use strong taijutsu.Goro is 2.2 meters tall

*can use taijutsu moves up to A-rank
*can be sommuned 2 times per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

Okey I made some changes with Nero but I will post them later.I just want this to get approved.Please dont give up.:pwease:
 
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Kage Nohara (Shadow Field)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn if still activated)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates an enormous amount of chakra in his shadow increasing the area of his shadow. This technique is similiar to that of other shadow techniques, whenever an opponent gets caught in the field of shadow he/she would be immobilized. Can also be used to trap multiple opponents if they're caught as well. This jutsu can last for as long as the user maintains the Rat sign for a maximum of three turns
-2 usage per battle

~ Declined. ~
Kage Nohara (Shadow Field)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn if still activated)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates an enormous amount of chakra in his shadow increasing the area of his shadow. This technique is similiar to that of other shadow techniques, whenever an opponent gets caught in the field of shadow he/she would be immobilized. Can also be used to trap multiple opponents if they're caught as well. This jutsu can last for as long as the user maintains the Rat sign for a maximum of three turns. While maintaining the technique, the user cannot move.
-2 usage per battle

~ Still Declined. The chakra drain to pull that off would kill you ~

Gyakuhikage Mane (Inverse Shadow Imitation)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will merge their shadow with the opponent's. Once shadows are merged, the opponent will be the one in complete control and the user losing all control of his body and must copy/imitate the opponent. Since the user locks their shadow with the opponent, the opponent is restricted from using elemental or regular ninjutsu. The distance between the two will always be the same length as the two cannot be spread apart any farther or shorten the length any closer.
-2 usage per battle
-Each use lasts one turn

~ Approved, I edited bits and fixed the name ~

Kage Kaibutsu (Shadow Monster)

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (-5 for each extra shadow tendril to emerge)
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a huge shadow-like figure from his shadow with multiple enormous shadow tendrils acting as the shadow's teeth which can impale the opponent if biten. The shadow can be extended and chase down the opponent if the user maintains the Rat sign and several shadow tendril can emerge from the shadow itself or the body of it on the user's command but may be exert more chakra to do so.
-2 usage per turn

~ No ~
 
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Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-Can only be summoned twice
-If use of a elemental attack Terra can't use taijutsu in the same turn.
-If use of a taijutus attack Terra can't use an elemental attack in the same turn.
-Can only be used by Hiruzen Sarutobi, The Third Hokage
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~ Did you not see what I said ? ~
Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-Can only be summoned twice
-If use of a elemental attack Terra can't use taijutsu in the same turn.
-If use of a taijutus attack Terra can't use an elemental attack in the same turn.
-Maximum of two elements only during each battle (user choose those 2 elements once Terra has been summoned which can't be change unless re summoned)

-Can only be used by Hiruzen Sarutobi, The Third Hokage
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~ I still decline it. I want more side effects to YOU ~
 
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