[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Icemyster · May 12, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Icemyster said:
(shikyo butoukai) Death Ball
Rank-S
Range-Short/Long
Type-Offensive
Chakra-(-20 per use)
Damage-N/A
Description-
The weapon is an shape manipulation ball, created from a thick, rubbery substance that is resistant to raiton. The ball can be manipulated by the user by the use of chakra, expanding it to the size of a large boulder, or removing chakra from it, making it the size of a bullet. the user manipulates the ball with a single chakra thread linked to the users hand. The substance it is made of is inpenetrable, and the user must be in contact with the ball to manipulate it. if the user removes the chakra thread linking him/her to it, the user must touch it to re-attach it.
*Can only be used by icemyser*

(naibuteki akumu:shokka) Internal Nightmare: Shocker
Type-Offensive
Rank-A
Range-Short
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
The user touches the opponent, releasing a massive bolt of raiton into the target, numbing them, and causing the opponents sight to become jolted, making the target see multiples of all the objects around them, making it difficult for the opponent to focus on or dodge the user's attacks.
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Effects of the jutsu last for two turns if successfully used*

~ Both Declined ~

(naibuteki akumu:shokka) Internal Nightmare: Shocker
Type-Offensive
Rank-A
Range-Short
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
The user touches the opponent for atleast three seconds continuously, releasing a massive bolt of raiton into the target, numbing them, and causing the opponents sight to become jolted, making the target see multiples of all the objects around them, making it difficult for the opponent to focus on or dodge the user's attacks.
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Effects of the jutsu last for two turns if successfully used*
*No Raiton the Turn After*
*Can only be taught by Icemyster*

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

Pervyy · May 12, 2010

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(Futon: Ryuu Kirikorosu Mori) – Wind Release: Dragon Slayer lance

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing Ram – Horse – Tiger – Dragon the user will concentrate their wind chakra into both palms and place them to their sides and by releasing and manipulating the wind chakra they can then create medium sized lances of sharp wind which the user will launch them at their target/s and they are sharp enough to slice through even rock (A rank maximum).
Note: Can only be used two times.
Note: No S rank wind following turn.

~ Declined, similar to existing techniques ~

Chiryoku · May 12, 2010

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(Raiton: IkazuchiKakou) – Lightning Release: ThunderFall
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user charges lightning chakra throughout his/her whole body, and then jumps into the air. When in the air, they exert a yellowish aura, and from there body lightning bolts keep striking down on the ground below. The user only stays in the air for a short period of time. The lightning bolts randomly come out of the user’s body and cannot be directed. The bolts can be used to attack the opponent and to destroy incoming Earth techniques.

~ Declined. Ingwer, as a question, do you not know what a "restriction" is ? ~

-Mugen- · May 12, 2010

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(ikazuchi dageki) - Thunder strike
Rank:S
Type:attack
range:short
chakra cost:40
Damage:80
Description:The user inserts a big amount of lightning chakra to his sword and than coinsentraits chakra to his feet to get big speed and thrusts towards his opponent.At last the user does a 6 hit combo.
*must have mastered lightning
*can only be taught by yashurik11
*No lightning next turn

(Katon:mashin kasai) - Fire element: Devil fire
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:short-mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage:80
Description:The user consentraits a lot of fire chakra to there palms and slam them together to creat a blast wave of fire in front of them(180 degrees)
*Can only be used twice per battle
*cant be used on the next two turns
*The user takes 20 damage
*Because the user makes a lot of fire chakra in there hands,they get burnt a little and the user cant use Fire jutsus the next turn

I edited a bit

(subeta no raikou doragon) - sword of the lightning dragon
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40 when used to attack or absorb
Damage Points:N/A (depends on the jutsu)
Description:A sword made out of special metal that can absorb and unleash lightning.Its allowed to absorb all lightning jutsus exept kirin.
*The user cant use lightning jutsus while the sword is out.(but can use the jutsus that it has absorbed)
*Must have mastered lightning

~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~

Pervyy · May 12, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose no jutsu: Scorpions

Summoning Animal: Scorpions
Scroll Owner: The Pervy sage
Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
Summoning Boss if existing: Will make him later along with other summons
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Emperor Scorpion - Another name for the emperor scorpion is imperial scorpion; it is a native of Africa. This scorpion is the largest in the world and has a life span of up to eight years. The length of emperor scorpion is around 20 cms long. This scorpion is one of the popular exotic pets because of the low toxicity of its venom and also because of its lengthy life span.

Scorpio maurus - This species of scorpions gets its name from "maurus" meaning "dark". It is also known as the Israeli gold scorpion. This species of scorpions was personally named by Linnaeus, a Swedish zoologist, and he also coined the name "Scorpio" which means scorpion. Maurus is found in the African subcontinent and Asia. The length of this species is 6 to 8 cms.

Bothriuridae - There are 135 subspecies of Bothriuridae. They are the natives of Africa, Asia, Australia and South America. One of the genera of this species was recently found in the Himalayas. The scorpions of this species are unique because the sternum consists of a couple of transverse bars, they are longer and broader when compared to the scorpions of other species.

Euscorpiidea - This family of scorpions has 79 species. Scorpions of this species are mostly found in Africa, Mexico, Guatemala, Venezuela, Brazil, Peru and in Asian countries.

The other species of scorpions include Caraboctonidae, Chactidae and so on. Whatever be the species, all scorpions eat smaller insects such as lizards, crickets, and sometimes, members of their own family.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu - Emperor Scorpion) - Summoning jutsu - Emperor Scorpion

Rank: B
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb, the user will perfomr a series of hand seals the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon a Imperial scorpion. This scorpion has a hard exterior armour and c rank attacks and below wont affect its exterior, also the scorpian had giant pinsers that can cut through trees and have a sharp tail for stabbing. This scorpian is the size of a human

Note: The scorpian can submerge itself in rock for protection
Note: Can summon 2 off the imperial scorpians at once
Note: Scorpians are weak vs water

~ Declined ~

Kagutsuchi · May 13, 2010

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( Mujihi na ō no kyōretsu na hinan kōgeki ) ? Fulmination Attack of the Merciless King
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus an amount of their wind and fire chakra around their body, standing absolutely still for a period of three seconds to build up the requisite energy. Their eyes begin glowing reddish, and within the next four seconds they will release a sudden blast of explosive wind and fire to devastate a short range around their bodies, hot enough to turn the ground into lava. Anything caught in the explosion will be burnt and torn apart.
Note: The user has to immediately leave from their position to prevent being burnt by the lava.
Note: Can only be performed once a battle.
Note: User takes 30 damage from the heat of the explosion.
~Co-Creater Emperor.

~Declined~

-Mugen- · May 13, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This has nothing to do with the third hokages monkey summoning.Because monkeys and gorillas are diffrent animals.They just look alike.

Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku and his father Emperer of the gorillas - Gorusu
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Gorillas
Gorillas are large, quiet, gentle apes that live in Africa. Although gorillas are frequently portrayed as aggressive, dangerous killers, they are shy, peaceful vegetarians.Still they are one of the strongest animales in the world.

Chimpanzees
Chimpanzees are great apes but they are weaker than gorillas.They are closely related to humans. These intelligent primates live in a variety of environments in western and central Africa.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- kingu gorilla no Goruku ) - Summoning jutsu - King of the gorillas - Goruku

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will perfomr a series of hand seals,than the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon Goruku. Goruku has hard armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him, also Goruku has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.Goruku is a almost a full grown gorilla that is a bit bigger than a human.

Note: The king can use elements that the user has learnt.
Note: Can only be summened once per battle

Only for emperer
Hope this is good enough to be approved

If it isnt tell me what I have to change,edit

~ Declined ~

Nadare · May 13, 2010

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(Senjutsu:Seishitsu Karyou) - Sage Technique: Natural Chakra Overdose -

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a highly advanced Senjutsu. It requires some time for the user to gather Natural chakra around him. The effect works exactly the opposite of other Senjutsu. Instead of gathering chakra inside, the user concentrates, and gathers natural chakra around him, and then after a series of handseals releases it through the area in high amounts. Everyone within Mid Range will be petrified. The petrification lasts only for one turn though, as the natural chakra they absorbed is not massive enough to turn them into stone statues completely.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle*
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(Gendo Gigai:Osoi Gen'an) - Illusionist Arts: Slow Motion Corruption -

Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Once the user has come to short range with the opponent, he makes one handseal, and releases chakra from his mouth, which flows through the nose and ears of the opponent, directly in his brains. Unlike other Illusions, which work with glares, etc, this works with a direct transfer of chakra in the opponents brains.
This chakra then enters the opponents mind & reflex cells, and corrupts their DNK. The effect of this Illusion Art, is that the opponent brains transfer data to the body slower, or at least this is what the opponent thinks. As every part of the body depends on the brains, this jutsu puts the opponent in slow motion. This way, even when entering the EIG, the opponent can move at maximum speed of an S-Class ninja.
Although, the chakra transfered is very dense, and leaves the user inable to use any other genjutsu or non-elemental ninjutsu.
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(Suiton Ougi: Fuon) - Water Release Ultimate Technique: Turbulence -

Rank: S
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates some handseals, and then an invisible "aura" surrounds him for two turns. Any Water technique that will be directed towards the user during the time, will be redirected to the users sides. Explaining, the water jutsu of the opponent, coming towards the user, will split in two, and the user will go in between.
*Note: Can only be used once.*
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~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~

Gatsndshanks · May 13, 2010

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(Gekihen Ame) - Upheaval Rain

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This Ninjutsu uses water on the field to raise up in the form of droplets and into the clouds above, initially making it rain from the ground upwards. This allows the user to execute rain techniques without physically making it rain from clouds but instead using a water source already existent on the battlefield.

~ Approved ~

(Ame Genkotsu) - Rain Fist

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user fashions the bear handseal and concentrates their chakra throughout the rain. The rain around the target morphs into a large hand that crushes immediatly all in its path with a strong, blunt strike of its clenched fist. The user can then change the handseal before initial impact from a bear to the tiger which transforms the singular giant hand into multiple, smaller fists that can attack multiple enemies at a given time.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

-Mugen- · May 13, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

yashurik11 said:
This has nothing to do with the third hokages monkey summoning.Because monkeys and gorillas are diffrent animals.They just look alike.

Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku and his father Emperer of the gorillas - Gorusu
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Gorillas
Gorillas are large, quiet, gentle apes that live in Africa. Although gorillas are frequently portrayed as aggressive, dangerous killers, they are shy, peaceful vegetarians.Still they are one of the strongest animales in the world.

Chimpanzees
Chimpanzees are great apes but they are weaker than gorillas.They are closely related to humans. These intelligent primates live in a variety of environments in western and central Africa.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- kingu gorilla no Goruku ) - Summoning jutsu - King of the gorillas - Goruku

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will perfomr a series of hand seals,than the user will slam there hand to the ground and summon Goruku. Goruku has hard armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him, also Goruku has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.Goruku is a almost a full grown gorilla that is a bit bigger than a human.

Note: The king can use elements that the user has learnt.
Note: Can only be summened once per battle

Only for emperer
Hope this is good enough to be approved If it isnt tell me what I have to change,edit

~ Declined ~

Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Gorillas
Gorillas are large, quiet, gentle apes that live in Africa. Although gorillas are frequently portrayed as aggressive, dangerous killers, they are shy, peaceful vegetarians.Still they are one of the strongest animales in the world.

I edited

~ What exactly ? o>O Declined. ~

HiddenShadowNinja · May 13, 2010

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(Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: (-30 to user per turn) (See spoilers below for damage effects for each choice)
Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. The user is able to choose and gain a trait from one of three different snakes.

First, the user's muscles become able to move with the striking speed of a Death Adder which happens in 1/4 of a second. This allows the user to move with speed equivalent to the 4th gate.

Second, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)

Or third, the user gains the strength of an Anaconda, which can constrict with a total strength of 4000kg.(user gets +40 to taijutsu)

*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
*The user can only choose 1 trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
*After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
*The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

~ Declined. It's a nice concept, but it is OPed. Restrict the abilities, reduce their power and add damaging side effects. ~

Caliburn · May 13, 2010

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~ Approved, I edited bits. ~

Kaziname · May 13, 2010

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(Satetsu Bunkai)- Iron Sand Decomposition
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 25 (+10 per turn to keep jutsu on)
Damage: N/A
Description: With the help of magnetic chakra, the user sends the smallest particles of iron sand in the air. Then the user uses them for decomposition of all metal objects in the area.
* Note-can be used only once
* Note-decomposition process takes five moves (After two moves, objects lose their sharpness and are not usable in combat. After four moves, objects lose their strength and are not usable for the defense because they have become fragile. After five moves, objects are completely converted to iron sand)
* Note-can be only taught by Kaziname

(Jishaku Ninpou: Kinzoku kenshutsu-ki)- Magnetic Art: Metal Detector
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per turn to keep jutsu on)
Damage: N/A
Description: Users slowly emits magnetic chakra from his body, thus magnetizing metal around him. Once the metal is magnetized, the user constantly changes the magnetic poles in order to know the exact position magnetized metals.
* Note-user can use only one magnetic art jutsu per move while this jutsu is turned on, because changing of the magnetic poles requires great concentration
* Note-can only be taught by Kaziname

~ Both Declined. Badly explained. ~

Pain.. · May 14, 2010

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( Kuchyose: Mei Saido Koara ) Summoning: Dark Side Koala

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focus chakra on there hands and do the necessary handseal and perform the handseal of the summoning koara in the ground. Koara can perform Earth Style complete with out doing a simple handseals just focusing chakra Koara take time when is a B Rank or more to do the focus chakra but it could not take more the 2 minutes it could take about 3 minutes. Koara have a speacial abilities that when the Koara bite the opponent the opponent could go to sleep because of Koara mouth it have that special abilities. Koara can also run really fast and climb trees really fast.

NOTE: Can only be teach by the owner of the Summoning.
NOTE: Can be use 3 times per battle.

~ Declined. ~

Kagutsuchi · May 14, 2010

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Name: Chakra Armor
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User releases chakra and manipulates it to form a Barrier around its body like a layer of chakra on body. It reduces effects of damage since its normal chakra it doesn't have weakness or advantage over other elementals and reduces damage constantly. Its second use is that user can't be placed under genjutsu since the user is protected by chakra.
Notes:
1. Lasts 3 turns
2. Usable twice
3. Needs Great chakra mastery of Kage Rank.

~ Declined. This is overpowered. There are already elemental versions of this armour, and a pure chakra version is not only really hard to conceptualise, but also definitely overpowered, as I mentioned before. Please do not resubmit. ~

-Mugen- · May 14, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

yashurik11 said:
Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Gorillas
Gorillas are large, quiet, gentle apes that live in Africa. Although gorillas are frequently portrayed as aggressive, dangerous killers, they are shy, peaceful vegetarians.Still they are one of the strongest animales in the world.

I edited

~ What exactly ? o>O Declined. ~

Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

N/A only gorillas

What I edited:
1.Last time I had 2 bosses.I changed it to 1
2.I deleted the chimpanzes in the '' other summonings tied to the contract''
3.In the '' other summonings tied to the contract'' I said that you can summon only gorillas.
So what else do I need to do to make this accepteble

~ Basically, this is all well and good, but I want you to get some summonings approved before you start making this contract. Your "Goruku" for instance, it was evident you copied Pervy Sage's Scorpion post and merely edited it to suit a gorilla, without even changing it properly. How in the world is a gorilla covered in hard armour? Plus even normal gorillas are bigger than humans, and this is about the same size ? ~

-Mugen- · May 14, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

yashurik11 said:
Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

N/A only gorillas

What I edited:
1.Last time I had 2 bosses.I changed it to 1
2.I deleted the chimpanzes in the '' other summonings tied to the contract''
3.In the '' other summonings tied to the contract'' I said that you can summon only gorillas.
So what else do I need to do to make this accepteble

~ Basically, this is all well and good, but I want you to get some summonings approved before you start making this contract. Your "Goruku" for instance, it was evident you copied Pervy Sage's Scorpion post and merely edited it to suit a gorilla, without even changing it properly. How in the world is a gorilla covered in hard armour? Plus even normal gorillas are bigger than humans, and this is about the same size ? ~

Oh so thats what you wanted.Okey.And when I said hard armour I meant he has armour around his body(metel armour not ones like animals have)Okey than here:
Summoning Animal:Gorillas
Scroll Owner:I am
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

N/A only gorillas

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note: Gorusu can use elements that the user has learnt.
Note: Can only be summoned twice per battle

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will perfomr a series of hand seals and summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use fire and earth jutsus up to A-rank
Note: Can only be summened twice per battle

Well this is ll I can think of for now

Hope its good enough

~ I'm telling you right now, that "can use element upto users rank" won't be approved at all. Abilities like "can use Fire upto A" will be approved if you cn give a proper background to the animal, and a very good and long explanation. ~

Eddy-kun.. · May 14, 2010

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Emp check only!

(Doton: Naiya Engo) - Earth Realease: Diamond Staff
Type:Offense|Defense
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80 (User take - 10 damage)
Description:The user will slam his hands on the earth floor and by using large amounts of his earth chakra to identify the minerals underground, also manipulates the common minerals in the ground and changes their composition (diamonds are made mainly of carbon atoms), to make them become pure diamond.Then superheat it with his fire chakra and finally compresses it to form diamonds staff which the user can wielded with ease in battle.
-Can only be used once per battle since a diamond is a rare mineral.
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
-Cannot use earth jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends.
-User take - 10 damage due to the exhausted of chakra for performing the jutsu.

~ Diamond is a Custom Element. Declined. ~

(Ninjutsu|Lighting):One Thousand Birds Spiraling Sphere: |Rasendori|
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50 (+ 10 combing it with lighting chakra)
Damage Points:90 (Death to the opponent if contact is made within short range) (-10 to user hand after use of the jutsu)
Description:This jutsu takes a lot of concentration and chakra, applying the same method's as if using rasengan and chidori the user must have extremely good chakra control.The user then take the shape transformation of his chakra to the "highest possible point" creating (rasengan) and then combing it with lighting chakra (chidori) creating "Rasendori." Rasendori is purple-ish, black-ish sphere with a huge explodes power, it can easily hollow out an entire mountain.This jutsu is incredibly deadly when performed at a close range both user and opponent take larger amount of damage if use in close range due to the explodes.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
-Cannot use Lighting jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends.
-User take -10 damage to hand after use of the jutsu.

~ Declined. No Rasengan or Chidori variants or combinations will be Approved. ~

I was thinking, maybe, just maybe, if they were combined, and used as one jutsu, it would look similar to the 'Darkness Orb' that formed when Naruto and Sasuke clashed in the Valley of Ends (or whatever it's called where they fought), where they kind of combined and made that purple-ish, black-ish sphere. Chidori is one of the Elemental Jutsu (Lighting).Rasengan is a non-element jutsu that is why they should be able to fuse I think.

Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Terra(Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Terra)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons Terra the monkey warrior from a small scroll.Terra's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Terr,a has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling Terra has the ability to use elemental attacks up to A rank. Although Terra dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
-Can only be summoned twice
-Can only be used by Hiruzen Sarutobi, The Third Hokage

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~ Declined. Reduce the element usage to a maximum of two, but if so, give it a hell of a lot of side effects. ~

Doton|Fuuton|Katon|: Za Kigen Nami Yuumeikai Akunochimata: (The Rise Of Hades Underworld)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra: 50 (+10 due to the use of fire chakra)
Damage: 90 (+10 if opponent is underground) (-10 to user)
Description: The user use his earth manipulation, to opened thousands of small pores on the ground allowing air to circulate through it. The user then uses his fire chakra to make the fire run through those pores, igniting in flames an entire underground area causing a huge exploding underground causing lava itself to explodes from underground due to the intense flame heats. Any opponent hidden underground is burned alive also the lava rise high within the sky due to the explodes also causing lava to rain down onto the battlefield. So both user and opponent must protect there self from this jutus.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.
-Cannot use Earth - Fire - Wind jutsus one turn before use or 2 turns after it ends.
-User take -10 damage to after use of the jutsu.

~ Hmm....Nice. Approved. ~

Passion · May 14, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Teh-Tobz said:
( Taijutsu: Doragon Tonbogaeri ) - Hand to hand combat: Dragon Somersault

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 55
Description: User encases own feet with chakra and literally sprints with huge speed at opponent and jumps in air when opponent is nearby. When the user has jumped user will land on the opponent's shoulders while flexing own muscles on feet and perform spinning somersault backwards, landing hit on opponent's chin that's powerful enough to break opponent's jaws. The downside of this technique is that user will lose 1/2 speed on running and any movement done with feet for 3 turns.
Note:
- Can be only used once

~ Approved ~

( Taijutsu: Kakyaku no akurobatto ) - Hand to hand combat: Legs of Acrobat

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per turn )
Damage points: 30 when ends ( + 15 to leg taijutsu )
Description: User will encase own legs with chakra by controlling chakra flow and taking away most of the chakra that circulates into hands, allowing the user to move with the speed of 3rd gate and leg taijutsu is boosted by + 15 damage. Downside of this technique is that user's hand taijutsu loses 2/3 of its damage and the handseal making speed will lose 1/2 of the speed it used to be.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Lasts four turns
- Causes harline fracture in legs when it ends, preventing movement and giving continuous pain
- Costs - 20 chakra per turn.

~ Approved ~

( Kenjutsu: Hontō no kenpō ) - Sword technique: True swordsmanship

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User focuses chakra on brain, feet and hands causing the user to be able of fighting with swords and weapons by wielding them with legs while moving with hands. This gives user the ability of landing taijutsu leg combos with legs while fighting with swords and weapons.
Note:
- Can be used once
- It stays with the user for whole fight since this jutsu is just enchanting abilities of feet ( excluding speed )

~Declined~ explain this better please
( Kuchiyose: Hane no enzeru ) - Summoning jutsu: Wing of Angel

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 20 when used )
Description: User will make Rat handseal while synchorizing chakra with own blackbird summoning while being in contact with it, devouring it inside of user's body and growing one black angel wing that can be used to fly.
Note:
- Can be used only once and it lasts for whole fight
- No genjutsu or Summonings can be used while wing is in play

~Declined~

HiddenShadowNinja · May 14, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: (-30 to user per turn no matter which choice) (See spoilers below for damage effects for each choice)
Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. The user is able to choose and gain a trait from one of three different snakes.

First, the user's muscles become able to move with the striking speed of a Death Adder which happens in 1/4 of a second. This allows the user to move with speed equivalent to the 4th gate. However, once the effects of this jutsu wear off, the users speed will decrease for 2 turns by 2 ranks below what they are now (To S-class rank speed for Kage, etc) due to exhaustion.

Second, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)

Or third, the user gains the strength of an Anaconda, which can constrict with a total strength of 4000kg.(user gets +40 to taijutsu) Once the effects of this jutsu wear off the users taijutsu be decreased by 20 because of exhaustion for 2 turns.

*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
*The user can only choose 1 trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
*After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
*The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

(Okay, I added restrictions for the first and third ones (in the spoilers). The second, I don't think is that OP so I left it as it was. If you think there needs to be any more restrictions just let me know, or you can add them in if you want. And this is mainly to try and combat all those Raikage bios lately. Which the armor gives +60 to taijutsu, +40 to lightning, 4th gate speed, and lasts 4 turns...so if this is declined for being OP...than the armor needs to be seriously resubmitted and less powerful lol xd.)
~Declined~ I see no problem with this, except for the choosing armor abilities. why not instead of having the armor have three different abilities, why don't you create three different armors with the different abilities since that would be more in tune with what we would see in naruto

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