[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[-Ventus-]

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(Ninjutsu:Futter Wacked)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: none
Damage Points: none
Description: An ancient dance that makes the users moral and flexibility increase.It keeps the user relax through out the battle.Futter Wacked also keeps the opponent in awe because of its awsome dance skill.
~Only be taught by Shinn~
~Must use before battle~

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~ O_O No. ~

 

[mangekyou sharingan]

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(fuutonokami gyakujou)-wind release:wolf frenzy
type:attack
rank:A
range:short-long
chakra cost:30
damage point:60
description:the user creates 5 wolfs made of air that will do what the user tells them to,is much like the shadow clone except that the wolfs can find the opponent by using his nose.The wolf can explode too,creating a small whirlwind.
Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Two Times A Battle
Note:Can only be used by Mangekyou sharingan or any people taught this jutsu by him.

~ Too powerful for A rank ~

 

[Geezus]

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(Raiton: Oodama Raikiri)- Lightning Release: Great Lightning Blade
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-10 to user)
Description: As the name implies, it is the larger and stronger version of the Raikiri, or the Lightning Blade. The user concentrates even more amounts of lightning chakra into the Raikiri. The amount is so great the user is able to pierce the target from a distance.
(No lightning next turn)

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Typhon]

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White Secret Technique: Whipping Worms
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After summoning the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu the puppetteer controls the 10th puppet causing it to bow its head to the ground. Whip-like wires extend from the three holes on its head and dig into the earth. The whips burrow through the earth and come up at the spot of the puppeteer's choosing. These whips can then be used to strike the opponent with devastating lashes capable of cutting through limbs, or it can be used to grab onto an opponent's limbs trapping them in place.
~ Must be a puppet user.
~ Must have the ability to use the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
~ The 10th puppet is immobile during this move.
~ Only usable three times per match.

~ Japanese names ? ~

White Secret Technique: Three Buddhist Treasures Vacuum Destruction
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 50
Description: After summoning the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu the user manipulates puppets #4, #6 and #8 to form a three man pyramid. Puppet #4 activates the technique which creates a powerful vacuum that pulls everything in front of it through the small opening between the three, destroying them.
~ Can only be used with the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
~ The vacuum is prone to being overloaded by large amounts of things.
~ When used it can last until the user's turn is finished.
(This is actually a cannon jutsu, but it wasn't on the official list.)

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White Secret Technique: Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description:This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula (封印式, fūin-shiki) drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the tenketsu of the person caught in the middle. Signifying this is the stylized kanji for "close," or "shut" (閉, hei) drawn in the middle of the sealing formula. This technique uses a lion-headed kannon. This ninja tool is used by Chiyo as a means for using the Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar. It is kept inside one of the puppets from the Puppet Collection of Chikamatsu. It starts out as a small ball that can be held in one's hand, but when thrown grows out into a man-sized lion's head with numerous large fangs and its mouth wide open. If aimed correctly, the tool will pin the target against a wall with its mouth, making them unable to move.
~ Only usable once per match.
~ Must be using the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
(This is also a cannon ability that was not on the jutsu list.)

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~ For the last time, this is the custom jutsu submission, not canon jutsu submission. Talk to Kaito. ~

(Shiro Higi: Kakuhan wa-mu) White Secret Technique: Whipping Worms
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After summoning the ten puppet collection of Chikamatsu the puppetteer controls the 10th puppet causing it to bow its head to the ground. Whip-like wires extend from the five holes on its head and dig into the earth. The whips burrow through the earth and come up at the spot of the puppeteer's choosing. These whips can then be used to strike the opponent with devastating lashes capable of cutting through limbs, or it can be used to grab onto an opponent's limbs trapping them in place. Each time the whips come out of the ground is counted as one "usage" of this technique.
~ Must be a puppet user.
~ Must have the ability to use the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
~ The 10th puppet is immobile during this move.
~ Only usable three times per match.
~ Maximum range of the whips is six meters from position of puppet.

~ This is a canon move. Last warning. Next time infracted and banned from CJ thread. ~

(Shiro Higi: Chakra-ken choppa) White Secret Technique: Chakra Blade Chopper
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This attack is used after summoning the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu. The user manipulates puppets #5 and #9 in a coordinated assault to quickly attack at a long distance. Puppet #5 opens its face revealing 4 blades of pure chakra. These blades then rotate quickly. As this is happening puppet #9 extends its arm using a chain link. This arm then grabs onto puppet #5's hand and locks on. From this puppet #5 can be whipped around very quickly leading with its 4 spinning chakra blades, cutting through almost anything in its path.
~ Can only be used with the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu.
~ Can only be used three times per battle.
~ The destruction of either puppet will leave the other one vulnerable.

~ This is a canon move. Last warning. ~

(Shiro Higi: Oujou-ori ) White Secret Technique: Death Cage
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 50
Description: This attack is used after summoning the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu. The user manipulates puppet #2 causing its arms to expand into an elaborate cage. After trapping the opponent in the cage puppet #2 fires several bombs from its mouth at the target. The bombs are powerful, but concentrated. This ensure that they can deal significant damage to the opponent without harming the cage formed by the puppet's arms.
~ Can only be used twice per battle.
~ Up to four bombs can be fired per use.
~ Loss of arms make this jutsu impossible.

~ This is a canon move. Last warning. ~

(Shiro Higi: Puchi-jishin) White Secret Technique: Mini-quake
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: This attack is used after summoning the 10 puppet collection of Chikamatsu. The user manipulates puppet #1. #1 is characterized by large fists and an incredible striking power. In this jutsu the user manipulates the puppet to raise its fists into the air and slam down on the ground. This causes a crack to form in the earth which travels underneath the opponent. The crack itself is harmless and does no damage, but the tremor from the crack momentarily throws the opponent off balance.
~ Can only be used twice per match.
~ Opponent is thrown off balance for the duration of this technique, and the next one used.

~ Declined. Puppets aren't that strong. ~

 

[Passion]

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( Mokuton: Fūin Akuma bai mon ) - Wood release: Sealed Demon dual gate

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Type: Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( - 15 to user )
Description: User will make Snake → Dragon → Rooster → Boar handseals and raise Gates of special wood before him. The wood gate is sealed shut by multiple hard wooden and it has statues on each side of the gate that take form of Madara and Hashirama senju and these statues connected to each other by hands from behind the the gate. Symbol of fire is carved in the middle of this gate and the gate is able to withstand attack at the power of Menacing ball. The jutsu can be broke by strong punch combined with advanced Doton jutsu like Earth spear of Kakuzu's.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No wood for two turns afterwards
- The gate last for one turn.
- User is strained so much that he begins panting with exhaustion, drastically lowering his physical abilities like speed, strength, agility etc.
- Any Taijutsu used after this will have rank reduced by two.

( Genjutsu: Suna taifū ) - Genjutsu: Sand Storm

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Tiger handseal and release chakra on surroundings while glaring into opponent's eyes making opponent think that strong sandstorm is ravaging. The sandstorm causes opponent's vision to be blurred and the opponent will squint own eyes preventing the opponent from targetting attacks accuratelniway.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Dojutsu isn't affected by this technique
- No genjutsu for rest of the battle

~ Both Approved, I edited them. ~

( Mokuton: Mokuzai niwa kesseki henge ) - Wood release: Wood to stone transform

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Snake → Rat → Boar → Bird → Snake and focus on the chakra inside of the wood. After it user will remove water based chakra from wood transforming anything that's in contact with wood into stone along with wood. If opponent is in contact with wood while user uses this jutsu it susbends opponent from moving or taking action for one turn.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- If someone is turned into stone it will take one turn for this move to revert
- No Mokuton for one turn afterwards

~ Declined, do not resubmit anything like this ~

( Mokuton: Ki Kawarimi ) - Wood release: Tree replacement

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: User focuses earth and water based chakra all over body and perform Snake handseal turning into pure energy that cannot be attacked or attack, leaving wooden shell or statue of own body behind. After this the user will have to find some wood or a tree of somekind and fuse inside of it. When the fusing is complete the user will sprout of it as a new branch with solid and normal body that's able to attack and be attacked.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No replacements for whole battle after usage

~ No custom replacements. ~

( Raiton: Dendō-no kō ) - Lightning release: Electric Armor

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Type: Supplementary - Defence
Rank: B/A/S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25/30/40
Damage points: N/A ( - 10/20/30 to user )
Description: User will make Dog handseal and absorb incoming lightning attack turning it into pure energy that generates armor around the user and will also give the speed of 3rd gate ( Speed of gate is only achieved when S - Ranked lightning is absorbed ). When the armor is activated user will lose from - 10 to 30 health depending on the rank of incoming attack. Even though the lightning gives boost of speed user can't perform any other than lightning element based attacks or taijutsu.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Damages user - 10/20/30 depending on the rank of incoming attack
- Cannot absorb Kirin
- No lightning or taijutsu is allowed for whole battle when this mode ends
- Mode lasts two turns

~ Declined, somewhat like existing jutsu ~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Fuuton : Kaze Rendan) Wind Release : Wind Barrage

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Manipulates The Wind Around The Opponent And Converts It Into Small Projectiles And Directs The Wind Projectiles Towards The Opponent. The Projectiles Keep Slashing And Stabbing The Opponent Continiously, Until The User Cancels Them Or The Opponent Destroys Them Or Escapes Them. The Projectiles Form Fast And Do Not Require Any Handsigns.
- Once Per Battle
- No Fuuton The Turn This Jutsu Is Used

~ Declined. Please do not capitalise the first letter of every word as it makes for very hard reading. ~

 

[Ben-sama]

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T_T But I Like Capitalizing Every Letter It's Difficult Not To O_O

(Asaito Etoku) Thread Grasp

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Rank : S
Type : Supplementary/Offensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : Kakuzu manipulates his threads to wrap around the opponent's arms and legs and parts in his stomach and chest to completely restrain the opponent from movement. The user can then easily lift up the opponent using the threads and put him down etc. Meaning that the opponent will be completely in the mercy of the user.
- Twice per battle
- No ninjutsu during the same turn.

~ Declined, doesn't need to be a jutsu ~

(Asaito Hitoshirezu Ken) Thread Hidden Blade

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : Kakuzu manipulates his threads to shape a small knife under his wrist that can barely be seen, the threads stick good together making the blade as hard as steel, instead of hitting the opponent with his fist kakuzu can lift his fist up revealing the blade and stab it into the opponent

~ Doesn't deserve to be A rank ~

 

[Alucard]

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Just so you know what is the Gift of the Hermit Group, it's nothing special, just a type of chakra used on the Fire Temple.

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will focus on his Gift of the Hermit Group chakra and for a matter of seconds, he will enter on a state of meditation. With this, the user's chakra perception is amplified multiple times, so that he can carefully sense chakra to the point of knowing how much chakra one is releasing.
*User doesn't know what is the nature of the chakra (i.e. Fire Jutsu)
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Restrict the whole thing somehow, else you're just gaining the abilities of a sensor ~

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus on his Gift of the Hermit Group chakra bringing up the ideals of the Fire Temple. After that, the user will release pressurized chakra through all of his body and the ground around him will start to break. This technique will grant him speed comparable to the second version of a tailed beast transformation. With this jutsu, the user's jutsus which require the Gift of the Hermit Group type of chakra are increased by +15 damage.
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable once per battle
*Lasts 4 turns
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Reduce the speed drastically, and remove the extra power up. If you want the power up, add restrictions that forbid use of any other thing except Fire Temple Techniques. ~

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will focus a great amount of his Gift of the Hermit special kind of chakra while doing a row of hand seals. After that he will clap his hands. A huge pack of dogs made of spiritual energy will appear on the field. The user will send them to attack the opponent and once near him, the user can make the dogs to explode. Each dog does an enormous exp
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable once per battle
*If on Shunkō Mode, the turns remaining will decrease by one
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ What, no restrictions ? And this is Forbidden, so it had better be good, self-damaging ones like burning your hands etc. ~

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will focus on his Gift of the Hermit Group chakra and for a matter of seconds, he will enter on a state of meditation. With this, the user's chakra perception is amplified multiple times, so that he can carefully sense chakra to the point of knowing how much chakra one is releasing.
*User doesn't know what is the nature of the chakra (i.e. Fire Jutsu)
*User hearing is drasticaly decreased to the point of being only capable of hearing explosions
*User cannot move from position else this technique is cancelled.
*Can only be activated a maximum of four times in a battle
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Approved, I added bits ~

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus on his Gift of the Hermit Group chakra bringing up the ideals of the Fire Temple. After that, the user will release pressurized chakra through all of his body and the ground around him will start to break. This technique will grant him great reaction time, equivalent to a proficient Taijutsu master. With this jutsu, the user's jutsus which require the Gift of the Hermit Group type of chakra are increased by +15 damage.
*While on this mode, user can't use elemental techniques or Genjutsu
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable once per battle
*Lasts 4 turns
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90 (10 to user)
Description: The user will focus a great amount of his Gift of the Hermit special kind of chakra while doing a row of hand seals. After that he will clap his hands. A huge pack of dogs made of spiritual energy will appear on the field. Being made of spiritual energy, these dogs are intangible. The user will send them to attack the opponent and once near him, the user can make the dogs to explode. Each dog does an enormous explosion. This jutsu damages the user because it burns his hands, making even smoke appear coming out of them so much that handseals slow down to only quarter his original speed, and Taijutsu cannot be used.
*User must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable once per battle
*If on Shunkō Mode, the turns remaining will decrease by one
*Usable only on Alucard Nosferatu Bio

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

 

[mangekyou sharingan]

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(fuutonokami gyakujou)-wind release:wolf frenzy
type:attack
rank:S
range:short-long
chakra cost:30
damage point:60
description:the user creates 5 wolfs made of air that will do what the user tells them to,is much like the shadow clone except that the wolfs can find the opponent by using his nose.The wolf can explode too,creating a small whirlwind.
Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Two Times A Battle
Note:Can only be used by Mangekyou sharingan or any people taught this jutsu by him.

~ Declined, it cannot be like a shadow clone O_O ~

 

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

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Name: (Fuuton: Arashi gekido) Wind style: Raging Tempest

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Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:mid-long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:70
Description: The user will make the handseals and start to gather wind chakra on the air , once there is enough chakra to make a strong wind current, the user will now focus lightning chakra and send it towards the air making the current have lightning/wind attributes.The user can then control the tempest and direct it towards the opponent.
Note:The user must have both wind and lightning element at S-rank to perform this jutsu
Note:Only Konoha?s Yellow Flash can use/teach this jutsu
Note:Only usable once per battle
Note:After this jutsu, the user cant use neither wind/lightning jutsus for 2 turns

Name: (Fuuton:senpuu yoroi) Wind Style:Whirlwind Armor

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Type:Supplementary/defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:N/A
Description: The user will form a protective barrier around his/her body made out of pure wind chakra, this armor gives him the abbility to absorb incoming wind attacks up to A-rank.During this state, the user is extremely weak against fire attacks.
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: only Konoha?s Yellow Flash can use this jutsu

Name: (Fuuton:chikuden) Wind Style:Flight

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Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:N/A
Chakra cost:30
Damage points:N/A
Description:The user will gather wind chakra around his body and will start to "fly" in the air with the help of wind currents that will be pushing him.This jutsu can be used to move faster or to evade an attack.
Note: only Konoha?s Yelllow Flash can use/teach this jutsu.
Note: The user can only use Wind jutsu while on the air.

Name: (Katon:su-pa shinsei) Fire style:Super Nova

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Rank:Forbidden
Range:Long
Chakra cost:60
Damage points:90
Description:The user will channel all his fire chakra he has and spread it around his/her body, he/she will then explote in such way that a mushroom cloud will be formed and the explosion will reach long distances,once this is done, the user dies.
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: after this jutsu the user cant do any more fire jutus for the rest of the fight
Note: only Konoha?s Yelllow Flash can use/teach this jutsu.

Name: (Kage bokkusu):Shadow box

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Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Medium
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:70
Description:The user will use the shadows around him and in the surroundings to make a prison that will trap the opponent.Once the opponent has been trapped inside, the user cannot use any otehr jutsu untill the shadow prison is broken, wich can only be done from the outside or with the absence of the shadows.The shadow prison may be compressed and the user can even cover air holes.
Note: can only be done twice per battle
Note: this jutsu can easily be broken from the outside by hitting the user or the prison itself freeing the prisoner.
Note: only Konoha?s Yelllow Flash can use/teach this jutsu and only to those within the Nara Clan
Note:after this jutsu, the user must wait two turns till he can use any shadow jutus.

~ All Declined, do not resubmit anything ~

 

[Pain..]

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( Suiton: Gyouko Aisu ) Water style: Freezing ice

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Range: Short-Long
Description: The user put his hands on his or her mouth and throw water from his mouth the water is cold and the user turn into a freezing ice.

( Suiton: Enkai Aisu ) Water style: Ocean of ice

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Range: Long
Description: The user throw water from his or her mouth and freezing the water that he or hers throw from the moth the user most be under the ocean and this jutsu can easily kill somebody.

Note: The user most be under water to kill him or her
Note: Only can be teach by me

~ Do you have an Ice bio ? O_O ~

 

[Faust]

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(Fuuton: Kaze Kyodan)-Wind Style: Wind Missles

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu sends highly long ranged, fast-paced wind missiles at the target. The user will send out five bursts of wind highly concentrated to a point. These are extremely sharp, fast paced, piercing blasts capable of piecing various defences, including thick stone or wood [ up to A rank ] and even if they are dodged or blocked the shock wave they create will throw a weak [ Chuunin and below ] opponent off balance. They are extremely hard to avoid because of their speed, although the speed is about one tenth of the First Gate.
*Note: Usable twice per battle.
*Note: Up to five missiles may be created per use. The missiles travel only in a straight line.
*Note: Due to the large amount of chakra required for this technique, it cannot be used if any clones of the user are present. Furthermore, the user can also definitely not use clone techniques or Genjutsu for the next two turns.
*Note: If the wind is blocked, there might be cases that the opponent is thrown off balance cause of the great wind blast, if they are Chuunin and below.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~ Approved, I edited lots of it. ~

(Suiton: Mizu Oni Kuike)-Water Style: Water Demon's Appetite

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A jutsu which utilizing the water around the opponent for it to work. Below the opponent, a head made of water emerges and tries to swallow up the opponent, having sharp dagger like teeth. If the initial chomp misses the opponent, a tongue will emerge to wrap around the opponent to try and pull them back under for a second attempt.
*Note: Must be performed when both user and opponent are on water.
*Note: Twenty eight handseals are needed to perform this, meaning any ninja will take three seconds to finish the handseals.
*Note: Once the tongue drags the opponent underwater, it grabs him and keeps him there until he escapes or drowns [ no biting if the tongue catches him ]
*Note: Usable only three times in battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~ Approved, I edited parts ~

 

[mangekyou sharingan]

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(sui tsuba)-acid saliva
type:attack
rank:S
range:short-med
chakra cost:30
damage point:60
description:the user spits a saliva that can melt almost everything that touches.
Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Two Times A Battle
Note:Can only be used by Mangekyou sharingan or any people taught this jutsu by him.

~ Declined. Acid/Poison needs Medschool teaching ~

(raiton:raiton suto-mu)-lightning release:lightning hurracane
type:attack
rank:s
range:short-large
chakra cost:30
damage points:60
description:the user creates a lightning hurracan that is able to complete wipe out a mountain.the hurrican will come down from the sky
Note:The User Can Only Use This Jutsu One Times Per Battle
Note:The User Can't Use Lightning Next Turn
Note:Can only be used by Mangekyou sharingan or any people taught this jutsu by him.

~ Declined. ~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Asaito Kei) Thread Whip

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short / Mid
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : Kakuzu concentrates his threads to form a long and powerful whip that can easily crush the opponent's bones With one swipe.
- Whip lasts for 3 turns.
- Twice Per Battle.

(Asaito Risuto Tate) Thread Wrist Shield

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Rank : A
Type : Deffensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : Kakuzu uses his threads to form a shield on his wrist. The threads stick quite close to each other making the shield as hard as steel but it hasn't got any large weight.
- Shield hasn't got a limit until it disperses, meaning it can last for an entire battle.
- Once per battle.

~ Both Approved ~

(Asaito Dainyuu) Thread Substitution

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Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage Points : N/A
Description : Kakuzu uses his threads to completely cover his body from inside and outside. that avoids kakuzu from getting wounds due to a direct hit, once gotten hit kakuzu instantly regains his normal form.
- Once per battle.

~ Declined ~

 

[ZetsuPOD]

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(Suiton:Bāsuto Kiba)- Water Release: Bursting Fang
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Focusing water through their hands, The user will create a current then slamming both hands down to the ground water will rise up around the opponent falling down and at that point the water will be able to burst into a guiser way, that will cut but also rise the opponent up, hurting them.
Must be taught by ZetsuPOD
This is a difficult jutsu, so must know water element well enough to use it

~ Utterly un-understandable ~

 

[Pain..]

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( Suiton: Inu Mizu ) Water style: Dog of water

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Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 30
Description: The user focus water chakra and do a dog of water and she or her can easily be knock down if the dog hit him.

~ Declined. Be original. ~

 

[Faust]

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(Suiton: Gachan Hashira no Ten)-Water Style: Crashing Pillar of Heaven

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user begins to gather a wide amount of moisture from the air. Within the air, more and more water comes together being materialized by the users chakra. Coming together, it makes this large pillar of water within the sky, going unnoticed by the opponent. The user then waits for the opportune moment, and sends the pillar crashing down in order to smash the opponent in an incredible amount of force.
*Note: This jutsu requires to hold only one hand seal to gather the moisture.
*Note: Can only be used 3 times in battle.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~Please restrict or change something, to get this approved, thanks.

~ Declined. Unless you're Tobirama Senju, you just can't do this sort of stuff.~

(Doton: Koudo Ame)-Earth Style: Earth Rain

Spoiler

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After the necessary hand seals, the user will infuse a large amount of earth with chakra then uplift it, raising it into the sky. Then form the material into a large amount of earth spikes. These will be sent crashing down upon the target covering a large area, cutting and piercing the target with large sharpened rocks. These projectiles are infused with chakra adding to their strength and lethality, making them hard as steel.
*Note: Can only be used two times in battle.
*Note: The user can't perform Earth Style next turn after using this jutsu.
*Note: Takes ten seconds to prepare the attack.
*Note: Faust can only teach this.

~Please restrict or change something, to get this approved, thanks.

~ Approved. ~

 

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kenjutsu: Kitsune no Buyou) - Sword Style: Dance of the Foxes -

Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user grabs two swords with one hand, and holds a handseal with the other hand constantly (all the time). He suddenly spins around (roulette), and throws one sword towards the enemy. As the sword is about to hit the enemy, the user appears behind the enemy, and uses the second sword to make a diagonal slash. The enemy crouches out of pain, and therefore the sword only brushes his cheek, so the user behind him catches the sword, still with one hand. He catches it while already doing a roulette (again), now throwing the sword from behind, and then doing the same as before, appearing now in front of the enemy, and doing another slash. The user catches the sword again, and continues doing the same movements, but from different sides. This is all done very quickly. The movements and reactions of the user are increased, as he molds chakra constantly (remember whats the other hand doing - handseal). He does this movement a lot of times, and he moves so fast that it actually looks as a whirlwind would sorround the enemy.
*Note: Can only be used twice.*
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~ The user appears behind the opponent. O_O How ? Are you Madara or sthg ? ~

(Doton: Shikyo Taiiki) - Earth Style: Death Zone -

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 60 (as the constant keep of waves is exhausting)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes the needed handseals, and then stomps on the ground (it must be earth). The user's chakra is from now on sent in a radial way through the whole area constantly, and works as a radar to the user (the user must be on the ground). This way, the user constantly knows where the enemy is, if the enemy is on the ground (if the enemy is airborn, the user cannot sense him, as the radar "waves" only work on ground). When (if) the enemy approaches, or projectiles fly towards the user, many spikes instantly raise from the ground, and stab the enemy. More than that, a shield (wall) raises out of the ground behind the spikes. This way, any projectiles are stopped, and any object approaching is stabbed.
*Note: Can only be used once*
*Note: This "radar" or Death Zone lasts for 4 turns.*
*Note: Cannot use Earth Element for 2 turns.*
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~ Declined. Mash of existing jutsu. No resubmit ~

(Raiton: Onritsu Teiryuu) - Lightning Style: Rhythm Stop -

Rank: Forbbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user makes a boar handseal, and needs 2 seconds to gather lightning chakra in his fist. He then has to come to short range with the opponent, and in the right time, the user hits the enemy in the chest with this fist. On the moment of the impact, the user releases lightning chakra towards the heart of the enemy, and this shock disrupts the rhythm of the heart. The heart gets instantly bothered, and stops beating meaning the death of the enemy.
More than that, if the enemy is not a doujutsu-user he cannot deflect this without a jutsu. As this fist is coming towards the chest of the enemy very fast, the user uses the same lightning chakra, to create sparkles around the fist, making it look like chidori, but using the chakra to gain a speed-boost. This it's almost impossible to deflect. The ammount of the lightning chakra is very high, and it enables to easily disrupt the beat of the heart, as it works as an electro shock. This comes from real life, and is scientifically proved that it's possible.
*Note: Can only be used once*

~ Declined. Did you seriously think this has even a vague chance of being approved ? No resubmit. ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user does a row of hand seals and forms a white shining box made of the Gift of the Hermit group special chakra around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick
*Usable twice per battle
*Must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable only with Alucard Nosferatu bio

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user does a row of hand seals and forms a white shining layer made of the Gift of the Hermit group special chakra around the target, paralizing and making him unable to move.
*Usable twice per battle
*Must wait one turn before using it again
*Must have mastered Gift of the Hermit Group
*Usable only with Alucard Nosferatu bio

~ Declined. No Kidou variants will be approved. O_O ~

 

[~Kensei-kun~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Bakusagia
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Bakusagia is a sword made of the mind and soul of the creater with a white handle and a creative design on the dull side of the blade.This sword has the ability to absorb chakra of the user and of enemys and combind them into one then releasing it in one strikes with divestating power. It also does the same with element chakra combining them together even elements of weakness to each other making them stronger and harder defend.

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note:can only be weilded by KenseiTachikage

~ Declined. Sorry Sesshoumaru, but this will never be approved. ~