[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Typhon]

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Anya Sarukouhi) Summoning Technique: Anya, the Monkey Queen
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage: N/A
Description: Performing the handseals, the user bites his finger and puts his blood on a surface and summons Anya. Anya is slightly smaller than Enma but looks quite similar. She wears a konoha headband and the same black jumpsuit that is worn by Enma and Hiruzen Sarutobi. Her skin color is a slightly lighter brown than Enma's and her hair color is black. She appears to be somewhat younger in age than Enma. Anya has the ability to use wind ranked jutsu up to A-rank as well as transform into an adamantine bow. Like the Adamantine staff this bow can self replicate and move and shoot on its own, however it cannot change its size. This bow shoots arrows that consist of wind chakra and travel very quickly.
*Note- This summon can only be used by a member of Konoha who has signed a contract with monkeys.
*Note- This jutsu may only be used once a battle and lasts 4 turns.

-Approved-


(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hihi Patoro-ru) Summoning Technique: Baboon Patrol
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: Performing the handseals, the user bites his finger and puts his blood on a surface and summons 7 human-sized baboons. Each baboon wears a Konoha headband on their forehead. These baboons move extremely quickly with great agility. They also have increased physical strength. A ninja with normal vision would have a hard time reading their movements, especially if they attacked together. They have no elemental abilities nor do the have the capacity to use any jutsu. They are strictly taijutsu fighters.
*Note- This summon can only be used by a member of Konoha who has signed a contract with monkeys.
*Note- This jutsu may only be used once a battle and lasts 4 turns.

~Pending: Wrong chakra info for that number of animals and their speed. Make it an A rank plz-

 

[Passion]

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Rag has lifted the Bann of mines on custom thread and said that I should resubmit these ( If you don't believe go check our VMS/convo ).


Summoning Animal: Hyena
Scroll Owner: Myartisablast
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Majestic King Hyenas

~Approved~

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( Kuchiyose: Soudai Ouja Haienas ) Summoning: Majestic King Hyenas
Rank: S
Type: Summoning - Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 5 to user when summoned )
Description: User bites thumb and wipes blood on Hyena tattoo on arm summoning Two King Hyenas. The Hyena Kings weight about 200 LBS and Have big claws. First Hyena King can use B - Rank water while other can use A - Rank Wind.
Note:
- Must have signed contract for Hyena summoning
- Can only be taught by myartisablast
- First uses B - Rank Water
- Second uses A - Rank Wind
- Can be summoned once in battle
- Costs five chakra per turn
- Costs Five damage points when summoned

~Declined: There can only be one summoning king or queen~

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( Tae Kwon Do: Yobi Sabi ) Tae Kwon Do: Fingertips
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Fingertips - Joomuk ( Nerve strike NOT chakra point strike ) can be used to strike vulnerable areas of the body such as pressure points. Used in self-defence and not competition sparring, one and two finger strikes are made to the eyeballs. Four finger strikes engaging the tips of the outstretched hand (known as Spear hand) can be made to vital points in the neck.
Note:
- Myartisablast can only teach Tae Kwon Do

Tae Kwon Do Taijutsu Attack

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( Tae Kwon Do: Wangetsu Kikku ) Tae Kwon Do: Crescent Kick
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: There are two variations of this kick: the outer crescent and the inner crescent. In the outer, the practitioner raises the extended leg as high as possible, and slightly up across the body, (a bit across the centerline of the body), then sweeping outward to the side, in a circular movement. In the inner, the motions are the same but the direction of the kick changes, this time originating from the outside of the body, heading towards the inside, or centerline of the body. These kicks are also called "Inside Kick" and "Outside Kick" at some taekwondo schools, and "Inside-Outside" and "Outside-Inside" at others.

Another Tae Kwon Do attack.

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( Tae Kwon Do: Shi Setsu Sutoraiku ) Tae Kwon Do: Four knuckle strike
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is a fist shape particular to the Asian martial arts. Instead of closing the fist completely, the fingers are held out and only the knuckles are bent thereby presenting the upper set of knuckles as the striking surface. This fist is used for breaking boards as the smaller surface area concentrates the punches power. In self-defence, it may be used to purposefully break an attackers jaw.
Note:
- Myartisablast can only teach Tae Kwon Do

~Declined: this is Naruto RP not real life martial arts~

Clay jutsu Made by me.

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( Kibaku nendo tane ) Exploding Clay seed
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Deidara eats clay with his hands producing small seeds. After it the seeds can be thrown on ground and they will grow into multiple explosive clay minions that will explode by user making single handseal. Minions can be defused with lightning attack. Minions are able to split into two smaller minions.

~Declined: OP~

 

[Alucard]

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(Shouheki Shiyou: Haku Houfu) - Barrier Method: Fading Ambitions

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user does the hand seals and emits a vast amount of concentrated chakra around him. The chakra will expand till medium range around the user. This barrier was made to stop jutsus like the gates, or other kinjutsus which grant the users great power. The chakra will pressuarize the opponent's chakra system, putting a limit on the amount of chakra that can flow on the opponent's body or the amount of chakra he can release, canceling out any jutsu that makes the opponent's chakra to flow faster than usual or big amounts of chakra that are suddently released. The drawback is that since the barrier appears around the user and limits all chakra's flow, the user is affect it by his own jutsu.
*Can only be used twice
*lasts 4 turns

~Declined: OP, not to mention that you also make it impossible for someone to heal you if needed~

(Yodan no Sacchi) - Sense of Prediction

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will emit a vast amount of concentrated chakra around him that will be used to disturb the opponent's chakra waves, thus canceling an incoming jutsu. However, the user needs to be a sensor type ninja or to have used a jutsu that allows him to sense carefully the opponent's chakra waves and concentration (Chakra senseing rain isnt enough).
*Only useable twicer per battle
*If used on a forbidden jutsu can only be used once
*Must be in contact with Kusanagi
*Can only be used on jutsus that require more than one handseal, otherwise, the user doesnt have time to use it.

~Pending: Resubmit with another sword not Kusanagi~


(Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Matsuro Houmen) - Kusanagi Sword: Fate Release

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will touch Kusanagi and the sword will release a great deal of chakra on the user's body which he had previously put on the sword. This will release the user from any gengutsu the user may be trapped in.
*Useable once per battle
*Useable only by Orochimaru

~Declined: Needs advanced Kinjutsu~


(Howaido Hebi no Gyakujou) - White Snake's Frenzy

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After a snake has made contact with the opponent, Orochimaru will do an hand seal and will make the snake to release the chakra the user had stored inside of it. The chakra will get inside of the opponent's body and then it will take form and will turn into a real snake which eats the opponent from inside and then explodes.
*Useable twicer per battle
*Must know snake's summoning
*Snake must have made contact with the opponent

~Declined: Needs advanced Kinjutsu~

 

[Caliburn]

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 60 +20 (+5 for every turn)
Damage points: N/A -20 (-5 for every turn)
Description: The user focuses an enormous amount of doton-based chakra into the ground to make a fissure under the opponent. This fissure has a very sharp V-form with steep walls, however it isn't very deep. At the bottom of the fissure, in the point of the V, is a long, but narrow crack. It's just wide enough for a leg. When the the opponent falls, one of his legs(or two) falls in the crack and it tightens a bit around the leg so that it's completely stuck (it's unavoidable that the leg gets trapped as the fissure isn't deep. Against the time the opponent even makes one handseal, he's already stuck).
But under the V-shaped fissure is another room which is a lot larger, is very deep and has the shape of a triangle. So actually the entire structure has the shape of an hourglass where all the walls are infused with the users chakra. For the walls itself the user took the strongest minerals nearby to make them very smooth and strong.
From the moment the opponent is trapped the fissure starts to crumble from above and all the sand and earth rolls towards the opponent. It will take 4 turns to completely burry the opponent and make him suffocate (but both the fissure as the space bellow aren't filled completely). It will keep on crumbling untill the entire structure disappears under the ground without a trace.

*Can only be used once per battle*
*The user looses -5 chakra points every turn the fissure is still active*
*The user can't use any S-rank jutsu's as long as the fissure is active*
*The user takes -5 damage every turn the fissure is still active*
*The user can not use any Forbidden Jutsu's for the rest of the fight*

~Approved~ But I changed it to no forbidden jutsu's after this is used and no S rank jutsus while this is active

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: This is the advanced form of Swordsman Inhuman Reflex and it's based on the same principle: reflexes. However this technique is based on both the reflexes of the legs and arms while the other one was only based on the arms. Just be setting one small step, the reach of a sword is increased dramatically by two meters. This means everything that enters this barrier can be struck by the swordsman (this is called the Barrier of Sorts). By dislocating the shoulder/elbow/wrist-joints, the user can strike everything within a 360? barrier.
Due to massive extensive training in Kenjutsu the mucsles of the swordsman do this automatically. Everything that enters the barrier will be instantly struck down by shear reflexes of both the arms and legs without actual interfering of the brain. The result is that the user can block large amounts of projectiles in an instant without any of them reaching him or strike everything down which enters the barrier without the user even seeing it, with extreme rapid slashes and thrusts. With every hit there's a bit of chakra released from the tip of the blade which results in minor explosions on the target when hit. If a target keeps penetrating the barrier, the user will keep on hitting him in a furious barrage of attacks.

*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used if learned Ken Ki*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*The user takes -15 damage due to all the dislocations and strain on the muscles*
*It can block projectile-based jutsu's, though it has no effect on normal jutsu's*

~Approved~

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs his scabbard, while the sword is in it, just under the guard of the sword. The user then just focuses a large amount of chakra in his thumb. He builds up momentum in his thumb by pushing against the guard (it's the same principle as the flicker of a finger). Then the user lets his thumb go, which shoots the sword out of its scabbard towards the opponent with the end of the handle in front.
This technique does not much damage, but in short range it feels like you get a straight fist. Aimed correctly it can crush throats and fingers and dislocate joints.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*

~Approved~

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The world's strongest thrust, there are four ways to preform this technique:

1. The standard one. The user places his right foot in front and positions his left more to the back. He stretches his right arm and places the tip of the blade on his right hand and he grabs the end of the hilt with his left hand. He then just runs towards the opponent, using the speed of Ken Ki, and thrusts the sword anywhere he wants. In the case the thrust is evaded, the user can instantly make a vertical side-slash.
2. The stance is exactly the same, only you raise your right hand, which results in the blade pointing to the sky. This is to attack opponents with the thrust who are airborn.
3. The stance is exactly the same, only now you raise your left arm, which results in the blade pointing to the ground. The user jumps into the sky and thrusts the opponent diagonally from the air.
4. The strongest form of the Gatotsu. It's preformed in short range while standing still. Normally the user needs the speed of the legs to thrust, however now it uses all the muscles of the upper body, resulting into an incredibly powerful thrust.
   
   The user can change which adaptation he wants to use while he's doing the technique. For instance when he's doing a straight thrust and the opponent jumps into the air, he can raise the sword with his hand instantly to thrust the opponent while he's airborn. With other words multiple thrusts are possible during the same move. The thrust is so strong it penetratres the opponent till the guard of the sword.
   
   *Can only be taught by Caliburn*
   *The user must have released Ken Ki*

The four variations:

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~Declined~ OP

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+15)
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses an enormous amount of chakra into Yubashiri, which is then released from the blade and forms hundreds of flying chakra-katana's identical to Yubashiri. All the katana's are under the command of the user and he can move them at will. He can use the katana's to form a wall as protection (circular, rectangular or a dome), he can even just grab one and use it to fight.
Though its main point is to attack, the user can send all katana's at once to impale the opponent. After a katana has impaled the opponent, it explodes. They are strong enough to penetrate the surface of the earth to a shallow depth.
The user can also preform this attack by impaling Yubashiri into the ground and then releasing the chakra into the ground where it forms the katana's. The user can send the katana's through the earth to ambush the opponent from the ground.

*Can only be used by Caliburn with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*In the case the user uses the sword as a defensive shield he can use it up for 2 turns, though he has to pay +15 chakra points*

~Approved~
Shiver in fear O_O

Why is Gatotsu OP? It's just a normal sword technique which just requires Ken Ki. I have made others that are a lot stronger which did get approved, this is even the weakest move I made for Ken Ki. And if you're talking about the four different variations they barely are different. I could have even not added that and just changed the stance slightly when I would preform it, which happens a lot in such kind of battles.

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: +20
Description: The user just focuses normal chakra or one of the five basic elements in his sword(s). However it is used in combination with a normal sword technique which doesn't involve already any kind of chakra. The result is, no matter the element, the attack gaining a +20 damage boost and the elemental chakra creates some kind of small energy field around the sword which is strong enough to pierce a hole through a jutsu just big enough for the user to pass through it (the jutsu doesn't get destroyed).

*Can only be used three times per battle*
*Can't be used in the next turn after it is used*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*

~Pending: edit the red part; the barrier cannot be piercing fire and lighting attacks~

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A dual sword drawing technique so powerful it can split large obstacles in half. The user bends his knees and draws two swords at the same time (one on his left and one on his right hip) and makes an X-slash. By focusing chakra into the users arm, the strenght becomes so strong it can destroy even attacking swords and large obstacles. This way it can completely counter an offensive sword-attack and the reach of the swords is so wide it also protects the users sides.
Normally it only works in short range, however combining it with Butai Kyuuen it will shoot an X-shaped projectile made out of the chakra it was infused with (elemental or normal), which can go to medium/long range.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*

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-Approved-

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 every turn)
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses suiton-based chakra in his sword. Water starts to emit from the blade and takes the shape of the picture below. It then starts spinning ferociously. By swinging the sword, the Frisbee is launched with extreme speed to the opponent. Upon contact it explodes leaving a small crater and heavy damage to the opponent.
The special skill of this frisbee is that it can be manoeuvred by the user. This doesn't mean like in go left and then right, but as in wide boomerang-frisbee like movements. It remains extremely fast and can even go around jutsu's of a higher rank. Due to the spinning motion it partially looses its weakness agains earth, it diggs itself in in the earth and then explodes destroying the earth. It can never overpower earth jutsu's of the same rank, but it can destroy them.
It can also hide itself in water and water jutsu's, making it completely invisible.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*The frisbee can be in play as long as it isn't destroyed, though it costs +5 chakra every turn*

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~Approved if you delete the red part. It cannot be invisible since it is rotating to keep the speed~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Raiton : Yari Shishou Saishi) Lightning Release : Spear Stabbing Festival

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Infuses Lightning Chakra Into The Tip Of His Spear And Then Releases A Barrage Of Continious Stabs That Once Reach Their Range Limit Release The Lightning Chakra In The Form Of Deadly Bolts That Head On Forward. Each Stab Is Almost Deadly.
Note : Twice Per Battle
Note : User Must Have A Spear To Use Jutsu
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Jutsu

~I dont get the description~

(Raiton : Issen Yari Rendan) Lightning Release : One Thousand Spear Barrage

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Rank : S
Range : Short/Long
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Charges His Spear With Lightning And Releases A Beam Of Lightning From The Spear Into The Clouds, Then One Thousand Spear Replicas Made Out Of Lightning Come Crashing Down On The Battlefield In Tremendous Speed. Every Area Of The Battlefield Is Hit Except A Circle Of 1 Metre Radius From Where The User Is Standing.
Note : Once Per Battle
Note: User Must Have A Spear
Note : There Must Be Thunderclouds Formed To Use This Jutsu.

-Declined: too similar to already existing jutsus-

(Kuchyose : Fuka : Fuka Mure) Summoning : Shark : Shark Group

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Summons A Group Of Tiger Sharks - Ones Of The Most Aggresive Shark Species. The Sharks Will Do Anything The User Tells Them To Do And Can Easily Rip An Opponent To Shreads.
Note : Only Benazz Posseses The Scroll/Tattoo Of The Shark Summoning.
Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
Note : Sharks Must Be Summoned On An Atleast 2 Metre Depth Water Source.

-Pending: do you have an approved Kisame bio?-

(Raiton : Hakabakashii Yari Kyanon) Lightning Release : Rapid Spear Cannon

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short/Mid
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : There Are Two Versions Of This Jutsu :

-Version 1 Is Used In Short Range, The User Charges The Tip Of His Spear With Lightning Chakra And Then Unleashes A Combo Of 10 Stabs And 5 Slashes Upon The Opponent, Each Hit That Penetrates The Skin Sends A Small Orb Of Lightning, Almost Invisible To The Eye Inside Of The Body In The Area Where The Spear Hit, Then When The User Wants He Can Activate That Little Orb Of Lightning To Explode - Damaging Vital Organs, This Jutsu Best Works On Joints. An Orb Cannon Instantly Kill A Huge Organ Like A Heart Or Liver, Though It Can Make A Small Hole Which Can Incapitate The Opponent.
-Version 2 Is Used In Mid Range, The User Charges His Spear With Lightning Chakra And Jumps Into The Air, Then Once In Air The User Releases Lightning Replicas Of His Spear That Head Onto The Opponent, The User Unleashes About 10 Replicas. Each Replica Can Easily Pierce The Opponent's Body.
Note : Once Per Turn
Note : If This Jutsu Is Used - No Lightning Release Jutsus May Be Used This Or The Next Turn.
Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
Note : User Must Have Spear To Use.

-Declined: doesnt make sense: how can lighting orbs be invisible, OP, replicas already existing-

(Sanzoku Taijutsu : Kaunta) Bandit Taijutsu : Counter

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Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : This Technique Is The Most Basic Of Bandit's Taijutsu Techniques.
As The Opponent Attempts To Punch Or Kick You, You Extend Your Palm In A Claw Shape And Send Chakra To The Very End Of It, Upon Contact You Concentrate That Chakra To Soften The Blow And You Use Your Arm To Grab The Opponent's Leg/Fist (etc.), Then With Your Free Arm You Infuse Your Muscle With Chakra And Deliver A Quick And Powerfull Hit To The Opponent.This Jutsu Happens Very Fast, Once In Range The Opponent Has No Chance To Avoid This Jutsu, Unless He Has Sharingan.

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Sanzoku (Bandit) Taijutsu Is A Taijutsu Style Which Was Developed By Powerfull Bandits, They Developed A Way To Adapt Elemental And Regular Chakra To Taijutsu And Make Attacks With Bare Fists And Other Body Parts More Deadly.

-Pending: change the red part to something more realistic or less OP-

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: +20
Description: The user just focuses chakra of one of the five basic elements in his sword(s). However it is used in combination with a normal sword technique which doesn't involve already any kind of chakra. The result is, no matter the element, the attack gaining a +20 damage boost and the elemental chakra creates some kind of small energy field around the sword which is strong enough to pierce a hole through a jutsu just big enough for the user to pass through it (the jutsu doesn't get destroyed).

*Can only be used three times per battle*
*Can't be used in the next turn after it is used*

This jutsu is a replica of my Elemental Taijutsu except you made it for swords, thats the only big difference.



(Fuuton: Saigo Iki) Wind: Last Breath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: 90(-10 to the user)
Description: The user causes a mass of wind chakra around the opponent to go into their mouth while they breath and inside their body. Once inside the opponents body, the wind will expand and explode ripping the opponents body to shreads from the inside.
~Once per battle and cannot use wind jutsu the next turn.

-Declined: how are you forcing someone to inhale this? lol-

(Fuuton: Kire Gokusha) Wind: Slicing Prison
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A large amount of wind will begin to spin around their target then will quickly form around the opponent in the shape of a 360 degree dome. This dome consists of high pressure cutting winds that rotate at high speeds and cut anything it comes in contact with, the dome of wind can then be decreased in size, but it become more condensed with wind, and crush and rip the opponent to shreads inside it.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.

-Approved-

 

[volcomguts]

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New Jutsu

Ink Style: Blank Canvas (Sumi Fuukaku: Utsuro Kyanbasu)
Rank: A
Range:short-long
Type: supplementary/defense
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user pulls out a scroll and summons a wall of ink. any element jutsu of A-Rank and below can be absorbed by this wall and then is thrown back at the opponent with a single hand sign. the user may not absorb more than one attack at a time. as soon as the attack is absorbed and thrown back the wall will disperse and cease to exist.
NOTE: may only be used three times per battle
NOTE: may only be used by Sai and taught by Volcomguts
NOTE: the user must stand behind the wall and the wall cannot move, the user has to stand behind it until the attack is released or it will disperse.


~Approved~
Edited/Resubmitted Jutsu


Illusion Technique: RA RA Wrath of Lady Gaga (Genjutsu: RA RA Doki no Reifujin Gaga)

Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Genjutsu tech where the opponent becomes entranced by the horrific and abstract images of Lady Gaga. In the illusion Lady Gaga is adoring the opponent with lust, money, and fame but in reality they are shuriken, paper bombs, and kunai. the opponent may only use D-Rank and lower jutsu and must block the shuriken, paper bombs, and kunai before proceeding with the rest of their move.
NOTE: may only be used once per battle
NOTE: can only be taught by Volcomguts
NOTE: only lasts three turns
~Declined~if its a genjutsu who is throwing the shurikens, kunais and paper bombs?

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Illusion Technique: RA RA Wrath of Lady Gaga (Genjutsu: RA RA Doki no Reifujin Gaga)

Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Genjutsu tech where the opponent becomes entranced by the horrific and abstract images of Lady Gaga. In the illusion Lady Gaga is adoring the opponent with lust, money, and fame but in reality the user is actually throwing shuriken, paper bombs, and kunai. the opponent may only use D-Rank and lower jutsu and must block the shuriken, paper bombs, and kunai before proceeding with the rest of their move.
NOTE: may only be used once per battle
NOTE: can only be taught by Volcomguts
NOTE: only lasts three turns

~Approved~

NEW:


Fuuton: Mitsukai Kudarizaka (Wind Style: Angel's Descent)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user will gather immense wind chakra and shoot a giant blast of wind into the sky. The user will then be able to disperse the wind thus taking control of it in the clouds. They will then be able to form the wind into dense spheres which contain much wind pressure and make them come down at intense speeds from the sky allowing them to land anywhere they choose.
NOTE: after 4 times of use the user will begin to lose control of the wind during its descent and will have 25 damage inflicted on himself.
NOTE: may only be used by Volcomguts

-Declined: too similar to already existing jutsus-

 

[~Hasashi~]

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storm mode (boufuu mo-do)
rank: FORBIDDEN
type: supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 50
damage: N/A
description: the user will first have to fly up (with whatever means) to the clouds where he will then close his eyes and remain still for one turn while doing this the user is focusing his chakra throughout the environment and becoming ''one with nature'' so to speak after 1 turn of focusing the user's eyes will burst open and be shining white the user will have gained the ability to control nature creating huge rain and lightning storms

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and huge hurricanes with winds that can level a house with ease

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the user can create huge tsunami's with a swing of his hand

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he can create an earthquake by simply clapping his hands together

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and he can create huge fires

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his speed is increased 10 fold (6th gate speed) and he can manipulate the wind around him to make him fly
however all these abilities to huge damage to the user (300 upon entering it and 25 per turn) and after he comes out of storm mode he is un-able to fight for 1 turn to re-gain consciousness (for he would have fainted do to the pain) and must rely on something already on the field to protect him
~once per battle
~no elemental techniques for 5 turns after usage
~all elemental techniques can be done without hand signs or very much movement
~lasts 4 turns
~the user cannot come in contact with the opponent in this mode otherwise he will die do to the pain his body is already in physical contact will push him beyond the limit and die
~no taijutsu for the rest of the battle either


taijutsu: kinetic absorbing mode (douteki mo-do)
rank: S
type: defense/attack
range: short
chakra: n/a
damage: double the opponents attack
description: the user will focus his chakra to his brain and enter this mode while in this mode the user will gain the speed of the 5th gate and the ability to when the opponent tries to punch the user ect... he will absorb the kinetic energy behind the punch of the opponent and transfer it to which ever part of the body he choose to attack with and hit the opponent with twice the power the opponent tried to hit him with
~2 times per battle
~lasts 3 turns
~Both declined~ First needs major restrictions and the second needs one

storm mode (boufuu mo-do)
rank: FORBIDDEN
type: supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 50
damage: N/A
description: the user will first have to fly up (with whatever means) to the clouds where he will then close his eyes and remain still for one turn while doing this the user is focusing his chakra throughout the environment and becoming ''one with nature'' so to speak after 1 turn of focusing the user's eyes will burst open and be shining white the user will have gained the ability to control nature creating huge rain and lightning storms

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and huge hurricanes with winds that can level a house with ease

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the user can create huge tsunami's with a swing of his hand

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he can create an earthquake by simply clapping his hands together

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and he can create huge fires

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his speed is increased 10 fold (6th gate speed) and he can manipulate the wind around him to make him fly
however all these abilities to huge damage to the user (300 upon entering it and 25 per turn) and after he comes out of storm mode he is un-able to fight for 1 turn to re-gain consciousness (for he would have fainted do to the pain) and must rely on something already on the field to protect him
~once per battle
~no elemental techniques for the rest of the battle
~all elemental techniques can be done without hand signs or very much movement
~lasts 4 turns
~the user cannot come in contact with the opponent in this mode otherwise he will die do to the pain his body is already in physical contact will push him beyond the limit and die
~no taijutsu for the rest of the battle either
~Declined~ Sorry but I just don't think I approve this jutsu, even with the added restrictions is still way to OP

taijutsu: kinetic absorbing mode (douteki mo-do)
rank: S
type: defense/attack
range: short
chakra: n/a
damage: double the opponents attack
description: the user will focus his chakra to his brain and enter this mode while in this mode the user will gain the speed of the 5th gate and the ability to when the opponent tries to punch the user ect... he will absorb the kinetic energy behind the punch of the opponent and transfer it to which ever part of the body he choose to attack with and hit the opponent with twice the power the opponent tried to hit him with
~2 times per battle
~lasts 3 turns
~no taijutsu that require physical contact for 3 turns after usage
~Approved~ but changed the 3rd restriction to 3 turns
~Declined~
added restrictions and on the first i think no elemental techniques for the rest of the battle is a LOT

fire style: fire fart (katon: kasai onara)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: upon entering flame on mode and the users entire body becomes flames the user can focus his chakra to his anus and let out a very powerful and damaging fart the fart smells so bad that someone who has enhanced smelling can literally die from the smell and a normal person will have blurred vision and be forced to stop whatever they are doing to cover their nose furthermore b/c the users body is fire from the users anus a HUGE wave of fire that travels very fast and gets an added bonus in damage (plus 20) do to the fart and plus 30 from flame on mode it can literally incinerate an opponent who gets caught in it
~once per battle
~must be in flame on mode
~the user has immense pain to his anus afterward and cannot focus for about 3 seconds
~Declined~ Too op, change the description

 

[Icemyster]

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(Hyouton:reiki fi-rudo) Ice Release: Chill Field
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Type-Supplementary/Attack
Chakra-40
Damaga-N/A
Description-
The user manipulates the moisture on the field, creating a six inch thick sheet of ice on the area around him. The ice makes movement along the ground difficult, causing the opponent to slide with his own momentum. The user can manipulate the ice To create spikes in this area. This ice created from this jutsu melts after four turns
*can only be used three times*
*Can only Be used by Ice Users*
~Approved~
(Hyouton: touketsu souhou) Ice Release: Frozen Touch
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Type-Supplementary
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
After making one sign the user focuses his chakra into the air around a water source, causing it to almost instantly freeze by dropping the temperature inside of the molecules of the surrounding air causing the heat in the water to be pulled out of the water and into the air by conduction(much like the formation of demonic ice mirrors)
*Can Only Be used By Ice Users*
*Can Only Be Used Three Times*
~Approved~

(Hyouton: chinou furi-zu) Ice Release: Brain Freeze
Rank-S
Range-Short/Long
Type-Offensive
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The Ice User focuses his chakra into the area surrounding the opponent, causing the air surrounding them to drop in temperature severely and instantly, causing the air they breathe to freeze the saliva(can also be breathed in through the nose with a faster effect because the nasal passages are closer to the brain) inside of the opponents mouth to the roof of their mouth, causing a painful brain freeze that prevents the opponent from thinking for a few seconds(about five) as they are in pain(prevents build up of chakra also due to the focus being disrupted)
*Can only be used twice*
*Can only be taught Be Icemyster*
~Declined~ Add a restriction and chance the rank
(Kuchiyose: ga kira-himei) Summoning: Killer Moth Shriek
Rank-S
Type-Supplementary
Range-All
Chakra-40
Description-
After Making the handseals and wiping blood across the mark of the moth(located on the left forearm), the user summons Shriek, the Killer Moth. Shriek Is a giant moth about the size of GamaBunta, and has the ability to produce electricity with the hairs On his body(producing alot electric sound in the process, hence the name Shriek). He can fly at reasonably high speeds, and fire the electrically charged hairs off of his body down on the opponent. He is capable of using Raiton up to S-rank, and Has A very vile temper. He aspires to kill every opponent in battle.
*Can Only Be Summoned by those who signed the moth contract*
*Can only Be summoned once per battle*
~Approved~
(sanagi kaihen) Chrysalis Transformation
Rank-S
Range-All
Type-Supplementary/Defense
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
Can only Be Used By Those who have signed the Moth Contract. The user, By activating the tattoo on his left forearm with his chakra, enters this Transformation. The users Back Splits open And they re-emerge from their outter layer of skin(much like Rebirth), when they Emerge They Have wings capable of flight, and if they're outter skin was on fire, the user escapes it. This transformation gives the user speeds matching the third gate, but as result the user cannot use earth jutsu. The speed gained from the transformation lasts four turns.
*Can Only Be used Once Per Battle*
*Can Only Be used By Moth Contract Signers*
~Declined~ Wouldn't something like this cause some sort of damage to the user?

(Hyouton: chinou furi-zu) Ice Release: Brain Freeze
Rank-A
Range-Short/Long
Type-Offensive
Chakra-30
Damage-N/A
Description-
The Ice User focuses his chakra into the area surrounding the opponent, causing the air surrounding them to drop in temperature severely and instantly, causing the air they breathe to freeze the saliva(can also be breathed in through the nose with a faster effect because the nasal passages are closer to the brain) inside of the opponents mouth to the roof of their mouth, causing a painful brain freeze that prevents the opponent from thinking for a few seconds(about five) as they are in pain(prevents build up of chakra also due to the focus being disrupted)
*Can only be used twice*
*No ice can be used the next turn*
*Can only be taught Be Icemyster*
~Approved~
(sanagi kaihen) Chrysalis Transformation
Rank-S
Range-All
Type-Supplementary/Defense
Chakra-40
Damage-(-45 to the user)
Description-
Can only Be Used By Those who have signed the Moth Contract. The user, By activating the tattoo on his left forearm with his chakra, enters this Transformation. The users outter layer of skin becomes a shell, and the users muscles and bones rapidly change on the inside, forming wings and a new layer of skin, then the shell's back rips open, and the user emerges, when they Emerge They Have wings capable of flight, and if they're outter skin was on fire, the user escapes it. This transformation gives the user speeds matching the third gate. The speed gained from the transformation lasts four turns. Takes as long to perform as orochimaru's rebirth technique.
*Can Only Be used Once Per Battle*
*Can Only Be used By Moth Contract Signers*

Sorry. I should have added damage to the jutsu

~Approved~

 

[Orange]

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(Genjutsu: Baka No Kyouko) Ilusion Technique: Strength of a Fool

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user cast a genjutsu on the user by manipulating one specific area of the brain chakra path. The area is responsible for the person's movements. The genjutsu affects the signals sent from the brain to the body, making the person unaware of his own strenght. This can work both ways, either making the user spend more strength then necessary, and thus tiring him more, or make the user spend less strength than necessary.
This jutsu is really weak, it gets it's rank for being very simple.
Once casted, the user can't change the effects of the jutsu, and so as to cast the jutsu again to change it. The changes are very subtle, and so they can't prevent the user from punching or throwing a kunai efficiently, they'll only do it with less strenght.
*The changes can only be felt by Eye Users (with their eye activated) or Chakra Sensors and thus can only be released by them (trough normal Kai).
*Co-created with Kiwii*

-Pending: is a B rank not D-

( Rensei Himei) Drilling Shriek

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user conducts the sound waves created by his arm amplifier to produce a focus loud high pitch shriek. This is enough to break through glass windows and to pierce the target's ears, induncing him into an unbalanced state.

-Pending: is a B rank not D-

(Yure Bakufuu) Vibrating Blast

Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user sends an enhanced blast of sound that vibrates the particules in the air. The blast is able to disbalance an elemental jutsu, which is only compressed by chakra. By disbalancing it, the user can render the jutsu useless.
*This jutsu is left useless if the chakra power or the size of the attack is too great*

-Declined: we have a CE for that ability-

 

[Chago]

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Dual Swords Summoning: The Sun and The Moon (dyuaru subeta Summin: sono San Sono getsuei)
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: none
Description: The user takes out a scroll and summons the two great dual blades the sun and the moon.
*The Sun* This Sword has a ruby colored handle to it with the mark of the sun the sword also has a yellow-orange looking material that acts and cuts like steel also the sword can cancel out fire jutsu up to A rank.
*The Moon* This Sword has a sapphire colored handle to it with the mark of the moon also it has a whitish-grayish looking material that acts and cuts like steel also the sword can cancel out water jutsu up to A rank.
(Note: only chago can wield this swords.)
(Note: Can only be used twice in battle.)
(Restriction: The swords last only three turns.)
(Restriction: You can only cancel out one jutsu in one turn.)

-Declined: a sword can't just like that cancel jutsus, it needs a bgd for it-

White Slash Barrage (howaido Slish danmaku)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user swings his/her sword and makes a series of white energy slashes that are thrown at the enemy. The energy slashes follow the enemy till they strike them and can cut through lighting jutsu up to A rank.
(Note: only chago can teach this jutsu.)
(Note: can only be used three times in battle.)
(Restriction: This technique can only be used with the sword of ventus.)
(Restriction: only up to 5 energy slash waves at a time.)
(Restriction: must wait two turns to do this jutsu again.)

-Pending: white energy slashes: define and explain how-

 

[Mugiwara]

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(Tessenka no Mai Senshu) - Dance of the Clematis Bow

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user pulls out his spinal cord, and infuses it with chakra, making it less flexible. The user then uses a wire string for both ends of the spinal cord, forming it into a bow, which the user can easily shoot the bones as arrows, which he extracts from his arm. The arrow is extremely fast and hits with great impact. It can be compared to Kidomarus bow and arrows. Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: The bow lasts until the user drops the bow down, thus the chakra in the bow disappears, making it too flexible to use as a bow

~Declined~ Make it S-rank and add more restrictions.

(Teshi Sendan: Kikanjuu) - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets: Machine Gun

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Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Using the Shikotsumyaku ("Dead Bone Pulse") the user is able to fire their distal phalange(finger-tip) bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact. The user focuses more of chakra into his finger tips, to increase the rate that the finger tips fire at and the power of the bullets. While this technique is over, the user can fire 10 finger tips per second.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: The jutsu lasts for 3 rounds.

Declined~ Make it 2 turns.

(Teshi Sendan: Kikanjuu) - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets: Machine Gun

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Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Using the Shikotsumyaku ("Dead Bone Pulse") the user is able to fire their distal phalange(finger-tip) bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact. The user focuses more of chakra into his finger tips, to increase the rate that the finger tips fire at and the power of the bullets. While this technique is over, the user can fire 10 finger tips per second.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: The jutsu lasts for 2 rounds.

-Declined: you can't regenerate bones that fast. The speed and ratio are the problems here-

(Tessenka no Mai Senshu) - Dance of the Clematis Bow

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user pulls out his spinal cord, and infuses it with chakra, making it less flexible. The user then uses a wire string for both ends of the spinal cord, forming it into a bow, which the user can easily shoot the bones as arrows, which he extracts from his arm. The arrow is extremely fast and hits with great impact. It can be compared to Kidomarus bow and arrows.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: The bow lasts until the user uses some other technique with his hands, thus dropping the bow.
Note: The user cannot use:Tessenka no Mai Tsuru the same round or next round
Note: Can't shoot arrows the same round as the bow is created

-Pending: a mod should check this also, i think you need a round before usage to form all these-
~Approved but changed it so that you have to wait a round before you can shoot the arrows~

 

[Kiba Inuzuka]

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(Fuuton: Ikazuchi monsu-n kiri)Wind Style: Thunder Monsoon Drill Jutsu
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Medium
Chakara cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user must release chakra into the air. The Chakra released into the air has two jobs. One is to move the air in a circular motion (clockwise). This, after about 9 seconds, will create a sort of a very large but weak-ish tornado, very wide though. This creates energy in the air, helping to create lightning. The other job has more work to it. The user must focus their chakra from the sky to their target. The lightning will then follow along the chakra down from the sky to the target, while the tornado (made earlier with the chakra) will speed up in spinning. The user must then, finally must focus the chakra in the air that made the tornado, to close in on the target while still spinning. It will make the tornado faster as it closes in, while making it stronger. When it closes up, it will make a strong drill downward toward the target, and brings the summoned lightning closer to the target.
*Can Not Use Lightning Or Wind for 1 Turn*
*May Only Be Used 3 times*

-Declined: Red parts don't make sense-

(Tenma Kusari)Demon Chains
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:40
Damage Points:20(If Used With Fire)
Description:To use this technique, some hand seals are needed: Boar, Dragon, Horse, Serpent. After the seals have been performed the user will either pound their hands on the ground or stomp with their feet.About 5 plethora of iron chains will appear beneath the user and will grip the opponent and bring them to their knees. They can be broken with hard work, but it helps if your chuunin or higher. This jutsu is used to contain people and hold them still.You May Also Add Katon Chakara To Make The Chain burn The Opponent while they Are Hold Still.
*Note Can Only Be Used Once*

-Declined: You can't just stomp and create iron chains :/-

(Kaze dageki)Wind Strike
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:B
Range:Short-Medium
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description: This Move Is Considered A Taijutsu Based Attack. The User will focus Wind chakara on the bottom of their feet. Then the user will do a round house kick or a side kick etc. and a huge gust of wind will come about. The gust of wind is capable of blowing your opponents away and blowing away thrown projectiles.
*Can Only be used 2 times*

-Declined: Your chakra alone cannot throw away projectiles unless you are a Jinchuu. If you are this should be at least A ranked-

 

[Artimis]

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X- ryoukin (X-Charge)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will close both his hands to charge the Gloves up then with an instant the user will open both hands releasing out a powerful charge of fire that will burn anyone or anything that comes into short range of the user, this jutsu is best used when the opponent tries to rush the user or tries to sneak up behind him.
Note: must have gloves on
Note: this jutsu can be performed in seconds
Note: can be used three times in battle
~Declined~ Limit it to once

X-bakudan(X-Bomb)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 120 (-30 damage to user)
Description: Once the user has fusion his X-Glovers with the Mare Sky ring, he will be able to perform this attack, the user will hold one X-Glove in the air and began to let out a powerful flame. Then he will use the other glove to shape the fire in to a Giant Sphere of fire, once the fire ball is shaped the user will throw it at his opponent. The fire ball being so powerful that it will turn the ground under it to molten rock. The user will be able to close his hands together causing to the fire ball to explode instantly. Any jutsus of lower rank that makes contact with this fire ball will be destroy once it touches the surface, the only way to stop this attack is to complete cover the attack in a large body of water and A-rank water jutsus will not be strong enough to stop it.
Note: Can only be used once
Note: – 30 damage to user from chakra strain, making user bleed from their nose.
Note: user cannot perform Fire element next turn
Note: If the user was to make the Fire ball explode while in close or mid range he would be caught in it too
~Approved~ However, a water jutsu such as Bursting Water Shockwave, used at the right time, should be able to stop this attack

X- ryoukin (X-Charge)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will close both his hands to charge the Gloves up then with an instant the user will open both hands releasing out a powerful charge of fire that will burn anyone or anything that comes into short range of the user, this jutsu is best used when the opponent tries to rush the user or tries to sneak up behind him.
Note: must have gloves on
Note: this jutsu can be performed in seconds
Note: can be used one times in battle
~Approved~

X- mo-do(X-Mode)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user will get the speed of the 7 gates and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus
Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for the rest of the fight
~Declined~ Speed of 7 Gates makes it OP

X-Absorb
Rank: S
Range: long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Whatever the attack used power is plus +10
Description: Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover the user will have the ability to absorb other fire attacks used against him. The jutus works like this the user points his hands outwards towards the fire attack coming at him he then makes a triangle shape with his hands giving him the power to Absorb any fire justu S-Rank and below after Absorb the fire attack he will send it back at the opponent.
*can only be used in battle once*
*Only can be used on fire attacks*
*only Mato~kun can use*
~Declined~ Limits?

Name: Katon: Kousenchitai no Jutsu ~ (Fire Release: War Zone Technique)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will first perform a chain of hand seals that directs chakra flow out of the tenketsu points of the feet. The chakra will then be directed underground by the user and gather at the spots they choose. When the user snaps their fingers the fire molded chakra will expand into a raging sphere of inferno, incinerating everything caught inside. The technique is comparable to a war zone because the user can create explosions as quickly as they can look at a target and snap their fingers. The farther the target zone is, the more chakra that must be expelled. If the user has the ability to see through walls and other objects, they can even trigger the attack inside a location from the outside. Unless the opponent can see the chakra flow underground, it will appear as though the user can create explosions simply by snapping their fingers and the attack can come without warning.
Note: can be used twice in battle
Note: Can make two fires come up per use
~Declined~ OP and no side effects. Really?

~Leaving this for Roku to re check~

 

[Zaraki]

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Wind Style: Armour of Wind (Fuuton: Kaze no Yoroi)

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Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates his chakra and the wind around him to create a wind armor around his body. The user's body which is coated by a form of wind basically makes the body lighter making capable of faster movements in par of the 3rd gate and unaffected by Lightning jutsu of equal rank or lower.
Note: Last 3 turns
Note: Can only be used twice

-Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-

Wind Style: Shift Control (Fuuton: Shifuto Seichuu)

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When in need to stop in a mid-air or movement, the user immediately have an outburst of wind chakra from all over their body in order to stop movement completely in all directions or even just one. This stops the user from moving mementarily while falling, or even catch the opponent off guard as they blast past the user while in pursuit
Can only be used three times

|| Declined ||

Fuuton:Mazoku Raikou (Wind Style: Demonic Wings)

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:
Description:The user manipulates wind chakra around his body, back, shoulders, and neck area. Upon command demon-like wings form around the user’s body. Several wings will from in fact a total of six forming. These wings are large and expansive.This enables the user to take flight.This technique also improves the agility and speed of the user.These wings are like shadow clones which means they stay in battle as long as they’re destroyed and disappear whenever the user wants.
Note: Can only be used once in battle
Note: Wings last three turns or until all destroyed

-Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-

(Katon: Masubi no Misairu Kyoumou)- Fire Release: Fierce Fire Missiles

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user consecutively shoots out of their mouth three extremely fast fire "missiles". The missiles launch at their target in a straight line and detonate on contact, each releasing a large firey explosion. These missiles are extremely fast and generate a lot of kinetic energy; as a result, if the user uses this technique in mid air, he will be thrown backwards due to the recoil. If the user moves their head while using this technique, they can shoot the missiles in a "spray" fashion - in this way, each of the three missiles can have a different trajectory.
Note:Can on be use once per battle
Note:The user take 20 damage due from the heat of the blast becasue of coming from the mouth

~Approved~

(Raiton: Denkou no Yari)- Lightning Release: Spear of Lightning

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Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a large spear of lightning in their hands. They may wield this spear as a melee weapon, or they may throw the spear at a target. Due to the lightning spear's nearly inexistent air resistance and near-weightlessness, it travels extremely fast when thrown and extremely far.
Note:Only two can be create at a time
Note:Can only be used 3 times a battle

-Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-

 

[Magellan]

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Fire style: Megaflame
Rank: S
Description: In order to perform this technique the user will need one shadow clone to assist him to gather huge amount of fire energy. The shadow clone’s fire energy will pass on to the user through channeling and once been done, the user will blow huge amount of fireball from his mouth causing havoc to the area. The shadow clone will be gone once it’s been done successfully.

Note: Can only be used thrice
Note: Must be taught by EAM

-Declined: When you create a shadow clone your own chakra gets decreased and then you transfer energy again? This doesn't make sense-

 

[Pervyy]

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(Katon: kaki kabe) Fire style: Fire wall jutsu
Type: Deffence
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Desciption: The User focusses the chakra into there hands held out in front of them forcing the chakra out into a wall of fire as a defence.

Note: Only lasts for one turn
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Doesnt stop weapons (eg. kunai)

-Declined: Similar jutsu already exists-

 

[Smoker]

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( Raiton : Niiro Keta - Lightning - Style : Red Beam

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User Consetrates Lightning Chakra To His Body Hand And Moves It To Arm And After It To User's Finger And Shoots A Thin Beam That Can Break Throught Some Defences.

- Can Be Used 2 Times Per Battle -
- Only I Can Teach This -

-Approved-

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage: 100
Desciption: The user will place there scabbard infront of them then slowly putting it behind them on right side, they will take there sword out but before fully taking the sword out the user will dash running at high speed (that only people with 3 tomoe sharingan or masters at byakugan can track them). Using that speed, the user will run to what they see as there opponent's right side, then by fully taking out there sword the user will pull spirit reaper backwards slicing the opponent so quickly they won't realise until a few moments after, then by side stepping around them which will see like a flicker of the body. The user then strikes the opponent's back and channeling chakra through Soul reaper they will make the sword longer increasing the pain and then the user will follow back to their orginal spot in a blink of an eye just by walking normally but using better speed.
-The user can only use this once per battle
- Must have the sword of soul reaper
- The user must be in a special group.
- The user to use the full effect in speed must activate Ring of Sauren otherwise the opponent can still see the user if that isn't activated

-Declined:OP and how do you get to have this speed?-

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Doton : Handos No Yurasu - Earth Style : Hands Of Rock )

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Desciption: After Making The Handseals User Puts His Hands Into Earth And Takes Control Of Hands Made Of Rock, User Can Take Enemys Legs And Hold Them So Enemy Cant Move.
- Can Be Used One Time -
- Only I Can Teach This -

-I must be reading something wrongly here, please re submit with a better description~


(Shuukan Buki : Yaibas no Boufuu - Custom Weapon : Blades Of Storm )

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Desciption:User Concetrates His Chakra And Making Handseals After They Are Made Dual Swords Appear Front of The User's Feet With The Blade Part At Earth.
- Only Suffering Pain Has These -
- Blades Boosts Lightning Attack's With 5 -

||Declined||

( Fuuton : Shuuren No Undo - Wind Style : Drill Of Wind

Spoiler

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: User Concetrates Wind Chakra To Their Hand, After Making The Handseals User Punches Our A Fast Wind Spiral That is At Shape Of Drill , It Can Drill Throught Skin.
- Can Be Used 1 Time Per Battle -
- Only I Can Teach This -

-Pending: make this an A rank and fix the chakra info-