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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Senkou Bunshin) – Flash Clones

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create clones that can be limited up to 4. These clones when destroyed flash like a flash bomb blinding the opponent and also damaging the opponent. Similer to explosion, but not as strong an attack. These clones can only use d-rank ninjutsu and element ninjutsu. This can also make clones of animals or objects and be used in the same way.
Must be taught by ZetsuPOD
~Declined~ wouldn't a flash kunai do the same thing?
It would be similer, but it combines the effort of attack, blinding and also explosive, but it has many drawbacks that would make it simple to get rid of

Here is 2nd jutsu for the week:

(Inuzuka:Su-Pa Kawa) Dog Art: Super Bark
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user's dog (In my case my dog Don). Don will start gather chakra from his throat and gathering it for a while (it takes in human turms 4 handseals). When Don has finished preparing he will use all his chakra releasing it in a super powerful bark, that will be able to blow back the opponent, and reflect attacks but also be used as an attack.
Note: Must have been giving the training to use this jutsu by ZetsuPOD
Approved
 
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UnderGround Hair Attack(Dochu Eigyo ranji attaku)
Rank:A
Type:attack
Range:short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60(+5 if in sage mode)
Description:the user inserts his hair under ground. then the users hair travels underground and appears behind the enemy in form of a hard spear. then the hair stabs the enemy in a vital spot.
*can only be used by people with a jiraya bio
*in sage mode the hairs speed and hardness increase
*the user cant use any hair releted jutsu for 2 turns
*can only be used 2 times per battle

Toad Mouth attack(gamayudan attacku)
Rank:A
Type:attack/defance
Range:short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description:the user jumps inside the mouth of a large toad.The user stayes inside the toads mouth for up to 3 turns at that time the user is protected against weak attacks. THen the toad spits out the user at the enemy and the user hits the enemy with any close range attack(ex:rasengan,dynamic entry and ect.)
*can only be used by people with a jiraya bio
*can only be used 1 time per battle
*can only be used by someone who has contract with the toads

~Both Declined
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

NOTE: this is not based on japanese mythology like MS

ketsueki byakugan (bloody white eye)
rank: FORBIDDEN
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 50
damage: n/a (50 to user and over use can cause blindness)
eye description:
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description: in order to unlock the kesueki byakugan the user must have dis-honered his clan in some way causing him great pain and distress then from the bitter sadness his eyes will change unlocking ketsueki byakugan the ketsueki byakugan is very dangerous and can cause blindness but it also has three powerful ability's to it

in the right eye

nagaijuuken (long gentle fist)

in the left eye

sunpoushoken (dimension view)

both eyes together

and kazemikoto (wind lord)

(formats below)

besides these ability's it has
when the user uses gentle fist and rotation with these eyes activated they are much more powerful furthermore it gives the user the ability to see through some genjutsu being that his ability to see chakra is so great he can see the change in chakra flow and divert it
~overuse of the technique will cause a form of blindness although it is not actual blindness the user will lose his byakugan completely and for him it will feel like he can no longer see
~byakugan cannt be activated after the jutsu ends for 3 turns and after the last use to the end of the battle
~three times per battle



nagaikazejuuken (long wind gentle fist)
rank: FORBIDDEN
range: short-long
type: attack
chakra: 50
damage: 90
description: the user will first activate the ketsueki byakugan once done the user will focus chakra to his right eye and the air around the opponent will instantly begin to strike the opponent many times the first round closes the opponents kentetsu for the entire battle the second one will cause the air to last out cutting many of the opponents muscles making it extremely hard for him to move the third and last round will cut the opponent into small pieces thus killing him
~ it can be used many times but each time it is used the user gets closer and closer to blindness
~the wind cant cut through anything


sunpoushoken (dimension view)
rank: forbidden
type: defense/attack
range: short-long
chakra: 50
damage: depends on the opponents jutsu
description: the user will first activate ketsueki byakugan then the user will focus chakra into his left eye he will then gain the ability for a second to view a different dimension then he will focus his chakra on the air around the opponents jutsu and it will warp into the dimension that the user saw there the jutsu will travel around until it gets to the same spot where the opponent is in our dimension then the user will focus his chakra again in his left eye and the jutsu will reappear and attack the opponent
the user can use this multiple times however it drains a lot of chakra and every time it is used it brings the user closer to blindness
~if the jutsu is bigger then 10 square meters the opponent cant warp it back to this dimension if it is bigger then 20 square meters the user cannot use this jutsu on it (for it is to big)


kuromikoto (drak lord)
rank: forbidden
range: short
type: supplementary
chakra: all the users remaining chakra (must have at least a quarter remaining)
damage: n/a
description: first the user will activate ketsueki byakugan the user will focus his chakra into both eyes thus summoning a creature called kuromikoto
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when summoned to the field the skies are covered in darkness no light is shed torment is felt and destruction is bound to happen when this demoniac being makes its appearance
kuromikoto will wield a shield and a blade
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with a chain connecting the two of them the shield has a special seal on it when an incoming jutsu reaches kuromikoto the shield is extremely dense and can block nearly every attack that the opponent sends at the user and any dark based attack it will literally absorb the attack (darkness as in ying yang darkness so any dark based attacks or anything that is yin based the shield can absorb) the sword is a sword that can cut through anything it has the power to block all yang techniques by sending out dark raise which are extremely powerful and will destroy any yang based technique
~stays on the field 4 turns and the user will be completely drained of chakra afterwards
~causes blindness a lot faster if used to many times

NOTE: all these jutsu make the users eyes bleed like MS


~Declined~ Completely impossible for the Byakugan to do anything like you described
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Could anyone reply to gauntlets? Here are some new customs by me:

( Doton: Tanso genshi kumu ) Earth release: Carbon atom Organize
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to user when activated due cell re-organizing. )
Description: User focuses large amount of earth based chakra on their cells and re-arranges their configuration converting their skin hard as diamond and turning it into black. This jutsu makes opponent less vulnerable to taijutsu, earth, fire, wind and water attacks while is more vulnerable to lightning attacks ( + 10 to damage ).
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes 15 damage to user
- User is weaker to lightning attacks
- No earth jutsus for one turn
- Can be only taught by Myartisablast
- Lasts three turns

Made according Wikipedia and Greed's hardening in FMA.
~Approved~
( Raiton: Kobushi no Zetsumetsu ) Lightning release: Fist of Extinction
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( + 10 to user )
Description: User focuses huge amount of lightning chakra on his fist making it Glow. After it user can hit it to earth or opponent. When the punch hits the user will release all the lightning chakra in form of lightning shock wave that deals damage to everyone in the range of it.
Note:
- Can be only taught by myartisablast
- Causes + 10 damage to user when used
- Shockwave reaches up to two meters

Range added.
~Approved~
( Kuchiyose: Tokei ken ) Summoning jutsu: Clock Blade
Type: Supplementary - Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 per every turn when activated )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User makes followed handseals after biting thumb and summons Clock blade of Aeon the Time guardian. When user activates the blade the pointers will turn ( Other points nine as other points three ) forming blade and handle.
Note:
- The clock works as Shield plus it has removable daggers.
- Only myartisablast is able to teach this jutsu
- Clock counts as unique sword
- Costs 5 chakra per every turn when activated
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Sword summoning made according to Aeon's weapon in Castlevania Judgment.
~Declined~ Does the sword have any abilities?

( Kuchiyose: Kougake no Armstrong ) Summoning technique: Gauntlets of Armstrong
Type: Summoning / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( + 5 to taijutsu and + 10 to lightning )
Description: User summons the gauntlets of legendary alchemist Alex Louis Armstrong ( AKA Strong arm alchemist ) of the Armstrong family. The gauntlets have Spikes on place of knuckles and Alchemical notes carved on the top to boost the Lightning attacks. When the gauntlets have activated they boost Taijutsu attacks + 5 and Lightning + 10. * Can be only used twice per battle and they last for five turns. Only myartisablast is able of teaching this summon and teach how to use these gauntlets. *
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~Approved~
Summoning Animal: Hyena
Scroll Owner: Myartisablast
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Majestic King Hyenas

( Kuchiyose: Soudai Ouja Haienas ) Summoning: Majestic King Hyenas
Rank: S
Type: Summoning - Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 5 to user when summoned )
Description: User bites thumb and wipes blood on Hyena tattoo on arm summoning Two King Hyenas. The Hyena Kings weight about 200 LBS and Have big claws. First Hyena King can use B - Rank water while other can use A - Rank Wind.
Note:
- Must have signed contract for Hyena summoning
- Can only be taught by myartisablast
- First uses B - Rank Water
- Second uses A - Rank Wind
- Can be summoned once in battle
- Costs five chakra per turn
- Costs Five damage points when summoned

( Tae Kwon Do: Yobi Sabi ) Tae Kwon Do: Fingertips
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Fingertips - Joomuk ( Nerve strike NOT chakra point strike ) can be used to strike vulnerable areas of the body such as pressure points. Used in self-defence and not competition sparring, one and two finger strikes are made to the eyeballs. Four finger strikes engaging the tips of the outstretched hand (known as Spear hand) can be made to vital points in the neck.
Note:
- Myartisablast can only teach Tae Kwon Do

Tae Kwon Do Taijutsu Attack

( Tae Kwon Do: Wangetsu Kikku ) Tae Kwon Do: Crescent Kick
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: There are two variations of this kick: the outer crescent and the inner crescent. In the outer, the practitioner raises the extended leg as high as possible, and slightly up across the body, (a bit across the centerline of the body), then sweeping outward to the side, in a circular movement. In the inner, the motions are the same but the direction of the kick changes, this time originating from the outside of the body, heading towards the inside, or centerline of the body. These kicks are also called "Inside Kick" and "Outside Kick" at some taekwondo schools, and "Inside-Outside" and "Outside-Inside" at others.

Another Tae Kwon Do attack.

( Tae Kwon Do: Shi Setsu Sutoraiku ) Tae Kwon Do: Four knuckle strike
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is a fist shape particular to the Asian martial arts. Instead of closing the fist completely, the fingers are held out and only the knuckles are bent thereby presenting the upper set of knuckles as the striking surface. This fist is used for breaking boards as the smaller surface area concentrates the punches power. In self-defence, it may be used to purposefully break an attackers jaw.
Note:
- Myartisablast can only teach Tae Kwon Do

Clay jutsu Made by me.

( Kibaku nendo tane ) Exploding Clay seed
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Deidara eats clay with his hands producing small seeds. After it the seeds can be thrown on ground and they will grow into multiple explosive clay minions that will explode by user making single handseal. Minions can be defused with lightning attack. Minions are able to split into two smaller minions.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Could someone check these?

(Hyōton: Chiaisu Yari) - Ice Release: Thousand Spears of Ice
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes the hand seals and places his hand on something made of ice (mirrors, walls, etc) while expanding his chakra through the field, then, thousands of ice spears appear from wherever ice is and are shoot forwards. As the spears appear from wherever ice is, they can disappear also by being absorbed by the ice source and being shoot to another direction. This jutsu has a resonable duration (more or less one whole turn). Can only be used twice.
~Approved~
(Hyōton: Yuuenaisu Hashira) - Ice Release: Grand Ice Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: The user slams his foot on the ground and thousands of ice pillars appear by all the field. If used on a water based terrain, the water where the opponent and user stand on freezes. This jutsu makes the opponent desorientated since they see the image of themselves on the pillars and can't see the user. Useable 3 times per battle.
~Declined~ Needs range of attack, it can't just freeze the entire field of battle if its a A rank
(Hyōton: Chiyuki Hakuhen Nagashi) - Ice Release: One Thousand Snow Flakes Current
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do a chidori nagashi and at the same time mix it with his Hyōton chakra. This will shock and freeze anything in short range. It's often used as a counter against water and wind jutsus (freezes them). Twice per battle.
~Declined~ More restrictions, its OP

(Hyōton: Shimofurui Modo) - Ice Release: Ancient Frost Mode

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will do a row of hand seals and will unlock all of his Hyōton chakra, thus, allowing him to use the Secret Ice Jutsus of the ancient ice user's. A blue aura will surround the user and he leaves a cold essence wherever he passes. All Hyōton jutsus have double the damage. But this jutsu comes with the drawback that the user can only use Hyōton jutsus while on this mode. Lasts 6 turns and can only be used once per battle. After the last turn, the user has his water and wind elements sealed, therefore he also cannot use any Hyōton jutsus and his chakra reserves are only left at 25% (so he cannot anymore forbidden jutsu).

(Hyōton Hijutsu: Furui Doragon Shiro Nadare) - Secret Ice Release: Avalanche of the Ancient White Dragons
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do the hand seals, cut/bite his thumb to make it bleed and will place his hand on the ground, then the air on the terrain will suddenly freeze, negating any water or wind jutsu (will freeze) up to S-rank. Tons of giant white dragons made of ice and snow will appear from both sides of the opponent, from left and right or in front and behind, with a crescent wave form, crushing and freezing anything on its path. The terrain will be left with lots of ice and snow. This jutsu can only be used twice per battle, causes 15 damage to user, must be on Ancient Frost Mode and after usage, the user's ancient mode is reduced by one turn.
~Declined~ Both OP
 
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(Suiton: Uruoi Kondensa) Water: Moisture Condenser
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: None
Description: The user condenses the moisture in the air around the opponent and makes the moisture around the opponent into water and makes it stick onto them, the water will have a thick syrup-like feeling to it and will cover the opponents entire body not allowing them to move. The moisture requires alot of chakra to maintain its condensed form so it only lasts one turn and after that turn is over it will evaporate and the user can only do one other jutsu on the same turn.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~Declined~ Clarify the part in blue. Does it mean that the user will only be able to do one after this one or on the turn it evaporates?
(Kuukirikiteki Kokkaku) Aerodynamic Skeleton
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: The user
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: None(-10 to the user per turn)
Description: The user will use their Kaguya clan kekkei genkai to channel their chakra into their bones and control the amount of calcium that is in them, to make the bones light weight by condensing the calcium in them to make their body reduce the wind drag and allow them to move more freely against the air pressure making them increase their speed up to the 5th gate. While this jutsu is active the user cannot use ninjutsu/genjutsu and this technique may only be used 1 time per battle and only lasts for 5 turns, after the jutsu wears off the user will be extremely exhausted and cannot use their KG for the rest of the battle.
~Declined~ Change the gate level
 
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Suiton: Shigure Soen Ryu-hitonomi gachin (water release: Invincible Sword Style- Swallow's Clash )
Type: Attack/Defense
Range:Short-mid
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user makes the Ame sword release water making a tidal wave in front of the user that can be controlled by him with the sword, its used for attack and defense at the same time. while doing this the user never directly touch's the water.
(Note:Can only be used 3 times per battle.)
~Declined~ Add more restrictions
Suiton: Shigure Soen Ryu-hitonomi kuchibashi (water release: Invincible Sword Style- Swallow's Beak )
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user thrusts his blade multiple times with one hand releasing small pressure water bullets from the Ame sword. This bullets will cut the user superficially in different parts at a great speed making it hard for the opponent to move with the pain left by this cuts.
(Note:Can only be used 3 times per battle.)
~Declined~ Change the rank or reduce the speed
 
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Flame Fist, Hinote Kobushi
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Rank: C
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user performs Flame Fist. Flame Fist is a technique where the user will hold out his hand towards his opponent, with his palm facing him. Then small fire will come out and attack and burn the opponent.
~Declined~ I'm pretty sure this exists already
 
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All these jutsus are base on this
Custom Weapon notice this is already approved just wanted you to know what I was basing the jutsus on
Custom Weapon: X-Gloves
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts on Special Gloves Called X-Gloves, When the user infuses with fire chakra the gloves give the use the power to do more and stronger fire jutus .
*These gloves can only be used by Mato~kun*
*Gloves can be removed but must be done by another jutus*
*Any fire jutsu done with the gloves adds 10+ damage *





Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower to other jutus. The ring has lots of other powers but this is the only one known at the moment .
notes:
The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
Only can be used with X-gloves
Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 2 turns
Can only be used once per fight
Only can but used by Mato~kun


~Approved~ but i added a restriction
(X-pusshu)X-Push
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short -mid
Chakra Cost:35
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By infuse his gloves with charka and point both gloves to one direction, the user is able to push himself in any direction he wants just by pointing the gloves. This work by when the user puts charka in to the gloves they let out a very strong blast that is strong enough to move the user so the user uses the move to blast him to any direction he want in really fast speeds. This can be used to quickly dodge a opponent attack, or it can be used to get closer to your opponent and this move may be used in the air.
Note: can be used 4 times during battle
Note Have to wait one turn before using again
Note: each push, pushes the user about 20 feet from where he was standing
Must have X-gloves on to use


~Approved~

(X-shippuu)X- Hurricane
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short -mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: This move starts out by the user extending both arms in a outwards position, Then the user lets out very larger flames from each arm, once that is done the user starts to spin at a very fast speed making the fire start to twist around him forming a very powerful Hurricane, the fire Hurricane is very larger if the opponent is standing mid from the user he will be caught in the attack once caught inside the opponent will be ripped and burned to death since the attack is made up of wind and fire and the Hurricane can’t just be stopped by any water attack must be S-rank or a two element combo
Note: can only be used twice during battle
Note: once used user can’t use any S rank fire jutsus next turn
Note: must have X-gloves on to perform this jutsu



~Declined~ OP and hurricanes don't get set on fire
(Satetsu Kaihō ) Iron Sand: World Order
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This jutsu uses Iron Sand to create a gigantic sphere of spikes that branch off irregularly, making it almost impossible to get a clear overview of what is happening. This also makes evading the spikes nearly impossible. Even if the opponent has managed to evade getting hit, the Iron Sand spikes will have filled the entire surroundings, cutting off any escape routes.
Note:This jutsu can only be used twice during a battle
Note:Once used can only use B rank and down


~Declined~ Change it to forbidden
 
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ice release: mirrors of truth ( hyouton: kikan

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( +10 for each turn )
Damage points: ( depends on the genjutsu used against the user )
Description: by focusing his ice chakra in the direction of the opponent, the user protect himself from any genjutsu attack from his enemy making his enemy unable to get him with the genjutsus, and reflect it at him making him fall in his own genjutsu.

notes :
- it can't be used after the genjutsu is done.
- it can't reflect forbidden rank genjutsus
- the mirror flies around the user and moves with the enemy's moves
- can only be used twice per battle

ice release : ice growth ( hyouton : hi nohiko )
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary\Defense\Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( +15 for each turn )
Damage points: 80
Description: by releasing a huge amount of ice chakra around his body, the user can make this ice chakra preformed into a sheild that cover him from the opponents attacks in the suitable shape like wall or an armor, and if the enemy attacked on an close range the ice chakra will be formed in the shape of needles and blades and attack him as well.

~ can only be used once per battle
~ can't stay more then three turns
~can't use an ice jutsu in the same turn

lightening release : thousand birds hedgehog ( raiton : chidori harinezumi )

Rank: S
Type: Defense\Attack
Range: Short-mid/ long " if the spears were concentrated "
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user concentrate a huge mount of lightening chakra around him, then make it explode in the form of chidori nagashi but with small spears getting out of it making the user get covered with lightening in the form of the hedgehog needle fur, and if the opponent attacks in an close range he will get major damages over his body and faints from the chock.

~ can only be used twice per battle
~ -10 damages for the user because the lightening shocks
~ if the spears where concentrated in one spear it can get the opponent in a long range

( Genjutsu: kyoufu tora ) illusion :the terror of the white tigers

rank : S
range : short\mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: after summoning any white tiger, the white tiger make an illusion to the enemy making then feel terror like they never knew, making them suffer mental damages making him can't remember anything even his name and sense that he is powerless against the white tigers as he faints with continuous nightmares.

~ can only be used once
~ make the enemy losses his sense and fear everything he sees.
~ a white tiger must be summoned
~All Declined~ they are all OP, add restrictions and make better descriptions. Also, this has nothing to do with why there were declined, but have someone proof read your submissions so they are easier to understand
 
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Water Orb bombs(suiton kyuutai bomu)
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:the user spews out multiple small water bullets out of his mouth but as he throws them at the opponant he secretly places kunai with paper bombs in them. THen the user can explode the kunai with paper bombs anytime he/she wants.
*Can only be used once per battle
~Declined~ How can you fire the water bullets and put the tagged kunais in them at the same time? plus it needs more then one restriction
 
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(Ushiro Honoo) Back Flame
Rank: S-rank
Type: Defensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description: The user focuses fire chakra in one arm, then a flame appears around the users hands, the user can shoot out pure fire chakra to cancel out any fire jutsu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: it only has 3 shots
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: except Forbidden
~Approved~
(Aoiro Honoo) Blue Flame
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description: The user focuses water chakra into their blade, causing a harmless blue flame to appear around the sword, this makes all water attacks the user uses +15, the user can also shoot out water from the blade anytime he wants
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: the sword itself becomes very weak against earth, that it can't pierce it
~Declined~ How would fire strengthen water jutsus? and pick either the strengthening of water jutsu's or shooting of water.
(heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases 90% of their remaining chakra into a force known as the user's "Dying Will", the user's 5 senses are pushed to the Max, also it greatly increases the users reaction time and their speed and strength are dramatically improved ten fold, but this jutsu takes alot of pressure on the user's body
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user can only used B and below ranked jutsu
~Declined~ OP
 
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~check the post
~ Chakra is energy, you cant change it into energy O_O ~
Nos! Chakra is a mixture of physical and spiritual energy, and before asking more consider it requiring usage yin and yang, which can answer some stuff

Sword art; Twilight Slash (Kenjutsu; Koukon Kirashuu)
Rank; A
Range; Short-Very Long
Type; Attack
Chakra Cost; 30
Damage points; 60
Description; The user transfers chakra and energy in his sword and uses shape manipulation utilizing the energy to extend the blade's length, blade starts glowing with energy and the sharpness increases, regardless of the size the sword remains with its usual weight, and easy to handle.

-Pending: for how long does it last?-


Swort art; Samurai Saber technique(Kenjutsu; Samurai tou no jutsu)
Rank; A
Range; Short-Long
Type; Supplementary/offensive
Chakra cost; 30
Damage points; 60
Description; This technique employs the concept of 'Chakra Flow', similar to the Flying Swallow and Kusanagi Sword: Chidori Katana techniques. Through 'Chakra Flow', the user channels their chakra through their swords. This extends the reach and the cutting edge of the blade, and also allows the user to fire crescents of energy whenever the blade is swung. Using manipulation the user can also form the blades into buzz-saws, broad swords, and axes.

i wanna make this technique official

Kenjutsu of higher caliber tent to have a quote, as wielders of the blade have honor, reciting the quotes while performing the arts gives respect to the weapon.

-Declined: similar jutsu exists in the official manga just list, no reason to make it a custom now-

Sword art; Razing phoenix (Kenjutsu; Houou Tenshouku)
Rank; S
Type; Offense
Range; Short-Mid
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; During close combat, the user leaps into the air wreathed in flame, carrying any nearby enemies with him. He then streaks toward the ground, again carrying them with him. A glyph of flame appears underneath him, and he once again leaps into the air, this time surrounded by fiery energy in the shape of a phoenix, slashing the opponent repeatedly taking him on flight, then while in air he opens his wings wide and releases a burst of heat energy incinerating everything in range.
Quote; O noble conflagration, incinerate all. Razing Phoenix!
Note;-Usable 3 times in a battle.
-This is a fire release kenjutsu

-Declined: edit or explain the pink parts better plz-

Sword art; Brilliant Overlord (Kenjutsu; Senpa Shunrenjin)
Rank; S
Type; Offense
Range; Short-Long
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The technique is activated the moment the user sheathes his sword out of the scabbard, the technique uses chakra manipulation like genjutsu utilizing the targets senses, controlling the targets mind chakra, the user raises his tension which raises his senses, being in this form, the target can feel 1/500 of a second(human body can react to 2/10 of a second), but due to not having a body being able to react to such senses, the target loses all control and remains paralyzed, while his the user releases a barrage of crescent shaped energy waves, that hits the targets and shatter into particles, when enough collected around the target, they gather together, creating a void dealing the final amount of damage, the user then sheathes his sword back to the scabbard, as the technique ends, the body gets back to its actual senses and feels the pain of all the damage caused altogether and collapses.
Quote; Can you try to react through the swift mist?! Prepare yourself for a blinding storm! Brilliant Overlord!
Note; Usable once in a battle. The user is left exhausted for a short period after this.

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-Declined: OP-

Sword art; Judgement (Kenjutsu; Keibatsu)
Rank; S
Type; Offense
Range; Short-mid
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user stabs his sword at the ground, which makes a huge glyph on the ground, the glyph starts shining and all who stand inside its air are paralyzed with a incredible force(except the user itself), the user then moves with the speed of lightning and cuts through all his enemies inside.
Quote; O Noble forces of justice, shine upon the sinful deeds of my opponents, for they dared to go against me, My Verdict shall decide all! Judgement!!!
Note; Usable twice in a battle.

-Pending: how huge exactly? and the speed of lighting...no-
Twilight slash; It ends after the usage, its like i use the technique, attack, then end it, not much like a transformation

Razing phoenix; Wrethed in flame (fire release O_O), Glyph (a symbol representing the flames O_O, which then helps me to execute the final attack), Incenirate(a C rank Great Fire ball jutsu can incenirate ~_~, this is S rank Fire+Ken jutsu)

Judgement; edited

Brilliant overlord; Can easily be counterd by genjutsu release or inserting chakra in the mind watever thingy, like kirabi does. how come its oped o_O

Sword art; Twilight Slash (Kenjutsu; Koukon Kirashuu)
Rank; A
Range; Short-Very Long
Type; Attack
Chakra Cost; 30
Damage points; 60
Description; The user transfers chakra and energy in his sword and uses shape manipulation utilizing the energy to extend the blade's length, blade starts glowing with energy and the sharpness increases, regardless of the size the sword remains with its usual weight, and easy to handle.

Sword art; Razing phoenix (Kenjutsu; Houou Tenshouku)
Rank; S
Type; Offense
Range; Short-Mid
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; During close combat, the user leaps into the air wreathed in flame, carrying any nearby enemies with him. He then streaks toward the ground, again carrying them with him. A glyph of flame appears underneath him, and he once again leaps into the air, this time surrounded by fiery energy in the shape of a phoenix, slashing the opponent repeatedly taking him on flight, then while in air he opens his wings wide and releases a burst of heat energy incinerating everything in range.
Quote; O noble conflagration, incinerate all. Razing Phoenix!
Note;-Usable 3 times in a battle.
-This is a fire release kenjutsu

Sword art; Brilliant Overlord (Kenjutsu; Senpa Shunrenjin)
Rank; S
Type; Offense
Range; Short-Long
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The technique is activated the moment the user sheathes his sword out of the scabbard, the technique uses chakra manipulation like genjutsu utilizing the targets senses, controlling the targets mind chakra, the user raises his tension which raises his senses, being in this form, the target can feel 1/500 of a second(human body can react to 2/10 of a second), but due to not having a body being able to react to such senses, the target loses all control and remains paralyzed, while his the user releases a barrage of crescent shaped energy waves, that hits the targets and shatter into particles, when enough collected around the target, they gather together, creating a void dealing the final amount of damage, the user then sheathes his sword back to the scabbard, as the technique ends, the body gets back to its actual senses and feels the pain of all the damage caused altogether and collapses.
Quote; Can you try to react through the swift mist?! Prepare yourself for a blinding storm! Brilliant Overlord!
Note; Usable once in a battle. The user is left exhausted for a short period after this.

Sword art; Judgement (Kenjutsu; Keibatsu)
Rank; S
Type; Offense
Range; Short-mid (5m's)
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user stabs his sword at the ground, which makes a huge glyph on the ground, the glyph starts shining and all who stand inside its air are paralyzed with a incredible force(except the user itself), the user then moves swiftly with incredible speed cutting all enemies inside.
Quote; O Noble forces of justice, shine upon the sinful deeds of my opponents, for they dared to go against me, My Verdict shall decide all! Judgement!!!
Note; Usable twice in a battle.
Resubmit them with the edits in the jutsus
 
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(Kuchiyose: Usagi: Miruku - Oto Nami) Summon: Rabbit: Milk - Sound Wave

Type: (Summoning) Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After summoning Milk the summoner then instructs her to use her sharp ears to pinpoint the exact location and whereabouts of the hiding or trying to escape enemy.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*
~Declined~ How long does it last?
(Kuchiyose: Usagi: Kyouran - Raikou Koutai) Summon: Rabbit: Fury - Lightning Shift

Type: (Summoning) Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: After summoning Fury the summoner then infuses lightning chakra into him. Electric current starts to flow around Fury surrounding him like a barrier and he then charges towards the enemy with fast speed than can't easily be detected by normal eyes, avoiding any means of normal ninjutsu/taijutsu attacks. After reaching the enemy he then hits them in the stomach, which leaves them numbing from electricity and hurling in pain.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*
*Paralyzing lasts for 3 turns*
*Electric Currents on Fury lasts for 3 turns*
~Approved~
(Kuchiyose: Usagi: Kasui) Summon: Rabbit: Spike

Type: (Summoning) Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Spike is one of the fattest rabbit there is of the rabbit family. He just really likes to eat but even so, he can use earth release that allows him to be filled with great power and strength; especially when attacking the enemy with earth shaking attacks unbalancing them; he is lazy and will not allow listen to anyone except for Amaya.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*
~Approved~
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(Kuchiyose: Usagi: Kusai - Daichi Yurasu) Summon: Rabbit: Spike - Earth Shake

Type: (Summoning) Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: After summoning Spike the summoner then infuses earth chakra into him. Spike then jumps with great power and strength that the earth shakes beneath him and with infused earth chakra into him, he can direct the earth shake towards the enemy alone, in which after the summoner would have the chance to hit the enemy while he is left unbalanced.

*Must have signed the contract of the Rabbit (held by Amaya)
*This can only be used/taught by Amaya*
*This can only be handled by Amaya*
*Can only be used once per battle*
~Approved~
(Katon: Seiryoku Kashou) Force Burn
Weapon: Twin Swords
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user takes out his twin swords and infuses fire release with them then struck them to the ground inwhere fire chakra would spread underneath. The user then manipulated the fire beneath to burst out of the ground burning anything and everything from a 10m away the user. This can be used as a defense from incoming attacks as a shield.

*Only Amaya holds these twin swords*
*Can be used twice per battle*
~Approved~
 
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(Dendou Kosshi) - Electric Bones
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user sends lightning chakra through his bones, making the electricity jump from bone to bone. Every one of the users bones become electrical conductors.
With this "electric field" that the user creates with his bones can paralyze the opponent when within that field, or very close. When used with the Dance of the Young Ferns, the user can only make a small electrical field, because of the huge area that the bones cover, the user does not have enough lightning chakra to cover it all. Because of that the bones become electrical conductors, the user is shocked all the time while it is active, making him immune to low rank genjutsu. (B Rank)
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: 10 damage to the user due to the constant shocking.
Pending...specify how large the field is around the bones without the Dance of Young Ferns
 
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(Genjutsu: Kisu Shikyo) Illusion: Kiss of death
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user will throw needles to the opponent in a direct hit. The victim would come into illusion that his/her whole body’s nerves is going to collapse because of the snakes’ venom. His bodies will go numb – feet and hands – and the venom is aiming to the heart killing the victim. If the victim cannot get out of the illusion he will be killed because of heart attack and if he can escape of the illusion the victim will get hurt from the needles.
~Declined~ change the rank and add restrictions
 
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Summoning Animal:Sharks
Scroll Owner:Benazz
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A At The Moment.
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

(Kuchyose: Fuka: Shunshuu) Summoning Jutsu : Shark : Prodigy

Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : By Biting His Thumb And Using Blood Over A Scroll/Tatoo, The User Will Summon A Great Shark, Named Prodigy, The Summoning Must Happen In An Atleast 3 Metre Depth Water Source Or The Shark Will Not Survive Or Will Be Able To Move. Prodigy Can Swallow A Human Within Seconds And Can Jump Into The Air From The Water For 5 Metres Height Making Him Fast In Water And Deadly. Prodigy Can't Use Any Jutsu.
Note - Must Use The Jutsu In A Water Source Of Atleast 3 Metre Depth So The Summoning Could Survive
Note - Prodigy Can Be Summoned Only Once Per Battle
Note - Prodigy Can't Use Any Jutsu
Note - Only Benazz Can Grant The Tatoo/Scroll...
~Approved~
(Buki : Katana No Shunshuu) Weapon : Blade Of The Prodigy

Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A (Meelee Damage - 60)
Description : Blade Of The Prodigy Is A Special Blade Created By Ben Uchiha. The Blade Is Extremely Adapted To Lightning Chakra So Every Lightning Jutsu That Can Be Used On It (Chidori Nagashi, Chidori Etc.) Is Twice Stronger Than Channeled Through A Regular Blade, Or Used Without A Weapon .The Blade Is Made Of An Unknown Mineral That Is Black, But Is Very Light And Cuts Like Steel.
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Blade
Note : Kenjutsu And Other Blade Techniques Are Three Times Faster Then With Regular Weapons Due To The Light Weight Of The Blade, But Are Equally Strong To A Regular Blade.
Note : 2x Damage When Using Lightning Jutsu With This Blade Equipped.
~Declined~ OP
 
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Custom Weapon: Musamune
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This legendary blade is longer than the height of an average man and thin as well. Despite its size it is light as a feather, but stronger than steel. Its sharpness and cutting ability are equivalent to that of a blade with a chidori current running through it. Though this is the extent of its power, it has no elemental properties or special abilities. Its strength is reliant almost entirely on the user.
- Can only be wielded by Sephiroth
- Does not need to be summoned, it is always with Sephiroth.
~Declined~ already created
 
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Sumiton: Sumi Shinsui (Ink Release: Ink Flood)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (if it hits Opponent)
Description: Kirabi Releases a Massive Amount Of Ink That Can be Used as a basis for other Ink Jutsu. The Ink's Sticky Quality Causes the opponents movements to be slowed.
(Usable Once Per battle)
~Approved~

Sumiton: Sumi Kiri (Ink Release: Ink Mist)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage (-10 To opponent per turn)
Description: Kirabi Release Ink in a mist form that causes the area to go pitch black and irritate the opponents eyes and smell.
(No other ink this turn)
(Last 3turns)
(Usable 2times per battle)
Declined~ the ink mist does not make any sense. It's too thick to be mist.

Sumiton: Sumi Tako Hoko (Ink Release: Ink Octopus Tentacles)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplmentary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Kirabi manipulates Ink into eight octopus tentacles that grab the opponent and can keep him from moving or hit the opponent.
(If used with Ink Flood, Tentacles can Regenerate)
(Last 3 Turns as long as there is a source of ink)
(Usable Twice)
~Declined~ Make it once per battle and add another restriction
 
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Raiton/Fuuton: Mabushii Unari (Lightning/Wind Release: Radiant Howl)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User concentrates a large amount of wind and lightning Chakra in his mouth that when releases sends out massive shockwaves of lightning and wind around that can obliterate whatever is in it path. The rippling wind and lightning creates a deafening howl that is able to drown out all sound and causes the and opponent to be deaf for the turn afterwards.
(No Lightning OR Wind Next Turn)
(Usable 2 times)
Approved~ I editted the "No Lightning/Wind" part to specify it more.

(Lightning and wind co-exist as seen with Lightning Dragon Tornado @Rag)
 
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