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(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Eye Technique: Blast From Heaven

Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:-Short-Mid
Chakra:50
Damage Point:90(-20 to the user)
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra Blast from there eyes. The user would close there "eye" or "eyes" and force there chakra into the middle of the eye creating a small point and release a huge amout of chakre from that point in the eye. The Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize the blast until contact of the blast. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt the Chakra system.
  • Note: Can only be use 1 times in battle
  • Note:"Byakugan" most be activated

~Declined~ Needs more restrictions

(Hakke, Taishoku Shouheki): [Eight Divination Signs Fading Barrier]

Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra:50-(+5 for each turn it's active)
Damage Point:
Description:A unique technique developed by the Hyuuga clan.The user will begin emitting a steady but subtle release of chakre from his/her entire body, saturating a relatively short range around his/her body. This chakra, not enough to cancel out an opponent?s, is intended rather to interfere with and disrupt an opponent?s chakra as long as they are within the area. Activated jutsus such as for example,"Lightning Strike Armour" to surrounding them, will become disrupted and fall apart, opponent's chakra will seem to run amuck leaving them with difficulties in molding it, their bodies will begin reacting to their disrupted chakra flow causing them to feel a weakening, slowing and slight loss of balance, etc, nothing major, but enough to prove disadvantageous in close quarter and hand to hand combat. All an opponent has to do to free themselves from this effect is to step away from her/him "Mid Range" and out of the affected zone, as long as they are not within it they will not be affected by it, this is very much intended for close range taijutsu combat. Unfortunately however, this Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize anything is happening until after they begin feeling the effects, and even then are unlikely to know what exactly is happening or where the user's chakra stops.
  • Note: The Barrier can only be use once in battle
  • Note: Only 2 move can be done when active the Barrier

~Declined~ OP
(Buben Jouzai) :[Soldier Pill]

Type:Supplementary
Rank:-
Range:None
Chakra Cost:None
Damage Points:+5 to the user
Description:When the chakra pill is swallowed, it allows the user to fight for several days without rest. The pill is full of proteins and a special stimulant that momentarily increases the ninja's chakra within the chakra network.
  • Note: Can only use one per battle
~Declined~ Don't these already exist?

Kaisoku (Celerity): [Chakra Control]
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:-
Chakra:50
Damage Point:-+30 to evey justu and +10 to every Hyuuga clan jutus (+5 to the user)
Description: Basically what this skill involves is increasing her/his Chakra through there chakra system as well as controlling it?s flow and concentrating and focusing this Chakra boost into her/his body, dramatically increasing her/his levels of energy thus increasing her/his speeds, power etc (Think Rock Lee or Maito Gai when opening the gates).
  • Note: Can only be used 2 times in a battle
    Note: Must wait one whole turn before using it again
    Note: Only can be active once taking "Soldier Pill"
~Declined~ OP
(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Eye Technique: Blast From Heaven

Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:-Short-Mid
Chakra:50
Damage Point:90(-20 to the user)
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra Blast from there eyes. The user would close there "eye" or "eyes" and force there chakra into the middle of the eye creating a small point and release a huge amout of chakre from that point in the eye. The Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize the blast until contact of the blast. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt the Chakra system.
Note: Can only be use 1 times in battle
Note:"Byakugan" most be activated
Note: No Fuuinjutsu & Kinjutsu for the rest of the battle
Note: No S-ranked jutsu one turn before use or 2 turns after
Note: The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

Added more restrictions
~Declined~ Can not create KG Techniques
(Hakke, Taishoku Shouheki): [Eight Divination Signs Fading Barrier]
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra:50-(+5 for each turn it's active)
Damage Point:
Description:A unique technique developed by the Hyuuga clan.The user will begin emitting a steady but subtle release of chakre from his/her entire body, saturating a relatively short range around his/her body. This chakra, not enough to cancel out an opponent?s, is intended rather to interfere with and disrupt an opponent?s chakra as long as they are within the area. Activated jutsus such as for example,"Lightning Strike Armour" to surrounding them, will become disrupted and fall apart, opponent's chakra will seem to run amuck leaving them with difficulties in molding it, their bodies will begin reacting to their disrupted chakra flow causing them to feel a weakening, slowing and slight loss of balance, etc, nothing major, but enough to prove disadvantageous in close quarter and hand to hand combat. All an opponent has to do to free themselves from this effect is to step away from her/him "Mid Range" and out of the affected zone, as long as they are not within it they will not be affected by it, this is very much intended for close range taijutsu combat. Unfortunately however, this Chakra is not visible to normal eyes.
  • Note: The Barrier has no effect on the user other armor
  • Note: The Barrier can only be use once in battle
  • Note: Only 2 move can be done when active the Barrier
  • Note: No Ninjutsu jutsu one turn before use or 2 turns after
  • Note: No Fuuinjutsu & Kinjutsu for the rest of the battle
  • Note: No S-ranked jutsu one turn before use or 2 turns after

Added more restrictions also re done some of the description
~Declined~ still way too OP
(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou Senshu) : Eight Divination Bow

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:A unique technique developed by the Hyuuga clan.The user will begin emitting a steady but subtle release of chakra from his hands. Then will refine it around his/her body to form a long bow made of flowing chakra. When the chakra bow is formed the user can then pull back on the string and gather pure chakra to powerful cutting force in the form of a larger arrow.The arrow is also control by a string of chakra at the end of the arrow so it's able to change it's direction when shoot off.Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt the Chakra system.
  • Note: Can't use any hand seals during this attack.
  • Note: Can shoot up to 2 Arrows.
  • Note: Can only be used up to 4 times.
~Declined~ remove the ability to control the arrow in flight
 
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Raiton/Fuuton: Mabushii Unari (Lightning/Wind Release: Radiant Howl)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User concentrates a large amount of wind and lightning Chakra in his mouth that when releases sends out massive shockwaves of lightning and wind around. The rippling wind and lightning creates a deafening howl that is able to drown out all sound and causes the user and opponent to be deaf for the turn afterwards.
(No Lightning/Wind Next Turn)
(Usable 2 times)
~Declined~ How can wind and lightning coexist when wind cancels out lightning?
Kenjutsu: Tenroumetsuga (Sword Art: Divine Wolf)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Divine Wolf is a sword art that consist of multiple slashes to the enemy. The last downing them allowing for a finishing blow. these slash are able to be charged with a element or custom element giving them unique properties.
Fire: Divine Wolf - Blaze (Tenroumetsuga Hien- "Heaven Wolf Destroy Fang Scatter Flame") is similar to Divine Wolf, though the user use slashes which are fire enhanced and the attack ends with a fire blast downwards depending on the Ninja level.
Earth: Divine Wolf - Crush (Tenroumetsuga Saiha-"Heaven Wolf Destroy Fang Break Supremacy") has the user creating a fissure, and then lunging his sword to the ground raising several rocks that damage the enemy.
Wind: Divine Wolf - Storm (Tenroumetsuga Fuujin-"Heaven Wolf Destroy Fang Wind Swift") is similar to Divine Wolf, though the user ends with a blast of wind chakra shreding the opponent.
Water: Divine Wolf - Flood (Tenroumetsuga Suiren- "Heaven Wolf Destroy Fang Water Lotus") has the user plunging his sword into the ground to create a wide area of water bursts.
Lightning: Divine Wolf- Shock (Tenroumetsuga Raijin) "Heaven Wolf Destroy Fang Thunder Beast" has the user slash the opponent numbing them and the plunge there sword into the ground causing multiple bolts of electricity to strike under the opponent.
(Usable 2 times)
(the element cant be used the next turn)

~Declined~ OP and each of those counts as a seperate submisssion
Raiton Kenjutsu: Ragunaroku (Lightning Sword Art: Ragnaroc)

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: 120 (-30 to user as they will be caught in the blast slightly)
Description: The User Begins with a Short Aerial Combo, that slashes away at the target hitting them to the ground. Then Using Lightning Chakra. They fire multiple bolts of lightning that explode on contact.
(No Lightning 2turns afterwards)

Raiton/Genjutsu: Za Ketteiteki Kauntodaun [Lightning/Illusion Release: The Final Countdown]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: N/A
Chakra| 80
Damage: 160 (-50 to user)
Description: The user pours most of the raiton he can spare and then by clasping his hands tattoos hidden under the skin turn a bright yellow, this catches the opponents in a genjutsu that then causes them to believe two things, Time has slowed and they no longer have movement within there body keeping them in place and if they do they move realtively slow, and release the user from a genjutsu they may be in or be used as a self defense mechanism if the opponent is in a lest resort situation. During this time the user will complete a string of seals that then creates a small but extremely potent lightning spark -that appears bright white as all of the power is contained in this spark- then by touching the opponent with this spark they are released from the genjutsu, but an agonizing pain is erupting over them as the lightning starts to attack the nerves of the opponent rendering body parts unusable. after three turns the opponents whole body system shuts down. and the last of the spark explodes the heart. this spark also causes the user arm to become useless as his nerves are destroyed within.
(Usable Once)
(No Elemental Ninjutsu Usable after use above C-Rank)
(No Jutsu that Require handseals usable rest of battle)
(No Lightning Rest of Battle)
(Last 3 Turns)
~Over the Weekly limit~
 
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( Ishuu no Lekunga ) - Swarm of Lekunga
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 20 per hit
The user pulls out a hundred seeds, which he then throws into the air. These seeds are infused with the user's chakra and forced to grow instantly. Each seed turns into a Lekunga. A Lekunga is a semi-aquatic plant, whose "skin" is always moist, enough to ward off weak fire techniques. It possesses the capability to float a few metres in the air and moves around in that way. Each Lekunga possesses a number of tendrils. Each tendril has, at its tip, a number of thorns which are sharp enough to scratch and weaken steel. The Lekunga primarily attacks its prey by floating silently towards them and striking them repeatedly with its thorns till the prey succumbs to blood loss. The Lekunga created by this technique can be controlled mentally by the user, and possess the unique capability of allowing the user to "see" through their eyes, since they were born due to his chakra.
This technique can only be used once per battle, since the user cannot carry around huge quantities of seeds. The Lekungas, moreover, have the body strength of only trees, and can easily be sliced through by chakra-enhanced weapons, or even moderately powerful slicing or grinding techniques. A solid chakra enhanced punch is also enough to destroy a Lekunga.
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( Gado Hejji ) - Hedge Guard
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 25 per bite
The user drops a seed at any point on the ground. This seed is infused with the user's chakra and forced to grow instantly. The seed then turns into a Hedge Guard, which bursts out of the ground at any point the user wishes. A Hedge Guard is a terrestrial plant, whose "skin" is as durable as diamond. A Hedge Guard is a highly sought after plant in the areas near the jungles, and people offer thanks to their deity when one blooms in their garden. The reason for this is that a Hedge Guard possesses a near-perfect protection against any marauders. A Hedge Guard is comprised of a number of large tubular tentacles, each tipped with a mouth with razor sharp teeth capable of biting through steel. The tentacles are coiled around a large mass of rock.The tentacles of the Hedge Guard reach out and bite any opponent who dares to come near it. Each Hedge Guard is fifteen metres tall by ten metres wide.
Due to the intense rarity of the seeds of the Hedge Guard, the user can only use this technique twice. The Hedge Guards further limit the user's offensive capabilities by not allowing him to summon any offensive creatures or create any offensive plants for the turn this plant is summoned and the next turn.
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~Declined~ Seriously OP!
 
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(Buki : Ikazuchi Doragon Katana) Weapon : Thunder Dragon Blade

Type : Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : This Blade Was In Possesion Of The Founder Of The Cloud Village - The First Raikage, He Made This Blade For His Own Self, Though After His Death - Grave Robbers Stole The Blade And So Began The Blade's Journey. The Blade Has A Gold Handle, And On The Beggining Of The Steel - A Dragon's Head That Has It's Mouth Open, And From It's Mouth, The Steel Part Of The Blade Appears Once Added Lightning Release Chakra Into It. Added Lightning Chakra To The Inside Of The Dragon's Mouth, The Chakra Shall Call Out The Hidden Steel Part Of The Blade And It Will Draw Out From The Dragon's Mouth
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Blade
Note : Once Damage That Would Normally Destroy A Regular Blade Is Dealt To The Thunder Dragon Blade - The Blade Will Just Return To The Dragon's Mouth
Note : The Steel Part Of The Blade Can Only Be Called Out Once Per Battle, That Means If It Has Sheathed Itself In Due To Damage - That Means It Will Be Dorment No Matter How Much Chakra Will Be Added In It Till The Next Battle
~Declined~ doesn't a sword like this already exist from a Naruto filler?
Summoning Animal:Sharks
Scroll Owner:Benazz
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A At The Moment.
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

(Kuchyose: Fuka: Shunshuu) Summoning Jutsu : Shark : Prodigy
Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : By Biting His Thumb And Using Blood Over A Scroll/Tatoo, The User Will Summon A Great Shark, Named Prodigy, The Summoning Must Happen In An Atleast 3 Metre Depth Water Source Or The Shark Will Not Survive Or Will Be Able To Move. Prodigy Can Swallow A Human Within Seconds And Can Jump Into The Air From The Water For 5 Metres Height Making Him Fast In Water And Deadly. Prodigy Can't Use Any Jutsu.
Note - Must Use The Jutsu In A Water Source Of Atleast 3 Metre Depth So The Summoning Could Survive
Note - Prodigy Can Be Summoned Only Once Per Battle
Note - Prodigy Can't Use Any Jutsu
Note - Only Benazz Can Grant The Tatoo/Scroll...
Have Rei check for now
 
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(Kyōka Shikyaku No Jutsu) Enhanced Four-Legged Technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An advanced version of 'Four-Legged Technique'. The user becomes more animalistic and takes up the traits of a canine, allowing enhanced senses and particularly the sense of hearing and smell. In addition, the users reflexes and overall speed become greatly heightened, surpassing its predecessor in every way possible.
• Effects wear off after five turns.
• Only inuzuka clan members can use this.
~Approved~
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Korou) Summoning Technique: Elders
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (x2)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A summoning technique that summons both elders of the basilisk tribe. Once summoned, they situate on the users shoulders and wrap their tail around the users arm and can be used to whip or stab flesh. Primarily, the summonings are for the activation of the 'Basilisk Mode' but can be used offensively and are both proficient in 'Suiton' and 'Fuuton' elements, both having the knowledge to create blasts of their respective element upto A-rank.
• Summons last for upto four turns
• Speed of the user slows down during the four turn period.

~Approved if you already have the contract~
(Fuuton: Kyūkyoku No Senpuuken) Wind Release: Ultimate Hurricane Fist

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: An advanced version of 'Senpuuken'. When the user punches his/her clenched fist, a massive vortex of slicing wind is forced towards the direction the fist is facing. Both fast and strong, this jutsu can level anything in its path
• Usable three times per fight

(Youso Oodama Rasengan) Elemental Big Ball Sphere
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage Points: 120 (Mid – 100)
Description: A variation of ‘Oodama Rasengan’ that allows the user to feed an elemental affinity into it and resembles ‘Elemental Rasengan’ but on a bigger scale.
• The elemental affinity used in combination cannot be used next turn
~Declined~ Add restrictions to both of these
 
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summoning technique, wyverns (Kuchiyose Jutsu: Wyvern)
Type: supplementary
Rank:A
Range:short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user summons Grenda the leader of all wyverns by signing the contract of the wyverns in blood the user is able to summon Grenda the king wyvern to aid the user in battle. Grenda is a fire wyverns that shoots out giant fireballs at the opponent Grenda can also do fire jutsus up to A rank without aid. He also has the ability to fly and do wind jutsu but only up to B rank.
(Note: can only be taught by chago)
(Note: must have sign the wyvern contract in blood)
(Note: summoning last 2 turns)
Have Rei recheck this for now
Wind Release: White Wolf Charge (Fuuton: howaido ookami denka)
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his/her chakra to create a wind shaped wolf the wolf will have a white aura around it do to the dense and heavy concentrated chakra around it the wolf is able to be guided and controlled by the user and moves in heavy speeds that only the byakugan and the sharingan could keep up if the opponent comes in contact with the wolf or hit by it he/she will be rip to shreds.
(note: can only be taught by chago)
(note: while the jutsu is being used the user cannot move do to the control of the wolf)
(Restriction: The wolf can be destroyed by a A rank or higher Fire jutsu)
(Restriction: The wolf could not go within a 5 mile radius form the user)
(Restriction: The wolf only last 2 turns)

~Declined~ Add restrictions
 
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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+5 for each turn it is used)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user sends an enormous amount of doton-based chakra into the ground through his feet, spreading it throughout the battlefield. The user can now make octagon-shaped pillars of earth appear from out of the ground anywhere he wants. When he makes a pillar right under him, so that he rises, he can still make make others appear by sending a chakra signal in that pillar into the ground. This happens at a rate that he can jump of the pillar and onto a next one without loosing any speed. The point of this jutsu is that it can make multiple pillars appear to form a wall or just to make the battlefield into an obstacle course, which is beneficial for taijutusu-users and swordsman to get closer to their opponent.
The pillars can be made in various sizes, though it can only come straight from the ground and thus it is impossible to attack the opponent with it. When on a pillar the height can still be controlled. After the jutsu is acivated, the user doesn't need to make handseals anymore to make the pillars appear. As the pillars are infused with the users chakra, when the opponent touches the pillar he can located him (pillars are also underground).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*The effect can last for four turns*
*Every turn it is used it uses +5 more chakra*



~ Approved ~

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 100 (-15 or -25)
Description: The user releases the same aura from his body that is used in Ken Ki and uses it to form two extra heads and four extra arms. Each one of them wields a sword + every head has a sword in his mouth. By starting to spin all 6 swords (that the hands hold) the user creates an almost 360? defense of spinning swords (it doesn't work under him as the earth is in the way). This can be used as a defence against jutsu's, though the main piont is that it attacks the opponent by doing an upwards circular slash while still spinning the swords. Thus the opponent gets slashed by nine swords upwards, while 6 of them are spinning, shreading him completely.
The extra heads and arms can be compared with normal clones, but just aren't seperate from the user. The advantage of this is that all the information each one of them gathers is instantly known by the others too and they can handle more damage than a normal clone. However they can't preform jutsu's.

*This technique is best used while using Ken Ki, in that case the user takes -15 damage. But when the user isn't in Ken Ki, he takes -25 damage*
*Can only be used once, but the heads and arms stay till the end of the turn*
*If used while not in Ken Ki, Ken Ki can't be activated next turn*
*The technique can be used as a defence by spinning the swords, though it depends on the nature of the element of the jutsu:
  • Wind - forbidden
  • Fire, water, lightning - S-rank
  • Earth - A rank


~ Declined. No extra heads/arms/other parts of body -_-" ~

This was your original comment:

I increased the damage a bit and made it once, but don't push it to far mister plant -_-

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (-15)
Description: The user must have unleashed Ken Ki to use it. Placing a sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent. The user then goes in a straight line to the opponent, using the speed from Ken Ki(=4 IG), making it look like he completely disappears and reappears behind the opponent. The attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks once, and sheaths the sword again when the user is past the opponent. The attack itself consists only from one straight slash that attacks the part between the shoulders and chest, slashing so deep it makes the arm that was hit disfunctional and making the opponent bleed to death.
The technique is back-handed as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword. The slash is not completely full as the tip of the blade leaves the blade when the it slashes and then is put back into the scabbard.
Utilizing the speed of Ken Ki at it max and focusing it all in one slash it makes it nearly impossible to dodge block, unless the opponent itself has Ken Ki activated or has an extremely speedy technique. Even then it requirs certain skill to avoid it.
It's strong enough to cut through steel.

*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
* -15 damage to the due to the enormous strain it puts on the body*

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~ Approved, but I added a bit ~

Meanies, I know my customs are true horror for you guys, but could you please not do if they not exist
:shy:

...xd

~ Okay, next time I'll delete the post thus preventing me from having to check them xd [j/k] ~
 
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Summoning: Rain Sword (Kuchiyose: Ame Katana )
rank: S
type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
range: short-mid
chakra: 40
damage: 80/40(when hit by water blade/hit by pressure gun )
description: The user summons the sword using a seal on one of his harms.It's name comes from its ability to absorb and control water to make it's reach greater with a water blade, as well as release the water like a pressure gun .This sword looks like sasuke's sword of kusanagi, and its blade can be divided to make a V like form where the captured water with chakra is able to produce a shield.
(note:3 times per battle)
(note:weak against lightning from a enemy mainly when in defense mode )


~Declined~ please give a better description about the sword and its abilities

Name:Fuuton: Kaiten(Wind Release: Rotation)
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu copies the hyuuga's kaiten(Rotation)using wind to replace the chakra control.By spinning and releasing wind chakra from his hands while moving them up and down the user is able to create a wind variation of the hyuuga's kaiten.
(note:weak against fire)
(note: if used with water around it becomes resistent to lower level fire)
(note:can be used 4 times per battle)
(note: this can be shaped from a replica of kaiten to a simple hurrican)
~Approved~ but i changed the amount of usage times

Name: Shitsumei mune mo-do (Dying Will Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +10(to any ninjutsu or taijutsu performed)
Description: The user enter's a close death state for a split second, stopping chakra flow completely and then unleashing it all at once giving him greater strength ,speed and making his jutsu much more efficient due to having much more chakra concentrated.The user's appearance changes as well getting a more menacing look with a small flame of chakra coming from his forehead.
The draw backs of this jutsu are that the user becomes more aggresive, and after its use he losses 30 chakra.
(note:the effects last for 3 turns)
(note:can be used 3 times per battle)
(note: only Vergil.. can teach this jutsu )
just had to try lol: (note: the user becomes almost as fast as a 1st gate user)
~Declined~ the definition of OP
Summoning: Rain Sword (Kuchiyose: Ame Katana )
rank: S
type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
range: short-mid
chakra: 40
damage: 80/40(when hit by water blade/hit by pressure gun )
description: The user summons the sword using a seal on one of his harms.It's name comes from its ability to absorb and control water to make it's reach greater with a water blade, as well as release the water like a pressure gun.The sword attract's water by using the users chakra plus his knowledge in rain jutsu, then it absorbs water using a special seal printed in it that transpors the water back and foward to a hidden cave. This sword looks like sasuke's sword of kusanagi, and its blade can be divided to make a V like form where the captured water with chakra is able to produce a shield by summoning it .
(note:3 times per battle)
(note:weak against lightning from a enemy mainly when in defense mode )

how is it now? and i have rain element
~Approved~

I knew i was pushing it with the Dying Will Mode lol
what could i do to get it approved(cut down the 1st gate bit first right)
because its already a bit dangerous due to i having to be in a death like state to activate it or should i make it one turn to activate?
then the loss of 30 chakra i can make it 60 chakra plus make it S ranked jutsu or a Forbidden
I suggest talking to someone like Kaito and/or someone with knowledge about extreme chakra control, because if you mess this jutsu up, you die
 
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summoning technique, wyverns (Kuchiyose Jutsu: Wyvern)
Type: supplementary
Rank:A
Range:short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user summons Grenda the leader of all wyverns by signing the contract of the wyverns in blood the user is able to summon Grenda the king wyvern to aid the user in battle. Grenda is a fire wyverns that shoots out giant fireballs at the opponent Grenda can also do fire jutsus up to A rank without aid. He also has the ability to fly and do wind jutsu but only up to B rank.
(Note: can only be taught by chago)
(Note: must have sign the wyvern contract in blood)
(Note: summoning last 2 turns)
Have Rei recheck this for now
Wind Release: White Wolf Charge (Fuuton: howaido ookami denka)
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates his/her chakra to create a wind shaped wolf the wolf will have a white aura around it do to the dense and heavy concentrated chakra around it the wolf is able to be guided and controlled by the user and moves in heavy speeds that only the byakugan and the sharingan could keep up if the opponent comes in contact with the wolf or hit by it he/she will be rip to shreds.
(note: can only be taught by chago)
(note: while the jutsu is being used the user cannot move do to the control of the wolf)
(Restriction: The wolf can be destroyed by a A rank or higher Fire jutsu)
(Restriction: The wolf could not go within a 5 mile radius form the user)
(Restriction: The wolf only last 2 turns)

~Declined~ Add restrictions
I have edited the jutsu
 

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(Howaito chiita Kuchyose) white cheetah Summoning
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a contract that will allow him to some different and very powerful White cheetah with incredible speeds them being the fast land animal in the world.




(Howaito chiita Kuchyose: Chikita) white cheetah Summoning: HARUKO

Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summoning s Haruko is a normal sized cheetah with very quick speeds Haruko can easily dodge the human eyes if you was to take your eye off of him for a second he could easily sneak up on you. Haruko carries a black blade in his mouth; he is able to perform fire jutsus from (D to C) nothing but blasting fire attacks though.




~Approved~ Make sure you add your White Cheetah's to the summons list that Rei has been compiling
 
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Summoning Animal: Moles
Contract (Scroll Owner): Iseris...
Users who have signed contract: n/A
Summoning Boss:

terra-dan: Mole queen

(Kuchiyose: bouhatei kouhi terra-dan)- Summoning: Mole queen terra dan
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a blood covered palm to the ground summoning rin. the mole queen is considerably smaller than medium sized summons. standing at most 7 feet tall. fin is most adept in water and earth release. her specialty however is poison. as most mole have poisonous saliva rin has matered forceful secretion of potent toxins. she is also a star nose mole. her nose assists in burrowing as each piece of star is coated in aged and hardened earth.

Note: can only be summoned once per battle

~ Declined ; no poisons except for med students or puppeteers. Also restrict it further ~

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

cloud of darkness

(Kuchiyose: kumo no hacchu) summoning: cloud of darkness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a blood covered palm to the ground summoning cloud of darkness. he stands about 5 feet tall and his body length is about 6 feet in total. he has an additional set of forelegs for increased agility. he is not built for endurance but is a speed demon. he is a arrow nosed mole, and the arrow can also be used as a weapon. the arrow extends 2 feet from his snout. he was given his name from his jet black fur, and his ability to build small dust screens around him as he travels

Note: can only be summoned once per battle
Note: can only maintain dust screens for 3 turns

~ Add restrictions ~

water release(naibuteki jiten sou mizu bougyo): internal revolving layered water barrier
Type: Defensive/ offensive
Range: Short
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+ 40 if the opponent comes into contact)
Description: the user creates an orb of water around themselves like a dome. they then compress the water until it is highly compressed and is like a metal in terms of density. the dome is built in three close layers. the layers are serrated and mulch anything that has an impact with them. the second and third layers spin in reverse of each other the dome grinds objects that collide with it to a pulp with its layers.

Note: requires water source
Note: can only be taught by iseris...

~ Add restrictions ~

(suiton:kondensu mizu kirikae) condensed water conversion
Type: supplementary
Range: n/a
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: + 20 to water type ninjutsu
Description: the user manipulates their water chakra in a way that makes water ninjutsu heavier and more compact. (almost like a fluid metal) water techniques are smaller in size but have much more destructive power than usual.

Note: lasts 4 turns
Note: No water techs for 2 Turns afterwards.
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...
Note: has no effect on water techs that create A water source

~ Declined. Unrealistic. Please DO NOT submit this technique again for consideration ~

suiton:(suibotsu shi-ku) water style submersive seeker
Type: offensive
Range: Short - long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: after performing the required seals the users sprays a torrent of water from their mouth at the ground. the water takes the form of a mole with a drill on its head and burrows under ground guided by the user. when under the opponent the mole reverts back into water and its body becomes an onslaught of water spikes that impale the opponent from below



the drill is somewhat like this. a smaller and less powerful version.
(Suiton: Koukasuijin) - Water Style: Hard Water Spike
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user generates a huge, highly condensed spike of water around their arm that drills opponents into the ground (No water source required).

is it not possible for earth to be drilled into if god slicer can cut rocks, and earth is softer than rock.

~ The jutsu in the spoiler drills opponents into the ground, yours drills the ground. Declined. DO NOT submit this again ~




:mad: not over the limit ive had to submit the same customs twice cause they kept getting over looked

~ Resubmission of jutsus means that they are counted as new submissions ~
 
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(Buki : Katana No Shunshuu) Weapon : Blade Of The Prodigy
Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A (Meelee Damage - 60)
Description : Blade Of The Prodigy Is A Special Blade Created By Ben Uchiha. The Blade Is Extremely Adapted To Lightning Chakra.The Blade Is Made Of An Unknown Mineral That Is Black, But Is Very Light And Cuts Like Steel.
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Blade
Note : Kenjutsu And Other Blade Techniques Are Three Times Faster Then With Regular Weapons Due To The Light Weight Of The Blade
Note : Blade Can Be Unsheathed Only Once Per Battle.
~Declined~ slightly better description please
(Kenjutsu : Oujou Dageki) : Blade Art : Death Blow
Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : Using His Speed The User Quickly Positions His Blade In A Stab Position And Moves To His Opponent In Extremely Fast Speed And Having His Blade Positioned In Stab Position He Stabs The Opponent Before He Can React, This Jutsu Is Almost Untrackable Unless The Opponent Has Sharingan.
Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Technique
Note : Usable Only Twice Per Battle
~Approved~
(Doton : Toraberingu Tsuchi Gosunkugi) Earth Style : Travelling Earth Spikes
Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Defensive
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 30 (for making 5 spikes, +5 for every extra spike)
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Forms Multiple Spikes Out Of Earth Near Him And Then Uses His Chakra To Move Them Around The Terrain, The Spikes Can Be Used For Both Offense And Defense.[/SPOILER
~Declined~ better description
 
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Sumiton: Sumi Shinsui (Ink Release: Ink Flood)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (if it hits Opponent)
Description: Kirabi Releases a Massive Amount Of Ink That Can be Used as a basis for other Ink Jutsu. The Ink's Sticky Quality Causes the opponents movements to be slowed.
(Only one other jutsu may be used the turn this is activated)
(Usable Once Per battle)
Sumiton: Sumi Kiri (Ink Release: Ink Mist)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage (-10 To opponent per turn)
Description: Kirabi Release Ink in a mist form that causes the area to go pitch black and irritate the opponents eyes and smell.
(No other ink this turn)
(Last 3turns)
(Usable 2times per battle)
Sumiton: Sumi Tako Hoko (Ink Release: Ink Octopus Tentacles)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplmentary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Kirabi manipulates Ink into eight octopus tentacles that grab the opponent and can keep him from moving or hit the opponent.
(If used with Ink Flood, Tentacles can Regenerate)
(Last 3 Turns as long as there is a source of ink)
(Usable Twice)
Raiton Kenjutsu: Ragunaroku (Lightning Sword Art: Ragnaroc)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: 120 (-30 to user as they will be caught in the blast slightly)
Description: The User Begins with a Short Aerial Combo, that slashes away at the target hitting them to the ground. Then Using Lightning Chakra. They fire multiple bolts of lightning that explode on contact.
(No Lightning 2turns afterwards)
Raiton/Genjutsu: Za Ketteiteki Kauntodaun [Lightning/Illusion Release: The Final Countdown]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: N/A
Chakra| 80
Damage: 160 (-50 to user)
Description: The user pours most of the raiton he can spare and then by clasping his hands tattoos hidden under the skin turn a bright yellow, this catches the opponents in a genjutsu that then causes them to believe two things, Time has slowed and they no longer have movement within there body keeping them in place and if they do they move realtively slow. this jutsu may be used to release the user from a genjutsu they may be in or be used as a self defense mechanism if the opponent is in a lest resort situation. During this time the user will complete a string of seals that then creates a small but extremely potent lightning spark -that appears bright white as all of the power is contained in this spark- then by touching the opponent with this spark they are released from the genjutsu, but an agonizing pain is erupting over them as the lightning starts to attack the nerves of the opponent rendering body parts unusable. After three turns the opponents whole body system shuts down. and the last of the spark explodes the heart. this spark also causes the user arm to become useless as his nerves are destroyed within.
(Usable Once)
(No Elemental Ninjutsu Usable after use above C-Rank)
(No Jutsu that Require handseals usable rest of battle)
(No Lightning Rest of Battle)
(Last 3 Turns)
You submited on Monday the 18th and then again on the 19th, no where does that begin a new week. Stop trying to circumvent the rules!
New Week New Submission
 
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(Raiton: dendou enchou) Lightning Release:Electric Dome

Type:Attack/Defence
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:60
Description:The user charges a massive amount of lightning chakra and conertrates the lightning into a large dome.while in the electric dome the user can choose to disrupt the chakra therefore if the adversary is nearby it will injure them or the user can protect itself from certain attacks.
*Can only be used twice in battle*

*Anbu578 can only train this jutsu
~Declined~ explain more about the effects of the jutsu
 
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Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User summons up to 5 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at incredible speeds, for they are none other as Tigrerra's elite assassin squad, “The Demon Tigers.” They have great offensive power which includes razor sharp claws and teeth which can rip through flesh and trees in an instant, and an onyx defensive armor that has spikes everywhere on it even on their tails. The offensive power is in their claws and teeth, and the defensive power is their armor that has spikes all over it that impales most skins unless crushed by something such as an electrical aura like Chidori forms around hands when used.
Can only be used once per battle.

Devil White Tiger Trosaduk Summoning
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 to user per turn he is on the field.)
Damage Points: 100
Description: A summoning of a huge shining snow-white tiger that is the size of Tigrerra who was sealed for an eternity in a cave for his demonic abilities. He is about as powerful as Tigrerra herself because of his massively huge claws and great speed. He wears a platinum armor that doesn’t slow him at all that is comparable to Tigrerra’s battle armor. Due to the user breaking the seal that holds him in the cave, he slowly drains the user’s chakra for every turn he is summoned.
And now for the long explanation of his demonic abilities…During the early years of Tigrerra’s reign, there was one white tiger who believed Tigrerra was incapable of handling the kingdom. That tiger was Trosaduk. Trosaduk defied Tigrerra, continuously stating that he should lead whereas Tigrerra should not. Tigrerra and Trosaduk brawled afterwards, and Trosaduk lost the fierce brawl. Trosaduk left Tigrerra’s kingdom, and learned of a witch doctor who could give anyone their deepest desires. Trosaduk went to visit the witch doctor, and explained his greatest desire to him. The witch doctor gave Trosaduk what he wanted, demonic abilities he could use against Tigrerra and bring her reign to an early end. These demonic abilities included the ability to make shadow copies of himself, and his platinum armor, which does not slow him down even at top speed. Trosaduk raised an army to bring Tigrerra’s reign to a close, and then struck. It was a fierce war, with many casualties on both sides. It came down to the rematch of Tigrerra and Trosaduk atop a mountain. This time the match didn’t end as quickly as the last time. They brawled for weeks on end, until Trosaduk fell to his feet, and Tigrerra’s ministers sealed him into a cave for an eternity, never to be seen again, until someone broke the seal and summoned him into the battlefield.
Abilities:
Shadow copies of himself made by using the user’s chakra (that’s where the -20 per turn to user comes into play)
A platinum armor that drains energy (opponent’s chakra) whenever it is touched (again this is where the -20 per turn to user comes into play), and doesn’t slow him down even when at top speed which is about 100 mph.
-Can only be used once per battle
-He can only stay on the field for a maximum of 5 turns.
 

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Just FYI, all Eye KG's will no longer be allowed to create customs eye attacks. so no more Sharingan eye jutsus and no byakugan eye jutsus's

If you have KG like Ice, Lava or Kaguya then you can continue to submit CJ for them
 

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(Hyouton: Te Takai) Ice Release : Hands Of Death

Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user sends a huge amount of his ice through the ground toward his enemy, and then with huge concentration, the user lets his chakra release in the shape of multiple hands that are even stronger then Haku's ice, and it catches the enemy from more than one angle out of the ground. It then squeezes over the enemy and make major damage and imprisons the enemy as well as making them unable to do any hand seals.

- can only be used twice per battle
- +20 if used to make it chase the opponent by regenerating hands out of the hands that come out of the ground like a tree of hands
- the user can't use any ice jutsu in the same turn.
~Declined~ OP, redo the description
 
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(Musei Jumon) - Silent Spell

Type: Passive
Rank: B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:25
Description: This techique, allows the user to do moves/jutsus silently, and without the knowledge of the enemy. The user makes the handsigns for the needed jutsu, but he doesn't need to say the name of the jutsu. This is an ability, and must be posted before battle. It costs 25 chakra only the first time when you post it, and not +25 every jutsu you make.
*Note:It can only be used by Nadare.*

(Kumo Ken: Suyurasu) - Spider Sword: Fierce Swing

Type:Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: Kidōmaru expels Spider Sticky Gold from his mouth and gathers it to form a large sword. The perfect lines and the sharpness are very clear. The effect made on the enemy seeing this sword is stunning. The user can use this sword as a normal, sword, and use normal sword techinques with it.
*Note: Can only be used by Kidōmaru.*

(Genjutsu:Nibai Shoken) - Genjutsu: Double View


Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user gathers in his mind, and whole body. This genjutsu is not cast on the enemy, but on the user himself. He uses the chakra he gathered around him, to put the whole view the enemy has, 1m to the left. This means the enemy sees the user 1m left to where he actually stands. This jutsu cannot be disrupted by Kai, since it's casted on the user.
*Note: Can only be used once*
*Note: Can only be used by Nadare*
*Note: This lasts 3 turns. It last more, only if the enemy is so dumb to not realise what's going on.*
 
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Earth Arrow, Tsuchi Ya
Type: Attack
Rank:C
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user sends some chakra into the earth and molds it into a arrow shape. Once made the arrow can then travel towards the opponent at high speeds, and can cut and injure the opponent. This jutsu can also be used to make several arrows at once.

~ Declined, jutsu exists ~
 
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