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Custom Jutsu Submission
Eagle:Giant Fury-eagle giant furyType:Attack/Defense
Range:Long/Short
Rank:S
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:an eagle that is the size of gamabunta that when he swings his wings its almost impossible for the opponent to hold is footing he is a master of wind techniques and can use any wind technique any wind element technique he uses comes out 1 rank higher then original C-B,B-A
*one of the most powerful summons in the eagle contract
earth style:Grand maze-地球のスタイル：グランド迷路
Type: Defence
Range:Long
Rank:S
Chakra:45
damage:90
Description:the user forces earth below them to level and create a huge maze that the user can hide,the walls of the maze run with the users chakra in them which enables the user to sense the opponent in the maze
*usable once
*user cannot use earth jutsus for the next 2 turns
Water style:Masters puppetry-水スタイル：マスターズ人形
Type:Attack
Range:Long/Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:A water jutsu that sends out hundreds of water based strings into the field that are very tiny that are invisible to the naked eye the opponent wont be able to use water based
*note this is not actual puppetry
Wind Style:Imperial Gust-風のスタイル：インペリアル突風
Type:Attack
Range:Short/Long
Rank:Forbidden
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:the user makes the hand signs and creates a huge ball of wind that is full of gushing wind and cutting wind waves of pure wind chakra that makes it extra dangerous the shape of this jutsu is like a giant ball of bright light that the user holds with his both hands into the air and attacks the enemy
*after using it the user cannot use wind techniques for 4 turns the reason is the user uses all of his wind reserves for this jutsu and it takes 4 turns to recover
*usable once per battle
*it has the power to level an island
Earth Style:Solid-地球のスタイル：固体
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:the user catches the enemy by his feet or arms and uses this jutsu the opponent will run his earth chakra throw his arm to disbalance the molecule structure of the body part he is holding thus turning the part into stone so the enemy cannot move if his leg is turned to stone and etc.
*lasts 2 turns
*usable 2 times per battle
Custom Jutsu Submission Eagle:Giant Fury-eagle giant furyType:Attack/Defense
Range:Long/Short
Rank:S
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:an eagle that is the size of gamabunta that when he swings his wings its almost impossible for the opponent to hold is footing he is a master of wind techniques and can use any wind technique any wind element technique he uses comes out 1 rank higher then original C-B,B-A
*one of the most powerful summons in the eagle contract
earth style:Grand maze-地球のスタイル：グランド迷路
Type: Defence
Range:Long
Rank:S
Chakra:45
damage:90
Description:the user forces earth below them to level and create a huge maze that the user can hide,the walls of the maze run with the users chakra in them which enables the user to sense the opponent in the maze
*usable once
*user cannot use earth jutsus for the next 2 turns
Water style:Masters puppetry-水スタイル：マスターズ人形
Type:Attack
Range:Long/Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:A water jutsu that sends out hundreds of water based strings into the field that are very tiny that are invisible to the naked eye the opponent wont be able to use water based
*note this is not actual puppetry
Wind Style:Imperial Gust-風のスタイル：インペリアル突風
Type:Attack
Range:Short/Long
Rank:Forbidden
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:the user makes the hand signs and creates a huge ball of wind that is full of gushing wind and cutting wind waves of pure wind chakra that makes it extra dangerous the shape of this jutsu is like a giant ball of bright light that the user holds with his both hands into the air and attacks the enemy
*after using it the user cannot use wind techniques for 4 turns the reason is the user uses all of his wind reserves for this jutsu and it takes 4 turns to recover
*usable once per battle
*it has the power to level an island
Earth Style:Solid-地球のスタイル：固体
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:the user catches the enemy by his feet or arms and uses this jutsu the opponent will run his earth chakra throw his arm to disbalance the molecule structure of the body part he is holding thus turning the part into stone so the enemy cannot move if his leg is turned to stone and etc.
*lasts 2 turns
*usable 2 times per battle
Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Hyōton: Sennen Hyōrō) - Ice Release: Thousand Years' Ice Prison
-Declined- Already made (all of Toshiro's techniques in fact) by Zanji 
Custom Jutsu Submission (Hyōton: Sennen Hyōrō) - Ice Release: Thousand Years' Ice Prison
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user does the hand seals and then multiple circles made of chakra will appear on the ground, by the entire field, including beneath the opponent. Those circles freeze the ground and then they start to grow, turning into huge ice pillars that freeze everything that is inside of them. Can only be used twice per battle.
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user does the hand seals and then multiple circles made of chakra will appear on the ground, by the entire field, including beneath the opponent. Those circles freeze the ground and then they start to grow, turning into huge ice pillars that freeze everything that is inside of them. Can only be used twice per battle.
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(Taijutsu:Kujiku Inpakuto)-Taijutsu: Crushing Impact
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user grabs the opponent and body slams him or her into the ground. Then the user jumps 10 meters into the air and elbow drops the person laying on the ground. before the user reaches the 5 meter mark when he/she is falling down the user adds a massive amount of lightning chakra all around their body making them fall faster and have a harder impact when they land on their opponent.
Restrictions:
-Can only Be used 3 times per battle
-May only be used by ~Minato~
~ Approved ~
Custom Jutsu Submission (Taijutsu:Kujiku Inpakuto)-Taijutsu: Crushing Impact
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user grabs the opponent and body slams him or her into the ground. Then the user jumps 10 meters into the air and elbow drops the person laying on the ground. before the user reaches the 5 meter mark when he/she is falling down the user adds a massive amount of lightning chakra all around their body making them fall faster and have a harder impact when they land on their opponent.
Restrictions:
-Can only Be used 3 times per battle
-May only be used by ~Minato~
~ Approved ~
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(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion, this attacks power is equivalent to one of Tsunade's punches.
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: can only be used 3 times per battle
Custom Jutsu Submission (Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion, this attacks power is equivalent to one of Tsunade's punches.
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: can only be used 3 times per battle
Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
No, it doesn't have any unique abilities that would make it OP. I think that it's powerful right now with Shield, Blade and daggers
~Approved~ Thats all i needed to hear
Custom Jutsu Submission Reply to clock:
( Kuchiyose: Tokei ken ) Summoning jutsu: Clock Blade
Type: Supplementary - Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 per every turn when activated )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User makes followed handseals after biting thumb and summons Clock blade of Aeon the Time guardian. When user activates the blade the pointers will turn ( Other points nine as other points three ) forming blade and handle.
Note:
- The clock works as Shield plus it has removable daggers.
- Only myartisablast is able to teach this jutsu
- Clock counts as unique sword
- Costs 5 chakra per every turn when activated
Type: Supplementary - Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 per every turn when activated )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User makes followed handseals after biting thumb and summons Clock blade of Aeon the Time guardian. When user activates the blade the pointers will turn ( Other points nine as other points three ) forming blade and handle.
Note:
- The clock works as Shield plus it has removable daggers.
- Only myartisablast is able to teach this jutsu
- Clock counts as unique sword
- Costs 5 chakra per every turn when activated
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No, it doesn't have any unique abilities that would make it OP. I think that it's powerful right now with Shield, Blade and daggers
~Approved~ Thats all i needed to hear
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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
*kicks a rock and hits a random member*
(Hyōton: Chiaisu Yari) - Ice Release: Thousand Spears of Ice
(Hyōton: Yuuenaisu Hashira) - Ice Release: Grand Ice Pillars
(Hyōton: Chiyuki Hakuhen Nagashi) - Ice Release: One Thousand Snow Flakes Current
(Hyōton: Shimofurui Modo) - Ice Release: Ancient Frost Mode
(Hyōton Hijutsu: Furui Doragon Shiro Nadare) - Secret Ice Release: Avalanche of the Ancient White Dragons
Custom Jutsu Submission Stupid Zanji >.<(Hyōton: Sennen Hyōrō) - Ice Release: Thousand Years' Ice Prison
-Declined- Already made (all of Toshiro's techniques in fact) by ZanjiRank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user does the hand seals and then multiple circles made of chakra will appear on the ground, by the entire field, including beneath the opponent. Those circles freeze the ground and then they start to grow, turning into huge ice pillars that freeze everything that is inside of them. Can only be used twice per battle.
*kicks a rock and hits a random member*
(Hyōton: Chiaisu Yari) - Ice Release: Thousand Spears of Ice
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes the hand seals and places his hand on something made of ice (mirrors, walls, etc) while expanding his chakra through the field, then, thousands of ice spears appear from wherever ice is and are shoot forwards. As the spears appear from wherever ice is, they can disappear also by being absorbed by the ice source and being shoot to another direction. This jutsu has a resonable duration (more or less one whole turn). Can only be used twice.
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes the hand seals and places his hand on something made of ice (mirrors, walls, etc) while expanding his chakra through the field, then, thousands of ice spears appear from wherever ice is and are shoot forwards. As the spears appear from wherever ice is, they can disappear also by being absorbed by the ice source and being shoot to another direction. This jutsu has a resonable duration (more or less one whole turn). Can only be used twice.
(Hyōton: Yuuenaisu Hashira) - Ice Release: Grand Ice Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: The user slams his foot on the ground and thousands of ice pillars appear by all the field. If used on a water based terrain, the water where the opponent and user stand on freezes. This jutsu makes the opponent desorientated since they see the image of themselves on the pillars and can't see the user. Useable 3 times per battle.
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: The user slams his foot on the ground and thousands of ice pillars appear by all the field. If used on a water based terrain, the water where the opponent and user stand on freezes. This jutsu makes the opponent desorientated since they see the image of themselves on the pillars and can't see the user. Useable 3 times per battle.
(Hyōton: Chiyuki Hakuhen Nagashi) - Ice Release: One Thousand Snow Flakes Current
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do a chidori nagashi and at the same time mix it with his Hyōton chakra. This will shock and freeze anything in short range. It's often used as a counter against water and wind jutsus (freezes them). Twice per battle.
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do a chidori nagashi and at the same time mix it with his Hyōton chakra. This will shock and freeze anything in short range. It's often used as a counter against water and wind jutsus (freezes them). Twice per battle.
(Hyōton: Shimofurui Modo) - Ice Release: Ancient Frost Mode
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will do a row of hand seals and will unlock all of his Hyōton chakra, thus, allowing him to use the Secret Ice Jutsus of the ancient ice user's. A blue aura will surround the user and he leaves a cold essence wherever he passes. All Hyōton jutsus have double the damage. But this jutsu comes with the drawback that the user can only use Hyōton jutsus while on this mode. Lasts 6 turns and can only be used once per battle. After the last turn, the user has his water and wind elements sealed, therefore he also cannot use any Hyōton jutsus and his chakra reserves are only left at 25% (so he cannot anymore forbidden jutsu).
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will do a row of hand seals and will unlock all of his Hyōton chakra, thus, allowing him to use the Secret Ice Jutsus of the ancient ice user's. A blue aura will surround the user and he leaves a cold essence wherever he passes. All Hyōton jutsus have double the damage. But this jutsu comes with the drawback that the user can only use Hyōton jutsus while on this mode. Lasts 6 turns and can only be used once per battle. After the last turn, the user has his water and wind elements sealed, therefore he also cannot use any Hyōton jutsus and his chakra reserves are only left at 25% (so he cannot anymore forbidden jutsu).
(Hyōton Hijutsu: Furui Doragon Shiro Nadare) - Secret Ice Release: Avalanche of the Ancient White Dragons
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do the hand seals, cut/bite his thumb to make it bleed and will place his hand on the ground, then the air on the terrain will suddenly freeze, negating any water or wind jutsu (will freeze) up to S-rank. Tons of giant white dragons made of ice and snow will appear from both sides of the opponent, from left and right or in front and behind, with a crescent wave form, crushing and freezing anything on its path. The terrain will be left with lots of ice and snow. This jutsu can only be used twice per battle, causes 15 damage to user, must be on Ancient Frost Mode and after usage, the user's ancient mode is reduced by one turn.
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do the hand seals, cut/bite his thumb to make it bleed and will place his hand on the ground, then the air on the terrain will suddenly freeze, negating any water or wind jutsu (will freeze) up to S-rank. Tons of giant white dragons made of ice and snow will appear from both sides of the opponent, from left and right or in front and behind, with a crescent wave form, crushing and freezing anything on its path. The terrain will be left with lots of ice and snow. This jutsu can only be used twice per battle, causes 15 damage to user, must be on Ancient Frost Mode and after usage, the user's ancient mode is reduced by one turn.
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Summoning Technique, Monkeys, ( Kuchiyose Jutsu, Seiyuuki)
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons Hiruka, the monkey king. Hiruka is able to manipulate the earth and make useful weapons out of them and use it to the users advantage. Hiruka can also use earth jutsus till C-rank by himself without no need of anyone else. The user can also summon a bunch of monkeys who will all simultaneously attack the opponent with their long and sharp claws from all around them, and all monkeys have super hearing allowing them to detect the opponent if hidden.
~Declined~ Enma is the Monkey King in the Manga and so far only The Third Hokage has the ability to summon monkies
Custom Jutsu Submission Summoning Technique, Monkeys, ( Kuchiyose Jutsu, Seiyuuki)
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons Hiruka, the monkey king. Hiruka is able to manipulate the earth and make useful weapons out of them and use it to the users advantage. Hiruka can also use earth jutsus till C-rank by himself without no need of anyone else. The user can also summon a bunch of monkeys who will all simultaneously attack the opponent with their long and sharp claws from all around them, and all monkeys have super hearing allowing them to detect the opponent if hidden.
~Declined~ Enma is the Monkey King in the Manga and so far only The Third Hokage has the ability to summon monkies
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rank: S
type: Defense/ Supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: --
description: The user summons a giant Iron Snake made of the same alloy as the Rashomon Gates,but with 3 times the defensive power. This can be summoned in three different forms(snake dome, snake wall and snake pillar ) each for a different type of defense.
(note:3 times per battle)
(note:it can withstand any attack that the 3 rashomon gates together can )
(note:Can only be used in one form at a time)
(note:It can be broken by rasengan derived jutsu, raikiri and melted by lava, or after being frozen )
how about like this?
if not how about i make it a forbidden rank
~Approved~
Custom Jutsu Submission Summoning: Iron Snake (Kuchiyose: Airon Hebi )
rank: S
type: Defense/ Supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: --
description: The user summons a giant Iron Snake made of the same alloy as the Rashomon Gates,but with 3 times the defensive power. This can be summoned in three different forms(snake dome, snake wall and snake pillar ) each for a different type of defense.
(note:3 times per battle)
(note:it can withstand any attack that the 3 rashomon gates together can )
(note:Can only be used in one form at a time)
(note:It can be broken by rasengan derived jutsu, raikiri and melted by lava, or after being frozen )
how about like this?
if not how about i make it a forbidden rank
~Approved~
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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Rank-A
Type-Offense/Defense
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
After user performs the needed seals(4) The user shoots a giant water bullet that explodes into a giant cloud after shot into the air, producing three mist dragons, able to defend against fire attacks by condensing and creating water walls. (Defends against A rank and below fire attacks). When created they can be controlled by the user.
*Can Only be taught by Icemyster*
(akumu keimusho ikazuchi baito) Nightmare Prison Thunder Bite
Rank-S
Type-Offense
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Descritption-
the user builds up raiton in their mouth(much like a chidori except the raiton chakra is in the mouth), Then opens his mouth, releasing the raiton that then takes the form of a giant set of teeth that stay connected to the users mouth and lauch towards the opponent, and once the user closes his mouth the teeth close down on the opponent, causing paralysis.
*Can only be used twice.*
(yochi haru) Earth Spring
Rank-A
Range-Short-Long
Type-Defensive/Supplementary
Cost-30
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user manipulates the earth with his chakra beneath him or his opponent by stomping, sending his chakra through the ground causing who ever the justu is used on to be propelled rapidly through the air in the direction of the users choice.
(hibiki kaihounsei inmetsu)Sound Release: Voice of Destruction
Rank-S
Range-Short/Long
Type-Defensive
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user begins singing, emitting sound waves combined with chakra, that matches the frequency of the surrounding earth(domes, pillars, etc) causing the earth to crumble.
*Can be used only twice per battle*
*Can only Be Taught By Icemyster or with permission of the aforementioned*
Summoning Technique: Doku Moth Tyrant (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ga kokuou Doku)
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description:after doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, the user will press their hand to the ground summoning Doku, the moth tyrant. doku is a scarlet bodied wasp moth. he is capable of forcefully spraying acidic poisons form his antennas. Because of his giant wings he is capable of using wind techniques up to the level of the user.
Summoning Animal: Giant Moth
Scroll Owner: Icemyster
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing: Doku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Please read this before deciding(on the summon)-
Although butterflies and moths are very similar, they have many differences. Most butterflies fly during the day, and most moths fly during the night. The best way to identify a butterfly from a moth is to look at its antenna. A butterfly's antenna have knobs at the ends of their feelers, and the ends of the moth's antenna is either feather like or plain. Most butterflies rest with their wings held up above their bodies and most moths rest with their wings spread out flat. Typically butterflies have brightly colored wings and moths have dull colored wings. Most butterflies have slender, hairless bodies, while most moths have a fat abdomen and furry bodies. Butterflies form a chrysalis during the pupa stage of their lives. In moths, the chrysalis is normally contained inside a cocoon. Most moths have tiny hook or bristle hooking the forewings and hind wings together. Butterflies do not have this hook. Moths have existed about 100 million years longer than butterflies. So although butterflies and moths appear very much alike, there are quite a number of differences.
Custom Jutsu Submission (hi misuto doragon) Light Mist Dragon
Rank-A
Type-Offense/Defense
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
After user performs the needed seals(4) The user shoots a giant water bullet that explodes into a giant cloud after shot into the air, producing three mist dragons, able to defend against fire attacks by condensing and creating water walls. (Defends against A rank and below fire attacks). When created they can be controlled by the user.
*Can Only be taught by Icemyster*
(akumu keimusho ikazuchi baito) Nightmare Prison Thunder Bite
Rank-S
Type-Offense
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Descritption-
the user builds up raiton in their mouth(much like a chidori except the raiton chakra is in the mouth), Then opens his mouth, releasing the raiton that then takes the form of a giant set of teeth that stay connected to the users mouth and lauch towards the opponent, and once the user closes his mouth the teeth close down on the opponent, causing paralysis.
*Can only be used twice.*
(yochi haru) Earth Spring
Rank-A
Range-Short-Long
Type-Defensive/Supplementary
Cost-30
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user manipulates the earth with his chakra beneath him or his opponent by stomping, sending his chakra through the ground causing who ever the justu is used on to be propelled rapidly through the air in the direction of the users choice.
(hibiki kaihou
nsei inmetsu)Sound Release: Voice of Destruction Rank-S
Range-Short/Long
Type-Defensive
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user begins singing, emitting sound waves combined with chakra, that matches the frequency of the surrounding earth(domes, pillars, etc) causing the earth to crumble.
*Can be used only twice per battle*
*Can only Be Taught By Icemyster or with permission of the aforementioned*
Summoning Technique: Doku Moth Tyrant (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ga kokuou Doku)
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description:after doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, the user will press their hand to the ground summoning Doku, the moth tyrant. doku is a scarlet bodied wasp moth. he is capable of forcefully spraying acidic poisons form his antennas. Because of his giant wings he is capable of using wind techniques up to the level of the user.
Summoning Animal: Giant Moth
Scroll Owner: Icemyster
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing: Doku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Please read this before deciding(on the summon)-
Although butterflies and moths are very similar, they have many differences. Most butterflies fly during the day, and most moths fly during the night. The best way to identify a butterfly from a moth is to look at its antenna. A butterfly's antenna have knobs at the ends of their feelers, and the ends of the moth's antenna is either feather like or plain. Most butterflies rest with their wings held up above their bodies and most moths rest with their wings spread out flat. Typically butterflies have brightly colored wings and moths have dull colored wings. Most butterflies have slender, hairless bodies, while most moths have a fat abdomen and furry bodies. Butterflies form a chrysalis during the pupa stage of their lives. In moths, the chrysalis is normally contained inside a cocoon. Most moths have tiny hook or bristle hooking the forewings and hind wings together. Butterflies do not have this hook. Moths have existed about 100 million years longer than butterflies. So although butterflies and moths appear very much alike, there are quite a number of differences.
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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is Kakashi's alternative verison of the Uchiha's Amaterasu. Unlike the Amaterasu, the color of this flame is white and only burns for several hours. Can only be put out if converged by a huge body of water of higher rank.
Note: Burns for one turn
Note: Must have Kakashi's Mangekyou Sharingan
Note: Can only be used once
Note: -45 chakra to the user
Took out the "Unblockable" part
~Declined~ Can't make techniques for KG
Water Style: Hydro Pump (Suition: Haidoro Panpu)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins to gather water chakra within their chakra until they can't hold any more. Once the user gathers enough water chakra, he/she then lets out a huge force of water from the mouth which is shot off at the opponent. The speed and force is so tremendous that it can tear a hole or crater on almost whatever it hits.
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be use by Anbu Kakashi
~Declined~ Add some sort of range to the attack, sorry i thought i had put that down the first time but i guess i didn't
Resubmitting; didn't think there was anything wrong with it, seems reasonable
Custom Jutsu Submission Doujutsu: Kuroheru (Eye Technique: Dark Hell)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is Kakashi's alternative verison of the Uchiha's Amaterasu. Unlike the Amaterasu, the color of this flame is white and only burns for several hours. Can only be put out if converged by a huge body of water of higher rank.
Note: Burns for one turn
Note: Must have Kakashi's Mangekyou Sharingan
Note: Can only be used once
Note: -45 chakra to the user
Took out the "Unblockable" part
~Declined~ Can't make techniques for KG
Water Style: Hydro Pump (Suition: Haidoro Panpu)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user begins to gather water chakra within their chakra until they can't hold any more. Once the user gathers enough water chakra, he/she then lets out a huge force of water from the mouth which is shot off at the opponent. The speed and force is so tremendous that it can tear a hole or crater on almost whatever it hits.
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can only be use by Anbu Kakashi
~Declined~ Add some sort of range to the attack, sorry i thought i had put that down the first time but i guess i didn't
Resubmitting; didn't think there was anything wrong with it, seems reasonable
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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Suiton: Dan'atsu Funsha) - Water Style: Pressure Jet
~Declined~ similar to existing jutsu
Custom Jutsu Submission (Suiton: Dan'atsu Funsha) - Water Style: Pressure Jet
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user concentrates, and focuses his Water Chakra in his gullet. He then puts it under high pressure, and then spits it out as a thin jet. The jet is very thin, and because it was put under high pressure, the Water Jet cuts through objects like butter. It works as a razor.
(A similar jutsu, was used by Pa Toad in the fight "Jiraya vs. Pein")
*Note: Can only be used by experienced water users.*
*Note: After this, the user cannot use any water Jutsu that doesn't need a water source.*
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle.*
Rank:A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user concentrates, and focuses his Water Chakra in his gullet. He then puts it under high pressure, and then spits it out as a thin jet. The jet is very thin, and because it was put under high pressure, the Water Jet cuts through objects like butter. It works as a razor.
(A similar jutsu, was used by Pa Toad in the fight "Jiraya vs. Pein")
*Note: Can only be used by experienced water users.*
*Note: After this, the user cannot use any water Jutsu that doesn't need a water source.*
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle.*
~Declined~ similar to existing jutsu
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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
~Declined~ Too similar to Tsukuyomi
I would really like to create this style of fighting since I was inspired by Kaito's Taijutsu. Please be specific on what can be changed to make it work/approved.
~Declined~ I suggest that you talk to Kaito to get help with this because its really op
Please help me in being able to make this new style of hand to hand combat work. I don't ask for too much, just pointers and maybe what I should edit. >.> I'm riding solo on this project atm.
~Declined~ I won't count these against your weekly total because the main technique/style hasn't been approved
Custom Jutsu Submission ~Declined~ I suggest that you talk to Kaito to get help with this because its really op
Please help me in being able to make this new style of hand to hand combat work. I don't ask for too much, just pointers and maybe what I should edit. >.> I'm riding solo on this project atm.
~Declined~ I won't count these against your weekly total because the main technique/style hasn't been approved
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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A broad and strong sword made out entirely of Black Stone and beautifully decorated with gold. Though it's looks like a heavy sword, it's as light as a feather. As a result its speed is immense and can easily counter incoming attacks.
It has a number of effects:
*The sword is indestructible, though this doesn't mean it can destroy everything*
Custom Jutsu Submission (Kurokunshu) - Dark Monarch
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A broad and strong sword made out entirely of Black Stone and beautifully decorated with gold. Though it's looks like a heavy sword, it's as light as a feather. As a result its speed is immense and can easily counter incoming attacks.
It has a number of effects:
- Gives +20 damage to each wind jutsu of the user
- The opponents wind jutsu's loose -10 damage
- The sword can be infused with wind-chakra. As a result it becomes sharper, but it can also increase the length of the sword, though not much, making its reach a bit greater.
- By swinging the sword the user can send multiple shuriken at the opponent made out of slicing winds. These shuriken can easily be stopped by jutsu's, however they are alot faster then normal shurikens, and are able to slice through normal ones and still continue.
- The sword can also release wind currents that rapidly circle around the blade. These currents are strong enough to slice normal swords.These currents increase the damage when it hits the opponent or just misses the opponent (the currents are moving around the blade).
*The sword is indestructible, though this doesn't mean it can destroy everything*
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Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user will throw needles to the opponent in a direct hit. The victim would come into illusion that his/her whole body?s nerves is going to collapse because of the snakes? venom. His bodies will go numb ? feet and hands ? and the venom is aiming to the heart killing the victim. If the victim cannot get out of the illusion he will be killed because of heart attack and if he can escape of the illusion the victim will get hurt from the needles.
Custom Jutsu Submission (Genjutsu: Kisu Shikyo) Illusion: Kiss of death
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user will throw needles to the opponent in a direct hit. The victim would come into illusion that his/her whole body?s nerves is going to collapse because of the snakes? venom. His bodies will go numb ? feet and hands ? and the venom is aiming to the heart killing the victim. If the victim cannot get out of the illusion he will be killed because of heart attack and if he can escape of the illusion the victim will get hurt from the needles.
Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Summoning: Rain Sword (Kuchiyose: Ame Katana )
rank: S
type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
range: short-mid
chakra: 40
damage: 80/40(when hit by water blade/hit by pressure gun )
description: The user summons the sword using a seal on one of his harms.It's name comes from its ability to absorb and control water to make it's reach greater with a water blade, as well as release the water like a pressure gun .This sword looks like sasuke's sword of kusanagi, and its blade can be divided to make a V like form where the captured water with chakra is able to produce a shield.
(note:3 times per battle)
(note:weak against lightning from a enemy mainly when in defense mode )
~Declined~ please give a better description about the sword and its abilities
Name:Fuuton: Kaiten(Wind Release: Rotation)
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu copies the hyuuga's kaiten(Rotation)using wind to replace the chakra control.By spinning and releasing wind chakra from his hands while moving them up and down the user is able to create a wind variation of the hyuuga's kaiten.
(note:weak against fire)
(note: if used with water around it becomes resistent to lower level fire)
(note:can be used 4 times per battle)
(note: this can be shaped from a replica of kaiten to a simple hurrican)
~Approved~ but i changed the amount of usage times
Name: Shitsumei mune mo-do (Dying Will Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +10(to any ninjutsu or taijutsu performed)
Description: The user enter's a close death state for a split second, stopping chakra flow completely and then unleashing it all at once giving him greater strength ,speed and making his jutsu much more efficient due to having much more chakra concentrated.The user's appearance changes as well getting a more menacing look with a small flame of chakra coming from his forehead.
The draw backs of this jutsu are that the user becomes more aggresive, and after its use he losses 30 chakra.
(note:the effects last for 3 turns)
(note:can be used 3 times per battle)
(note: only Vergil.. can teach this jutsu )
just had to try lol: (note: the user becomes almost as fast as a 1st gate user)
~Declined~ the definition of OP
Custom Jutsu Submission Summoning: Rain Sword (Kuchiyose: Ame Katana )
rank: S
type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
range: short-mid
chakra: 40
damage: 80/40(when hit by water blade/hit by pressure gun )
description: The user summons the sword using a seal on one of his harms.It's name comes from its ability to absorb and control water to make it's reach greater with a water blade, as well as release the water like a pressure gun .This sword looks like sasuke's sword of kusanagi, and its blade can be divided to make a V like form where the captured water with chakra is able to produce a shield.
(note:3 times per battle)
(note:weak against lightning from a enemy mainly when in defense mode )
~Declined~ please give a better description about the sword and its abilities
Name:Fuuton: Kaiten(Wind Release: Rotation)
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu copies the hyuuga's kaiten(Rotation)using wind to replace the chakra control.By spinning and releasing wind chakra from his hands while moving them up and down the user is able to create a wind variation of the hyuuga's kaiten.
(note:weak against fire)
(note: if used with water around it becomes resistent to lower level fire)
(note:can be used 4 times per battle)
(note: this can be shaped from a replica of kaiten to a simple hurrican)
~Approved~ but i changed the amount of usage times
Name: Shitsumei mune mo-do (Dying Will Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +10(to any ninjutsu or taijutsu performed)
Description: The user enter's a close death state for a split second, stopping chakra flow completely and then unleashing it all at once giving him greater strength ,speed and making his jutsu much more efficient due to having much more chakra concentrated.The user's appearance changes as well getting a more menacing look with a small flame of chakra coming from his forehead.
The draw backs of this jutsu are that the user becomes more aggresive, and after its use he losses 30 chakra.
(note:the effects last for 3 turns)
(note:can be used 3 times per battle)
(note: only Vergil.. can teach this jutsu )
just had to try lol: (note: the user becomes almost as fast as a 1st gate user)
~Declined~ the definition of OP
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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Summoning Technique, Falcon, ( Kuchiyose Jutsu, Taka )
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons Ficqa, the boss of all Falcons, by signing a blood contract with the animal. Ficqa is able to fly, and transport the user wherever he desires. Ficqa is also able to use his wings to attack, by shooting sharp feathers towards the opponent, which will injure the opponent. Ficqa is also able to control fire,and can use fire jutsus till C- rank without the aid of no-one else.
Custom Jutsu Submission Summoning Technique, Falcon, ( Kuchiyose Jutsu, Taka )
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons Ficqa, the boss of all Falcons, by signing a blood contract with the animal. Ficqa is able to fly, and transport the user wherever he desires. Ficqa is also able to use his wings to attack, by shooting sharp feathers towards the opponent, which will injure the opponent. Ficqa is also able to control fire,and can use fire jutsus till C- rank without the aid of no-one else.
Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Kaguya Modo)-Kaguya Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 damage to all kaguya attacks)
Description: User goes into a Kaguya mode, focusing nearly all of his chakra into his bones, and making it a lot easier to control his KG, increasing the length of the bones that the user sticks out, the speed that they stick out (instant), regeneration rate, making the Kaguya abilities much stronger, giving the user more speed and agility as well.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds, during those 3 rounds, the user cannot use ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle, 2 turn recharge.
~Declined~ Change it to forbidden and change it to one use only and one more restriction
(Katto Kaze Koukotsu)- Cutting Wind HardBone
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 damage to Kaguya attacks)
Description: The user infuses the bones that he sticks out of his body with wind chakra, increasing the cutting power of the bone, and the reach of the attack. Making each bone as powerful as a well-crafted katana.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
~Declined~ Give a range of attack reach and a better description
(Kosshi no Yajuu: Chiita)- Bones of Wild Animal: Cheetah
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Point: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+5 damage with physical attacks)
Description: The user first concentrates a lot of chakra into the bones, covering the whole body with bones, that can defend the user from attacks up to A rank(A rank damage is only reduced). While inside this armor of bones the user changes his skeletal structure into the one of a Cheetah, increasing the users speed by a lot (same speed as 3 gates open) and increases the damage of physical attacks by 5.
Note: Lasts for 2 round or until deactivated.
Note: Can only be used once per battle, because only the skeletal structure changes and it’s a huge risk on the muscles using “Bones of Wild Animal” several times.
Note: Cannot use another “Bones of Wild Animal” tech for 3 rounds.
~Approved~
(Hone Tento)- Bone Tent
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Point: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user stomps the ground, making some of the strongest bones in his body to come out 360 degrees around him, forming a tipi made of bones. This gives the user 360 degrees protection against S Rank attacks or weaker. The tent can be used to trap the opponent, making them suffocate, however it is not as strong on the inside as on the inside. The user can cancel this tech at will. Does not give protection against attacks that come from underground.
The technique lasts for 1 round the most, because of the low oxygen supply inside of it.
And the user cannot use this more than twice per battle, and there has to be 3 round interval between the usage, because thats how long it takes for the bones he used to regenerate.
~Approved~
(Dendou Kosshi) - Electric Bones
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user sends lightning chakra through his bones, making the electricity jump from bone to bone. Every one of the users bones become electrical conductors.
With this "electric field" that the user creates with his bones can paralyze the opponent when within that field, or very close. When used with the Dance of the Young Ferns, the user can only make a small electrical field, because of the huge area that the bones cover, the user does not have enough lightning chakra to cover it all.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
~Declined~ Add another restriction or add user damage
Custom Jutsu Submission (Kaguya Modo)-Kaguya Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 damage to all kaguya attacks)
Description: User goes into a Kaguya mode, focusing nearly all of his chakra into his bones, and making it a lot easier to control his KG, increasing the length of the bones that the user sticks out, the speed that they stick out (instant), regeneration rate, making the Kaguya abilities much stronger, giving the user more speed and agility as well.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds, during those 3 rounds, the user cannot use ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle, 2 turn recharge.
~Declined~ Change it to forbidden and change it to one use only and one more restriction
(Katto Kaze Koukotsu)- Cutting Wind HardBone
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 damage to Kaguya attacks)
Description: The user infuses the bones that he sticks out of his body with wind chakra, increasing the cutting power of the bone, and the reach of the attack. Making each bone as powerful as a well-crafted katana.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
~Declined~ Give a range of attack reach and a better description
(Kosshi no Yajuu: Chiita)- Bones of Wild Animal: Cheetah
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Point: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+5 damage with physical attacks)
Description: The user first concentrates a lot of chakra into the bones, covering the whole body with bones, that can defend the user from attacks up to A rank(A rank damage is only reduced). While inside this armor of bones the user changes his skeletal structure into the one of a Cheetah, increasing the users speed by a lot (same speed as 3 gates open) and increases the damage of physical attacks by 5.
Note: Lasts for 2 round or until deactivated.
Note: Can only be used once per battle, because only the skeletal structure changes and it’s a huge risk on the muscles using “Bones of Wild Animal” several times.
Note: Cannot use another “Bones of Wild Animal” tech for 3 rounds.
~Approved~
(Hone Tento)- Bone Tent
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Point: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user stomps the ground, making some of the strongest bones in his body to come out 360 degrees around him, forming a tipi made of bones. This gives the user 360 degrees protection against S Rank attacks or weaker. The tent can be used to trap the opponent, making them suffocate, however it is not as strong on the inside as on the inside. The user can cancel this tech at will. Does not give protection against attacks that come from underground.
The technique lasts for 1 round the most, because of the low oxygen supply inside of it.
And the user cannot use this more than twice per battle, and there has to be 3 round interval between the usage, because thats how long it takes for the bones he used to regenerate.
~Approved~
(Dendou Kosshi) - Electric Bones
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user sends lightning chakra through his bones, making the electricity jump from bone to bone. Every one of the users bones become electrical conductors.
With this "electric field" that the user creates with his bones can paralyze the opponent when within that field, or very close. When used with the Dance of the Young Ferns, the user can only make a small electrical field, because of the huge area that the bones cover, the user does not have enough lightning chakra to cover it all.
Note: Lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
~Declined~ Add another restriction or add user damage
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