[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sage Art: kyousei Resanganshurkien (Sage Art: Ultimate Rasenshuriken)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 45
Damage: (+90 if caught up in it, +150 if hit straight on)
Description: While in Sage Mode the user creates a Rasenshuriken, with the extra help form the natural energy he/she is able to throw it, if by any chance it misses he can use his/her natural energy to make it expand into a massive dome shape like sphere, once this has happened it cannot be stopped. If the opponent is only caught up in it, if to say an arm/leg where to be caught up then it would make that body part renderless for the rest of the match due to the high cell destroying attack. But if they were to be hit straight on, they would be killed instantly.

Note: Must be in Sage Mode.
Note: The user looses one turn of Sage Mode when they use this jutsu.
Note: Useable once per battle.

-Forbidden rank jutsus need side effects for the user-

Sage Art: Genkaku kyousei Rasenshuriken (Sage Arts: Illusion Ultimate Rasenshuriken)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 45
Damage: N/A
Description: Once the user uses ultimate rasanshuriken jutsu, he/she can then use the shadow clone jutsu and make a massive amount of illusion Ultimate Rasanshurikens, this confuses the opponent and allows the real one to attack from the opponent’s blindside.

Note: Must be in Sage Mode.
Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: Must of used Ultimate Rasenshuriken.

-Forbidden rank jutsus need side effects for the user-

 

[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~I have permission from Hellsbadass to post the jutsu in the spoiler for Sharingan09~​

Spoiler

Type: Summoning Jutsu:King Suimmon-War
Rank: S
Range: Short-Medium- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: War is the head boss and father of the Echidnas and slightly the size of Manda but smaller.He has a body armor and a scythe across his back and a big scar across his eye.His body armor covers only his chest back,elbows and knees,the rest is covered by very sharp spines and his color is red.

All Echidnas will have these abilities- Like all the Echidnas in the family they are able to dig underground with there nose and move swiftly underground and shoot multiple spines at the enemy or while undergrouind can shoot them out of the ground,they all have very sharp claws as well.All Echidnas will be able to mix there element with these abilities

His attitude is very agressive and he doesnt care what the danger is as long as the job gets done.When it comes to letting someone sit on his head he doesnt care but hell give them a test and thats if anyone gets to knock him down then he has absolute respect for the individual.

Wars element is lightining.He can make his scythe or the spines that attached to him electrocute anything that touches him.He can use lightning jutsu up to S-rank.
*Can only be summoned/taught by Sharingan09
*Last for 4 turns
*Must have sighned the contract of the Echidnas

(Togehonyuu Mo-Do) Echidna Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In this mode, the user grows spines from his/her back increasing his/her defense. He/she can lengthen these spines, or make them thicker. The user is able to roll up into a ball much like an echidna, for extra protection. When rolled up, the user is prtected from jutsu up to B-Rank.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Echidnas (held by Sharingan09)
*Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
*Lasts for 4 turns

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~Declined. no god summons~

War is an Echidna not a god
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(Shi Biyoku Kazangan Harumagedon Bakudan) 4 tailed Lava Armageddon Bomb
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra 40
Damage: 80
Description: Whilst in Bijuu Mode, Yonbi gathers a large concentration of Lava combined with malicious chakra and moulds it into a ball; then fires it at the target or up into the air. Yonbi can choose whether in mid flight the ball explodes, making it rain molten rock down on the target, or just keep going as a giant lava/malicious chakra wave.
*Only usable 3 times per battle
*Must be in Bijuu Mode to use

-make it twice per battle-

 

[Mugen Ryukyu]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he'she releases it at once causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy.
(Notenly members of shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
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~declined~
overpowed to be a B rank jutsu





(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: rapid Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he/she releases it punching towards the enemy yo create multiple fireballs to come out causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy.
note: only members of the shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
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~pending~
needs some side effects and limits

(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he'she releases it at once causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy.
(Notenly members of shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)

-make it usable up to 3 times per battle-

(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he'she releases it at once causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy.
(Notenly members of shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
(note: only usable 3 times per battle)

(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: rapid Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he/she releases it punching towards the enemy yo create multiple fireballs to come out causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy. It also burns the user hands.
note: only members of the shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
(note: can only be used 2 times per battle)

-approved-





Raiton: Raikou Myaku Ken- Lightning release: Lightning pulse Blade
Type: attack
Rank: S
Range:short-long
chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: the user charges their sword with lightning chakra then swings thesword at the ground in front of them. this then shoots out 3 blades of condenced lightning chakra that look like shark blades and they cut along the ground churning the ground to rubble and slice towards the enemy. (the blades themselfs are 5 ft hight) must require to have a katana to use the jutsu. It also shocks the user arm
(note: only members of the shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
(note: only usable 3 times per battle)

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Hychuuseki Kyuuten) Fire style: Raging Pillar of the Heavens

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses Katon chakra in his hand and places his palm on the ground. After that multiple pillars of spinning fire come out of the ground in a circular formation around the opponent trapping him on all sides. These pillars are incredibly high(and are said to reach up to the heavens). Then at the exact same time all these pillars go straight to the middle of the circle, where the opponent is, slamming into each other and forming one enormous pillar of raging fire. After that the piller explodes, incinerating everything around it(including the earth).

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*No katon jutsu's can be used next turn*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*

-approved-

(Katon: Kasairyuudou) Fire style: Pyroclastic Flow

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as extremely hot ashes and gas(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water, not sole through the air. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash and gas burn his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

Spoiler

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-declined: you can't use/create/spread gas. The ash part is good, but you have to remove the gas cause it would kill you also-

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Sou Jukusei Toburai) Premature Burial
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: None
Description: The user will send chakara secretly into the ground, eventually the 10 meter area will become infused with the chakara of the user without the opponents notice. Then the earth around the opponent will start to slowly pull the opponent into the ground and bury them in the earth quietly without the opponent knowing but for this to work the opponent must physically step on the ground infused with the user's chakara once stepping on the ground the opponent will be caught there and cannot move anymore as they are being dragged down, the user is also able to chose the depth and the pressure that is exerted on the opponent's body. Because the user uses his own chakara to drag the opponent down the earth will not be able to be broken out of.

-limits?-

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

1st jutsu: ? I read the rules , should I put it as s-rank?

(Kuchiyose:Amerikahyou Musha)- Summoning: Jaguar Warrior
Type: Attacking/Defence
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This warrior is able to stand on two paws, its able to use lightning jutsus, and can channel chidori throughout its body,electrifing anyone who touches it.This jaguar is for fighting and sometimes running, but is usulley a fighting, with its power of striking closely and far away, its main ability is good with taijutsu.
SinRival holds this summoning.
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~Kiwii already made summon like thise~

Spiral Forces (Rasenchikaras)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will gather the nature of each element and will let it spiral around the user, the user will then release a huge amount of each nature which then will turn into spheres that spin round the user. The user then can use special attacks, and when the user is in this mode, the opponent's attack damage will be 10 damage less.
Note: Can only be used 1 per battle
Note: This lasts for 5 turns
Note: Must be taught by SinRival
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~Approved~

Spiral Forces: Hells Blade (Rasenchikaras: Makais Ken)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will grab one of the spheres spinning around the user, then smash it into the ground, and huge dark flames come out of the ground and reveal a huge golem with a huge blade from hell, and the golem will then strike the blade into the ground, capturing the opponent wherever the opponent is and is cut with a small fire sword from the neck down enhanced by the hell power.
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~Pending
can u explain abit better?
and this jutsu sounds like a funnijutsu/kinjutsu or a summon o0

My special new jutsus are the ones in the spoiler....

Third Jutsu:

Right...Well Im not so sure what I can really explain better

Spiral Forces: Rain Needle Death Storm (Rasenchikaras:Ame Hari Oujou Suto-Mu)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The user will grab a sphere of water and create a rain orb out of it, the rain orb will make it rain heavily, and then start into a crazy storm of rain, the user then controls every droplet of rain and transform the rain into needles that look hot and warm, but are actulley freezing cold which has a tempature of minus 1000 degrees, and can turn flames to very cold tempatures. This jutsu can stop flames from actulley doing any damage.
Note: Can only be used by Rain village ninja
Note: Must be taught by SinRival
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle

-leaving this for Grimm-
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~Declined
it sounds like an ice KG

 

[Rei]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

"Disclaimer:

NB's moderators have every right to deny any move we wish without true explanation, because some techniques submitted do not reach a certain criteria that we feel should be accepted. Please do not complain, please do not argue, just take it as it is and please move on by creating something else. Most Jutsus however will state a reason why a technique or custom will not be accepted.

This thread is to be kept clean, with no spamming and no chatting."

@all: which part of this -first post here- you do not get?


~Closed

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Puppet: Meiun Gangu ( Doom Toy)

Rank: A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: This a very simple, yet complex puppet. Basicly, the initial form of the puppet is a ball, wich we can notice the structure as being 10 small curved metal bars sharp at the sides, wrapped. The bars are ramdomly conected with wich other and at this point the most basic movement is moving around. Wich the user can do with only one finger. Then, and this is the tricky part, with an aditional finger, the user can open the ball into 2 jaws. 1 finger to move and 1 finger to open and close. With another finger, the mouth opens and forms a shield, with a (gilotine) and that can stil bend over itself, being still strangely like a mouth. Now, changing the fingers ( Still 3 fingers, but the extra ones change the tread), it becames a semi-circular object, comprized my 3 intricated bars. Spinning the extra fingers around eachother, the bars vibrate up and down, creating the effect of a spinning wheel, but still very flexible, because of the first finger. With an aditional finger, all the bars open and create a single bar. The extra finger is also for movement, wich means we get a very agile and flexible bar, with very sharp edges. The user can swirl it around himself, toss it to the opponent, wrap body parts, almost anything. At any point, the user can switch forms.
Note: Can use 2 puppets at once but at this level the user can't fuse them together.
*Developted by Tukki Aburame*

-approved-

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Danshingu Kijuuki Kiruma Ashige) – Dancing Crane Wheel Kick

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user first charges their legs with chakra and then jumps up in the air above the enemy and attacks using multiple spinning kicks which are in the shape of a wheel hitting the enemy four times and smashing them into the ground with the last kick.

Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito

-approved-
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(Akuma Fuukaku: Haraguroi Shiro Mizu bakufuu)- Demon stye: Malicious white Water blast

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: whilst in the bijuu mode the sanbi collects a large amount of chakra and condences it and releases a giant condenced malicious white water chakra blast towards the enemy. this technique is capable of ripping away the terrain leaving nothing but destruction.

Note: Only usable 3 times
Note: Can only be used in Bijuu mode

-we will make an announcement about bijuu jutsus, stay tuned-
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Suiton: Mizu Tsuchiro (water release: water dungeon)

Rank: B
Range: mid-long
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: the user creates four pillars of water round an enemy and then becomes connected with walls of water and the enemy becomes trapped in a prison of water and then water spikes impale them. (Lasts for 2 turns)

note: only can be used by members of rain village
(this is not to be submitted its already approved its for the jutsu below)

(jutsu below is upgrade form of the approved jutsu above)
Suiton: Yabun no Shin'en (Water Release: Abyss of the Night )

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (-15 to user)
Description:The user focuses Water Element chakra through their feet and into the ground. This makes eight pillars of water form around the opponent in hexagonal formation, and as soon as the pillars emerge water forms connecting the pillars like a sturdy wall, enclosing the opponent in a box of water. The user can then make spikes of water come out if they so wish. As a last resort, the user can overload the technique with chakra, causing it to explode. The user can see what is going on inside the box.

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Does 15 damage to the user
Note: If the technique is exploded, it spills into a pool of water on the ground, This costs the user an additional 20 chakra and does 10 more damage.
Note: Can only be used by Amegakure Ninja
Co-creator: Emperor

- update approved-
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Doton: kozumikku nagareboshi nami- Earth Style: Cosmic Meteor Wave

Rank: Forbbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: the user will release large amounts of chakra into the earth and then raise from the ground condenced large masses of solid earth by controlling their chakra and they are raised 15 meters above the user creating a circular ring above and then the user will command these Large comet sized rocks towards the enemy and burries them in a large crater in the earth.

Note: Can only Be used once
Note: User can't use earth jutsu for two turns
Note: Causes -15 damage to user

-approved-

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Spoiler

Sage Art: kyousei Resanganshurkien (Sage Art: Ultimate Rasenshuriken)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 45
Damage: +90 if caught up in it, +150 if hit straight on (+10 to user)
Description: While in Sage Mode the user creates a Rasenshuriken, with the extra help form the natural energy he/she is able to throw it, if by any chance it misses he can use his/her natural energy to make it expand into a massive dome shape like sphere, once this has happened it cannot be stopped. If the opponent is only caught up in it, if to say an arm/leg where to be caught up then it would make that body part renderless for the rest of the match due to the high cell destroying attack. But if they were to be hit straight on, they would be killed instantly.

Note: Must be in Sage Mode.
Note: The user looses one turn of Sage Mode when they use this jutsu.
Note: Useable once per battle.

-side effects?-


Sage Art: Genkaku kyousei Rasenshuriken (Sage Arts: Illusion Ultimate Rasenshuriken)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 45
Damage: N/A (+10 Damage to the user)
Description: Once the user uses ultimate rasanshuriken jutsu, he/she can then use the shadow clone jutsu and make a massive amount of illusion Ultimate Rasanshurikens, this confuses the opponent and allows the real one to attack from the opponent’s blindside.

Note: Must be in Sage Mode.
Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: Must of used Ultimate Rasenshuriken.

-same-



(Raiton: Ikazuchi Tori (Lightning Style: Thunder Bird)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user shoot a bolt of pure lightning into the sky, the bolt then turn into a massive lightning bird, that’s extremely large. This bird can use upto A-Rank lightning jutsu, and if needed it can crash head on into the opponent causing a massive explosion.

Note: Useable twice per battle.

-make it once per battle and i'll approve it-


Fuuninjutsu: Itami kira (Sealing Technique: Pain Killer)
Type: Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 75
Damage Points: (Depends on what jutsu damage the opponent has used.)
Description: The user creates a seal on their body, this seal will only activate when the user has been injured. No matter how great the injury the user can seal the damage away into it, once done the user needs to release the seal onto/into another object, so that the damage is then released into/onto it. This seal can be used for offensive purposes.

Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Can’t use Genjutsu/Kuchiose/ next turn.
Note: Must be a Medical shinobi to use this jutsu.
Note: This Jutsu doesn’t work on served limbs.

-check the restrictions about sealings-

Raiton: Raiton Yoroi x2 (Lightning Release: Lightning Armour x2)
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Rank: S
Range: user
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: +20 to all Taijutsu/Lightning Jutsu
Description: By wrapping his/her body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the user can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his/her physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him/her to gain tremendous raw speed and power. While using this technique, his/her reflexes are comparable to that of a Kage, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with the user. The users strength is also heightened enough to make his/her strikes cause enormous amounts of damage to whatever they strike. The armor also increases his/her defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks.

Note: Usable one per battle.
Note: Lasts 3 turns.

-declined: OP and the Sharingan can see through Kage abilities-

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

I forgot xDD

(Ametom: Ame no Kujikuten) – Rain Release: Rain’s Crushing Point

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: Hanzou will infuse its chakra in the rain. Then he will keep it on sky while still raining. He will use his chakra to stabilize and gain perfect control of rain so other jutsus can’t make this water go away and he will wait 2 turns while collecting more and more rain. Then, with a single hand sign, the user will make converge all in one point with tremendous force that crushes anything inside of it.

-limitations? it's forbidden rank. And i think you need to say you connect it with the clouds not the water droplets -

(Kousei Sanshouuo) - Regeneration of the Salamander

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hanzou will use the regeneration caracteristics of it's Salamander summon to regenerate any part of his body. Hanzou's salamander can also use this jutsu. Only twice per battle.

-declined: Only members of the Kaguya clan and med nins can re-generate parts. If you want your Salamander to be have this ability it's okay, but not for yourself-

(Ametom: Amegakure no Kyuusho Guntain) - Rain Release: Secret Army of Amegakure

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Hanzou will use rain to make an huge army of rain soldiers. They will attack the opponent but they can defend the user also. Aslong as its rainning if they're destroyed, they will regenerate themselves automatically. Only twice per battle.

-declined: OP for a S rank-

(Ametom: Ame no Kujikuten) – Rain Release: Rain’s Crushing Point

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: Hanzou will infuse its chakra in the rain. Then he will keep it on sky while still raining. He will use his chakra to stabilize and gain perfect control of rain so other jutsus can’t make this water go away and he will wait 2 turns while collecting more and more rain. Then, with a single hand sign, the user will make converge all in one point with tremendous force that crushes anything inside of it. This jutsu can only be used once per battle, lasts one whole turn and causes 20 damage to user

approved

(Ametom: Amegakure no Kyuusho Guntain) - Rain Release: Secret Army of Amegakure

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Hanzou will use rain to make an huge army of rain soldiers. They will attack the opponent but they can defend the user also. Aslong as its rainning if they're destroyed, they will regenerate themselves automatically. Only twice per battle. This jutsu can only be used once per battle. 10 chakra per turn to mantain. Causes 10 damage to user

-pending: I need Grim's opinion for this-

(Ameton: Ame no Tate) – Rain Release: Shield of Rain

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Rank: B; A; S
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25; 30; 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the rain around him, Hanzou can form a 360? shield of rain around him. Must be raining to use this jutsu. A-rank can only be used 3 per battle. S-rank can only be used 2 per battle

approved

(Kuchyose no Jutsu: Ame Kyuu) - Summoning Techique: Rain Globe

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a globe, similar to the snow globes but with water instead of snow. This globe is infused with the user's chakra and to work, the user first needs to send his chakra to the clouds and connect it with the globe. Once done, the user can use it. The user can inser this chakra into the globe to manipulate the water inside of it, and will shake it, then, the rain that is falling will move according to how the user shake it and will take shape according to the shape the user gave to the water inside of the globe. Can only be summoned once and must be rainning.

-explain please: what would happen if you fuse it with other elements? for example raiton?-

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Hychuuseki Kyuuten) Fire style: Raging Pillar of the Heavens

Spoiler

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses Katon chakra in his hand and places his palm on the ground. After that multiple pillars of spinning fire come out of the ground in a circular formation around the opponent trapping him on all sides. These pillars are incredibly high(and are said to reach up to the heavens). Then at the exact same time all these pillars go straight to the middle of the circle, where the opponent is, slamming into each other and forming one enormous pillar of raging fire. After that the piller explodes, incinerating everything around it(including the earth).

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*No katon jutsu's can be used next turn*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*

-approved-

(Katon: Kasairyuudou) Fire style: Pyroclastic Flow

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as extremely hot ashes and gas(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water, not sole through the air. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash and gas burn his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

Spoiler

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-declined: you can't use/create/spread gas. The ash part is good, but you have to remove the gas cause it would kill you also-

*inhales the gas* *very high voice* God, I'm so stoned right now ~_~ gas gone O_O

(Katon: Kasairyuudou) Fire style: Pyroclastic Flow

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Rank: S
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:

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-approved-

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Sou Jukusei Toburai) Premature Burial
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: None
Description: The user will send chakara secretly into the ground, eventually the 10 meter area will become infused with the chakara of the user without the opponents notice. Then the earth around the opponent will start to slowly pull the opponent into the ground and bury them in the earth quietly without the opponent knowing but for this to work the opponent must physically step on the ground infused with the user's chakara once stepping on the ground the opponent will be caught there and cannot move anymore as they are being dragged down, the user is also able to chose the depth and the pressure that is exerted on the opponent's body. Because the user uses his own chakara to drag the opponent down the earth will not be able to be broken out of.

-limits?-

(Doton: Sou Jukusei Toburai) Premature Burial
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Close
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: None( -10 to the user each time used)
Description: The user will send chakara secretly into the ground, eventually the 10 meter area will become infused with the chakara of the user without the opponents notice. Then the earth around the opponent will start to slowly pull the opponent into the ground and bury them in the earth quietly without the opponent knowing but for this to work the opponent must physically step on the ground infused with the user's chakara once stepping on the ground the opponent will be caught there and cannot move anymore as they are being dragged down, the user is also able to chose the depth and the pressure that is exerted on the opponent's body. Because the user uses his own chakara to drag the opponent down the earth will not be able to be broken out of. Can only be used 3 time per battle.

-how can he not know after a while? O_O and you also need physical limits, like the "area" you are creating how long can it be?-

(Soshi Taijutsu) Elemental Taijutsu
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakara Cost: 40
Damgae: +15 to all Taijutsu(-5 per turn active)
Description: By focusing on the different elemental chakara's the user is able to manipulate them to fight in hand to hand combat while using their power. This jutsu is considered to be taijutsu and not ninjutsu.
Fire: The user hands and feet become fiery and burn with intense heat, giving the user flaming strikes. And can fire blast of fire opponent.
Wind: The users hands and feet become covered in wind chakara and gain immense cutting power. And can fire wond blast at the opponent.
Water: The user hands and feet become covered with water and now have cutting power and have the user's hands have the abilty to handle immense heat. And can fire blast of water at the opponent.
Lightning: The user's hands and feet become covered with lightning and can use this to cut stronger, shock the opponent, and can send blast of lightning.
Earth: The user's hands and feet become much harder and give a stronger impact when meeting contact and allow the user to fire needles or rocks of earth at the opponent.
~This jutsu does not have a time limit itself for its not a just a jutsu but a method of fighting. It can be activated at any period of time and released at any period of time. As long as its active the user is damaged in small amounts. The user can switch between elements, but the user cannot use jutsus of that element they are controlling~

approved

(Raiton Roddo) Lightning Rod
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakara Cost: 40
Damage: +60 to whatever jutsu it redirects (-25 to the user)
Description: The user will focus lightning chakara all around their body. When there is an incoming lightning jutsu coming towards the user the use will redirect all the lightning into their body and then immediately redirect it towards anywhere the user wishes. Because the lightning is being redirected and not absorbed the user can redirect any amount. The lightning jutsu will be sent back with more power than it has regularly, giving it more power and speed. This jutsu will send back any rank lightning jutsu that is used, but after the jutsu is completed the user will not be able to use lightning jutsu for 3 turns. This jutsu can only be used 2 times per battle.

-declined: you are not immune to lighting to absorb it and then re direct it-

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Lightning Release: Lightning Absorbtion [Raiton: Yamitsukirai]

Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By holding his right hand in front of him the user is able to absorb an incoming lightning based attack, realeasing it back in a devastating blow, that is capable of knocking an enemy unconcious.
-May be used three times per battle.
-May be used only by Reido Kira.

-declined: I cannot approve a body that absorbs an elemental attack like this-

Water Release: Tear of Sadness [Suiton:Namida no Hiai]

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A tear falls from the user's eye on water, making it's volume grow to a relatively large lake.
-May be used only by Reido Kira.

-approved, but next time make a better background like you are using your water chakra etc etc etc-

Illusion Technique: Seal of Crows [Genjutsu: Gokuin no Karasu]

Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user reveals the seal inside his cloak, and dozens of crows come out of his cloak, that quickly surround the enemy and get them in a red, sadistic world, where the crows start eating the opponent.
-May be used only if the user has the sealed cloak.
-May be used only by Reido Kira.


-you gotta restrict it to 2 times per battle-

Lightning Release: Lightning Prison [Raiton: Kangokurai]

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates a high amount of Lightning Chakra, creating a Lightning Prison that is shaped as a ball, and covers the opponent fully, and it goes in the underground too, making it impossible for the enemy to go in the earth.
-May be only used by Reido Kira.

-approved-

Lightning Release: Lightning Earth Discharge [Raiton: Raikou Tsuchi no Rikou]

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user discharges lightning in the ground, that electrocutes any opponent that is in the ground or it discharges lightning in the ground disabling the enemy to go underground.
-May be used only by Reido Kira

-declined: similar jutsu exists (Raiton: Toruneedo Raitoningu (Lightning Style: Tornado Lightning)-

 

[Akiza]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ame Hijutsu:Hanzou no Iji ) Rain Secret Technique : Memories of Hanzou
Rank: S
Chakra:40 ( +25 per turn )
Damage: 80
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Attack/Defence
The user uses water to make a replication of the famous Hanzou on his giant salamander. The salamander is made of a very large amount of water, and is highly dense, giving it enormous weight, enough to cause shockwaves and a crater if it jumps. The salamander can also use its tongue as a smashing club, that can shatter rock, or use its tail for the same purpose. It can also fire very large balls of water that explode on impact to create pools of water.
The replication of Hanzou can create waves/beams/prisons/spikes/walls of water by waving its staff. Each costs 30 chakra.
Note: Rain Village ninjas only can use this jutsu
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: No Doujutsus, Wood/Ice/Lava, Shikotsumayaku, Taijutsu or Fuuinjutsu as long as this tech. is active
Note: Lasts 5 turns
______________
~how long will these jutsus last?~
*time added* -KT

Re-sumbitting this one..and when u said how long will these jutsus last u just meant this one right?

-leaving this to Grim-

 

[Ragnaroc]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: nenshou tesaki)-Fire Style Burning Fingers
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: a taijustu based attack where the user channels fire chakra into his hands to cause them to heat up greatly. Once the chakra is in their hands, it can be used for a physical attack that will severely burn their opponent wherever they are touched.

-approved-

 

[Ace]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton: Gogyou Kata’s (Water Style: Water Kata’s)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Range: Close
Description: Best used when in close combat, the user builds up the surrounding moisture around their fist, and at the last second they unleash the water into a razor sharp water jet. This attack gives the user the upperhand in that it is unexpected, and it gives extra leverage in taijutsu.

-limit it to 3 times per battle-

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon • Nenshou Hai Machi no Jutsu [Fire Release • Burning Ash Road

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A skill in which is used as a feint to trap the opponent. First performing the handseals and running away from the opponent. Prompting them to rush and catch you as you are running. During that time, as the user runs the chakra from their feet transforms into an ashy and very flammable substance that also stick to the opponent once steps onto the trail. When the opponent steps onto the trail the user can then ignite the Ash with a blink of the eye for a powerful explosion.

-again no. how can you make your chakra explosive ash?-

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Raiton: Raikage Yougeki Gusoku (Lightning Style: Thunder Shadow's Assault Armor)
Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 every turn active)
Damage: +30 to taijutsu and +20 to Lightning
Description: The Raikage can Automatically Release Lightning Chakra from every point of his body, giving him a boost in reflexes, speed, and power comparable to the 4th Hokages.
(Last 5 Turns)
(Usable 2 times; 1 turn Recharge)
(Only Teachable by Kirabi)

-declined: OP. Minato's speed is unmatchable-

Doton: Sesshu (Earth Style: Absorption )
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: Depends on amount of Jutsu Absorbed (+10 Each Jutsu)
Description: User creates Orb of Earth Chakra That Can Be Sent into the Sky. This orb Will Continually absorb any Water based move And Will Inflate to a bigger and bigger size of Water and Earth. The Earth Chakra Nuetralizes the technique and grows. After the orb has become to heavy or user commands it to it will fall back down to earth crushing the opponent or releasing mud unto the field.
(Last 3 turns)
(Earth Jutsu cant be used while in play)

-declined: does not make sense. You send an Orb of earth (doton) in the sky (fuuton) and make it absorb water (suiton) and then it also releases mud-

Katon: (Kaensuto-mu) Fire Style: Flamestorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (+5 Each Snap)
Damage: 80 (+10 Each Snap)
Description: The User has a Seal of Fire on the Back of his Hand that activates when Blood is marked on it. The User then concentrates all fire chakra into this palm and the slightest set of friction causes it to release an explosive amount of Fire that converges around the opponent. in a small condensed fire plume that flows continually around the opponent burning them alive. as the flames die the user can reignite the flames with another snap.
(Can Overpower 1 ARank Water Jutsu due to the amount of chakra and the condensed power of the flames. )
(After use User may no longer preform any Fire Jutsu for 3 turns.)

-declined: that is an OP mode not a fire based jutsu-
(Only Usable Once)

and also what is the verdict on my previously Submitted jutsu from last week

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Bubble Release:bubble spears
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
description:the user emits a plenty of bubble from his flute and as the bubbles grows it turns into spears that attack and follow the target.

-S ranks need restrictions as in 2 times per battle for this one and be more specific about the damage please. If only one spear hits the target what's the damage? and what if all spears hit the target?-

Bubble Releaserotective Coat
Type:Supplement
Rank:s
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:n/a
description:the user emits a large bubble from his flute then the bubble encase the user protecting him from the opponents attack it can absorb attack rank-a below except for lightning it can absorb rank-b below.
*Stay for 3 turns*
*Can only be used for 3x*
*Can only be used by Utakata*

-Declined: much similar to Med School's Chakra Cocoon-

awaton: awa kiraigen: bubble release: bubble minefield
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:lots of bubbles surround and corner the opponent and explode causeing it to be fatal and can also paralyze the opponent
*Can only be used by Utakata*

-restrict it-