[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Lightning release: lightning shuriken bolt (Raiton: raikou shuriken boruto)

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: mid-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points:100 (10 to user)
Description:The user raises his right hand up,than makes a bolt of lightning hit the right hand.After that the user channels the bolt through his body and releases it with his left hand.Just when the bolt is about to hit the opponent it instantly turns into a shuriken thats 10 meters wide and catches the opponent off guard.
*Can only be used twice.
*this jutsu is almost instant
*Can only be taught by mugen-sama

~ And the lightning won't fry you when it travels through your body why ? Are you Luffy or sthg ? ~

Lightning release: lightning ball (Raiton: Raikou koumaru )

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: mid-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points:90
Description:claps his hand and creates a ball of lightning so small it can only be seen by a dojutsu user.Than uses his chakra to instantly transport it to were the opponent is and make it create a explosion of little tiny lightning needles that hit the opponent and stop the chakra flow preventing him from using jutsus.
*Can only be used once per battle
*This jutsu is only visible by dojutsu users.
*Can only be taught by mugen-sama

~ So chakra became a space/time portal now to "instantly transport" to where the opponent is ? ~

Ice release: basic ice touch (Hyoton:kihonteki koori souhou )

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/defense
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points:80
Description:The user will channel ice chakra through out the body.Once this is done any opponent who touches the user will be frozen.Or if the user touches the opponent.This jutsu also allows the user to freeze a A-rank water jutsu in mid air by touching it and freezing it before it hits the user.
*This jutsu is only visible by dojutsu users,only they can see the change of chakra.(since the user doesnt get covered in ice or anything)
*Can only be taught by mugen-sama

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Ice release: advanced ice touch (Hyoton:koudo koori souhou)

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range:Short-long
Chakra cost: 50 (-15 each turn to maintain)
Damage points:N/A
Description:The user will touch the ground and cover the whole field in ice.This will give the user a balance advantage.Only ice users will be able to walk freely on the ice.Anyone else will fall and lose balance,slide on the ice.If the ice is somehow melted,or destroyed than it will be restored the same turn.
*Can only stay on the field for 5 turns
*Can only be taught by mugen-sama

~ Doesn't deserve to be forbidden rank, the ice cannot be restored within the turn, and don't even get me started on how unimaginative it is. ~

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind Release: Aeolus's Slice (Fuuton: Aeolus's Suraisu)
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: After performing 23 handseals the user hand will be coated with wind. Then by raising his hand to the desired height, the user will make a swift motion with his index, sending an extremely sharp and fast crescent of wind. This attack is so devastating that some Fuuton masters have already manage to cut giant bulder in the blink of an eye with this technique.
-Can only be used twice per match
-After using this technique, no wind jutsu can be used for a whole turn
-After using this technique, it can only be used again after waiting two whole turn.
-Can Only be used Lord of Kaos and Izuna Uchiha.

~ At this speed, it's pretty much unblockable ~

Bone Fishnet Crushing (Hone Sakananetto Kujiku)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user stretches out his arms and a large bone net instantaneously rips from his rip-cage, creating a very thick net capable of trapping an enemy inside of it. The net is made from the bones in the rip cage. The net upon touching something, immediately closes up, trying to crush the object within the net. This jutsu is perfect at capturing enemies without having to do heavy battle as the net is created from the densest Kaguya bones, making it near unbreakable. This jutsu can also defend against Earth jutsus up to A-rank, as it can wrap around them and crush them.
-Can only be used twice.
-After using the user cannot use any Kaguya jutsus the following turn.
-After using, the user must wait at least 2 turns before using again.

~ Near-unbreakable ? Specify its strength. It's a freaking A rank. Crushing immediately ? OPed. Size should be specified, and length must be close. Not close-mid. I edited it here before I noticed all these other errors. ~

(Kuchiyose: Raiga-Sama) - Summoning Technique: Raiga-Sama
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: N/A
Description: Raiga-Sama is the lord of Ligers. Raiga-Sama, like most ligers, has Lightning Affinity and therefore is capable of using Lightning jutsu up to A rank and can create a S-rank powered lightning blast roar ( unidirectional blast ) twice a battle ( counts as a jutsu of the user ). Raiga-Sama is roughly the size of Gamabunta if Raiga-Sama is sitting on his hind legs.
*Can only be summoned once a battle.
*can only be summoned by Lord of Kaos.
*Last three turns.

~ Approved ~

Also, I posted this back in April when Grimm and Goro where checking customs and it was Overlooked, twice. >_>

Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way to break out of the dome is to use S-rank and above lightning jutsus. The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
*the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank lightning*
*can only be used once*
*while in the dome, earth jutsus cannot be used by the user due to the high levels of earth chakra in the dome*

~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

Wind Release: Aeolus's Slice (Fuuton: Aeolus's Suraisu)
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: After performing 23 handseals the user hand will be coated with wind. Then by raising his hand to the desired height, the user will make a swift motion with his index, sending an extremely sharp and fast crescent of wind. This attack is so devastating that some Fuuton masters have already manage to cut giant bulder in the blink of an eye with this technique, but only up close. The further away the target, the longer it takes for this jutsu to work. In mid range, it takes around 1.5 seconds to work.
-Can only be used twice per match
-After using this technique, no wind jutsu can be used for a whole turn
-After using this technique, it can only be used again after waiting two whole turn.
-Can Only be used Lord of Kaos and Izuna Uchiha.

~ I give up on this. Declined, do not resubmit. ~

Bone Fishnet Crushing (Hone Sakananetto Kujiku)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense/Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user stretches out his arms and a large bone net instantaneously rips from his rip-cage, creating a very thick net capable of trapping an enemy inside of it. The net, which is around roughly the size of half a car, is made from the bones in the rip cage. The net upon touching something, quickly closes up, similar to a Venus Fly Trap, trying to crush the object within the net. This jutsu is perfect at capturing enemies without having to do heavy battle as the net is created from the densest Kaguya bones, making it near unbreakable (those with strength of the first gate and higher will be able to break free or those who use focused elemental techniques of S rank and above on it ). This jutsu can also defend against Earth jutsus up to A-rank, as it can wrap around them and crush them.
-Can only be used twice.
-After using the user cannot use any Kaguya jutsus the following turn.
-After using, the user must wait at least 2 turns before using again.

~ Approved ~

One Point Earth/Lightning Bullet (Ichi Ikkaku Tsuchi/Denkou Tama)
Rank:S
Type: Offensive
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80 (20 to the user)
Description: The user will point his arm out towards a target. After doing so, he will then form a "gun" shape with his fingers (thumb pointing upwards with index and middle fingers pointing towards target). He will then focus earth chakra to his fingertips. The physical image of a bullet will appear at the tips of the user's fingers. The user will then infuse lightning chakra around the bullet, making the already compressed piece of earth have lightning chakra imbibed into it. The user then forcefully releases it with a loud explosion that forces the user backwards (explosion generated from lightning). The bullet then travels towards the target with a sonic wave of lightning (around the size of a toddler) behind it from the initial blast. The jutsu in its entirety takes around three seconds to form and after releasing it, the bullet reaches in around half a second (if at mid range) and an whole second at long range. The user can create two bullets at once, one on his index and one on his middle finger, with both being fired at the same time. The only noticeable difference is that their are two large lightning waves coming at the enemy and the user is noticeable damaged (fingertips burned, cannot perform any other jutsus that require hand seals that turn due to this). The lightning wave reaches the enemy a second after the bullet does.
-Can only be used twice.
-Can be destroyed by S-rank Lightning Jutsus.
-Must wait at least three turns before using again.
-After using, the user cannot use any lightning jutsu for two turns.
-The user cannot use any other earth jutsu the same turn this one is used.
-If two bullets are made at once, no lightning jutsus for three turns and no earth jutsus for two turns.
-If two bullets are made, the user cannot use any other jutsu that require hand seals.
-The blast at the beginning of the jutsu is strong enough to blast the user backwards by around 15-20 feet.
-If two bullets are made, the blast at the beginning will be strong enough to blast anything in close range backwards by around 20-30 feet.
-Can only be used by Lord of Kaos.

~ Earth + Lightning = Shattered and broken Earth. Declined, do not resubmit. ~

 

[The Seven-Scaled boy]

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(Katon: Gouka)-Fire Style: splendor
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A(+30 to opponent if he/she's touching the user as the purge happens; +20 to user)
Description:The user will concentrate a lot of katon chakra into his chakra circulatory system. When concentrated enough, the user will release it in a shockwave of luminc and caloric energy which will burn anything touching the user and raise it's body temperature enough to evaporate water.
Notes: It may be used once per battle.
Notes: No katon the same and next turn.
Notes: Heating of body lasts one second and then that's it.
Notes: It takes at least 3 seconds to perfom this jutsu in the whole.

~ And also burn himself up from the inside. ~

^all 5 last week's sumbitions

(Kuchiyose setsuzoku: Nettai no ougi benkai)-Summoning union: Ultimate defence form the tropics
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Oneself
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A (+20 againt sopponent if he/she touches the barbs;-20 to user per turn active)
Description: The user will smear blood on his summonning tatoo and, in a complete leap of faith, will summon the back of a tropical caterpillar on his own. As in most cases, the bakc of this caterpillar possess poisonus barbs all around it, but it's really their disposition what really brings attention to it. The back of this caterpillar is composed of 6-10 falanges covered in the forementioned barbs. Upon being summonned, they will wrap the user from the head to the ground(leaving an open spot for underground attacks). If not impacted enough to be dispersed, they'll unwrap and may wrap the user again at will. The poison will get injected on the oppoent if he/she touches the barbs, causing pain and intense transpiration for 2 turns.
Notes: May only be done once per battle.
Notes: No forbiden-rank the same turn and no Summonning for 2 turns.
Notes: Will last up to 2 turns or until it recieved damage from an S-rank attack or it's equivalent (80 damage points).
Notes: The falanges are so heavy the user can't run with them on, only walk.
Notes: Only signers of the Caterpillar contract owned by The Seven-Scaled boy may use this jutsu.
Notes: Signers of this contract are immune to the poison.

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~ Declined, the only way this would work is if you couldn't use any jutsu ~


(Kuchiyose: Genkaku no Catergo)-Summoning:Catergo of the Illusions
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A (+60 damage for his signature Illusion)
Description: The user will smear blood on his summonning tatoo to bring Catergo forth. He was often mocked in his childhood because of his balck and white body and by his orange face and ass. Not seeing this as a barrier, he got better and managed to see a use to this, by casting Illusions on his bullies by the contrast of his body stripes and the usage of chakra. Nowadays, he the most avid user of genjutsu among the caterpillar tribe.
Notes: May only be summonned once per battle lasting up to 3 turns.
Notes: May use Genjutsu up to the users rank, provided that it doesn't need a KG or special ability or trait.(Couting towards move count)
Notes: Only signers of the Caterpillar contract owned by The Seven-Scaled boy may use this jutsu.
Notes:Once per battle, he may cast an Illusion with the strength of A-rank(that requires chakra network diruption in order to be broken) in which the opponent feels his body getting eaten by mulitple caterpillars resulting in a constant suffering and mental damage. The Illusion will affect one person who hasn't signed the contract and is looking at the striped body of Catergo.(Not counting)

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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[UzumakiJake]

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(Senjutsu:kyaputen wakusei) sages art: captain planet!
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra:70
Damage: 70
Description: While using 2 clones or anything that can use jutsu you combine water, wind and fire to combine in the air and attack the enemy with smouldering hott steam created by the attacks.

*Must have 2 clones, a team mate or anything that can manipulate the needed jutsu.

~ Why not just summon the five fricking rings ? -____-" Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Hyouton: Shimotōki ) - Ice release: Frost Winter

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Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 20 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( Ends battle if jutsu has been more than six turns )
Description: User makes Boar - Rooster - Dog - Snake handseals and releases both Wind and Water chakra in air, causing temperature to drop rapidly beneath -30. The idea of this attack is that user turns the air and atmosphere so cold that it'll stop the fight if the opponent(s) stay there more than six turns. The user itself is able of staying inside of this cold weather for seven turns before freezing due Hyouton KG. The jutsu works in way that first opponent feels cold, then after one turn the cold feeling turns into warmth and heat ( Like it does in real life when you've gotten too cold. The coming warmth prevents the opponent(s) from getting suspicious and they wont do anything about this. Once then atmosphere has gotten colder every Wind attack that's used creates cold gust and time from the Six turns drops by half turn. This is double edged blade and it renders both user and opponent(s) unable to fight if they've been on the field too long.
Note:
- Can only be used once
- No Ice and Water can be used for whole battle
- Can only be avoided with time or space ninjutsu
- User cannot use Water or Fire along with opponent while the atmosphere's cold
- User and Opponent(s) suffer same damage from this jutsu.

I made this according the idea of Winter and how everything's cold in it. I live in Finland - Winter country so there has been many times over - 20 degrees cold and how many drunk people die during winters when they sleep outside. This is not really OPed jutsu when both user and opponent suffer the same damage and Ice + Water cannot be used in the battle afterwards.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

( Hyouton: Shimokaradaka ) - Ice release: Frost Body

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self - Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User makes Dog - Rooster handseals and focuses Water + Wind element based chakra all around own body, resulting a jutsu to activate where user's body turns cold and everything that comes in contact with it will be covered in frost. If user touches Water a small part of it will freeze ( If you'd walk on water the surface would freeze ). If someone touches user while he/she is using this the part that comes in contact with him will be covered with frost.
Note:
- There isn't a limit on how long can you use this jutsu but you cannot use fire element while it's activated
- Can only be used once

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Faith]

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Custom Weapon : Holy Gu Zheng ( 聖なる グウ ツェン )

Rank: A
Type: Offensive - Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: +10 to user sound/music art jutsu
Description: Gu zheng is a old Chinese music instrumental that can use to play relaxing music in the older time and it is also very light and user can carry it at his back, when user apply chakra to his fingers and play the gu zheng, it can release powerful sound wave to hurt opponent ear or even cost hurt to their brain. User also can use gu zheng to protect himself by using it to make a sound wave shield to reflect incoming attacks.

• [*]10 Chakra point every turn
  [*]Only can use sound wave shield twice in battle
  [*]Boots user sound & music art attacks by +10
  [*]Gu Zheng is a very light weapon
  [*]Can only be used by ~Faith~

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Wood Style : Tree Root Control
Rank : A
Type: Supplementary
Range : Short-Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Point : N/A
Description: The user release his chakra through his feet to the ground within a short time, then he slam his hand together so that he can freely control all tree root underneath the ground. User can use tree root as a defend or an attack.

• 10 Chakra point every turn
• +20 to all wood jutsu and +10 to earth jutsu
• User cannot use any wood jutsu this turn

Wood Style : Thousand Year Tree Root
Rank : A
Type Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Point: 40
Damage Point : 60
Description: User slam his both hand together, and force all tree root to rise quickly in all area then user can control tree root to wrap the opponent up and crushe them to death, the tree root are so strong that it cannot be break so easily.

• 3 time Usable in battle
• No A-ranked wood jutsu can be performed during the next turn

User will perform this hand seal :

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[Zenryoku]

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(Gen'ei Itoguruma no Jutsu) - Phantom Spinning wheels technique

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will concentrate within their twin army arrangement fans on each one fire and lightning chakra and then by wielding the chain connecting both, the wielder will spin the fans in circular motions at a high speed creating a red and yellow flashing wheel that also creates several mirror image like shapes from the speed to draw the targets attention away from the real pair and then bring them down slashing at the target with devastating speed and power.
Note: speed of technique can be seen by doujutsu and can only be used 3 times.
Note: Must wield Twin Army Arrangement Fan.

~ Approved ~

(Amatsu Shinnen) - Heavenly conviction

Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will wield the twin army arrangement fans in such a way that they begin spinning them rapidly in all directions with chakra infused within them adding additional strenght. In this motion the user may deflect all taijutsu based techniques up to A rank, and elemental techniques up to B rank.
Note: Can only be used if wielder hold twin army arrangement fan and doujutsu users can see through the pattern to aim for a weakness.
Note: Requires a gap of at least one turn between each use

~ Approved ~

Note: as you should be aware i hold the twin army arrangement fan just to make clarification of the requirements to use them.

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Genka Jiyuusankashō ɸ Sennuki Yasaki Rendan ) - Thirteen Verse Song ɸ Corkscrew Arrowhead Barrage

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80

"...The first known wielder of the Kariteserei was a highly skilled acrobat. This technique is the one used by that famed wielder to defeat a group of monks seeking to steal his weapon... The ground was shredded and birds sliced as they flew whenever he used this truly devastating skill..."
~ Chronicles of the Seven Swords

The wielder of the Kariteseirei lifts the sword above his head, and uses its special ability to make it extend into an enormous chakra scythe capable of reaching great distances above and in any direction.
He then brings his hand down at blinding speed, assisted by the force of gravity, creating a huge slash with the sword at the point he is aiming at. Immediately after the downward swing of the first slash nears completion,the wielder uses the momentum to corkscrew in his position and bring the sword down for a second slash with much greater velocity and force. This process repeats itself thirteen times, each strike gaining in speed and power, with the thirteenth being faster than the blink of an eye and being able to create a fissure in the ground with the strike.
After each strike, an arrowhead pattern is gashed into the ground by the sword as it is pulled back for another strike, giving the technique its name.
The wielder can turn his direction during the corkscrew to hit an opponent who is moving or has moved after an earlier strike.
Obviously, the Kariteserei's special abilities give a huge reach to the technique, but the same technique can be used with one - three normal swords, but the reach of these techniques is only short-range, though the concept is the same.
ɸ The technique may be utilised only once per battle.
ɸ After the technique is used, no other sword-jutsu of the Kariteseirei or whichever sword was used can be used for a turn.
ɸ No Taijutsu next turn.

( Tenbatsu Inazuma ɸ Makaze Inshi ) - God's Wrathful Flashing Lightning ɸ Cursed Storm Shrine

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80

"...The righteous were savaged by God's might, ripped apart by his wrath as a devotee fallen from grace used it to satisfy his thirst for vengeance..."
~ The Book of Damnation, Chronicles of Jashin

A technique used by the first Jashinist - as legend goes - to destroy what he believed heretic worship of other gods, the devastation caused by this technique is comparable to a fragment of God's wrath bursting into fulmination.
The user extends his hand toward his intended target spot, and half-closes his fingers to resemble claws. His hands crackle with lightning as his lightning superheats the air around that area, producing a monstrous thunderclap, reaching ten meters on every direction from its target.
The temperatures in the thunderclap reach staggering heights that melt or simply incinerate all caught up within it, while the sudden crackling explosion of the lightning shatters the earth, leaving it deeply scarred and superheated enough to burn to the touch. The most frightening part of this technique, to a victim is the ear-splitting crash created due to the thunderclap, which disorient and knock down them enough to be consumed by the wrath of this technique.
ɸ The technique may be utilised only thrice per battle.
ɸ After the technique is used thrice, the constant exposure to the sound leaves the user deaf to any sound for the remainder of the battle.
ɸ The user must be a Jashinist or have come into contact with a Jashinist at some point in their RPG Character Biography before they can use this technique.

( Haoshoku Haki ɸ Otochi ) - King's Disposition ɸ Royal Lineage

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 ( +15 per turn to maintain )
Damage Points: N/A

Each fighter - no, let us dig deeper - each and every person possesses an inner sense of ambition, the unquenchable thirst to succeed, to attain the unattainable, to do the undoable. Yet, most people do not also possess the unique bled of ambition, ruthlessness and a willing to tap into their innermost psyche in a situation to draw upon that fount of power to aid them in reaching the pinnacle of their ability. It is one in a million people born with the unique ability to utilise their ambition as a physical force - when using it to give their chakra a "feel", the exact same way many ninja use raw bloodlust to create Killing Intent - to produce effects unmissable in battle.
The chakra, merging with ambition to glow a pure white, can be released in bursts, a continuous wave that covers the entire area or used to enhance battling skill. Haoshoku Haki, when released as instant localised flares that wash an area in it or a stream, will be act on the minds of any people in it, their weak wills clashing with the dominant force that provides searing psychological pain to the person as well as snapping his confidence and self-esteem, slowing him down enough to be hittable, reducing his strength or stripping any confidence he might have to pull out a good battle plan. The mindset of the opponent will turn from a neutral and confident fighter, or an aggressor, to one who is simply so psychologically shattered that his only instinct is to survive and will give no thought to even launching an effective counterattack.
When focused inwardly, Haoshoku Haki lends a white glow around the ninja. His abilities fueled and surpassed by his drive to succeed, the ninja gains speed and strength, rivaling a person who has unlocked the Fourth Inner Gate, as well as enhanced reaction time matching an Uchiha with the Sharingan at three tomoe, though not even close to the Mangekyo.
ɸ The technique may be activated only once per battle. If de-activated, it cannot be activated again for that battle.
ɸ Only one flare or wave may be sent out every two turns.
ɸ If the Haoshoku Haki is channeled inward, the effects last for four turns, after which the ninja cannot utilise any aspect of the Haoshoku Haki for the next two turns.
ɸ The Haoshoku Haki is not controllable, and will affect allies should they be present in the area that the ninja aims at.
ɸ The ambition to succeed will lead the ninja to not want help from anyone, leading him to refuse to Summon or create clones.

~Declined~ 0_o your kidding right?

 

[Pain..]

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Futon: Suzaku [Wind Release : Phoenix]
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Once the necessary handseals are formed, the user inhales a large amount of the surrounding wind and exhales it in one huge gust of wind. The wind takes the shape of a phoenix as it speeds towards its target, severing any and everything in its path


Raiton: Suzaku [ Lighting Release: Phoenix]
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After forming the necessary handseals the user points his Katana in direction of sky, sending lighting from the sword to the sky, and then that lighting is combined in the clouds, then the user calls the lightning bolts down from the sky and manipulates their shape to form that of a phoenix. The lightning is then sent crashing down on the target, bearing the trademark crippling sound as it rips through anything and everything in its path, dealing devastating results. This jutsu can't be used repeatedly, only three times per fight unless the user create the lighting clouds (this jutsu causes the clouds to dissipate if its used too much)


Raiton: Rairyuudan [Lighting Release: Dragon Bolt ]
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Descripton:Once the necessary handseals are formed, the user creates a large bolt of lightning in the shape of a dragon. The dragon can move at precise speed and accuracy, and will destroy the ground it travels upon. A loud, crippling sound can be heard as this technique rips through the ground and anything it touches, dealing devistating damage.

~ All Declined, do not resubmit. ~

 

[Magellan]

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Changing the element and modifying the description.


Raiton: Jige boruto shouheki - Lightning: Underground bolt barrier
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Attack Points: 40
After quick succession of hand seals, the user will slap both hands on the ground converting their chakra into lightning. The user sends an enormous bolt of electricity that surrounds within the vicinity in a circular formation. The bolt will directly swoop down to the ground forming into a cylinder-triangular shape. Due to their greater density, anyone traveling underground and being mid-range from the user will be electrocuted.
(unless being at least 10 meters under ground).

~ Um.. Is there a reason why you randomly made lines end in the middle ? Resubmit with a restriction ~

Raiton: Jige boruto shouheki - Lightning: Underground bolt barrier
Type: Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Attack Points: 40
After quick succession of hand seals, the user will slap both hands on the ground converting their chakra into lightning. The user sends an enormous bolt of electricity that surrounds within the vicinity in a circular formation. The bolt will directly swoop down to the ground forming into a cylinder-triangular shape. Due to their greater density, anyone traveling underground and being mid-range from the user will be electrocuted.
(unless being at least 10 meters under ground).

Note: can only be used four times in battle

~ First copy the entire Jutsu Template before you submit 0_o ~


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[Ryuji]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: Igneel No Ken
Type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 After summoning in each turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will bite his thumb and write ''Ryu'' on his rigth hand to summon a sword. It's name comes from an ancient Dragon capable of spiting intense flames, since this sword is made of the dragon's fang. The sword can absorb and control fire at the users will (natural fire or the user own fire) discarding the neccesary use of handseals for fire jutsus by gathering fire inside the sword. As well the sword can release a powerfull blast of fire in the shape of a wave or a dragon by focusing a large amount of fire chakra into the tip of the sword.Since this sword is a fire weapon is naturally weak againts water, if this sword or the user is hit by a A or S-rank water jutsu the sword cannot be used for the rest of the battle and the user will take 10 more damage points for water jutsus.
Note:The user cannot use water jutsus while using the sword.

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~ Purple part to be removed completely. Restrict the number of times the wave or dragon can be launched ~

(Katon:Urufu no Pakku)-Fire Style:Wolf Pack
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing several handseals the user will create flames in front of him that take the form of a large wolf pack to charge at the opponent. The wolfs can spread around the area to attack from different directions.

~ Declined, similar technique exists ~

Custom Weapon: Igneel No Ken
Type: Attack/Defense/ Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 After summoning in each turn)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will bite his thumb and write ''Ryu'' on his rigth hand to summon a sword. It's name comes from an ancient Dragon capable of spiting intense flames, since this sword is made of the dragon's fang. The sword can absorb and control fire at the users will (natural fire or the user own fire) discarding the neccesary use of handseals for fire jutsus by gathering fire inside the sword. As well the sword can release a powerfull blast of fire in the shape of a wave or a dragon by focusing a large amount of fire chakra into the tip of the sword with equal power to an A-rank fire jutsu but only usable twice per battle and no A or S-rank fire jutsus in the next turn after each attack.Since this sword is a fire weapon is naturally weak againts water, if this sword or the user is hit by a A or S-rank water jutsu the sword cannot be used for the rest of the battle and the user will take 10 more damage points for water jutsus.
Note:The user cannot use water jutsus while using the sword.

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~ If I say remove the purple part completely I MEAN remove the purple part completely. This is now Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[The Seven-Scaled boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose setsuzoku: Nettai no ougi benkai)-Summoning union: Ultimate defence form the tropics
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Oneself
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A (+20 againt sopponent if he/she touches the barbs;-20 to user per turn active)
Description: The user will smear blood on his summonning tatoo and, in a complete leap of faith, will summon the back of a tropical caterpillar on his own. As in most cases, the bakc of this caterpillar possess poisonus barbs all around it, but it's really their disposition what really brings attention to it. The back of this caterpillar is composed of 6-10 falanges covered in the forementioned barbs. Upon being summonned, they will wrap the user from the head to the ground(leaving an open spot for underground attacks). If not impacted enough to be dispersed, they'll unwrap and may wrap the user again at will. The poison will get injected on the oppoent if he/she touches the barbs, causing pain and intense transpiration for 2 turns.
Notes: May only be done once per battle.
Notes: No forbiden-rank the same turn and no Summonning for 2 turns.
Notes: Will last up to 2 turns or until it recieved damage from an S-rank attack or it's equivalent (80 damage points).
Notes: The falanges are so heavy the user can't run with them on, only walk.
Notes: Only signers of the Caterpillar contract owned by The Seven-Scaled boy may use this jutsu.
Notes: Signers of this contract are immune to the poison.

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~ Declined, the only way this would work is if you couldn't use any jutsu ~

(Kuchiyose setsuzoku: Nettai no ougi benkai)-Summoning union: Ultimate defence form the tropics
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Oneself
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A (+20 againt sopponent if he/she touches the barbs;-20 to user per turn active)
Description: The user will smear blood on his summonning tatoo and, in a complete leap of faith, will summon the back of a tropical caterpillar on his own. As in most cases, the bakc of this caterpillar possess poisonus barbs all around it, but it's really their disposition what really brings attention to it. The back of this caterpillar is composed of 6-10 falanges covered in the forementioned barbs. Upon being summonned, they will wrap the user from the head to the ground(leaving an open spot for underground attacks). If not impacted enough to be dispersed, they'll unwrap and may wrap the user again at will. The poison will get injected on the oppoent if he/she touches the barbs, causing pain and intense transpiration for 2 turns.
Notes: May only be done once per battle.
Notes: No forbiden-rank the same turn and no Summonning for as long as they are in effect
Notes: Will last up to 2 turns or until it recieved damage from an S-rank attack or it's equivalent (80 damage points).
Notes: The falanges are so heavy the user can't run with them on, only walk.
Notes: Only signers of the Caterpillar contract owned by The Seven-Scaled boy may use this jutsu.
Notes: Signers of this contract are immune to the poison.
Notes: While this jutsu is active, the constant drain of having the back of the caterpillar defending him, doesn't let him use elemental jutsu or Taijutsu while this cloak is active. But genjutsu may be used while under the cloak.

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~ Approved ~

^I hope this fits what you meant, otherwise, please do not hesitate on telling me if I should make the restriction tougher. is there anything with normal ninjutsu?

(Kuchiyose: Kuromeru soshaku no Caterplera)-Summoning: Caterplera, of black bite
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Oneself
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A(+30 to user on activation, +15 to user evey turn active.)
Description: The user will smear blood on his summonning tatoo and bring forth a small(normal caterpillar size), black barbed caterpillar which will inject a poison on the user and reverse summon back to home. The poison is a constant evolutioning toxin, so the user's natural immunnity won't help him. The toxin produces, the heart to pump faster(increasing speed), the nerves axons to shoot neuro transmisors faster (increasing reacting time).
Notes: The user may do this once per battle.
Notes: The user will feel exhausted after 4 turns of usage(which, by the way, is the maximum quanity of time for this jutsu before the toxin is eliminated) and not be able to run or make handseals for 2 turns.
Notes: Must have signed the caterpillar contract owned by The Seven-Scaled boy.
Notes: No summonning for the same turn and during the effect of this jutsu.
Notes: The speed is comparable to the 1st gate and the reaction time seems greatly incresed, just below the raikage's in his armour.

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^I couldn't find a comparison for the increased reaction, I know raikage's may be too much and I'm willing to change it along other changes you consider necessary.(perhaps it needs a rank augmentaition, right?)

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Akimichi Hijutsu: (Chou/bubun) Hikisage no jutsu )-Secret jutsu of the Akimichi clan: (super/partial)Reduction jutsu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: onself
Chakra Cost: 30(+5 for Bubun +10 for Chou)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will reduce his size of his body by infusing chakra throught all of it. The user may become as small as a shuriken(normal reduction), turning this Ideal for escaping incoming jutsus or attacks.
Notes: May only be done thrice per battle.any variant counts
Notes: All attacks lose +40 damage while in this form.
Notes: Lasts 2 turns.
Notes: Must be taught by a member of the akimichi clan.
Notes: With the partial form of this jutsu the user may reduce only one limb at a time with each use.
Notes: Super reduction jutsu may make the user as small as a grain of rice.
Notes: Must be taught by a memeber of the akimichi clan.

(Katon:chuuko fenikkusu no iyoku)-Fire Style: Will of the old phonix
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: onself
Chakra Cost: All chakra
Damage: N/A(death to user)
Description: The user, in the last moments of his existence, will release all of his katon chakra from the inside and out, without any control nor safeguard. The result of this is that their body is turned to ashes the second the katon chakra is released.
Notes: May only be done 3 times per bio.
Notes: Complete last resort jutsu, only to be used in desperate situations.
Notes: Must be taught by The Seven-Scaled boy.

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu: musan kunai (Illusion Technique: vanishing Kunai)
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Type: supplementary/Attack
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user pulls out one kunai with a bell attached to it once the bell makes a sound it releases a special frequency putting the opponent use in a genjutsu without them knowing, the genjutsu will cause the opponent senses to weakling this will affect his/her hearing and sight but this will only affect the kunai which is in the users hand so once the user throws the kunai it will look to the opponent as if the user is simply reaching out to them and while this is happening a kunai is coming at the opponent at high speeds without them knowing.
-This genjutsu can be seen through by Byakugan, Rin'negan and Sharingan 1 tomoe and up.
-This genjutsu is casted by sound so it happens instantly
-Can be used twice per battle

~ Declined. Similar technique exists. ~

 

[Ushiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Soushi Arashi to Ken) Twin Storm Blades
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: +10 each turn when infused with lightning chakra.
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to all lightning techniques)
Description: These two swords are made of a special metal that is very durable and that can be infused with lightning chakra. When infused, the swords can easily cut through ordinary metal and A-rank and below earth techniques. Being cut causes numbing in the general area. They can absorb up to B-rank lightning attacks. The user can also swing the swords and launch a B-rank shockwave at the opponent.
-Lightning techniques can be used without hand seals.
-Shockwave can only be used 4 times per battle.

Remove the no handseals part and reduce the number of shockwaves. Resubmit with another restriction ~

 

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kenjutsu: Dochu Eigyo Hada) - Sword Style: Undergound Sword Projection

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user stabs a sword in the ground. After that, he makes one handseal, and the sword slowly sinks in the ground. From the next turn on, the sword can erupt at any desired place from the ground up to medium range from the user.

~ Do you really think this should be an S rank ? All it does is project a sword through the ground ~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Hyouton: Shimokaradaka ) - Ice release: Frost Body

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self - Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User makes Dog - Rooster handseals and focuses Water + Wind element based chakra all around own body, resulting a jutsu to activate where user's body turns cold and everything that comes in contact with it will be covered in frost. If user touches Water a small part of it will freeze ( If you'd walk on water the surface would freeze ). If someone touches user while he/she is using this the part that comes in contact with him will be covered with frost.
Note:
- There isn't a limit on how long can you use this jutsu but you cannot use fire element while it's activated
- Can only be used once

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

( Fuuton: Gyōshuku AtsuBakuhatsu ) - Wind release: Condenced Pressure Explosion

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Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120/90/60 ( Varies among ranges )
Description: The ultimate Wind attack. User creates it by gathering large amount of Wind and compresses it into one that's size of baseball. After that's done user can either defuse it or let it out on the ground in front of him/her. When the compressed wind hits anything it will create gigantic explosion from the Wind that's regaining its original size and the size is about 1/50 of Deidara's C0 even though it's able to destroy a 100 X 100 meter space around the place where the pressure explosion happens. This jutsu is often used as last resort jutsu due the fact that user also takes the same damage as others do on short range. The power of explosion varies among ranges - On short range it causes -120 damage, On mid range it causes -90 damage and On long range it causes -60 damage. The explosion leaves large crater in ground.
Note:
- No Fuuton can be used afterwards
- User cannot use any other jutsu that's forbidden ranked for two turns afterwards
- User suffers Short - Ranged damage when the pressure explosion happens.

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( Genjutsu: Oto Hineru ) - Genjutsu: Sound Twist

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Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User concentrates chakra all around his body and produces a sound that's defined by user while using this jutsu. It can be snap made with fingers, Clap made with hands or Whistling made by user. The effect of that is that once heard opponent paralyzes and his/her body starts twisting and violently shaking. The Genjutsu itself is almost instant due the fact that it travels with speed of sound.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- User cannot use Genjutsu on two turns afterwards.

~ Have you like just gone through Roku's Customs and copied them with slight changes ? Both Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Kansas Bred]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Art: Raging Bull Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: N/a
Chakra: 40
Damage points: N/a
Increases the damage of Taijutsu by +15
Increases the damage of Ninjutsu by +5
Description: Bull mode is a very deadly part of the Ox/Bull teachings due to the fact that the bulls are all very strong, Very fast and have bad tempers there was a way they have made to use this as a technique that instantly gives the user adrenaline and makes them faster and stronger and feel close to no pain but not exact the way the bulls have come to acheive this is by triggering a memory that lets the user instanly tap into the power of the bulls, They all have a link together that makes huge sums of chakra to resort to. It makes the user gain all this power once they can set off the trigger, The trigger is taught through extreme training of using your brain once you have went through the training you get a memory gate that you have to open to reach this power you must have good chakra control and a big pool of chakra to use for the opening of the memory and make the pefect mix with the bulls chakra if you dont mix the chakra's correctly you can instantly be turned into a savage completely taking over you're conciousness and making you crave for the lust of blood there is no way to reverse the effects of this thats why so many people have failed to complete the training or just havent tried, Once you acheive all of this you not only get the imensse power of the bulls you're pupil fills you're whole eyes and your eyes become perfect circles that then are filled with a blood red color.

Note: Can only be use if taught by drizzy and have signed the contract
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Once the jutsu ends the user cannot do any A-rank jutsu or above for the next turn
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle (Must wait 10 turns to use again)
Note: When user is in this mode they can endure up to 2 A-rank jutsu per battle

~ WTF, do you have some shared collective memory with the bulls or sthg ? Star Trek much ? ~

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose: Zatch & Zeno Bell [Summoning Jutsu: Zatch and Zeno Bell]
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user clasp his hands together and in them a large book will appear, along with two short child looking figures. One being named Zatch who has golden hair the other named Zeno who has white which reflects the color of the electrcity. They are twins which hold a special affinity to lightning and function more like puppets. The book the user holds in his palm consist of a variety of attacks ranging from D-Forbidden and allows control of the two. If this book were burned the user won't be able to summon the for the rest of the battle.

Raiton| Zakeru [Lightning Release| Zaker]
Rank: B/A/S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20 (+10 if Zakeruga is used, +20 if Teozakeru is used)
Damage: 40 (+20 if Zakeruga is used + 40 if Teozakeru is used)
Description: A technique inside the large book summoned by the user. Zakeru is a weak, sporadic bolt of electricty that shoots at the opponent, electrocuting them. When used by Zatch it comes from his mouth and appears golden, while when used by Zeno, from his hands and appears silver. The user can apply more chakra into the two to have it become more powerful concentrated beam of lightning, therby being named Zakeruga or Teozakeru which is a massive blast of lightning that fries the enemy and covers a wide range.
(S-Rank is only usable once)

Raiton| Surudo Zakeruga [Lightning Release| Zakeruga Sword]
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A huge sword with a blade made of lightning is summoned, which Zeno or Zatch can hold and use as a physical weapon.
(Last 2 turns)

~ Um. WTF. If you try summoning characters from other mangas, I will :nexus: you. Declined, do not resubmit any. ~

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

It's now the 31st, so my (completely fair) ban from this thread is now up.

As I knew it wasn't cannon, I asked Zen about it (since he handles cannon jutsu) and he agreed that it was not cannon. Therefore I am resubmitting this, so I should not get infracted for it again...

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(Sensa Kufuu)- Sensor Suppression Device
Type-Supplementary
Rank-Forbidden
Range-Short-Long
Chakra cost- 30 per turn while the device is on
Damage-30 to user per turn while the device is on
Description- As shown in the first Naruto movie (Ninja Clash in the Land of Snow), there are special technologies that can affect chakra (the one in the movie drained chakra when attached to enemies). This device however is used on its owner. When turned on, it emits a chakra frequency all throughout the area that disrupts sensing abilities by spreading the users chakra all around. (Example: If someone has a chakra sensing ability like Karin's they would sense the user's chakra all around them, not allowing them to pick up on the users actual location or the location of any jutsu he is using, they would have to rely only on their basic senses (sight, sound, etc). Same with jutsu like chakra sensing rain, it would pick up chakra signals all over, not allowing the sensor to locate the user properly.)
*Only HiddenShadowNinja bios can create/use this device
*The user cannot use any S-rank or higher jutsu while this device is turned on or sensing abilities will pick up on the higher amount of chakra being used for the jutsu than what is being put out by the device.

~ Okay, Declined, do not resubmit. There, that takes care of that. ~

and also submitting these

Custom Weapon-(Chakra Saburu)-Chakra Saber
Type- Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank- Forbidden
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- 50 (and 10 per turn)
Damage- 90 (-30 lightning damage to user if it's extinguished)
Description- The user combines his fire and lightning chakras (70% fire, 30% lightning) and forms them into a blade that extends from the hilt/hilts the user carries. Essentially it is a blade of lightning, encased by a blade of fire. Due to the intense heat, this weapon is able to cut through anything like butter, however, also because of the heat, anything it cuts is burned shut on contact. Meaning there is no blood and no risk of bleeding out. Then, due to the lightning aspect, it paralyzes/numbs on contact as well, so, if cut, the opponent wouldn't feel the pain right away due to the numbness.
*This weapon can only be used by its owner (HiddenShadowNinja)
*The user can wield up to 2 of these at once, or can combine the hilts to form 1 double-bladed chakra saber.
*The user must be extemely careful in weilding these, as it is very easy to injure yourself with them as well.
*S-rank and above water jutsu can extinguish the blade, as well as shock the user due to the lightning aspect. This would also numb the users hands for the following turn, making hand seals impossible.
*If extinguished, the blade can be re-ignited 3 turns after.
*S-rank and above wind jutsu weakens the blade by 10 points, due to the lightning aspect, for 2 turns. (Would've weakened it by more, but the wind would add to the fire part...so I figured it'd work out to about -10 damage off it)
*While using these, the user cannot use any other fire or lightning jutsu

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~ There's already a technique that superheats a sword to instantly burn shut wounds created. ~

(Dansei-Batuto)- Man-Bat jutsu
Type-Supplementary
Rank-Forbidden
Range-Self
Chakra cost-50 (-40 per turn unless draining)
Damage- (-20 to user after the transformation ends)
Description- The user utilizes his contract with the bats to become part man, part bat. The users eyes gloss over (looking similar to the Hyuugas w/o byakugan activated) and he becomes blind. However, he gains the ability to sense heat and smell chakra to locate opponents. He also grows fangs and wings, and is able to use the chakra draining jutsu if he bites the opponent. The users strength also gains +10 to taijutsu, but he loses the ability to preform any elemental jutsu other than wind jutsu.
*This jutsu can only be used/taught by HiddenShadowNinja
*Must have signed the contract with bats to use this jutsu
*Once activated the user cannont use any elements other than wind
*This jutsu only lasts 3 turns, however if the user cannot successfully drain any chakra, it will end in 2
*No other jutsu involving bats can be used for the rest of the battle after this jutsu ends, including summonings.

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~ Why not just turn into Batman ? Declined, do not resubmit. ~

(I would like these checked by someone other than Emperor)
Sorry, but it's me again

 

[Hot.Tendo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Weasels
Scroll Owner: Me
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: Giant Weasel
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None

Is this how it's done?
this is my summoning animal by the way...

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~ NO !!! THIS IS NOT how it's done. Jeez. Couldn't you have taken the time to go back along this thread and see how Summonings are submitted, for god's sake ? ~