[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Sharingdork]

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(Mireniamuroddo) Millennium Rod
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: The Millennium Rod was an item created long ago and gifted to the Water Country. Though most of the Rod's fame was created through legend and not it's true abilities, it still holds great power for the wielder. The shaft of the Rod is actually a hidden scabbard, which holds a small blade the user can shoot out at will, up to mid-range. The blade of the Rod is actually a hollowed out blade, and inside of the scabbard are multiple casings which attach to bases at the end of the Rod, where the scabbard and the Rod meet, allowing the user to resheath the Rod to create a new blade, and to be able to shoot off multiple blades without running out or having to pick up a discarded one. The Rod also allows the user to see through the eye topping the Rod, allowing them to see where ever the Rod may be pointed, and protecting them from visual genjutsu.
Note: ~Shooting a blade counts as a move

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±± Declined ±± bolded part...why and how come? Explain it better

 

[black uchiha]

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(Kabutomushibosu: Kingu Shinobu)The Rhinoceros Beetle Boss: King Shinobu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons the King of Mt. Gen. Lord Shinobu is one of only five beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. King Shinobu stands 40ft tall, with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Shinobu hands are tipped with claws, and he has wings extending from his back for flight. Being king, Shinobu is the strongest of all the Mt. Gen beetle. He has the nature affinitie of wind using it up to S-rank. His special ability is to summon 2 of his followers (at once) to aid him in battle and reverse summon the user (within the battlefield only).
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Can only summon 2 followers once per battle(counts as one of the user 3 moves per turn)
- Can only reverse summon once per battle
- Can’t summon any other summoning after Shinobu is dispelled
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 3 months

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~Declined~ The reverse-summoning is actually an independent custom so you can't include it in your technique (it was already created).

(Kabutomushibosu: Kingu Shinobu)The Rhinoceros Beetle Boss: King Shinobu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons the King of Mt. Gen. Lord Shinobu is one of only five beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. King Shinobu stands 40ft tall, with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Shinobu hands are tipped with claws, and he has powerful wings extending from his back for flight. He is capable of flying at high speed even while carrying extra weight. Being king, Shinobu is the strongest of all the Mt. Gen beetle. He has the nature affinitie of wind using it up to S-rank, his wings adds +10 damage to the wind. His special ability is to summon 2 of his followers (at once) to aid him in battle.
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Wings add +10 to wind techniques
- Can only summon 2 followers once per battle(counts as one of the user 3 moves per turn)
- Can’t summon any other summoning after Shinobu is dispelled
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 3 months

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±± Declined ±± By summoning two other followers you mean two other beetle summons of your own? Meaning you'd have 3 summons in play at the same time? No.


took out the reverse summoning part

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

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(Katon: Kyanpufaia) - Fire Release: Campfire
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After using either Crushing Toad Stomach or Toad Mouth Bind, the Giant Fire toad will via fire chakra create somewhat of a blanket of fire on itself, inside the stomach whereever it wishes to burn it's opponents alive. This doesn't happen instantly, however very fast.
~ Useable twice per battle.
~ Two turns inbetween usage.


±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. The implications and uses of this are OP. It has no restrictions.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

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(Suiton: Hitoshirezu Kiri Kison no Jutsu )Water Release: Hidden Mist Assassination Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user sends water chakra underground or underwater (depending on the battlefield)and forms a water clone the same size as the user in their opponent's shadow that raises up without a sound and using the silent homicide technique slices the opponents throat.
-Can only be used 2 times per battle.
-Can only be used by ninjas born in the hidden mist.
-Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.

±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit.


Ancient Weapon of the Hozuki Clan Lords: Poseidon
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost:30( if needed to summon)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to Water ninjutsu)
Description: This weapon was created by the founding members of the Hozuki clan in the days before the 5 great village system and lost during war until the 2nd mizukage found where it had been sealed away by the 2nd hokage at the bottom of the ocean. Poseidon is a royal blue Trident made of chakra reactive metal (able to have elemental chakra flow through it) and is unbreakable. The unique ability of Poseidon is its power in the hands of those with strong water affinities, molding their water chakra inside of it and releasing it through the 3 prongs on top the way ninjas mold chakra in their bodies and release it out their chakra points. This allows the user to use water release (up to A rank) with no seals.
-Can't use Lightning release while holding Poseidon
-Must have water affinity and mastered water release.
-Can only be used by Professor Sarutobi.


±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Why would a weapon make you use an element without hand seals? Similar swords, staffs, spears, tridents exist. The name is taken. Etc etc etc

 

[AntiHero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Jutsu: Carbuncle Tribe (Kuchiyose no Jutsu : Carbuncle Zoku )
Scroll Owner: AntiHero
-Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
-Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
-Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Persian, Liepard, Luxray
• Persian, Battle Cat

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Type: Summoning
Rank: C
Range: short/long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 30
Description: Persian appearance is arguably more similar to Siamese cat than its namesake. She is as big as a Puma. The gem on its head makes it resemble a Carbuncle, a Latin-American mythological beast which had a jewel on its forehead. Her tail has a distinctive whorl at the end. Her fur is pale tan with the exception of black-rimmed ears. Perhaps her most distinctive feature is the red jewel in the center of her forehead. Many of the members of the Cat’s Ear Tribe with elemental abilities have similar jewels; Persian, however, does not demonstrate any affinities to a particular element, so this connection seems to be purely coincidental. Like 'real-life' cats, Persian is capable of retracting its claws and bringing them out again when needed, she is also very swift and can track peoples scent. Its thick whiskers are very sensitive to changes in air movements, enabling it to detect its prey by movement alone. Persian's lithe muscles also enable it to walk without making a sound.
Note: Persian cannot use elemental jutsu.
Note: Each jutsu Persian uses counts towards the users 3 jutsu per turn count.
Note: Can only be summon by AntiHero and others who have signed the Carbuncle contract.
Note: Can only be in play for 3-turns.

• Liepard, Cruel Prankster

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Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: short/long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: Depends on the jutsu it uses.
Description: Liepard appears to be a leopard cat, a species of wildcat that appear to have traits of both housecats and leopards. It slightly resembles a black panther, because the spots on the panther's coat can be seen if examined closely. Liepard is a slender, primarily purple-colored feline, similar to a large house cat. It has a pink "mask" patterning over its eyes, a pink nose, and small yellow "eyebrows". It has two pairs of long yellow whiskers, with the tufted underside of its body and the tips of its legs also yellow. Its body is speckled with yellow rosettes, and it has a curling tail that looks somewhat like a sickle. Liepard move silently and elegantly, preferring to take down their opponents by stealth. They sneak up behind their victims, and attack before they have a chance to react.
Note: Liepard can turn itself into mist, having an affinity for water.
Note: Can only use C-rank and below water jutsu.
Note: Each jutsu Liepard uses counts towards the users 3 jutsu per turn count.
Note: Can only be summon by AntiHero and others who have signed the Carbuncle contract.
Note: Can only be in play for 3-turns.

• Luxray, Intimidating Eyes

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Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: Depends on the jutsu it uses.
Description: Luxray has a spiky black mane that covers its head down to its legs. Its back legs are black and blue and it has a black tail with a star-like shape on the tip. It has three rings on the backs of its legs and has red eyes. Luxray have extraordinary eyesight. It is so powerful that they can see through most objects, like x-ray vision. Luxray is extremely vicious, although very loyal to AntiHero. He can administer extreme amounts of power through electricity. Because of his flawless x-ray like vision, practically nothing can go unseen by its eyes.
Note: Can only use Lighting jutsu C-rank and below.
Note: Can not be harmed by lighting jutsu C-rank or below.
Note: Each jutsu Luxray uses counts towards the users 3 jutsu per turn count.
Note: Can only be summon by AntiHero and others who have signed the Carbuncle contract.
Note: Can only be in play for 3-turns.

(Mods please tell me what I have to do to get these approved if they don't)


±± All Declined ±± You need to first submit the contract for a correct animal that hasn't been done before. Then, once approved, you submit the animals. However, submitting the contract counts as one of your 3 weekly submissions. With the animals and the contracts you submitted 4 things at once. Also, what animal are you trying to sign?

 

[Kato.]

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(Senbun Issuiken Hitosashi) 1000 Water-Blade Dance
Rank: S
Type: Offence/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Damage: 80
Chakra: 40
Description: The user will perform the Serpent hand seal and manipulate a water source, making 1000 blades made from water come from the water source and bombard the opponent.
Each individual water-blade can be controled to do what ever the user requires.
This jutsu can be used to attack or defend. Due to the sheer number of water-blades this jutsu can act as a shield to block an opponents jutsu or to overwhelm an opponents jutsu.

-Requires a water source
-Can only be used twice in a battle
-Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon (and anyone I allow to use it)

(please edit anything that you think need changing)


±± Declined ±±Restrictions? 1000? can be manipulated to do WHATEVER the user requires?

 

[Roger23]

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(katon: nenshou kobushi ) Fire Style: burning fist
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60(+15 if used with jyuuken or taijutsu)
Description: The user focuses their katon chakra to create a fire-like field surrounding their hands. The fire field is really hot/burning and if the user puts his hands near each other (palms facing each other) raw fire moves in between them. When the user hits a body part, it leaves a serious burn and can cause that body part to catch on fire since its essential raw fire coating their hands
Note:This jutsu lasts for 1 turn
note: due to fire field, the user cant use any katon jutsus involving handseals while its activated
note: can only be taught by Roger23
note: the fire field is visible and can give the user away
note: can only be used 2 times
note: user cant use any katon tech past A-rank for 2 turns after the jutsu has worn off

±± Declined ±± Similar technique already exists.


(Suiton: enkai souhou ) Water Style: Ocean's Touch
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60(+15 if used with jyuuken or taijutsu)
Description: The user focuses their suiton chakra to create a watery bubble field surrounding their hands. The watery field is really just concentrated water and if the user puts his hands near each other (palms facing each other) pure water flows between them. When the user hits a body part, it leaves a spot of skin really soaked and is easily cut open per strike (size of cut would be a small, finger-tip sized cut)
Note:This jutsu lasts for 1 turn
note: due to water field, the user cant use any suiton jutsus involving handseals while its activated
note: can only be taught by Roger23
note: the water field is visible and can give the user away
note: can only be used 2 times
note: user cant use any suiton tech past A-rank for 2 turns after the jutsu has worn off

±± Declined ±± similar technique already exists


(Doton: chikushou dageki ) Earth Style: Brute strike
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60(+15 if used with jyuuken or taijutsu)
Description: The user focuses their doton chakra to create a muddly-like field surrounding their hands. The watery field is really just concentrated earth and if the user puts his hands near each other (palms facing each other) thick mud flows between them. When the user hits a body part, it leaves a huge bruise. Making every point hit, even more painful
Note:This jutsu lasts for 1 turn
note: the doton solidifies upon each strike
note: due to muddy field, the user cant use any doton jutsus involving handseals while its activated
note: can only be taught by Roger23
note: the muddy field is visible and can give the user away
note: can only be used 2 times
note: user cant use any doton tech past A-rank for 2 turns after the jutsu has worn off


±± Declined ±± Similar technique already exists

 

[Gutsy]

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(Katon: Soudai fusen haretsu)-Fire Majestic Tag Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: User smashes his hand into the ground, where tags come off and surround the opponent, while the user quickly performs the Boar-Serpent-Tiger seals, where after a ring of fire goes around the opponent engulfing the opponent in flames and making the tags explode.

±± Declined ±± similar technique aready exists.


(Katon: Sono gosai roze)-Fire The red rose
Type: defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user performs the Peacock-Serpent-Tiger seals, where a fire will then expel from the users hands, making a small dome, where the user is protected from the opponent. This fire is extremely hot, and if in contact with the flames it will cause heavy burns on the opponent.
Note: The Dome last for two turns
Note: Can only use fire release when inside the dome

±± Declined ±± Similar techniques already exist. Several.


(Katon: Doragon Kokyuu)-Fire Dragon breath
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user performs the Boar-Tiger seals, the user creates two small balls of fire, one in each hand, which are so extremely hot, that even the user will get high degree burns. The user shoots the two small balls of fire with immense speed at the opponent, and when in range, the balls will expand and engulf the surroundings (5-10 ft. in diameter)
Note: the user will cause heavy damage to his hands, making him unable to use fire release next turn.


±± Declined ±± Similar techniques already exist. Several...even cannon.

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

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(Chi-ken) - Thousand Blades
Rank: S
Type: Offinsive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: In this jutsu gava move its wings and shoot one thousand wind blades towards the target making a rain of blades ,which are impossible to dodge due to the number of blades.

• Can be used 2 times per battle
• Can only used by Gava

(boufuu ) WindStorm
Rank:A
Type: Off/Deff
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: 60
Description: By fluttering the wings, summoning create a power windstorm which is ideal to clear clouds from the sky.

• Can be use 3 time per battle
• Can only be used by Gava

±± Both Declined ±± Who is Gava? If its a summon, you need to quote it for reference.


(kira karasu) Killer Crows
Rank: A
Type: Suplementry
Range Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 80
Description: User traps the opponent in his genjutsu in which his opponent see five crows appearing from users body then flying into different directions (towards the opponent) then they straighten their beaks and tails (like an aero shape) striking and passing throuh the opponents body/flesh with very high speed from defferent directions making the victim suffer extreme pain.

• Can only be used with Itachi bio
• Must have Sharingan 3t
• Trice per battle


±± Declined ±± similar technique already exists.

 

[Kurisutina]

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(Suiton: Kakusareta Mizun no Hari) - Water Release: Hidden Water Needles
Type:Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user is able to release incredibly stealthy needles of water by from their mouth by utilizing their own saliva as ammunition. The water is incredibly small and difficult to see, either requiring adequate lighting or using one's doujutsu to see the needles. These needles can be used by a medical ninja to strike vital joints and disrupt the movement of their joints for a mere moment.

(Suiton: Mizu-Yaki-Ire) - Water Release: Water Hardening
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user is able to cause any small amount of water (C-rank and below) and harden the quality of the water. This only works on the user's water created water or manipulated water. This jutsu follows the same principle as the Water Sword of Draining in which it will harden the water so much so that it can match steel's hardness.


±± Both Declined ±± first one is more like a C-Rank and second one is definitely at least a B-Rank.

 

[Sasuke Sarutobi]

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(Kyoushu Shikon) - Assassin's Fangs
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: (+5 to Kenjutsu)
Description: The Assassin's Fangs are a pair of long daggers made by a master blacksmith-shinobi who had a secret method of weapon making who only crafted for people he believed to be worthy of his works. They are made of unique hardened and light-weight chakra infused metals which he named "Kyoushu Shikon" in reference to its shape and lethality. When the owner wields these daggers, the Kyoushu Shikon automatically recognize him as its owner and reacts only to the user's chakra. When the user's chakra is infused into the daggers, the daggers amplify the user's chakra and automatically materialises chakra around the blades augmenting the lethality of the daggers as well as increasing their lengths (to the length that of a normal nodachi). The daggers are extremely sharp and when chakra flow is applied, is capable of slicing though objects such as kunai, shuriken, etc. (i.e. regular metal with no chakra flow). Due to the chakra bond that is shared between the user and the Kyoushu Shiko, all kenjutsu and sword-related techniques will have a +5 damage boost.

These daggers has one special ability. It allows the user to perform a unique jutsu called "The Hallucination".

Note: Indestructible although can not cut through everything.
Note: Can only be taught/used by Sasuke Sarutobi.

±± Declined ±± Many infusable swords and twin swors already exist. I see nothing special in yours.


Appearance of Weapon:

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(Genkaku) - The Hallucination
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+15 per turn)
Damage Points: 60
Description: A jutsu that can only performed by the weilder of "Kyoushu Shikon". While holding the daggers in their hands, the user simply channels a large amount of chakra through their body and a chakra image/replica of themselves will appear next to him (the daggers amplify the user's chakra and the replica "splits" from the user). This chakra image is essentially a clone to some degree that only lasts for 3 turns. The clone can only use ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu and the user's element of affinity, however, the clone can only use jutsus that are 1 rank lower than the user's (e.g. If the user is S-class, the clone can only use up to A-rank, if Jounin rank only up to B-rank and so on..) and also receives +10 damage to all jutsus. The clone created is an exact replica of the user exhibiting the same conditions/appearance as the user i.e. if the user is wet the clone created is also wet, if the user had his arm injured the clone will also have his arm injured. At the end of its duration, on command or when dying, the clone will explode forming an explosion dealing damage to nearby opponents (explosion is mid ranged and classed as A-rank).
Note: Lasts for only three turns.
Note: Can be used twice per battle.
Note: Must wait two turns to use again.
Note: No S-rank jutsus on the turn of activation.
Note: Counts towards the user's clone usage/tally.
Note: The replica receives +10 damage to all jutsus.
Note: The replica is created short ranged from the user.
Note: The replica's jutsus count towards the users move count.
Note: To use this jutsu, the user must have Kyoushu Shikon in their hands.
Note: The replica can only use jutsus up to 1 rank below the user's rank (as explained above).
Note: Must be wielding Kyoushu Shikon to use.
Note: Can only be taught/used by Sasuke Sarutobi.


±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. This is a mix of the Clone, splitting and other techniques all in one.

 

[Lucifer]

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Muay Thai

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(Muay Thaijutsu) - Muay Thai Martial Arts: Muay Thaijutsu, the ultimate body techniques. It's a basic form of techniques and refers to any techniques involving the martial arts or the optimisation of natural human abilities. Taijutsu is executed by directly accessing the user's physical and mental energies, relying on the stamina and strength gained through training. It typically does not require chakra, though chakra may be used to enhance its techniques. Taijutsu generally require no hand seals to perform, occasionally making use of certain stances or poses. Muay Thai is referred to as the "Art of Eight Limbs" because it makes use of punches, kicks, mostly elbows and knee strikes, thus using eight "points of contact", as opposed to "two points" (fists). This technique was created by Lucifer Tepes when fighting against the wild animals in the mountains of Iwagakure, he discovered it all by himself. As said earlier this technique mostly uses elbows and knee strikes by focusing an enormous amount of chakra into the bones themself so making the body a deadly weapon of the user thus increasing the damage, if used in close combat the user can easly break a few bones of the opponent in a single strike also causing internal damages. But before doing that the user has to enter a particulier stance which requires, the user raising his dominant arm forward with the knuckles pointing tords the user, and the other arm under his chin, and coming to the lower region the user will raise his dominant leg, forward in the same manner of the arms but lifting it up as seen in this picture:

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(Muay Thaijutsu: Dokuro Odori) - Muay-Thai Style: Skull Dance
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will charge a enormous amount of chakra into their dominant knee and into the other leg. Then the user will quickly grab the opponents head with both hands with raw power putting an enormous amount of strain on them and as this is done the user will jump into the air holding the enemy with both hands he will quickly bring the head of the opponent to the knee, the lower region and swing the knee backwards pushing the air itself to give it extra boost with the focused chakra into the knee the user will crush it into the opponents head causing him/her to lose consciousness, and also causing internal damage to the brain making the ears and eyes bleed of the opponent.

Example

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Note: Can only be used trice per battle.
Note: Must be taught by Lucifer.
Note: The user can't use this style or regulair taijutsu for two turns.


±± Both Pending ±± Until i check the CFS thread ^^

 

[Sinthorus]

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(kaminari no Yoroi ) - Black lightning armour
Type: Attack/defence
Rank: S rank
Range: close
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This armour is very simalar to the 4 raikages lightning armour seen at the kage summit. Darui will wrap his entire body in black lightning by doing this he can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. Though he is not as fast or as strong as the raikage. He was tought the key to doing this by the 4th raikage due to being his right hand man. With the armour active, Darui is almost as fast as the raikage and only 3 tomoe sharingan comes close to being able to track his movements. Due to this armour, lightning attacks up A rank dont effect him, and S ranks only deal half the damage they normally would.However the user is weak against

Note: can only be used once
Note: cant use wind or water techniques in this form
Note: lasts 4 turns
Note: Cant use black lightning for 2 turns afterwards
Note: Cant use lightning for 1 turn afterwards

Approved, added bold

This is the approved black lightning armour given to me.


(kaminari No Nami) - Black lightning Wave
Type: Attack/defence
Rank: S rank
Range: All
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu can only be used when the black lightning armour is active. The use will then release the power of the black lightning armour in all directions at once, sending it out at great speed. This blast will expand in a dome shape from the user destorying all in it's path.

Note: Useabel once
Note: This ends the black ligntning armour
Note: No lightning jutsu next turn


±± Declined ±± OP. Similar blasting lightning techniques such as lightning pulse already exist. Restrctions? Etc etc.

 

[Serpent]

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(Ranton: Dageki Shin'en) Storm Release: Strike from the Abyss
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will make 3 handseals forming an opening in the sky above the opponent in similar fashion to "Sticky Mud Drop" this will release random beams of bright "Storm" that will rain down on the opponent.
Notes:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

±± Declined ±± In my understanding that opening and opening type techniques serve only to bring forth tangible matter such as earth and earth like techniques. I would allow it for Water for example or for lava, wood, etc. However, beams of energy that come out of a portal above the enemy is for me, not a viable application of that principle.


(Ranton: Eda Koushin) Storm Release: Limb Exasperation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-20 Per Turn)
Damage points: N/A (+60 it hits Opponent)
Description: The user will make 4 handseals creating a bright aura shaped like claws that will form around the users arms, these Storm Claws can reach out to a mid range area once per use and are used as an extension of the users own arms. they can be used for both attack or defense.
Notes:
-Last 2 turns
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-No Storm Release during this Jutsu.
-No S-ranks for one turns after this Jutsu.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

±± Approved ±± slightly altered some things.


(Suiton: Uzumaki Dri-Engai) Water Release: Dome of the Slashing Whirlpool
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will make 4 handseals, forming a whirlpool from under the opponent, this whirlpool will pull the opponent deep into the water and then form into a dome that will be spinning at high speed. because of the speed, the water is capable of shredding flesh. If the opponent is already under water, the Dome can be produced without the need of the whirlpool, allowing for a faster delivery of the attack.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Requires a Water Source.
-No S-ranks or above next turn.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent


±± Approved ±± Although whirlpool techniques exist i think this is actually quite interesting and unique.

 

[Vroqrak]

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(Motte Ai): With Love
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The ring "With Love" was the the original ring made out of pure fire element in the hands of Zanji. The ring is golden in color and has a beautiful layer of designs and symbols.The ring is very attractive in itself, and is as powerful too. The ring was made by Zanji in attempt to increase the Katon proefficiency of the user, or the hands in which it stays. The ring increases the Katon attack of the user by +10 and also has it's unique abilities.
Note: The ring stays at user's hands for 5 turns.
Each technique of the ring counts as a move.

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±± Declined ±± No elemental boosting weapons. Plenty of those already exist and you fail to explain why your ring boosts your use of fire. It wouldn't happen just because you wear it.


Ring Techs:

(Kaji Katana): Fire Sword
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: After wearing the ring "With Love", the user focuses on his new found chakra manipulation abilities to create a long sword entirely made of fire element that can be used as a strong attack medium. The sword can be stretched and resized as per user's wish but only upto Mid-Range.The sword, has no holders or any other metal except the fire itself.Normally, the user's hands would get burned catching a compressed amount of fire sword, but the ring prevents this, and therefore, the sword is only limited to the ring's time duration.
Note: Can only last for 3 turns

(Kaji Mori): Fire Forest
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 90
Description: After wearing that ring, the user focuses hard on the Katon chakra to summon large amount of fire on the ground, much like (Suiton: Takitsubo) - Water Style: Waterfall Basin..but fire inplace of water so that the user can control the large amount of summoned fire to cause multiple large tendrils or vines of fire to approach the target and attack them, even if the opponent is in Mid-Air.The compressed fire burns and destroys anything on its path and can only be once due to the scale of the technique.
Note: Can only be used once


±± Both Declined ±± The ring wasn't approved.

 

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