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Blow Dart Combat | Dageki Shuriken Konbatto
Type: Ninjutsu
Background:

This form of weapon was used by very few ninja but was greatly spanned upon by the female ninja of which her name is still unknown. Her teachings were found and the use of this secret art expanded to impressive potential.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

The bare basics of this weapon use is mainly with a blowgun or Fukiya. Normally the user would insert a dart, needle, or other small sharp device and blow it out one end to hit a target. Pretty basic and simple.

The way this will work in RP is basically the same but by utilizing the things I've seen so this will work with ease.

In the naruto-verse we has seen how characters are able to literally use weapons from their mouths. Shizune (Tsunades secretary) was able to spit out senbon needles from her mouth and Orochimaru was able to keep the sword in his body and expel it from his mouth. Basically it's possible for a ninja to have weapons in their body wit no harm to them. So I plan on using that ability to work with the blowgun.. The user can store needles/senbons in their mouth similar to shizune but can only store 20 needles/senbons max in their body

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Shizune spitting out poison senbons.

First thing needed would be a blowgun or just the default 20 senbons in their body. Mastering this concept of combat with a weapon will allow them to expel the projectile from their mouth rather then loading it and so on. Certain techniques will come of this concept that will be explained in my examples but it theory it would be a type of ninjutsu such as using a bow&arrow or TenTen's special abilities.

The device will not be the normal very long gun, it will be much shorter, slightly long then a flute. It allows for more flexibility but when used this blowgun would naturally be infused with their chakra which allows it the power of accurateness and strength.. Also it the darts are able to reform, reshape, and add elements into them to increase the variations of the attacks that can be done by the senbon.

However it doesn't have the large range ability as a bow but it does allow much faster rate of fire.

Example Techniques:

Ϟ Dageki Shuriken Konbatto: hokubu zaigou | Blow Dart Combat: North Crime Ϟ

Rank: A
Range: Short - Medium
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
With the use of a blowgun, or with the senbons in the users body, they will spit out 3 needle senbons, coated in any element the user wishes. The user will then use 3 handseals and cause the needle/senbons to multiple into hundreds of needles/senbons. The very special thing about this jutsu is that the user can direct the original 3 senbons/needles like a homing missle and re-direct them at will with simple hand gestures.
Notes:
Ϟ Usable 2x per battle
Ϟ Usable by Blow Dart Combat disciple
Ϟ Trainable by Teno


Ϟ Dageki Shuriken Konbatto: Burudo-Za | Blow Dart Combat: Bulldozer Ϟ
Rank: A
Range: Short - Medium
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
With the use of a blowgun, the user will blow out 1 dart infused with earth chakra. the chakra is manipulated to give the dart a very strong push and extreme force. The dart moves quickly and is able to break through many earth defenses ( B-Rank and below) This dart isn't as accurate and can be thrown off course easier then other darts but is extremely strong to literally bulldoze through obstacles.

Notes:
Ϟ Usable 2x per battle
Ϟ Able to break or pass through 1 obstacle of equal rank or lower (i.e. Earth, And Water Only)
Ϟ Usable by Blow Dart Combat disciple
Ϟ Trainable by Teno

Additional effects and Restrictions:

Effects:
Fire Elemental Dart: Causes slight burns on the spot thats hit
Lightning Elemental Dart: Cause Paralysis On the area that was hit
Wind Elemental Dart: Extra Sharp Piercing Power (Can Cut through C Rank and below Earth)
Earth Elemental Dart: Can Increase Its Size by 10 Inches Increasing its Destructive power
Water Elemental Dart: It Can be slowed down by adding water into it, Or Increase the speed , but lower the power by decreasing the water usage


Restrictions
Must have started in Ninjutsu
Can Only be taught by teno
Must mention blowgun in biography for use & the 20senbons in their body

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 Declined 
I don't need the 20 senbons limit. For me doesn't make much sense nor is it a restriction needed in my eyes. Now, again, like I said, this needs to be something more than simply shooting senbons from your mouth. That is something you can alredy submit in normal customs. Its basic Ninjutsu. You need to explain how this becomes a CFS. How is this unique when it comes to CQC or Weapon combat?
Changed the whole style.


Assassin Arts | Ansatsu-sha no geijutsu
Type: Nin-genjutsu

Background: The origin of this style takes us back to the time of the First World War where shinobi from the Land of Wind used secret weapons like poisoned needles to assassinate their opponents. Considering the way the technique worked, it became a huge threat to go up against such opponents. To counter that, a group of ninjas from the Land of Fire used the same technique of using needles but with a different effect. Since the ninjas of the Land of Fire were not so good at using poison, they decided going in with channeling their genjutsu chakra into the needles which inflicted paralysing genjutsu upon the opponent when pierced.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the style:
This special type of Ninjutsu relies on channeling the user's genjutsu chakra into the senbon before launching them at the enemy, to hit specific places in the opponents body (mostly acupuncture points), to disturb the enemy's chakra flow. The disturbance of the chakra flow makes the enemy experience illusions which in most cases are paralysing genjutsus. The damage caused by the senbon is a mixture of mental damage (caused by the illusions) and also the physical pain caused by the piercing senbon. To make these needles more effective, the user can poison the tips of the senbon. An added benefit of throwing these at the enemy is that these are smaller than a kunai or a shuriken, making it harder to see and dodge.

The user may choose to release the senbons from the mouth or from their wrist launchers. Every master will have his/her own special wrist launcher that will be described in the bio which do not count towards their CW limit since it is a canon weapon.
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Example Techniques:
Porcupine's Visit
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user release 5 senbons from his mouth, aiming at the opponent's right shoulder and arm. The moment the senbons pierce the opponent, he experiences an illusion where he can no longer use his arms and feel as if they are poisoned.


Pain of death
Type: Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user releases 5 senbons from his wrist launcher that when it hits the opponent, makes him believe that the senbons that hit him have suddenly enlarged and ripping their body parts off.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

- Masters of this style have increased Agility and Reflexes.
- Should have mastered Ninjutsu and Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
- Since the users of this style have such a good knowledge and are so adept at using genjutsus, they take little damage from the genjutsus of the opponents. Every genjutsu damage decreases by one rank.


♦ Declined ♦ For many reasons. First, there is no such thing as "genjutsu chakra". There is only chakra utilized to create genjutsu. Second, how does this give you increased agility and reflexes? All it literally is is you using senbons. Third, you are not getting no genjutsu damage boost nor does this make you less susceptible to genjutsu. Fourth, what would make this genjutsu inducing anyway? From the way you word it, it seems as if you are actually intending to use the senbons to cause paralyzation, similar to having them caooated in poison, which would make more sense, though I am unsurre if you are able to use it like that without med school knowledge. This needs much work done to it.
 
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Shadousuteppu | Shadow Step
Type: Nin/Ken
Background: This fighting style was developed by Blake Belladonna herself when she uses kenjutsu. By combing her fast speed and using the ability to create clones she was able to make her fighting style where she can create fake images of herself so she can attack her opponent.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This fighting style combines kenjutsu with fast movements to strike the opponent. By moving in fast movements the user will use their chakra to create a hologram of their self to confuse opponents to think the user has created clones causing them confusion and making it hard to know which one is the real user (Unless the opponent has a Doujutsu or a sensor). The user can not only use swords but use any other weapons to attack the opponent just in case they do not have a sword with them.
Example Techniques:
(Shadousuteppu - Kage kara) Shadow Step - From the Shadows
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will do a series of quick slashes to the opponent from different directions by moving at fast movements were it looks like there is clones of the user attacking her when its just the user moving fast.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Must have mastered Ninjutsu
- Must have started Kenjutsu
- Must be taught by Blake Belladonna


♦ Declined ♦ This would collide with approved customs of the past that allowed on to move like such, notable several jutsus based around shunpo (spelling) which I cannot allow.
 
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One Mile Arts - Ichi Mairu Gigei
Type: NinTaijutsu
Background: Passed down through the line of powerful Taijutsu masters who had learned to combine the arts of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu to form Nintaijutsu that allowed them to expand their range of attack so that long ranged Ninjutsu users were unable to negate their physical prowess by merely staying a far distance away. This is achieved with a combination of brute force and raw speed with immensly focused chakra in the body to enhance the physical capabilities allowing taijutsu strikes to rapidly push air forward and create bullets of pressurized air attacks allowing the user to deliver straight forward attacks like punches, kicks and headbutts from up to a mile away. This gives the user an almost unavoidable reach with his Taijutsu in exchange for a rapid rate of draining the user's strength and stamina through overexertion. Due to this limit masters of this style are generally very musclebound and have massive reserves of stamina as a result of specalized training.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Specailzed Nintaijutsu enhanced with chakra in a similar fashion as Lightning Armor or Chakra Enhanced Strength however instead of increasing the user's speed or strength it focuses all of the chakra to one point and releases it on impact (like CES) but is released into the air in front of the user's limb to create an air pressure copy of their fist or foot or other point on their body. Giving Taijutsu strikes massive range and the ability to combat certain styles of Ninjutsu. Due to the blunt nature of pressurized air it shares none of the nature of wind based ninjutsu and doesn't cut, only dealing blunt damage attacks.

Example Techniques:
One Mile Arts: Hammer of Justice
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses a huge amount of chakra into their dominant fist causing a black star to form on the back of the hand. When a punch is thrown with this hand the chakra is released as a star shaped burst which itself only travels a meter away from the user's fist but the high concentration of chakra rapidly pushes the air in front of the point forward, pressurising it to look like an almost invisible air replica of the user's fist (same size as the real fist up to the wrist). This blast of pressurized air is said to be ten times more powerful than the user's original punch.

One Mile Arts: Star Lariat
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user floods their dominant arm with chakra causing veins to rise at almost all points due to the increased power and blood flow within the small area. The user will then perform a lariat motion with their arm with incredible speed and power unleashing the chakra in a wide burst in front of them which rapidly pushes the air forward in a air wave solid enough to force even the strongest and heaviest of enemies off of the ground and obliterates the area in front of them. Shown to be able to level a whole block of buildings at once.
-Useable Twice per battle.
-No other One Mile Arts in the same turn or next.
-Can't use above S rank Taijutsu/NB Taijutsu in the same turn or next.

One Mile Arts: Star Shower
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses huge amounts of chakra into both fists and arms causing black stars to form on the back of both hands and both shoulders. They then unleash an incredible number of fast punches in a barrage which forms into several large fists of pressurized air, each the size of an adult human. The result of this barrage is a storm of pressurized air blasts which are capable of destroying almost anything in it's path.
Due to the overexertion of the muslces however the user's arms are left numb and at high strength for two turns afterwards
-Useable Twice per battle.
-No other One Mile Arts in the same turn or next.
-Can't use above B rank Taijutsu/NB Taijutsu in the same turn or next.
-No arm based taijutsu above C rank for two turns afterwards.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-User must have mastered Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and trained in basic NB Taijutsu (non-restricted)
-Only bios with above average physical strength and stamina such as Raikages, EIG users/masters and Taijutsu masters/specalists can be taught this.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.


♦ Declined ♦ While useful, this is essentially a toned down version of the Daytime Tiger, using taijutsu to create pressurized air into a corporeal form that does damage while still being seen as taijutsu. This is also much like the Leaf Dragon God, just with different form and would collide with other customs approved in this line of thought, just devoid of the EIG empowering them.
 
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Paper Illusionary Arts | Kami gensō geijutsu
Type: GenNin
Background:

Paper ninjutsu is style of fighting that was only seen using by Konan and that was originally made by her. Paper ninjutsu works in such a way that user infuses chakra into paper sheets and then use them to his or hers advantage. By infusing chakra into paper you can control that little paper how you like, in a very creative yet deadly way.

Konan being a master of Paper ninjutsu wanted to develop her fighting style even more. Upon coming in contact with genjutsu and learning about basis on which genjutsu works she decided to develop fighting style which will help her in immobilization of her opponent by mixing genjutsu and paper ninjutsu and creating Paper Illusionary Arts also known as Kami gensō geijutsu

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

This fighting style works in such a way that paper sheets which are infused with Konan's chakra represent medium for activation of genjutsu. Once opponent gets in touch with at least one paper sheet which is infused with Konan's chakra by either getting hit by it,stepped on it or similar,chakra which was till then equally distributed in paper itself will move from paper into opponent,injecting its way into opponent's chakra system,disturbing his or hers chakra flow and activating illusion. This way of activation of genjutsu is creation of Konan herself and is called Paper Illusionary Arts.

Example Techniques:

Kami gensō geijutsu : Kami no shuriken jōzan | Paper Illusionary Arts : Paper shuriken multiplication
Type: Offensive; Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Once opponent comes in contact with paper sheet,chakra which was till then distributed in paper sheet will be channeled into body of opponent,after which channeling,chakra flow of opponent will be disturbed which would activate an illusion. In this illusion opponent will see uncountable number of paper summoned 180 degrees around him or her and 4 meters far. This paper will start to spin in circle creating shuriken shape which has such cutting capabilities that it is able to cut through human flash with ease. Upon forming of shuriken which lasts as long as flashing your eyes once,paper will with great speed,from all sides aim for the opponent,cutting through his body,everything it touches,going from one side of body to another leaving his body completely and uterely massacred. While opponent will feel mental pain he will also be immobilized in reality.
Note: Must know Paper Illusionary Arts to use this jutsu
Note: Must posses Konan bio

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-User must posses Konan bio
-Must be taught by Akasha
-Must have mastery over Paper ninjutsu
-Must have mastery over Genjutsu



Just for reference:
-Permission to use Paper ninjutsu [ ]
-Konan bio [ ]



 Declined  For that to be possible using paper you'd need to substitute your normal paper with paper tags which would need to have a sealing technique applied to them to contain said chakra and trigger in specific ways to release the chakra and thus the genjutsu. And thats already a thing. Overall, upon contact with the paper just like that I don't see it being possible.
 
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(Hitokenjutsu)-Hidden Blade Style

Type: Nin Kenjutsu

Background: In the slums of Kumogakure, fights were quite common. But these weren't your average brawls. The people of the slums played for keeps, bringing various blades into battle with them. Blades ranging from the average pocket knife, a standard kunai to the new aged razor. Through constantly fighting in the slums, you came to expect a blade being used. But the trick to winning in the slums was when the blade would come. How you used your blade was greater then how well you fought. So the slum people began to conceal their blades within their sleeves. Making it almost impossible to detect the blade until it was revealed. New fighters in the slums arose and the close ranged fighting of the old time evolved into mid ranged fighting. So how did the blades come into play? As the fights evolved, so did the fighters. The slum fighters began tying wires to the ends of the blades and wrapping them around the arm. Through use of chakra, the wire would expand and contract to various ranges. Allowing for the blades to reach different ranges. This style would eventually make its way out of the slums and throughout the land of lightning.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style itself is very simple, consisting of two ranges/branches. The close combat branch and the ranged branch the name explains it a bit. Firstly and most important, this is an open hand style. No strikes are sent with a closed hand. Secondly, chakra is used in many ways all common but the application is different. The blade for this style isn't bound to just the kunai users of this style normally have 3 choices. The kunai, pocket knife, and the razor blade.(Must state in bio/training what you choose) The wires are virtually indestructible as long as chakra is being focused.

Close Combat: During close combat the wires are still used just in a less drastic way. As stated, all strikes are open hand but their are three stances to this style. The over hand swipe, the under hand jab and the vertical/diagonal chop. At close range the blade in most cases a kunai is held just beneath the base of the palm. At the base of the palm there is the most space for the blade to move. Movement of the blade at close range is different then the at another range. By focusing chakra to the wire and the wrist, the blade can rotate a full 360 degrees underneath the palm in both directions. When rotated 180 degrees the blade is revealed, but in this case the hand is going in the opposite direction to conceal the blade which is the true attack. For common attacks, the blade is extended to match the length of the user's hand. While focusing chakra to just the wire the blade remains stationary and moves with the hand.

Ranged: When you take this style and you face an opponent who isn't at close range you have the ranged branch of this style. Instead of keeping the blade beneath the palm for the ranged branch the blade is kept at the length of the hand. At this range, the overhand strike isn't really common. The vertical chop and underhand jab are the primary attacks at this range. But at this range, attacks aren't really attacks. The user can expand the wire with chakra 'shooting' the blade at the opponent. But since the opponent can see the blade coming now these attacks can be considered diversions now. As stated the wire can be retracted at any time, but the retraction isn't one dimensional. If the blade is stuck in a surface or solid, the blade can bring the user to blade by retracting the wire. Rotation at this range is strange, not only can you change the direction the blade is facing. But now you can change the direction of the wire. By using chakra manipulation instead of focus you can cause the wire to turn and contort itself. But without the chakra flow being focused, the wire is vulnerable to being cut.

Example Techniques:

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(Hitokenjutsu: Hitokusari Nokogiri)- Hidden Blade Style: Hidden Chainsaw
Type: Attack
Rank: B Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user extends the blade to match the length of the user's hand. By focusing chakra to the wrist and the wires, the user will cause the blade to rotate at a speed it looks like a full circle. The user will then hold his hand parallel to the ground while maintaining the rotation and swing his arm to the left or right then quickly stopping the rotation of the blade thus sending a crescent shaped arc of pressurized air at the opponent. The crescent continues to spin until it makes contact with something. This attack can be used at close range as well, when the user is in range, he simply swipes horizontally at the opponent leaving deep cuts.
Note: Can only be used overhand
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

(Hitokenjutsu: Ryuuchou Yaiba)- Hidden Blade Style: Flowing Blade
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B Rank
Range: Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user expands the wire then he rotates the blade 90 degrees clockwise or counter clockwise, then swings his hand in the opposite direction. The user will then send the wire in the opposite direction creating a feint through shape manipulation. It would appear as if the user's hand was going in both directions. The damage lies with the blade, so whatever the blade hits experiences the pain. The hand is always the distraction. By continuing the flow of chakra to the blade and the wire, the user can cause it to change directions. A maximum of 4 times, all direction changes must be in the same direction allowing the blade to return to it's original position for a straight shot on the opponent from his blind side. As he's following the direction of the hand, he would eventually meet the blade if the user decides for a full revolution.
Note: Must state how many turns in the move
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko
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Additional effects and Restrictions: In order to use this style you must have been apart of the cloud village.

Two Levels to the style, beginner and master. At beginner level you can expand and retract the wires and rotate the blade. Pretty much all free form, at master level you can change the direction of the wires and use all moves. In order to use this style you must be sannin level and have started ninjutsu training.
Can only be taught by gecko​


♦ Declined ♦ Hidden blades and the style in general exist, created by Caliburn multiple years ago. Thi is essentially it expanded upon, with more jutsu. DNR without his permission.
 
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Konoha-Ryū Kenpō | Leaf-Style Sword Art
Type: Nin-Gen-Kenjutsu
Background:
This is a style that has been around since the creation of Konoha, this style has only been passed down every 100 years or so, this style is rare even to see it in this present time, only those who are worthy enough, get picked to learn this style. This style is secret to the ninja's hidden in the leaves, that being said. It can be taught to outsiders, but that again is very rare. Nathan being part of Konoha for a long time, the current heads of the village found Nathan worthy, and he is learning this style and expanding it, to make it a much more powerful style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Leaf-Style Sword Art, is form of swordsmanship commonly associated to the shinobi of Konohagakure. This fighting style is built around deception and speed, forcing openings in an opponent's defences before dealing a decisive blow. Leaf-Style sword manoeuvres often incorporate other classes of jutsu into their performance, such as ninjutsu and genjutsu. This is most apparent with the well known techniques Dance of the Crescent Moon and Leaf-Style Willow, respectively.

Example Techniques:

Konoha-Ryū Kenpō: Tsuriau Fūyō| Leaf-Style Sword Art: Balancing Maple Leaves
Type: Defensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The Balancing Maple Leaves (釣り合う楓葉, Tsuriau Fūyō) is a unique parry-based technique within the various techniques of the Leaf-Style Sword Art form. In order to initiate the technique, the user must be in a neutral stance. There is no predefined form of utilizing this technique, as it relies almost entirely on the user's instinct and physical ability. Therefore, this is an easy technique to learn, but difficult to execute. Upon making contact with another weapon, such as a Sword or Kunai; the user parries very lightly. This light parry is extremely easy to break through, but leaves the opponent off-balance for a brief moment. In this moment, the user pulls their sword back towards themselves, before using a greater amount of strength to intercept the following attack made by the opponent, effectively sending them back thanks to a sudden increase in pressure. This gives way for the user to perform offensive or sealing manoeuvres with much more ease.

Konoha-Ryū Kenpō: Wintaa-Blossoming Koubai | Leaf-Style Sword Art: Winter-Blossoming Plum Tree
Type: Offensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:
The Winter-Blossoming Plum Tree is a technique from the Leaf-Style Sword Art. The technique involves a high level of deception and speed. Generally, one would use it to reveal to their enemy that they have exposed an opening. In doing so, their stance is completely neutral and would be almost impossible to create any counter from it. The user, utilizing absolutely precision timing, uses a sudden push of chakra to the bottom of their feet, moving their entire body upwards and into a back flip. When doing so, the opponent becomes off-guard by the technique's maneuver, which subsequently allows for a quick slash, reminiscent to Iai, to be performed on the victim who has lost balance, therefore instantly incapacitating, or killing, them.

Konoha-Ryū Kenpō: Dansu Osumitsuki Mugetsu Sukai | Leaf-Style Sword Art: Dance of the Moonless Sky
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
Dance of the Moonless Sky is a technique which combines the user's illusory and swordsmanship prowess. Unlike most genjutsu, which ensnare victims through sight or sound, the illusory effect of this technique is activated when the practitioner's sword is waved back and forth similar to the genjutsu technique (Leaf-Style Willow). Upon the waving of the sword the victim is effectively blinded, albeit extremely temporarily. Unlike similar techniques (Bringer-of-Darkness Technique) this blindness only lasts for a single second. While seemingly insignificant, due to its brief duration, losing a second of sight in a heated close range fight could very well be equal to death. Since this illusion is only active for an incredibly short window of time, and it coincides perfectly with the clash of the combatants' weapons, this technique is incredibly difficult to identify as a genjutsu. Even individuals with enhanced sensory and ocular abilities may overlook the brief chakra disturbance found in victims of this technique. Due to the covert nature of this technique's properties, it isn't well known across the shinobi world.

Konoha-Ryū Kenpō: Kyōjin no Jutsu | Leaf-Style Sword Art: Assassin's Dagger Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Mid [when thrown]
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
This technique is an alternative performance of the Shadow Clone Technique in which the user channels the chakra necessary for the aforementioned clone into a one of their tantō before the blade past her target. When the blade is just behind the victim the user will trigger the creation of a shadow clone at the location of the thrown blade. Upon forming the clone, the clone will grasp the projectile blade and stab the opponent in the back, effectively finalizing the assassination. The speed at which the user performs this technique has given the illusion that the user is using Space–Time Ninjutsu on more than one occasion. Additionally, by manipulating the position of the blade via wire strings he can more easily position his tantō behind an opponent.

Konoha-Ryū Kenpō: Shisaku | Leaf-Style Sword Art: Death Blossom
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
This technique is an expansion of the chakra flow utilized by the samurai of the Land of Iron. The user leaves a portion of this chakra behind on the targets they cut which bursts outward on their signal, like a flower in bloom. This allows the user to expand the range of any wound she inflicts with her chakra flow enhanced strikes. Furthermore, in comparison to the precise initial cut from the chakra blade the explosive gash generated with Death Blossom is much more difficult to repair. Additionally, this allows the user to magnify even simple scratches they inflicts upon her targets to critical levels.

Additional effects:
- The user becomes agile.
- The users reflexes are slightly increased.

Restrictions:
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
- Must have Ninjutsu started.
- Must have Kenjutsu and Genjutsu mastered.
- Must have a bio that has been to Konoha at some point in the said bio's history.
- Must be S-Class to learn.


♦ Declined ♦This is too vague a CFS to be allowed; for one, genjutsu related to kenjutsu exist in canon form, though that is a minor issue. You do not explain exactly what makes this different and unique from other kenjutsu created customs that allow it to stand as its own CFS
 
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Armour-Sleeved Single Hit ( Gaishū Isshoku )
Type: Tessenjutsu (War fan arts)
Background:
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Tessenjutsu (鉄扇術) is the martial art of the Japanese war fan. It is based on the use of the solid iron fan. The use of the war fan in combat is mentioned in early Japanese legends. For example, Yoshitsune, a hero of Japanese legend, is said to have defeated an opponent named Benkei by parrying the blows of his opponent's spear with an iron fan. The practitioners of tessenjutsu could acquire a high level of skill. Some became so skilled, in fact, that they were able to defend themselves against an attacker wielding a sword, and even kill an opponent with a single blow. Used mainly as a deflection and redirection art, the user uses either the broad end of the gunbai to attack, using it as a sort of staff to intercept the attacks of the enemy, effectively negating and redirecting the energy used in the attack back upon the attacker, throwing them off balance and potentially crippling him. In order to use the Gaishu Isshoku fighting style effectively, one needs a Gunbai with a chain attached.

This style has three main forms, or stances: Haya-ji, Nai no Kami, and Emma-hoo. Haya-ji, named for the Shinto Deity of the wind, utilizes quick, fast moving movements focused on the gunbai's fan parts, utilizing the top half of the gunbai in movements. These movements generally are based in defensive measures, counterattacks, intercepting a blow with the top half of the gunbai and "rolling" it to a preferred location before redirecting the force behind the attack back at the enemy, meaning the user doesn't actually absorb or redirect the attack, but instead uses the enemy's momentum and incoming force against him, making it a viable counter for swordsmanship. Through the usage of the chain attached to the gunbai, this allows the user to have a more ranged defense, controlling the gunbai through yanks and tugs of the chain. Nai no Hami, named for the Shinto Deity of earthquakes, utilizes powerful, direct blows of the staff and chain parts of the chained gunbai, being a more offensive stance than it's counterpart Haya-ji. Nai no Kami movements are generally wide and swift, striking with direct aim, though these can be used with either end of the gunbai as well as chain. Emma-hoo, named for the Shinto Deity of the underworld, utilizes aspects from both forms, weaving ranged usage with close distanced usages as well. Through swift movements of the gunbai, the user can effortlessly block, counter, and attack all with one movement of the gunbai. Another key point of Gaishu Isshoku is that specific movements aren't needed as much. Most of the style's movements are taijutsu and weapon based, allowing the user to counter most taijutsu, kenjutsu, and other combat related attacks freely. The specific attacks follow the principle of each stance with special traits of each specific attack, some of which shown below.

What sets Gaishu Isshoku apart from normal war fan usage is the implementation of the the chain attached to it as well as combining this with an additional weapon, namely a Kama or a Kusarigama. Through implementation of a chain and Kama, the user is able to deflect attacks in short range, while spinning the Kama and having the chain wrapped around the arm of the user to limit and better control the chain and Kama's movements, allowing the user to effectively decapitate a foe should they try, living up to the name of the style. The user is also capable of detaching the Kama while it is in use, throwing it at the enemy or detaching it as it flies towards the enemy. Users of the style carry several Kama on their person, allowing the user to perform this act several times.

Each form has two levels associated with it: Beginner and Master. One has to master both Haya-ji and Nai no Kami before one is able to use the Emma-hoo stances/form. The notable difference between a Beginner and a Master is the way in which they weave their movements together and how skilled one is with them. A Beginner is able to use the gunbai as an extension of the arm, striking and defending against basic movements, but is unable to utilize the style to greater usages like a Master, being able to combine it with elemental affinities as well as increased skill with the gunbai. Upon moving on to the Emma-hoo stance, the user is able to combine elemental chakra affinities into the gunbai, chain and Kama. Wind chakra causes the gunbai to become sharper and faster, allowing it to cut through some targets; fire chakra raises the temperature of it, allowing it to deal second degree damages on contact, water chakra allows the user to perform more fluid movements, allowing the user an added sense of "fluidity". Earth chakra increases the mass and pressure behind the attacks, making them take slightly longer but allowing the user to deal more concussive force from the blows. Lightning chakra allows the user to cause paralyzation upon sustained impact and creates a numbing sensation on contact.


Example Techniques:

Armored Sleeved Descent
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, holding his gunbai out in his hand, deflects the attack of an incoming enemy by raising the gunbai upwards to redirect the attack upwards while sidestepping inwards, allowing the enemy's weapon to rest upon the top of the gunbai, near the user's shoulder. The user then rolls the gunbai to the outside of his body and around the weapon, causing the enemy's weapon to roll downwards as the user twists the gunbai around it, placing it inbetween both him and the enemy as he rolls the gunbai around it. The user then uses his other hand to grip the base of the enemy's weapon and move it inwards, striking the target with his own sword in the limb, impaling him as he redirects the momentum of the enemy with it. Upon stabbing the enemy, the user uses the chain attached to the gunbai, which has coiled around the enemy's weapon due to the user rolling the gunbai around it, and pushes the enemy away with a weak burst of wind from the gunbai as he uses the chain to snatch the weapon through him, effectively slicing the limb off.
Can only be used twice
Requires mastery of Gaishu Isshoku


Additional effects and Restrictions:
Requires a gunbai and chain


♦ Pending ♦Leaving for Scorps


 Declined  Banned. Resubmit when you return
 
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Seishin parusu|Spirit Pulse

Type: NinTaijutsu
Background: The origins of Seishin parusu are kept secret amongst those who were lucky enough to learn the art, and according to the pact signed by all of the learners, mentioning the structure, abilities, or even the origins of this CFS means death. This style is practiced by a small tribe of indigenous people located somewhere in the depths of the Konohagakure forest. These people are quite primitive, not having a school or even a system of writing, but they know how to work chakra without having the knowledge of how it works. They believe that chakra is a gift from the gods giving to them for survival and everyday usage. The warriors of this tribe use a style of close combat that uniquely uses chakra to augment their fighting prowess greatly. This style is called Spirit Pulse.

During various missions throughout his time in Konoha, Zanda stumbled across this tribe while injured, and they were willing to treat his injuries. While in recovery he learned the tribe people's ways while also trying to teach them the concept of chakra. Even though there was a language barrier the people accepted Zanda, thinking he was divine due to his elemental chakra manipulation, and they taught him secrets known only to those within the tribe. The warriors loved his fighting prowess, and after many close ranged battles showing his testament to taijutsu, the elder of the tribe approved his learning of their sacred art. An art that when Zanda left, he advanced, making it his own.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
The base actions of this style revolve around the usage of the fists, elbows, knees, shins and feet giving it the nickname "the art of eight limbs" due to its heavy usage of Muay Thai. Practitioners of this style use their entire body movement, rotating the hip with each kick, punch, elbow and block. Their goal is to deliver a swift onslaught of punches, kicks, knees, arm thrusts, and shin hits delivering a devastating combo with minimal opening for your target to attack. As a tactic, body punching is used less in this art to avoid exposing the attacker's head to counter strikes from knees or elbows. When it comes to defensive actions this style also focuses on countering, disruption, and redirection. For example, various foot-thrusts are used to create space between an already attacking opponent or used in order to block lower body attacks. They are thrown quickly, yet with a lot of force, aimed at body spots that would knock an opponent off balanced. The base movements of this cfs are well balanced and requires the users of this art to maintain a strong physical physique meaning heavy conditioning.

The true devastation of Spirit Pulse comes from the special chakra release and manipulation utilized by the practitioners of this CFS. By using advance chakra control practitioners can release their chakra in a sudden outwards burst that they manipulate to propagate circularly outwards or inwards throughout their medium creating types of chakra enhanced shockwaves upon release. Shock wave have two special properties that make them unique. They spread through mediums of solid, liquid and gas, and upon the release of the propagating start point there is an extreme rise in pressure, temperature, and density that propagates in a circular fashion growing substantially weaker as it moves away. The two types of shock waves used by practitioners are separated by there ways of propagating. The first type of shock wave uses the extreme rapid rise in pressure, temperature, and density of the primary epicenter of that wave in order to deliver a powerful explosive small radius blow that creates a circularly outward moving shock wave that gives off a strong pressurized push that grows weaker as the wave spreads. These waves can be utilized when using any of the "Eight Limbs", and the attacks cause superficial damage to targets. Since waves spread through liquids, solids, and gases the user can also use this method of release to push the air, earth, or water around them in a certain direction which propels them the opposite way. Unlike chakra enhanced strength these taijutsu techniques are not as destructive on a wide scale, but only at the initial release of the epicenter only pushing off targets due to the circularly outward propagating shock wave that follows. These are called Outer Waves. The second type of shock waves uses the same method of creating a shock wave in order to deliver a powerful explosive small radius blow, but this wave propagates circularly inwards instead of out. This causes more devastating blows to the initial area of contact, even causing internally, as a fraction of the pain spreads throughout the rest of the body as the wave spread throughout the target. Since waves travel through mediums of solid, liquid, and gases, these waves can be channeled into an elemental medium of equal rank causing it to dissipate as the flow of foreign chakra spreads through it cancelling it as the wave spreads through it. These are called Inner Waves. Inner Waves are similar to how gentle fist injects chakra into the body causing damage to surrounding organs, but unlike gentle fist these injections of chakra come from a stronger blow as well as propagates a fraction of the pain throughout the body. These waves cannot be utilized simultaneously or in a swiftly alternating manner, but they can be used in together in the same combination by periodically switching.

Example Techniques
(Seishin parusu:Suiryoku |Spirit Pulse: Thrust)
Type: Defensive|Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: When the opponent uses a taijutsu combination on the user they will redirect all of their basic punches and kicks away from their body before throwing a swift foot thrust aimed at the opponent's mid. body sending them backwards with bruising damage in the area where they were hit.

(Seishin parusu:Tabaldak no ******* |Spirit Pulse:Temple of Tabaldak)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will deliver 5 destructive blows to the body that releases an Inner Wave with every hit. The damage is so great in the 3 inch radius of the initial blows that it damages underlying organs before the pain spreads throughout the surrounding muscles upon impact.

(Seishin parusu:Hanketsu |Spirit Pulse:Judgment)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will first deliver a four hit combination to the opponents body releasing moderate Inner Waves with each strike damaging the targets body before ending the combination by releasing an Outer Wave with the fifth strike which will send the opponent flying backwards as the user dashes above them before delivering the final blow with the sixth strike which will then push them downwards into the earth.
Additional effects and Restrictions
Students of this style must be Kage rank in order to learn
One must've mastered ninjutsu and taijutsu in order to learn
Only specialists of this style gain the additional effects

Body Synchronization: Users of this style has increased reaction time over their taijutsu counterpart. If they are a taijutsu specialist then they have a greater reaction time than other specialist but still lower than taijutsu masters. If they are a taijutsu master then they would have a higher reaction time than those of the same level.
Nimbleness: Users of this style has increased agility over their taijutsu counterpart. If they are a taijutsu specialist then they have greater agility than other specialist but still lower than taijutsu masters. If they are a taijutsu master then they would have a higher agility than those of the same level.


♦ Declined ♦ Fighting stles that utilize chakra pulses such as this one already exist, both in old customs such as Goro's Zatoichi Taijutsu and in custom clans, such as Roku's Kiyoshi clan utilizing pulsing chakra in its taijutsu attacks.
 
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Staff Arts | Bōjutsu

Type: Taijutsu & Weaponry

Background: Staves have been in use for thousands of years in various types of martial arts around the world (e.g. Silambam in East Asia). The earliest form of the bō, a staff, has been used throughout Asia since the beginning of recorded history. The first bo were called ishibo, and were made of stone. These were hard to make and were often unreliable. These were also extremely heavy. The konsaibo was a very distant variant of the kanabo. They were made from wood studded with iron. These were still too cumbersome for actual combat, so they were later replaced by unmodified hardwood staffs. The bo used for self-defense by monks or commoners, the staff was an integral part of the Tenshin Shōden Katori Shintō-ryū, one of the martial arts’ oldest surviving styles. The staff evolved into the bō with the foundation of kobudo, a martial art using weapons, which emerged in Okinawa in the early 17th century. My CFS is characterised by the usage of two staffs known as the bō (long staff) and the jō (short staff).

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the style: Bō are typically around 1.8 m (5.9 ft) long while jō are approximately 1.27 metres (4.2 ft). They are typically 3 cm (1.25 inch) thick, sometimes gradually tapering from the middle (chukon-bu) to 2 cm (0.75 inch)at the end (kontei). This thickness allows the user to make a tight fist around it in order to block and counter an attack. These staves can range from heavy to light, from rigid to highly flexible, and from simple pieces of wood picked up from the side of the road to ornately decorated works of art. Staff techniques are based on the hand, which makes resultant thrusting, swinging, and striking techniques often resemble empty-hand movements, following the philosophy that the bō is merely an "extension of one’s limbs". Consequently, bōjutsu can easily be incorporated into other CQC styles of empty hand fighting, such as karate. The bō is typically gripped in thirds, and when held horizontally in front, the right palm is facing away from the body and the left hand is facing the body, enabling the bō to rotate. The power is generated by the back hand pulling the bō, while the front hand is used for guidance. When striking, the wrist is twisted, as if turning the hand over when punching. Bō technique includes a wide variety of blocks, strikes, sweeps, and entrapments. Some techniques involve slashing, swinging, and stabbing with the staff. Others involve using the staff as a pole vault or prop for hand to hand strikes. The bō may even be used to sweep sand into an attacker’s eyes. Mostly armed with nothing but a bō or jō, bōjutsu users are known for their flexibility, swiftness and parrying/blocking skills in CQC, attacking and retreating just as quick whilst keeping opponents from touching them. Just like normal Strong Fist Taijutsu, users may enhance bōjutsu attacks with pure chakra(non-elemental) to deal more damage.

Example Techniques:
Bōjutsu: Gyaku Dageki | Staff Arts: Reverse Strike
Type: Defence | Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 40
Description: This is a combo technique that counters an opponent's CQC attack with a quick debilitating attack. Holding the bō staff in a standard grip, the user raises it to intercept an opponent's sword, stick, punch, etc, using the middle section of their staff. Immediately, he rotates his staff counterclockwisely, lowering it and bringing his left hand under his right armpit, thus striking the opponent on the side of their neck or head with the end of his staff.
-Must wield a staff.
-Requires bōjutsu training.

Bōjutsu: Suīpu | Staff Arts: Sweep
Type: Supplementary | Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 30
Description: The user moves one end of the staff under his armpit while the other end (striking end) points straight out. He then moves the staff towards the target's ankle, on the right(or left) side of their body and pivots his hip to the right(or left), sweeping the opponent's legs out from underneath him.
-Must wield a staff.
-Requires bōjutsu training.

Added Effects and Restrictions:
-S-Class Ninja rank and above may learn bōjutsu.
-A standard bōjutsu user will wield only 1 bō and 1 jō in battle, interchanging both staffs where he sees fit.
-Bōjutsu users gain moderately enhanced flexibility and swiftness in CQC.


♦ Declined ♦ There is nothing that separates this from the multiple staff related CFS currently submitted and if this were to be approved, not CFS involving staffs could be allowed as you would place a patent on the entire field.
 
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Yūgana ken | Graceful Fist
Type: Nin-Taijutsu.
Background: There once was a time, when there was little known about jutsu, or Kekkei Genkai. A simpler time, when most fought with their body's alone. Due to this many struggled to stay on top, creating different form's of Taijutsu. But one form stood above all, and was never defeated. This style was known as the Graceful Fist. Many relied on power, and simple physical strength. But one man realized that there was another way. A better, and more peaceful way to end a fued. Graceful Fist is purely based on patience, and striking with maximum effect. And this was the key to winning any fist fight. Nathan came along this style from an old man that he met from his journey.

Inner working's and Movement's of the Graceful Fist style.
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Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Graceful Fist style consist's of three main rule's. The first rule is to stay Patient and Calm at all time's, it is always the key no matter what's headed your way, breaking this rule can be fatal. The second rule is to stay fluid, a stiff fighter is always inaccurate. And the third rule, is to strike with Maximum effect, and we will get to that in the explanation here.

Movement and Style: Graceful Fist is mainly performed with fluid movement of the body. The user will watch the opponent's every move, nothing get's past a Graceful Fist Master. You rarely block in this form of fighting, you will always counter. For example, if a simple quick punch is thrown, it can be blocked by simply moving the hostile fist out of the way with your wrist, this will also leave the opponent in an unstable position.

Striking with Maximum effect: Graceful Fist user's also has knowledge over every single muscle that is in the human body, thus comes the striking with maximum effect. The strike will always be for an important area, more likely a pressure point.
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Nin-Taijutsu related effect's: Graceful Fist user's have the ability to create small wind gust's nearby their body with simply the swipe of an open palm. This was to knock the opponent off balance, for an opening to strike with maximum effort. The wind can be anything from a wind gust, to a small burst of wind, most if not all the wind techniques related around this style are all supplementary; and to enhance the possibilities of the Graceful Strike!

Example Techniques:

Yūgana Ken: | Graceful Fist: Muscle Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will go into the Graceful Fist stance and by using their great knowledge about the muscles in the human body. The user will aim for whatever muscle and strike with a simple palm strike.
Notes:
- Must say which muscle they are planning to strike.

Yūgana Ken: | Graceful Fist: Off Balancing Wind Strike
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
This technique allows the user to release a small burst of wind that is able to off balance the opponent, so the user can perform another Graceful Fist technique with more ease.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Graceful Fist user's have great stamina. Due to you having to move at all times fluidly regarding the style, stamina is built.
- The user of Graceful fist will be able to take strong blow's, not only do you learn about pressure point's and muscular area's during the learning process, you must constantly resist these physical blow's. To be sure no Graceful fist user could really fight one another.
- A Graceful Fist user does not require handseal's to create small wind gust's.
- In The Training process, you will strike hard object's with merely a finger or two, practising. Therefore the user's hand's and finger's will be rock hard.
- Those who wish to learn this style must go though one training session with the creator [Nathan]
- A Graceful Fist user is not as strong as a normal strong fist user, so in a pure physical match, Graceful Fist is Outmatched.
- Must be at least Kage [post count] to learn this style.
- Must have both Taijutsu and Wind release completed.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.



♦ Declined ♦ A bit better, but you still didn't clarify upon the wind relation. Simply saying it is for supplementary purposes isn't enough to cut it (no pun intended). Wind Release is mainly short to mid-ranged offensive techniques that combine brute force and keen precision to deal cutting and slashing damage. Try to find a way to combine the characteristics of wind to make the CFS more....graceful, to make the movements flow together more fluidly while still maintaining it's purpose.
- Went into more detail about the Nin-taijutsu effects.
- Made new techniques for the above.

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Yūgana ken | Graceful Fist
Type: Nin-Taijutsu.
Background: There once was a time, when there was little known about jutsu, or Kekkei Genkai. A simpler time, when most fought with their body's alone. Due to this many struggled to stay on top, creating different form's of Taijutsu. But one form stood above all, and was never defeated. This style was known as the Graceful Fist. Many relied on power, and simple physical strength. But one man realized that there was another way. A better, and more peaceful way to end a fued. Graceful Fist is purely based on patience, and striking with maximum effect. And this was the key to winning any fist fight. Nathan came along this style from an old man that he met from his journey.

Inner working's and Movement's of the Graceful Fist style.
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Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Graceful Fist style consist's of three main rule's. The first rule is to stay Patient and Calm at all time's, it is always the key no matter what's headed your way, breaking this rule can be fatal. The second rule is to stay fluid, a stiff fighter is always inaccurate. And the third rule, is to strike with Maximum effect, and we will get to that in the explanation here.

Movement and Style: Graceful Fist is mainly performed with fluid movement of the body. The user will watch the opponent's every move, nothing get's past a Graceful Fist Master. You rarely block in this form of fighting, you will always counter. For example, if a simple quick punch is thrown, it can be blocked by simply moving the hostile fist out of the way with your wrist, this will also leave the opponent in an unstable position.

Striking with Maximum effect: Graceful Fist user's also has knowledge over every single muscle that is in the human body, thus comes the striking with maximum effect. The strike will always be for an important area, more likely a pressure point.
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Nin-Taijutsu related effect's: By utilising the Wind aspect of Graceful Fist, a user of the style is able to use it to enhance their striking power and overall effectiveness of the style itself. By using shape manipulation, the user is able to mould his wind chakra into sharp projections that extends from his fingers/fist. Then, by using their knowledge of the human body and the placement of the muscles, a Graceful Fist user can strike the opponent in a vital area or muscle, and severe it through the skin by precisely slicing it with the Wind chakra. This allows a Graceful Fist user to cut the muscles of the arm/leg etcetera causing the opponent to be greatly harmed and lessen their overall ability to use their arms/legs, giving the Graceful Fist user an advantage in battle.

The user of Graceful Fist is able to use Wind as a supplementary too. By coating their legs and arms in Wind chakra,and manipulating it with great precision, it allows the user to be more fluid when fighting. When coating the legs, it allows the Graceful Fist user to be light on his feet and move a bit faster and evade attacks from the opponent, thus countering with the Graceful Fist techniques giving the Graceful Fist user a upper hand.

With both these aspects, Graceful Fist users are able to easily evade and strike back with great precision.


Example Techniques:

Yūgana Ken: | Graceful Fist: Muscle Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will go into the Graceful Fist stance and by using their great knowledge about the muscles/pressure points in the human body. The user will aim for whatever muscle/pressure points and strike with a simple palm strike.
Notes:
- Must say which muscle they are planning to strike.

Yūgana Ken: | Graceful Fist:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
By coating the users limbs with wind chakra, the user will be able to move much more fluidly, when the legs are coated with wind chakra, it allows the user to be light on their feet, and able to use Graceful Fist techniques with more ease, and move around with that same ease.
- Can only be used for Graceful Fist techniques, nothing else.

Yūgana Ken: | Graceful Fist:
Type: Offensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will gather a small amount of wind chakra around their hand and/or fingertips, and by using their great understanding of the muscles and pressure points, the user will place their hand on their target muscle or pressure point and the wind chakra will seep out of the users fingertips causing a cut around the skin, allowing Graceful Fist techniques to do more pain to the target.
- Can only be used for Graceful Fist techniques, nothing else.

Additional effects:
- Graceful Fist user's have great stamina. Due to you having to move at all times fluidly regarding the style, stamina is built.
- The user of Graceful fist will be able to take strong blow's, not only do you learn about pressure point's and muscular area's during the learning process, you must constantly resist these physical blow's. To be sure no Graceful fist user could really fight one another.
- A Graceful Fist user does not require hand-seals to use the Nin-Taijutsu of this style.
- In The Training process, you will strike hard object's with merely a finger or two, practising. Therefore the user's hand's and finger's will be rock hard.

Restrictions:
- Those who wish to learn this style must go though one training session with the creator [Nathan]
- A Graceful Fist user is not as strong as a normal strong fist user, so in a pure physical match, Graceful Fist is Outmatched.
- Must be at least Kage [post count] to learn this style.
- Must have both Taijutsu and Wind release completed.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.


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Nathan., our loyal member, gave on the 3rd of January, 2014 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Yūgana ken | Graceful Fist. I, Madāra Uchiha of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Caliburn, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;​

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Meteoric Impact | Ryūsei no Inpakuto
Type: Nin-Taijutsu
Background: Meteoric Impact was created by an incredibly powerful ninja who had an apparent love for astrology. He constantly studied the the stars and planets, but one of his favorite things to study were shooting stars. They compelled him so, he became obsessed with them. Before anyone else he had figured out that a shooting star was actually a meteorite. He then began to mold his fighting style around Meteor's, and started a style that is practiced only by an elite few.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Meteoric Impact is a style that focuses on extreme speed, consecutive attacks and flexibility. It utilizes the Lightning Element but also utilizes wind. Similar to the technique (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado the users of this style whip lightning and wind around their body's, though they are only using lightning chakra throughout this process. This lightning shroud is used throughout all the attacks of this style, this is in no way a mode. It increases the speed of the user by whirling lightning and wind around him, reducing the drag and friction from his body to a minimum and acting as a sort of booster, his movements become much more fluid. The lighting and wind shroud also gives him the ability to "fly" to a certain extent, the lightning and wind acting as a sort of booster that allows him to move off the ground. The "Meteor shroud" pulses him off the ground and allows him for fast and precise movements. He isnt limited to linear movements, he can move in anyway possible, even in large arcs and zig-zag formations. He can use his lightning shroud to pulse even off of the air, allowing him to use the air as a sort of ground so that he can redirect himself. This can be used to deliver attacks in rapid succession and rebounding attacks or to dodge the hit of an opponent when he is in mid-air. This movement with the Meteor Shroud is the key to this fighting style. With the use of the Meteor Shroud the user delivers mostly strong single attacks but almost immediately follows up with yet another strong attack, knocking the opponent around with crushing force. These attacks mostly consist of knees, kicks, headbutts, shoulder thrusts, and deadly punches forcing opponents into the ground. And because the CFS is very effective against opponents in mid-air since the users of this style move around freely in mid-air while opponents movements are limited, kicks or uppercuts or any other attack that sends an opponent into the air

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Example Techniques:
Ryūsei no Inpakuto: Shōten | Meteoric Impact:
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will within range of the opponent whirl lightning and wind around himself, encasing himself in the meteor shroud necessary for this style. This is an almost instant process in the speed that it is donned. Once it is on, the user will rush towards the opponent and upon reaching the required range hit the opponent with a single strong hit designed to send him flying upwards. From simple attacks such as uppercuts and rising kicks to much more intricate attacks, such as low fading kicks. The attacks leaves them vulnerable to other attacks so it is quite useful for follow up comboniations
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Ryūsei no Inpakuto: Gurandochariotto | Meteoric Impact: Grand Chariot
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will, once within close proximity of an opponent and using his meteor shroud, suddenly pulse off at great speeds towards the user. The user aims to deliver strong consecutive hits, rebounding off the air to deliver an attack even faster than the last. The user can go from multiple angles to attack, even going from an attack from directly in front to above, the user can use this to his advantage to deliver attacks in the blind spots so that even doujutsu users are affected by this Grand Chariot. The great speed of this allows the user to seem like a mirage, he is seemingly dashing all around the opponent. The attack always ends with a hit that sends the enemy towards the ground
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Ryūsei no Inpakuto: Gurandofurasshu | Meteoric Impact: Grand Flash
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will use his meteor shroud to escape from dangerous situations. Even in mid-air, the user will pulse off the air using the lightning shroud chakra and in a burst of speed send himself off in the direction that would allow him to escape. The user can move in large arc-like movements to escape or rebound off the air multiple times to escape through even the narrowest of holes. Even techniques such as chidori senbon can be dodged with this advanced form of evasion.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
~Must have Lightning Release Mastered
~Must be at least Kage
~Users gain a heightened flexibility and recover quicker from attacks, either throwing or receiving them, so they can attack faster


♦ Declined ♦ This "Meteoric Shroud" sounds like a custom version of Lightning Armor, just in the form of both lightning and wind. In some instances, you even make it sound like Body Flicker.
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Tentai | Heavenly Body Style
Type: Nin-Taijutsu
Background: Heavenly Body Style was created by an incredibly powerful ninja who had an apparent love for astrology. He constantly studied the the stars and planets, but one of his favorite things to study were shooting stars. They compelled him so, he became obsessed with them. Before anyone else he had figured out that a shooting star was actually a meteorite. He then began to mold his fighting style around Meteor's, and started a style that is practiced only by an elite few.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Heavenly Body is a style that focuses on extreme speed, consecutive attacks and flexibility. It utilizes the Lightning Element but also utilizes wind, similar to the technique (Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado the users of this style whip lightning and wind around their body's, though they are only using lightning chakra throughout this process. This lightning shroud is used throughout all the attacks of this style, this is in no way a mode nor is it like lightning armor, it doesnt increase the users reactions or stimulate the users nerves even though it slightly increases the user's speed. And although the technique of this style rely on fast movements it is not on the level of shunshin nor does it mimic it. Only because the attacks are delivered in rapid succession and at unpredictable will it be hard to track It increases the speed of the user by whirling lightning and wind around him, reducing the drag and friction from his body to a minimum and acting as a sort of booster, his movements become much more fluid. The lighting and wind shroud also gives him the ability to "fly" to a certain extent, the lightning and wind acting as a sort of booster that allows him to move off the ground. The "Meteor shroud" pulses him off the ground and allows him for fast and precise movements. He isnt limited to linear movements, he can move in anyway possible, even in large arcs and zig-zag formations. He can use his lightning shroud to create solid disks of lightning that can be used for footing, allowing him to use the air as a sort of ground so that he can redirect himself. This can be used to deliver attacks in rapid succession and rebounding attacks or to dodge the hit of an opponent when he is in mid-air. This movement with the Meteor Shroud is the key to this fighting style. With the use of the Meteor Shroud the user delivers mostly strong single attacks but almost immediately follows up with yet another strong attack, knocking the opponent around with crushing force. These attacks mostly consist of knees, kicks, headbutts, shoulder thrusts, and deadly punches forcing opponents into the ground. And because the CFS is very effective against opponents in mid-air since the users of this style move around freely in mid-air while opponents movements are limited, kicks or uppercuts or any other attack that sends an opponent into the air

Start from 1:57, ignore all that magic circle shizz. The movements and stuff, thats the main stuff
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This is also like a good example and like stuff
Example Techniques:
Tentai: Shōten | Heavenly Body Style:
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will within range of the opponent whirl lightning and wind around himself, encasing himself in the meteor shroud necessary for this style. This is an almost instant process in the speed that it is donned. Once it is on, the user will rush towards the opponent and upon reaching the required range hit the opponent with a single strong hit designed to send him flying upwards. From simple attacks such as uppercuts and rising kicks to much more intricate attacks, such as low fading kicks. The attacks leaves them vulnerable to other attacks so it is quite useful for follow up combinations
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Tentai: Gurandochariotto | Heavenly Body Style: Grand Chariot
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will, once within close proximity of an opponent and using his meteor shroud, suddenly pulse off towards the opponent. The user aims to deliver strong consecutive hits, materializing disks of lightning beneath his feet and using it to rebound off seemingly off the air to deliver an attack even faster than the last. The user can go from multiple angles to attack, even going from an attack from directly in front to above, the user can use this to his advantage to deliver attacks in the blind spots so that even doujutsu users are affected by this Grand Chariot. The great speed of this allows the user to seem like a mirage, he is seemingly dashing all around the opponent. The attack always ends with a hit that sends the enemy towards the ground
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Tentai: Gurandofurasshu | Heavenly Body Style: Grand Flash
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will use his meteor shroud to escape from dangerous situations. Even in mid-air, the user will pulse off the air using the lightning shroud chakra to manipulate a disk of lightning and in a burst of speed send himself off in the direction that would allow him to escape. The user can move in large arc-like movements to escape or rebound off the air multiple times to escape through even the narrowest of holes. Even techniques such as chidori senbon can be dodged with this advanced form of evasion.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
~Must have Lightning Release Mastered
~Must be at least Kage
~Users gain a heightened flexibility and recovers quicker from attacks, either throwing or receiving them, so they can attack faster


♦ Declined ♦ Despite chaninging the name and adding a few lines in saying that is t isnt like Lightning Armor, you change nothing in the description to make it not similar to Lightning Armor. It is essentially a toned down version of it, enhancing reflexes and that grand flash technique you made is very much like body flicker, just a varied use that allows you to use it in the air.
 
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( Sha-man no Hijutsu ) Hidden Shaman Arts

Type: GenTaijutsu

Background: The Shaman Arts where created by an hermit Mushroom user, far before it's discovery by the Sage of Deceit, who spread it through the world. The hermit was known by the surrounding populations as the Shaman of the Bog, or the Swamp Witch, or Honey Sugarlips. Utilizing her chakra, she was able to cultivate several strands of powerful fungus, and extract their mycotoxins and other byproducts, with which she was able to produce a variety of dusts and powders, carrying the toxins.

The Shaman was proficient not only in the production of the mycotoxin powders, which she called Curses, but also employing them in battle. Tradionally, she used a chakra wood staff with cured leather pouches with several Curses, which she would release in conjunction with punctual strikes and parries. She would also keep a dagger, soaked in mycotoxin oils/residues, as well as a needle-blowing tube, through which she could shoot darts/needles imbued in mycotoxin, or blow Curses directly.

The materials to utilize the Curses are either created ( Through Poison Mastery (Medjutsu) or specifically through Mushroom Release ) or cultivated, in a pre-defined quantities of Curse Dusts or Curse-Infused Weapons, similar to Fuuin Tags, Kunai, Shuriken or any other standard and non standard ninja arsenal. Both the Shaman and the Deceiving Sage were users of Mushroom, but were able to spread the botanical knowledge to cultivate and collect the basic Curses.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Hidden Shaman Arts are especially the employment of different mycotoxins to empower one's battle prowess. Being mainly about combining Genjutsu with mycotoxins, devoloping a different medium of casting Genjutsu, in order to produce a wide range of illusions and use them in conjuction with with simple Taijutsu skills and basic weapons. The mycotoxin-inflicted Genjutsu is considered a specialized External Genjutsu, as the medium of the genjutsu is physical, infecting the opponent through inhalation or absorption, and physiologically causing the illusion. The main component of the style is thus the mycotoxins, which are named Curses.

( Bachi no Jutsu ) Curses - A dry extraction of mycotoxins from cultivated Mushrooms with various effects on an organism. The Curses are powdery mixtures, which are blown towards the target, or coated in bladed weapons. They can produce effects through nose/mouth inhalation, skin absorption or by contact with the eyes (Mainly irritants). The mushrooms that originate the Curses are cultivated based on their psychotropic effect, and, thus, each "species" have a different genjutsu attached.

A Curse cloud has varying colors, ranging from Black to Green, yet, when crafting the curses, the use of different fungal dyes allows each user to personalize their Curses. The powders are thin but can induce coughing. Generically, the dusts carry nothing other than the genjutsu, but some specific curses can have a more irritant effect, either similar to spices, causing teary eyes and burning sensations, to gastrointestinal irritation, causing nausea and stomach ache. The secondary effects of the Curses must always be defined in the proper techniques.

The Curses are kept in pouches, for quick access or sealed in storage scrolls. In order to utilize the Curses, the user retrieves a fistful of dust, and blows it towards the opponent. This simplistic method of deploying the curses gave birth to a more complex style, which empowers the user with a set of skills to better utilize the Curses, called the Shaman Fist.

( Sha-Man Kata ) Shaman Fist - The Shaman Fist is a set of techniques that accentuate the employment of the Curses. Developed by a woman, the Katas focus on disarming and outmaneuvering the opponent, rather than blocking or overpowering the opponent. The revolve around several aspects/weapons:

Hand to Hand - The user aims to utilize the opponent's own momentum against them, combining grapplings, feints and quick Curse blowing.

Staff - Empowers the user with the assistance of the staff, keep the opponent at bay or dealing harder strikes. Usually, the staff holds Curse bags, which can be released sporadically through the usages of quick jabs and swipes.

Dagger - Hidden blade coated with curses, normally Black Curses. It serves as a last minute weapon, revealed only when the opponent least expects it.

Needle-Thrower - For long-range fights, the needle thrower constitutes a more silent and discrete way to deploy the curses, normally through needles soaked in them.

Example Techniques:

The user blows a curse cloud towards the user containing a Curse that blinds them for 3 turns,

The user jabs at an opponent 3 times with their staff before sweeping him/her off their feet.

The user releases a curse cloud towards the opponent containing a Curse that makes them see purple.

The user releases spins around, deflecting an incoming strike with her hands/staff/dagger, before retrieving a blow to the opponent's head.

The user releases a curse cloud towards the opponent containing a Curse that makes them see the user as someone else.

The user releases a curse cloud towards the opponent containing a Curse that makes them see frogs attacking him/her

Additional effects and Restrictions:

The style revolves around Mushroom Techniques, Genjutsu and Poison. In order to utilize it, one has to Master Genjutsu, but to fully utilize it, one has to master Mushroom or Poison. Any user will have a finite set of dust bags / weapons:

Hex Bags / Curses - An Hex Bag stands for both a small leather pouch containing an individual Curse and a Generic Storage Seal, which can contain more curses, the former can be used by grabbing the dust with one's hand directly, or by charging chakra through them ( Rupturing the bag and releasing the Curse in a dust cloud ). The amount of Hex Bags one can have is directly related to the usage restriction on a Curse, specified in each individual technique.

Shaman Dagger - Each user is able to hide 1 curse-coated dagger. The dagger is around 20 cm long, with chakra metal blade and a leather handle. It has the connotation of a standard weapon, rather than a Custom Weapon, and can be coated in 1 Curse, which must be stated in the beginning of a Battle / Event. It does not count towards the limit on Curses.

Shaman Staff - Each user is able to wield 1 staff. It can range from 1 meter to 3 meters tall, made of Chakra Tree Wood, wrapped in leather straps here and there. It contains 3 Hex Bags, which can be ruptured by charging chakra through them or through the staff. Each bag contains a pre-defined curse, which must be stated in the beginning of the Battle / Event. The Hex Bags do not count towards the limit on Curses. The staff has the connotation of a standard weapon, rather than a Custom Weapon.


Curse Clouds can have any color, personalized for the user. They can't, though, be invisible. The color can be camouflaged, using blue to hide with the sky, or green to hide with the grass, for example, but are still colorful. Every individual Curse and Curse type can have a different color, but only actual Mushroom users are able to change the color of the curse dust on the spot.

Some techniques are limited to Mushroom or Poison users, these are the more amorphic techniques, such as actively converting different Genjutsu Techniques into Curses, which require new mushrooms or toxins. The other users are limited to the basic techniques.

A Shaman Arts Master is able to double the usage restriction on Hex Bags, as well as combine 3 different curses on the Shaman Blade and have up to 6 Hex Bags on the Shaman Staff. They are generally more flexible, faster and have increased reactions than the average user, acquiring a +5 damage increase for taijutsu-related techniques and a -5 chakra cost decrease for genjutsu-related techniques. To master the Shaman Arts, one needs to learn either Mushroom Release or Poison Release.

The Curses are a type of External Genjutsu, where the Medium is physical, causing the Illusion through physiological infection, need to be inhaled or absorbed through exposed skin. They are weak to Fire and can be scattered by Wind, but proliferate in Water. Given their physiological nature, the Kai technique does not work, due to it's momentary mechanism. Elemental Bursts are better suited to deal with the Curses, as well as constant means of releasing Genjutsu (Like Nekura, for example). Strong chakra blasts can flush the system, like opening the Inner Gates or activating the Curse Mark, or through Pain, which is required to be 1 "rank" higher than normal, for the organism to kick out the psychoactive substances. Med Jutsu works well against the Curses, as they can actively cure the target from the toxins, thus achieving a sort of elemental strength status. Curse-Cast Genjutsu can't be released through Senjutsu, as the inherit nature of the Mushroom is not repelled by Sage Chakra.

Any user of the Shaman Arts is immune to Curses. This means the user is immune to their own curses AND curses employed by other Shamans.


♦ Declined ♦ As ingenious as I think this is, it cant be approved for a few reasons, the most notable of which is this would be a bypassing of the CEJ limits and poison related CFS require you to be a current med nin. Also, I'm almost sure that this would be considered Biological Warfare instead of an External Genjutsu. External Genjutus dont require the chakra to enter the body of the enemy, instead using things such as the environment to create illusions, such as a heat wave. By entering the body, you open them up to being normal genjutsus, attacking the body through inhalation or absorption, making these biological warfare jutsus.
Changed it's core, and the connection to poison or the mushroom element.

( Sha-man no Hijutsu ) Hidden Shaman Arts

Type: GenTaijutsu

Background: The Shaman Arts where created by an hermit Genjutsu user, far before it's discovery by the Sage of Deceit, who spread it through the world. The hermit was known by the surrounding populations as the Shaman of the Bog, or the Swamp Witch, or Honey Sugarlips. Utilizing her chakra, she was able to mince several non-lethal mushrooms, creating a very fine dusts and powders of varying color, which she infused with Genjutsu-chakra. The fine organic dust served as a perfect medium to host the chakra, and, by blowing it towards other people, she was able to cast much stronger and resilient illusions, that would bypass normal chakra protections.

The Shaman was proficient not only in the production of the genjutsu powders, which she called Curses, but also employing them in battle. Traditionally, she used a chakra wood staff with cured leather pouches with several Curses, which she would release in conjunction with punctual strikes and parries. She would also keep a dagger, coated in Curses, as well as a needle-blowing tube, through which she could shoot darts/needles coated in Curses, or blow Curses directly.

The materials to utilize the Curses are cultivated, in a pre-defined quantities of Curse Dusts or Curse-Infused Weapons, similar to Fuuin/Explosive Tags, Kunai, Shuriken or any other standard and non standard ninja arsenal, and stand as additional tools for the ninja/shaman to use. Both the Shaman and the Deceiving Sage were users of Mushroom,and thus the organic matter is traditionally fungal matter, but the actual defining procedure of the style, the infusion of Genjutsu, was a knowledge that they spread and used in the creation of the Shaman Arts, as, rather than creating the fine powder (which can be collected and minced with any organic matter (grass, leaves, bark, leather, bone, etc), the style revolves around the genjutsu aspect.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Hidden Shaman Arts are especially the employment of different illusion-casting powders to empower one's battle prowess. Being mainly about combining Genjutsu with a physical carrier, developing a different medium of casting Genjutsu, in order to produce a wide range of illusions and use them in conjunction with with simple Taijutsu skills and basic weapons. The Curse-inflicted Genjutsu is considered a specialized Inner Genjutsu, similar to Biological Warfare, as the medium of the genjutsu is physical, infecting the opponent through inhalation or absorption, directly causing the illusion, instead of having the chakra spiritually travel and penetrate the user's chakra system. The main component of the style is thus the dusts, which are named Curses.

( Bachi no Jutsu ) Curses - A dry extraction of organic matter, originally from cultivated mushrooms with various effects on an organism. The Curses are powdery mixtures, which are blown towards the target, or coated in bladed weapons. They can produce effects through nose/mouth inhalation, skin absorption or by contact with the eyes (Mainly irritants). The mushrooms cultivated to use as powders are not chosen for any other byproduct other than the physical matter, and the physical aspect of the powders can be created through any organic matter the user has available, being it grass, bark, leaves, animal bone, fur, etc.

A Curse cloud has varying colors, ranging from Black to Green, yet, when crafting the curses, the use of different organic dyes allows each user to personalize their Curses. The powders are thin but can induce coughing and irritate the eyes and mucous membranes (throat, tongues, lips, ears, etc). The organic nature of the powders gives them a greater chakra affinity, and allow the Shaman to infuse genjutsu into them. They physically carry and infuse the Illusion onto a target, bypassing natural defenses the target might have, affecting the target directly..

The Curses are kept in pouches, for quick access or sealed in storage scrolls. In order to utilize the Curses, the user retrieves a fistful of dust, and blows it towards the opponent, or runs chakra through the pouches/seals, rupturing/activating them, and releasing a more omni directional and less momentous cloud of Curses.. This simplistic method of deploying the curses gave birth to a more complex style, which empowers the user with a set of skills to better utilize the Curses, called the Shaman Fist.

( Sha-Man Kata ) Shaman Fist - The Shaman Fist is a set of techniques that accentuate the employment of the Curses. Developed by a woman, the Katas focus on disarming and outmaneuvering the opponent, rather than blocking or overpowering the opponent. The revolve around several aspects/weapons:

Hand to Hand - The user aims to utilize the opponent's own momentum against them, combining grapplings, feints and quick Curse blowing.

Staff - Empowers the user with the assistance of the staff, keep the opponent at bay or dealing harder strikes. Usually, the staff holds Curse bags, which can be released sporadically through the usages of quick jabs and swipes.

Dagger - Hidden blade coated with curses, normally Black Curses. It serves as a last minute weapon, revealed only when the opponent least expects it.

Needle-Thrower - For long-range fights, the needle thrower constitutes a more silent and discrete way to deploy the curses, normally through needles coated in them.

Example Techniques:

The user blows a curse cloud towards the user containing a Curse that blinds them for 3 turns,

The user jabs at an opponent 3 times with their staff before sweeping him/her off their feet.

The user releases a curse cloud towards the opponent containing a Curse that makes them see purple.

The user releases spins around, deflecting an incoming strike with her hands/staff/dagger, before retrieving a blow to the opponent's head.

The user releases a curse cloud towards the opponent containing a Curse that makes them see the user as someone else.

The user releases a curse cloud towards the opponent containing a Curse that makes them see frogs attacking him/her

Additional effects and Restrictions:

The style revolves around Genjutsu and infusing it into a physical substance. Any user will have a finite set of dust bags / weapons:

Hex Bags / Curses - An Hex Bag stands for both a small leather pouch containing an individual Curse and a Generic Storage Seal, which can contain more curses, the former can be used by grabbing the dust with one's hand directly, or by charging chakra through them ( Rupturing the bag and releasing the Curse in a dust cloud ). The amount of Hex Bags one can have is directly related to the usage restriction on a Curse, specified in each individual technique.

Shaman Dagger - Each user is able to hide 1 curse-coated dagger. The dagger is around 20 cm long, with chakra metal blade and a leather handle. It has the connotation of a standard weapon, rather than a Custom Weapon, and can be coated in 1 Curse, which must be stated in the beginning of a Battle / Event. It does not count towards the limit on Curses.

Shaman Staff - Each user is able to wield 1 staff. It can range from 1 meter to 3 meters tall, made of Chakra Tree Wood, wrapped in leather straps here and there. It contains 3 Hex Bags, which can be ruptured by charging chakra through them or through the staff. Each bag contains a pre-defined curse, which must be stated in the beginning of the Battle / Event. The Hex Bags do not count towards the limit on Curses. The staff has the connotation of a standard weapon, rather than a Custom Weapon.

Shaman Dart-Gun - Each user carries a small wooden tube, made of Chakra Tree Wood, which is used to load a dart/needle and shoot it, by blowing on one end. Likewise, the user is able to load the tube with Curses, and blow them more accurately. Unlike the other weapons, the needles aren't inherently coated in dust, but can be plunged inside an Hex Bag, retrieving the Curse and coating it in them. Each Hex Bag can coat up to 5 needles, passively.

Curse Clouds can have any color, personalized for the user. They can't, though, be invisible. The color can be camouflaged, using blue to hide with the sky, or green to hide with the grass, for example, but are still colorful. Every individual Curse and Curse type can have a different color. If the user is capable of making their own organic matter, instead of foraging for it, there is a greater control over the color.

A Shaman Arts Master is able to double the usage restriction on Hex Bags, as well as combine 3 different curses on the Shaman Blade and have up to 6 Hex Bags on the Shaman Staff. They are generally more flexible, faster and have increased reactions than the average user, acquiring a +5 damage increase for taijutsu-related techniques and a -5 chakra cost decrease for genjutsu-related techniques.

Curses are an advanced type of Genjutsu casting. By infusing the genjutsu into a physical medium, the user is able to bypass some natural defenses the target might have in place, and achieves a much stronger hook on the target. The mechanism works by having the chakra infused in a piece of organic dust. Instead of traveling spiritually into an opponent, striking the chakra system, the dusts insert the Genjutsu directly into the user's body, through inhalation or exposed skin absorption. For example, Nekura opponents, while the Keigoku / Juubi Chakra prevents normal chakra from being infused into its host, it can't promptly battle the physical aspect of the technique, which acts as not only a medium but an armor for the spiritual part of the technique, the Genjutsu. Thus it reacts with Elements, being weak against Fire, and not dense or heavy enough to not be pushed by most Physical Elements, like Earth and Wind, but proliferates in Water. It can't be released by Kai, because the momentous purge of chakra isn't enough to get rid of all the physical dust, but strong purges like the Inner Gates of activating the Curse Mark work. Though it bypasses something like Keigoku, other methods of constantly countering a genjutsu also work, disallowing the genjutsu to set properly, until the effect wears off. Given the organic medium of the Curse, it is immune to Senjutsu-type of releases, as the Natural Energy will not react negatively to the dust, and thus, not react negatively to the genjutsu.

Any user of the Shaman Arts is immune to their own Curses.


♦ Declined ♦ First, you can't have +x increases in any field so there would be no +5 to taijutsu or anything else. Second, where would you even obtain "Chakra Tree Wood" from? And for what purpose? I have a theory as to why Hashirama's Mokuton is so effective and it's related to the wood of the Chakra Tree but as we don't know anything about this wood itself, we can't really use anything related to it in the RP (at most, Hashirama would be able to use something similar due to the relationship between him and the Sage of 6 Paths but thats also another discussion). Next, Genjutsu chakra doesnt exist; there is only chakra used for genjutsu, still from the same chakra pool though. You would have to channel chakra into the dust before you utilize them each time and due to the overall effects of the style, I still see these as biological warfare techniques, not inner genjutsu but that's more-so a matter of naming differences. Next, infusing items with chakra to create illusions isn't a foreign concept, I believe it to have been done before, though not on this scale. In the way you would use it, it would monopolize the field of channeling chakra into an object for remote genjutsu activations, which isn't something I'd like much as there would still be ways outside of this style to create this effect. And regarding genjutsu....Thing is, regardless of the name of it, these are still powders that cause illusions through inhalation, or absorption. That part itself isn't a CFS. The CFS of this would be using it in taijutsu or kenjutsu, not creating another method of genjutsu casting. Also, speaking of genjutsu casting, how would this cause a Nekura to become susceptible to genjutsus? Either through inhalation or through touch, the dust would have to be imbibed with chakra, and that chakra would have to enter the body or the body's chakra system, which it wouldn't be able to on a Nekura as they reject foreign chakra, to cause those effects. Inhalation would just be a different method to cast the genjutsus. Overall, I can't see much future in this besides a way to bypass foreign chakra immunity in clans, namely the Nekura.
 
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So....yeah, Im not too good with measures of time it seems. A day turned into a month...Sorry lol. Anyway, thread is back open! Hopefully the wait wont be long next time . There were quite a few CFS approved this time around, congrats! There are a few still unchecked, two or three but I will check them when I have time today as well as updating the list of CFS approved. For now, I sleep. Have fun submitting!
 

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Fantazumusutairu | Phantasm Style
Type: Nin-Taijutsu
Background: A group of ninja had created the idea behind Phantasm Style after watching over a battle between shinobi & Jinchuuriki. Through years of practice the group could still never replicate the exact manipulation of chakra as the Jinchuuriki. The issue had seemed to be the large amount of chakra the bijuu possessed & believed it was something unobtainable by humans alone. The ninja however had not lost hope in their trainings, they continued to perfect their own style of chakra manipulation & created something that was seen as powerful in it's own right.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
The user of Phantasm style is able to manipulate their chakra to create copied extensions of their own body. This is achieved by manipulating the user's chakra to a specific part of the body & have it blanket across the area. It then extends forward & copies the user's movements & appearance of the body part. The extension takes lead & soon after striking, is followed by the user's original strike. The chakra extension takes on somewhat of a physical body, with a flickered effect. Due to this the chakra can damage the opponent on contact, but half the damage of the actual strike performed. The basic usage of the style allows the extension to reach out by 50cm, while the advanced usage allows a further reach of up to two meters. The advanced usage can also allow the chakra extension to maneuver in a different motion than the body part it mimics. Due to the extensions consisting only of chakra, the user is able to transform it into an elemental strike, each element having their own effects & restrictions. The user is also able to create an entire body extension(example jutsu given). It can be used to mimic the user's own moves from any given direction of the user. The advanced usage allows the bodily extension to maneuver on it's own, within the parameters set.
Basic Usage - The user is able to manipulate their chakra to coat over a specific part of the body, soon after doing so the user motions the body part in any direction, causing the chakra to extend forward & take lead of the strike. The extension can reach up to 50cm & mimics the original. An example being, the user thrusting their arm forward, releasing a chakra extension that extends forward & strikes a given target & soon followed by the user's own fist. The extension does not carry the same damage as the original but would still cause the opponent to flinch from the attack. Any part of the body can be used to create the extensions.
Advanced usage - Being an advanced version of the style, the user is not only able to create an extension of their body part, but also have the extension maneuver in a different form than that of the original. this allows for two different actions to be performed almost at once. An example being the user thrusting their arm forward, causing the chakra to extend forward & grab hold of the area targeted. As the extension gains a grip on the target, the user's arm soon follows & strikes the opponent. This can be done with both arms & legs (depending on the maneuver performed).

Example Techniques:

Creation of Extension
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (Chakra Extension: 20)
Description The user manipulates his chakra & creates a thick veil to spread across a selected limb. He then thrusts his limb toward the target & while doing this, the veil of chakra extends forward, mimicking the form of the limb while flickering, reaching up to 50cm. As the extension strikes the target, the user's own limb soon follows as it strikes the same area.

Soul of Extension
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (Chakra Extension: 0)
Description By performing similar actions as "Creation of Extension", the user is able to create a copy of their arm & have it lead forward by up to 30cm. As the extension reaches the target, it takes on it's own sense of direction & grabs hold of the selected area (examples would be grabbing hold of an opponents neck, arm, leg or even a piece of clothing) & is able to hold the opponent as the fist strikes the area. The same can be done with the leg depending on the direction the leg is traveling. An example would be swinging the back of the user's leg around toward the opponent & while it travels, an extension of the entire leg leads forward, with the back of the knee (popliteal fossa) wrapping around the selected area of the opponent, allowing the user's knee to strike with ease & precision.

Soul Removal
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (Advanced: +15)
Damage: 60 (Chakra Extension: 30)
Description The user is able to create an extension of their entire body by spreading chakra across all points. The extension once emerged can reach up to 1.5 meters (within that distance it can also curve around objects/opponents to reach around the other side) & seems like a flickering hologram of the user. The extension can emerge from any side of the user & copies all movements performed by them. The advanced version follows the same description but takes a step further. The extension has the ability to maneuver it's strikes without copying the users. This is a great technique to allow the user to attack from different angles but requires an extra cost of chakra to maintain such a technique.

Phantasm Style: Elemental Addition
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: -
Description: As the user gathers their chakra to create an extension, they continue to manipulate it to add an elemental transformation to the phantasm, allowing the effects of it to enhance & also create a different result than the norm when striking the opponent. The effects vary depending on the element the user manipulates the extension to & can only be done with certain elements.
Fire - An obvious result in manipulating fire chakra allows the extension to be surrounding by a thin veil of fire that burns the target on contact, & at times may make it harder for the opponent to effectively maneuver (depending on where the opponent has been struck.
Lightning - When manipulating lightning chakra around the extension, the user is able to strike the opponent & on contact moderately shocks the targeted area. The opponent is left unable to maneuver accordingly for a brief moment, almost as if their strike is force to a stop. They are also left slightly numb after, still able as normal but with a slight delay. This delay can only benefit those equal of taijutsu specialist.

Phantasm Style: Collective Soul Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (Chakra extension: 40)
Damage: 80 (Chakra extensions: 40 each)
Description: The user manipulates chakra throughout their entire body, using a portion to create two separate bodily extensions to emerge from opposite sides of the user's body. The extensions are able to reach up to two meters & can move around anywhere within that distance. The basic copies of the user perform & mirror the striking movements of the user. While the advanced phantasms are able to maneuver on their own, allowing for a series of different strikes from various sides of the opponent(depending on where all 3 versions of the user are positioned). They can also be used to grab hold of the opponent, allowing the user to perform a combination of attacks with less chance of a counter. The user is able to transform the body of both phantasms into a preferred element by using "Mixture of Souls". This does however limit the user to a single element for both bodies & can only be done as the phantasms emerge from the user. If having transformed the bodies, due to the amount of chakra required on top of the concentration needed to maintain the phantasm, the user is strictly limited to attacks that do not require further manipulation of chakra. This limits the user to mainly freeform attacks.
- Can be used two times with a space of 3 turns
- Cannot perform any chakra related jutsu as the phantasms fully emerge
- User is unable to perform jutsu of S Rank & above the next turn
- User must be a student of Phantasm Style
- Taught by Method

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Advanced usage only applies to those who have this style as a specialty
- Must have completed Ninjutsu
- Must have completed Taijutsu
- Must be at least Sannin Rank


♦ Declined ♦ This is essentially a bijuu cloak rip. DNR
 
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(Karakurigigei) Evasive Arts
Type: NinTaijutsu
Background: "When in doubt do as the moles. Always moving and never getting caught." The philosophy that has been passed down for many generations and spread across the world. It was said that the best things come from unexpected places, and the useful things come from nature. From birds we learn to fly, from bugs we learn about the miniscule things that support the larger circle of life. By becoming like the mole, we can eventually exploit the inner workings of avoiding and attacking in symmetry. That is the basic idea of Karakurigigei, attacking while constantly moving. The style is revolved around the hiding like a mole technique.

Description on the Inner Workings of the Style: This style applies the same concept of the hiding like a mole technique. But for movement and attacking, but coating certain parts of the body with earth chakra, users of this style can move through the ground just as they would on land. User's of this style can apply the hiding like a mole technique in different ways, having their hole body underground then revealing only a foot or fist for an attack. Or being in the ground partially and still using the upper or lower body. Due to the constant contact with the ground, user's of this style are prone to earth jutsu all the time. But in the same light, because they are in the ground they are more in sync with the vibrations of the ground as more of their body is in the ground. Masters of this style become quite adept to movement in the ground to the point where they can move through swamps and quick sand. By disrupting the opponent's chakra while balancing the user's chakra masters of this style can escape swamp of the underworld or antlion jutsu with ease. Users of this style don't have to use the hiding like a mole technique. Users of this style are never in one place for two long unless they aren't using this style. Transitions between ground level and submerged are smooth and don't disturb the ground.

Levels:

Walkers: Can only do full submerges, movement underground is equivalent to swimming in a large body of water. You aren't quite used to the density of the ground. Can move through just earth.

Hybrids: Movement through the ground is equivalent to what it is above ground. Can do partial and full submerges in the ground. considered a half mole half man. Can move through sand and regular earth.

Master Moles: Able to move through the ground when enemy chakra is in it, movement in the ground is faster then it is above ground. Can do all level submerges. Considered a full grown mole, able to move faster underground then above ground. Can move through all forms of land, including sand and mud. (Not including ce's)

Submergence Types:

Full Submergence- The user's body is completely in the ground, only able to remove the entire body from the ground for attacks.

Partial Submergence- The user's upper or lower body is in the ground, capable of attacks with the body part that isn't submerged. If the upper body isn't in the ground, the user can still perform jutsu, he just won't be able to move.

Advanced Submergence- Various body parts can shoot out of the ground. A mixture of partial and full submergence.

Example Techniques:

The Mole's Fury
Type: Attack
Rank: B Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user partially submerges the body in the ground then once in range shoots either a foot or fist from under the ground for an attack from the opponent's blind spot.

Restrictions:

-Must be at least Sannin Rank to learn
-Must have Earth mastered and started taijutsu
-Can only be taught by Gecko (Me)


♦ Declined ♦ Looks nice. Reminds me of the Whack-a-Mole games at the arcades. Wait a minute.....

(Doton: Mogura Tataki no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Whac-A-Mole Technqiue
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will use the earth release: hiding like a mole technique to move around the battlefield, in which the user will pop up in front of their target before whacking them with a stick. This technique can be used to attack multiple targets.(The user can substitute the stick for a weapon to apply different method of attack)
Note: Can only be used by Obito Uchiha

DNR.
 
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インペリアル拳の誤解 - Inperiaru ken no gokai | The Misconception of Imperial Fist
Type: Nintaijutsu
Background: In the heart of a hidden village there was a boy who had the inability to extend his chakra to a point past short range of himself. He deeply longed to stand out, but was uncertain how to do so. His understanding of using wind was adequate but he lacked the chakra reserves to create extremely damaging currents like other high ranking shinobi. He then spent hours working on different ways of to make his style close combat unique. One day while he practiced performing five senses confusion disorder, he made a mistake dropping the kunai at his feet. In a panic he used his chakra to induce a wind current which then moved the mist slightly away from his body. This sparked an idea and after years of practice The Misconception of Imperial Fist was born.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Misconception of Imperial Fist was founded on using chakra,while or after performing the basic ninjutsu technique 5 senses confusion disorder in short range of the user, then using wind currents to manipulate the mist in short range to work in conjunction with the users physical blows. The physical blows and movement of the current work simultaneously, by the user moving the current around the respective body part focusing it at the point of impact. This allows the user to deal blows to the opponent that will feel as if they have been neutralised, countered or evaded when in reality they haven’t depending on the situation.

The movement of the style is very relaxed with the user moving his body in a flexible manner with mainly the only rigid point of the user being the part that is dealing the blow. The movement of the current will generally with manipulation, avoid the users skin/clothes and be manipulated in a rising centripetal fashion focused to the point where the blow is dealt. The balance of the wind and mist results in a dark nonflammable current which is generally purple in colour. The centripetal motion of the current will build up force collaborating with the blows, giving the appearance that the user is slightly stronger than a strong-fist master. Though it doesn’t increase the damage of the blows, it alters the momentum and impact which can allow strong fist masters to be slightly overpowered when physical attacks of equal rank meet. Altering the current can alter the users movement, physical impact or type of force he excecutes on an object.
When blows are dealt, plumes of the mist will erupt from each blow in some cases. After training in Imperial fist the user will have mastered using body posture to deviate his head from the plume while performing the techniques. With their body near each blow they execute the user will usher the expelled plume back to him as he moves, as it is manipulated by his chakra. This is done in a fluid fashion with each strike, viewed from afar an inexperienced fighter could mistake it as the user releasing flash or smoke bombs on contact with each blow.

The style can vary depending on whether the user is using it bare-handed or wielding a ninja weapon/tool like a kunai, chakra blades, twin blades/knives etc. This does not change the nature of the style, but just the physical effect done on the opponent when the attack is executed. Bare-handed results can vary like all forms of hand to hand combat like broken bones, blunt impact bruising, etc. Whereas weapon wielding results in stabs, cuts, deep lacerations, etc.



Example Techniques:

Inperiaru ken Ugoki - Jihibukai kurosurōdo | Imperial Fist Movement - Benevolent Crossroads
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The extremely close and lethal counteractive attack of Imperial Fist. The user will raise his elbow in a pointed fashion to neutralise a blow with current focused at that point. In a fluid motion the user will then arch backwards altering the current downwards and extending the users foot to thrust powerfully downwards on the opponent’s thigh. Using it to create an opening, the user’s free-hand will devastatingly give a powerful corkscrew punch to the opponent’s chest.

Inperiaru ken Ugoki - Kurosuakushon Girochin | Imperial Fist Movement - Cross-Action Guillotine
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will give a faint left jab near the users face while manipulating the current around his right arm and left leg to then perform a simultaneous cross-strike while leaning his head back as the left fist is withdrawn. This deals damage to the opponent’s head and chest/stomach area.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- The user must have mastered taijutsu and started training in wind.
- Irregular movement training of the style allows users to have slightly increased reflexes when compared to regular strong fist users.
- After having mastered this style with hours of practice looking and working with this style, the user will be able to visually distinguish any irregularities in his current.
- This style can only be taught by Ndlovu

♦ Pending ♦ Need to check something....


 Declined  Explanation is really flawed. So you need to use a technique to use this style? Why? and in what exactly is this style so unique? It has potential but its unrefined and badly explained.
 
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The Sword's of the Angels|Tenshi no ken
Type: Nin-Taijutsu
Background:
-It all started when Dean Winchester was looking for a way to enhance his close combat fighting and making it unique to him.He wanted to serve his village and become stronger,but for that,he had to think outside the box.After having been taught Rasengan by Gin and it’s variations,Dean thought of an idea.The rasengan had the principle of creating a sphere shape by making the chakra dense and manipulating it.So Dean created a sword based on this principle,by making it dense and using shape manipulation to form it into a sword.After having messed around with a single sword,Dean decided,it would not differ from mere Kenjutsu,so he made up to eight swords.He created these swords to enhance his Taijutsu by allowing the swords to follow his movements.

He made them hover above the part of his body he used offensively,also allowing the chakra swords to be reformed after being destroyed.After a long time of practicing with his swords,and Taijutsu,Dean wanted one more “Ace” to his style.He messed around with the concentration of the chakra in the swords,and he thought what if he could make these swords..explode.By inserting a greater amount of chakra into the swords,Dean could make them explode,causing a small scaled explosion,all by doing a single snap of his finger.If all swords are detonated at the same time,it would cause quite the damage.Dean then trained day and night in an attempt to become a master of his own created style,The Sword’s of the Angels.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
-A fighting style that focuses around the use of several chakra made swords and basic hand gestures and Taijutsu moves.The user of this fighting style,will create several (up to eight) chakra swords that hover around their body part that is used offensively.These swords are dense,and pure chakra,and through the use of shape manipulation they mimic real life swords,just a bit shorter and smaller in size.When the user of this fighting style launches a punch,the swords will follow and move towards the opponent.So whilst performing basic Taijutsu moves,it will be complimented by the chakra swords,making it harder to dodge.The user is also able to control the chakra swords,in order to evade obstacles and pinpoint opponents.As these swords are destroyed,they can be reformed due to it merely being chakra,though this might take some concentration and won’t be reformed immediately.

These swords can also hover above the users leg for kicks to be more potent,and allows the user to have a greater chance at striking the opponent.The user also has the choice of letting the swords hover above their head in order to send them to the opponent with great speed.
These swords of chakra can also be sent to the opponent at the same time,and be manipulated to strike from various sides.This allows the user of the fighting style to be fight either at close range or from mid range by manipulating the chakra swords.What makes this style special,is the ability to make the chakra swords explode in a small controlled explosion by snapping the users’fingers.This brings forth the advantage that if the opponent had dodged the charka swords,they can be used for a later purpose.If they are not destroyed,they are left on the field,just as pure chakra swords that stick into the ground.They can last up to four turns,and if not manipulated,they will disperse.This allows the user of this style to use the swords to impale the opponent,and as a finisher allow them to explode in small controlled controlled explosion.
Though if the opponent had been impaled by all chakra swords at the same time,the damage will be severe.The user of the style also has the option of dispersing the chakra swords himself,with a mere handseal.

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Example Techniques:
Swords of Creation|Sōzō no ken

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description
-The user will create up to 8 swords,by manipulating his chakra and making it dense.This allows the swords to be able to pierce flesh,and by using shape manipulation,it will gain the form of your average sword,only a bit smaller in size.These swords can be manipulated to hover around the user,around the body part used or even sent towards the opponent up to mid range.These swords can be caused to explode by snapping your fingers and can be dispersed at will.The swords can be manipulated at will by using this technique

-If swords can last up to four rounds on the field if not manipulated,then they will disperse.
-Swords can reform when they are destroyed,though it requires a bit of concentration and isn’t instant.
-This technique is used when the user freeforms with Taijutsu or uses Taijutsu based moves whilst the swords follow the body part specified.

Raphael’s Wrath|Rafaeru no ikari
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description
-The user will send all 8 swords up into the air,and manipulate them to come down around the opponent in the form of the users choosing,trapping the opponent inside.Then by snapping their finger,the user will cause the chakra concentration in the swords to be heightened,causing them to explode.This would cause great damage to the opponent inside.

-The user can manipulate the swords to form various shapes around the opponent.


Balthazar’s Defense|Barutazāru no Bōei
Type: Defensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description
-The user will manipulate already existing swords to form around the user,close to their body.The user will then manipulate the swords to spin,creating a quick defense against incoming attacks.

-These swords that spin around the user can be used for the another move.
-The defense can last up to two turns.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-The chakra swords can only be manipulated up to mid range from the user.
-This style does not enhance the users Taijutsu prowess
-User of this style must have completed Ninjutsu and atleast have started Taijutsu
-Must be atleast Sannin rank
-Can only be taught by –L-



♦ Declined ♦ Sorry, but chakra swords and floating chakra swords have been done time an time again. This would collide with existing customs.
 
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(Rasen no eikyō no āto):Art of spiraling impact

Type: Advanced Taijutsu/Weapons

Background:
While studying the different types of Ninjutsu, genjutsu and Taijutsu W24 had read over a review about a technique called Rasengan which was just dense, spiraling chakra. W24 loved the idea of the jutsu and wanted to come up with his own style that used "spiraling chakra". He began practicing over the years and decided to incorporate the spiraling of chakra into a taijutsu style which could help him crush opponents. After many more months of practicing chakra control and taijutsu he invented Rasen no eikyō no āto.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Rasen no eikyō no āto is an advanced Taijutsu style that incorporates the chakra spiraling aspect of Rasengan into close combat fighting. The basis of the style is to coat a body part in a thin layer of chakra followed by forcing chakra outside that coated body part such as the knuckles, knees, elbows, feet etc. followed by making that chakra heavier and dense then making it spiral at high rates. By doing this, each blow received by the body part that has the spiraling chakra is capable of ripping apart body parts or solid objects with relative ease. Unlike the Rasengan the spiraling chakra is not visible but it spins at such a high speed that the air around the limbs begin to sort of ripple. A master of this style is even capable of using it with weapons such as staffs, knum chucks, katanas etc. When using this style through a weapon (staff for example) the user makes his chakra spiral at either the tips of the staff or the exact spot they intend to hit the target with in order for it to have the same affects as using the style with his body. This style can even be used for defensive purposes by making the chakra violently spiral in the spot the enemy intends to hit thus ripping whatever comes in contact with that area.

Rasen no eikyō no āto|Art of spiraling impact-
Rip fists

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user first pumps chakra into each knuckle on both hand then condenses it to the fullest while spiraling the chakra violently. The chakra on the index and middle fingers knuckles(on the right hand) will spiral clockwise while the chakra on the marriage finger and pinky knuckles will spiral counterclockwise thus giving the user the ability to "grind" whatever the fist comes in contact with. The left hand will do the same thing as the right but spiral in opposite directions.

- Masters of Rasen no eikyō no āto can keep this active for 5 turns. (Ppl without mastery over the style can only keep it up for 2)



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Rasen no eikyō no āto|Art of spiraling impact -
Ripping shield

Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user focuses condensed chakra in both forearms then begins making it spiral violently. The chakra would begin spiraling so fast that it would seem as if the air around the forearms are being ripped. The user then puts both of his arms in front of his face with the forearms pointed at the enemy. When the enemies fist, leg, feet, or weapon comes in contact with the chakra the said limb or weapon will be shredded into pieces quickly. The chakra on the arms spin fast enough to rip skin, bones and stone alike.

- Can't be used to rip metal, it will only deflect metal.


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Rasen no eikyō no āto|Art of spiraling impact-
Rip transfer

Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description:
The user forces his chakra into any weapon in hand and molds his chakra to spin at any chosen spot on that weapon. The chakra on the weapon will be condensed just like any other Rasen no eikyō no āto technique and will also spiral violently. With the chakra spinning so fast it will seem as if the air around the weapon is being rippled. Depending on the chosen weapon this can be used as both attack and defense. You can attack with the weapon which would rip whatever it comes in contact with or you could block with the exact spot the spiraling is happening which would rip whatever comes in contact with it.

- Can only use this on 2 weapons at a time.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Due to extensive use/training with the heavy, dense chakra users of this style are physically quicker and more powerful then average shinobi of there rank. (Physical strength ×2, though you can delete the "×2" part if its too much)
-Speed +3
- Must be Sannin to use it.
-Requires precise chakra control so Must have Mastered Ninjutsu
- People who haven't mastered the style fatigue easily due to not being used to the weight of the chakra.

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‡ Declined ‡
Overpowered benefits in the restrictions section, invisible chakra and unrealistic chakra control levels at you level of training
Resubmitting from a while ago. Took away and added things. Ohh and William24 was my previous username. >.>

(Rasen eikyāto):Art of Spiraling Impact

Type: Advanced Taijutsu/Weapons

Background:
While studying the different types of Ninjutsu, genjutsu and Taijutsu Shady had read over a review about a technique called Rasengan which was just dense, spiraling chakra. Shady loved the idea of the jutsu and wanted to come up with his own style that used "spiraling chakra". He began practicing over the years and decided to incorporate the spiraling of chakra into a taijutsu style which could help him crush opponents. After many more months of practicing chakra control and taijutsu he invented Rasen eikyāto.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Rasen eikyāto is an advanced Taijutsu style that incorporates the chakra spiraling aspect of Rasengan into close combat fighting. The basis of the style is to coat a body part in a thin layer of chakra followed by forcing chakra outside that coated body part such as the knuckles, knees, elbows, feet etc. followed by making that chakra heavier and dense then making it spiral at high rates. This being done just as fast as a rasengan master creating a rasengan. By doing this, each blow received by the body part that has the spiraling chakra is capable of ripping apart body parts or solid objects with relative ease. Just like the Rasengan the spiraling chakra is completely visible but it spins at such a high speed that the air around the limbs begin to sort of ripple. A master of this style is even capable of using it with weapons such as staffs, knum chucks, katanas etc. When using this style through a weapon (staff for example) the user makes his chakra spiral at either the tips of the staff or the exact spot they intend to hit the target with in order for it to have the same affects as using the style with his body. This style can even be used for defensive purposes by making the chakra violently spiral in the spot the enemy intends to hit thus ripping whatever comes in contact with that area. Masters of this style can even take it as far as incorporating elemental chakra into the fighting style to make it more dangerous. Even without an element boost, due to the shape manipulation and spiraling at fast rates, this fighting style can stand at even ground with elemental attacks if logical.

Example Techniques:

Rasen no eikyō no āto|Art of spiraling impact-
Rip fists

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user first pumps chakra into each knuckle on both hand then condenses it to the fullest while spiraling the chakra violently. The chakra on the index and middle fingers knuckles(on the right hand) will spiral clockwise while the chakra on the marriage finger and pinky knuckles will spiral counterclockwise thus giving the user the ability to "grind" whatever the fist comes in contact with. The left hand will do the same thing as the right but spiral in opposite directions.

- Masters of Rasen no eikyō no āto can keep this active for 5 turns. (Ppl without mastery over the style can only keep it up for 2)



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Rasen no eikyō no āto|Art of spiraling impact -
Ripping shield

Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user focuses condensed chakra in both forearms then begins making it spiral violently. The chakra would begin spiraling so fast that it would seem as if the air around the forearms are being ripped. The user then puts both of his arms in front of his face with the forearms pointed at the enemy. When the enemies fist, leg, feet, or weapon comes in contact with the chakra the said limb or weapon will be shredded into pieces quickly. The chakra on the arms spin fast enough to rip skin, bones and stone alike.

- Can't be used to rip metal, it will only deflect metal.


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Rasen no eikyō no āto|Art of spiraling impact-
Rip transfer

Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description:
The user forces his chakra into any weapon in hand and molds his chakra to spin at any chosen spot on that weapon. The chakra on the weapon will be condensed just like any other Rasen no eikyō no āto technique and will also spiral violently. With the chakra spinning so fast it will seem as if the air around the weapon is being rippled. Depending on the chosen weapon this can be used as both attack and defense. You can attack with the weapon which would rip whatever it comes in contact with or you could block with the exact spot the spiraling is happening which would rip whatever comes in contact with it.

- Can only use this on 2 weapons at a time.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
- Due to extensive use/training with the heavy, dense chakra users of this style are physically quicker and more powerful then average shinobi of their rank.
- Must be Sannin to use it.
-Requires precise chakra control so Must have Mastered Ninjutsu

♦ Declined ♦ This is literally just Rasengan expanded to taijutsu variants. DNR
 
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Kuyou Navagraha | Renewal Spear
Type: Ninsujutsu
Background: Long ago their existed a school labled as the 'Myoujin School'. The Myuojin School (Enlightened Gods), consisted of four members each wielding one of the four divine spears. Midou, Sakakibara, Jinro, and Omiya Banri were the deemed wielders of the divine spears. After the 2nd great ninja war in which they took siding with Konohagakure. Three out of four fell in combat, with the soul survivor of the school seeking refuge in the tall mountains of Kumogakure. This is were a fated meeting took place, in which he met a young shinobi named Kairyoku, despite being a kumogakure ninja, he didn't think twice before proving shelter and food for Banri, in which Banri being a pride man who owes no debts, decided to repay Kairyoku by teaching him his sacred spear fighting style. This took them close to 10 years, before Banri was discovered within Kumogakure and chased off, where he fought his ground and slayed numerous cloud men, before falling in combat himself. This led to Kairyoku's departure from kumogakure, in a journy to complete the rest of his training, which with time, he managed to succeed in.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style revolves on wielding a specific designed spear, a tube spear. Their is a tube placed before the shaft to enable the user to preform quick trusts. Which are further enhanced by wind chakra in order to make their overall prowess grow stronger in aspects such as speed and strength. Commonly refered the the 'Ultimate Spear' this cfs enables it's wielder repeated thrusts with something described as godlike speed. This is done by attaching a 'tube' to the part where the left hand grips and slides the spear. By infusing the spear with chakra, regardless of wind nature or not (although techniques vary depending on this) the wielder can essentially 'launch' or 'create' numerous spear strike thrusts at the same time, with speed that surpasses what it would take to perform only one spear thrust for regular spear wielders. By doing continuous wrist & hand movement, as they infuse chakra into the spear, the user allows the spear to move in un-predictable and what could be considered as impossible angles and speeds. Allowing their chakra to infuse into the spear, this factors make the spear even shift and turn while being thrusted, causing fast and agile attacks, without wasiting movement or space.

Example Techniques:
(Goousen) - Five Fanned-out Sharp Points
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user launches a rapid thrust aimed at the enemy for a total of five strikes (as the name implies). By twisting and turning the tube while essentially spacing out the spear several times as they release chakra into it to make it a swift and fast movement. In which five direct spear thursts are launched at the same time successively.
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(Jasen) - Snake Twist
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user causes the shaft to warp by thrusting it with his right arm and moving it in a spiral motion infusing wind chakra into the shaft, thereby producing an ever-changing thrust and trajectory. Releasing as pear thrust which can change trajectory as it moves forward, creating that effect of a snake's body. Launching an unpredictable strike which can change target in a split second, aided by the spinning motion which will allow it to drill into the victim's body.
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(Doyubishi) - Dragon Finger
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The Dragon Finger is a lethal spear technique and requires immense training as well as mastery of the spear to be used in combat. It relies on the manipulation of the spear by its wielder to change the trajectory of the blow at will - which is the basic concept of Koyou Navagraha. It draws its power from manipulation of the spear by its wielder who uses the right hand to control the spear head while the left hand grips its shaft. Visually, the spear appears to "bend" mid-strike before it hits its target.
X Usable x3 per battle.
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(Hassei Kaigan) - Enlightenment of the 8 Planets
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user infuses wind chakra into the shaft and the tube of the spear. Prior then using fast hand movement to rotate the spear in an un-ending circle motion that creates the looks that there are 8 blades of the spears moving forward in equal timing. Then they thrust forward, performing an all round attack from all sides with no openings. Striking the opponent numerous times, even if they should attempt to side step, the 8 blades cover every angle possible.
X Usable x4 per battle.
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Additional effects and Restrictions:
- The users hand become faster and agile after mastering Navagraha due to the excesive wielder of the spear. This makes their punches and jabs faster and stronger than even those of taijustu specialists.
- The user can wield spears faster than regular spear users.

♦ Declined ♦ Mainly because I can't work out exactly what you are going for. From what I read, it seems to be a spear simply enhancing with wind hcakra to speed it up.
 
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