Re: Custom Elements Bureau
Resubmitting:
Custom element Japanese name:
Yaniton
Custom element English name:
Nicotine Release
The element is based on:
Earth+water+fire An alkaloid found in the nightshade family of plants.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Asuma is seen smoking cigarettes in the anime and manga. Also, considering that it's possible to have various plants and wood release in the manga, we can assume that his tobacco and thus the nicotin come from tobacco plants, letting us conclude that nicotine is possible in the narutoverse.
How it works:
Eventhough there are several states, this CE only covers the gaseous stage of Nicotine. There is also a supplementary part, but this is actually a using nicotine's gaseous state in your own body to increase certain factors.
• In nicotine you can find inhibits chromatin-modifying enzymes. Basically, this is the same thing which increases the ability of making cocaine so addictive. Hence, research has shown us that nicotine is as addictive as cocaine and heroin.
• There are several routes through witch nicotine can enter the body. Through the mouth, nose and skin.
• It takes around 10 seconds (though it can be less) for nicotine to reach the brain.
• Gaseous state: Free base Nicotine burns below its boiling point, the vapours will combust at 35°C in the air, despite its low vapour pressure. The way this state is used, is simply by directing a source of gaseous nicotine at the opponent, or create it near the opponent. By doing so, the user can still let the opponent feel the effects of the nicotine, even from a distance. Obviously though, this is a tad weaker than using it in its liquid state.
• Supplementary state: This isn’t actually a real state. I added this, because nicotine release can also be used by the user in his own body, letting various effects take place to enhance the users fighting capabilities.
Usage Examples:
Now, what can actually be done? What are the effects of nicotine? I will explain this here (note that I will not use the entire scientifical and biological lingo for everything, or it would just impossible to figure out, at least for me O_O)
• Nicotine can increase the adrenaline flow. This leads to an increase of the heart rate, blood pressure, respiration as well as higher blood glucose levels
• It increases dopamine, making people more euphoric and relax.
• It can induce contractions and respiratory paralysis
• It is mood altering, both stimulant and relaxant: Relaxation, sharpness, calmness and alertness are heard to be effects. It can also reduce anxiety.
• Very rarely it can cause the neuropsychiatric effect of Akathisia.
• Increases memory and concentration (due to acetylcholine)
• Can cause a mild sedative (pain killing) effect.
Next to this, it causes obvious effects on the respiratory system and organs.
• Applying it to the opponents body to create a toxin effect or harm the organs of the opponent.
• Use it to enhance the users own body by altering the mood, adrenaline flow, etc.
• Giving the opponent withdrawal effects
Jutsu example:
Conditions to be able to use it:
Is weak to:
• Wind: Wide scale wind attacks could blow it away
• Fire: High level fire (S-rank) could easily disrupt the vapor by evaporating it up to the point that it’s rendered useless.
Is strong against:
• Earth: if the density is low, the nicotine will pass through it.
• Water&Lightning: These will basically do nothing because of the intangible state of the wind.
• Fire: Low level fire attacks (A-rank and lower) will just increase the evaporation and increase the toxicity of the nicotine.
Co-creator:Jinbei
Students I passed this custom element on too: ??? & -Vision-
✗ Declined: Considering I checked it the first time, Nexus lets me check it now too. Overall the explanation is fine, though I still need to make two remarks. One you can mention the adrenaline, but it's possible you might never be able to use it. I'm just mentioning that because someone once tried to make a CJ out of it (no idea whether it got approved or not) and it seems like an 8IG copy again. Secondly you need to realize that this isn't so much a battle-oriented CE as most CE are, with that I mean head-to-head confrontations. It has a certain charm, and can be quite powerful, but it's not suited for a direct confrontation with another element, similar like the Nara's shadows. As a result your strengths don't really match. Unless the earth (let alone metal) would be full of holes the size of footballs, it wouldn't let a gas go through. If that would be the case, then water or wind would just go through earth. You also need to realize there are neutral elements. You say water and lightning are strengths because it's intangible, but tell me if that's the case who do you stop then a lightning bolt that's shot at you if it just goes through it? Also do not list things like 'that rank is weak, but on that rank it is strong', that logic doesn't make any sense as you're disregarding the rank of your own jutsu's.
Resubmitting:
Custom element Japanese name:
Yaniton
Custom element English name:
Nicotine Release
The element is based on:
Earth + water (wind and fire added in gaseous state). An alkaloid found in the nightshade family of plants.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Asuma is seen smoking cigarettes in the anime and manga, letting us conclude that nicotine exists in the narutoverse.
How it works:
There are two main states in this, and one supplementary state that lets it create nicotine in your own body, but this will be further explained. Firstly though, we’ll have to look into some facts about nicotine before we can successfully understand the states.
• In nicotine you can find inhibits chromatin-modifying enzymes. Basically, this is the same thing which increases the ability of making cocaine so addictive. Hence, research has shown us that nicotine is as addictive as cocaine and heroin.
• There are several routes through witch nicotine can enter the body. Through the mouth, nose and skin.
• It takes around 10 seconds (though it can be less) for nicotine to reach the brain.
Several states of Nicotine
• Liquid State: Nicotine is a hygroscopic, oily liquid. Now, this means that it attracts and holds water molecules from its surroundings. Nicotine in its liquid state is mostly used in short-range combat. By applying it onto the opponent (depending on the dosage, and how it is used it can have different effects) and letting the effects take place. It can also be used with a water source to hit the opponent, though the user needs to look out that the dose of nicotine is on par with the amount of water used. Using a high dosage will let the nicotine work as a toxin.
• Gaseous state: This is the trickiest part of Nicotine release, due to the extreme combination of elements and chakra control that is required. Free base Nicotine burns below its boiling point, the vapours will combust at 35°C in the air, despite its low vapour pressure. The way this state is used, is simply by directing a source of gaseous nicotine at the opponent, or create it near the opponent. By doing so, the user can still let the opponent feel the effects of the nicotine, even from a distance. Obviously though, this is a tad weaker than using it in its liquid state.
• Supplementary state: This isn’t actually a real state. I added this, because nicotine release can also be used by the user in his own body, letting various effects take place to enhance the users fighting capabilities.
Usage Examples:
Now, what can actually be done? What are the effects of nicotine? I will explain this here (note that I will not use the entire scientifical and biological lingo for everything, or it would just impossible to figure out, at least for me O_O)
• Nicotine can increase the adrenaline flow. This leads to an increase of the heart rate, blood pressure, respiration as well as higher blood glucose levels
• It increases dopamine, making people more euphoric and relax.
• It can induce contractions and respiratory paralysis
• It is mood altering, both stimulant and relaxant: Relaxation, sharpness, calmness and alertness are heard to be effects. It can also reduce anxiety.
• Very rarely it can cause the neuropsychiatric effect of Akathisia.
• Increases memory and concentration (due to acetylcholine)
• Can cause a mild sedative (pain killing) effect.
Next to this, it causes obvious effects on the respiratory system and organs.
• Applying it to the opponents body to create a toxin effect or harm the organs of the opponent.
• Use it to enhance the users own body by altering the mood, adrenaline flow, etc.
• Giving the opponent withdrawal effects
Jutsu example:
(Yaniton: nikochin Pacci) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Patch
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will hit the opponent somewhere on his body with a paper tag infused with Yaniton Chakra. They will then release the chakra by doing the ram hand seal. The user will start to feel nauseated, and will start to have respiratory problems, as well as retractions.
(Yaniton: Kumoyani) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Cloud
Rank: S
Range Short – Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will start vaporize the free base nicotine and send this nicotine-infused cloud to the opponent. The opponent will inhale this vapour and will start to feel drawbacks in his health; trouble having breathing, though their muscles will feel more relax. Afterwards, their muscles will feel strained due to the drawback-effect of the nicotine not being present in their body.
(Yaniton: Yani Sen’yaku) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Infusion
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses Yaniton chakra in his body to create nicotine. The user’s adrenaline flow will increase, as well as his alertness. He will also feel more relaxed, being able to easily react to his surroundings. It also creates a pain killing effect, letting the user continue to fight when hurt (though it needs to be physically possible). It greatly increases the users perception of motion around him.
(I didn’t add any restriction because these things just came off the top of my head.)
Conditions to be able to use it:
- The user must have completed every basic element, except lightning.
- The user must have completed his ninjutsu training, as it requires a great amount of chakra control.
- Only people who have medical training can use this as a toxin, or permission by Nexus (as he is the Medical Headmaster, and toxins could be counted as poison based jutsus)
- Students must have had at least 3 training sessions in the element before they can use it in battle
- One must have permission of Passion/Perry before being able to use this, because they must know how to summon tabacco plants. There isn't an actual usage of these plants, but by doing so, the user learns how to control/manipulate the nicotine independently from the tobacco.
Is weak to:
In liquid state:
• Earth, as this can’t go through earth.
• Water: if the opponent uses a large amount of suiton, the amount of nicotine in water will be too low for the opponent to feel anything.
• Lightning: Disrupts the nicotine and water, rendering it useless.
Gaseous state:
• Wind: Wide scale wind attacks could blow it away
• Fire: High level fire (S-rank) could easily disrupt the vapor by evaporating it up to the point that it’s rendered useless.
Is strong against:
In Liquid state:
• Fire: Fire will simply vaporize the water, and the fumes released will go continue at the opponent or will stay stationary.
• Water: against water attacks that are on a small scale, it will absorb the water and it will only increase the reach of the nicotine.
In gaseous state:
• Earth: if the density is low, the nicotine will pass through it.
• Water&Lightning: These will basically do nothing because of the intangible state of the wind.
• Fire: Low level fire attacks (A-rank and lower) will just increase the evaporation and increase the toxicity of the nicotine.
Co-creator:Jinbei
Students I passed this custom element on too:
_______________
✗ Declined: You never explained how you exactly make nicotine, you just instantly assumed that because there might be nicotine in the Narutoverse that you can just make something like nicotine chakra. Also make a choice: liquid or gas.
Resubmitting:
Custom element Japanese name:
Yaniton
Custom element English name:
Nicotine Release
The element is based on:
Earth+water+fire An alkaloid found in the nightshade family of plants.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Asuma is seen smoking cigarettes in the anime and manga. Also, considering that it's possible to have various plants and wood release in the manga, we can assume that his tobacco and thus the nicotin come from tobacco plants, letting us conclude that nicotine is possible in the narutoverse.
How it works:
Eventhough there are several states, this CE only covers the gaseous stage of Nicotine. There is also a supplementary part, but this is actually a using nicotine's gaseous state in your own body to increase certain factors.
• In nicotine you can find inhibits chromatin-modifying enzymes. Basically, this is the same thing which increases the ability of making cocaine so addictive. Hence, research has shown us that nicotine is as addictive as cocaine and heroin.
• There are several routes through witch nicotine can enter the body. Through the mouth, nose and skin.
• It takes around 10 seconds (though it can be less) for nicotine to reach the brain.
Several states of Nicotine
• Gaseous state: Free base Nicotine burns below its boiling point, the vapours will combust at 35°C in the air, despite its low vapour pressure. The way this state is used, is simply by directing a source of gaseous nicotine at the opponent, or create it near the opponent. By doing so, the user can still let the opponent feel the effects of the nicotine, even from a distance. Obviously though, this is a tad weaker than using it in its liquid state.
• Supplementary state: This isn’t actually a real state. I added this, because nicotine release can also be used by the user in his own body, letting various effects take place to enhance the users fighting capabilities.
Usage Examples:
Now, what can actually be done? What are the effects of nicotine? I will explain this here (note that I will not use the entire scientifical and biological lingo for everything, or it would just impossible to figure out, at least for me O_O)
• Nicotine can increase the adrenaline flow. This leads to an increase of the heart rate, blood pressure, respiration as well as higher blood glucose levels
• It increases dopamine, making people more euphoric and relax.
• It can induce contractions and respiratory paralysis
• It is mood altering, both stimulant and relaxant: Relaxation, sharpness, calmness and alertness are heard to be effects. It can also reduce anxiety.
• Very rarely it can cause the neuropsychiatric effect of Akathisia.
• Increases memory and concentration (due to acetylcholine)
• Can cause a mild sedative (pain killing) effect.
Next to this, it causes obvious effects on the respiratory system and organs.
• Applying it to the opponents body to create a toxin effect or harm the organs of the opponent.
• Use it to enhance the users own body by altering the mood, adrenaline flow, etc.
• Giving the opponent withdrawal effects
Jutsu example:
(Yaniton: nikochin Pacci) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Patch
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will hit the opponent somewhere on his body with a paper tag infused with Yaniton Chakra. They will then release the chakra by doing the ram hand seal. The user will start to feel nauseated, and will start to have respiratory problems, as well as retractions.
(Yaniton: Kumoyani) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Cloud
Rank: S
Range Short – Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will start vaporize the free base nicotine and send this nicotine-infused cloud to the opponent. The opponent will inhale this vapour and will start to feel drawbacks in his health; trouble having breathing, though their muscles will feel more relax. Afterwards, their muscles will feel strained due to the drawback-effect of the nicotine not being present in their body.
(Yaniton: Yani Sen’yaku) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Infusion
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses Yaniton chakra in his body to create nicotine. The user’s adrenaline flow will increase, as well as his alertness. He will also feel more relaxed, being able to easily react to his surroundings. It also creates a pain killing effect, letting the user continue to fight when hurt (though it needs to be physically possible). It greatly increases the users perception of motion around him.
(I didn’t add any restriction because these things just came off the top of my head.)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will hit the opponent somewhere on his body with a paper tag infused with Yaniton Chakra. They will then release the chakra by doing the ram hand seal. The user will start to feel nauseated, and will start to have respiratory problems, as well as retractions.
(Yaniton: Kumoyani) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Cloud
Rank: S
Range Short – Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will start vaporize the free base nicotine and send this nicotine-infused cloud to the opponent. The opponent will inhale this vapour and will start to feel drawbacks in his health; trouble having breathing, though their muscles will feel more relax. Afterwards, their muscles will feel strained due to the drawback-effect of the nicotine not being present in their body.
(Yaniton: Yani Sen’yaku) Nicotine Release: Nicotine Infusion
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses Yaniton chakra in his body to create nicotine. The user’s adrenaline flow will increase, as well as his alertness. He will also feel more relaxed, being able to easily react to his surroundings. It also creates a pain killing effect, letting the user continue to fight when hurt (though it needs to be physically possible). It greatly increases the users perception of motion around him.
(I didn’t add any restriction because these things just came off the top of my head.)
Conditions to be able to use it:
- The user must have completed every basic element, except lightning.
- The user must have completed his ninjutsu training, as it requires a great amount of chakra control.
- Only people who have medical training can use this as a toxin, or permission by Nexus (as he is the Medical Headmaster, and toxins could be counted as poison based jutsus)
- Students must have had at least 2 training sessions in the element before they can use it in battle
- Because it would require tobacco to have nicotine, I would first summon tobacco plants (permission granted by Perry) to analyze them and take the nicotine out, and be able to infuse this with my chakra. Once able to do this, one would be able, and after a few training sessions, one will be able to manipulate his chakra to take on the properties of nicotine, without the use of a plant. This makes it so that the user must first train in it beforehand, before being able to simply use it.
Is weak to:
• Wind: Wide scale wind attacks could blow it away
• Fire: High level fire (S-rank) could easily disrupt the vapor by evaporating it up to the point that it’s rendered useless.
Is strong against:
• Earth: if the density is low, the nicotine will pass through it.
• Water&Lightning: These will basically do nothing because of the intangible state of the wind.
• Fire: Low level fire attacks (A-rank and lower) will just increase the evaporation and increase the toxicity of the nicotine.
Co-creator:Jinbei
Students I passed this custom element on too: ??? & -Vision-
✗ Declined: Considering I checked it the first time, Nexus lets me check it now too. Overall the explanation is fine, though I still need to make two remarks. One you can mention the adrenaline, but it's possible you might never be able to use it. I'm just mentioning that because someone once tried to make a CJ out of it (no idea whether it got approved or not) and it seems like an 8IG copy again. Secondly you need to realize that this isn't so much a battle-oriented CE as most CE are, with that I mean head-to-head confrontations. It has a certain charm, and can be quite powerful, but it's not suited for a direct confrontation with another element, similar like the Nara's shadows. As a result your strengths don't really match. Unless the earth (let alone metal) would be full of holes the size of footballs, it wouldn't let a gas go through. If that would be the case, then water or wind would just go through earth. You also need to realize there are neutral elements. You say water and lightning are strengths because it's intangible, but tell me if that's the case who do you stop then a lightning bolt that's shot at you if it just goes through it? Also do not list things like 'that rank is weak, but on that rank it is strong', that logic doesn't make any sense as you're disregarding the rank of your own jutsu's.
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