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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Nikkeru Tetsu Gōkin
Custom element English name: Nickel Iron Alloy
The element is based on: Fire | Earth | Lightning | Water | Precise Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): A Nickel Iron alloy is a metal made from the earth, consisting of a mix of nickel and iron, forming an entirely new element. This alloy makes up the earth's core and is a great conductor of heat, able to widthstand temperature's comparable to the surface of the sun. The narutoverse must have a core, and it would be made of a Nickel Iron alloy
How it works: Nikkeru Tetsu Gōkin creates Nickel Iron Alloy's either from the ground or from the user's body. The alloy is infused with fire type chakra so that it is superheated, capable of burning flesh and bone on contact, only the user can widthstand the temperature. The alloy is also more malleable than most solid material's, capable of bending and forming unique shapes, it can become pointed to be used as a sharp weapon or completely rounded, forming a huge sphere. Of course, these are only examples and there are many more uses for it. The alloy glows a bright red because of the intense heat, so its easily noticeable. A common nickname for the chakra used to create the Nickel Iron Alloy is Tetsu chakra.
Usage Examples:
Nikkeru Tetsu Gōkin: Akushitsuna Tsūretsuna Doragon | Nickel Iron Alloy: Vicious Biting Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will gather his Tetsu chakra and channel it into the ground while performing 2 handseals. Now, anywhere within mid-range, the user can create a glowing red dragon made of the Nickel Iron Alloy that will rise from the ground and attempt to chew and swallow an opponent. The dragon has a gaping mouth able to fit anything 5 meters or smaller in its mouth with ease and will melt anything touching its surface. It must then return back to the ground. Regardless of catching an opponent or not, after closing it's mouth, it must return back into the ground.
-Only useable twice per battle

Nikkeru Tetsu Gōkin: Hageshī Ken| Nickel Iron Alloy: Fierce Fist
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will coat his hand or any other part of his body in Tetsu chakra, cloacking it in a thick layer of the Nickel Iron Alloy. It is powerful enought to break bone and the heat allows it to burn through flesh and bone with one hit.
Conditions to be able to use it: Completion of Fire | Earth | Lightning | Water
Is weak to: Wind | Crystal | Ice: The cutting power of the wind is strong enough to break through the Nickel Iron Alloy and the wind fuels the fire acting against the technique. Crystal is even stronger than Nickel Iron, and Ice can rapidly cool the Nickel Iron.
Is strong against: Water | Rain Release | Fire | Dark: Water and Rain aren't strong enough to break through Nickel Iron Alloy and the heat can burn up the water. Fire simply raises the temperature and lacks enough force. Nickel Iron is similair in its reaction to dark's absorption of earth meaning it has the same double weakness.
Co-creator: No one wants to co-create it because Im unloveable :(:(
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Just a metal again. Overall also badly explained. No real proof it exists in Naruto nor that you would überhaupt be able to make it.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

-Removed the Strength to Wind
-Removed everything on cyclones and wind formations
-Replaced everything to do with blocking projectiles with slowing their movement.
-Edited its interaction with water
-Removed everything on Pyroclastic flows. Its simply condensed gaseous Sulphur now.
-Removed its Petrification abilities
-Remolded the CE as a whole. Edited elemental strengths/weaknesses



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Custom element Japanese name: Sulfuron

Custom element English name: Sulphur Release

The element is based on: Wind + Fire + Earth + Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Sulphur is a naturally occurring element, something which is found in numerous places in reality since its the tenth most abundant element on Earth. Its an essential component for life, is found at hot springs and is a natural product of volcanic eruptions. Sulphur is a necessary component of constituent of fats, body fluids, and skeletal minerals.

Hot Springs in Naruto have been displayed time and time again, providing a stronger case for the existence of sulphur.

Furthermore, the existence of Lava Release (Yoton) displayed by Mei Terumi proves the existence of volcanoes. After all, lava is simply magma outside of a volcano. Since sulphur is found as a product of volcanic eruptions further strengthens the case for the element's existence in the Narutoverse.

How it works:
The element itself is a superheated plume of dense yellow smoke. Sulfuron is created through simultaneously fusing wind, earth and fire chakra, and is released from the user's body. The simultaneous use of these elements give it its rough texture, its scorching heat and its gaseous state, forming Sulfuron. Sulfuron is an extremely dense gas which's heat averages about 500 Degrees. Due to this it gains a distinct array of unique properties compared to other elements in the Narutoverse.

How the Element Looks
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Due to being an extremely condensed gas, Sulfuron is an extremely difficult medium to pass through. Projectiles moving through it almost instantly come to a stop, with the gas rapidly draining them of their momentum. Small objects such as kunai, shuriken, bullets, arrows would be stopped by even the lowest ranking of sulfuron techniques.

The main benefit provided by Sulfuron is its interaction with water-based elements. On contact, Sulfuron's heat causes the water source to vaporize almost instantly, causing steam explosions. Due to the intense heat of Sulfuron, this process happens within moments of coming into contact with water, making the element effectively capable of making large bodies of water to vanish within an instant. Steam explosions cause the remaining scalding water vapor and boiling hot water to be sprayed in all directions, effectively dissipating Suiton techniques and potentially causing recoil damage onto the opponent.

Sulfuron itself is a potent irritant when inhaled. It causes irritant lungs, mild internal burning and severe wheezing, making it much more difficult for the opponent to fight. However, inhalation of Sulfuron (due to being such a dense gas) is near impossible unless the opponent/user is breathing extremely heavily.

Sulfuron's heat makes it capable of melting through most materials, as well as demagnetizing the magnetic objects. The sheer heat of the element, causing disruptions in magnetic fields, resulting in permanent demagnetization of the affected objects. This renders anything which utilizes magnetic chakra to become useless.

Much like wind, Sulfron is a natural electrical insulator. Its extremely high electrical resistivity due to its temperature and pressure further this effect, making the element a perfect medium to shield Lightning-based elements. On other hand, due to its extremely flammable nature, it also becomes prone to ignition and being overpowered from Fire based elements. Sulfuron's nature means it strengthens pre-existing flames, making it weak to fire-based elements. When aflame, sulfuron burns with a bright-yellow colour.

Due to its environmental polluting nature, Sulfuron can have many effects on the environment.

-When used on a large scale towards the sky, its possible for the element to create conditions for lightning storms (Kirin).

-The element is also capable of forming cyclones, tornadoes, hurricanes and other wind formations.

-On ecosystems themselves, the presence of sulphur allows the element to be used as a mass herbicide, killing plants/tree on a wide scale, resulting in desertification of the landscape.

Usage Examples:
(Sulfuron: Bakuha Kohheru) - Sulphur Release: Venomous Secretion
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will channel their chakra into the ground to cause a large portion of their sulfuron chakra into seep into the ground below. This chakra immediately has visible effects on the terrain, with all plant life for a 50 meter radius turning brown in colour and wilting away. Furthermore, due to the soil become inhabitable for plant-life, organic techniques which grow or emerge from ground will be unusable.

(Sulfuron: Kaon Kyuuzou) - Sulphur Release: Heat Surge
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Description: The user creates a small orb of bright yellow, condensed Sulfuron chakra around themselves and then releases it into a powerful surge which has a radius of 5 meters in all directions. The heat is so powerful it is capable of demagnetizing any metal/object (as well as the user), meaning anything which utilizes magnetic chakra is now useless with this effect only applying to the immediate 5 meter radius from when the user first released the technique.

(Sulfuron: Enton Shuuren) - Sulphur Release: Scorching Maelstrom
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after exhales a huge blast of Sulfuron which begins spiraling into an out of control tornado. The longer it travels, the more powerful the cyclone's suction power becomes, with the cyclone becoming the equivalent of an F-5 tornado shortly after its creation.

Is weak to:
Fire and Lava Release (and all of their KG/CE variants) - Sulfuron only seeks to fuel the flames and heat of these type of elements.

Earth Release and Sand Release - Withstands the temperate of Sulfuron. Furthermore, Earth shields the gas, making it incapable of passing through.

Sand does the same and has shown itself to be highly heat resistant as shown when faced against Amaretsu.

All Crystal Elements - Capable of withstanding the heat of Sulfuron and dissipating it

All Metal Elements - Same as Earth

Is strong against:
Water Release and Rain Release - Sulfuron vaporizes water instantly, causing it to explode into steam.

Wood Release and Plant-like elements (Double Strength). - Sulfuron's sheer heat and environment polluting nature means its capable of acting as an extremely powerful herbicide. This means it has a double strength to all plant-based CEs, including: Plant Release, Mushroom Release and Root Release.

Lightning Release (and all of its KG/CE variants) - The element is a natural insulator much like wind and its high electrical resistivity contributes to this.

Wind Release - Sulfuron is much denser and heavier than Fuuton, making it capable of overpowering it with sheer brute force. This elemental interaction is similar to that of Earth and Water. Sulfuron dissipates the force of Wind and effectively blocks it.

Ice, Snow and Frost Release - Causes instant sublimation, turning them into steam.

Magnetism Release (excluding Iron Sand and Gold Dust) - The sheer heat demagnetizes objects, making them unmanipulable via magnetic forces.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of Wind| Mastery of Earth | Mastery of Fire | Great Chakra Control​

Co-creator:


Students I passed this custom element on too:
? and ?

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✗ Declined: You need to work on how you describe some things. For starters this is still a gas, no matter how much time you say "it's dense", all that crap about it being able to stop kunais instantly is BS (let alone bullets). Even water, which is denser than your CE, can't do that. You can say it's dense enough so that not everything passes through it without resistance, but this is pulling things out of proportion, especially placing an emphasis that even the smallest jutsu can do it is just not needed. Same thing for the "instant" evaporation of water. Yes it will evaporate water on contact, however that's still different then having all the water disappear at the same time. If you use sulphur on the edge of the lake, only the water that is contact with it or is close by, will evaporate, not the entire lake. I don't get either what the point is in mentioning it can create cyclones. Not only do I not understand why that is, you wouldn't have any control over it either. What's the point of releasing cyclones on the battlefield that could potentially kill you? Lastly I don't see why wind would be a weakness. Density? Water and even earth jutsu, two elements who are denser than yours, are considered neutral against wind. At this point you can say they are neutral at best, I don't find your reason to say wind is weak against it correctly.

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Custom element Japanese name: Sulfuron

Custom element English name: Sulphur Release

The element is based on: Wind + Fire + Earth + Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Sulphur is a naturally occurring element, something which is found in numerous places in reality since its the tenth most abundant element on Earth. Its an essential component for life, is found at hot springs and is a natural product of volcanic eruptions. Sulphur is a necessary component of constituent of fats, body fluids, and skeletal minerals.

Hot Springs in Naruto have been displayed time and time again, providing a stronger case for the existence of sulphur.

Furthermore, the existence of Lava Release (Yoton) displayed by Mei Terumi proves the existence of volcanoes. After all, lava is simply magma outside of a volcano. Since sulphur is found as a product of volcanic eruptions further strengthens the case for the element's existence in the Narutoverse.

How it works:
The element itself is a superheated plume of dense yellow smoke. Sulfuron is created through simultaneously fusing wind, earth and fire chakra, and is released from the user's body. The simultaneous use of these elements give it its rough texture, its scorching heat and its gaseous state, forming Sulfuron. Sulfuron is an extremely dense gas which's heat averages about 500 Degrees. Due to this it gains a distinct array of unique properties compared to other elements in the Narutoverse.

How the Element Looks
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Due to being such an extremely condensed gas, Sulfuron is a very difficult medium to pass through. Projectiles moving through the gas traverse through it with considerable resistance and are slightly drained of their momentum, causing their overall movement speed to be reduced.

The main benefit provided by Sulfuron is its interaction with water-based elements. On contact, Sulfuron's heat causes water to vaporize almost instantly, causing steam explosions. Due to the intense heat of Sulfuron, this process happens within moments of coming into contact with water. However, the element will only evaporate water its in immediate contact with and not entire water sources if only certain parts were targeted. Steam explosions cause the remaining scalding water vapor and boiling hot water to be sprayed in all directions, effectively dissipating Suiton techniques.

Sulfuron itself is a potent irritant when inhaled. It causes irritant lungs, mild internal burning and severe wheezing, making it much more difficult for the opponent to fight. However, inhalation of Sulfuron (due to being such a dense gas) is near impossible unless the opponent/user is breathing extremely heavily.

Sulfuron's heat makes it capable of melting through some materials, as well as demagnetizing the magnetic objects. The sheer heat of the element, causing disruptions in magnetic fields, resulting in permanent demagnetization of the affected objects. This renders anything which utilizes magnetic chakra to become useless.

Much like wind, Sulfron is a natural electrical insulator. Its extremely high electrical resistivity due to its temperature and pressure further this effect, making the element a perfect medium to shield Lightning-based elements. On other hand, due to its extremely flammable nature, it also becomes prone to ignition and being overpowered from Fire based elements. Sulfuron's nature means it strengthens pre-existing flames, making it weak to fire-based elements. When aflame, sulfuron burns with a bright-yellow colour.

Due to its environmental polluting nature, Sulfuron can have many effects on the environment.

-When used on a large scale towards the sky, its possible for the element to create conditions for lightning storms (Kirin).

-On ecosystems themselves, the presence of sulphur allows the element to be used as a mass herbicide, killing plants/tree on a wide scale, resulting in desertification of the landscape.

Usage Examples:
(Sulfuron: Bakuha Kohheru) - Sulphur Release: Venomous Secretion
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will channel their chakra into the ground to cause a large portion of their sulfuron chakra into seep into the ground below. This chakra immediately has visible effects on the terrain, with all plant life for a 50 meter radius turning brown in colour and wilting away. Furthermore, due to the soil become inhabitable for plant-life, organic techniques which grow or emerge from ground will be unusable.

(Sulfuron: Kaon Kyuuzou) - Sulphur Release: Dragon's Fury
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will perform a single handseal and exhale an intense stream of sulphur towards the opponent.

(Sulfuron: Kaon Kyuuzou) - Sulphur Release: Heat Surge
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Description: The user creates a small orb of bright yellow, condensed Sulfuron chakra around themselves and then releases it into a powerful surge which has a radius of 5 meters in all directions. The heat is so powerful it is capable of demagnetizing any metal/object (as well as the user), meaning anything which utilizes magnetic chakra is now useless with this effect only applying to the immediate 5 meter radius from when the user first released the technique.
Is weak to:
Fire and Lava Release (and all of their variants) - Sulfuron only seeks to fuel the flames and heat of these type of elements.

Earth Release and Sand Release - Withstands the temperate of Sulfuron. Furthermore, Earth shields the gas, making it incapable of passing through.

Sand does the same and has shown itself to be highly heat resistant as shown when faced against Amaretsu.

All Crystal Elements - Capable of withstanding the heat of Sulfuron and dissipating it

All Metal Elements - Same as Earth
Is strong against:
Water Release and Rain Release - Sulfuron vaporizes water, causing it to explode into steam.

Wood Release and Plant-like elements . - Sulfuron's sheer heat and environment polluting nature means its capable of acting as an extremely powerful herbicide. This means it's strong to all plant-based CEs, including: Plant Release, Mushroom Release and Root Release.

Lightning Release (and most of its variants) - The element is a natural insulator much like wind and its high electrical resistivity contributes to this.

Ice, Snow and Frost Release - Causes instant sublimation, turning them into steam.

Magnetism Release (excluding Iron Sand and Gold Dust) - The sheer heat demagnetizes objects, making them unmanipulable via magnetic forces.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of Wind| Mastery of Earth | Mastery of Fire | Great Chakra Control​

Co-creator:
Zanda

Students I passed this custom element on too:
-Cobalt- and Vēx

P a t e n t C e r t i f i c a t e
I, Caliburn of the Custom Elements Bureau, by the power invested in me by Versuvio, Rei, Nexus and Zise, give you the following:

Negative Knight, our loyal member, gave on the date August 19th 2013 a request for a Patent on his custom element (Sulphur); after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned patent on this element by the following;​

Sulfuron
Powered by Caliburn
Copyright 2013, Negative Knight, NarutoBase.net​

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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: pirittokuru houmen
Custom element English name: pungent release
The element is based on: water/fire/body fluids

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
On numerous different occassion's odor has been shown in naruto or talked about I want to enhance this way for fightng and as an element. To begin with we have seen members such as naruto, gai, lee experience a tremendous odor and or sweat, shown by gai in his gate form he has a sweat and apparently that odor is disgusting. We have seen lee sweat probly the most from training and his odor could be on par with garbage smell. Now as for naruto we have seen him use his bodily odor of passing gas which actually was very detrimental to his win against Kiba who has an acute sense of smell. Not to mention naruto's has been Said to smell pretty horrible at times when Sakura has been speaking. My main goal is going to be utilizing such a sweatband turning it into a gaseous state, I want to utilize what gai has shown in his gate form from sweat but kick it up a notch also.

How it works:
So this is how this will work I am focusing on a gas related fusion of the body sweat and or naturally produced odor by using my Suiton and Katon based elements directed to my sweat glands which are located on a shinobi's entire body one can enhance these outlet by moulding suiton and katon chakra at the points being used either feet, head, armpits, private area's (sorry but it's true), it's a pretty simple aspect of creating a stench and enhancing it to a full body release, or smaller area's with a more intense smell. From there the user simply manipulates the gaseous form of stench to however it fits there needs or fighting style.

Using smell has been done in the past with lili's perfume being a more extravagant smell but I am focusing on the dreadful smell of disgust. This form has been known to give shinobi's a slight opening for attacking disrupting the enemy's concentration and or unleashing the enemy's gag reflexes during battle, some stench's have even been strong enough to make someone's eyes blur and or weep. This element is a naturally fast producing element for narutoverse when you think about how hard and strenuous training is and also sunagakure has immense heat people sweat, that said melding Suiton and Katon at the sweat glands will instantly produce some pretty horrible smells.

notes from wiki
An odor (or odour in British English) or fragrance (commonly referred to as a smell) is caused by one or more volatilized chemical compounds, generally at a very low concentration, that humans or other animals perceive by the sense of olfaction. Odors are also commonly called scents, which can refer to both pleasant and unpleasant odors. The terms fragrance and aroma are used primarily by the food and cosmetic industry to describe a pleasant odor, and are sometimes used to refer to perfumes. In contrast, malodor, stench, reek, and stink are used specifically to describe unpleasant odor.

Different categorizations of primary odors have been proposed, among others this, which relies on seven primary odors: (with examples)
Musky- perfumes/aftershave Basis for lili's CE.
Putrid- rotten eggs Basis for a stench odor.
Pungent- vinegar. Basis for my idea pungent smells
Camphoraceous- mothballs
Ethereal- dry cleaning fluid
Floral- roses
Pepperminty- mint gum
Although recently progress has been made, the idea of primary perceptions is disputed, and more so probably the concept of primary odors.

Now while lili worked on the more appealing side of odor I am going for the garbage side and pungent style of odor. Now while you could say if I cover the field in such a smell wouldn't it effect me, well yes but only at certain ranks will it also effect the user. Most cases people do not actually smell there own order because they are used to there stench.

Usage Examples:

pirittokuru hankei (pungent radius. )
Type: supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: Na
Description:
Restriction: the user starts by melding his Suiton and Katon chakra and proceeds to channel it to his full body sweat glands. Once this is done the user releases a gas of pungent from his entire body which is sent in a floating radius of long range. The smell does not do any actual damage to the enemy bt will disrupt the enemy from being able to exert chakra for A rank and above jutsu's for one turn.
Restriction -can only be used twice per battle.
- cannot more then once in the same turn.
-The odor lingers for two full turns but does not need chakra to maintain.
-by the time my turn is up the smell reaches long range.
Note can only be taught by Roju

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pirittokuru nokkuauto nioi(knockout stench )
Type: attack
Rank: A rank
Range: short range-mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gathers his fire and water chakra into his arm pits compresses it and proceeds to expel a gas orb from either arm pit which is sent flying towards the enemy. The orbs upon contact with the enemy will work on a ranking system should the ninja be one rank below the user the knockout orbs will only stun the enemy making it hard to form any handsigns. Should the enemy rank two ranks below the user the enemy is then knocked out by the gas odor orbs the smell being to unbearable.

Restrictions- can only be used once in battle
Note-can only be taught by Roju
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pirittokuru bunshin (stench clone )
Type: supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: short range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms two handsigns builds up stench chakra and proceeds to expel a full body gas to create a stench clone the clone only give off a slight stench but should the clone touch the enemy or be dispersed, the enemy will feel the full effect of the stench. A user can also use existing stench gas to create a clone as well. Should the clone land an attack on the user upper torso it will make the enemy's eyesight blur for a few seconds from being the clone will disperse after attacking to have this effect..


Restrictions: cannot used compressed stench to form a clone.
Notes can only be used three times per battle.
Can only be taught by Roju
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Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastered Suiton
Mastered Katon
Mastered ninjutsu
Must be kage rank or above to use.

Is weak to: wind: as a strong wind jutsu can simply redirect a smell or simply disperse it completely.
Fire: heating the surroundings will simply cause my stench to disappear into the atmosphere.
Perfume: pretty apparent that you can cover gross smells with more fragrant and pleasant smells( refer to Lysol commercials
Is strong against: earth: this stench can coat itself onto solid substances leaving its odor behind..
Taijutsu: close combat against a smelly enemy would obviously be a hard feat and distracting as well.
Water: you may think this is a weakness but without soap it is a strength because all you are doing is making the water take on the traits of the smells.


Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: I find this plainly ridiculous, in the end it comes down to you just increasing your own body odor and then you just say that people will influenced by it. It's not because you say that, that it's true. How people are affected by bad odors is very subjective, you have no right to say that people will be so badly affected by your smell without any reason. Not to mention they can just say they don't breath through their nose or just, before the battle, put something on their nose so that they wouldn't be able to smell. It being strong against earth? Does it stop earth? No. Does it destroy earth? No. Then it's not a strength. When you are impaled by an earth spike no doubt it will be a small consultation knowing that your bodily stench is covering the earth spike, making your opponent gag. You provided nothing that allows you to change the odor, the origin of each smell is different, thus it's not something you can just change. This can hardly even be called an element.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

re-submit:

Custom element Japanese Name: Sekieiton
Custom element English name: Quartz Release
The element is based on: [Earth + Wind + Lightning] + Chakra [+ Katon + Chakra]
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Crystal release in the anime creates quantities of an unknown material from scratch. Using the same principles and the right elements, quartz is a possible variant.
How it works: The user will gather his Earth, wind and lightning chakra in order to obtain each of the components of silicon dioxide (i.e.: One atom of silicon and and two oxygens per molecule of quartz. You would be using lightning to upset and create the bonds needed). The user will gather quartz where it's number in the mohs scale is 7. Quartz is a power stone, and has been called as well as considered world wide as the "Universal Crystal". It is the most recognized type of crystal, and what many people envision when the thought of "crystal" comes to mind. In fact there are many different types of Quartz, in quite a variety of colors.

Quartz is diamagnetic, generating a repulsion equivalent to the magentic field it is exposed to.

Quartz is piezoelectric. This is a capacity almost unique to quartz which allows it, when on pressured and on contact with a surface of any kind, release electricity. Via the use of chakra, this is exploited to the maximum making significant amounts (equivalent to a lightning jutsu of the rank of the quartz technique used) on contact. This is not a set volume of lightning, that quantity is released constantly from the contact point(s).

Within quartz release one can discern the following release:

-Pure release: Transparent and can refract light.

Usage Examples:
(Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Expansion
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After releasing a quartz jutsu the user will perform 2 handseals as they release there chakra into the quartz jutsu. In doing so, the user will increase the power and size of the quartz jutsu boosting any quartz jutsu by 20 damage points. By the increase in chakra the quartz gains more power as it absorbs more quartz chakra increasing its power.
Note:
-Can be only used on quartz
-Can be used 3x
-Can be taught by Dr. House

(Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Handy Dandy
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will be able to create tools from quartz like small shields, tools to use.
-Can be taught by Dr. House

(Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Floor
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will create a floor made of quartz on the ground, having the field covered in quartz.
Note:
-Can be used 3x
-Can be taught by Dr. House

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over earth, wind and lightning natures.

Is weak to:
Lightning, Fire thus only jutsus with really high heat would crack it, meaning as fire which only explodes on impact would not work Sound, Higher Mohs scale elements

Is strong against:
Wind, Water, Earth based elements, which are weak to lightning and with mohs scale lower than it, fire which doesn't have high heat capacity (which explodes on impact)
Co-creator: The Seven-Scaled boy
Students I passed this custom element on too: None

Note to checker:
~I fixed all the errors and added back its piezoelectric quality

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✗ Declined: I'm not going to accept something like that the electricity generated from it has actually a rank, that's based on nothing, let alone having the one from the original jutsu as how I see it now is that you then have two jutsu's active originating from one in an elemental combo. It gives it an extra edge, just like oil that can ignite easily, but as a separate jutsu? Never. If you want this to ever get approved, you will have to explain that ability a lot better as now it just looks like if you press on it, it will generate electricity, which is also not true.
It would do that when it's really under a lot of pressure. Also the weakness is the entire fire element, not just with high heat as now you're trying to lower your own weaknesses. Now you have like 1.5 canon weaknesses, thus not approvable. It also needs to better explained that the electricity only lasts as long as the pressure is there. And one last question if a water jutsu would hit it and due to the pressure electricity would be released (which would never be strong enough to just blast the water away) then in fact the entire water jutsu would start to conduct the electricity and as your weakness is lightning, I wonder if water can be truly listed as a strength? Not a weakness, but there's a level between those two.

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Custom element Japanese Name: Sekieiton
Custom element English name: Quartz Release
The element is based on: [Earth + Wind + Lightning] + Chakra [+ Katon + Chakra]
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Crystal release in the anime creates quantities of an unknown material from scratch. Using the same principles and the right elements, quartz is a possible variant.
How it works: The user will gather his Earth, wind and lightning chakra in order to obtain each of the components of silicon dioxide (i.e.: One atom of silicon and and two oxygens per molecule of quartz. You would be using lightning to upset and create the bonds needed). The user will gather quartz where it's number in the mohs scale is 7. Quartz is a power stone, and has been called as well as considered world wide as the "Universal Crystal". It is the most recognized type of crystal, and what many people envision when the thought of "crystal" comes to mind. In fact there are many different types of Quartz, in quite a variety of colors.

Quartz is piezoelectric. Piezoelectricity is when certain crystals like quartz become charged due to mechanical stress such as compression, twisting or distortion. The electricity only lasts as long as the pressure is there by all means. The piezoelectric effect is understood as the linear electro mechanical interaction between the mechanical and the electrical state in crystalline materials with no inversion symmetry. The piezoelectric effect is a reversible process in that materials exhibiting the direct piezoelectric effect (the internal generation of electrical charge resulting from an applied mechanical force).
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Quartz also exhibit the reverse piezoelectric effect (the internal generation of a mechanical strain resulting from an applied electrical field). In all of quartz forms it is diamagnetic, generating a repulsion equivalent to the magnetic field it is exposed to. Diamagnetism is the property of an object or material that causes it to create a magnetic field in opposition to an externally applied magnetic field. Because of it's reverse piezoelectric effects, it's able to hold impact energy from Shockwave-creating elements like Quake and doton techniques that induces shockwaves. The shockwaves will make the quartz compress, twist or distort, creating a field of electric energy. By all means, it won't have a reverse piezoelectric effect if an electrical field or shockwaves isn't making contact with.

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In terms, if pressure being applied on quartz like a strong water blast, quartz will react with creating electricity. Water conducts this electricity, releasing itself from its weakness and with a lightning/water combo, it'll become neutral.This is a capacity almost unique to quartz which allows it, when on pressure to release electricity. Via the use of chakra, this is exploited to the maximum making significant amounts, the user is able to create an electric field around quartz. The electricity effect and quartz does not act on separate bases. Similar to oil that can ignite on contact with fire, quartz will only release electricity upon compression, twisting or distortion. This is not a set volume of lightning, that quantity is released constantly from the point where pressure is being applied and stop when the pressure is not applied anymore.

Within quartz release one can discern the following release:

-Pure release: Transparent and can refract light.

Usage Examples:
(Sekieiton Kakuchō) Quartz Armor
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user signs 2 handseals and channels quartz all around himself, envelope himself within quartz. If pressure has been applied on any part of the quartz armor by a same ranked taijutsu technique, quartz will compress, mechanical stress, and numbs the opponent's part where the contact has been made. The user may create a defensive and offensive version of an armor where one with spikes and one with a shield.
Note:
-Can be used 1x
-Can be taught by Dr. House
-No quartz for a turn

(Sekieiton Kakuchō) Earth Quartz Compression
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user channels his quartz within underground and using his doton chakra, the user compresses the small quartz deposits that has been created within the ground, thus the quartz will create electricity. Without doujutsu, anyone who's underground will become numb from the initial electricity of the quartz, being unable to move all the quartz will gather around him from the ground, leaving him injured.
-Can be taught by Dr. House
-Can be used 3x

(Sekieiton Kakuchō) Sword Pressure
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will create items upon desire (within normal standards) from quartz. Once pressure is being applied to any parts of the quartz sword, electricity will surround the sword. The electricity will only when pressure is being applied to the sword like compression, twisting or distortion.
Note:
-Can be used 3x
-Can be taught by Dr. House

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over earth, wind and lightning natures.

Is weak to:
-Suiton: strong impact on quartz, water conducts the electricity, making quartz weak. Quartz crack and weaken under dramatic temperature changes.
-Katon: will crack or melt quartz
-Sound: with high frequency can crack it

Is strong against:
-Raiton: Quartz acts as a natural conductor insulating electricity
-Fuuton: Is able to withstand the power of most Fuuton attacks due to its structure.
-Doton: Stronger molecular structure form of earth, it is able to crush earth without losing its structure.
-Quake like elements, Shockwaves(not sound): Quartz is capable of storing impact energy within its bonds to create a field of electric energy, it's capability to store energy from Shockwave-Creating elements, such as Quake or specific doton techniques, makes it strong against said shockwaves.
-Taijutsu based techniques will numb upon impact if equal ranked being applied.
-Any technique that is weak to lightning: Quartz upon impact creates electricity, expressing the weakness of opponent's technique.

Co-creator: Seven Scaled Boy
Students I passed this custom element on too: None

Note to checker:
~I fixed all the errors Cali has pointed out and it's ready.

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✗ Declined: Reverse piezoelectric? That simply means that when an alien electrical field is applied on it, it starts to distort, the picture you posted even clearly shows that. It has absolutely nothing to do with shockwaves or quakes. By all means quake is a weakness of this, quartz is far to weak to be able to stop. I really don't understand where that came from, especially because sound is vibrated air, which belongs in the same class of elements like Quake. If frequency can crack it, it will be turned into dust by Quake. It seems you are mixing those two effects together. Also taijutsu isn't an element and 'any technique that is weak to lightning' is not even a legit weakness. One another thing when I searched about this p-effect, it was always used when a pressure was evenly applied, what happens when only a part is being pushed? I can hardly imagine the entire thing is going to release electricity.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Removed the semi-foggy stuff
added weakness to metal based ce
edited are in bold
also removed the "Harmless to user part"

-Removed the alternate release
-Changed the foggy stuff
-Edited the weakness
-Changes are in bold


Custom element Japanese name: Karakazeton
Custom element english name:
Harmattan Release
The element is based on:
Wind+fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The fact that there is dry weather, wind and dust in Narutoverse proves this to be true.


Harmattan is a hot dry wind, coupled with the dust it carries posses an amount of threat to life as a whole.
Its a West African trade wind that blows south from the Sahara into the Gulf of Guinea between the end of November and the middle of March(winter).
Harmattan(dry wind) carries a heavy amount of dust in the air that can severely limit visibility and block the sun for several days as the dense amount of dusty aerosol it poses remain suspended for longer time.
The dense blinding dust of the harmattan is comparable to a heavy fog.
Albeit having same cutting and sharp properties as a normal wind, the harmattan is well known for its unique properties dominant in some regions in Africa. This is dryness. The dry air is so extreme it can even break the trunk of the pine trees growing in that area, even as pine trees are known to store some water in their barks. Also some amount of Natural hazards are seen caused by Harmattans. The dust and sand stirred by these winds is known as the Harmattan haze, which costs airlines millions of dollars in cancelled and diverted flights. Also it risks public health by increasing cases of Meningitis, a rare disease caused by extreme dry wind or rather the dry wind serve as a medium for the breeding of the bacteria that causes the disease. Humidity drops to as low as 15 percent and can result in spontaneous
nosebleeds for some. The wind also can cause severe crop damage.

How it works:
The user combines wind and fire chakra to form a new elemental (Harmattan) chakra then using nature manipulation, the user forms Harmattan which he can spew from within himself or form from the normal surrounding air. The user mixes his/her wind+fire chakra with the surrounding air and form dry wind which he can creatively use to his own taste. This is totally harmless to the user himself.
The user also can inbue harmattan chakra into his lungs and spew it out as harmattan.

Offensive: It can be used offensively to scotch/peel off the skin when severely exposed to it as the Malphigian(upper) layer of the skin becomes extremely dry when expose to harmattan having its moisture content consumed, the sweatpore closes and begins to constrict and later its bond looses and the skin begins to shed itself giving away to the dehydration.

Supplementary: Harmattan has a semi-foggy form that however does not blind opponents but good in masking the direction of propagation/invasion of later harmmatan constructs(an harmmatan cloud that does this would be submitted as a sepearate jutsu and should be used before hand before it can be used to mask attacks, however byakugan and other doujutsus would be able to see through it).
Its is an extreme dry wind therefore dries/licks up water faster than normal wind.
It combust fire at a faster rate due to it containing no moisture content at all.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over wind and fire release
Karakazeton: Karakaze Kumo - Harmattan Release: Hamattan Cloud
Rank: B
Type: Sup
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The user release large amount of Hamattan from his mouth into the surrounding that forms a big cloud. This can be utilised for masking later hammatan jutsus but does not serve as a blind cover.
++Last for 3 turns

Is weak to:
Fire
Earth: Makes earth even stronger as it dries its moisture content making it more rigid

Is strong against:
Water: Dries it faster
Lightning
Wood and plant CE variant: weakens its lattices as it becomes dry

Co-creators (if any):
Magic..

Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Ok we have not much wind based CE and dry wind could definitely be a real CE for a chance. The way you make it, your proof and such is all fine, so is your STR & WEA, though if you say earth as weakness, it should be extended with metal based elements too. My problems is still all the semi-foggy & dust stuff. Remove it as it doesn't make any sense. You make a dry wind, sand or dust is not inherent to that. There have already been canon wind jutsus who used dust. That you say that it can pick up easily dust in areas like a desert, ok, but any further explanation would be for specific jutsus as not all areas have access or easy access to sand or dust, so comments about the Byakugan are already unnecessary. That dust is not inherent to the creation of the CE itself, so it doesn't have a semi-foggy style. Normal wind can do that trick too, still it doesn't have a semi-foggy style. Also remove the stuff "it's harmless to the user", I don't accept such comments on CE.




Custom element Japanese name: Karakazeton
Custom element english name:
Harmattan Release
The element is based on:
Wind+fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The fact that there is dry weather, wind and dust in Narutoverse proves this to be true.


Harmattan is a hot dry wind, coupled with the dust it carries posses an amount of threat to life as a whole.
Its a West African trade wind that blows south from the Sahara into the Gulf of Guinea between the end of November and the middle of March(winter).
Harmattan(dry wind) carries a heavy amount of dust in the air that can severely limit visibility and block the sun for several days as the dense amount of dusty aerosol it poses remain suspended for longer time.
The dense blinding dust of the harmattan is comparable to a heavy fog.
Albeit having same cutting and sharp properties as a normal wind, the harmattan is well known for its unique properties dominant in some regions in Africa. This is dryness. The dry air is so extreme it can even break the trunk of the pine trees growing in that area, even as pine trees are known to store some water in their barks. Also some amount of Natural hazards are seen caused by Harmattans. The dust and sand stirred by these winds is known as the Harmattan haze, which costs airlines millions of dollars in cancelled and diverted flights. Also it risks public health by increasing cases of Meningitis, a rare disease caused by extreme dry wind or rather the dry wind serve as a medium for the breeding of the bacteria that causes the disease. Humidity drops to as low as 15 percent and can result in spontaneous
nosebleeds for some. The wind also can cause severe crop damage.

How it works:
The user combines wind and fire chakra to form a new elemental (Harmattan) chakra then using nature manipulation, the user forms Harmattan which he can spew from within himself or form from the normal surrounding air. The user mixes his/her wind+fire chakra with the surrounding air and form dry wind which he can creatively use to his own taste.
The user also can inbue harmattan chakra into his lungs and spew it out as harmattan.

Offensive: It can be used offensively to scotch/peel off the skin when severely exposed to it as the Malphigian(upper) layer of the skin becomes extremely dry when expose to harmattan having its moisture content consumed, the sweatpore closes and begins to constrict and later its bond looses and the skin begins to shed itself giving away to the dehydration.

Supplementary: Harmattan has a normal appearance as a generic wind thus leaves it to be mistaken as normal wind and so does not blind opponents on a normal basis except if used in conjunction with dust and sand as a normal wind would.
Its is an extreme dry wind therefore dries/licks up water faster than normal wind.
It combust fire at a faster rate due to it containing no moisture content at all.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over wind and fire release
Karakazeton: Karakaze Kumo - Harmattan Release: Hamattan Cloud
Rank: B
Type: Sup
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Point: N/A
Description: The user release large amount of Hamattan from his mouth into the surrounding that forms a big cloud while gathering surrounding dust. This can be utilised for masking later hammatan jutsus but does not serve as a blind cover.
++Last for 3 turns

Is weak to:
Fire
Earth: Makes earth even stronger as it dries its moisture content making it more rigid
Metal based elements

Is strong against:
Water: Dries it faster
Lightning
Wood and plant CE variant: weakens its lattices as it becomes dry.

Co-creators (if any):
Magic..

Students i passed on this custom element: Edwardsama & Venom


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I, Caliburn of the Custom Elements Bureau, by the power invested in me by Versuvio, Rei, Nexus and Zise, give you the following:

Priest, our loyal member, gave on the date August 20th 2013 a request for a Patent on his custom element (Harmatten); after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned patent on this element by the following;​

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- Re-did pretty much everything.

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Custom element Japanese name: Arukooru Release
Custom element English name: Alcohol Release
The element is based on:
The beverage, Alcohol | Chakra | Katon | Doton | Suiton
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Sake/Alcohol is often drunk by characters in Naruto such as Jiraiya, Tsunade and on the rare occasion, Rock-Lee. That proves its existence in the series but the spoiler goes into a little more depth of what it actually is.

Ethanol is commercially produced using a process called fermentation. Many other alcohols can be made this way, but are more likely to be produced by synthetic routes - from natural gas, oil or coal. Fermentation is the process in which yeast breaks down sugar into alcohol and carbon dioxide. Yeast are tiny single-celled fungi that contain special enzymes responsible for this reaction. Carbon dioxide gas bubbles out of the fermenting solution into the air leaving a mixture of ethanol and water. It's important that no air is present or the yeast will produce ethanoic acid - the chemical found in vinegar.

How it works:

The user takes minerals from the earth, roots and plants around them. Minerals, roots and plants have natural sugar which is created by roots taking in water from the ground, which is combined with carbon dioxide, solar energy, and chlorophyll to produce the energy needed to grow. In most cases, this energy comes in the form of sucrose and is considered a natural sugar.

Yeast is needed for the fermenting process, it is used to break down the sugar. Wild yeast can also be found in the earth, some plants and most berries, hence natural fermentation.

When the user has gathered the necessary minerals, they will then apply water to the mixture. When the minerals have been applied to the mixture, the user will then use katon chakra to compress the formula to stop air from getting the mixture and then using heat to quicken the fermentation process.

As the user has finished this process he will place the alcohol into small containers and store these containers on person, when in battle the user will drink the alcohol and infuse it with their chakra so they can perform alcohol based techniques.

Usage Examples:

Name: Arukooru: Sōzō | Alcohol Release: Creation
Range: Short
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will create small amounts of alcohol in there hand either to be drunk and infused with there chakra or use to be thrown on the target.

Name: Arukooru: Kafe Hei | Alcohol Release: Alcoholic Wall
Range: Short
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
By using their shape manipulation the user will send there alcohol chakra to there mouth, and they will release a large defensive wall infront of them to block incoming attacks.

Name: Arukooru: Daburu Hitokoma | Alcohol Release: Double Shot
Range:short - Long
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates alcohol, will consume some alcohol and mix it with there chakra. They then swipe their hand in a horizontal angle from left to right, sending 3 small bursts of alcohol towards the opponent. The alcohol moves so fast that it almost becomes like a bullet. It cannot pierce the skin but it can cause large welts and bruises. The smell of the alcohol is enough to cause a slight dizziness, making the opponent feel lazy and unfocused. If the opponent gets the alcohol in their mouth then they'll become intoxicated.

[*]The opponent cannot use any S-Rank jutsu for one turn due to the alcohol effects.

[*]If the opponent consumes any, they cannot use A-Rank or above jutsu for one turn

Conditions to be able to use it:
Have to be in a lush area with grass or small shrubs about.
Have good chakra control.
Must have small - medium sized containers on person to store the alcohol.
Mastery of Suiton, Katon and Doton.

Is weak to:
Suiton (due to the dilution.)
Doton (due to the liquid type properties)

Is neutral to:
Raiton (Lighting would just boil the Alcohol, but not destroying it)
Fuuton (If anything the wind would maybe blow it about)

Is strong against:
Katon or any abbreviation (Alcohol is flammable and fuels the fire just like fuuton)
Ice (High percent alcohol cannot freeze)
Canon dark release (Alcohol is a liquid just like water meaning, dark release cannot absorb it)

Co-creator: Link
Students I passed this custom element on too: Kamishiro & ?

I have Kamishiro permission to re-submit Alcohol Release: .

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✗ Declined: And how long do you think it would take till you finished that entire beer-browing process in battle? If you actually need to have such a bottle with you, then it isn't a real CE anymore. Also neutral elements shouldn't never be mentioned and ice as a strength doesn't even make sense. The ice element doesn't freeze stuff. The coldness is just a side effect as ice is always cold, however ice is used more or less the same as earth.

- Removed the bottle.
- Removed ice.
- Added Fuuton as a strength.
- Added two more example techniques.
- Explained how long the "Beer-brewing process" would take.

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Custom element Japanese name: Arukooru Release
Custom element English name: Alcohol Release
The element is based on:
The beverage, Alcohol | Chakra | Katon | Doton | Suiton
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Sake/Alcohol is often drunk by characters in Naruto such as Jiraiya, Tsunade and on the rare occasion, Rock-Lee. That proves its existence in the series but the spoiler goes into a little more depth of what it actually is.

Ethanol is commercially produced using a process called fermentation. Many other alcohols can be made this way, but are more likely to be produced by synthetic routes - from natural gas, oil or coal. Fermentation is the process in which yeast breaks down sugar into alcohol and carbon dioxide. Yeast are tiny single-celled fungi that contain special enzymes responsible for this reaction. Carbon dioxide gas bubbles out of the fermenting solution into the air leaving a mixture of ethanol and water. It's important that no air is present or the yeast will produce ethanoic acid - the chemical found in vinegar.

How it works:

The user takes minerals from the earth, roots and plants around them. Minerals, roots and plants have natural sugar which is created by roots taking in water from the ground, which is combined with carbon dioxide, solar energy, and chlorophyll to produce the energy needed to grow. In most cases, this energy comes in the form of sucrose and is considered a natural sugar.

Yeast is needed for the fermenting process, it is used to break down the sugar. Wild yeast can also be found in the earth, some plants and most berries, hence natural fermentation.

When the user has gathered the necessary minerals, they will then apply water to the mixture. When the minerals have been applied to the mixture, the user will then use katon chakra to compress the formula to stop air from getting the mixture and then using heat to quicken the fermentation process.
The process of making the alcohol takes one full turn and the technique [to be made] must be used before the use of any alcohol based techniques.

Usage Examples:

Name: Arukooru: Sōzō | Alcohol Release: Creation
Range: Short
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will send his chakra into the ground to quickly pick around the required minerals, as the user has gathered the minerals he will pull them towards himself and gather some water from his mouth and apply it, as well as a little fire to compress the mixture
- This process takes one turn to form the alcohol
- Once formed, lasts seven turns
- This technique must be used before the use of any alcohol based techniques


Name: Arukooru No Jutsu | Alcohol Release Technique
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will create small amounts of alcohol in there hand either to be drunk and infused with there chakra or use to be thrown on the target.

Name: Taibu Arukooru No Jutsu | Greater Alcohol Release Technique
Range: Mid - Long
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a stronger version of Alcohol Release Technique, this allows the user to create large amounts of alcohol in there hand either to be drunk and infused with there chakra or use to be thrown on the target. This technique can also be used to create large puddles of alcohol to be used with bigger attacks.


Name: Arukooru: Kafe Hei | Alcohol Release: Alcoholic Wall
Range: Short
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
By using their shape manipulation the user will send there alcohol chakra to there mouth, and they will release a large defensive wall infront of them to block incoming attacks.

Name: Arukooru: Daburu Hitokoma | Alcohol Release: Double Shot
Range:short - Long
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates alcohol, will consume some alcohol and mix it with there chakra. They then swipe their hand in a horizontal angle from left to right, sending 3 small bursts of alcohol towards the opponent. The alcohol moves so fast that it almost becomes like a bullet. It cannot pierce the skin but it can cause large welts and bruises. The smell of the alcohol is enough to cause a slight dizziness, making the opponent feel lazy and unfocused. If the opponent gets the alcohol in their mouth then they'll become intoxicated.

[*]The opponent cannot use any S-Rank jutsu for one turn due to the alcohol effects.

[*]If the opponent consumes any, they cannot use A-Rank or above jutsu for one turn

Conditions to be able to use it:
Have to be in a lush area with grass or small shrubs about.
Have good chakra control.
Mastery of Suiton, Katon and Doton.

Is weak to:
Suiton (due to the dilution.)
Doton/Ice (due to the liquid type properties)
Metal based [Steel, Iron etc] (Same as Doton)

Is strong against:
Katon or any abbreviation (Alcohol is flammable and fuels the fire just like fuuton)
Fuuton or any abbreviation (Since alcohol is liquid based, wind is matter thus making alcohol able to overpower wind )
Canon dark release (Alcohol is a liquid just like water meaning, dark release cannot absorb it)


Co-creator: Link
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

I have Kamishiro permission to re-submit Alcohol Release: .

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✗ Declined: All the stuff about needing one turn to prepare I personally don't really favour, you are so dependent on your environment, that it's already very hard to consider this a real CE. Many elements use their environment because it's easier, however they can still be used without it. Secondly you actually never explained the properties and qualities of alcohol, you only explained how it is made, which is necessary to determine its strengths and weaknesses. Especially because I noticed there's already an element called Methanol, which is also an alcohol. If you don't show there are clear differences between the two, then I can never approve this. Also water is also 'matter', still it's neutral to wind and I don't see a particular difference between alcohol and water on that part. Also that it's flammable doesn't make it necessarily a strength. Tell me does alcohol increase in substance when on fire? Is it the alcohol that is fueled? No, it's the fire that's consuming the alcohol, just like how it consumes wind.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Etanoruton

Custom element English name: Ethanol Release

The element is based on: Water + Lightning + Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Ethanol despite being a highly dangerous element that can be exploited for battle is actually quite abundant in both the real world and narutoverse. Ethanol is commonly found in alcohol being the key element that causes intoxication. Ethanol is also found in many vegetables, Naruto being based off of Japanese culture, most of their diet consist of vegetables. Corn being a main vegetable where ethanol is extremely abundant. Corn produces ethanol through the common process of fermentation. Corn absorbs sunlight and 'sweats' out enzymes. These enzymes gather bacteria. (Yeast and other stuff like that) The bacteria deprives the enzymes of oxygen causing said enzymes to become distilled. When the enzymes and the bacteria separate, the enzymes turn into a liquid state. This liquid state is ethanol. Now that I have proved that ethanol exists in narutoverse, I must prove that it can be used as stated below.

In Naruto it is shown that almost anything is possible through the mixture of chakra and other things. In Naruto, chakra has been shown to have been used to create new nature transformations that otherwise wouldn't be possible through mixing elements that normally wouldn't blend. Common examples include fire and wind to create scorch release. Water and lightning to create storm release. Ethanol works in a similar way by mixing lightning and water natures you obtain a highly volatile liquid. Firstly for anything to be volatile means to have the potential to vaporize. In the manga it is proven that vaporization is possible. (Dust Release Primitive World Destruction) Ethanol isn't on the caliber of said vaporization it's slightly different. Ethanol molecules act as a magnet. When coming in contact with solids, it slowly wares down its core on a molecular level by attracting the solids' molecules away from each other. Solid molecules are normally compact and close together. When separated, the solid turns into a gas, which can be considered as vaporization.

Now that ethanol's basic abilities are proven to be capable, I must prove that its core is possible. Its core being that the two nature type that when combined make ethanol. As stated earlier, in narutoverse it has been shown that polar opposites can come together to make new elements. Ethanol is made off of the same basis of storm release just using a different side of each basic element. Assuming that the lighting chakra used in storm release is negative as it still shows the lightning wrapping around the water not being fully conducted in most attacks. As well as using low viscosity water as opposed to high viscosity water making ethanol a lot less thick allowing it to move faster than water. Due to its low viscosity, ethanol conducts the positive lightning chakra easily allowing it to pass through its body causing its atoms to become magnetically charged. Ethanol's last and most prominent ability being the ability to rebuild and gain strength from natural sunlight. Due to ethanol's roots being no more than a vegetable it's quite common that it be able to harvest energy from the sun.

How it works:

Ethanol is a volatile an highly flammable colorless liquid. Ethanol is extremely refractive, similar to water, except going a little further. Water bending light gaining the color of the sky which makes water blue. Ethanol being more refractive than water takes on the color of the gases in the atmosphere. Most gases in the atmosphere being colorless, Ethanol is near translucent. Allowing its outline to appear a deep blue while its body appears translucent. But to contrast against this 'invisibility', Ethanol has a terrible stench. This stench is where alcohol gets its stench. Ethanol is able to be smelled by those with the worse sense of smell, but it is bearable to those who are used to the stench of alcohol.

Ethanol molecules carry the potential to vaporize anything when it catches fire. Meaning the burning of ethanol is not recommended. Ethanol itself is composed of low viscosity water and lightning. The water due to its low viscosity not only conducts the lightning, but allows the lightning to flow freely through the water creating ethanol. Ethanol being the electrically charged molecules. The lightning gives ethanol it's vaporizing potential. As stated before Ethanol's vaporizing abilities isn't actually vaporization but more of a powerful magnet. Detracting any solid's molecules from its core causing it to dissipate into a gas. Ethanol's 'vaporization' is very slow despite Ethanol itself moving quite fast.

Causing it to decompose as a reaction of having no core, ethanol when in contact with human skin leaves harsh burns and stiffens the joints causing the body to slow down. But how would Ethanol be produced from the user? Ethanol is easily produced and countered by releasing the opposite electric charge through out your body or whatever source you plan to release ethanol. For example: The user would distill negative lightning chakra throughout the lining of his mouth and release water from his mouth. Ethanol having a positive charge while the lightning chakra in your mouth being negative, opposites attract causing the negative charge to mix with the positive charge balancing out ethanol making it jut hot water. But lightning doesn't completely null ethanol, ethanol being able to harvest and store sunlight can build its own positive charge up through sunlight/intense heat.

The UV rays from sunlight strengthen ethanol's volatile composition, making ethanol once again. Due to it's volatile nature and need for sunlight/UV rays, ethanol is not meant to travel through the ground as it would slowly ware down the grounds structure until it is hollow and dangerous to stand on. In short, ethanol works by charging lightning chakra through your body then releasing water chakra from your mouth hands or even feet. Once ethanol has exited your body, it reacts naturally to sunlight and/or its surrounding making it volatile again.

Usage Examples:

(Etanoruton: Etanoruton Engi)- Ethanol Release: Ethanol Expansion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C Rank
Range: Mid Range
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user after creating a clone will release the user's ethanol chakra into a large body of water or create a large source of ethanol. As the user does this, the clone would release a thin gas of fire onto the ethanol or water source. Once the two chakra natures have mixed, the user and clone would both click there teeth causing the ethanol to rapidly grow.

(Etanoruton: Amatsu Yuuchi)- Ethanol Release: Heavenly Attraction
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: B Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes a deep breath then releases a stream of ethanol at any solid object. Using ethanol's natural properties and chakra control, the user will slowly 'tear' apart said solid until it completely dissipates or is 'vaporized'.

(Etanoruton: Bōgyo Nohara Ayatsuri) - Ethanol Release: Defense Field Manipulation
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 (+5 for each turn active)
Damage: 60
Description:The user erects a defensive barriers made out of condensed ethanol around oneself for protection. By creating a second layer around the first barrier, the user can extend portions of the field into long, tendril-like arms which they can then control finely enough to attack in the same manner as a full-barrier strike. The user is capable of controlling the barrier extensions well enough to perform melee-like combos. The user is also capable of controlling the density in different parts of the barrier allowing for possible flames or explosions when in contact with great heat or fire, weather they get in contact with it from the inside or the outside of the barrier the explosion will occure outwardly from the barrier. The tendrils can reach up to ten meters away and can behave in manners similar to both whips and blunt objects which would cause minor 'vaporizations' to solids it gets in contact with. This jutsu will recover the damage taken the following turn if it does not get completly destroyed.
Note: Lasts for up to 3 turn

Conditions to be able to use it:

In order to use Ethanol to it's full capabilities, users of Ethanol most have extreme chakra control. (Sage Rank) As well as mastery of water and lightning. With your intense chakra control and mastery of these two nature types, the user most be able to distinguish positive and negative lightning chakra as well as the viscosity of water.

Is weak to:

Ethanol is weak to lightning and wind chakra natures. Negative lightning chakra being able to balance out ethanol for a moment before it's natural process of sunlight absorption kicks in. Wind being ale to disperse the lightning chakra within ethanol. Wind variants are extremely effective.

Is strong against:

Ethanol is strong against all solids. (Solids include earth, wood, ice, and custom variants) It's compact structure being dissipated due to ethanol's magnetic capabilities. Ethanol along with it's strength against solids is strong against water as well. Ethanol when mixed with water simply expands causing ethanol molecules become more volatile causing solid around this new body of water/ethanol to become hollow or weaker. (More in depth in usage examples)

Is neutral against:

Ethanol is neutral to fire, due to it's natural abilities to harvest sunlight/heat. Fire simply cause ethanol's strength to increase. (More in depth in usage examples)

Co-creator: ??

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ? N/A

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✗ Declined: Nathan. is already submitting alcohol and ethanol is an alcohol, he even specifically mentioned ethanol.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Ekitaifuton

Custom element English name: Liquid Wind Release

The element is based on: Wind + Water + Extreme Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

First off, we have seen the ability of wind and water to be combined through the Typhoon Water Vortex Technique. However unpolished, the technique displays the ability for water and wind to harmonize into a single attack. There are also numerous more examples where wind is used to enhance the power of water. Water will serve as the “carrier or container” for this release, while the wind gives the water more power and substance, making it much more deadly than the normal element.

We have also seen microscopic cutting abilities of wind demonstrated through the use of Wind Style: Rasengan, and Wind Style: Rasenshuriken. While the latter produces massive microscopic cutting abilities, the first does the same, but on a smaller scale. However, the damage is no less severe, as shown when Kakashi’s hand was burned and injured. Then, the ability of water to “harden” or increase in density is shown in the Water Style: Water Prison Technique. When Kakashi was trapped within the sphere, he was not able to move due to the density. This shows water can take on a more solid form, but still be normal water.

How it works:

The user will utilize basic water, and then increase the density of the water far more than normal. Only the density differs, affecting the water’s viscosity. This makes it behave more similar to syrup than normal water. The wind element is then added utilizing the microscopic cutting abilities of wind. This produces a somewhat solid, yet still fluid water element that will cause a burning or singing affect upon impact. For example, a body part submerged within liquid wind will have its chakra networks shredded on a microscopic level, disallowing them from channeling chakra through that part. Differing from normal water release which mainly does impact damage, this element can stop the flow of chakra by shredding the internal chakra system. The effect was shown by Rasenshuriken, and this release utilizes the same procedure to achieve the effect.

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Similar to Rasenshuriken, the wind enhancement of the release doesn’t actually take effect until the water has been successfully released. Naruto is able to hold it in his hand without damage, until he releases the technique fully against Kakuzu. This allows a user of this release to safely emit the water from his mouth, or hands. However, once released, the water will retain its properties and cannot be reversed unless evaporated or dispersed completely. The user is also able to raise water from the ground, or to summon it directly onto any location. Basically, the complete versatility of the normal water release techniques applies to this release as well.

Even with the great power of the cutting wind, the water is able to maintain its shape. The microscopic wind blades within do not cause enough actual movement within the “hardened” water to cause it to disperse or lose its form. Instead, the hardened water gives it more durability against physical elements that are up against it. The large amount of wind chakra present within this release also colors the water a vibrant, luminescent silver.

Usage Examples:

(Ekitaifūton: Maddo Gekai no Mesu)– Liquid Wind Release: The Mad Surgeon's Scalpels
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus his chakra into the sky, quickly forming rain clouds. These rain clouds release a constant shower of liquid wind, which fall to the ground at deadly speeds. Liquid wind will fall at a maximum, mid-range distance from the center of the original target. The raindrops cause singing damage upon impact while they shred the chakra network. This will also form a thin layer of liquid wind on the ground. This will soak through the clothing of an enemy ninja, and begin to severely damage his feet. This makes normal travel on the ground nearly impossible unless aided by outside means.
Note: Usable three times per battle
Note: Rain lasts 3 turns

(Ekitaifūton: Sakuran Nāsu no Hi Teijō Sekkai)– Liquid Wind Release: The Deranged Nurse's Unsteady Incisions
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus his chakra into the ground, and then erupt liquid wind from it. The liquid wind takes the form of a rising, slicing jet that extends up into the air at a maximum of three meters. The main jet rises directly upwards into the air, while secondary jets raise themselves at forty-five degree angles branching off the main jets sides’. While direct contact with one of the jets can lead to serious injury, even the spray from the numerous jets can cause major damage.
Note: Usable four times per battle

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind + Water

Is weak to:

Wind- Can cut through and disperse the hardened water
Fire- The present wind within the water allows fire to overcome the release

Is strong against:

Lightning/CE- The present wind within the water absorbs any lightning, and conducts it into the water, making it stronger
Earth- The water due to his increased hardness, can withstand impact of earth; The microscopic cutting abilities also allow it to break down earth particles and shred through it
Water- The water due to its increased hardness, can push through water; the added wind only serves to increase the effect

Co-creator: ?

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: Doesn't make sense. That microscopic cutting ability you are talking about is not inherent to wind, it's something specifically unique to the Rasenshuriken as a result of the combo of the Rasengan, the highest form of shape manipulation, and wind chakra. Only under those conditions you have access to that ability, which does not apply to your CE and thus you do not have it. On top of that whatever is left of the normal cutting ability of wind is severely reduced by the water due to the resistance. Wind that spins together with water will go a lot slower than without water as it has less resistance. Yes wind and water provides a strong combo, however that doesn't mean it maintains all its original abilities.

Custom element Japanese name: Ekitaifuton

Custom element English name: Liquid Wind Release

The element is based on: Wind + Water + Extreme Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

First off, we have seen the ability of wind and water to be combined through the Typhoon Water Vortex Technique. However unpolished, the technique displays the ability for water and wind to harmonize into a single attack. There are also numerous more examples where wind is used to enhance the power of water. Water will serve as the “carrier or container” for this release, while the wind gives the water more power and substance, making it much more deadly than the normal element. The ability of water to “harden” or increase in density is shown in the Water Style: Water Prison Technique. When Kakashi was trapped within the sphere, he was not able to move due to the density. This shows water can take on a more solid form, but still behave and flow like normal water.

How it works:

The user will utilize basic water, and then increase the density of the water far more than normal. Only the density differs, affecting the water’s viscosity. This makes it behave more similar to syrup than normal water. The wind element is then utilized, manifesting the chakra on the outermost membrane of the water. This makes the water super-sharp, capable of deadly cutting and slicing damage. The increased density of the water allows for the surface tension to remain intact when inter-acting with the wind chakra. This produces a semi-solid, yet still fluid water element. This element is so sharp that it is capable of punching holes through most solid-based elements.

The user is able to raise liquid wind from the ground, release it from their mouths/body/hands, or summon it directly onto any location. Basically, the complete versatility of the normal water release techniques applies to this release as well. However, the hardened water gives it more durability against physical elements that clash against it. The large amount of wind chakra present within this release also colors the water a vibrant, luminescent silver.

Usage Examples:

(Ekitaifūton: Maddo Gekai no Mesu)– Liquid Wind Release: The Mad Surgeon's Scalpels
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus his chakra into the sky, quickly forming rain clouds. These rain clouds release a constant shower of liquid wind, which fall to the ground at deadly speeds. Liquid wind will fall at a maximum, mid-range distance from the center of the original target. The raindrops cause slicing damage as they bore through the skin while falling. This will also form a thin layer of liquid wind on the ground. This will soak through the clothing of an enemy ninja, and begin to severely damage his feet. This makes normal travel on the ground nearly impossible unless aided by outside means.
Note: Usable three times per battle
Note: Rain lasts 3 turns

(Ekitaifūton: Sakuran Nāsu no Hi Teijō Sekkai)– Liquid Wind Release: The Deranged Nurse's Unsteady Incisions
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus his chakra into the ground, and then erupt liquid wind from it. The liquid wind takes the form of a rising, slicing jet that extends up into the air at a maximum of three meters. The main jet rises directly upwards into the air, while secondary jets raise themselves at forty-five degree angles branching off the main jets sides’. While direct contact with one of the jets can lead to serious injury, even the spray from the numerous jets can cause major damage.
Note: Usable four times per battle

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Wind + Water

Is weak to:

Wind- Can cut through and disperse the hardened water
Fire- The present wind within the water allows fire to overcome the release

Is strong against:

Lightning/CE- The present wind within the water absorbs any lightning, and conducts it into the water, making it stronger
Earth/Metal CE's- The severe sharpness of this element allows it to simply punch through solid elements with ease.
Water- The water due to its increased hardness, can push through water; the added wind allows this element to disperse the water even more so

Co-creator: (Looking for a co-creator to help me refine the element)

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?
 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Shiranto
Custom element English name: Sealant Release
The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): With the facts of Earth style users converting their Earth chakra into mud state which is using Earth and Water user. Now if they were to add more earth chakra they would come up with Sealant. Considering that the Lava users of Iwa uses Quicklime which when added with water chakra they make something like concrete. Taking these two facts and my usage of Water style and wanting something with more strength I came up with the idea of Sealant Release.



How it works: The user uses Earth and Water chakra and using chakra control mixing them together making Sealant. Earth chakra and Water chakra balance out which is how Sealant is made. Sealant is controlled in its semi liquid state which is its only state. By using Sealant chakra the user can make semi liquid weapons, terrain and even a type of armor that are like a solid but still is a liquid hints the name semi liquid.

Usage Examples:

Sealant Release: Don't Go (Shiranto: )
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points:
Description: The user expels sealant from part of their body. The sealant acts as a defense type of semiliquid against taijutsu and weaponry.

Sealant Release: Hold On (Shiranto: )
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points:
Description: The user forms enough sealant on the ground to hold someone or something in place. This can be formed under the opponent's feet or under some idea.

Conditions to be able to use it: Must have learned Earth and Water
Is weak to: Earth(holds it in place), Lightning(pierce through), Wind(cuts up Sealant), Advance Fire(melt/burn it), Metal/Bones(pierce through)
Is strong against: Water(stops the water and the water can't pierce through), Sound(absorbs the sound), Rain(same as water), Wind(absorbs the pushing effect of wind), Oil(much thicker then oil), Earth(holds it in place), Fire(heat-resistant), Metal/Bone(hold in place)
Co-creator: Mugen Ryukyu
Students I passed this custom element on too:

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✗ Declined: Very badly explained. Apparently it's supposed to be some mud-like element, but that's all I got. You didn't even explain what sealant is nor its unique properties. Just posting a wiki link is logically not going to cut it. Also strengths and weaknesses make no sense. Apparently earth is both weak and strong for the exact same reason, wind is strong against it because it cuts and then it's weak because it is absorbed? And it goes on like that. Does that even make any sense to you? I suggest you first understand and learn how to submit a CE before trying to resubmit it.

Custom element Japanese name: Shiranto
Custom element English name: Sealant Release
The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): With the facts of Earth style users converting their Earth chakra into mud state which is using Earth and Water user. Now if they were to add more earth chakra they would come up with Sealant. Considering that the Lava users of Iwa uses Quicklime which when added with water chakra they make something like concrete. Taking these two facts and my usage of Water style and wanting something with more strength I came up with the idea of Sealant Release.

How it works: Sealant is an element is a semi liquid which means it is kind of like a liquid and a solid but really isn't one either. Sealant is an element that is flexable and is elastic kind of like rubber but not all that much stretchy. Sealant is an element that its main and only focus is holding something in place, unlike mud which is kind of like its counterpart that lets things slide away.

The user uses Earth and Water chakra and using chakra control mixing them together making Sealant. Earth chakra and Water chakra balance out which is how Sealant is made. Sealant is controlled in its semi liquid state which is its only state. By using Sealant chakra the user can make semi liquid weapons, terrain and even a type of armor that are like a solid but still is a liquid hints the name semi liquid.

Usage Examples:
Sealant Release: Don't Go (Shiranto: )
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points:
Description: The user expels sealant from part of their body. The sealant acts as a defense type of semiliquid against taijutsu and weaponry.

Sealant Release: Hold On (Shiranto: )
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points:
Description: The user forms enough sealant on the ground to hold someone or something in place. This can be formed under the opponent's feet or under some idea.

Conditions to be able to use it: Earth and Water

Is weak to:

Earth/Metal/Bone/Solids: Sealant can't always hold earth/metal/bone if it has piercing properties
Lightning: To put it simple, Sealant is mainly earth and earth is weak to lightning
Advance Fire(Lava, Sun Fire, Scorch, etc): Advance fire unlike normal fire can melt Sealant because it
Wind: Sealant is weak to Wind that has cutting properties


Is strong against:

Water/Oil/Liquids: Sealant holds liquids and oil in place making them not go on
Sound: Sealant blocks the sound waves/frequencies from getting through
Fire: Sealant is resistant to fire so fire doesn't melt it
Wind: Sealant is strong against wind that has pushing or pulling properties
Earth/Metal/Bone/Solids: Sealant can hold these ideas in place as long as they have no piercing effects thanks to Sealant special property of holding things in place


Co-creator: Mugen Ryukyu
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Exact same comments as last time. "It's a semi liquid, it's like a liquid and a solid, but it's neither. It's rubber, but it's not that stretchy. Semi liquid is it's only state. Armor is like a solid, but still a liquid." That doesn't even make any sense anymore =/. Piercing properties? Wind, earth, lightning, fire and water all can be used to 'pierce', that's not a criteria you use to define STR and WKN. Finally sealant is a term, there is no material that conforms with it, just like 'metal'. You need to be clear which kind of sealant you want. Seriously if it's the next time like this, it will be declined do not resubmit as this is a waste of my time. It's clear you don't know exactly how you need to make a CE, so don't do it before you more or less can.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Keburaririsu
Custom element English name: Kevlar Release
The element is based on: Earth+Fire+ Water+ Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Kevlar is synthesized in solution from the monomers 1,4-phenylene-diamine (para-phenylenediamine) and terephthaloyl chloride in a condensation reaction yielding hydrochloric acid as a byproduct. The result has liquid-crystalline behavior, and mechanical drawing orients the polymer chains in the fiber's direction. Hexamethylphosphoramide (HMPA) was the solvent initially used for the polymerization, but for safety reasons, the company that created it replaced it by a solution of N-methyl-pyrrolidone and calcium chloride, now it is well known that alcohol exists in the narutoverse, which means likely high content versions of such exist for the process of cleaning and surgical operations and so on, which makes it a likely element to be created, simply because the correct chlorines and acids are highly likely to exist in the narutoverse, not to mention the other materials, such as fibers and fabrics seem readily available in clothing so the process of the creating of kevlar exists in the narutoverse.
Final proof of the potential existance of Kevlar comes from the village's flak jackets, named as such and used widely because they encompass defensive properties, in a similar way to how a stab vest would be used in real life, which are usually made from kevlar fibers.


How it works: Kevlar chakra is produced by combining the fire, earth, and water chakra natures.*
The varieties of Kevlar on display are the AP, KM2, and K119 versions, they are otherwise known as Main Release, in the main release of Kevlar release, structures of Kevlar are created, the structured can be thick or thin, short or long, dense or not. In the main release the user can choose to produce Kevlar from the ground, or they can produce it from the body, or even they can choose to materialize it on the field as they will.
The other varieties on display are K100 and the K49, they are otherwise know as Sub-Release, the K100 only affects the color of Kevlar release, so when of is 'infused' it allows the user to change the color of Kevlar as he wishes, this helps the user in various ways, mainly in deceiving the opponent to think that the user has used something different than Kevlar which normally has a Grey color to it. K49 gives Kevlar it's flexibility allowing ropes of Kevlar to be produced for example. Also in the sub release Kevlar is used on the user, it can have various uses that differ based on the technique, but a example can be to infuse Kevlar chakra into one's cell giving them a defensive capability.


Further information on Kevlar
Usage Examples:
Kevlar Release: Kevlar Wall
Rank: A rank
Type: Defensive and slightly offensive.
Range: Short-Mid range.
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A(60 when spikes are used)
Description: The user will perform two hand seals, and slam his hands on the ground and create a wall made up of Kevlar that emerges in a fast pace from the ground(First Gate speed) the wall will emerge and provide protection for the user, it can reach 15 meters in Height and 15 meters in width. The user choose to create spikes from any side of the wall, the spikes can pierce through flesh and bones with ease. The spikes can reach short range in length but they will still be in contact with the wall.
-Usable four times.

Kevlar Release: Short Range Master You say
Rank: B rank
Type: Offensive/Supplementary.
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is mostly used on short range specialists, the user will release Kevlar from his body in the form of threads that can hold on to on opponents limb and crush it by ferociously 'closing in' on the limb from all directions.

Kevlar Release technique
Rank: C*
Type: All
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user creates structures made up of Kevlar.

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over Earth—Fire—Water + Good Chakra Control(Ninjutsu Mastery)
Is weak to: Wind & Lightning as it has 'cutting' properties and Kevlar as all fibers it conducts electricity.*

Is strong against: Fire, Water, Sound, and double strong against ice. Kevlar proved to be more efficient in low temperatures, hence the double ice weakness, it is also known that it has a high fire resistance since at 160 °C (320 °F) about 10% reduction in strength occurs after 500 hours, and fire techniques won't last that long. As for water it is due to Kevlar being somewhat similar to earth, as it 'sucks' the water. It is also strong against sound despite being weak to Lightning and Wind, this is due to Sound being absorbed by the Kevlar thus muffling the sound damage.

Is Neutral with: Earth since earth has many forms, so it is difficult to determine if it is a strength or weakness, for example some earth techniques have cutting abilities, but some don't, so all in all it is neutral to it.
Other:
Co-creator: N/A
Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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✗ Declined: Let me rephrase this: horribly badly explained. You just gave a highly scientifical explanation, probably copy pasted from wikipedia, which you presumably don't even understand yourself very well and jumbled it all together into something incoherent and mangawise non-sensical. The only thing in all of this that is slightly worth something is the reference to the jackets, but everything else can be discarded. I suggest you read the CE post in the Hitchhiker's Guide so that you understand how to submit a CE as this is now your 2nd submission and it's not even being close to being accepted as a real CE submission. If I get next time something like this, it will be a DNR.

Changed everything not bolding for aesthetic purposes >_>
Custom element Japanese name: Keburaririsu
Custom element English name: Kevlar Release
The element is based on: Water + Earth + Fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
  • -Potential existance of Kevlar stems from the village's flak jackets, named as such and used widely because they encompass defensive properties, in a similar way to how a stab vest would be used in real life, which are usually made from kevlar fibers.
  • -As shown when Tazuna was transported to Land of Waves, boats were used in order to cross beneath the future "Great Naruto Bridge", the shape of the boats resembles greatly boats composed of Kevlar in RL, so it is a possibility that the NV boats themselves are composed of Kevlar.
  • -Mooring lines have been established to be used in harbors, it is very likely that the lines are composed of Kevlar, this is due to the high performance, high resistance, and 'grade A' quality of kevlar. Hence the preferability and possibility of the usage of Kevlar mooring lines is highly likely.
  • -In Kyudo or Japanese archery, it was used as an alternative to more expensive hemp for bow strings. It is one of the main materials used for paraglider suspension lines. In NV bows have been established to exist, although the most prominent and infamous was composed of Sticky Gold(Kidōmaru), it does not mean that, normal non chakra based ones don't exist. It is likely that Kevlar were used as strings for bows due to their high performance and presumably low cost.
  • -Kevlar can be found as a reinforcing layer in rubber bellows expansion joints and rubber hoses, for use in high temperature applications, and for its high strength. It is also found as a braid layer used on the outside of hose assemblies, to add protection against sharp objects. Those materials exist in the NV, and it has been shown on multiple occasions that NV works in parallel to RL, so it is not far fetched that kevlar exists.
  • -The village of Amegakure is surrounded by many power lines, said lines are most likely used in power/electricity purposes. In RL experiments showed that after weaving Kevlar in a specific manner, it can be used for electricity purposes. It's effectiveness was extremely great, so a industrialized village like Amegakure with power lines is a proof of the potential existence of kevlar.
  • -To add to the previously mentioned points, the materials which are used in order to produce kevlar in RL do exist in the NV, furthermore the existence of other fibers has been established through cloth, so Kevlar as a fibre does have great potential of existing as well.
How it works: Through the combination of the Water, Earth, and Fire elements, the Kevlar element is created. The Kevlar element acts in a manner similar to both wood release and kakuzu's threads. The similarity derives from kevlars characteristics of being infested mostly in the form of threads, of course it's versatility is also a factor. Kevlar can be created from ones own body, from the ground, from the air(such as some earth techniques), and the used can even manipulate pre-existing sources of Kevlar. Said sources may be from a previously used technique, or from any substance that contains Kevlar. Naturally the use can control the strength, size, and density of the produced Kevlar. Furthermore;

Kevlar maintains its strength and resilience down to cryogenic temperatures (−196 °C); in fact, it is slightly stronger at low temperatures. At higher temperatures the tensile strength is immediately reduced by about 10–20%, and after some hours the strength progressively reduces further. For example at 160 °C (320 °F) about 10% reduction in strength occurs after 500 hours. At 260 °C (500 °F) 50% strength reduction occurs after 70 hours.
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Usage Examples:
#1: The user when in short range would punch the opponent, as his opponent is sent backwards, the user would manifest threads of Kevlar from his arms, the threads would 'grab' the opponent by the back, and yank the oppoenent towards a spike of Kevlar that forms around the users hands.

#2: The user would use Kevlar release in order to 'harden' parts of his body, this is done in a manner similar to earth release armor technique, but only on selective parts. Said encased parts would be protected from further attacks.(elemental W&S apply)

#3: The user would cause threads of Kevlar to emerge from the ground beneath the opponent, the threads would grab onto the limbs of the opponent, rise further into the air, then slam the opponent into the ground while skewering him through small spikes present on the threads.


Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over water, earth, and fire elements in addition to ninjutsu mastery.

Is Weak To: Wind Release and Lightning Release. Storm Release, Dust Release, Swift Release, Puppetry, Kaguya, Gentle Fist, Sand Release, Crystal Release, Lava Release, Scorch Release.
Is Strong Against: Fire Release and Water Release. Steal Release, Ice Release, Ink Ninjutsu, Boil Release, Paper Ninjutsu, Dark Release, Bubble Release, Steel Release, Blast Release, Rain Release.
Is Neutral To: Earth Release, and Wood Release.
Other:
Co-Creator: None
Students I passed this custom element on too: ?? & ??

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✗ Declined: Do not resubmit. Almost all of those examples you listed are barely worth anything as kevlar is a very recent invention, still all those things already existed one way or another, it just happens so that kevlar was more suited for it after its discovery, however that doesn't take away that there are other things that can do exactly the same. Then you are supposed to give example jutsus, but then you just describe Kakuzu's ninjutsu (which probably would have been a for more suitable proof then all of yours combined). You didn't explain its properties either, you just quoted something from wikipedia and posted a link, that's not how you do it. Finally you are just making a mess of your STR and WKN. Ink ninjutsu? Paper ninjutsu? Gentle fist? What are these doing there? Those are not elements and for most of the others I can't even find the logic as why they got listed. Neutral elements is not even part of the template, so that shouldn't be there either.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau


I bolded and italicized the changes I made. I also removed the powder form and made it a single form element.



Custom element Japanese name: Kapusaichinton

Custom element English name: Capsaicin Release

The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra Control

Capsaicin is a chemical found, mainly, in chilli peppers, and chilli peppers are the fruit of certain plants. It is an irritant for mammals, including humans, and produces a sensation of burning in any tissue with which it comes into contact. Capsaicin is a deterrent against certain herbivores and fungi. Pure Capsaicin is a hydrophobic, colorless, odorless, crystalline to waxy compound. In order for plants to grow from the earth, they need water, air, and of course, sunlight. This allows the plant to grow and bear the fruit, which in turn, contains this very component, Capsaicin.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Think of the Land of Rice fields. Taking into account that they are human just like us and that they know how to maintain plantations and grow different species of vegetables, we can safely assume that they also know how to grow chili peppers. Since every human likes their food with different levels of spiciness, I believe that there are also ninja who like their meals spicy and hot. Now, Capsaicin is what gives the spicy and hot feeling to each different sort of chili peppers, which in the end is the idea behind the creation of this element. Also, many jutsu types also derive off the factor of living things from the earth. Simply think of Yamato's Wood Release and the other types of jutsu that require mother nature's work and happenings. Wildlife and plants work the same way they do in the Naruto World as in the real world as well.

How it works:

While the process used to create Capscaisin, in peppers, is simple synthesis, it's creation method by ninja is not much different. Using his mastery over the manipulation of the earth and water elemental natures, he can combine (synthesize) them together in order to gain access to a new elemental nature, Capscaisin. In order to achieve all the properties Capscaisin has when created by plants, the unavoidable requirement is very precise chakra control, which is obtained by hard training and focus. The earth and water elemental natures are used in order to create the sticky and waxy substance, but only if the exact ratio is achieved, being 29:71. The earth component of capscaisin is sufficient for all the required mineral substances needed to create the properties of the waxy compound, whereas water gives it the adhesive properties. As the user gets accustomed and used to the new elemental nature flowing through his chakra circulatory system, he can use shape manipulation in order to produce different objects and achieve different effects with Capscaisin. Upon combining the earth and water elemental chakras, which are represented by brown and blue, the new elemental chakra used to create Capscaisin is grey-ish to white, complementing its colorless appearance when in the waxy form.

Capsaicin, in general, is an akaline oil, and has an extremely unique molecular shape. All mammals, and especially humans, have nerve cells that detect heat or pain, and when Capsaicin comes in contact with the skin, they tend to attach to these very receptors and then release a lot of calcuim ions to flow in. As a result, humans feel a burning or stinging pain, and severe over-exposure of Capsaicin can also lead to death. Capsaicin also prevents nerve cells from communicating with each other by blocking the production of certain neurotransmitters, and at high concentrations, it even destroys the cells itself. Furthermore, such heat is measured by units named Scoville Heat Units (SHU). Tapasco itself can go up to 8,000 SHU only. However, pure Capsaicin itself goes up to 16,000,000 SHU, and that alone is quite, quite hot.

The elemental properties of Capsaicin are what make it so unique and dangerous, but on the other side, non-harmful and pleasant. Capsaicin is, as already said, an irritant for mammals, a pest deterrent and an anti-funghi agent. It creates a burning and painful sensation when in contact with mucous membranes of our cells. Through precise chakra control the level of its heat (SHU) can be controlled and reduced, same as increased, depending on the use. High SHU Capsaicin would mostly be used to attack the opponent and cause neurological pain and to cripple the opponent. It would also be used on mammal summons, in order to disperse them and on funghi and plant based elements in order to deteriorate them and render them useless. Low SHU Capsaicin however, would be used as a stimulant to the user and as a temporary pain reliever. There is only one state in which Capscaisin can be used, however, there are multiple ways to use it, all depending on the SHU level.

Main Release:
Mainly focusing on its straightforward waxy properties, different objects such as waves, weapons, cubes, spheres, etc. would be used in order to attack the opponent, transfer and stick the compound onto his body. Once there, its effects would kick in, reacting with his neurotransmitters and overwhelming his body. This release would mostly focus on the high SHU leveled Capscaisin, but it's not exclusive.

Advanced Release:
The advanced release is where the precise chakra control comes in as the main requirement. Through this release the user can control the levels of SHU the Capsaicin has and therefore concentrates on the low leveled SHU Capsaicin and its use. Since Capsaicin has a very wide medical use, it's also applicable in the NarutoVerse. With the use of this release, the user could use it as a temporary stimulant and pain reliever for himself, focusing Capsaicin chakra into his own cells. The highly controlled, low SHU Capsaicin would have the same effect as the high SHU variant, except with a much lesser magnitude. It would completely wipe out the possibility of death due to over exposure. Also, the way it acts as a stimulant is simple. When it gets into contact with the user's neurons and causes the burning sensation, it also builds up blood pressure, which results in the explosion of power and joyful feelings inside the user's brain. On the other hand, its pain relieving ability is caused on the same principle, resulting in the nerves being overwhelmed by the influx of Capsaicin and being unable to report pain for an extended period of time.​

Usage Examples:

Kapusaichinton: Karai Nami | Capsaicin Release: Spicy Wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short to Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user sends his capsaicin chakra into the earth of the battlefield and manipulates it so that it turns into a field of pure capsaicin that seeps into the ground.

Kapusaichinton: Danzai! | Capsaicin Release: Conviction!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: -
Description: The user releases their Vapsaicin chakra into their own cells, and as it touches the neurons of it, it triggers the stimulants to release feelings of excitement, motivating the user momentarily.​

Conditions to be able to use it:

  • Mastered Earth
  • Mastered Water
  • Great and precise chakra control
Is weak to:

  • Wind and variations - Because Vapsaicin has such a delicate structure, Wind jutsu can easily cut through it.
  • Lightning and variations - Much like the concept of earth being weak to lightning, a huge part of Capsaicin itself is also formed of earth, and lightning, being such a wild element, can also tear it apart.
  • Since Capscaisin is a waxy compound, not having immense solidity, it's weak against more solid elements, such as metals (Aluminium), ice and such. This is because in case of collision, the objects made of Capscaisin would simply distort their original shape.
Is neutral to:

  • Fire and variations - Capsaicin is not really flammable and it needs to be heated over 100°C to be able to burn.
  • Capscaisin is neutral to elements of same/similar density.
Is strong against:

  • Water - Capsaicin is extremely, extremely insoluble in water, at a rate of .0013 grams per 100 mL of water. Water generally does not affect capsaicin at all.
  • Earth - As capsaicin is formed from the earth like plants, earth would only empower it and give it more growing area.
  • Fungus/Mushroom - Capsaicin is a funghi deterent.
  • Contrary to denser and more solid materials, materials that have less solidity than Capscaisin (liquids, gases, etc.) are weak to it, because their structure can't stop an object made of Capscaisin, on contact.
Co-creator: Adachi

Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A

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✗ Declined: it's a cool idea for an element, but there are still some small things that have to get out. Remove neutral elements, that's not part of the template, so it shouldn't be there. Also remove that last strength. That description is so vague and so inaccurate I can't accept it. Density is important, however their are also other factors involved. You're making a globalization while not having taken everything into account. I also don't really get why you give such a roundabout 'proof' for its existence, I mean you have the Akimichi chili pill and some kind of pepper bombs that can snap people out of genjutsu in the anime. I think there are more instances it was shown, so why are you making things hard on yourself? Also I wonder if you can't just call it Pepper, Chili Pepper or Pepper Spray release as it's really a pain in the ass name, but that's up to you. There are two main issues I still have though. One is your so called advanced release which I'm reluctant for as you are saying you can start relieving pain and such by minute chakra control, which for me seems something for med ninjas. The main problem though remains how you make it. The first time it was too shallow, now it just seems random. I mean those ratio numbers are so messed up I don't even understand the logic behind it. Can't you give a more sensible explanation as how you use water and earth to create it? Maybe using fire or lighting trying to mimic photosynthesis? As the problem with your element is that it's a rare substance in a specific plant.


Custom element Japanese name: Kapusaichinton

Custom element English name: Capsaicin Release

The element is based on: Earth + Water + Fire + Chakra Control

Capsaicin is a chemical found, mainly, in chili peppers, and chili peppers are the fruit of certain plants. It is an irritant for mammals, including humans, and produces a sensation of burning in any tissue with which it comes into contact. Capsaicin is a deterrent against certain herbivores and fungi. Pure Capsaicin is a hydrophobic, colorless, odorless, crystalline to waxy compound. In order for plants to grow from the earth, they need water, air, and of course, sunlight and heat. This allows the plant to grow and bear the fruit, which in turn, contains this very component, Capsaicin.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Think of the Land of Rice fields. Taking into account that they are human just like us and that they know how to maintain plantations and grow different species of vegetables, we can safely assume that they also know how to grow chili peppers. Since every human likes their food with different levels of spiciness, I believe that there are also ninja who like their meals spicy and hot. Now, Capsaicin is what gives the spicy and hot feeling to each different sort of chili peppers, which in the end is the idea behind the creation of this element. Also, many jutsu types also derive off the factor of living things from the earth. Simply think of Yamato's Wood Release and the other types of jutsu that require mother nature's work and happenings. Wildlife and plants work the same way they do in the Naruto World as in the real world as well.

Another fact that proves that Capsaicin is possible in the Naruto World is the Akimichi Red Chili Pill. It is evidence about its stimulating abilities. Although the pill carries very great boosts it also has heavy drawbacks, which are eliminated with Capsaicin because it would be used and monitored with precision, to avoid fatal consequences.

We have also seen the villagers of the Genjutsu Tree Village use their specialized Chilli Pepper Bombs in order to repel the naturally caused genjutsu by the surrounding trees. Since the way to release from genjutsu is a chakra spike in the system, it proves that Capsaicin can work as explained; create an overwhelming sensation that would cripple the opponent.


How it works:

The process used to create Capsaicin by ninja is mimicking standard photosynthesis used by plants. When training to achieve the Capsaicin elemental nature, the user would enter a meditative state and drop all focus on the surroundings. He would picture himself as a chili pepper, ready to perform photosynthesis in order to produce Capsaicin. He would start by gathering amounts of earth chakra that represents a place for the pepper to grow as well a place from where the pepper can drain water and certain minerals necessary. Then he would start adding water chakra into the mix in order to help the pepper hydrate, grow and give Capsaicin the sticky, waxy nature. To finish off the circle the user would add fire chakra which represents the sun, giving the pepper enough heat and light in order to properly synthesize all ingredients. However, one also important fact is the chakra control which in the pepper represents the chlorophyll, responsible for a successful photosynthesis and creation of Capsaicin.

Capsaicin, in general, is an alkaline oil, and has an extremely unique molecular shape. All mammals, and especially humans, have nerve cells that detect heat or pain, and when Capsaicin comes in contact with the skin, they tend to attach to these very receptors and then release a lot of calcium ions to flow in. As a result, humans feel a burning or stinging pain, and severe over-exposure of Capsaicin can also lead to death. Capsaicin also prevents nerve cells from communicating with each other by blocking the production of certain neurotransmitters, and at high concentrations, it even destroys the cells itself. Furthermore, such heat is measured by units named Scoville Heat Units (SHU). Tabasco itself can go up to 8,000 SHU only. However, pure Capsaicin itself goes up to 16,000,000 SHU, and that alone is quite, quite hot.

The elemental properties of Capsaicin are what make it so unique and dangerous, but on the other side, non-harmful and pleasant. Capsaicin is, as already said, an irritant for mammals, a pest deterrent and an anti-funghi agent. It creates a burning and painful sensation when in contact with mucous membranes of our cells. Through precise chakra control the level of its heat (SHU) can be controlled and reduced, same as increased, depending on the use. High SHU Capsaicin would mostly be used to attack the opponent and cause neurological pain and to cripple the opponent. It would also be used on mammal summons, in order to disperse them and on funghi and plant based elements in order to deteriorate them and render them useless. Low SHU Capsaicin however, would be used as a stimulant to the user and as a temporary pain reliever. There is only one state in which Capscaisin can be used, however, there are multiple ways to use it, all depending on the SHU level.

Main Release:
Mainly focusing on its straightforward waxy properties, different objects such as waves, weapons, cubes, spheres, etc. would be used in order to attack the opponent, transfer and stick the compound onto his body. Once there, its effects would kick in, reacting with his neurotransmitters and overwhelming his body. This release would mostly focus on the high SHU leveled Capscaisin, but it's not exclusive to it. Depending on the use and the nature of the technique, the user can also use the controlled low SHU Capsaicin to create more precise effects. Regarding the composition, looks and properties, Capsaicin doesn't change along the SHU scale except for the SHU value. The user can create and manipulate Capsaicin from his own body as well as from the surroundings.

Advanced Release:
The advanced release is where the precise chakra control comes in as the main requirement. Through this release the user can control the levels of SHU the Capsaicin has and therefore concentrates on the low leveled SHU Capsaicin and its use. Since Capsaicin has a very wide medical use, it's also applicable in the NarutoVerse. With the use of this release, the user could use it as a temporary stimulant and pain reliever for himself, focusing Capsaicin chakra into his own cells. The highly controlled, low SHU Capsaicin would have the same effect as the high SHU variant, except with a much lesser magnitude. In this case, the high SHU acts like the Akimichi chili pill. The chili pill gives the user increased strength, speed and chakra but in return he's unable to fight if he doesn't finish the battle in a certain period. With small amounts of chakra and precise control the user can provoke similar effects but without any drawbacks but severely limited boosts. It would completely wipe out the possibility of death due to over exposure. Also, the way it acts as a stimulant is simple. When it gets into contact with the user's neurons and causes the burning sensation, it also builds up blood pressure, which results in the explosion of power and joyful feelings inside the user's brain. On the other hand, its pain relieving ability is caused on the same principle, resulting in the nerves being overwhelmed by the influx of Capsaicin and being unable to report pain for an extended period of time. This release can only be utilized from the users body.

Usage Examples:

Kapusaichinton: Karai Nami | Capsaicin Release: Spicy Wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short to Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user sends his Capsaicin chakra into the earth of the battlefield and manipulates it so that it turns into a field of pure Capsaicin that seeps into the ground.

Kapusaichinton: Danzai! | Capsaicin Release: Conviction!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: -
Description: The user releases Capsaicin chakra throughout his own body and as it gets in contact with the neurons, it triggers the stimulants to release feelings of excitement and joy, motivating the user momentarily.

Conditions to be able to use it:

Completed Earth training
Completed Water training
Completed Fire training
Great and precise chakra control


Is weak to:

Wind and variations - Because Capsaicin has such a delicate structure, Wind jutsu can easily cut through it.
Lightning and variations - Much like the concept of earth being weak to lightning, a huge part of Capsaicin itself is also formed of earth, and lightning, being such a wild element, can also tear it apart.
Since Capsaicin is a waxy compound, not having immense solidity, it's weak against more solid elements, such as metals (Aluminum), ice and such. This is because in case of collision, the objects made of Capsaicin would simply distort their original shape.

Is strong against:

Water and variations- Capsaicin is extremely, extremely insoluble in water, at a rate of .0013 grams per 100 mL of water. Water generally does not affect capsaicin at all.
Earth and variations- As capsaicin is formed from the earth like plants, earth would only empower it and give it more growing area, making its spread easier.
Fungus/Mushroom - Capsaicin is a funghi deterrent.


Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A


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✗ Declined: I mentioned the Akamichi pills just because for some reason you were searching for far-fetched reasons and proof to show that capsaicin exists. If you would have written one line mentioning those pills, you would have had all the proof you need to just prove it exists, hence why I said it, but if you know actually used those pills as an argument to say that you can use your element to get increased speed and strength, then this will be declined as I can't find really anything that capsaicin does stuff like that, which means you just copied the Akamichi pills. Those pills are extremely complex and probably consist of several substances, so that's not an argument to say you can do it too. Unless there is actually such an application in real life, everything revolving around that should be removed. Not to mention we already have enough canon stuff that boosts your strength and speed. I also have my doubts as how this is supposed to stop an earth jutsu? I mean if someone fires an earth spike at you, how is it exactly going to stop it? I mean capasaicin is a specific substance of a specific plant and plants live in the earth, so your relationship with the earth is already quite indirect and not so straightforward as you make it out to be, so how is it not only going to stop an earth spike, but also overpower it in the hypothetical case it's a jutsu of the same rank?

 
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Yeah so i took out "before and after ignition", And fixed the part about the Coal dust. Oh and i removed one of the two Dust Explosion links, the one that wasn't hooked to Wiki.

This has been changed from Anthracite Coal Release to Coal Release, taking in the fact that this coal is not as hard as Anthracite coal, hence the reason why Wind(Cutting) and Lightning are its weaknesses now. I know that below I state that Static discharge is a way to ignite coal, however lightning is so powerful that it would actually cut through the piece of coal more than igniting it, unless it 2 ranks or lower than the coal it is trying to cut, as stated below in the Dust Explosions Section.

Custom element Japanese name: Mueton

Custom element English name: Coal Release

The element is based on: (Earth + Fire) + Chakra

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The user is capable of either forming coal by pulling it out of the surrounding earth or from their body. Earth, already a significant element in the Narutoverse, coal is simply a highly combustible piece of earth. On missions, if there were no Fire element user, the usage of small lumps of coal as long as you have at least a pair, would enable the personnel to create a source of fire. A downfall to the usage of coal itself is that if another person were to get a hold of it before it was ignited, they could use it just as effectively as the user. Not able to manipulate/create it the way the original user could, but if they are able to successfully block the technique before it is ignited, pick it up as it were but a rock.

How it works:
Coal is an easily ignitable/combustible (by fire) substance formed from metamorphic rock (rock subjected to extreme pressure and heat that changes its form and properties) of the earth and dead plant matter inside of it. Being formed by erosion of Wind make it its natural weakness. Strong Lightning cuts and travels too fast through the coal to ignite it as fire would, and cuts cleanly through it; however much weaker lightning is capable of igniting the Coal. The Coal when created or pulled from the ground, shakes loose large amounts of Coal dust that when ignited by friction, static discharge, hot surfaces, and fire. Not burning all of the coal at once it is just the Coal dust that has the possibility to explode.

- (Please see Source of Ignition)
Is what is noted as the result of when Coal is ignited via friction with
*Another piece of Coal
*Static Discharge/Lightning - Though Lightning is a weakness, Lightning of 2 or more Ranks Lower than the Coal jutsu used is capable of igniting the coal.
*Hot Surfaces
*Fire.

Usage Examples:
Mueton: Rōringu Gyokuseki (Coal Release: Rolling Boulder)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User will create a small lump of coal in their hands and charge it with a lot of chakra before throwing it like a bowling ball along the ground where it will pick up speed and grow larger as it travels towards an enemy. As it travels across the ground, the friction caused from rolling on the ground ignites the bowling ball as it grows into a boulder.

(Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Spike Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40 (+5 if caught in the explosion)
Description: The user will pull coal from the ground, creating two spikes of coal which then cross and then connect and cause a spark between them, which then ignites the two coal spikes and destroys the spikes which cause more damage if the opponent is caught in the blast.

(Mueton: Atemiwa)- Coal Release: Blowing Rock
Type: Supp/Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will create a small chunk of coal in their hand, then release fire chakra into the coal, the user will then throw the rock at the opponent, and make a single handseal which causes the coal chunk to explode.

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth. Mastery of Fire.

Is weak to:

Wind (Cutting only), Lightning (Cuts through it) [And any CE or variant of the two], Metals

Is strong against:

Earth, Water, Fire (And all CE or Variants of the three)

Co-creator: Oasis Nara
Students I passed this custom element on too:

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✗ Declined: Because currently I find it that you did not explain it very well, at least not enough to justify what you wrote as strengths weaknesses. I don't expect, nor even want, that you write an entire essay. However I do expect that you explain the crucial parts clearly, which you didn't do as I do not understand half of your supposedly strength weaknesses. I mean why is earth a strength? If coals harder is than earth ok, but you didn't not say that anywhere and then you contradict yourself saying by that it's weak against wind (also no reason to say cutting only, then it seems you're just trying to lessen its impact) while wind is neutral to normal earth. Where's the logic in that? Also don't say so easily 'and CE variants'. You can do that when you have an element that's almost at the end of a spectrum, like for instance diamond, or when you have clearly explained the boundaries, but I mean what are variant of earth? Aren't those mainly metals? Which are listened as weakness (metals are definitely a weakness, however it's again a contradiction between what you say). But above all I really can not understand why fire is listed as strength, let alone it's CE variants. Humanity has been burning coal as fuel for centuries, so how could that possibly be a strength? Especially when I start imagining CE like Hellfire or Sunfire. Also proving that coal exists shouldn't be so hard in the Narutoverse, still you actually never gave any. When you state your proof for a CE you need to answer two questions: does it exist in Naruto and so yes is it possible to make it. You did not answer the first one.





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Custom element Japanese name: Mueton

Custom element English name: Coal Release

The element is based on: (Earth + Fire) + Chakra

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The user is capable of either forming coal by pulling it out of the surrounding earth or from their body. Earth, already a significant element in the Narutoverse, coal is simply a highly combustible piece of earth. On missions, if there were no Fire element user, the usage of small lumps of coal as long as you have at least a pair, would enable the personnel to create a source of fire. A downfall to the usage of coal itself is that if another person were to get a hold of it before it was ignited, they could use it just as effectively as the user. Not able to manipulate/create it the way the original user could, but if they are able to successfully block the technique before it is ignited, pick it up as it were but a rock. Since coal is a fossil fuel the villages used it as a way to fuel fires for cook like when Asuma took his team to the BBQ there was coal use to cook the food.

How it works:
Coal is an easily ignitable/combustible (by fire) substance formed from metamorphic rock (rock subjected to extreme pressure and heat that changes its form and properties) of the earth and dead plant matter inside of it. Strong Lightning cuts and travels too fast through the coal to ignite it as fire would, and cuts cleanly through it; however much weaker lightning is capable of igniting the Coal. The Coal when created or pulled from the ground, shakes loose large amounts of Coal dust that when ignited by friction, static discharge, hot surfaces, and fire. Not burning all of the coal at once it is just the Coal dust that has the possibility to explode.

- (Please see Source of Ignition)
Is what is noted as the result of when Coal is ignited via friction with
*Another piece of Coal
*Static Discharge/Lightning - Though Lightning is a weakness, Lightning of 2 or more Ranks Lower than the Coal jutsu used is capable of igniting the coal.
*Hot Surfaces
*Fire.
Usage Examples:
Mueton: Rōringu Gyokuseki (Coal Release: Rolling Boulder)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User will create a small lump of coal in their hands and charge it with a lot of chakra before throwing it like a bowling ball along the ground where it will pick up speed and grow larger as it travels towards an enemy. As it travels across the ground, the friction caused from rolling on the ground ignites the bowling ball as it grows into a boulder.

(Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Spike Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40 (+5 if caught in the explosion)
Description: The user will pull coal from the ground, creating two spikes of coal which then cross and then connect and cause a spark between them, which then ignites the two coal spikes and destroys the spikes which cause more damage if the opponent is caught in the blast.

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth. Mastery of Fire.

Is weak to:

Fire and Lava Release (and all KG/CE Variants) - Coal only serves to augment the flames of these elements

Lightning Release (and all KG/CE Variants) - The sheer penetrative capabilities are capable of cutting through coal.

All Metal Elements - Much harder than coal. Capable of breaking through and shattering it

Is strong against:
Earth Release - Coal is harder than normal rock

Water and Rain Release - Coal's earth-like properties allow it to overpower and dissipate the force of both of these elements.

Co-creator: Korra
Students I passed this custom element on too: -Tauburn- and ?

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✗ Declined: STR and WKN and proof are fine, but don't just link to wikipedia, explain it in your own words as even though coal if flammable, I have my doubts about the speed of it. It's not oil. I don't like stuff in the nature of "2 ranks and below will ignite it". Considering this is a crude solid, I can easily imagine that such a small lightning jutsu will just cut off a small chunk of the coal and if it already would ignite something, I would imagine it as just a small part of it, barely worth mentioning. As far as I know coal isn't something that ignites instantly like oil and it's easier to extinguish. Likewise if you are going to make a ball of coal run around, something like coal that rotates at that speed I doubt it can stay aflame, not to mention you need to take into consideration the environment on which it is rotating, I can't imagine it being set on fire on sand, which is even used to put out fire. You are focusing way too much on that whole 'it's combustable' thing and explain its characteristics way too little and interpret too convenient without any back up. Also there's a difference between exploding and just being set on fire.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Removed the harmless to the user part and added proofs
Gave a full explanation how the element is made.
also added a new example tech.
Changes are bolded
removed fire and water strenght.



Custom element Japanese name:
EkiBurichiton
Custom element English name:
Liquid Bleach Release
The element is based on:
Water+fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Bleach does exist in narutoverse due to the fact that fabrics and cloths existed, hence
gets stained along the line,which brings about the need of bleaching agents, due its
chemical can also be used to sterilized water, killing any type of germs thus its also a
disinfectant. The earliest form of bleaching involves spreading fabrics and cloths out in
a bleach field (this is practically a terrain) to be whitened by the action of the sun and
water.

How it works:
The user while using chakra manipulation and combining his water and fire chakra, creates Liquid bleach. He either imbues this in his stomach wherewith he would spew it from his mouth or imbues his chakra into an existing water source and converts it into liquid bleach(Water conversion must be done at first and would be submitted as a separate technique). The user can also bring up liquid bleach from below the earth by sending his chakra into the earth and mixing it with water contained while converting them to liquid bleach before bringing them up just like manipulating water from below earth like the likes of Dragon bitting explosion technique and water convergence technique.

However, Liquid Bleach is less denser than water and it is not flammable. They pulverizes any sort of thin organic
Layer, coatings and films such leaving it naked. Some vivid examples are fabric, textile
which are white but are coated with thin layers of colors, a bleach will remove the dyes
leaving it white as it was. This can also be used to break bubbles as they are also thin
film around air itself.

Main Releases:
Liquid bleach has a basic and main purpose, for decoloration and peeling of thin layers and
films. they are less denser and lighter than water thus allows for easy diffusion into
human skin through the sweat-pores via osmosis. this in turn cause severe skin irritation and eventually peels of the skin. it also is able to sieve through surfaces easily.
Also main releases of liquid bleach would cause decoloration of the skin and organic and
inorganic surfaces turning them white when it comes in contact with it. The reason for this
being that colors in most dye and pigments are produced by molecules which contain
chromophores, such as beta carotene which makes liquid bleach acting as a reducing agent works by converting double bonds in the chromophore into single bonds. This eliminates the ability of the chromophore to absorb visible light rendering the resulting substance
colorless.
Liquid bleach having made by the user's chakra is totally harmless to the user.

Alternative Releases:
Liquid bleaches having strong bactericidal properties, can be used for disinfecting and
sterilizing as in the real word today in which they are used in swimming pool sanitation to
control bacteria, viruses and algae and in any institution where sterile conditions are
needed. Following the same explanation, liquid bleach in its alternative release negates
effects of parasitic bacterias, virus and fungus by neutralizing their venom and sterilizing
them. the idea behind its alternate release is owed to the nature of its chemical
reactivity with microbes. Rather than acting in an inhibitory or toxic fashion in the
manner of antibiotics, bleach quickly reacts with microbial cells to irreversibly denature
and destroy many pathogens.
The user will modify liquid bleach chakra in a way that he forms specific liquid bleach
that destroys, bacteria, fungi, and other parasitic microbes that comes in contact with it.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over fire+water release

(EkiBurichiton: Burichingu ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Bleaching
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:20
Description: This is a basic bleach justu,that enables the user to focus bleach chakra into
their palms forming a small stream of bleach that can be directed towards a target
decolorizing surfaces it comes in contact with also causes minimal burns to skin.

(EkiBurichiton: Mizu Kaishin ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Water Conversion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user send his chakra into an existing water source preferrably a large one, and converts them into liquid bleach which can now be used for liquid bleach techniques
+conversion takes a full turn

Is weak to:
Earth: has strong lattices against liquid bleach intrusion.
Lightning: Cuts through it
Wind: can blow it away being less heavier than water
Is strong against:
Paint: Displaces paints turning it white
Color: De-colorizes
Germs: Dis-infects it
Fungal and parasitic based elements: Reacts, Negate and Destroys them.

Co-creators (if any):
Priest

Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Still the same problem as last time, your explanation of how you make it is not going to cut it. Just proving that something might exist in Naruto is not enough, you also need to give a proper explanation and proof it can be made into an element, just saying you mix water and fire together is not enough as it's too shallow and doesn't have much reason behind it, especially when you clearly say it can do that, that and that. And no "is harmless to the user" stuff.







Custom element Japanese name:
EkiBurichiton
Custom element English name:
Liquid Bleach Release
The element is based on:
Water+fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Bleach does exist in narutoverse due to the fact that fabrics and cloths existed, hence
gets stained along the line, I would say since there are fabrics in Narutoverse , clothes and washing of
clothes, soaps which contains bleaching
agents and caustic sodas then liquid bleach is
possible.
Also due to its
chemical composition, it can be used to sterilized water, killing any type of germs thus its also a
disinfectant. The earliest form of bleaching involves spreading fabrics and cloths out in
a bleach field (this is practically a terrain) to be whitened by the action of the sun and
water.

How it works:
The user would use an existing water source
and converts them into liquid bleach by
kneading both his water and fire chakra into it,
allowing chemical reaction to take place since
liquid bleach works as an oxidizing agent and some as reducing agent, it is comprised of peroxides and a hydrogen so while Hydrogen and Oxygen are well present in water, the user uses his chakra for advance chemical combination modifying a source that contains hydrogen and oxygen while forming his own distinct element called liquid bleach. Moderate amount of liquid bleach can be materialized in the surrounding air since there is some amount of oxygen and hydrogen contained in air and while oxygen is in larger quantity, it compensates for the double molecules of oxygen contained in peroxides, thus liquid bleach can be formed in air, likewise the same air can be sucked into the user and he uses it to form liquid bleach which can then be spited from the mouth.
The user can also bring up liquid bleach from below the earth by sending his chakra into the earth and mixing it with water contained while converting them to liquid bleach before bringing them up just like manipulating water from below earth like the likes of Dragon bitting explosion technique and water convergence technique.
However, Liquid Bleach is less denser than water and it is not flammable. They pulverizes any sort of thin organic Layer, coatings and films such leaving it naked. Some vivid examples are fabric, textile which are white but are coated with thin layers of colors, a bleach will remove the dyes leaving it white as it was. This can also be used to break bubbles as they are also thin film around air itself.

Main Releases:
Liquid bleach has a basic and main purpose, for decoloration and peeling of thin layers and
films. they are less denser and lighter than water thus allows for easy diffusion into
human skin through the sweat-pores via osmosis. this in turn cause severe skin irritation and eventually peels of the skin. it also is able to sieve through surfaces easily.
Also main releases of liquid bleach would cause decoloration of the skin and organic and
inorganic surfaces turning them white when it comes in contact with it. The reason for this
being that colors in most dye and pigments are produced by molecules which contain
chromophores, such as beta carotene which makes liquid bleach acting as a reducing agent works by converting double bonds in the chromophore into single bonds. This eliminates the ability of the chromophore to absorb visible light rendering the resulting substance
colorless.

Alternative Releases:
Liquid bleaches having strong bactericidal properties, can be used for disinfecting and
sterilizing as in the real word today in which they are used in swimming pool sanitation to
control bacteria, viruses and algae and in any institution where sterile conditions are
needed. Following the same explanation, liquid bleach in its alternative release negates
effects of parasitic bacterias, virus and fungus by neutralizing their venom and sterilizing
them. the idea behind its alternate release is owed to the nature of its chemical
reactivity with microbes. Rather than acting in an inhibitory or toxic fashion in the
manner of antibiotics, bleach quickly reacts with microbial cells to irreversibly denature
and destroy many pathogens.
The user will modify liquid bleach chakra in a way that he forms specific liquid bleach
that destroys, bacteria, fungi, and other parasitic microbes that comes in contact with it.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over fire+water release

(EkiBurichiton: Burichingu ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Bleaching
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:20
Description: This is a basic bleach justu,that enables the user to focus bleach chakra into
their palms forming a small stream of bleach that can be directed towards a target
decolorizing surfaces it comes in contact with also causes minimal burns to skin.

(EkiBurichiton: Mizu Kaishin ) - Liquid Bleach Release: Water Conversion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user send his chakra into an existing water source preferrably a large one, and converts them into liquid bleach which can now be used for liquid bleach techniques
+conversion takes a full turn

Is weak to:
Earth: has strong lattices against liquid bleach intrusion.
Lightning: Cuts through it
Wind: can blow it away being less heavier than water
Is strong against:
Paint: Displaces paints turning it white
Color: De-colorizes
Germs: Dis-infects it
Fungal and parasitic based elements: Reacts, Negate and Destroys them.

Co-creators (if any):
Priest

Students i passed on this custom element: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Some small parts that need to be reformulated and next time it should normally be ok. Even though I think you could give some clear examples on bleached cloths or something from the manga, I suppose your proof will suffice. STR and WKN aren't any problems either. The only thing you still need to edit that 'how it works'. Yes I asked you to provide your reasoning as why you need to use water and fire chakra, what the connection is between those elements and bleach. I find your explanation fine, though there's no reason to say that you can only use the element with an outside water source and the part about using air should just be removed as I doubt there is enough water in the air to make bleach. Naturally you are allowed to use outside water sources, but outside that your water chakra itself is a water source. You don't need to breath in air, your bleach chakra allows you to spit out bleach. I just wanted you to explain what the relationship is between your element and the elements it's based on. And about the disinfection thing you need to take into consideration that, when it involves humans, you are partially on the domain of med ninjutsu.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom Element Japanese Name : Kokuenton

Custom Element English Name : Graphite Release

Element Based on:
Earth + Wind + Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
As seen in Chunin Exam Arc where the genin take the paper test, they use pencils to write down answers, Graphite is used in pencils to make them able to scribe/draw on the paper, thus proving Graphite exists in the Narutoverse.

How it Works:
Graphite is formed as a natural rock underground so the user will need to have mastery of earth, though it has very different properties from most rocks and is formed out of pure carbon meaning the user will need to have a good mastery of wind and good chakra control. It is an element that comes in one solid form but can be used in two different ways, graphite can come in as a rock form which kinda looks like coal; it can also come in flake form which can also be useful e.g. using it to blind opponent or damage them with multiple slashes all over their body if used in conjunction with wind. When producing flake graphite the user will be able to breathe it out of their mouth a bit like mud, the more solid rock form can be produced from the ground to perform simple attacks like that or to create walls.

The User is able to use graphite to be able to draw on certain objects, making a trap for later so that the imprints "Jumps" out and hits the opponent and damages them. So the user can make signs and trick their opponent, furthering ambushing them later and catching them off guard.

Usage Examples
(Kokuenton : Gurafaito arashi) - Graphite Release : Graphite Storm
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A (+30 with wind)
Description:
The user breathes graphite in a flakey form towards their target, a lot of graphite is made by this technique and it floats around the area making it hard to see for both the user and the opponent; though the user can sense where the opponent is because the graphite will be touching them, giving him an outline of where he is. If this technique is used in conjunction with wind it can cause some damage to the opponent by slashing them all over, some of the graphite will find it's way into the opponent's body.

(Kokuenton : Hika reru torappu) - Graphite Release : Drawn Trap
Type: Offence
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description:
The user releases graphite flakes from their hand upon a solid surface to make a picture or lettering to trick the opponent to thinking it's a sign of some sort, when the opponent is proximate to the trap the user will manipulate the graphite to reach out of the sketch in the form of a claw that will grip onto the closest limb of the opponent and dig it's claws deep into it, rendering their arm or leg useless.


(Kokuenton : Kage Bunshin no jutsu) - Graphite Release : Shadow Clone Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description:
The user makes graphite rise from the ground to form into clones, though the difference with these clones is that they have really sharp pointed fingers which are used as a pencil by the clones to draw on surfaces so that the user can take control of it later and use the 'Drawn Trap' technique. The clones can also use these claw like hands to stab enemies and if the user wants it they will snap the fingers off if the technique lands the hit so that they remain in the user's body. These clones can only use up to B-Rank Graphite techniques and are able to regenerate their bodies if harmed if near a graphite source, like a drawing they have made somewhere.
-Clones can only draw on a surface once every turn.
-Up to three clones can be made at one time.

Conditions to be able to use it
Earth Mastery
Wind Mastery

Is weak to :

Earth - Graphite is weak to this element because it does not have a strong structure and can be broken easily by this solid substance. Though if the earth is in the form of Mud it is not stronger than graphite and instead becomes Neutral.

Wind - Graphite is light so wind can easily blow it away, or if trying to slash through it can quite easily because it can be snapped quite easily.

Is strong against :

Lightning - Graphite conducts electricity, so lightning will just be conducted through the graphite and nullified.

Fire - Graphite is difficult to ignite so the fire won't be able to effect it at all.

Co-Creator :
Students I have passed this Custom Element onto : ?&?

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✗ Declined: Graphite already exists, it falls under the Carbon CE.

 
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Custom element Japanese name:
Dojou

Custom element English name:
Soil Release

The element is based on:
Earth + Chakra Manipulation

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Soil is a natural body consisting of layers (soil horizons) that are primarily composed of minerals, mixed with at least some organic matter, which differ from their parent materials in their texture, structure, consistency, color, chemical, biological and other characteristics. It is the unconsolidated or loose covering of fine rock particles that covers the surface of the earth. Soil is referred to as regolith, or loose rock material that lies above the 'solid geology' Soil is composed of particles of broken rock (parent materials) which have been altered by physical, chemical and biological processes that include weathering with associated erosion. Soil is created from the alteration of parent material by the interactions between the lithosphere, hydrosphere, atmosphere, and biosphere It can also be considered a mixture of mineral and organic materials in the form of solids, gases and liquids. Soil forms a structure filled with pore spaces and can be thought of as a mixture of solids, water, and gases.

Soil is different than the regular earth in naruto in many ways... Starting with the obvious.. Soil is not that much physical, and can be shaped. As Earth Can Not. Earth Has a solid structure preventing Water from passing. Soil Absorbs the water, making the soil heavier. Earth is not moist, (In most cases) As to Soil is indeed moist..In naruto they use earth jutsus, as they do live on an "Earth (Planet), the fact that we have seen varius types of earth being used.. (Quick Sand , Mud , and Swamp )...... Earth is a form of soil, solidified to be exact. Containing several layers of the ground as Earth is right above soil, in the bedrock chain...It is more dense than Sand, but Less dense than Mud.. And to top it off that Soil does indeed exist in that world and differs a great amount from Hard Earth and Soil (Soft Earth) Is that Ino family run a garden shop, and we have seen several times Ino, and her family using soil to plant , plants. Letting us know that soil indeed does exist in the naruto world and that soil is underneath the earth surface.

How it works:
It is very simple, and easy to control soil, As the same with earth jutsus, the user must have contact with the ground for (Most.. Depending on the jutsu) to achieve any Soil jutsus.. The user will simply manipulate their chakra and control the soil beneath the ground.. Or the user will simply manipulate and shape the earth that the user is standing on and change the nature of that earth from a Solidified Earth, to a Soft Type Earth (Soil) which is easy manipulable. The user can also channel their Soil Chakra through their body and release it from the body as well (Depending on the jutsu), Allowing free control over soil

Usage Examples:

(Dojou: Dojou nami) Soil Release: Soil Wave
Type:AttacK
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user does 3 handseals and slam their hands on the ground, As their hands touch the ground, the user channels chakra into the ground, having soil erupt from the ground (Behind or Infront.. where the user choices) As the soil erupts from the ground, it takes on the form of a Tsunami Wave, The Soil Wave will then come crashing down from above towards the target

(Dojou:Tatazumai shifuto) Soil Release: Shape Shifter
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short (Can Travel up to Long)
Chakra:40 (+10 for each active turn)
Damage:80
Description: The user will do 3 handseals, ending with a unique handseal. The user will then cause the soil on the field to shape into the last handseal the user has down. Ex. If the user does the Bore Handseal last, the soil will form into a bore, The user can change the shape of the animal by doing the handseal of the animal he wishes to create. These animals can not exceed the height and width of 7 feet.

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Must Have mastered Earth
-Must Have Earth as a mastery on atleast one of your bios
-Have Earth Mastered for atleast 4 Months

Is weak to:
Fire- Fire can easily burn soil
Ice (Cold Tempatures)- Ice freezes the soil, not allowing me to manipulate it
Wind-Can Blow Away the soil

Is strong against:
Water- Soil Absorbs the water
Decay- Soil Is already a mixture of decay things, causing decay to have no affect on soil
Roots: Soil gives nutrients to roots, thus allowing the soil to drain the water out the roots causing them to whither,

Co-creator: Cursed Prince
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: When someone uses and earth jutsu, it by default also encompasses the 'soil' and I find it also just useless. If you really want to make a division between 'hard earth' and 'soil', then don't start making things appear better than they are. Then soil has barely any resistance as it doesn't have the 'hard earth', meaning anything would just go through. It doesn't absorb water, let alone drain roots in an instant. Something that has the density of roots and the impact of water, would likely just go straight through it. Not to mention soil is extremely brittle without enough water, it would start to crumble if it doesn't have enough water and it would turn into mud if it has too many. Reality is that this would be a waste of a CE.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name:
Ma-buru

Custom element English name:
Marble Release

The element is based on:
Advance Earth Chakra + Water Chakra

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Marble is a non-foliated metamorphic rock composed of recrystallized carbonate minerals, most commonly calcite or dolomite. In the manga we have seen several rock/crystal variants Including Coral (From The Sanbi), Crystal (From Gurens KG), Steel (From Hiruko KG), To simple things such as Quicklime Hardened (Kagtsuchi Lava Variant) all the way down from simple buildings made from different types of rocks. Marble is formed from limestone and limestone is found virtually anywhere an ancient sea existed. The limestone could be exposed at the surface due to erosion or road cuts, or could be buried hundreds of feet underground, covered by other sedimentary rock or unlithified sediments. Limestone also develops in offshore basins, Moutains and hot springs. It is seen in several cases where hot springs appeared in the world of naruto (Pervy Sage Sneaking in, the day Tsunade used her generation against orochimaru and they needed to relax. etc).. We have also seen mountains... One Most recently was the mountain that was cut by madara Final Susanoo. So We do indeed know Mountains Exist. What Makes the special above most rocks is that marble is Heat and Lightning Resistance.. allowing the elements (Lightning And Fire) to do no harm but it is indeed weaker then the other type of rocks.

How it works:
Marble Properties

-Marble has many 'designs', some look like layers with different colours, some look like there had been threads put into it. Marbles are very often very smooth and shiny, that is because they have been carried through water for so long, the water has smothered their surface.

Marble Is simple created by the user Mixing high levels up Earth Chakra and Regular amounts of water chakra with the proper amount of chakra control. This element can be utilized and created in several ways.. By Mixing The Advance Earth Chakra and Water chakra into their body producing the element, Mixing Their Advance Earth And Water Chakra into the ground to produce the element, Or Channel Their Advance Earth Chakra into a River/Lake/Sea/Ocean... Allowing the marble to form properly and can be utilize from within the water source (Has to be a River/Lake/Sea/Ocean.. No Ponds or man made water sources)

Usage Examples:

(Ma-buru: watatsumi gosunkugi) Marble Release: Ocean Marble Pillar
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long (In height and Width)
Chakra:25
Damage:50
Description: The user will simply create one Large MarbleSpike Pillar from below a water source. This Earth Pillar is very sharp and smooth due to the water smoothing out the marbles feel. (This Can Only be done while on a water source (Ocean, lake, Sea, River)

(Ma-buru:dangan) Marble Release: Marble Shots
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The User will stomp their leg on the ground forcing their Marble chakra into the ground.. A volleyball size marble will then emerge from the ground. The user Will Then Pick it up and throw it at the opponent. Mid Range from reaching the opponent the user will do 2 handseals and cause the huge volleyball size marble to break into mini size marbles and cause them to launch at the opponent with such great speed

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Must Mastered Earth, And Mastered it for longer than 6 Months
-Must Have Mastered Water

Is weak to:
Earth & Earth Variants (Crystal, Steel, Metal) : Marble Is not as strong as most rocks, so regular rocks and crystals are able to break it with slight Ease
Wind: The Cutting properties of wind are able to cut marble with Ease..

Is strong against:
Fire/Fire Base CE: Marble Is Heat Resistant
Lightning/Lightning Base CE: Marble Is Lightning Restiant
Water: Marble Still Having a solid surface... Water Cant Bypass Marble

Co-creator:
-Loki-

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Marble falls under Mugi's Calcium CE, he even specifically mentioned it. I'm pretty sure I once said something similar with another submission of yours.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name:Tsuki no dojō | 月の土壌
Custom element English name: Lunar Soil Release
The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Lightning
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): As we know the Sage of Six paths sealed the husk of the juubi’s body within the moon using Chibaku Tensei. In manga context the moon was created on earth and therefore it is composed of minerals and different types of soil all found on Earth. Therefore, allowing most of the moon’s soil to available on earth. In the manga we have also seen different/ specific minerals within the earth being manipulated, formed and released through the use of chakra manipulation or interaction to some degree. Examples: Gold Dust, Sand Release and Earth Release.

How it works: Lunar soil is the fine fraction of the regolith that can be found on the surface of the Moon.The physical properties of lunar soil are primarily the result of mechanical disintegration of basaltic and anorthositic rock, caused by continuous meteoric impact and bombardment by interstellar charged atomic particles over billions of years giving it high energy levels and unique electrostatic qualities allowing it to cling to surfaces. Now the forming process of luna soil is generally an interactive process. By combining the energy and heated aspect of fire to strengthen its chemical bonds and raise its energy levels but also giving it a greyish colour. The destructive and static characteristics of lightning element which breaks down all course pieces (initiating a mechanical breakdown) making them fine and charged. In collaboration with the high energy levels and the core understanding, principles, movements of earth manipulation, mastery of earth release and high levels of chakra control. Through this can luna soil be formed, used and released.
Through the heating process Luna soil has high energy levels making it have an exothermic reaction when it comes into contact with other high energy levelled substances. Though like all exothermic reactions the expression and rules for the reaction stay the same as it does in Narutoverse. “Expressed in a chemical equation: reactants → products + energy.” By an additional handseal or a physical ignition gesture (Similar to the teeth clicking action Asuma does when he performs the Ash Pile Burning technique.) that connects the users chakra with the element creating the energy part of the expression can this reaction can be induced.
Luna Soil is weak to Wind, due to the fact that it insulates the static properties of the element.
It is also weak against water due to the fact that water rapidly decreases its high energy levels but conducts the the static bonds making the element unstable.

Usage Examples:

Tsuki no dojō - Kabe | Luna Soil Release - The Wall
Type:Defensive
Rank:B-Rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will make two handseals and flush chakra into the Earth catalysing the luna Soil within it, to make a wall of luna soil to rise up out of the ground six meters infornt of the user. The wall is ten meters high and has a width of six meters and is as optically thick as a Rashōmon gate.

Tsuki no dojō - Shibo | Luna Soil Release -Luna Entrapment
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user will form three handseals then slam both hands on the ground. From their hands chakra will run along the earth creating luna soil in two straight lines as the chakra interacts with the soil to the opponents feet. Two meters before the opponents feet, through chakra manipulation a circle of luna soil will form around the opponent then shoot out of the ground at an enclosing angle trapping, injuring and then suffocating the opponent in a large amount of luna soil.

- This technique can only be used three times in a battle

Tsuki no dojō - Tsuki no dojō kawa | Luna Soil Release - Luna Soil Stream
Type:Offensive
Rank:B- Rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user will form a single handseal and then spew a large stream of luna soil from his mouth.

Conditions to be able to use it:Must have mastery of Lightning, Fire and Earth

Is weak to:Ice, Water, Wind
Is neutral to: Fire, Sound, Dust, Storm
Is strong against:Earth, Steel, Dark, Lightning, Organic based elements
Co-creator: Professor Sarutobi
Students I passed this custom element on too: Ndlovu & ?

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✗ Declined: The problem is that lunar soil was the result of billions of years of being blasted by lots of stuff, then you achieve that in a matter of seconds? That duration is one of the reasons as how it came into existence, but that applies probably to some other CE too so that is something I could still let slide, however the fact is that it happened under very specific circumstances that are not present on Earth, hence it's different. You make the element on Earth/world based on the Earth, so it's not influenced by the appropriate circumstances and thus can't be achieved, it's a contradiction. On top of that I also have my doubts about this 'energy' you keep speaking of. I understand some small particles have a slight electrical charge, which makes them stick to people (which is not that unique), but outside that I don't find anything special. You have got a lot of different forms of energy. I don't understand the Asuma reference either as that was a fire jutsu, that he used ash was the odd part of it, which is completely opposite of yours. Don't understand several STR and WKN either as the way you explain it, it's some kind of dust like substance and how is that supposed to be strong against earth let alone Steel? And against organic based elements? Why lightning? Also neutral elements are not part of the template, thus they should not be posted.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Butyl Rubber Release
Custom element English name: Buchirugomurirīsu
The element is based on: Earth | Water | Lightning | Fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Butyl rubber is an elastic, airtight polymer that is both odorless and tasteless. It has a large amount of Viscoelasticity, allowing it to change form under stress, however it must be forced back into its original form, although it would go back to it if given enough time. Such are characteristics of rubber, which has been seen in the manga, but not directly. Rubber is hinted to be in narutoverse due to Amegakure's industrial manufacturing which would require rubber conveyor belts, so at least 1 form of rubber exists. Actually making it from the ground or from your body requires Earth, Water, Fire, and Lightning. Lightning and Earth combined makes things like steel, and Earth and Water make rather muddy substances. Fire and Earth makes lava and the rubber variant of it. By mixing together all 3 of these elements and adjusting the chakra ratio, Butyl rubber is born u-u
How it works: Butyl rubber is airtight elastomer, and is , allowing it to extend and retract at great speeds, but only does so under great stress. Due to this however, the speed in which it extends and retracts is much faster than what would be possible by other elastics. Compared to normal rubber, it is much harder but has a similair ability to be shaped. It is airtight, so it is densely compacted and is impermeable. In terms of defense, it is rather strong. Its viscoelasticity allows it to "bounce back" solid attacks, but is more vulnerable to techniques with piercing attributes. It can be made from ones body or the earth in the area can be manipulated the create Butyl rubber, from which the user can extend it at great speeds to attack or trap an opponent. Due to its immense strength an ability to retract, it would be able to tear off limbs. It also is very malleable, able to shaped into thin or thick contructs, arms made to grab an opponent and many other things
Usage Examples:
Buchirugomurirīsu: Jetto | Butyl Rubber Release: Jet
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a Buchirugomurirīsu technique that changes a specific body part to Butyl rubber. The user will forcibly reel his arm backwards, building up tension and power, then suddenly launch his arm forward, propelling it at speeds comparable to that of a bullet due to its elasticity, and retracts at the same speed, allowing for consecutive attacks. This can be used with ones legs or head, and is done through a similair process.

Buchirugomurirīsu: Blanket | Butyl Rubber Release: Mōfu
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will focus his Buchi chakra underneath the opponent, turning the ground underneath him into Butyl Rubber. It will then suddenly rise up and envelop the opponent, constricing the opponent and forming into an airtight bag that allows for no movement once one is trapped inside, and will suffocate and crush the opponent. This can be used as a trap, if the user knows where the Opponent will step

Buchirugomurirīsu: Gomutsūru | Butyl Rubber Release: Rubber Tools
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Either from the ground or their body, the user will release structures of Butyl rubber with immense strength from either the ground or from their bodys. These structures or tools can be blunt weapons, or pillars that wrap around an opponent and squeeze, having enough power to break limbs or even tear one off.

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth | Water | Lightning | Fire
Is weak to: Lightning: Lightning is very strong offensively and can pierce through the Butyl Rubber
Earth: Earth is also a powerful element, focusing on strong defenses and brutish strength
Blast Release: Blast Release techniques are incredibly powerful and do high explosive damage, allowing it to blow through Butyl Rubber with apparent ease
Is strong against: Fire: Fire doesnt have the sufficient power to break through butyl rubber and due to how tightly packed it is, is resistant to heat. Other elements that focus on melting arent affective against butyl rubber either
Water: Water lacks enough power as well, and Butyl rubber is a rather strong defense
Wind: Wind lacks the power to break through butyl, Butyl being airtight and impermeable also adds to its strength against wind
Dark Release: Butyl has a strength over Dark Release, specifically its absorption abilities since it is rather thick and strong like earth
Boil/Scorch: Butyl is not vulnerable to heat and is rather resistant, renderings these techniques ineffective
Co-creator: /
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: We already have both a canon and custom rubber element.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name:

Eki Seshiumu kaihou

Custom element English name:

Liquid Cesium release

The element is based on:

Chakra Control + earth + lightning + fire

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

The element is easily possible, as the user would use their chakra as a medium, to find the cesium minerals in the earth, and thereafter change the properties of the earth around it to cesium itself. This would create the pure cesium mineral ore, that would be utilized as any other earth based element in the narutoverse, such as deidaras exploding clay. Cesium however, also has a unique property, similar to that of light storage, it builds up an electric charge in sunlight, and thus one must also keep the lightning stored within, at check so as to not corrode, or corrupt the mineral. Once the ore is created, the user utilizes their fire based chakra, and melts the ore, into a liquid for manipulation and use.

How it works:

Similar to many elements in the narutoverse cesium has two ways of release:

Main release state: When cesium is released, in its main state, the user, takes advantage of its low melting point, and heats up the element internally utilizing fire chakra, that allows the manipulation, and use of its liquid form.

Advanced release state: By taking advantage of its natural electrical storage properties, the user amplifies this within the cesium, and makes a stronger electrical effect.

Usage Examples:

Cesium release: Expunge
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After changing earth beneath the crust into cesium ore, the user will melt it, and force it upwards for various purposes of creation, such as spikes, pillars, shields, etc.

Cesium Release: Envelop
Rank: A
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A (+10-20(if electricity is stored)
Description: The user will cause liquid cesium, to envelop his/her body, in its fullest, conforming to all their curves, allowing free movement. The cesium will absorb incoming lightning based attacks, and displace it onto the outside of the armor.
Restrictions:
-Usable thrice
-Lasts a single turn, then the cesium will drip off the user

Cesium Release: Liquid cesium control
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, will utilize their chakra, and take control of any liquid based cesium in range, and manipulate its shape, positioning, and size in many ways
Restrictions:
-no cesium based techniques above B rank in the turn after
-Usable thrice

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over earth, lightning, fire and have great chakra control
Is weak to:
Earth- Earths properties, and dense structure outmatch that of cesium.
Metal based elements- Cesium, is far too soft of a metal element, to have any impact against other metals, in addition most metals are far denser.
Wind based elements- Cesium, is soft enough to be cut by strong winds, as well, as neutralizing the electrical charge.
Extremely high temperature elements-They can cause cesium to boil, and turn to gas which cannot be controlled

Is strong against:
Water based elements- Cesium is far stronger an ddenser then water.
Lightning based elements- Cesium's properties, absorb lightning, like a magnet, and can also store the electricity
Fire based elements- Liquid cesium can douse fire, as its boiling point is mnuch higher

Co-creator:Akisha
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

Changes made:
-Removed multi-state
-Removed explosion when in contact with water
-Added Akisha the original submitter as co-creator
-Changed strengths and weaknesses

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✗ Declined: For starters you didn't show me the previous submission, which is annoying as I need to know what I said before, even more so because you act like you just are following up on Akisha's submission even though I already declined this once for you too because it was too similar to Francium. Secondly you didn't provide any proof. What you wrote in fact falls mostly under How It Works, you need to prove that it exists or might exist in the Narutoverse. Thirdly to bypass that it's similar to Francium you just pretty much removed those abilities, so the only thing you have now is a liquid metal, which also already exists, that photoemissive properties which you, based on the little amount of info you gave, is pulled out of proportion. As I understand it has the ability to absorb light energy and release electrons, that is already something different from absorbing lightning. This is also a passive ability of which you have no control as it happens automatically and I have my doubts about the strength of the released electrons of which you likewise have no control. Finally the qualities a solid has does not have to be necessarily the same its liquid form has. Without that photoemissive ability, this CE isn't worth much and as I currently see it, that ability is something you are pulling out of proportion.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Fuzeiton
Custom element English name: Molten Air
The element is based on: Wind + Fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): By using extreme chakra control the user manipulates wind into being compressed and heated with fire chakra, into a critical point where it turns into a supercritical fluid by the heat of braking friction, increasing its destructive capabilities and is re-released as a 'shell' of compressed, heated air. Then able to be push foward with a kick for example, to produce a laser-straight current of molten wind, concentrated techniques or molten are are always incredibly fast and have sharp edges. Of course, it's not restricted to laster like currents of molten wind only, the user can produce other techniques with it, more winde spread techniques instead of concentrated ones. This helps the use generate dense blasts of air to hammer at his opponents such as creating walls of molten air that can block attacks and push enemies away, proportionately larger and stronger walls are even capable of repelling solid projectiles/techniques. Molten air has swift properties of wind, with slightly icreased speed and is super heated, being in a compressed state, it can deal heavy force damage with wide spread techniques as well as piercing damage to the target(s) with more concentrated ones; while burning them up to some degree. The state in which Molten Air is made is in a semi liquid like gelid sate of heated air.

How it works: When using the concentrated variation of Molten Air, the user will do so directly from their body. And regardless of size or structure of the technique, it will move at an incredible speed once released. The concentrated version will work like amazing speeded lazers of Molten air or even waves/blade of such. On the contrary, when using the more wide spread version of Molten Air, the user can induce molten air chakra into the earth or into the air itself to either create techniques from the ground below a target or create entities in the air such as walls of molten air. The user can even use natural air as a source for Molten Air techniques, by sucking in natural air into their system via their mouth to serve as air intaker where air is then compressed and heated into the supercritical fluid by the heat of braking friction, and is re-released as a 'shell' thus, creating Molten Air. Just like this, the user can also use weapons specifically designed to absorb the air from the atmosphere where the weapon itself will compress it and heat it into molten air, however to do so, the user must submit it as a custom weapon in the custom jutsu thread, this would save the user the chakra and effort of having to manually mold chakra and create molten air. Molten air can be used any way that wind that can be used, except its properties will be different. It can be used to creates blasts with it's widespread variation or tornados, orbs to suffocate victims, or anything else within the user's imagination.

Example of concentrated Molten Air
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Usage Examples:
Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over both Fire and Wind. Atleast Kage rank.
Is weak to:
A rank and higher earth techniques can stop a widespread technique of Molten Air, however it's concentrated state can pierce though Earth techniques while dropping 1 rank, with the exception of S rank earth techniques.
Fire - Despite it's liquid like state, Molten Air's widespread state is still weak to fire, as fire get rid and overpower the wind portion of Molten Air.
Water - Molten Air's widespread state can be overlapped by vasts amounts of water, nullufying the strength behind the Molten Air techniques, of equal rank or lower.
Potential water and fire CE varitations.
Is strong against:
Lightning and Wind CE variations.
Sound - Wind is a natural weakness of sound, Molten Air can easily break though sound techniques and/or over power them with ease, depending on their variation, either wide spread or concentrated. However it's only strong against projectile like sound techniques, not direct sound that effects the ears of the target.
Water - Molten Air's concentrated state can easily pass through water techniques of equal rank or lower.
Fire - Wide ranged fire techniques can be penetrated by the concentrated state of molten air, or 1 rank lower and below.
Earth - Molten Air's concentrated state can break through earth techniques of equal or lower rank.
Lightning - Molten Air is specially strong against lightning, being it's natural weakness, a more heavy state can out match lightning techniques with ease. Commonly, Molten air's wide ranged variation is the one with the advantage against Lightning.
Co-creator: Teno (Although i'm beast so i did most of it)
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: For starters you didn't provide a shred of proof, you just explained what it is, but you didn't provide anything that serves as a reason as to why this would be possible. Overall I can only see this as the reasoning of a child. I have never heart of something like molten air, not in the real world, let alone in Naruto and the way how you explain it is just plain childish "I just melt air". If something like that actually would be possible, then you should prove it, which you didn't do. Then you just randomly add the abilities you just want, regardless of whether it's logical or not. I seriously wonder if you're not doing this on purpose, especially with the comment of "i'm beast, so i did most of it", which again sounds childish. The only thing I can think of that's remotely similar is Liquid Oxygen, which has been submitted both before and after you and both declined.

 
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