[Approved] Arashi Uzumaki Bio

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Name: Arashi Uzumaki

Nickname: Rudra

Gender: Male

Age: 14

Height: 165 cm

Weight: 58 kg

Clan: Uzumaki
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Looks:

Arashi bears a striking resemblance to the fourth hokage except for his orange hair, having blue eyes and spiky hair. In his early years at the Academy, Arashi was the shortest member of his circle of friends. By the time of his graduation, he was taller than every female in his graduating class. He has the charm that most girls notice him in his academy.



Personality:

He was lazy but but did what he liked to the utmost perfection. He believed that this world has long way to attain peace and he should be the one leading the will left to him by the ancestors of shinobi world. He was a bit arrogant but a certain incident changed his arrogance. He had a great potential but was driven only by his will and hence he did excel in his studies but graduated the academy at age of 7.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
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Village of Alliance: /

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: S-Jounin
Specialty: /
Elements: Wind - needs training
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info


History:

General

Arashi is the only child of his family. As a child, Arashi grew up feeling greatly overshadowed by the legacies of his clan. As a result, his early development as a ninja after enrolling in the Academy involved him trying to greatly distance himself from association with the exploits of his forebears, desperate to escape their shadows and be recognized as an exceptional shinobi in his own right, not just due to his lineage. He showed great potential and concentration during training but when it comes to exam his lack of interest made him score less. Strangely Arashi did not show any signs of hatred or vengence on the people responsible for his clan's loss although his father seemed so obsessed with it. He understood the functioning of a Village and the responsibilities of a Hokage. He never even wished to become a hokage. He was conserned only on the attaining peace to oneself and thus rendering it to the world. Though becoming a ninja was completely irrelevant to this he believed that becoming a ninja helped him to know more about himself. The more he advances as a Ninja the more he lerns about his abilities and the more he could contribute towards his goal.

Academy Arc

When Arashi was eight, Arashi snuck out of his home to walk around the village at night, encountering one of his class mate from the inuzuka clan in the training grounds. He challenged his mate to a sparring match and initially began to dominate his opponent, but his singular focus on beating him down and showing off his skill left him unaware of his surroundings, allowing a Takigakure missing-nin who had infiltrated the village to get the drop on them both. Terrified of the very real threat of a high-level enemy, he attempted to flee to the hills in a panic, driving his mate to vain attempts to protect him. His mate's continued efforts, despite the significant risk to himself, to protect Arashi inspired him to combine their efforts against their stronger opponent. Still, the duo was eventually overpowered, on blocking a certain blow from the enemy charged towards Arashi, his mate was hurt seriously. This made his heart burn and providing him a overwhelmed power which fatally wounds the enemy. Soon the Anbu arrives and takes care of the situation. This incident also not only signified the end of Arashi's bullying mentality, but the beginning of a strong friendship between himself and the inuzuka.

Other

Famiily:

His father and mother along with their team mate left ushiogakure on a mission to gather intel. While his team mate returned with the gathered intel they both stayed for more intel. Later that week they heard that Uzhioogakure was destroyed. They rushed to their village but saw only dust and rumble covering their clan members' dead body. His father was enraged but his mother tried to convince him on starting a new life far away from their village. After a few years of wandering , the finally got settled in konohagakure under the consent of the second hokage. After five years of arashi's birth his mother was killed during a fight with the sand village. His father raised him till his teen age and died due to a disease a a year before he became a chunin.


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Lost: 0

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Change his parents then it is approvable. Also you cant so cialize in shadow clone because you never learned them. Since youre new, I assume yiu dont have any training so you need to state you need training in those elements
 
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Instead of posting stupid posts like "Nice Bio" and "Cool bio" why don't you guys help him considering the fact that this is his first bio and it is way too flawed to be approved.

1. Change the parents. Customs bios can be linked with cannon characters to certain extent but not this much. You cannot be the son of Sakura and naruto.

2. With the above being said, rewrite the history part removing all the reference to Naruto and Sakura.

3. Add "Needs training" to the wind.
 
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I think Kirabi encountered something like this when he mentioned he was related to Killer Bee. Caliburn said no direct relation that affects the actual story or somewhere along those lines. I am sure you can come up with a better character that reflects you or someone you would see yourself as. Also for story, think of his struggles and how he overcame them. What was his motivation to become a ninja? What were his weaknesses/flaws/strengths? Tell us about his parents if he has any (and no it can't be Naruto or Sakura). You can however, write about how Naruto, Sakura, or people like them motivated/inspired him. Put yourself in his shoes and describe his feelings, worries, dreams.

Just some advice. :)
 
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Instead of posting stupid posts like "Nice Bio" and "Cool bio" why don't you guys help him considering the fact that this is his first bio and it is way too flawed to be approved.
Probably because half of the people who commented or more don't have a bio themselves so they have no way of knowing. They just admire the looks and the bio for what it is. Lol

I like your comment though. Ya got a little Moxxi in ya.
 
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