Nice tag mate, I agree somewhat with Horus said. The background is just a smidgen over blurred, if you used a guassian blur I would suggest lowering the strength to around 0.4px. If you didn't use a guassian blur, then I suggest you try it, using the strength I just mentioned. It will give the depth a more natural look.
As for the color, I love it!! and the lighting is really well executed. But it needs some shading in there to help give the piece some contrast. If you balance the lighting and shading it will help in more ways than one, not only will it give the tag some balance but it will also improve the overall atmosphere, as well as help with depth.
Text is nothing to fear, however it is something that will make or break a tag. To begin with I suggest taking time to practice with simple and standard fonts. A good combination is using impact for the main feature of your text, with smaller sub text in ariel and/or verdana, like this below. The main text is impact, and the sub text is verdana and ariel with some tiny text brushes for extra effects. It looks a bit average, but there is no tag behind it for it to blend with this is simply an example.
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Anyway its still a pretty good tag so good job and KIU
