[Approved] Anei Sora, My first bio

maughany303

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Basic Information
Name: Anei Sora
Nickname: Sora
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Clan: none

Looks: Jet black hair with a spike shaped fringe that covers his left eye, the top of his hair is spiked up and the sides are much shorter than the rest of his hair and are flat. He has cold, black eyes that give the impression that they look deep into your soul. He has a scar going from the top of his right ear to his chin. He has a slightly crooked nose, the bridge of it curves to the left slightly. His mouth is like a little slit on his face, he has very thin lips. He wears a tight black vest top that starts at his neck and ends at his beltline, he has a picture of a silver dragon spiralling around breathing fire. On his upper left arm he has a tattoo of two daggers crossing each other, on his right forearm he has a script which says "If you don't value yourself then no one will." He wears black skin tight pants that has Yin on his left leg and Yang on his right. He has a pouch on his right leg where he stores his kunai's and a pouch on his right leg where he stores his shurikens. His footwear is boots with a hidden blade in the front of each one, the blades are dipped in poison also. He has two sheaths strapped to his back which carry his swords, his signature yin yang swords. His yin yang swords are named these because one has a black hilt with a black blade and the other has a white hilt with a white blade. He stands at 6' 4" and has a broad build but can move surprisingly fast for his height and build.
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he is kinda like Kakashi but with black hair and obviously with out face mask.
Personality: Cheeky, arrogant, methodical.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kirigakure
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Village of Alliance: Kirigakure
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Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Gennin
Specialty: none
Elements: Wind
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needs training.


Your ninjutsu: Henge no Jutsu, 変化の術 "Transformation Jutsu"

Clone Technique (分身の術, Bunshin no Jutsu

Background Info.
History: As soon as Sora was able to walk he had dual swords in hand and was training with his father who was a skilled swordsman and blacksmith. He first started training seriously at the age of 5 when his father crafted him his beloved yin yang swords.He was gifted them on his 5th birthday and as soon as they were in his hands he was outside practicing, going through movements he had seen his father do, he failed miserably of course but he thought he was the best thing since sliced bread. His father saw the enthusiasm that Sora had and offered to teach him to which he accepted within a blink of an eye. Over the next 3 years he endured strenuous training sessions that left him physically and mentally drained after each day, but the next morning he would rise with the same determination that had enveloped him at the start of his journey. He was improving vastly, he had mastered nearly quarter of the moves his father knew. One night though shinobi from another village broke into his house whilst Sora was cleaning his swords and sharpening them, his father and mother were out celebrating their anniversary. The two shinobi were gennin and lacked adequate stealth skills and knocked over a vase which alerted Sora. He was frightened by the noise but mustered the will to go and inspect, his swords trembling in his hands as he edged towards his bedroom door. He slid around the door and saw the two shinobi picking up the pieces of the vase and the taller one of them was quietly scolding the one who had knocked over the vase. Unfortunately a creaky floorboard alerted them to Sora's presence and they turned around and smiled at him and pulled out there kunai's when they spotted his swords. They teased around with him at first, giving him little nicks eith the kunai and Sora started too cry, they then started too punch and kick him, not letting him get up off the floor. They were laughing at him like he was weak, he was getting frustrated by there laughing, he wanted them too shut up. The anger buikding inside of him finally broke free and he swung at the taller shinobi, catching him on the leg. He stood up and adopted his stance, breathing heavily, tears streaming down his face. He screamed in anger and charged towards the shinobi who side stepped him but Sora quickly spun on his heels and stuck his swords into the clumsy ninja's stomach causing him too double over and spit blood on the floor. The taller one now got angry and swung his kunai at Sora who tried to dodge it but he wasn't quick enough and the kunai dragged across his face, giving him a deep cut on his cheek. The taller shinobi started laughing again whcich riled sora up even more and he charged at the shinobi, hacking away at him, but the shinobi was dodging his blows and laughing even more. Sora stopped attacking and retreated to the end of the hallway to collect his thoughts. There ws no way he was going to beat him if he kept attacking him the way he was now. He cautiously walked back over to the shinobi, swords drawn. He remembered the latest combo his father showed him, he had dubbed it the spinning lotus. Sora ran at the shinobi and slid under his legs and swung his legs around, catching bot of the shinobi's legs causing him to hover in the air. Then he swung upwards with his yin blade followed by his yang blade at a high speed causing him to spin on a horizontal axis in the air, cutting away at the shinobi. Sora landed on the ground panting and the shinobi landed in a bloody heap on the floor, motionless. Sora walked back into his room,shocked by the current events. He had just killed 2 shinobi but he was only young. His father came in not long after the battle finished and came up the stairs to find the two ninja's lying dead. He burst into Sora's room to make sure he was ok but noticed that he was fine except the cut on his cheek. This was Sora's first taste of combat and he showed he could handle himself. It was time for his father to increase the standard of Sora's training.

After the fight his father started teaching him ninjutsu as well as sword techniques. He found it much more difficult to learn the ninjutsu techniques. His father wasn't too skilled at using ninjutsu either he only knew the basic mist techniques, which he taught Sora. Sora learned them after about a year since he training and kept on practicing them so by the age of 12 he had perfected them and most of the sword techniques his father taught him. On his 12th birthday his father told him that they were to go travelling throughout the nations to see which sword techniques he could learn and which new ninjutsu techniques. They travelled far and wide for the next 4 years. Sora had developed into a well built master swordsman that rivalled the skill of his father and found that he had an affinity for wind chakra as well as water when they stopped off in Sungakure. Whilst he was there they met an old man who was also a wind chakra user and Sora asked for him to teach him. The old man accepted but said he could only teach him if he could prove himself. Sora demonstrated all of his sword techniques and his basic water techniques which impressed the old man and he began to teach him. Sora learnt a total of 3 techniques under the old man before his father unfortunately became gravely ill so it cut his training time short. It seems his father picked up a deadly disease whilst in a different village but his symptons didn't show until it was too late. His father wanted to be with his wife in his dying moments so Sora and his father travelled as quickly as possible from Sungakure to Kirigakure via horse drawn karts. On the way home they were attacked by rogue ninja who were looking for some easy money, Sora quickly dispatched of these ninja with ease which took him by surprise, it shoed how much he had grown since that night, he was proud of himself for achieving what he had in these past few years. His father was growing slowly weaker and time was of the essence, so they sped home. They reached Kirigakure and went straight to the hospital where the med-nin estimated that he had one week too live, there ws no way they could cure him or prolong his life, the disease was too advanced and nothing could be done. Sora spent the next week at his fathers bedside, only going home to get washed and get clean clothes. He was by his fathers side as he passed away, his fathers last words to him were to get stronger and master all the techniques he can. Once his father passed away he went home, got a rucksack and filled it with essentials, said goodbye to his mother and went to find a sensei who could teach him more jutsu's and help him fufil his goal.

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these are Sora's beloved weapons, he treasures them more than his life as they were his first swords and they also hold sentimental value as his deceased father crafted them for him

Theme Song and Background Music: Five Finger Death Punch - The Way of the Fist
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Battles

Won: none
Lost: none

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Rand al'Thor

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pics dude..pics..looks bland..put pics and it will be a good bio...and u cant heve d ranked jutsus..u dnt have any training yet...remove it and keep only the basic e ranked justus..
 

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Add pictures and colour if you know how.
Also remove water and wind from your specialty as you can only have something as a specialty once you've mastered it ^^
Unless it's a cannon character but this isn't so yeah.
Though I haven't read it, I like the fact you put effort in your history! Nice.
 

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Unfortunately I can't find any pics matching the description of my character, so either I'm gonna have to draw one or hope people are good at using their imagination xD
 

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Choose a single element to begin with due to your rank. Water or wind, not both. And also state you need training on it. A picture of your character would be nice^^
 
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