Analyzing The End.

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Instead of giving global expectations i'll briefly go through the most important characters being focused right now or i'll forget many stuff and i'll never get out of here:

Kaguya - I'm not sure whether i want her to get sealed, realize the pain she's caused and get the chance to apologize or get a change of heart, undo her deeds and somehow finally disappear. All i know is that i want her to have redeeming qualities like all the other main villains before but at the same time for her crimes with her existence (her disappearance/death/sacrifice would also give her closure by sending her next to her sons).

Naruto - I want to see him being ackowledged (this time by the whole world) and become Hokage (that's the whole point of the manga right?), but i want to see him offering the place to Sasuke and through an agreement both get to share the place.
Other than that i'd like to see him adressing Hinata and ask her to be his wife.

Sasuke - I want him to share the same attention as Naruto and be forgiven by his peers, kages, etc... Then i want him to fight with Naruto over who should be Hokage and when they stalemate, reach the conclusion that a union would be most beneficial to the village.
I'd also like to see him accepting Karin as his wife.

Sakura - I want Tsunade to ackowledge that she finally got surpassed and in a sense pass the torch to her. If she could give Lee a chance to be her lover that would be great.
Other than that she can lead the medical corps in Konoha and serve as one of the backbones of the village together with Naruto and Sasuke.

^ that proves i'd make an awful writer and that my imagination is more limited than Milla Jovovich's 'boobs' Lol
Hahaha that was great man and I liked how you ended it lol. I mean yes there are a lot of things I don't agree with but I respect every thing you said and thank you for sharing.

I did like the fact that you said naruto would be acknowledge and give his spot to sasuke after becoming hokage himself that would be nice. I didn't really understand what you said about kaguya but I think I agree lol.

Again thx for sharing!
 

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Hahaha that was great man and I liked how you ended it lol. I mean yes there are a lot of things I don't agree with but I respect every thing you said and thank you for sharing.

I did like the fact that you said naruto would be acknowledge and give his spot to sasuke after becoming hokage himself that would be nice. I didn't really understand what you said about kaguya but I think I agree lol.

Again thx for sharing!
Thanks for your input :D

Regarding Kaguya. I came up with two options that i think would both be acceptable:

- She gets sealed, meanwhile understands that she was wrong all the time and apologizes to Naruto and Sasuke as if they were her sons before finally fading away (giving her the quality of redemption, though in her case it would come to late and at a high cost, but would still be somewhat symbolic)...

or

- She gets a change of heart (aka talk no jutsu), isn't sealed (either because N&S can't do it or because she changes before they can seal her), releases everyone from IT and leaves a world where she doesn't belong anymore to find peace and closure next to her sons (in other words she somehow ceases to exist/dies, but on her terms; this would also give her the quality of redemption that previous villains shared).
 
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Thanks for your input :D

Regarding Kaguya. I came up with two options that i think would both be acceptable:

- She gets sealed, meanwhile understands that she was wrong all the time and apologizes to Naruto and Sasuke as if they were her sons before finally fading away (giving her the quality of redemption, though in her case it would come to late and at a high cost, but would still be somewhat symbolic)...

or

- She gets a change of heart (aka talk no jutsu), isn't sealed (either because N&S can't do it or because she changes before they can seal her), releases everyone from IT and leaves a world where she doesn't belong anymore to find peace and closure next to her sons (in other words she somehow ceases to exist/dies, but on her terms; this would also give her the quality of redemption that previous villains shared).
Those are some nice ideas tbh. I think the first one is more probable tho.

Btw if you had to create your own ending, is this how you would have done it or would you have done it differently?

If so, I'd like to hear how you would have ended it.
 
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Those are some nice ideas tbh. I think the first one is more probable tho.

Btw if you had to create your own ending, is this how you would have done it or would you have done it differently?

If so, I'd like to hear how you would have ended it.
I think the first option is much more realistic, but personally i'd end Kaguya using the second one.
It would emphasize her might further and it would possibly be an harder situation for her because in the first scenario she kind of has no choice but to accept her fate while in the second scenario she would be feeling guilty and compelled by N&S, which would eventually result in her change of heart and search for her own peace, not the world's.
 

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I think the first option is much more realistic, but personally i'd end Kaguya using the second one.
It would emphasize her might further and it would possibly be an harder situation for her because in the first scenario she kind of has no choice but to accept her fate while in the second scenario she would be feeling guilty and compelled by N&S, which would eventually result in her change of heart and search for her own peace, not the world's.
Can't argue with that, sounds good to me, thanks for contributing, again haha =D
 

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Man I knew you had great ideas haha that's why I asked.
Thanks :)

It would be so cool if Naruto and sasuke are standing on top of the mountain and sasuke is supporting him. Do you think they should fight each other before that happens kinda like hashi and madara did when hashi was ready to kill himself?
Yeah a similar situation to that. Hashirama and Madara came to an agreement when Hashirama was willing to sacrifice himself as per Madara's statement "either kill your brother or kill yourself". However, after Hashirama became Hokage, the Uchiha clan mainly supported Hashirama. This combined with Tobirama's scrutiny toward the Uchiha led to Madara's defection from the Leaf. In my situation, Naruto and Sasuke have a reconciliation after their fight. So even though Naruto is chosen as the Hokage, Sasuke will support him unlike with Hashirama and Madara.
 

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Thanks :)

Yeah a similar situation to that. Hashirama and Madara came to an agreement when Hashirama was willing to sacrifice himself as per Madara's statement "either kill your brother or kill yourself". However, after Hashirama became Hokage, the Uchiha clan mainly supported Hashirama. This combined with Tobirama's scrutiny toward the Uchiha led to Madara's defection from the Leaf. In my situation, Naruto and Sasuke have a reconciliation after their fight. So even though Naruto is chosen as the Hokage, Sasuke will support him unlike with Hashirama and Madara.
Very nice sparks, I agree. There is the whole theme of friendship so I think k11 will always support sasuke regardless like shikamaru said in part one when they left to search for sasuke "he will always remain a ninja of the hidden leaf" (and on top of that he is the only uchiha left anyways haha) so yes unlike madara he won't feel rejected.

Also this is where the events of the war will have an effect, there won't be as much hate in the ninja world since countries are already pretty united which will make it possible for them to take it to a bigger scale and build an entire ninja world for everyone rather than just village
 

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No no no! Sakura dying would just be a terrible move. u.u I think after they beat Kaguya Orochimaru will take the spot as the FV, posses Sasuke somehow and mess stuff up. Sasuke later gets saved. Sasuke and Naruto fight for some random reason. The end. Really don't know what's gonna happen and I don't want to bother thinking about it. I'll just leave it to Kishi and hope he wraps it up in a good way and redeems himself for the shallow state the manga is currently in. (It got better with the recent chapter tough.)
 

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No no no! Sakura dying would just be a terrible move. u.u I think after they beat Kaguya Orochimaru will take the spot as the FV, posses Sasuke somehow and mess stuff up. Sasuke later gets saved. Sasuke and Naruto fight for some random reason. The end. Really don't know what's gonna happen and I don't want to bother thinking about it. I'll just leave it to Kishi and hope he wraps it up in a good way and redeems himself for the shallow state the manga is currently in. (It got better with the recent chapter tough.)
Well that's...interesting

Thanks for reading
 
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