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(AMV) Uchiha Obito - I lost my way
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This looked promising at the beginning, especially with the song choice, but it fell flat later on. The clips didn't go with the lyrics as time went. This had massive potential.
B- I'd give this. The beginning was really great until 0:50, then the lyrics started making no sense and it just went a little downhill.
The mid section and the end were decent but like I said, out of tune and weren't as great as the start.
This AMV had tons of potential; it had a chance to push for the A- or A but it just didn't go so well after the first 50 seconds.
I don't know if you made this or not but I would work on keeping the whole piece solid rather than have a 50 second awesomeness and go downhill. Also, if you really do want to have a climax in your AMV than you should put it more around the middle so the beginning of the video builds up to the climax. Keep it up if it's yours. :hooray::hooray::hooray:
The mid section and the end were decent but like I said, out of tune and weren't as great as the start.
This AMV had tons of potential; it had a chance to push for the A- or A but it just didn't go so well after the first 50 seconds.
I don't know if you made this or not but I would work on keeping the whole piece solid rather than have a 50 second awesomeness and go downhill. Also, if you really do want to have a climax in your AMV than you should put it more around the middle so the beginning of the video builds up to the climax. Keep it up if it's yours. :hooray::hooray::hooray: