nice keep up the good work
Sophie Ezra Active member Veteran Joined Aug 20, 2010 Messages 4,627 Kin 719💸 Kumi 2,500💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Awards Oct 16, 2011 #21 nice keep up the good work
ninjastormgenaration33 Active member Elite Joined Jul 2, 2011 Messages 5,154 Kin 0💸 Kumi 0💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Oct 17, 2011 #22 Nice 5/5
Vroqrak Active member Legendary Joined Sep 13, 2011 Messages 14,062 Kin 216💸 Kumi 511💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Awards Oct 17, 2011 #23 i <3 you
Rozzy Active member Elite Joined Sep 7, 2011 Messages 8,150 Kin 0💸 Kumi 0💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Oct 17, 2011 #24 pure class, great imagination if you can draw it wud be great any chance you can post me how often they come out?
pure class, great imagination if you can draw it wud be great any chance you can post me how often they come out?
XxPrinceofthenightxX Member Joined Oct 16, 2011 Messages 5 Kin 0💸 Kumi 0💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Oct 17, 2011 #25 NIceeee~ Are you gonna make it a manga? That would be awesome!
Saberwulf Active member Veteran Joined Apr 8, 2011 Messages 2,836 Kin 0💸 Kumi 0💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Oct 20, 2011 #26 it was hard for me to read the whole thing but i did it here's a suggestion some details are unneccesary but some can be important just work on applying details in the right places oh my gawsh i am gonna get flamed
it was hard for me to read the whole thing but i did it here's a suggestion some details are unneccesary but some can be important just work on applying details in the right places oh my gawsh i am gonna get flamed
damoney8888 Active member Regular Joined Apr 19, 2011 Messages 1,649 Kin 0💸 Kumi 0💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Oct 21, 2011 #27 nice story
Seffy Member Joined Aug 13, 2011 Messages 9,367 Kin 0💸 Kumi 0💴 Trait Points 0⚔️ Awards Oct 24, 2011 #28 great start! now i'll go read the second chapter