nice keep up the good work
Sophie Ezra Anbu Operative 🎭 Veteran Joined Aug 20, 2010 Messages 4,627 Reaction score 407 Oct 16, 2011 #21 nice keep up the good work
ninjastormgenaration33 Sannin of the Scrolls 📜 Elite Joined Jul 2, 2011 Messages 5,154 Reaction score 241 Oct 17, 2011 #22 Nice 5/5
Vroqrak Kage in the Making 👑 Legendary Joined Sep 13, 2011 Messages 14,081 Reaction score 357 Oct 17, 2011 #23 i <3 you
Rozzy Sannin of the Scrolls 📜 Elite Joined Sep 7, 2011 Messages 8,150 Reaction score 235 Oct 17, 2011 #24 pure class, great imagination if you can draw it wud be great any chance you can post me how often they come out?
pure class, great imagination if you can draw it wud be great any chance you can post me how often they come out?
XxPrinceofthenightxX Member Joined Oct 16, 2011 Messages 5 Reaction score 0 Oct 17, 2011 #25 NIceeee~ Are you gonna make it a manga? That would be awesome!
Saberwulf Anbu Operative 🎭 Veteran Joined Apr 8, 2011 Messages 2,836 Reaction score 105 Oct 20, 2011 #26 it was hard for me to read the whole thing but i did it here's a suggestion some details are unneccesary but some can be important just work on applying details in the right places oh my gawsh i am gonna get flamed
it was hard for me to read the whole thing but i did it here's a suggestion some details are unneccesary but some can be important just work on applying details in the right places oh my gawsh i am gonna get flamed
damoney8888 Jōnin Strategist 🧠 Regular Joined Apr 19, 2011 Messages 1,649 Reaction score 69 Oct 21, 2011 #27 nice story
Seffy Member Joined Aug 13, 2011 Messages 9,367 Reaction score 812 Oct 24, 2011 #28 great start! now i'll go read the second chapter