Uzamki Seerar
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Title- Dragonball Z Sayains return
Chapter 2:
The tale of intense cruelty
Note: Nissan is the Japanese word for brother or older brother.
Coras: Brother you are in fact still alive I knew you was not in hell for sure because I was thrown in there myself.
Zeldok: Nissan, Nissan …. How… why would you be in hell you saved my life you was the nicest being that I have seen and I have been on many planets and I have met many beings that have been kind but your kindness was far superior….nissan….nissan…HOW COULD YOU HAVE BEEN THROWN IN HELL WHAT EVIL HAVE YOU DONE OR HAVE THE GODS WRONGED YOU?
Note: zeldok says “have the gods wronged you” this is sarcasm he is making it clear that his older brother must’ve done something to go to hell he is confident that the gods couldn’t wrong him.
Coras: Foolish little brother of course they wronged me I was born pure good and died purer good yet they threw me down in a ditch……(fist clutch ,lip biting)…… I am not having a conversation with you brother but I will tell you my tale to you and the worlds this broadcast is been broadcasted in every location where there is beings in the real world and the other world thanks to the finest wizard babidi.
I am working with him because he wants a second chance in my opinoun if you are sent to hell for being merely a sayain then everyone in hell is unjustly punishment no matter what they have done they deserve a second chance due to the error of the kais ladies and gentlemen I will tell you my pain and my hatred when I went to the afterlife.
(Flash back)When I died from the devastating explosion of freizas final attack on planet vegeta me and my brother was caught in the cross fire I had to save my toddler brother and in doing so It cost me my life I was only 16.
I woke up in chains just trying to relize that I have died and I was thrown by guards to a giant man king yamma.
King yamma took one look at my tails and the bottom of the floor open and I fell straight to hell but not a normal hell no it was a special hell for only sayains it was called inner hell which was below the normal hell and had every sayain in there from the first to the last that had died.
The guards immediately torched me and attacked, abused and mocked me in all aspect minds, body and in soul. I was humiliated and abused for what felt like millions of years due to being in hell that’s exactly how it was especially in inner hell.
I saw almost every sayain with their pride wiped off their hearts and I used to protest my innocence but that later made me end up in a small deep narrow hole where my powers where stripped and I was in utter darkness for thousands of years I went in there for like a hundred times to escape the cruelty, it was my resting place but insanity crawls in your mind “you can never die will I be here forever for something? I didn’t even anything”.
Due to this many of the inmates killed themselves by stealing weapons from the guards and killing themselves, if you die in the other world then you do not exist I used pounder of how it would feel like to not exist I experience every single horrific abuse you could imagine it was truly hell for the wicked but I didn’t do anything.
Then one day in the hole I was in a voice screamed at me as I was going to become insane it said “what have you done coras you haven’t done anything you have kindness still in your heart that kindness is like a flame that has water thrown at it which you have seen the horfic things but it will blaze and it will become your strength” suddenly I started to feel warm and my powers gradually returned year by year in that hell I used it but I spread my hope to everyone and planned my escape.
So I made a riot stole some keys and there it was my power I didn’t know how much strength I gained when I attached my tails I exploded in with power then I escaped and to the upper hell and made a packed with the inmates like frezza and others I needed them to make a riot.
I finally escaped hell but I had a mission my mission to go to the real world and find some dragon balls that I have heard about that goku used to gain strength of a super sayain to defeat frezza so I went to namek and I threatened them they listen and I first wished for a million sayains just to see if it worked and it did then I wished for 2 more wish again then I wished:
1. Planet zeo back
2. babdi
3. Sayains returned
4. Their powers back
Also i am going to make an empire in days I will send sayains to every inhabitant planet they will be its police force and they will be tailless and have a strength of a super sayain 1-3.
Then my military will all have a tail and in false super sayain to super sayain 3 , and my royal knights will have 2 tails and be at half way till a super sayain which is false super sayain (when goku fought lord slug he became false super sayain) and of course me I will soon give them this power from my own and ask the dragon to return my power I am half way till becoming a super sayain 2 an ultra sayain with 2 tails everyone will obey me I am the new justice and I have declared war on the kais and their allies and to anyone who opposes me I will become the ruler of this new worlds I am Coras king of all sayains air to the thrown to becoming supreme kai also I will soon conquer the other world and send the kais to hell……
Next chapter 3- Zeldok’s decision
Chapter 2:
The tale of intense cruelty
Note: Nissan is the Japanese word for brother or older brother.
Coras: Brother you are in fact still alive I knew you was not in hell for sure because I was thrown in there myself.
Zeldok: Nissan, Nissan …. How… why would you be in hell you saved my life you was the nicest being that I have seen and I have been on many planets and I have met many beings that have been kind but your kindness was far superior….nissan….nissan…HOW COULD YOU HAVE BEEN THROWN IN HELL WHAT EVIL HAVE YOU DONE OR HAVE THE GODS WRONGED YOU?
Note: zeldok says “have the gods wronged you” this is sarcasm he is making it clear that his older brother must’ve done something to go to hell he is confident that the gods couldn’t wrong him.
Coras: Foolish little brother of course they wronged me I was born pure good and died purer good yet they threw me down in a ditch……(fist clutch ,lip biting)…… I am not having a conversation with you brother but I will tell you my tale to you and the worlds this broadcast is been broadcasted in every location where there is beings in the real world and the other world thanks to the finest wizard babidi.
I am working with him because he wants a second chance in my opinoun if you are sent to hell for being merely a sayain then everyone in hell is unjustly punishment no matter what they have done they deserve a second chance due to the error of the kais ladies and gentlemen I will tell you my pain and my hatred when I went to the afterlife.
(Flash back)When I died from the devastating explosion of freizas final attack on planet vegeta me and my brother was caught in the cross fire I had to save my toddler brother and in doing so It cost me my life I was only 16.
I woke up in chains just trying to relize that I have died and I was thrown by guards to a giant man king yamma.
King yamma took one look at my tails and the bottom of the floor open and I fell straight to hell but not a normal hell no it was a special hell for only sayains it was called inner hell which was below the normal hell and had every sayain in there from the first to the last that had died.
The guards immediately torched me and attacked, abused and mocked me in all aspect minds, body and in soul. I was humiliated and abused for what felt like millions of years due to being in hell that’s exactly how it was especially in inner hell.
I saw almost every sayain with their pride wiped off their hearts and I used to protest my innocence but that later made me end up in a small deep narrow hole where my powers where stripped and I was in utter darkness for thousands of years I went in there for like a hundred times to escape the cruelty, it was my resting place but insanity crawls in your mind “you can never die will I be here forever for something? I didn’t even anything”.
Due to this many of the inmates killed themselves by stealing weapons from the guards and killing themselves, if you die in the other world then you do not exist I used pounder of how it would feel like to not exist I experience every single horrific abuse you could imagine it was truly hell for the wicked but I didn’t do anything.
Then one day in the hole I was in a voice screamed at me as I was going to become insane it said “what have you done coras you haven’t done anything you have kindness still in your heart that kindness is like a flame that has water thrown at it which you have seen the horfic things but it will blaze and it will become your strength” suddenly I started to feel warm and my powers gradually returned year by year in that hell I used it but I spread my hope to everyone and planned my escape.
So I made a riot stole some keys and there it was my power I didn’t know how much strength I gained when I attached my tails I exploded in with power then I escaped and to the upper hell and made a packed with the inmates like frezza and others I needed them to make a riot.
I finally escaped hell but I had a mission my mission to go to the real world and find some dragon balls that I have heard about that goku used to gain strength of a super sayain to defeat frezza so I went to namek and I threatened them they listen and I first wished for a million sayains just to see if it worked and it did then I wished for 2 more wish again then I wished:
1. Planet zeo back
2. babdi
3. Sayains returned
4. Their powers back
Also i am going to make an empire in days I will send sayains to every inhabitant planet they will be its police force and they will be tailless and have a strength of a super sayain 1-3.
Then my military will all have a tail and in false super sayain to super sayain 3 , and my royal knights will have 2 tails and be at half way till a super sayain which is false super sayain (when goku fought lord slug he became false super sayain) and of course me I will soon give them this power from my own and ask the dragon to return my power I am half way till becoming a super sayain 2 an ultra sayain with 2 tails everyone will obey me I am the new justice and I have declared war on the kais and their allies and to anyone who opposes me I will become the ruler of this new worlds I am Coras king of all sayains air to the thrown to becoming supreme kai also I will soon conquer the other world and send the kais to hell……
Next chapter 3- Zeldok’s decision