Alone

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

I wrote this poem when i was a little depressed so please take that into account when you read it.

I am all alone in this world
Shrouded in mystery
Unable to love
Though I am unable to love I still try
And I shall try till the day i die

Rate and comment im open to criticism

 

[Kwalker394]

deep bro very deep U_U

 

[Sage of Infinity Paths]

i will reconsider it.
4/5 is my best score

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

deep bro very deep U_U

Thank you.

 

[Crimson Kurenai]

Nice poem bro.

 

[OhReary]

2.8/5
It's alright

 

[Scooby Doo]

Its ok. Try more metaphors.

 

[Zombie]

Flat. Trying to be dark doesn't work too well with a limited vocabulary.