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Yeah, I've tried short ones, just never really got into it :/

But I'll keep trying. Maybe there are some that might interest me.
There are many types depends on the person.
Most like romance, some adventure and some horror.
I don't like any with horror I read one and couldn't sleep. It was konoha dead high or something. I like adventure and love romance ones. Anyway you should find your type.
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

So it's confirmed, Kaguya have the Byakugan before she ate the fruit.

This was translated by organic Dinosaur
It states that kaguya had byakugan before eating the fruit.

It is easier to read on Organic Dinosaur's reddit page.


大筒木カグヤ// Ootsutsuki Kaguya
(Pages 66-69)
[Page 66]
Splash Text:
チャクラは。。。ワラワ唯一のもの、もう一度チャクラを一つにする!!
Chakra is… solely mine, once again chakra will become one!!
Listed Icons:
All five elements + Yin/Yang + Kekkei Mora + Kuchiyose
[Page 67]
Splash Text:
禁忌の果実を得しチャクラの祖, 力に妄執し堕ちた女神となりめ。。。
The parent of chakra, which was procured from the tabooed fruit. Becoming a fallen Goddess with a deep-rooted delusion in power…
Section RAW English
Main Body 1 何処より訪れ、千年に一度だけ生る神樹の果実を口にし、 力を得て民を統べた女神ー。悠久の時を経て歴史は神話となり、やがては人々の記憶からも薄れていく。しかし、禁断の実を食べた人物は確かに存在し、彼女の妄念は通奏低音の如く、忍の歴史を人知れず貫いていた。。。 Referring to where the fruit is produced, the Shinjyu (/God Tree) bears fruit only once in a millennium. Eating the fruit and acquiring it’s power, the Goddess controlled the nation(/people). An eternity of time elapsed, and it’s history became a legend. Before long, it continued to fade from everyone’s memory. However, the person who ate the forbidden fruit certainly (still) existed. Her delusions were like a basso continuo, which were secretly going through shinobi history.
Main Body 2 封印されてなおチャクラを求め、 思念を操り復活の刻を迎えたカグヤ。彼女は神か狂気の鬼か? 混濁するその意識には、もはや善悪の概念すら存在しない。。。 Demanding further sealed chakra, Kaguya was manipulating thoughts for her time of resurrection. Was she a God or an insane Demon? In that opaque consciousness, already the general concept of good and evil was non-existent.
Caption: Kaguya Artwork 神樹の実を食べたカグヤはチャクラを得て、その力を用いて民を統べた。 As Kaguya ate the fruit of the Shinjyu, she acquired chakra. Making use of that power, she controlled nations.
Caption: Creeper Face 両目に”白眼”を宿したカグヤは神樹の実を食べ、額の ”輪廻写輪眼” も開眼。 In both eyes, Kaguya carried the Byakugan. Eating the fruit of the Shinjyu, she also awakened the "Rinnesharingan" on her forehead.
Caption: Attacking NaruSasu 具現化するカグヤのチャクラ! その威力は正に神の領域である。 Embodied in Kaguya’s chakra! That power is certainly in God’s domain (/range)!
[T/N]
妄念 = a strong conviction based on flawed ideas; delusion
通奏低音=basso continuo = classical musical term that means “continuous bass”= a bass line that plays continuously in the background of a melody
Black Box:
No Ninja ID #
Birthday: 8/15, ? Age, Leo
? Height, ? Weight, ? Blood Type
Personality: 傲慢、強欲 // Arrogance, Avarice
Favourite:
戒めを破り口にしたチャクラの実。その優美な味わいに、 彼女は未だ捕らわれている。
Violating prohibition, tasting the fruit of chakra. For that elegant(/refined) flavor, she is still captivated by it.
? Years Prior Box:
兎の女神と呼ばれた時代: いつ終わるとも知れぬ争いを治めたため, 女神と呼ばれ民の敬意を集めたことも。
The period of when she was called the “Rabbit Goddess”: She became known (by that name) by the end of (the era) for the sake of subduing conflict. She gathered the reverence of nations/people from those who referred to her as a Goddess.
[Page 68]
Splash Text:
狂気と愛情の狭間で昏迷する意識
Between a threshold of insanity and love, a conscious stupor
Section RAW English
Main Body 「母」 神樹の実を食べ、チャクラを有する唯一の人となったカグヤだが、その子共達は生まれながら にチャクラを宿していた。自身から発生した物は、全て自分に帰属すべき。。。そのような妄執と所有欲が、我が子に封印されるという破滅の結末を招く。己の身から生まれた者への愛情と、離別して行くことへの憤怒。母だからこそ抱くそれら二人の情念が、カグヤを現世に蘇らせた原動力でもある。 [Mother] Having eaten the fruit of the Shinjyu, Kaguya became the sole person endowed with chakra. However, both children were naturally born carrying chakra. Originally a thing from her own personnel, Kaguya (thought that) all chakra ought to belong all to herself…That kind of deep-rooted delusion and possessiveness resulted in the end of (her) destruction, which was sealed in her own children. (There was) love of the people born from her own body, and rage(/resentment) from the continuation of separation (of her chakra). That is the reason why Mother harboured (those) sentiments for those two children. That was also the driving force for Kaguya to be resurrected in the present world.
Caption: Standing 何処よりきたかは定かでない。 確かなのは禁断の実を欲したこと。 It is uncertain where she came from. (What was) certain (was that) she desired the forbidden fruit.
Caption: Birth of H&H 復活したカグヤはナルトとサスケに、自身を封印した息子、ハムラとハゴロモの面影を見る。 A resurrected Kaguya saw the traces of her sons who had sealed her, Hamura and Hagoromo, in Naruto and Sasuke.

No Ninja ID #
Birthday: 8/15, ? Age, Leo
? Height, ? Weight, ? Blood Type
Personality: 傲慢、強欲 // Arrogance, Avarice
Favourite:
戒めを破り口にしたチャクラの実。その優美な味わいに、 彼女は未だ捕らわれている。
Violating prohibition, tasting the fruit of chakra. For that elegant(/refined) flavor, she is still captivated by it.
? Years Prior Box:
兎の女神と呼ばれた時代: いつ終わるとも知れぬ争いを治めたため, 女神と呼ばれ民の敬意を集めたことも。
The period of when she was called the “Rabbit Goddess”: She became known (by that name) by the end of (the era) for the sake of subduing conflict. She gathered the reverence of nations/people from those who referred to her as a Goddess.
[Page 68]
Splash Text:
狂気と愛情の狭間で昏迷する意識
Between a threshold of insanity and love, a conscious stupor
Section RAW English
Main Body 「母」 神樹の実を食べ、チャクラを有する唯一の人となったカグヤだが、その子共達は生まれながら にチャクラを宿していた。自身から発生した物は、全て自分に帰属すべき。。。そのような妄執と所有欲が、我が子に封印されるという破滅の結末を招く。己の身から生まれた者への愛情と、離別して行くことへの憤怒。母だからこそ抱くそれら二人の情念が、カグヤを現世に蘇らせた原動力でもある。 [Mother] Having eaten the fruit of the Shinjyu, Kaguya became the sole person endowed with chakra. However, both children were naturally born carrying chakra. Originally a thing from her own personnel, Kaguya (thought that) all chakra ought to belong all to herself…That kind of deep-rooted delusion and possessiveness resulted in the end of (her) destruction, which was sealed in her own children. (There was) love of the people born from her own body, and rage(/resentment) from the continuation of separation (of her chakra). That is the reason why Mother harboured (those) sentiments for those two children. That was also the driving force for Kaguya to be resurrected in the present world.
Caption: Standing 何処よりきたかは定かでない。 確かなのは禁断の実を欲したこと。 It is uncertain where she came from. (What was) certain (was that) she desired the forbidden fruit.
Caption: Birth of H&H 復活したカグヤはナルトとサスケに、自身を封印した息子、ハムラとハゴロモの面影を見る。 A resurrected Kaguya saw the traces of her sons who had sealed her, Hamura and Hagoromo, in Naruto and Sasuke.

Awaiting the time of her resurrection, a distorted depiction of “Shinobi” history.
Section RAW English
Main Body 1 「復活の筋書き」 カグヤ復活へのシナリオは、封印の間際に残した黒ゼツにより描かれた。カグヤの孫にあたるインドラの負の感情につけ込み、その子孫たるうちは一族の劣等感と復讐心を巧みに利用した。六道仙人が残した碑文を書き変え、マダラを "無限月読"へと誘導する。まやかしの桃源郷を目指したマダラの夢が成就したかに思われた時、禁忌の扉が開かれ、堕ちた女神が降臨した。 [The Plot of Resurrection] The scenario to resurrect Kaguya: it was bequeathed to Kuro Zetsu (Black Zetsu) on the verge (of when she was being) sealed. (The method) was described according to him. Kaguya was correct (in her prediction) in her grandchild about Indra’s negative sentiments, and used that to her advantage. She cleverly made use of those descendants, the Uchiha clan, who had an inferiority complex and a desire for revenge. In the rewritten epitaph that was left behind by the Rikudou Sennin, it lead Madara to the “Infinite Tsukuyomi”. When it seemed as though Madara’s dream was fulfilled, in his aim for a deceptive paradise on Earth, the tabooed gate was opened wide, and the fallen Goddess descended.
Main Body 2 「執念」 復活したカグヤを突き動かす情念。。。それはチャクラ、即ち力への固執に他ならない。永劫の往昔に、自分のみが使うことを許されたチャクラの能力。その力ゆえに全てを支配し、人々の畏怖を集めた過ぎし日々の甘美な記憶。。。チャクラを再び独占した先にカグヤが夢見るのは、そのような栄華の幻だろうか? [Obsession] Stimulated sentiments for the resurrected Kaguya… Nothing but persistence, namely for power in that chakra, For an eternity of ancient times, the ability of chakra was permitted for use only in her own body. (Kaguya) controlled everything because of that power. Beyond collecting the fear and awe of all people, (but also their) daily sweet memories… Kaguya dreamed of (the time when) she (would) monopolize chakra once again, like before. It seems to be that kind of vision/illusion of glory, right?
Caption: Attack ”無限月読” で忍達から集めた大量のチャクラこそが、カグヤ復活の温床となる。忍の戦いの歴史そのものが、仕組まれた筋書きであった。。。 With “Infinite Tsukuyomi”, by gathering large quantities of chakra from many shinobi, it amounted to the breeding ground for Kaguya’s resurrection. The history itself of shinobi conflict was also a devised plan.
Caption: Normal Face 忍の命は奪っても大地は傷つけたくないと言う。再び土に根を下ろし、支配するためである。 Depriving the life of shinobi, even though saying that she does not want to sully the Earth. Once again taking root in the Earth, in order to control it.
Caption: Creeper Face+ Naruto カグヤがナルトとサスケに向ける執着は、単なる敵視に留まらない。自身の末裔たる者への愛情と憎悪が絡みあい、彼女を破壊衝動へと駆り立てる。 Kaguya (with) a tenacity to turn towards Naruto and Sasuke, (her) sheer hostility did not come to a stop. Entangled with love and hatred towards those who were her own descendants, (they were) spurring on her destructive impulse.


Hagoromo

大筒木ハゴロモ// Hagoromo Ootsutsuki
[Page 70]
Splash Text:
我は安寧秩序を成す者。。。名をハゴロモと言う。
I am someone who establishes peace and order…My name is Hagoromo.
Listed Icons:
All five elements + Yin/Yang + Jinchuuriki + Senjutsu + Kekkei-Mora + Kuchiyose
Section RAW English
Main Body 忍術の祖とされる 「六道仙人」。 十尾を月に封じたハゴロモは月に向かう弟や一族と別れ地上に残り、チャクラの「繋げる力」 を忍宗として民に説く。やがて己の死期を悟るや、力を九体の尾獣に変え野に放った。世に安寧秩序が成されんことを願い, ハゴロモは千年もの時を漂う。。。 Considered as the parent of Ninjutsu, “Rikudou Sennin”. As Hagoromo sealed the Jyuubi on the moon, separating him from his younger brother and clan who went towards the moon, Hagoromo remained on Earth. He preached to the nation’s people about Ninshuu, with chakra as “the power to connect”. Before long, at the moment that he perceived his own time of death, (his) power was released as it was changed into nine bodies of the bijyuu. Desiring the establishment of peace and order in the world, Hagoromo drifted about for a millennium.
Caption アシュラとインドーラの転生者 : ナルトとサスケに、己の力を分け与える Asura and Indra’s reincarnations: Naruto and Sasuke. (Hagoromo) distributes his own powers (to them).
野に放った could have been “Released into the wild xxx” or “Released into hidden xxx”for the transformation of the bijyuu getting split up. Jisho says that 野 is either field, plain, hidden (structural member) or wild. I think there is a typo, and there should be a comma there to make 野に放った it’s own thing (Released into the wild), but as it is given, the whole part regarding the nine bodies transforming describes whatever 野 means and the “Release”/ 放った applies to the whole sentence.
Black Box:
No Ninja ID #
Birthday: 8/6 (? Age, Leo)
? Height, ? Weight, ? Blood Type
Personality: 悠然 (An air of being calmly composed)
Favourite:
チャクラによって人々が互いに協力し合う平和な世界。それこそがハゴロモの悲願だ。
Through chakra, a peaceful world where everyone will come to cooperate with one another. That is surely Hagoromo’s dearest wish.
 
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Reading this about kaguya makes me laugh lol she got defeated so easily. I had my hopes high when I first saw her. I was like yes! Finally a female that isn't useless or is totally over a person.
 

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I want someone to criticize a this as much as they can who will do the honor?

 
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I am so happy knowing that I am known as a hyuga fan. who is a troll. by sakura and sasuke fan boys/girls. I am finally a known hyuga lover.
 

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Reading this about kaguya makes me laugh lol she got defeated so easily. I had my hopes high when I first saw her. I was like yes! Finally a female that isn't useless or is totally over a person.
Kaguya got nerfed so hard, she could easily destroy team 7, anyone with the byakugan are trained to be aware of the surrounding, especially we're talking about the god, her Byakugan gives the biggest advantage because she pretty much preoccupy thanks to her 10 KM++ Vision, and her 359 degree (Which apparently Sakura managed to hit Kaguya because she's within 1 degree blindspot
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) , which can also detect an opponent and she has sensory capabilities such as her sage chakra, and sharinnegan yet none of those did any good for her, instead Plot completely overise team 7 favor just for the purpose of getting "Fanservice" which is BS.

The tale of Kaguya that was referenced was one of the most popular mythlogy in Japan, and Kaguya was so popular that people had been inspired and yet with Kishi sloppy ass writing brought the whole Tale of Kaguya into this mess, promoting Kaguya as a shitty character.
 

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Kaguya got nerfed so hard, she could easily destroy team 7, anyone with the byakugan are trained to be aware of the surrounding, especially we're talking about the god, her Byakugan gives the biggest advantage because she pretty much preoccupy thanks to her 10 KM++ Vision, and her 359 degree (Which apparently Sakura managed to hit Kaguya because she's within 1 degree blindspot
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) , which can also detect an opponent and she has sensory capabilities such as her sage chakra, and sharinnegan yet none of those did any good for her, instead Plot completely overise team 7 favor just for the purpose of getting "Fanservice" which is BS.

The tale of Kaguya that was referenced was one of the most popular mythlogy in Japan, and Kaguya was so popular that people had been inspired and yet with Kishi sloppy ass writing brought the whole Tale of Kaguya into this mess, promoting Kaguya as a shitty character.
That what gets on my nerves. The one who created chakra has both byakugan and rinnesharingan got defeated by 3 genins who keep fighting like kittens. And the sakura part don't ask how mad I am at that. And the way she said that useless sentence. 'We're both women and some other thing'. Ugh I had so many hopes for kaguya seriously. She was drawn beautiful and was my favorite female after Hinata when she appeared but yeah we hyuga fans shouldn't get our hopes up. Well all naruto female fans shouldn't.
 

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That what gets on my nerves. The one who created chakra has both byakugan and rinnesharingan got defeated by 3 genins who keep fighting like kittens. And the sakura part don't ask how mad I am at that. And the way she said that useless sentence. 'We're both women and some other thing'. Ugh I had so many hopes for kaguya seriously. She was drawn beautiful and was my favorite female after Hinata when she appeared but yeah we hyuga fans shouldn't get our hopes up. Well all naruto female fans shouldn't.
This is why I never place my hope and my expectation on Kaguya arc as soon she's fighting with Team 7,it's inevitable that they will get plot shielded because they're "Main Characters" leading to the most pointless and clitche fight and yet things gets even worse when Kishi didn't explain shit regarding Kaguya backstory and her goals that we knew little of.
 

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This is why I never place my hope and my expectation on Kaguya arc as soon she's fighting with Team 7,it's inevitable that they will get plot shielded because they're "Main Characters" leading to the most pointless and clitche fight and yet things gets even worse when Kishi didn't explain shit regarding Kaguya backstory and her goals that we knew little of.
You did say you got your hopes high. Anyway your right. I hate how the main character get all the importance. Neji died for that naruto and he didn't remember him at all. Sasuke was his best friend who tried to kill him and others were what? Specially neji.
He meant nothing he didn't even remember him when he thought about his friends. Poor baby got killed only Cuz naruhina.
 
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