" Akatsuki " - Chapter Two

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This is the second part of the roots, the formation and the ties to anything that could have played a roll in the founding of Kishi's infamous Akatsuki.
This FanFiction will be a joint work written by Sharpism and Kenshin Himura.
Following the facts given to us by the Manga.​
Two chapters will be released every week. Mondays and Thursdays.
Monday's second chapter has been released one day earlier! Hope you guys enjoy this newest chapter in this series.​
" Akatsuki " - Chapter 2

Main-Writer: Sharpism
Co-Writer: Kenshin Himura



The Strange Man: I think we've caught ourselves a free meal..Oooh-I think he'll be chewy!!
The Strange Man: You Idiot! You seen that fight, you can't just eat someone with that sort of unmentionable talent..

Temporary consciousness is regained by the battered Uchiha legend, the cave too deep to use eyesight.​
The Strange Man: Besides I see the eyes of a legend..
The Strange Man: Hmm yes.. A bargain..

The blinding white light envelops Madara again, time lost yet again.

The Strange Man: He's cutup and bleeding pretty badly, not to mention the amount of chakra he's got left.. go seek out these ingredients.. in hopes we can save him from his own demise. Don't forget to gather some chakra, he's in rough shape.

I cannot let that low-class Senju have what "I" Madara Uchiha am entitled to.. There is no way an ordinary shinobi.. can oppose the Mangekyo Sharingan..

The dreams and thoughts of Madara temporarily disperse as an immense heat rushes through his whole body.​

The Strange Man: MORNNNINGGG!
The Strange Man: Shut up you fool! Sorry about the rude awakening.. Madara. I just gave you a medicinal potion, your cuts, broken bones and bruises, Everything- Except that eye..
The outline of the strange men appear only to be half a man each, and slowly begin reattaching each other.​
Madara: Who or what are you, and how do you know my name.. And about my eye?
The Strange Man: I'm Zet-su, I've been watching you for quite some time, including that escape you just pulled off. You mean I HAVE been watching him for quite some time..

Zetsu had merged into one body split down the middle into White and Black along with two distinct personalities; however referred himself as "I" a singular word.​
Zetsu: Stop sulking you idiot.. Madara.. I know you're plotting something, I ask only that you take the appropriate measures to ensure safety. Your chakra levels are much too low to take on someone of such high stature..
Madara: Yes you're right.. I have to regain - my light..

Night fell on the world, the cave now lit by flickering torches.​
Zetsu: I don't think you fell upon my cave under pure chance, Madara, hopefully you have found a way to obtain that immense power again. What do you mean YOUR cave, I was clearly the one who found it!!
Madara: Zetsu I need you to do something for me as I am in too much of a weakened state to do anything of this caliber at this point..
Zetsu: And what would that be..?
Madara: I have some business with Takigakure..



Next Chapter will be written by Kenshin Himura and co-written by Sharpism.
 
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Very good, as the 1st one;) I`m guessing this is going to be a long FF considering the among of content given to us each time?

Anyway, looking forward to the next one;)

PS: Reps to Sharpism, i must say i kinda liked this one better than the last(no offence to you, Kenshin Himura), But i`m thinking that it will get better and better for each time;):p
 
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yeah this is awesome, a lot better than i expected it to turn out. It also seems as if zetsu is higher up the rankings than everyine thinks he is...
reps
 

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Very good, as the 1st one;) I`m guessing this is going to be a long FF considering the among of content given to us each time?

Anyway, looking forward to the next one;)

PS: Reps to Sharpism, i must say i kinda liked this one better than the last(no offence to you, Kenshin Himura), But i`m thinking that it will get better and better for each time;):p
nice twists makes me think if zetsu is actually the real leader in some way rerps regardless 2 both of u guys sharpism
& kenshin himaru
yeah this is awesome, a lot better than i expected it to turn out. It also seems as if zetsu is higher up the rankings than everyine thinks he is...
reps
You guys will shit bricks after reading the third chapter..
 
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