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" Akatsuki " - Chapter One

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This FanFiction will be writted by me and Sharpism..
Two chapters will be released every week. Mondays and Thursdays.
This FanFiction will explore the roots of Akatsuki and how it was formed. Following the facts given to us by the Manga..
I Hope you all enjoy..

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It's the story behind the days leading to the Uchiha massacre from the perspective of none other then Uchiha Itachi.

" Akatsuki " - Chapter 1

Main-Writer: Kenshin Himura
Co-Writer: Sharpism



A torn up Uchiha stumbles into a deep caved that had been enslaved by bark, entangled in thick layers of merciless roots and leaves. The cave dark, leaky, with thick heavy musty air, now filled with the blood and sweat from the Uchiha man.

I can't sense his chakra anymore.. I'm safe..
The result of that fight was not expected.. and the price was too high.
I had to withdraw and use that jutsu.

My breath is shortening.. and this burning sensation in my eye.. will leave me scared for life.
I promise... you will pay for what you've done.
You, your family, your clan.. And now your village.. You'll all pay..
And I've not forgotten about you either.. Foolish clan.. Uchiha clan..
You're all going to feel the extent of Uchiha Madara power..

I refuse to die here. I feel my chakra and my life going away from me even after using the forbidden jutsu..
Your eyes were not wasted Izuna. I may have lost the ultimate power temporarily but I'll be back stronger.
I'll be.....Ba.....

A deep white envelops Madara's consciousness, distorting time and day to something unpredictable.

After a while. Uchiha Madara regains consciousness

I must have feinted..
Someone is touching me.. Smelling me..
My vision.. blurred.. What is this?

A strange man appears in front of a confused Madara.

The Strange man : Hmm.. A bargain..
But i see an eye of a legend..

( Who this strange man can be? What does he want? Stay tuned for the next chapter)

Next Chapter will be writed by Sharpism and co-writed by me.
Until then, enjoy the ride..
 
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yusufms said:
wow i think you should play it cool with the colours a bit, but i like how this is going so...
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Colors in the chapter are mostly there to distinguish Narration,self-thoughts & convos..
Thanks.. Sharpism is already working on the second chapter. I'll revised it.
Then i'll write the third chapter and so on..
 
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Nice!:D As i just said in your other FF. Is this a somewhat sequal or is it a completly new one? Either way, i liked it, and i "can`t" wait(Of course i can, but i`m just sayingxd) for the next one!:p

Prediction(xd): The Strange man is either a complete random(which i don`t believe) or it may be Kakuzu(my first bet) or Zetsu(have no idea how old he is, so it may be him appearing, but this is my second guess);) Peace out!:D
 

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Ruler Michael said:
Nice!:D As i just said in your other FF. Is this a somewhat sequal or is it a completly new one? Either way, i liked it, and i "can`t" wait(Of course i can, but i`m just sayingxd) for the next one!:p

Prediction(xd): The Strange man is either a complete random(which i don`t believe) or it may be Kakuzu(my first bet) or Zetsu(have no idea how old he is, so it may be him appearing, but this is my second guess);) Peace out!:D
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Ahahaha I won't give it away who he is.. You must wait for Monday.. Sharpism will be the main writer monday.. You'll like his style of writing..

It's a new one mate.. This is way before the Uchiha massacre..
 
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Yeah i know, but you guys probably going to jump from this time(just after his fight with the 1st Hokage, obviously) to where the first member join around Itachi`s recruitment. So i was thinking you would sort of "follow up" your other FF around there, or are you maybe putting the timelimit for this FF just around the aftermatch of Madara`s fight with the 1st?:)
 

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Ruler Michael said:
Yeah i know, but you guys probably going to jump from this time(just after his fight with the 1st Hokage, obviously) to where the first member join around Itachi`s recruitment. So i was thinking you would sort of "follow up" your other FF around there, or are you maybe putting the timelimit for this FF just around the aftermatch of Madara`s fight with the 1st?:)
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We are definetely have to jump in time but also Itachi was far from the first guy to be recruited.. He was actually one of the last.. ;)
 
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