Advance: Chapter 5

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Advance: A Step Forward


Chapter 5 - Flowers


This Flower, its so pretty, its like peace and the sunsetting


Izuka fell unconscious, as she looked up into the sky, she saw angels, with a glowing staff, that looked pretty, the angels dropped it and Izuka rushed and grabbed it, she fell asleep instantly as she saw her secret oldest brother's angel become the demon. His name Raios but is known as the demon Soncha.
Izuka focused all her energy bursting a wave, making Raios back away. He started to remember their connection.


Raios In A Dream​

"Yura, HELP ME!" I shout as I wander the empty white path, I walked up stairs, and back down stairs, lost in nowhere. I saw a black cloud heading towards me, I make my signature move, Iruzuto Ice, making swords of ice head towards the black cloud, and bouncing off the cloud. What was going on, a nightmare was happening in my eyes, I saw a someone come forward, an striking a painful seal on my forehead, and before my eyes I was a demon of darkness, controlled by him. I couldn't control myself, and now I'm fighting this girl who resembles Yura, she is powerful and I just wish this wouldn't happen.

Yura​

I woke up and felt my heart beating, and feeling Raios's spirit nearby. "I FEEL RAIOS!" I shouted as I woke up, Renen knew about him and so we rushed and found a demon battling Izuka, I was in shock as the demon seemed like Raios, I knew his spirit, but it doesn't seem right, I then noticed an evil seal on his forehead, he was being controlled, I signaled Izuka to send a beam of light to his forehead, and so she did and broke him from the control, but at first it didn't work, he was still under control, as he raged more, it seemed like it wouldn't work, but Izuka went right to him and landed a straight blow to the seal, with a glowing mystical staff that destroyed the seal, right in our eyes, we all saw Raios, human and alive again.

Raios​

I was given a beam to the head, but still not working, I raged more and charged, she charged back, and she touched me with her staff that broke the control, I was free, I then saw Yura, I cried it was a feeling I haven't felt for a while, it was joy, sadness and freedom. Yura and I hugged then she told me that she was her sister, her name Izuka, so I have two sisters, that wouldn't trade of anything in the world. Yura gave me my favourite flower that reminded me of my past and future, happiness was giving me a start to a new life, the flower made me warm, and I looked up and saw the sunset, making tomorrow, a new day and a new future.


So,...Enjoyed it?

So did you think that twist was nessecery or not

and also give me a few things you'd think is gonna happen, and I might use it
 

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So My charactor list is complete, and also, In next chapter charactors come to light

List of charactors:

Renen
Yura
Izuka
Spirit Of Diamond
Black Ace
Raios
The demons (Which is 3 or 4)

right and yeah switching to different charactors made it see their thoughts
 
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