[Romance] Absence of Your Love | Haiku

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Not the most usual haiku form but oh well, here I go;


Choking,
My lungs caved in applying pressure to my heart,
Due to the absence of your love,
I'm not asthmatic but gasping for air that only you can supply.
 

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You want more haikus? I don't really know how to write em properly, actually I'm convinced I suck at haikus and senryus, but I'll gladly come up with a few more. I just need to finish another poem first...

:T_T:
 

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You want more haikus? I don't really know how to write em properly, actually I'm convinced I suck at haikus and senryus, but I'll gladly come up with a few more. I just need to finish another poem first...

:T_T:
I do want more haikus :shy: B-B-But I don't want to force you! So, if you don't want to do more, it's okay (sad, but okay).
I'm sure you weren't that good at poetry when you first started out.
I believe it's all about practise.
And dude, I don't know what you are talking about. You totally rocked them.
 

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I do want more haikus :shy: B-B-But I don't want to force you! So, if you don't want to do more, it's okay (sad, but okay.)
I'm sure you weren't that good at poetry when you first started out.
I believe it's all about practise.
And dude, I don't know what you are talking about. You totally rocked them.
Nice tactic.... :wesobi:
I'll get to it right now ma'am!
 
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