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@Bold: Uh, what? I assume you use the momentum of your strike to turn your body (bringing your right shoulder/side around and back) away from my hit. Re-word it with better description. o-o
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As I swung my left arm forward, the front of my body went from facing you, to facing to my right and your left, making my shoulders line up with my thrust, making your attack miss the entirety of my body. I thought I worded it well, but sorry. Do I really have to do it over?
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If it's not blatantly obvious the first time I read it then it's not clear enough.
Just redo your description.
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Ready for the next attack, Neo scouts the oncoming attack and braces herself. As her sensei thrusts his left fist forward, aiming for her chest, she pulls her left arm back then swung her left arm forward, the front of her body went from facing her sensei, to facing to her right and her sensei's left, making her shoulders line up with her thrust in a thin line, making her sensei's attack miss the entirety of her body as her feet dug into the ground as they shifted. She pushes her palm forward, striking her sensei's unprotected chin with her palm in a vicious manner but knowing her sensei could take it, she wasn't all too worried.
Like that?
Like that?
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Exactly.
You painted a picture with your words that was clear and understandable. That's the whole difficulty with text-based taijutsu!This one is a bit impractical since you're leaving yourself wide open, but alas!
(Tokken) - Thrusting Shoulder
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will jump into the opponent thrusting their shoulder to strike them.
I approach you and use..
(Appākatto) Uppercut
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes the enemy with a powerful rising uppercut, sending him hurling backwards.
...with my left arm.
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As her sensei swings a vicious uppercut at Miata, like the previous technique, she switches her stance sideways having her right shoulder face her sensei and her left shoulder facing away from him, making his uppercut just miss her chin. While her sensei was still open from the missing uppercut and still in motion, Miata pops up off her feet, holding her hands together with her arms facing straight downward, she makes sure her arms' formation were really stiff and firm so that when her shoulder makes contact, it would be still and unyielding. Coming off the ground, Miata sends her right shoulder into her sensei's jaw, countering his uppercut harshly.
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Wouldnt it be better to have your left shoulder forward? Since I use my left arm to strike, my right side would be open. But it sounds like you use your right shoulder to hit me, which would mean you're hitting my from my left side (where my arm would block a lot of it).
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You're right. You're absolutely right. I guess it was a typo on my part, since I always think about it before hand which sides are where but there is a lot to type so I probably forgot mid ACTION (boom!) but let me guess, do it again?
Edit: Why are you guys stalking my thread? GTFO. Thanks.
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As her sensei swings a vicious uppercut at Miata, like the previous technique, she switches her stance sideways having her left shoulder face her sensei and her right shoulder facing away from him, making his uppercut just miss her chin. While her sensei was still open from the missing uppercut and still in motion, Miata pops up off her feet, holding her hands together with her arms facing straight downward, she makes sure her arms' formation were really stiff and firm so that when her shoulder makes contact, it would be still and unyielding. Coming off the ground, Miata sends her left shoulder into her sensei's jaw, countering his uppercut harshly.
There. I want leg weights.
There. I want leg weights.
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Appearing on the training field in a plume of water, my presence is felt as I interrupt your previous training. Hello there! We will be doing this a little differently now. I then unravel a meter long scroll, with special kanji all through out its contents, before touching the main kanji inserting my chakra into it. The scroll releases a plethora of upright training dummies all over the field in front of us. Now then, where did you guys leave off?
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Paimon tilts her head and scratches it, looking at the new sensei a bit puzzled. "Well... We left off on the Thrusting Shoulder technique and quite honestly, it was going very slow... A lot of mistakes were made apparently. On my part..." Paimon lets out a half-hearted laugh.
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Ok, well never mind all that, the past is the past U_U
The first few ranks of tai is pretty basic so we will be doing like 3-2 techs at a time as long as you get the stances and forms right. I'll do them first on the dummies, and then you will do the same in your own way.
After talking I space my feet apart with the right slightly forwards while the left sits slightly behind perched on its toes. My hands follow the same position, palms open facing inwards, while my left sits closer to my torso with the right held parallel to my extended foot below. Taking in 2-3 deep breathes, I exhale with great force on the last as I dash forwards with my legs and torso lowered before springing upwards violently while putting all the momentum behind my right shoulder that I extend forwards into the torso of the next dummy sending it backwards a few feet. I then do a series of short leaps to my next target before getting in close range where I leap once more while thrusting my left knee upwards into the lower abdomen of the last dummy which lifts it slightly up into the air where I then add a piece of, pzazz, by delivering a powerful right straight punch to the head of the dummy sending it off in the same manner as the last.
Your turn.
The first few ranks of tai is pretty basic so we will be doing like 3-2 techs at a time as long as you get the stances and forms right. I'll do them first on the dummies, and then you will do the same in your own way.
After talking I space my feet apart with the right slightly forwards while the left sits slightly behind perched on its toes. My hands follow the same position, palms open facing inwards, while my left sits closer to my torso with the right held parallel to my extended foot below. Taking in 2-3 deep breathes, I exhale with great force on the last as I dash forwards with my legs and torso lowered before springing upwards violently while putting all the momentum behind my right shoulder that I extend forwards into the torso of the next dummy sending it backwards a few feet. I then do a series of short leaps to my next target before getting in close range where I leap once more while thrusting my left knee upwards into the lower abdomen of the last dummy which lifts it slightly up into the air where I then add a piece of, pzazz, by delivering a powerful right straight punch to the head of the dummy sending it off in the same manner as the last.
Your turn.