a what if bardock stroy

Dratasy

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I thought it was a pretty good "What If", try not to rush it much next time though, it was all a bit too straight forward, think of it as if someone dies you don't just say "Hey your loved one died, take care" so just draw it out a bit so it's better for the reader to enjoy :) other than that it was good.

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