a what if bardock stroy

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i love bardock the most so i wanted to make this chapter 1 reuion
ps i will be writeing mutiple what if bardock stroys
and forgive me for spelling errors

the secne starts with bardock after he throws the final sprt canon at frieza
frieza makes the death ball and throws it.

bardock: what!

fireza: no more monkeys!

the death ball hits bardock and continues towards planet vegeta

bardock: kakarot!
later...

bardock:( where am i)

bardock tries to get up but cant. ( he's in the hospital)

bardock: (how'd i get here)

just then goten ( this takes place a year after the buu saga) walks in.

bardock: ( who the he looks just like me is this kakarot)

goten: hi mister.

bardock looks at him more closely.

goten: you ok?

bardock: cough w... who are you... how'd i get here.

goten: my name is goten i found you out cold is the woods.

bardock: you... look familier i...think i've seen ... you somewhere.

a knock on the door.

goku,gohan vegeta and chichi walk in.

vegeta:...

bardock: who are you people prince vegeta is that you.

vegeta: you must be a saiyan how are you even alive.

bardock: i have no idea i thought i was dead.

vegeta: he looks alot like you kakarot.

bardock: kakarot did yopu say kakarot.

vegeta: yes thats his saiyan name but on this planet they call him goku.

bardock:...

goku: is there anything we can do for ya stanger.

bardock: ( this is my son thats not possable the last time i saw him he was a baby) how old are you?

goku: about 42.

bardock: ( its been 42 years how!) kakarot youre my son.

goku: what!

bardock: your my son i remember it the last time i say you were a baby its been 42 years how am i still alive how'd i get here.

goku: i dont know but hey if you need a place to stay you can come with me.

a day later...

the place gokus house.

bardock: nice house.

goku: you'll be staying here for now.

bardock: thank you son.

bardock: ( why am i here how did i live ) later...

goku: hey its time to eat.

bardock: huh ok.

bardock walks up to the table with a lot of food on it.

chichi: enjoy by the way whats your name?

bardock: bardock.

goku: chow time

goku and bardock start eating at a really fast pace and end up eating most of the food.

bardock/goku: more please .

they both hold there bowls up.

chichi: i guess that explains gokus appitite xd

later....

bardock: kakarot.

goku: huh yeah.

bardock: lets fight i want to see how strong my son is.

goku: ok sure.

they walk out side and fly to a rocky watse land.

goku: ok here.

bardock fires a blue energy wave from his hand at goku. goku flys upwards and dodges it he throws a powerball ( just a ball of yellow light) at bardock bardock swings his arm and deflects it bardock flys up and styart to kick and punch really fast goku dodges each one and tries to punch him bardock ducks and kicks goku in the gut sending him flying into a rock.

goku: youre strong this is fun.

bardock punchs the rock but goku disappears ( instant trans mission)
and appears behind him.

goku: ka...me...he...me...HA!!!!

goku fires the kamehame wave bardock flys up and dodges it.

bardock fires a blue energy wave at goku goku makes a kamehameha wave and fires it the attacks clash and they seem eventheres an expolsion and the attacks cancel each other out bardock appears behind goku and and kicks him in the back goku goes flying and hits a rock.

goku: ahh!!!

goku goes super saiyan.

bardock: what!

goku: what you've never seen a super saiyan before.

bardock: i thought it was just a fairy tale.

goku: gohan goten vegeta even vegetas son can transform.

bardock: what! :eek:

goku: theres 2 more levals after this goku goes super saiyan two then three

bardock: wow my son is the ledgendary super saiyan.

goku: if your wondering about that frieza guy i killed him to.

bardock: so the visions were true.

goku: what?

bardock: im proud that your my son ka... goku im glad i got to meet you

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I like the idea very much but everything is far to straight forward.

You could easily get two or three chapters out of this, its just got to be more detailed.

Nevertheless its nice.
 

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I like the idea very much but everything is far to straight forward.

You could easily get two or three chapters out of this, its just got to be more detailed.

Nevertheless its nice.
thanks by your avatar i see your a dbz fan to rep please btw your in that dragon ball z group to right how do i make a bio i want a bardock bio
 

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thanks by your avatar i see your a dbz fan to rep please btw your in that dragon ball z group to right how do i make a bio i want a bardock bio
Sorry i can't help you there. I don't bother with Rp'ing and it also seems that that group is dead.

If you still want to do so, contact the person who maintains the group ( Akash.... I think )
 

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Thanks for telling me to read this. It was worth it! I love What Ifs. And I love DBZ, so it's double the awesomeness!

This is really good. I can't wait to see more of them. I kinda lol'd at the hospital seen for no reason and when Bardock says Nice place. It's like I've been dead/knocked out for 42 years, but I want to say, I love this house XD

Awesome job. Rep+
 

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Thanks for telling me to read this. It was worth it! I love What Ifs. And I love DBZ, so it's double the awesomeness!

This is really good. I can't wait to see more of them. I kinda lol'd at the hospital seen for no reason and when Bardock says Nice place. It's like I've been dead/knocked out for 42 years, but I want to say, I love this house XD

Awesome job. Rep+
thanks i already gave you rep so i cant do it again i tried sorry :(
 

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I really like how this going. But theres a small error here since Goku never actually killed Frieza, it was Trunks. But then again, its a fanfiction so that doesn't matter.
Keep it up bro, awesome job. Bardock ftw
 
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