A Tag attempt
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AngelicYami
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Yeah it's pretty cool xD.
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I feel like there needs to be more red, like te color of the lightning, in the background! But, I like it ^_^
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Main text is good, maybe some sub text instead of that really tiny writing, i don't quite like really small text. It also needs to be closer to the render so you are looking at the same general area of the tag, not glancing back and forth from the render and text.
It's nice though for a first tag, the problem is that the dimensions of the tag are much too big. If you reduced the height and width, along with the render, there wouldn't be all that emptiness on the left hand side. It would be much easier to fill in, plus you have the text there to fill in some space.
The lightning off his arms are a nice touch, you could even make his eyes glow more with a soft yellow brush on low opacity. Flow is nice, background doesn't look to bad but it needs more detail, a little more work on blending and depth and you will be all set.
Keep up the good work. =D
It's nice though for a first tag, the problem is that the dimensions of the tag are much too big. If you reduced the height and width, along with the render, there wouldn't be all that emptiness on the left hand side. It would be much easier to fill in, plus you have the text there to fill in some space.
The lightning off his arms are a nice touch, you could even make his eyes glow more with a soft yellow brush on low opacity. Flow is nice, background doesn't look to bad but it needs more detail, a little more work on blending and depth and you will be all set.
Keep up the good work. =D
