A supposed-to-be-about-love poem

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This is for someone important whom I hurt... :shy:

Prayer of Pardon

Dejected, deplorable, lamentable, miserable,
pathetic, pitiful, woeful, wretched...
Words...Beyond the words, feelings.
Distress, gloom, grief, regret, remorse,
repentance, sadness, sorrow...
And beyond the feelings, a soul.

A soul, ripped off of its existence.
A soul, divested of hope.
An empty soul, drifted far away from life.
A rotten spirit, lost in love.
A broken heart, detached from its entity.

A man, buried in a tomb of dreams
that were never meant to be.
A dead body lying in a grave of desires
that were never meant to be fulfilled.
A mouldering corpse, decaying alive.
A slender skeleton, deprived of its essence.
And a deserted graveyard, called Universe.

My coffn is the Earth, the stars are mourning me.
The Sun and the Moon digged my pit,
and God celebrated the mass for my death.
Surrounded by icy darkness,
colder than a frozen carcass,
wept over by tears of light,
spouting out from brooks of blood,
shed by worms eating up my brain,
I'm sinking further down into the
poisoned puddle of Hell's flames.

That is my reward and my punishment.
I was sentenced to the unbearable
torture of living without you forever.
But I have no emotions anymore.
I'm a puppet, and Satan is pulling my strings.

Where are you now, Saviour! Help me!
Where are you now, Hope! Answer me!
Redeem me, oh Love!
Have mercy on your slave, Fate!
If there is truth in words, and the truth sets us free,
I call for you, Justice!
Look at me now, Fortune! Don't turn your back on me.
But alas, my cries are only for deaf ears...

I believed in you all, yet I'm forsaken,
lonely and naked.I'm worthless.
I've lost everything, I have nothing left, but
shattered promises, and a distant memory of your smile.
Revive me, I beg thee!

The silhouette of your angelic shape is
the compass of my consciousness
on the way back from the dead.
The celestial tune of your voice singing
the melody of love drives me home from underworld.

I sinned, I hurt you, I made mistakes.
I was foolish, selfish, I was insane.
I was toxicated by the fear of your holy presence,
I was worse than the worst scum, I was trash.
I was everything but a man, but I love you.
I deserve all the curses of Evil, I deserve eternal pain.
I have no right to ask you, but please, forgive me...

...and from the sprouts of the flower on my grave, a new life is born...
 
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oh! i like ur poem a lot! :glomp:
it was well written and flowed like silk :y
i couldnt choose which paragraph i liked the most cos it's all so awesome! :ice:

keep up the good work. :ice:
 
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