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Please be more descriptive, tell me how would you attack my clone using that static bolt.
Imagine that you have a small bolt of lightning in your hand, what would you do with that to attack my clone?
 

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Alrighty then sorry.

As your clone rushes towards me from short range, I perform a quick flip over the clone and then attack your clone with my static bolt while his back is towards me.
 

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No need to flip over young shinobi, *your Small lightning vanished before reach my clone... my clone knocked on your head* lol

Now follow my instruction carefully, focusing first your lightning chakra inside your body then channel it into your palm, concentration there to create a small bolt of lightning, let it completely forming then attack my clone with it.

Now try it again one more time, and please do it correctly this time.
 

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"Yes sir!"

I begin to focus on the Raiton chakra from within and then channel it within the palm of my hand.

"This is it, you're mine this time!"

As the chakra is channeled within my palm I begin to from a small bolt of lighting, waiting for it to become perfect. Once the bolt is perfectly formed in my hand I attack your clone with it.
 

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Yes good, remember that you attack the opponent by make a contact with him, not threw it off upon your opponent.
Keep remember that.

You have learn :

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Next is, I want you to gather a decent amount of your lightning chakra inside your body then channel it into your both hands till they crackle full of lightning, then hold it up.
 

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I began to gather up my Raiton chakra and then channel it into my arms then down to my hands.

"Whoooo this feels great!!!!"

I throw my hands up into the air as the crackle of lightning.
 

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I began to gather up my Raiton chakra and then channel it into my arms then down to my hands.

"Whoooo this feels great!!!!"

I throw my hands up into the air as the crackle of lightning.
Read again my instruction, I didn't instructed you to throw it yet. I want you to hold it up.
and you didn't enough gather your lightning chakra, gain more focus and concentrate then add more chakra.

Do it again one more time.
 

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Sorry about that dont know how to be really discriptive with that one, It's still not that best but hope it's better now.
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I began to focus on my lightning chakra and then starts to concentrates on the correct amount of chakra from within the body and begans to channel it into my hands, I repeat the process until the lightning starts to crackle, I then hold my hands up.

"Better?"
 

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Don't ask me. Just perform as I instructed you, then I will judge it.

Summon a clone and he is standing in front of you in short range

Now slam your hand into the ground to release a surge of lightning toward my clone's feet and shock him to paralyzes.
 

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Yes sir, I'm sorry.

I listen to your directions carefully I look at your clone, who isn't standing to far I then slam imply hand into the ground sending a surge of lightning towards him, paralyzingly him.
 

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Hello Cobra, I'm sorry for my inactivity, but now I'm back and will continue your training.
But confirm first, are we going to continue or do you have another sensei/senpai to continue this training?
 

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YEs good, you have learrn ;

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

I would like to change my way of teaching to make you use every tech properly and know how to counter it.

Okay let's observe this technique.
What is the advantage and disadvantage of this jutsu ?

Note : Observe it from my instruction and the jutsu description then simply answer it with what's on your mind.
 

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Advantage: Well it could be used with a weaker water jutsu to add a little extra wow power to it and it can temparary paralyze the foe.


Disadvantage: Its short range and well if, your fighting a kenjutsu specialists this isn't a good thing. It's also pretty weak, but for a D rank technique that's understandable.
 
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Yes, good thought, no need deep analysis for D-Rank jutsu, The important is, you know how to use it.
and what will you do to counter this ?

Note : No need to add a jutsu, just consider what element to counter it and how? and also consider other move besides an element to avoid this.
 

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Well to counter it with element the definer can confine there body with Earth or make a simple wall of Earth. To counter without using an element the defender can jump into the air or jump into a tree.
 

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Ok, lets move on.


Now I want you to gather your chakra in your palms and then slam your hands on the ground as you release your chakra, to as a surge of lightening across the ground to shock your opponents.

*creates a clone*
 
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