Byron123
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So I was reading some poems from a contest of my country when I suddenly came across a certain poem which made me think that it was inspired by Naruto by 95% so I wanted to know what do you think of it.
Seriouly what are the odds? Far too many similarities, excellent poem
Two Suns
To swim across the endless seas
so they can hear his selfless pleas
a boy not guided by the will of must
but by his friends whom with he forms a bond of trust.
On the other side of shattered earth
a darkened rose comes forth
another lurks in the shadowy halls
driven by vengeance in his closed walls.
The first one walks with the will of fire
the other guided only by his pure desire
to rid the world of his own blood
and watch his brothers' life flash flood.
He who walks the light of day
will triumph over pain with no decay
unlike the one who is filled with hate
and trapped behind his giant barricade.
And if that final moment should come
then one or both will go down undone
cause if their paths would clash together
the lands will sing for them forever.
Cause when the blossom of hope that is the light
comes to a halt in front of night
the heavens will shake in front of them
and they would be reunited once again.
To swim across the endless seas
so they can hear his selfless pleas
a boy not guided by the will of must
but by his friends whom with he forms a bond of trust.
On the other side of shattered earth
a darkened rose comes forth
another lurks in the shadowy halls
driven by vengeance in his closed walls.
The first one walks with the will of fire
the other guided only by his pure desire
to rid the world of his own blood
and watch his brothers' life flash flood.
He who walks the light of day
will triumph over pain with no decay
unlike the one who is filled with hate
and trapped behind his giant barricade.
And if that final moment should come
then one or both will go down undone
cause if their paths would clash together
the lands will sing for them forever.
Cause when the blossom of hope that is the light
comes to a halt in front of night
the heavens will shake in front of them
and they would be reunited once again.
Seriouly what are the odds? Far too many similarities, excellent poem
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