A ninjas life on the battle field.

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A ninja’s life on the battle field. chapter 1

Setting: 20 years after the 4th great ninja war
We see a torn apart village in ruins nothing remains but the rubble.
???: Ow.
A young ninja rises from the rubble gravely wounded wearing the leaf villages head band, he looks like Naruto same hair color some hair style around the age of 16
??? : What happened?
The young ninja looks around to see his village in shambles.
??? : AKI!
The young ninja rushes over to a unconscious person.
??? : Aki wake up get up.
Aki looks like pakura ( look her up on narutopedia ) she is around the age of 16
Aki: *cough* *cough* The village!
???: I know I think we are the only survivors.
Aki: Sasuke help me up.

Sasuke: ok… ( the last thing I remember was a man in a mask attacking my father the 6th Hokage )

Aki: A single man did this to the village!

Sasuke: … ( so this is war? Its awful all these people dead.) flash back…

Naruto: son we will be going to war soon with a man who toke my best friends life and turned it into a life of wanting revenge he is strong I want you stay out of this war...

Sasuke: what is war like?

Naruto: the only war I was in no one I knew other then my best friend died but war is awful its what’s brought about when hatred takes over. Hatred is born when a bond is taken away from you.

Sasuke: I don’t understand.

Naruto: and hopefully you never will. The pain of loss tore my friend apart to the point that it consumed him.

Now…

Aki: should we get moving we can’t just stay here.

Sasuke: (did brother survive the fight? And what about father is he even still alive? He was fighting the man who attacked.) Yeah let’s head to the hidden cloud village we are allies with them their raikage is a jinchuuriki that my father knew.

Sasuke and Aki begin to walk forward towards the hidden cloud village.

White Zetsu: we best tell tobi.
Black Zetsu: Yes let’s go.

Sasuke: …

Aki: ( he’s been awful quite since we left the village)

A white Zetsu suddenly jumps on Aki and starts sucking her chakra.

Sasuke: crap stay still Aki! Wind style cutting whirlwind.

Sasuke blows out a large wave of wind from his mouth which cuts the Zetsu into pieces it reforms and takes aki’s shape.

Aki: what is this? Ice style ice fist.

Her fist is suddenly covered in ice she punch’s the white zetsu’s head off and his head becomes a block of ice the Zetsu’s head reform and it does the same jutsu she just did
.

Aki: hidden ice style jutsu shards of ice.

Sasuke: wind style wind gale.

The Zetsu jumps to the left to avoid the ice shards and runs at Aki she jumps backwards and throws two kunai with explosive tags on them at the Zetsu the Zetsu is hit by the kunai but they are absorbed into its body and the blast is smothered.

Zetsu: (ice? She must be of the yuki clan its possible as they went into hiding after the war in the mist village.)
The black Zetsu (which is behind Sasuke) has some branch’s come around sasukes neck and starts choking him.

Sasuke: (wood?) wind style cutting blow.

The wind style jutsu is unable to cut through the wood. Aki forms ice around her arm in the shape of a sword she cuts the wood in half and places her arm in front of her the ice goes flying off and stabs black Zetsu in the chest. The white Zetsu then punch’s Aki in the back of the head she goes flying into Sasuke and she and Sasuke land on the ground on top of each other.

White Zetsu: shall we finish them off?

Black Zetsu: Tobi said to kill any survivors so yes.

Tobi: Zetsu get back here I need you to rub my feet.

Black Zetsu: O_O what? Don’t you want us to waste these brats?
Tobi: My foot hurts forget them get back here.

Black Zetsu: -_- yes sir.

White Zetsu: WTF!
The zetsu’s remerge and go underground.

Aki: that was a close one huh?
Aki is still on top of Sasuke looking into his eyes they both blush and Aki quickly stands up and rubs the back of her head.

Mean while…

Tobi: ahh that’s much better.

Zetsu: your feet are discussing!

Tobi: don’t stop yet!

Zetsu: -.-
Tobi: ahh but regarding those two brats let them be the boy I will handle myself.
Mean while…

Aki: We best stop its almost night fall ad we can’t keep going in the dark.

Sasuke: ok this is a good spot to camp for the night.
The two set up a camp fire and sit across from each other while staring at the fire.
Sasuke: so you never told me why do you have the ice release kekki genkai? Its supposed to be a blood lien limit f the yuki clan of the mist.

Aki: my grandfather and grandmother ran away from the mist during those times in order to stay safe, my mom was their daughter and I am her daughter so mostly from my grandparents and my mother.
Sasuke: ahh I see. Well it’s time to get to sleep. Earth style earth Tent.
Sasuke stomps his foot on the ground and a tent made of earth rises from the ground. Aki gets into the tent and undresses and begins to change into her pjs which she packed before she left. Sasuke sees her gets a massive nose bleed and faints outside.

Aki: you want to sleep outside? No response I guess that means yes, good night!

What awaits Aki and Sasuke find out next time in chapter 2.

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tell me what you thought this was mainly a background chapter to give you an idea of the people in the story. But I put a little action in for you and some humor press thank you if you liked the next chapters will be more action packed.​
 

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It was good. Could be alittle more pleasing to the eyes, dont use center, Try to make more use of the narrator and be more descriptive. Everything else is good and btw similar ideas have been done.
 

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sorry i waxs trying my hardest and i now i have done this before this is a remasted version of my old fanfics the new konoha 11 and the 5th great ninja war only there will be better twists.
 
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